xChangJo wrote:

SPOILER

Hi from my modding queue, the mod is short because is my first time modding approved beatmap, sorry if I can't help you more with this beatmap

Mod

General:
- your backgroung need to be 1366x768, cause your actual background looks a bit pixelated

Wakare:

- 00:07:337 (1) - Fix the stack in the end with 00:06:775 (6)
- 00:21:400 (8) - I think this sound better if you change to slider with circle
- 00:45:685 (5,1,3) - The flow with this notes feels a little strange for me
- 00:52:114 (2) - Move to X: 398, Y: 219, 00:52:649 (3) - Move to X: 437, Y: 296,00:53:007 (1) - Move to X: 398, Y: 219,
00:53:542 (2,3) - Move to X: 437, Y: 296 for fix the stack.
- 01:03:007 (1,2) - I think is better is you put first the slider and then the circle, because 01:03:185 (2,3) the first off-beat slider sound a little weird but the
second sound good
- 01:08:721 (1,2) - The same for this, in this case if you put first the slider and then the circle the pattern follow the rhythm and the vocal
- 02:40:685 (2,4) - I don't think this overlap looks nice, maybe move the 4 to another part
- 02:41:578 (5) - You can make a blanket with 02:41:221 (3)
- 02:51:578 (1,2) - Make this pattern with the slider first and then put the circle
- 03:09:971 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I think this stream sound a little weird cause the voice start 03:11:221 (3), I think if you eliminated 03:10:417 (2,2) this sound better
- 03:30:328 (2,3) - Why this are too close, correct the distance snap

Good Luck with your beatmap /o/

I change some pattern issue in your mod , some stack I seems are good to me but maybe bug ? I reset all your point again , seems it will be better ~

Euny wrote:

SPOILER

your request! came from my queue

• General

1. change BG pixels 1024*768 or 1366*768

• Wakare

1. 00:18:400 (4,1) - fix blanket Fixed ~
2. 01:14:971 (2,1) - make perfect stack?(or if your style, just ignore)
3. 01:17:292 (1) - remove whistle and add finish at the slider's head? Oh yay , Fixed ~
4. 02:24:435 (5) - ^ and NC? I keep this , seems whistle is better
5. 01:24:614 (4,5) - make perfect stack?(1 grid haha... sorry xD) Fixed ~
6. 01:44:971 (7,1) - fix blanket Fixed ~
7. 01:52:917 (4,5) - ^ Fixed ~
8. 02:17:828 (2,5) - make perfect stack?(1 grid again@.@...) Fixed ~
9. 02:23:899 (3,4) - fix blanket Fixed ~
10. 03:05:864 (1) - remove whistle and add finish at the slider's head? Fixed ~
11. 03:20:149 (1,3) - ^ I keep this , seems whistle is better
12. 03:21:221 (4,6,7,8,1) - i know your style. but, i recommend this patterns. ok , I will try to change this after ~
    
    spoilerbox

    
13. 04:38:721 (1,3) - remodeling these sliders? for better blanket. Fixed ~

dafldfgjdksfdfld;af...oh come on.. i can't mod your mapT.T.......it's look so nice to me. GL with it!

baraatje123 wrote:

M4M from your queue

[Wakare]
00:04:150 (1,2) - Try to blanket these 2 notes, it gives a much better feeling for the aesthetics
00:06:775 (6,1) - Make them stack (Due to editor problems, you need to move (6) to 332:240, and move (1) to 442:118 or 442:117 (Stupid editor)
00:08:275 (2) - Move to 417:205 for better blanket
00:10:150 (1,2) - Maybe blanket these 2
00:13:150 (7,1) - Move to 125:152 for better stack
00:14:275 (2) - Move to 194:206 for better blanket
00:18:400 (4,1) - Blanket better
00:40:150 (5) - Slider doesn't look really nice, You can do something like this (Also change (6) if you do this)

