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Silver Forest - Everlasting

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Topic Starter
Dotsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月29日 at 8:29:58

Artist: Silver Forest
Title: Everlasting
Source: Touhou
Tags: saigyouji lunatic beat 0989596108
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5225kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. 596108's Taiko (5 stars, 504 notes)
  2. Easy (0.74 stars, 54 notes)
  3. Hard (4.54 stars, 150 notes)
  4. Lunatic (5 stars, 309 notes)
  5. Normal (3.14 stars, 94 notes)
Download: Silver Forest - Everlasting
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 6th beatmap.
From Silver Forest's album Lunatic beat.
Thank:emaal,Chacha17,xxheroxx,H-boy,pieguy1372,
orioncomet,Real1,xierbaliti,DJPop,Shulin,Leorda,
Astom,no-7,Xero_HT,Kurai_,NatsumeRin,thepianist,
Derekku Chan,Sallad4ever,Lybydose and Gens
for modding!

2010-04-03 Added [Beginner].
2010-04-05 Added skin.
2010-04-10 Added Davidz123's sliderball.
2010-04-17 Added [596108's Taiko].
2010-04-26 Added osu! logo in story board and added thepianist's spinner items and Breeze's Hitcircle

Credits:
Skin:
Sliderball-------->Davidz123
Spinner----------->thepianist
Hitcircle--------->Breeze
Difficulty:
[596108's Taiko]-------->0989596108
White W0lf_old
This is good!
Colin Hou
山寨白狼+涛哥 0_o``
maal
~[Easy]~

00:36:760(9): Please move this so it's visible.
Nice!

~[Normal]~

00:59:822(x): try and add something in this little room.
00:31:510(11): Extend to: 00:32:635, and delete that beat there.



~[Hard]~
I would rename it to "Insane" Since it has 5 stars.

00:41:822(x): Here the bpm goes faster, maybe you could use it somehow?
00:47:260(x): Maybe you could make this jump easier?
00:59:822(x): try and add something in this little room.



I like this beatmap very much!
Topic Starter
Dotsu

emaal wrote:

~[Easy]~

00:36:760(9): Please move this so it's visible.Fixed
Nice!

~[Normal]~

00:59:822(x): try and add something in this little room.Add note
00:31:510(11): Extend to: 00:32:635, and delete that beat there.



~[Hard]~
I would rename it to "Insane" Since it has 5 stars.Renamed it to[Lunatic]

00:41:822(x): Here the bpm goes faster, maybe you could use it somehow?
00:47:260(x): Maybe you could make this jump easier?Fixed
00:59:822(x): try and add something in this little room.Add note



I like this beatmap very much! Thank you!
Chacha17
General
Tags: add the name of this touhou character in the tags. Since some people tend to search touhou songs by typing the name of the character. (Not a touhou fan, that's why i don't know what that girl's name is.)
Custom Combo Colours might be cool for this map
00:06:760 - why is there an uninherited timing section here?
Or uh, For all diffs, make the red timing sections a green one. Unless it has to do with an offset change.
And one thing, you need to set a preview point on all diffs.

Easy
00:30:385 (3,4,5) - these beats aren't spaced out properly move 00:30:760 (4,5,6) one grid to the left and resnap the other beats
00:33:385 (3,4) - spacing?
00:40:510 (6) - move one grid down
00:51:385 (2,3) - move one grid to the right
00:58:510 (6) - remove this beat and move this spinner (00:58:556 (1) at 00:58:510 and make sure it ends at 00:59:365
00:59:365 - Make this an inherited timing section.

Normal
00:06:385 (3) - move one grid to the right and resnap the other beats. Make sure to fix the spacing between 00:06:760 (4) and 00:07:135 (5).
00:28:510 (2,3,4) - spacing D:
01:17:447 (1) - remove new combo

Lunatic
didn't bother to mod this one because i've played it and seemed fine for me

here you go :>
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Chacha17 wrote:

General
Tags: add the name of this touhou character in the tags. Since some people tend to search touhou songs by typing the name of the character. (Not a touhou fan, that's why i don't know what that girl's name is.)
Custom Combo Colours might be cool for this map
00:06:760 - why is there an uninherited timing section here?
Or uh, For all diffs, make the red timing sections a green one. Unless it has to do with an offset change.
And one thing, you need to set a preview point on all diffs.

