orioncomet wrote:

:) I have some custom-hitsound though, plz full submission again after you got them

• • Offset: 2980
  • Add some tags

• • 00:41:048 (x) Add a spinner here and end it here 00:43:945 (white tick)
  • 01:00:490 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:10:635 (1) - Start this slider here 01:10:842 (white tick)
  • 01:25:740 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:30:704 (4) - Delete this circle and add a spinner; end the spinner here 01:32:566 (red tick)

• • 00:41:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:04:104 (2,3) - Spacing

1. LuigiHann wrote:

   Foreign names should be presented in the same name order as used on Wikipedia (generally, Given Name followed by Family Name, the western order, for consistency).

   , so artist better be Megumi Hayashibara, and I love her so much <3
2. Add Sallad4ever, onrioncomet to all difficulties' tags
3. Two combo colour looked samilar, maybe change on to another colour

1. 00:57:587 (S) - spinner ends here and KIAI starts here
2. 01:00:070 (x) - KIAI ends here
3. 01:10:622 (x) - KIAI starts here
4. I feek this difficulty ends at a werid place, maybe map to 01:32:553?
   Also, some patterns could confuse beginner as a easiest diff, anyway fine for me, maybe rename to normal better, if you do so raise OA 1-3 tick

1. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:25:725 (x) - I feel KIAI should ends here
3. 01:31:932 (7) - 1 grid right and 1 grid down
4. 01:36:898 (S) - Oh no, why not silence the end, at least lower the sound lol

1. 00:23:242 (4,5) - A little hard to tell, would misread 4 to a slider, maybe just for me

1. 00:40:829 - 00:43:311 - Why here break ._.
2. 00:55:829 (x) - Add a note here
3. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

• • Offset: 2980 rdy
  • Add some tags rdy

[Easy] (this is a Normal imo)

• • 00:41:048 (x) Add a spinner here and end it here 00:43:945 (white tick)
  • 01:00:490 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:10:635 (1) - Start this slider here 01:10:842 (white tick)
  • 01:25:740 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:30:704 (4) - Delete this circle and add a spinner; end the spinner here 01:32:566 (red tick)

[Insane]

• • 00:41:000 (break) - Is this break necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders
  • 01:04:104 (2,3) - Spacing

Breeze wrote:

[onrion's Hard] seem you want me to bite your neck really.

1. 00:23:242 (4,5) - A little hard to tell, would misread 4 to a slider, maybe just for me
   Fixed but by my way, nvm >w<

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. LuigiHann wrote:

   Foreign names should be presented in the same name order as used on Wikipedia (generally, Given Name followed by Family Name, the western order, for consistency).

   , so artist better be Megumi Hayashibara, and I love her so much <3
2. Add Sallad4ever, onrioncomet to all difficulties' tags
3. Two combo colour looked samilar, maybe change on to another colour

[Easy]

1. 00:57:587 (S) - spinner ends here and KIAI starts here
2. 01:00:070 (x) - KIAI ends here
3. 01:10:622 (x) - KIAI starts here
4. I feek this difficulty ends at a werid place, maybe map to 01:32:553?
   Also, some patterns could confuse beginner as a easiest diff, anyway fine for me, maybe rename to normal better, if you do so raise OA 1-3 tick

[Sallad's Normal]

1. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here
2. 01:25:725 (x) - I feel KIAI should ends here
3. 01:31:932 (7) - 1 grid right and 1 grid down
4. 01:36:898 (S) - Oh no, why not silence the end, at least lower the sound lol

[onrion's Hard]

1. 00:23:242 (4,5) - A little hard to tell, would misread 4 to a slider, maybe just for me

[Insane]

1. 00:40:829 - 00:43:311 - Why here break ._.
2. 00:55:829 (x) - Add a note here
3. 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here

Nice skin, SB and map

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- The two combocolours are so similar, maybe make the second one a bit darker? (0,0,128 RGB looks good oxo) xD
- Hitsounds are imo too loud.:o

~Easy~
- The end sounds... empty. All the diffs are mapped until the end of the song, why not this one?mmm rdy x3

00:55:945 (1) - Extend it to white tick. rdy

~Sallad's Normal~
01:32:566 (1) - Soft hitsound sample, please?

