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ZUN - The Road of the Apotropaic God ~ Dark Road

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Topic Starter
Frill
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年4月29日 at 23:40:28

Artist: ZUN
Title: The Road of the Apotropaic God ~ Dark Road
Source: Touhou
Tags: hina kagiyama Yakujinsama no toori michi
BPM: 156
Filesize: 2062kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.36 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Lunatic (4.96 stars, 340 notes)
  3. Normal (3.88 stars, 171 notes)
Download: ZUN - The Road of the Apotropaic God ~ Dark Road
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd beatmaps.

enjoy it

curucuru~

'10/04/01 Thurs
background change XD
redownload plz XD

'10/04/03 Sat
New diffcult [Easy]
Redownload plz

'10/04/12 Mon
mp3 changed
redownload plz XD

'10/04/15 Thu
New Title Name [ZUN - The Road of the Apotropaic God ~ Dark Road]
redownload plz
ReimuSS
lunatic配置好きです!
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks!
DeFiLeR
lunaticやっててすごい楽しいです
曲も譜面も好みです
PSPDS Eddie
両難易度ともとてもやりやすく、
また、やっていて楽しい譜面です!
GJです!
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks !!!!
Cyril Scarlet
ヾ(´¬`)ノ
buruberi_old
楽しいです
Topic Starter
Frill
thx^-^
Gottwald
とても楽しいです^^ :oops:
Cyril Scarlet
黒:個人的意見
茶:修正した方が良いかも


-通常設定-

 ● Tag の hina の前に kagiyama を入れてあげてください
 ● バックグラウンドカラーを設定



-ノーマル-

00:07:984 (4,5,6,7) - 配置画面から外れてます
00:12:984 (2,3) - 2Grid 上に
00:15:580 (1) - 00:15:676 でスタート
00:20:676 (5) - 右に1Grid
00:26:061 (3) - 上に1Grid
00:26:830 (4) - 上に1Grid 右に2Grid
00:28:945 (1) - 新しいコンボ削除
00:45:292 (3) - 上に3Grid
00:46:061 (4) - 下に1Grid
00:46:061 (4) - 新しいコンボ
01:04:907 (1) - 01:07:984 でストップ
01:23:753 (4,5) - 右に1Grid
01:49:907 (3,4) - ^




-ルナティック-

00:00:292 (1) - のグリーンラインは必要ないです、最初のオフセットと同じ位置です。赤線で設定して下さい。
00:12:599 (1) - 右に1Grid
00:22:599 (3) - 上に1Grid

00:33:176 (6) - 右に1Grid で前の残像とそろえると綺麗かも
00:44:907 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 下に1Grid
00:47:215 (3) - Grid Snap をはずしてスライダーの最後を次の始めと綺麗に重なるようにしてるのはどうかな
01:03:176 (5) - を新しいコンボにして7の場所に移動させるのはどうでしょう
01:12:407 (10) - 左に1Grid
01:12:599 (11) - 左に2Grid
01:13:176 (12,1) - 左に3Grid 、その後少しはみ出る部分が出るので修正

01:24:138 (1) - を 01:25:676 で終わらしてその後ノートを足してリズム修正してみたり。
01:35:292 (5,6,7,8) - 上に1Grid
01:43:561 (3) - リズムを白線で終わらしてください

01:50:099 - ノート追加
01:50:099 (1) - を 01:50:292 で始める
02:10:292 (1) - 左に1Grid
02:42:023 (4) - 右に1Grid
02:47:215 (1) - 画面から外れてます
02:48:754 (1,3) - 先っちょが配置画面から外れてます
02:57:599 (5) - ^

03:01:060 (6) - 新しいコンボにして 7の上に置いてみるのはどうでしょう
03:02:599 (1) - 03:05:676 でストップ
Topic Starter
Frill
Thanks s i r i r u

fixed.
maal
~[Lunatic]~

00:18:753(Timing): Start kiai here.
00:31:061(Timing): ^
01:45:676(Timing): ^

Awesome map!
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks emaal.

fixed.
[deleted user]
star~
Rieszn
sorry
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Offset 320 (resnap all notes)
    • You should make another diff

[Normal]


  • • 00:11:858 (5) - Add two slider-repetitions
    • 01:32:627 (2,1) - Spacing; keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it
    • 01:40:512 (1,2) - ^
    • 01:41:089 (3,4) - ^

[Lunatic]

  • • 01:07:311 (x) - Add a break
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks xxheroxx.

fixed.
Shulin
General:

-- BG looks best at 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768, maybe resize your background?
-- Add an easier difficulty.
-- Offset 306

Normal:

-- I prefer your hitsounds on [Lunatic], maybe use a similar pattern here?