SPOILER

00:40:150 (5) - NC (Due to BPM change)
00:51:578 (1,2,3) - Looks really ugly, due to massive overlaps, and bad stacks (doesn't feel good)
01:33:007 (5,7) - Overlap doesn't look really nice, maybe you can stack these 2
01:58:007 (3,5) - ^^
01:59:792 (8,1,2) - Improve blanket
02:06:399 (2) - The red point should be at 98:262 (Ctrl G 02:05:864 (1) - to see it)
02:21:399 (4,5,6) - Blanket
02:34:435 (1) - Make 1/2
02:41:221 (3,5,6) - Blanket
02:50:149 (5) - NC
03:06:935 (4,5,6) - Blanket
03:20:149 (1,3) - Improve blanket
03:22:114 (6,7,8) - What the fuck happened here? These overlaps are terrible, and it feels terrible, I just hope it's due to accidental DS turning on and not noticing it, but this is just terrible, sorry to say Yes you're right , Fixed ~
03:25:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^^ Keep here cus , I think it's ok o.o
03:30:685 (3) - Move it away a little more, cause the overlap is ugly Keep here too
03:52:649 (2,3,4,1) - Can be made better, see image this I like currently view

SPOILER

03:58:542 (6) - Make the notes at 152:64 (On top of (1))
04:08:721 (5) - NC
04:21:578 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Whistle (All)
05:07:292 (1) - Red point should be at 116:129 (Ctrl G (10) to see)
05:26:935 (3) - NC
05:28:274 - Add another spinner here at low volume (Until 05:31:578)

this map has quite some overlaps, which are (really) ugly, or in the 2nd kiai completely terrible
The rest seems fine, except a few blanket fixes (and some nazi stacks)

Good lcuk!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

这个BG不是loneliest baby的吗, 用二期op的封面做BG啊, 最好把色调再调暗一点符合这个歌的主题 好我換一個 , 我放的時候只是隨便從Google找一張就貼惹wwww

图还可以, 就是比较单调, 没我做的好玩 ;____;

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

[Wakare]
感觉od7.5好点（多点pp）
00:09:025 00:09:212 类似这些音可以找个这样的音效放一下啊 可以用这个图的音效 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/338862
00:15:400 whistle, 感觉你最开始那段都能下点音效啊，现在感觉空啊
00:41:221 (4,5,1) - flow有点怪啊,试下这样或者别的: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820606
00:42:292 (4,5) - 01:16:578 (3,4) - 这些用一样的弧度啊，直接复制就行了。。
00:57:292 (1) - 放到(377,316)附近啊，跳下适合点我觉得
01:30:507 (7) - 03:19:078 (7) - NC啊
01:36:935 (9,10) - 现在不爽啊，因为9,10,1的flow在同一方向，试下这样： https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820619
02:04:971 (4,5,6) - 我的感觉是应该这样摆，有时不要刻意的blanket： https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820625
02:23:542 (2) - whis
02:41:578 (5,6,7) - 试下这样，现在flow怪，而且没blanket好。。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820646
03:24:435 (5) - flow不好啊，这样啊： https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820654
03:25:685 (9) - 移到（34.161）要有点角度打起来才爽 好喔~
03:26:578 (3) - 我怎么听都是觉得三个长滑条同向的： https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820660 這好難改orz
04:41:399 (8,1) - 现在怪怪的，试下： https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820680
05:00:149 (1) - flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2820684
05:04:435 (1) - 拉到05:04:792 白线音太明显

GL

ShiauKe wrote:

嗨~
因為大致上沒什麼問題所以只能蛋殼裡挑骨頭惹
(其實是功力太差根本看不出來有什麼lol

[Wakare]
03:30:328 (2,3) - 額有點怪怪的,玩的時候會誤判,可是感覺又沒問題(?) 給點間距還是啥的或許會好些 未看先猜是圈圈包回轉那個 , 猜中惹ㄏㄏ , 我是故意ㄉ , 我之後再看看好惹
03:59:971 (6,1) - ^
04:32:828 (10,1) - ^
04:27:292 (1,2,3) - 後面的Whistle是忘記加還是故意的:O 我的話會綠線降低volume 這些後面好像是clap位 , 不是很想放clap , 所以就空著惹

