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Kaworu-sama-sanKaworu-sama wrote:
Taiko's easy needs to be adjusted, the notes are too close together. Please and thank you~
DahplA wrote:
First mod ever. I'll post in your M4M, thanks Please reply to this mod, as I would like feedback. Thank YOU,too ok~InsaneHard
- 00:03:861 (3) - 00:03:508 (2) - awkwardly. Maybe move the slider to x: 170 y: 96 so that the end of the slider is on top of 00:04:920 (3) - ok.good.
- 00:17:626 (1) - Move this slider so that it is in line with the previous stream 00:17:273 (6,7,8,9) - Suggested position - x: 72 y: 327. ok.
- 00:17:890 (11) - In my opinion, remove this. no change.
- 00:20:096 (4) - Move the slider start so it's not so close to 00:19:743 (3) - Suggestion position - x: 172 y: 96 ok.
- 00:25:390 (4,5,6) - Maybe space this out a little more? ok.
- 00:29:273 (3,4,5) - Space these out more. ok.
- 00:39:332 (6,7,8) - In my opinion, this part is too much flow. I would consider changing this. ok.This part I was greatly changed.
- 00:40:302 (4) - In my opinion, remove this. ok.
- 00:40:743 (5) - Doesn't really go with the rhythm. I'd suggest this ok.
- 00:47:802 (2,3) - Space these out more. ok.
- 00:51:155 (2,3,4,5,6) - Stream doesn't need to be here. ok.1/2 reverse change.
- 00:51:861 (7) - Move this slider to x:120 y:324 ok.
- 00:53:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Make the stream go in a direction instead of it staying still. This will make it easier to read. ok.However, 00:53:626 (1,2,3,4) - is staying, 00:53:979 (5,6,7,8) - was divided.
- 00:54:596 (2) - In my opinion, remove this. no change.
- 01:28:214 (3) - Make this slider a little slower. ok.slider velocity multiplier 1.5x → 1.0x (all diff changed)
Normal
- 00:01:390 (3,4,5,6) - This part doesn't make sense to me. A stack then flow. Change this. Either have 2 stacks or space them out. ok.two 1/2 slider change.
- 00:06:684 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, change this stack. ok.00:06:684 (1,2) - 1/2 slider change.00:07:037 (3) - Is placed separately it.
- 00:26:449 (2) - This slider is too close to the previous one 00:26:096 (1) - ok.moved it.
- 00:30:684 (2) - ^ ok.moved it.
- 00:47:802 (4,5) - Maybe space this out a little more? ok.moved it.
- 00:56:273 (1,2,3) - This is spaced a little too much for a hard. Just make this a stacked triple. ok.
- 01:05:449 (1) - Move this to x:164 y:228 so it's on the same spot as 01:04:743 (4) - ok.
- 01:07:214 (2,3,4) - This is spaced a little too much for a hard. Just make this a stacked triple. - ok.stack and moved it.
- 01:10:567 (4,5,6,7) - This may be hard to read for this difficulty. Maybe change this? ok.01:10:567 (4,5,6) - moved it.
- 01:13:743 (9) - Maybe space this out a little more? ok.moved it.
- 01:27:508 (1) - ^ ok.
Easy
- 00:27:861 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern may be too hard for newer players to read. ok.rhythm changed.
- 00:36:684 (3,4,5) - Maybe change this to a 1/2 slider with reverse? ok.
- 00:51:508 (1) - Based on the OD (I'm no expert) I think this slider is a bit too fast for newer players. It does not change the timing.However, change of OD i will consider.(OD5 → 4.5?)
General
- 00:21:861 (3) - This slider may be too hard for newer players to read. (If you can't change it, don't) As long as it is not exceptionally,All no change.
- 00:30:332 (3) - ^
- 01:12:508 (3) - ^
- 01:15:508 (6) - ^
- 01:21:155 (4) - ^
- 01:26:802 (4) - ^
- I'd recommend changing the background to something that is more detailed and less pixelated. Convincing BG can not be found.its will going to change it if found.It was a good modding.Thank you
-ok.thank you for modding!!DahplA wrote:
First mod ever. I'll post in your M4M, thanks Please reply to this mod, as I would like feedback.-hi oppai!!
Nicechoice's Insane[
- 00:00:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the stream go in a direction instead of it staying still. This will make it easier to read. Also, having a stream at the start may be awkward for some players. If you want, you can change it to a 1/4 slider.-ok.changed
- 00:02:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^-changed
- 00:11:626 (1) - In my opinion, 5% volume is too quiet.-ok.geined 30% and change drum hitsound
- 00:12:684 (3,4) - Doesn't fit the rhythm.-no changeIt is not in accordance with the sound of the guitar, but rhythm is there.
- 00:15:508 (3,4) - ^
- 00:52:920 (4) - Maybe space this out a little more?-??I do not know the meaning a little
- 01:17:626 (3,4) - Doesn't fit the rhythm.
- 01:20:449 (3,4) - ^
- 01:23:273 (3,4) - ^
- 01:26:096 (3,4) - ^
General[/notice]
- I'd recommend changing the background to something that is more detailed and less pixelated.
Raisa12 wrote:
Random mod Wow!! thank you VERY much!!
[Easy]
00:03:155 - Try this rhythm? I think that sound good http://puu.sh/gkZwA/e29f0102a2.jpg ok.good rhythm.