00:18:378 -- Start kiai here like Lunatic?
00:22:994 (3) - Keep kiai active?
00:30:302 (1,2,3,4) - Recheck spacing. Small jump is hard for easiest difficulty.
00:35:686 (3) - Add another return?
00:55:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - Too noisy.
01:04:917 (1) - End in "soft"
01:54:532 (1) - End at 01:57:994

Lunatic:

-- A lot of your sliders end on yellow ticks make sure to double check this!

00:06:858 (3) - End on white tick not yellow tick.
00:08:589 (4) - ^
00:08:973 (5) - End return on red tick.
00:15:704 (1) - Finish instead of clap?
01:11:652 (8) - New combo.
01:13:382 (1) - Remove new combo(?)
01:32:613 (1) - Sounds better if you add two slider returns. Reposition the slider if you do this.
02:04:550 (3) - End on white tick.
02:06:281 (4) - End on white tick.
02:06:666 (5) - Make sure returns land on white tick and red tick.
02:13:396 (1) - Finish?
02:25:305 (3) - New combo.
02:41:459 (3) - End on white tick, not yellow tick.
02:43:589 (5) - Make sure returns land on white and red tick.
03:02:627 (1) - End at 03:06:089 with soft whistle.

Good job. Nice maps! :D
~ Star.
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks Shulin.

fixed.



background change
redownload plz XD
Cychrome
Star~~
orioncomet
[Normal]
00:06:459 (1) - Too far from (4)
00:12:613 (1) - Too far from (5)
01:02:215 - This part hitsound too loud
01:54:536 (1) - End this spinner at 01:57:806 and add sound finish

[Lunatic]
01:04:921 (1) - add sound finish
03:02:613 (1) - End this spinner at 03:05:498 and add sound finish

Starr ~ :oops:
Topic Starter
Frill
Thanks orioncomet.

fixed.
Leorda
KONNICHIWA!

[General]
1) This diff is need easier diff

[Lunatic]
01:07:421 (B) - The break are too short, remove it?

Not bad
STAR
Topic Starter
Frill
KONNICHIWA :D

fixed.

new dif easy edit
finish

redownload plz XD

thanks Leorda
Aenna
フォルダの中の.osbは不要です
消してフルでアップしなおしてください

こちらも言いたい事はHana no iro haとほぼ同じです :(

[Lunatic]
01:07:325 (x) - Breakを入れてください、Insertした後にSaveすれば入ります
01:50:306 (1) - 終わりを(01:51:459)にするといいかもしれません
01:55:113 (2,3,4,5) - 終点に綺麗に重ねましょう


02:14:729 (1) - 終わりを(02:16:075)にするといいかもしれません

[Normal]
00:31:075 (x) - ここにnoteを追加して、kiaiを始めるのが良いと思います
00:35:690 (3) - 1 grid 左だと思います
00:39:536 (3) - 上と同じです
00:52:613 (1) - Spacingがおかしいです
01:29:536 (5) - 1 grid 左だと思います
01:36:844 (7) - 1 grid 上だと思います
01:45:690 (1) - ここからkiaiを始めるのが良いと思います
01:47:613 (4) - 少しだけ画面外です HPバーとかぶっています