~orion's Hard~
01:22:014 (4) - Well, the repeat arrow isn't really hidden, but it could be hard to see... Up to you to change it =x

~Insane~
00:15:393 (3) - Move 1 lv3grid right for the sake of symmetry (yeah, so nazi xD) hahah rdy xD
00:50:152 (1) - Delete New Combo.RDY
00:50:980 (1) - ^rdy
00:57:497 (2) - Hmmm... sounds kinda weird o.O' >:3


Cool SB (Oh, and comboburst is <3)

~Sallad's Normal~
01:32:566 (1) - Soft hitsound sample, please? Yeah okay

[Sallad's Normal]

* 01:10:829 (x) - KIAI starts here Yup done
* 01:25:725 (x) - I feel KIAI should ends here yeah
* 01:31:932 (7) - 1 grid right and 1 grid down hehe yup
* 01:36:898 (S) - Oh no, why not silence the end, at least lower the sound lol added

xxheroxx wrote:

Pubbled~

yuckothegreat wrote:

Super cool beatmap!

Normal
1:18:290 (3,4,5) - These sliders don't seem to go with the song, and are not spaced so thier difficult to judge. D:

Sallad's Normal
0:45:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put finish on all these no D:
0:54:290 - Add a circle, and start the spinner 1 or 2 ticks later D;
0:57:600 - All the other difficulties have kiai time here.creator chose

*

al2e10 wrote:

By AL2e's modmodmod

[Insane]
- Notes problem
00:36:497 (3) - move to 00:36:393 ? rdy
00:39:807 (6) - move to 00:39:704 ?
- COmbo problem
00:09:600 (1) - Remove new combo?rdy
00:22:842 (1) - ^?no
01:05:048 (1) - ^?no
01:06:497 (1) - ^rdy
01:08:773 (1) - ^no
01:11:462 (1) - ^?no
01:22:014 (1) - ^
00:25:738 (11) - New combo and 00:25:945 (1) Remove new combordy
00:59:048 (5) - New combo and 00:59:255 (1) Remove new combo
- Sound
00:28:635 (4,5) - REmove wistlerdy
00:29:462 (6) - Remove finishrdy
01:14:773 (3) - ^ rdy

[orion's Hard]
- Combo problem
00:42:290 (1) - Remove new combo? no
00:45:393 (6) - New combo & 00:46:428 (1) Remove new combo rdy
00:47:048 (2) - New combo rdy

[ALL]
That good !!
But I think some player cannot see the lyris on the scream.
Normal and easy I not gonna to mod. That good.

STAR !!

emaal wrote:

[General]

Good.

~[Normal]~

Nothing!

~[Sallad's Normal]~

Nothing!

~[orion's Hard]~

00:37:014(x): add a note to the red and the blue tick? no =(

Great!

~[Insane]~

Nothing! Might be to hard? But Great!

orioncomet wrote:

don't fix anything on my diff, They're fine. And here's my old version.
sorry I prefer If I will fix my diff I will fix it by my self. If he don't use my old version plz don't bubble

Shulin wrote:

Normal:

01:02:359 (4) - Move this from under the slider. rdy

Sallad's Normal:

00:07:324 (1) - Remove new combo. Or new combo 00:13:945 (5) - rdy

orion's Hard:

Good.