1. 00:12:400 (5) - stack the tail properly
2. 00:13:337 (1) - stack the tail properly. And this silider isn't blanket 00:14:275 (2) - perfectly. you can see it with 00:14:275 (2) - 's approach circle at 00:14:181
3. 00:48:364 (4) - ctrl+g here ? it seems energy up in vocal, so make a little jump here. And it looks better flow too
4. 00:52:649 (3) - stack it properly
5. 01:16:578 (3,4,1) - I better like to make it flow like this http://puu.sh/gdw3S/ed71e351de.jpg
6. 02:15:685 (5,6) - give them more distance since this part have an energy up in the vocal. At least bigger than 02:15:507 (4,5) -
7. 02:32:828 (5) - remove this. that will be a good imperfect stack between 02:32:649 (4,6) - . If you agree with this you can NC at 02:33:007 -
8. 02:45:953 (1) - I think that rather than we make it a slider, it's better if we make it 2 circles. first one on the head position and the second stack with 02:46:399 (2) -
9. 03:04:078 (4) - ctrl+g it ? to make a flow with 03:03:721 (3) -
10. 03:15:507 (3) - stack it properly
11. 03:16:042 (4) - same as above
12. 03:25:864 (1) - I think it flows better if ctrl+g. And in your way 03:25:685 (9,1) - have a big jump, this part isn't had a big energy so I suggest ctrl+g to reduce the distance
13. 03:30:328 (2,3) - will be misread as 1/4. give them more distance
14. 04:34:971 (8,9) - I think this pattern should be reversed. 04:35:149 (9) - to 04:34:971 - and 04:34:971 (8) - to 04:35:328 - since the vocal starts at 04:34:971 - so the slider should be there. Just to make things more clearer.
15. 04:47:292 (1,3) - stack their tail properly
16. 04:53:542 (2) - ctrl+g ? to make flow with 04:53:007 (1) -
17. 05:00:685 - at least add a circle here to make things more clearer. 05:00:149 (1,2) - have same distance with 04:59:792 (5,6) - but different snap.
18. 05:28:274 (1) - This slider should be ended at 05:32:292 - . You'll know if you listen it directly until the small volume

Fantastica wrote:

hi hi :3~~~~ from my queue....



[Wakare]

1. 00:12:400 (5) - stack the tail properly Ok~
2. 00:13:337 (1) - stack the tail properly. And this silider isn't blanket 00:14:275 (2) - perfectly. you can see it with 00:14:275 (2) - 's approach circle at 00:14:181 Ok~
3. 00:48:364 (4) - ctrl+g here ? it seems energy up in vocal, so make a little jump here. And it looks better flow too Ok~ nice
4. 00:52:649 (3) - stack it properly fixed~
5. 01:16:578 (3,4,1) - I better like to make it flow like this http://puu.sh/gdw3S/ed71e351de.jpg let me consider with it , I will like to keep my jump point currently
6. 02:15:685 (5,6) - give them more distance since this part have an energy up in the vocal. At least bigger than 02:15:507 (4,5) - consider it too , cus pattern is ok for me
7. 02:32:828 (5) - remove this. that will be a good imperfect stack between 02:32:649 (4,6) - . If you agree with this you can NC at 02:33:007 - yay , you're right , but I want to keep this to keep centralized with previously part , and I'll better like the rhythm currently , maybe let me consider it too ;w;
8. 02:45:953 (1) - I think that rather than we make it a slider, it's better if we make it 2 circles. first one on the head position and the second stack with 02:46:399 (2) - great , let me try to fixed it
9. 03:04:078 (4) - ctrl+g it ? to make a flow with 03:03:721 (3) - OHH yay , better now
10. 03:15:507 (3) - stack it properly Fixed
11. 03:16:042 (4) - same as above Fixed
12. 03:25:864 (1) - I think it flows better if ctrl+g. And in your way 03:25:685 (9,1) - have a big jump, this part isn't had a big energy so I suggest ctrl+g to reduce the distance
13. 03:30:328 (2,3) - will be misread as 1/4. give them more distance I will keep it now , it's my deliberately to do , but I will keep in mind this cus somebody point this too ;__;
14. 04:34:971 (8,9) - I think this pattern should be reversed. 04:35:149 (9) - to 04:34:971 - and 04:34:971 (8) - to 04:35:328 - since the vocal starts at 04:34:971 - so the slider should be there. Just to make things more clearer.
15. 04:47:292 (1,3) - stack their tail properly Fixed
16. 04:53:542 (2) - ctrl+g ? to make flow with 04:53:007 (1) - Ohh , you're right , fixed
17. 05:00:685 - at least add a circle here to make things more clearer. 05:00:149 (1,2) - have same distance with 04:59:792 (5,6) - but different snap. I think it's ok to read for me , the circle can tell the player timing here , and it will not be so hard I guess
18. 05:28:274 (1) - This slider should be ended at 05:32:292 - . You'll know if you listen it directly until the small volume ok~ fixed , better point ~

