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Hashimoto Miyuki - Especially

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Topic Starter
kiddly
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月13日 at 12:31:58

Artist: Hashimoto Miyuki
Title: Especially
Source: D.C.II ~Da Capo II~
Tags: Impossiblexu
BPM: 93
Filesize: 12150kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.66 stars, 449 notes)
  2. Impossiblexu's Easy (2.43 stars, 217 notes)
Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Especially
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 6th map.

thanks for Impossiblexu's easy~
Dotsu
以下只是建议
[General]
SB很棒 :) ,皮肤也很棒!
[Hard]
非常好,只不过形式太单一,应该多添加一点重复slider。
另外没有添加Hitsound。
00:22:601(5,6,7):不重叠会比较好
01:12:924(1):Spinner从01:12:762开始
01:20:226:Kiai time?
01:24:214(1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5):^
02:55:504(5,6):间距太长
02:20:020(1):从02:19:859开始
02:48:206:Kiai time?
对于hard来说可能有点简单。

不介意的话,我给你做一个难度?
subarasikibuta
Q_Q(喜极而泣
Dotsu
我的easy:Download: Hashimoto Miyuki - Especially (kiddly) [Impossiblexu'Easy].osu
另外还有hitsound:Download: hitsounds.rar

HentaiTei
期待啊❤
tsuka
here is my willing heart , hope you can accept me >///<
lzy
神MAP神SONG啊。。。
freefish
0.0
Topic Starter
kiddly

impossiblexu wrote:

我的easy:[attachment=1:5acff]Hashimoto Miyuki - Especially (kiddly) [Impossiblexu'Easy].osu[/attachment:5acff]
另外还有hitsound:[attachment=0:5acff]hitsounds.rar[/attachment:5acff]
搞定。

impossiblexu wrote:

额...忘了这个了
done. ;)
Dotsu
额...忘了这个了

Download: hitsound.rar
Breeze
Map加载会出问题,重新full-submit下
Topic Starter
kiddly

Breeze wrote:

Map加载会出问题,重新full-submit下
done.
Jacqueline_old
一发一个星
Avfunny
star
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: 我测大概是-10

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
有些为了调slider tick音效的绿线可能你得开1/8来放,现在这样有些不该出的音也出了。顺便就是认真到能顾及slider tick音效的人我都是很钦佩的
感觉可能还是挤了点……不过其实没什么,改不改随意。
00:21:311 (3) - 把slider上的whistle去了,不要图省事直接点slider的whistle,分别点两端的whistle
01:18:085 (1,2) - 不用消的太静了,这样和后面反差其实有点大了。
01:25:182 (1,2) - spacing
01:33:569 (6,7,8) - 建议slider替代
01:40:666 (8) - new combo?
02:17:440 (7) - ^
02:47:117 (9) - 第一个音的clap突兀

[Hard]
kiai?
hitsounds音量和音效建议考虑一下,现在是整体音量偏小,音效……233,我挺喜欢guest diff的
所有whistle都在一个地方你不烦?我是不太喜欢……
00:36:149 (6) - 在这里开始加音量或换音效吧,具体可以参考你叫的guest diff就很好……
01:19:375 (7) - nazi了,右一格。
01:28:407 (7,1,4) - 顺序:new combo/remove new combo/new combo
01:37:117 (6,7,8,9,10) - 不喜欢。
01:54:214 (1,2,3) - spacing?

大概就这样。。。
Topic Starter
kiddly

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: 我测大概是-10

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
有些为了调slider tick音效的绿线可能你得开1/8来放,现在这样有些不该出的音也出了。顺便就是认真到能顾及slider tick音效的人我都是很钦佩的
感觉可能还是挤了点……不过其实没什么,改不改随意。
00:21:311 (3) - 把slider上的whistle去了,不要图省事直接点slider的whistle,分别点两端的whistle
01:18:085 (1,2) - 不用消的太静了,这样和后面反差其实有点大了。
01:25:182 (1,2) - spacing
01:33:569 (6,7,8) - 建议slider替代
01:40:666 (8) - new combo?
02:17:440 (7) - ^
02:47:117 (9) - 第一个音的clap突兀

[Hard]
kiai?
hitsounds音量和音效建议考虑一下,现在是整体音量偏小,音效……233,我挺喜欢guest diff的
所有whistle都在一个地方你不烦?我是不太喜欢……
00:36:149 (6) - 在这里开始加音量或换音效吧,具体可以参考你叫的guest diff就很好……
01:19:375 (7) - nazi了,右一格。
01:28:407 (7,1,4) - 顺序:new combo/remove new combo/new combo
01:37:117 (6,7,8,9,10) - 不喜欢。
01:54:214 (1,2,3) - spacing?