[Easy]
Over all 1 up?
00:09:536 (5) - New combo
00:16:459 (5) - 上と同じです
00:21:844 (4) - 上と同じです
00:22:998 (1) - Remove new combo
00:30:306 (4) - New combo
00:31:075 (x) - ここからkiaiを始めるのがいいと思います
00:31:459 (1) - このnoteを(00:31:844)に移動
00:32:229 (2) - このnoteを(00:32:613)に移動
00:32:998 (3) - このnoteを(00:33:382)に移動
00:34:536 (4) - このnoteを(00:34:921)に移動
00:35:306 (5) - このnoteを(00:35:690)に移動
00:36:844 (1) - このnoteを(00:37:229)に移動
00:39:152 (2) - このnoteを(00:39:536)に移動
00:42:613 (3) - New combo
00:58:767 (5) - 上と同じです
01:10:690 (1) - このnoteを(01:10:306)に移動
01:12:613 (1) - このnoteを(01:11:814)に移動
01:13:382 (x) - Slider追加、終点(01:14:536)
01:14:536 (1) - このnoteを(01:14:921)に移動
01:15:306 (2) - このnoteを(01:15:690)に移動
01:16:075 (3) - このnoteを(01:16:459)に移動
01:16:844 (4) - このnoteを(01:17:229)に移動
01:18:382 (6) - このnoteを(01:17:998)に移動
01:25:690 (1) - 終わりを(01:27:229)にしましょう
01:28:382 (1) - このnoteを(01:27:998)に移動
01:29:152 (2) - このnoteを(01:28:767)に移動
01:29:921 (3) - このnoteを(01:29:536)に移動
01:30:690 (4) - このnoteを(01:30:306)に移動
01:31:267 (5) - New combo
01:33:767 (1) - このnoteを(01:33:382)に移動
01:34:536 (2) - このnoteを(01:34:152)に移動
01:36:075 (3) - このnoteを(01:35:690)に移動
01:36:844 (4) - このnoteを(01:36:459)に移動 New combo
01:37:998 (1) - このnoteを(01:37:613)に移動 Remove new combo
01:38:382 (2) - このnoteを(01:37:998)に移動
01:40:690 (1) - このnoteを(01:40:306)に移動
01:41:459 (2) - このnoteを(01:41:075)に移動
01:41:844 (x) - Add note
01:42:229 (1) - 終点が(01:42:998)になるように伸ばしてください
01:46:075 (1) - このnoteを(01:45:690)に移動 それとここからkiaiが良いと思います
01:46:844 (2) - このnoteを(01:46:459)に移動
01:47:613 (3) - このnoteを(01:47:229)に移動
01:49:152 (4) - このnoteを(01:48:767)に移動 New combo
01:49:921 (5) - このnoteを(01:49:536)に移動
01:51:075 (x) - Add note

頑張ってください~☆
Topic Starter
Frill
thx cyborg.

Easy酷い('A`)
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Easy]
00:34:152 (X) - add the note
00:57:998 (4) - remove whistle
01:10:306 (1) - grid 1 down
01:14:921 (1) - please check spacing
01:33:382 - add the note

the others is fine

and can I make guest diff?
Topic Starter
Frill
Thanks dksslqj.

fixed.
abalee
Err.. insane get 12 millions and normal is lower 1 million... consider to make it balanced.
Topic Starter
Frill
01:57:902 - Note from there was deleted.
Lunatic score 5.5 million
miccoliasms
Timing Points(緑の線)は基本的に変えたいところの1tick前に置いた方がいいみたいです。
例えば白からの音を変えたかったら直前の青に引くとか。
あと譜面に対してmp3が長すぎるので譜面終了後をフェードアウトさせるようなmp3に変えたほうがいいかもしれません。

Lunaticについてですが
不可解というか不器用というか、やっていて叩きづらい往復スライダーが多かったように思えます。
あと高速スライダーと低速スライダーを使う必要がある場面なのだろうか?と思う点もありました。

もう1つの方の譜面もやらせていただきましたがどちらもNormalはとてもいい譜面だと思います。
より叩きやすく面白い譜面になることを期待しています。
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks!
fixed~

mp3は探してみます。
なかなか見つからなくて.. :(
Cyril Scarlet
オリジナルがフェードアウトじゃないから探してもないですよ w

フェードアウトさせました、どうぞ。

:MP3変更した場合 OFFSET チェックも忘れずに、その後に Re Snap All Note もね


Download: Dark Road.rar
Topic Starter
Frill
わざわざありです~ :)

変更しました。

mp3 changed
redownload plz
Gabi
Use english title

ZUN - The Road of the Apotropaic God ~ Dark Road
Topic Starter
Frill
thanks Gabi.

fixed.