Okya that's all
I like your design... good job shoot ~~~
and I like this song XD... shoot again ~~~
You must rank it I will work hard for this ~!><

Mei wrote:

hihihi

这bg应该很多图都用过吧，建议换个不太一样的。这歌有点和风元素，所以可能贴张和服相关的BG会比较好
比如这个
什么你说为什么只有海爷一个人？因为海爷最棒啊这歌海爷是c啊 總之先存下來
其实我想推的是这张

BG

好~ 改惹
我順便把繪師的pivix加到Information裡面

[Wakare]

• 
  
  tag 里面加上 Nardoxyribonucleic 阿又漏了....fixed

1. 05:23:364 删掉这条绿线 fixed
   
2. 00:11:650 (1) - 加个whistle ok
   
3. 01:05:864 (6) - NC ok
   
4. 01:49:078 (2) - 如果跟的是背景的鼓那这里漏一拍，可以试试这样 我用4迴轉slider可以嗎w? 後面類似的Part也一起改了
   
   Picture

   
5. 02:11:578 (1) - 这里用1/1个人认为不太妥当，因为漏了02:11:757 的人声 ok , 改惹1/2迴轉
   
6. 02:23:542 (2,3) - 这里我觉得这样排列有点误导的感觉orz 額 , 可以的話這邊我還是想保持 , 感覺這樣也有fu
   
7. 02:34:435 (1) - 这里也是漏音 ok~
   
8. 02:51:757 (2,3) - 这两个居然没有平行！怎么可以不平行呢！;w; 不小心的:P , fixed
   
9. 03:30:328 (2,3) - 这两个离得5太近了，建议拉开一点 ok改惹
   
10. 04:53:542 (2) - ctrl+g 好些

ok~

改好了并且加入拜海神教就可以来叫我recheck
可是我是真姬派的 ;w;

Xinchii wrote:

Thx Mei >w</

海爺那張現在變我電腦桌面惹w

Koalazy wrote:

Xinchii wrote:

Thx Mei >w</

海爺那張現在變我電腦桌面惹w

說好不能背叛老婆的?

-Eternal Love- wrote:

嗨!~ 我的mod來了

Nardo's Inner Oni

00:07:337 - add d? I think there is no obvious sound to be mapped.
00:13:337 - ^ ^
01:08:542 (240) - k It is already a kat.
01:18:007 (288) - d k would fit the background snare there.
04:35:596 (19) - delete? I think keeping the note would result in a greater impact.

祝好運^^

-Eternal Love- wrote:

嗨!~ 我的mod來了

Nardo's Inner Oni

00:07:337 - add d?
00:13:337 - ^
01:08:542 (240) - k
01:18:007 (288) - d
04:35:596 (19) - delete?

祝好運^^

bigfrog wrote:

沒趕上mod真是抱歉QwQ
祝rank順利~~

• General :

1. Nardo's diff offset is 40150 and Wakare's diff offset is 4150, please fix this, use 4150/40150 for consistency timing
2. i found more than 5+ unsnapped object, re-snap all of object please, and don't forget about 1/3 section if you fix this
3. Check AIMOD

Genocide wrote:

Hi, Xinchi summon me from my queue

• General :

1. Nardo's diff offset is 40150 and Wakare's diff offset is 4150, please fix this, use 4150/40150 for consistency timing There are two red lines in total. One at 4150 (160BPM) and the other one at 40150 (168BPM).
2. i found more than 5+ unsnapped object, re-snap all of object please, and don't forget about 1/3 section if you fix this The latest version does not have any unsnapped objects at all.
3. Check AIMOD