00:33:861 (1,2) - I recommend not stacking easy,this would be confusing for those just starting to play the game, hence the name of the difficulty is '' easy '' you stack a lot in easy,you don't have that do it ok.I'm studying the mapping.sorry.
00:36:684 (6,7) - Same ^ ok.
00:46:920 (4,5) - Same ^ ok.
00:50:273 (3,4) - ^ ok.
00:53:626 (1,2,3) - ^ ok.
01:02:449 (1,2) - ^ ok.
I was reviewing overall.^^
[Normal]
00:45:508 - new combo ok.
01:22:567 - ^ ok.
00:30:332 (1) - try this? http://puu.sh/gl1TR/35e006034f.jpg ok.
the rest it's okThis is the same as above.I was reviewing overall.^^
[Hard]
00:11:184 - Add note? no~
00:21:155 (2) - I think that instead of this slider should put 2 notes, is suggested no change.
00:54:684 (2) - Why not try this? http://puu.sh/gl8ZC/46cd01dfcd.jpg ok.
00:57:508 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/gl92s/e23435e8c7.jpg ok.
01:28:214 (3) - ctrl + g ? ok.
Insane and Nicechoice's Insane are ok for me \(^o^)/
sorry for the short mod :'v and Good luck witth your map !! Is no problem.Thank you for the modding.
Come[Back]Home wrote:
General
I think the Offset is not right, you should check that ok.recheck.
Easy
00:02:096 (1) Delete Nc ok.↓All respect to the following NC I did a review.
00:06:332 (1) ^
00:07:743 (1,1) Im unsure about this overlap oh,,sure.moved.
00:13:390 (1) Delete Nc
00:21:861 (1) I really dislike multiple repeat sliders, and for beginners they can be confusing hm,,ok.I was changed to the 1/1 slider × 2 note.
00:24:684 (1) Delete Nc
00:30:332 (1) Same as 00:21:861 (1) ok.
00:33:155 (1) Delete Nc
00:35:273 (1) ^
00:38:802 (1) ^
00:41:626 (1) ^
00:48:155 (2) This one should end here 00:48:861 to lead newbies into the red ticks ok.00:48:155 (2) - change, and 00:48:861 (1) - remove, and 00:49:214 (2) - added circle.
00:50:273 (1) Delete Nc
00:51:508 (1,1) Recovery time is too short hmm,,,no change.
01:00:684 (2,3) Dont do this in easy no change.
01:11:979 (2,3) ^ and (3) is multiple repeat which plays weird ok.major change.
01:14:096 (1,2,1) ^ ok.01:14:979 (2) - remove.
01:21:155 (1) Multiple repeat ok.same changes as the first.
01:26:802 (1) ^ ok.same changes as the first.
Normal
00:16:567 (2,3,1) This is way too hard to play for a Normal. Do something else there ok.00:16:920 (3) - remove.Instead,00:16:920 (3,4) - added circle.
00:49:567 (1,1,2) Delete Nc ok.
Hard
00:11:979 (1,2) I will point something like this out just once, cause there are so many. The different DS between those two is totally unnecessary, fix that hm,,ok.I was changed all.
00:40:743 (3,4) Why the unnecessary different ds? I don't think that unnecessary.However,I will change because there is a possibility that the same opinion comes out.
Insane
00:11:626 (6) NC no change.
00:33:861 (4,5) NC because of SV change hmm,,,,ok.
good luck ^_^ Thank you.
[AppLoad] wrote:
M4M from you queue~Easy
00:14:449 - Put something here. I can't put in because there is a consistency of flow.
00:16:214 (1) - Remove NC. I have changed significantly in the last MOD.I think that it becomes probably similar form.
00:17:626 (1,2) - Maybe make something like this? Is cramped.no change.However, it has been fixed so cramped even now.
00:24:332 - Put something here. ok.added circle.
00:24:684 (1) - Remove NC.
00:29:273 (2,1,1) - How about this? oh,,Here I was considerably modified.I think that it becomes probably similar form.
00:35:273 (1,1) - Remove NC.
00:34:567 (1,1,1,2) - Hmm... I don't like, that this sliders so straight. Maybe try something like this? ok.changed.
00:38:802 (3) - Remove NC.
00:44:449 (1) - ^
00:59:979 (1,2,3) - Maybe something like this? ok.However, it has to "fold mountain" rather than a "valley fold".
01:10:214 (3,1,2,3) - Again so straight sliders. Try to vary them. ok.changed.
01:18:332 (1) - Maybe make this sliders so? oh,,Here I was considerably modified,too.sorry..I changed to "WAVEFORM".Normal
00:13:743 (2,3) - Maybe make so? ok.changed.
00:39:861 (5,6) - How about this? ok.changed.
00:45:508 (4) - NC? I think I do not need.
00:57:155 (1) - Make this slider so. ok.changed.
01:18:684 (2,3) - How about this? ok.changed.
01:22:920 (2,3) 01:24:332 (2,3) 01:25:743 (2,3) - Varify it somehow ok.changed.It may be a little difficult lol.Good Luck) Thank youHard
00:18:332 (3) - Make this slider a bit simpler. ok.changed.
00:20:626 (8) - Maybe NC? This place is where are troubled...it change if get other opinions.
00:29:096 (10) - ^ This is the same as above.
00:44:979 (3) - Maybe make so? ok.changed.
01:25:743 (4) - Correct this slider. ok.little changed.