New Title Name Redownloadplz :(
Derekku
[General]
*perhaps add "Yakujinsama no toori michi" to tags?
*Delete "road" from tags since it's already in the title.
*Kiai is inconsistent in where it ends on each difficulty. (For example, Easy's 2nd section ends in the middle of a slider, and then the other diffs end about a measure later.) (Lunatic's third section starts almost 1/4th before it should. If you have kiai AND a sample/volume change in the same inherited section, just do the sample/volume change 1/4th before and then snap the kiai to the white tick exactly. I get really nazi with kiai :P)
*Hitsounds are lacking especially in Easy/Normal :(
*Try offset 325 and resnap on all diffs please.

[Easy]
00:42:627 (2) - Perhaps add one more repeat?
01:18:973 (1) - end a white tick earlier

[Normal]
00:39:935 (1,2) - why are these 0.5x? :/
01:25:512 (1) - doesn't start at the same spot as Easy's.
01:37:819 (1) - move to the white tick and shorten?
01:40:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit tricky to read. How about moving 5 off of 4?
01:44:935 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not as hard to read with the new combo, but could you please space these a bit closer together?

[Lunatic]
00:05:704 (4) - Is this 2x really necessary? xp
00:10:319 (4) - Repeat is covered by (2)'s hitburst. [Unrankable]
00:42:723 (1,2) - A bit overmapped imo
01:02:916 (4) - unexpected (the only triplet blue tick note in the map iirc)
*A bit of overuse of kick sliders imo, but eh.
*Some parts of this diff didn't flow well, but they're not too bad, I guess.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this. :(
Randy96
:)
Topic Starter
Frill

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*perhaps add "Yakujinsama no toori michi" to tags?
*Delete "road" from tags since it's already in the title.
*Kiai is inconsistent in where it ends on each difficulty. (For example, Easy's 2nd section ends in the middle of a slider, and then the other diffs end about a measure later.) (Lunatic's third section starts almost 1/4th before it should. If you have kiai AND a sample/volume change in the same inherited section, just do the sample/volume change 1/4th before and then snap the kiai to the white tick exactly. I get really nazi with kiai :P)
*Hitsounds are lacking especially in Easy/Normal :(
*Try offset 325 and resnap on all diffs please.

[Easy]
00:42:627 (2) - Perhaps add one more repeat?
01:18:973 (1) - end a white tick earlier

[Normal]
00:39:935 (1,2) - why are these 0.5x? :/
01:25:512 (1) - doesn't start at the same spot as Easy's.
01:37:819 (1) - move to the white tick and shorten?
01:40:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit tricky to read. How about moving 5 off of 4?
01:44:935 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not as hard to read with the new combo, but could you please space these a bit closer together?

[Lunatic]
00:05:704 (4) - Is this 2x really necessary? xp
00:10:319 (4) - Repeat is covered by (2)'s hitburst. [Unrankable]
00:42:723 (1,2) - A bit overmapped imo
01:02:916 (4) - unexpected (the only triplet blue tick note in the map iirc)
*A bit of overuse of kick sliders imo, but eh.
*Some parts of this diff didn't flow well, but they're not too bad, I guess.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this. :(

Thanks

all fixed?

00:05:704 (4) - Is this 2x really necessary? xp
It has received it with Lunatic. 1.0x fixed
abalee
Just one more question: why the song title in tag?
Topic Starter
Frill
ah..
sorry><
added [Yakujinsama no toori michi]
abalee
should be fine now.
Andrea
Fixed an hidden slider on Lunatic and removed file .osb with some IRC Modding.

Ranked~
RemmyX25
Maybe I just have shitty headphones, but the audio quality sounds atrocious.
Larto
It's 128 kbit/s, which is.. still rankable and acceptable. Yeah, it's not too awesome anyways.
PokuMii
The audio is kinda bad, sorry if that sounds rude.

Plus, Lunatic is kinda iffy in my book. :/
Topic Starter
Frill

Larto wrote:

It's 128 kbit/s, which is.. still rankable and acceptable. Yeah, it's not too awesome anyways.
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