[Inner Oni]
00:43:900 (112,113) - ctrl + g?, 00:44:078 (113) - have a deeper voice d k could maintain a better snare consistency since snare occurs at 00:44:078 (113) -
01:09:078 (242,243) - ctrl + g?, 01:09:257 (243) - very high sound, it will be nice if you change it. Comparing the vocal pitch, 01:09:078 (242) - is higher than 01:09:257 (243) - , so k d would fit.
01:29:257 (359,360) - use Finish, for better emphasis + flow They are already big dons.
01:36:667 (406,408) - ctrl + g please. the sound is more high kkddk would result in a smoother flow. Also, the high-pitched sound actually appears at 01:36:935 (409) -
01:38:721 (416,417) - use d k, for more clean sound imo I would prefer focusing on the vocal pitch increase among 01:38:007 (413,416) - by using d and k respectively.
01:40:864 (431,432,433) - d k d please, the sound isn't that high, better use drum background sound. It's a good idea. But regarding 01:40:685 (429,430,431,432,433,434) - , I use ddk at 01:40:685 (429,430,431) - and d k k at 01:41:042 (432,433,434) - respectively to reflect the pitch increase of the instrument sounds there.
01:44:257 (452) - kat, you need more emphasis, otherwise 01:44:257 (452,453,454) - is going high fixed
01:59:257 (534,535) - better ctrl + g, for clean sound I think d k would result in a smoother flow imo.

since i don't like repetitive pattern, can you change this as k? 02:07:203 (579) - 02:08:632 (591,597) - 02:10:774 (609) - , for interesting pattern, i can play that section without seeing the notes `-`I'm following the repetitive guitar strikes there. Changed 02:10:774 (609) - to k though.

02:26:042 (708,709) - don, 02:26:042 - have a low sound If you listen carefully, 02:26:042 (708) - still has a relatively high pitch than 02:26:221 (709) - . That's why I put k d there.
02:58:185 (892,894) - d k, 02:58:185 (892) - has low sound, and 02:58:542 (894) - using kat to add more power of this K 02:58:720 (895) - I followed the vocal there. We could experience a pitch drop across 02:58:185 (892,893,894) -
04:13:542 (1325) - use kat, the sound is similar with 04:13:007 (1324) - The sound is lower than 04:13:007 (1324,1326) - , so d would be fine imo.
05:00:685 (166,167) - k d, the sound is high at 05:00:685 (166) - same as 01:59:257 (534,535) -
05:09:435 (217,218,219,220) - kkd d , 05:09:614 (219) - the sound at here is deep and 05:09:792 (220) - is high, would be nice if you change this A snare sound could be heard at 05:09:792 (220) - , that's why I used k for a stricter snare consistency.

Xinchii wrote:

Thanks Genocide ~

Updatedetadpupdateddddddd

wow I can pass it

Gamu wrote:

Hello.
sorry for the delay ;w;

[ General]

1. Romanised Title: Datte Datte Aa Mujou
   I'm not sure, but this is correct in my opinion. Umm , ok I will try this ~
2. Tags: 內田彩 ⇒ 内田彩 lol , language is so profound XDD
   This is wrong.

[ Insane]

