Fort wrote:
hi o/
wendao's Extra:
00:28:408 (6,7,8) - asli ane gk bisa ngebedain pattern 1/2 sama 1/3 di stack ini, menurut ane unstack aja note ini
00:31:908 (2) - coba pindahkan ke 00:31:797 - soalnya pattern selanjutnya itu berlangsung 1/3 beat pattern kept
00:54:907 (1) - ctrl+g itu lebih enak (biar sebanding gitu dgn jump slider sebelumnya) ga doyan ganti pattern 00:54:240 (1,2,3,4) - biar flow lebih enak
1st kiai lumayan bagus ini
01:20:656 (6,6) - menurut ane ini sebaiknya unstack, soalnya susah beat disini (dan kesannya itu keliatan seperti 1/2 karena note selanjutnya) no
01:25:740 (2,3) - sebenarnya ada 2 pilihan disini, 1. 01:25:740 (2) - diusahakan slider arrow gk nempel di slider 3, 2. pindahkan 01:25:906 (3) - ke x336y96 atau apa lah yg penting enggak overlap gitu well... tetep di 2.0x aja deh
01:26:573 (5,6,7) - distance inconsistency (ini asli ngebingungin soalnya keliatan kaya 1/2 pattern, sama kaya pattern selanjutnya) kept, beware of trap (keinspirasi dari map sebelah juga sih)
01:48:462 (7,8,9,10) - ugh, diusahakan note ini gk overlap, atau samakan kaya pattern ini 01:50:906 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - lagi dipikirin
02:11:155 (2,1,2,3,4) - suer ane bisa pass ini strim wkwkwkwkwkwk, Keep this pls :3 I usually use that pattern... but it's a random pattern... ``
02:23:238 - sepertinya timeline ini harus disini clickable object (slider selanjutnya itu follow vocal) mencoba yang baru
02:35:571 (1) - HR it, it''ll be "W" , "W" is Wendao :3 well itu ga sengaja ``
02:51:238 (11,1) - wow (pantesan di testplay dpt 100 mulu) melepas bosan dengan menambah slider 1/16
03:08:016 (2,3,4,2,3,4,2,3,4) - menurut ane ini, pattern ini lebih pas kalau pakai 1/2 pattern (tapi mungkin itu cuma perasaan ane aja ya) no
03:41:903 (3) - yay overlap, geli liatnya yaelah dikit doang .-. || fixed
04:30:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ane masih bingung sama pattern ini, kok sudden 1/6 strim pattern, kan sebelumnya kau pakai 1/4 triplet, jadi menurut ane usahain NC 04:31:570 (6,6) - sama kaya 04:34:236 (1) - ok
oke clear, Good luck!
thanks!Smoothie World wrote:
Hai, M4M
You said to do 1 but I did 2 diffs so enjoy? xD
[wendao's Extra]
This map is already near perfect so excuse me if I don't help a WHOLE lot. This is just very nitpicky stuff :p
00:34:241 (1,2,3) - This gap at 00:34:797 feels really awkward. Consider changing the rhythm of this part up a bit. somehow I can't change this pattern... so kept for now
01:13:240 (3,6) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack. I love manual stack
02:22:571 (2) - End of this slider looks pretty sloppy in my eyes. It doesn't change gameplay and doesn't fit in well with the rest of the sliders. Maybe attempt to neaten it up a bit / change it? it was just experimental slider lol fixed
02:31:404 (1,2) - Not sure if this is intentional or not but this stack is off if you meant for this to stack. it's better to have manual stack here, so kept
02:45:821 (6,7,8,9,10) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other. moved
02:51:238 (11,1) - Please don't make these this close together q_q. Just bring it back to the purple tick. 04:25:070 (1,1) is a good example. :( 1-2 more mod and I will change
02:54:737 (2) - Move this left a bit or stack it under 02:54:238 (1) kept
03:04:321 (2) - I'd recommend moving this directly under the stream as opposed to to the left a bit but this is very minor.
By the way I fking love the stream part!
03:19:571 (10) - NC? still part of 03:18:904 (7,8,9) - so no
03:48:403 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is so much fun thanks!
04:14:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Neaten this stream a bit. Notes are too clumped on top of each other. umm... I don't know if I can change this or not kept
04:31:570 (6,7,8,9) - Neaten huh? I think it's neat as is
04:37:570 (1,2,3,4,5) - Round this a bit? Again really minor. nope
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