Easy
00:30:385 (3,4,5) - these beats aren't spaced out properly move 00:30:760 (4,5,6) one grid to the left and resnap the other beats
00:33:385 (3,4) - spacing?
00:40:510 (6) - move one grid down
00:51:385 (2,3) - move one grid to the right
00:58:510 (6) - remove this beat and move this spinner (00:58:556 (1) at 00:58:510 and make sure it ends at 00:59:365
00:59:365 - Make this an inherited timing section.

Normal
00:06:385 (3) - move one grid to the right and resnap the other beats. Make sure to fix the spacing between 00:06:760 (4) and 00:07:135 (5).
00:28:510 (2,3,4) - spacing D:
01:17:447 (1) - remove new combo

Lunatic
didn't bother to mod this one because i've played it and seemed fine for me

here you go :>
All fixed! :) Thank you!!!
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • "bg2.jpeg" should be 1024x768 pixels
    • Add kiai
[Easy] (this is a normal imo)


  • • 00:05:635 (1,2) - Spacing
[Normal]

[Lunatic]


TTTTTTTTTTTT
easy
00:07:135(2) - 这个spacing变成了1.1X,但好像没大碍...
00:23:260(3) - 这个spacing变成1.0X也没啥意义,同样也没什么大碍...
00:23:635(1) - ^
00:55:773(2) - 向左一个格子
实在没找到什么可说的...就把前3个看出来了- -

Normal
没什么可说的...

Lunatic
依旧...

很好的图~
KUDOSU star~+star~
Topic Starter
Dotsu

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • "bg2.jpeg" should be 1024x768 pixels
    • Add kiai
[Easy] (this is a normal imo)

  • • [attachment=2:6b24a]easy-timing.JPG[/attachment:6b24a]
    • 00:05:635 (1,2) - Spacing
[Normal]

  • • [attachment=1:6b24a]normal-timing.JPG[/attachment:6b24a]
[Lunatic]

  • • [attachment=0:6b24a]Lunatic-timing.JPG[/attachment:6b24a]
All fixed! Thank you!
Topic Starter
Dotsu

H-boy wrote:

easy
00:07:135(2) - 这个spacing变成了1.1X,但好像没大碍...
00:23:260(3) - 这个spacing变成1.0X也没啥意义,同样也没什么大碍...
00:23:635(1) - ^
00:55:773(2) - 向左一个格子
实在没找到什么可说的...就把前3个看出来了- -

Normal
没什么可说的...

Lunatic
依旧...

很好的图~
KUDOSU star~+star~
都改了.谢谢你的mod和KUDOSU star!
pieguyn
General:

-Perhaps add some custom combo colors? :)
-Remove the countdown?

Easy: No problems

Normal:

00:05:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move (2) and (3) up one level 3 grid square and (4), (5), (6), (7), and (8) left one. (Note: If you do this move the notes after it to fix the spacing. :))

Lunatic:

Heh, I especially like this difficulty. It's nice and fast-paced and especially fun to play. :3

01:03:385 (6) - Seems a bit close to (5). Try moving it up one level 3 grid square?

Nice work! *star*
Topic Starter
Dotsu

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-Perhaps add some custom combo colors? :)
-Remove the countdown?

Easy: No problems

Normal:

00:05:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move (2) and (3) up one level 3 grid square and (4), (5), (6), (7), and (8) left one. (Note: If you do this move the notes after it to fix the spacing. :))

Lunatic:

Heh, I especially like this difficulty. It's nice and fast-paced and especially fun to play. :3

01:03:385 (6) - Seems a bit close to (5). Try moving it up one level 3 grid square?