1. I'd like to recommend that you reduce the HP Drain Rate because this song is long. Maybe HP6 is the appropriate setting.
2. 00:16:150 (1) - At the start point, soft-hitfinish is better than soft-hitwhistle. Like this: 00:22:150 (1).
3. 00:37:150 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap(S:C2) and change the volume to 40%~50%. It will make a good sound! fixed ~ but I set on 30% , seems better for me
4. 01:18:721 (5) - Add a new combo in order to keep the consistency.
5. 01:19:792 (1) - Remove a new combo. The reason is the same as above.
6. 01:20:149 (5) - Add a new combo. ^
7. 01:21:399 (1) - Add a finish at the start point.
8. 01:29:971 (6) - ^
9. 02:24:435 (5) - ^
10. 02:26:399 (2) - ^
11. 02:45:864 (1) - soft-hitwhistle is missing at the end point.
12. 02:53:007 (1) - Remove a new combo in order to keep the consistency.
13. 02:54:435 (12) - Add a new combo. The reason is the same as above.
14. 02:55:864 (1) - Remove a new combo. ^
15. 03:07:292 (5) - Add a finish at the start point.
16. 03:09:971 (1) - ^
17. 03:18:542 (6) - ^
18. 04:38:721 (1) - ^
19. 04:43:007 (1) - ^
20. 04:45:864 (5) - ^
21. 04:47:292 (1) - ^
22. 04:48:721 (5) - ^
23. 04:53:542 (2) - Add a soft-hitwhistle or soft-hitclap at the start point?
24. 05:01:578 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish at the start point.
25. 05:22:114 (3) - Add a soft-hitclap.
26. 05:22:471 (4) - Change to soft-hitclap.
27. 05:22:828 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap.
28. 05:23:007 (2) - Change to soft-hitclap.
29. 05:24:792 (T) - The volume of this green line is too low. At least 30%.
30. 05:25:149 (1) - Change to soft-hitclap.
31. 05:25:328 (2) - Add a soft-hitclap and soft-hitwhistle.
32. 05:25:685 (1) - Add a soft-hitclap
33. 05:25:864 (2) - Add a soft-hitfinish.
34. 05:26:221 (1) - Change to soft-hitclap.
35. 05:26:399 (2) - Add a soft-hitclap and soft-hitwhistle.
36. 05:26:935 (1) - ^
37. 05:28:185 (2) - Rhythm suggestion. Remove this circle and move the start point of the spinner to 05:27:024 and move the end point of the spinner to 05:32:292.
    
    image & code

    
    

    120,256,326935,5,6,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,327024,12,0,332292,0:0:0:0:

Many hitsounds are missing, and some new combos are strange.
I want to strongly recommend that you fix it!
Call me back :3

Gamu wrote:

Recheck time.

[ General]

1. Incorrect title again. Datte Datte Aa Mujou
   Please use capital letters.
2. It is necessary to unify the Tags. 内田彩 is correct.
   
   Tags

   - [Nardo's Inner Oni] : ラブライブ lovelive muse Kosaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Nitta Emi 新田恵海 Minami Kotori 南ことり Uchida Aya 内田彩 Sonoda Umi 園田海未 Suzuko Mimori 三森すずこ Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjou Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空 Nardoxyribonucleic
   
   - [Wakare] : ラブライブ lovelive muse Kosaka Honoka 高坂穂乃果 Nitta Emi 新田恵海 Minami Kotori 南ことり Uchida Aya 內田彩 Sonoda Umi 園田海未 Suzuko Mimori 三森すずこ Hoshizora Rin 星空凛 Iida Riho 飯田里穂 Nishikino Maki 西木野真姫 Pile Koizumi Hanayo 小泉花陽 Kubo Yurika 久保ユリカ Ayase Eli 絢瀬絵里 Nanjou Yoshino 南條愛乃 Tojo Nozomi 東條希 Kusuda Aina 楠田亜衣奈 Yazawa Nico 矢澤にこ Tokui Sora 徳井青空 Nardoxyribonucleic

.......Great sorry for my broken eyes orz... fixed

1. Remove the osb.file from folder. It is unnecessary.

Ah , I really didn't see .osb here this time lol --->
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[ Wakare]

1. 00:37:150 (1) - default-clap doesn't fit to the song. Please use the custom sound (S:C1).
2. 01:28:899 (2) - Add a clap.
3. 01:29:257 (3) - Add a whistle.
4. 01:29:614 (4) - Add a clap.
5. 02:26:399 (2) - Remove a finish at the start point in order to keep your hitsound pattern
6. 02:47:828 (5) - Add a whistle at the start point.
7. 03:17:471 (2) - Add a clap.
8. 03:17:828 (3) - Add a whistle.
9. 03:18:185 (4) - Add a clap.
10. 03:44:435 (1) - Add a finish.
11. 03:57:292 (1) - CTRL+G. It will be better than before.
12. 03:58:007 (4) - ^
13. 05:25:864 (2) - Add a clap instead of finish.
14. 05:26:935 (1) - Add a finish instead of clap.

All fixed here ~!

Call me back again.