Insane:

00:56:152 (x) - Add note?rdy
01:04:014 (1,2,3) - Spacing looks too wide, should look like 01:10:428 (1,2,3) - (or you could stack it I guess)mmm rdy

Minor suggestions, very nice map

~ Star.

soulfear wrote:

[orin's Hard]
00:05:255 - put a note or don't stack with 00:05:462 (3) just suggustion.
X, Plz hear it with rhythm.
01:26:359 - ^
X
00:57:807 (3) - please stack it with 00:57:600 (2).
X
01:06:290 (8,9,1,2,3) - hard to read.
Fine.

soulfear wrote:

[Normal]
np.
[Sallad's Normal]
01:24:911 (7) - reduce a back and put a note instead of it. no
[orin's Hard]
00:05:255 - put a note or don't stack with 00:05:462 (3) just suggustion.
01:26:359 - ^
00:57:807 (3) - please stack it with 00:57:600 (2).
01:06:290 (8,9,1,2,3) - hard to read.
[Insane]
OA-1 no
00:55:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2) - hard to read and beat. no D:
01:09:807 (3,4,1,2,3) - space.no it's a jump =P

star.

S i R i R u wrote:

:P

H-boy wrote:

Normal
00:36:704(4) - remove finish no =(
01:17:255(1) - ^ no =(

Sallad's Normal
reduce volume? =o?

orion's Hard
00:54:497(5) - new combo? no

Insane
fine~

Star~

gdeath wrote:

i'm fine with all of them
Star!

• .Opinions:
  Great

• .Opinions:
  Good. I don't like how claps sound, but they're used well (i think the hitsound does not fit D:)

• .Opinions:
  Claps get monotonous: they're always 1/1 D:
  .Suggestions:
  00:03:393 (1,2,3,4) - they feel unnatural when playing. I think that 3 sliders with three repetition each feel better. Like this:
  
  (Don't mind their position xD)

• .Opinions:
  Fine

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:

• .Opinions:
  Great

- Salad's Normal:

• .Opinions:
  Good. I don't like how claps sound, but they're used well (i think the hitsound does not fit D:)

- orion's Hard:

• .Opinions:
  Claps get monotonous: they're always 1/1 D:
  .Suggestions:
  00:03:393 (1,2,3,4) - they feel unnatural when playing. I think that 3 sliders with three repetition each feel better. Like this:
  
  (Don't mind their position xD)

- Insane:

• .Opinions:
  Fine

Good storyboard and polished skin
Good job ^^

Lumiere wrote:

Estrellita See *.*

yaya wrote:

streams do not fit the music

Lissette wrote:

tu mapa esta bien

aqui te dejo unas sugerencias de como sonaria mejor, en mi opinion

Insane
00:06:704 (3) - quita esta nota, como esta aqui 00:12:911 (5,6,7) rdy
00:13:738 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2) quita estas notas y agrega una nota aqui 00:14:255 - rdy
00:40:324 - agrega una nota, me suena que ahi va un tripe rdy
00:41:462 (3,4,5) - aqui me suena que no va un tripe >.< fixed in other mod :3
00:42:911 (9,10) - (9) mueve hacia el siguiente tick azul, (10) mueve hacia el siguiente tick rojo
01:10:428 (1,2,3) - por que no empezaste este triple en el tick rojo siguiente, como en los anteriores 01:04:014 (1,2,3) y 01:07:324 (1), suena mejor no crees? :p fixed in another way :3
01:28:635 (2,3) - (2) muevelo hacia el tick azul siguiente, (3) quita esta nota fixed in another way :3

Normal
01:02:359 (4) - quita esta nota >.< y empieza el spinner 1/2 beat antes rdy

Star!

yaya wrote:

orion's is good .

Gens wrote:

Bah, I thought it was only pubbled, not bubbled. =[

It's not like I found anything worth-posting anyway.

EDIT: The cursor is bugging me a bit... if you see in in contrast to the background you can see there is a tiny bit of white in a corner... plus those white spikes look cut off. =[ lol

dvorak wrote:

star for Yashigani !

normal/normal/hard are great.
Insane.. as yaya wrote, stream really fit this music.. ?

(suggestion)
remove 10:531 and make rhythm as 1-(1)-1-3-1
one example.
If you use this rhythm many part need to be changed .

Mafiamaster wrote:

Ranked!