大概就这样。。。

done :)
Lizbeth
I dont see any problems
totally playable for me, nice work
i really like the SB <3

Star + Kudosu Sar
Topic Starter
kiddly

Lizbeth wrote:

I dont see any problems
totally playable for me, nice work
i really like the SB <3

Star + Kudosu Sar
-3-

thx~ :)
al2e10
Al2e mod

[Hard]
- Combo problem
00:28:699 (11) - New combo & 00:28:860 (1) Remove new combo
02:57:086 (1) - Remove new combo
- Hit~sound
00:36:119 (6) - add Clap feel better @.@
00:36:764 (3) - Finish
01:07:409 (3) - Wistle
01:07:731 (4,Start) - Finish
02:14:506 (3,4) - Like ^ 01:07:409 & 01:07:731
02:27:731 (3) - Finsih
02:38:054 (3,Star) - ^
02:48:377 (3,start) - ^
- Other
03:09:022 (X) - Add a note here ~

[ALL]
That is a great song!!
Hope you can add more hit sound change in the kiai time.
Like adding more clap or finish.

STAR !!
gdeath
水梦pro SB
nothing found.
Star
Gens
[General]
  1. Do you realize "D.C.II.Vocal.Album.-.Songs.from.D.C.II." is just one word? I don't think someone would ever search for that, so you'd better remove it.
  2. Use 663 as the offset.
[Skin]
  1. There are some missing skin files. Add the following:
    1. approachcircle.png
    2. hit0.png
    3. hit50.png
    4. section-fail.png
  2. And remove "star.png".
[Storyboard]
  1. Resize or crop the images that have more than 600px as height. BG1 ~ BG3 are good examples.
[Impossiblexu's Easy]

00:16:135 - I understand the new "trend" chinese is having with those Normal hitsounds, but I don't think it fits here since it's a soft part of the song. Lowering the volume here should do it, if you don't want to remove them.
02:49:683 (4) - Sorry to say it, but this slider can't be ranked.

[Hard]

00:23:231 (6) - Rather hidden when playing...

~ ~ ~

I guess that's it.
Gens
Alright.
Gens
That difficulty name... orz
Topic Starter
kiddly
why have I forgotten this?
fixed~
Gens
Rebubbled~
Lybydose
Storyboard:

01:05:340 - fix this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12695

BG4-2.png is currently not showing up in the storyboard. It's there, but it isn't visibile because it appears beneath BG4-1.png. You need to move the BG4-2 section in the .osb to be under the BG4-1 section so that it will appear on top.

You need to lower the size of light.png and crop out the extra transparent sections. Right now it contains a lot of extra unnecessary transparent pixels.

Also, when BG4-2.png appears in the storyboard, you should make BG4-1.png disappear or completely fade out so that it isn't still being drawn to the screen (and possibly causing lag for slower machines). Same with story5-1.png and story5-2.png.

Some of the BG changes and flashes seem synced to the song oddly. It would look better if these (story1-1, story2-1 and 2-2, story3-1, story4-1 and 4-2, story6-1 and 6-2, story7, and story8) appeared on the large white ticks, like where the 3 is in this screenshot: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12698 You don't have to do that, but it would sync to the song better. Right now they all seem to appear on the white tick right before the large one (like where the 9 is in the screenshot), which doesn't sync up as well. For example, the one at 01:43:888 looks nice because it fades in on the large white beat.


Easy:

00:47:114 (2,3) - really confusing for easy
00:49:695 (2,3) - ^
01:07:759 (2) - the end of this slider sounds so weird. remove a repeat, and then possibly put a circle at 01:09:050.

Hard:

Makes more sense to begin the first kiai part at 01:20:663 and the second part at 02:27:759 (like in Easy).
Topic Starter
kiddly

Lybydose wrote:

Storyboard:

01:05:340 - fix this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12695

BG4-2.png is currently not showing up in the storyboard. It's there, but it isn't visibile because it appears beneath BG4-1.png. You need to move the BG4-2 section in the .osb to be under the BG4-1 section so that it will appear on top.

You need to lower the size of light.png and crop out the extra transparent sections. Right now it contains a lot of extra unnecessary transparent pixels.

Also, when BG4-2.png appears in the storyboard, you should make BG4-1.png disappear or completely fade out so that it isn't still being drawn to the screen (and possibly causing lag for slower machines). Same with story5-1.png and story5-2.png.

Some of the BG changes and flashes seem synced to the song oddly. It would look better if these (story1-1, story2-1 and 2-2, story3-1, story4-1 and 4-2, story6-1 and 6-2, story7, and story8) appeared on the large white ticks, like where the 3 is in this screenshot: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12698 You don't have to do that, but it would sync to the song better. Right now they all seem to appear on the white tick right before the large one (like where the 9 is in the screenshot), which doesn't sync up as well. For example, the one at 01:43:888 looks nice because it fades in on the large white beat.


Easy:

00:47:114 (2,3) - really confusing for easy
00:49:695 (2,3) - ^
01:07:759 (2) - the end of this slider sounds so weird. remove a repeat, and then possibly put a circle at 01:09:050.

Hard:

Makes more sense to begin the first kiai part at 01:20:663 and the second part at 02:27:759 (like in Easy).
fixed! :)
Lybydose
Easy:

01:09:050 (3) - oops sorry I copied the wrong time :o Put it at 01:09:372 on the red tick
dvorak_old
SB Lyrics perfect.

nothing to say . go rank :)
Lybydose
Rebubbled
Colin Hou
水梦威武 8-)

@dvorak I just got that -ymkk 6qh = 本物のお宅 lol
Gens
Now that it's sorted out...

Ranked!
yaya
rank :lol:
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