Nice work! *star*
All fixed!Thank you!
orioncomet
[Easy]
00:51:385 (2) - Spacing, plz... tooo far

other diffs are seem fine to me

Star ~ ^^
Topic Starter
Dotsu

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
00:51:385 (2) - Spacing, plz... tooo far

other diffs are seem fine to me

Star ~ ^^
Fixed.Thanks you!
Real1
[Easy]
  1. Lower the slidertick rate! High slider tick rate means the noobs will die if they miss one of the longer sliders.
  2. Too hard overall for an Easy. Maybe rename to Easy+ or something, or remap some harder parts. :P
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:385 (3) - Too difficult to see this slider, much less see that it's a repeating slider.
  2. 01:14:822 - Place a note here?
[Lunatic]
Looks fine


Have a star!
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Real1 wrote:

[Easy]
  1. Lower the slidertick rate! High slider tick rate means the noobs will die if they miss one of the longer sliders.
  2. Too hard overall for an Easy. Maybe rename to Easy+ or something, or remap some harder parts. :P
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:385 (3) - Too difficult to see this slider, much less see that it's a repeating slider.
  2. 01:14:822 - Place a note here?
[Lunatic]
Looks fine


Have a star!
All fixed! :) Thank you!!
xierbaliti
很好的图lol

-Lunatic-
00:24:291 这里要不要+上1个note 像这样 听着似乎更舒服一些

-Normal-
00:21:572 (5) - 往右1格
00:53:822 (7) - ^

-Easy+-
没发现错误._.

图很不错 美中不足就是没有hard 再+上个hard就更好了._.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

xierbaliti wrote:

很好的图lol

-Lunatic-
00:24:291 这里要不要+上1个note 像这样 听着似乎更舒服一些
我已经加上了,谢谢 :)

-Normal-
00:21:572 (5) - 往右1格 已修改
00:53:822 (7) - ^ ^

-Easy+-
没发现错误._.

图很不错 美中不足就是没有hard 再+上个hard就更好了._.我也想加一个,可惜没有时间
Asutarotto
;)
DJPop
The whole song is 3/4 (Simple Triple).

Otherwise is fine.


+Star
Topic Starter
Dotsu

DJPop wrote:

The whole song is 3/4 (Simple Triple).

Otherwise is fine.


+Star
Fixed!Thank you very much!!
Shulin
General:

-- BG's are best at 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 so there are no black borders.
-- "bg2" is too big please resize so it's under 1024 x 768.

Easy +

-- I think this should be called "Normal".

00:17:260 (1) - Custom slider tick sounds bad and is offputting imo, you could end the slider there if you want clap I suppose.
00:18:760 (4) - ^
00:49:510 (8) - Confusing slider. Like 00:40:510 (6) - is better.

Normal:

-- I think this should be called "Normal +" you could even call it "Hard".

00:53:260 (6,7) - Overlap looks bad imo.

Lunatic:

00:58:556 (1) - Take this spinner off 1/8! 1/4 or even 1/2 would suffice.

Good overall
~ Star.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- BG's are best at 800 x 600 or 1024 x 768 so there are no black borders.
-- "bg2" is too big please resize so it's under 1024 x 768.

Easy +

-- I think this should be called "Normal".

00:17:260 (1) - Custom slider tick sounds bad and is offputting imo, you could end the slider there if you want clap I suppose.
00:18:760 (4) - ^
00:49:510 (8) - Confusing slider. Like 00:40:510 (6) - is better.

Normal:

-- I think this should be called "Normal +" you could even call it "Hard".

00:53:260 (6,7) - Overlap looks bad imo.

Lunatic:

00:58:556 (1) - Take this spinner off 1/8! 1/4 or even 1/2 would suffice.

Good overall
~ Star.
All fixed!Thank you!!
Cyril Scarlet
STAR+

Silver Forest ♥
kiddly
looks fine.
star~
Topic Starter
Dotsu

S i R i R u wrote:

STAR+

Silver Forest ♥

kiddly wrote:

looks fine.
star~
Thanks!
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
reversearrow.png it's looks bigger, you have to scale them and don't let the reversearrow.png is out of circle

[Timing]
Set this Offset and Time Signature
00:05:63 4/4 160,00bpm
00:23:63 3/4 160,00bpm

I can't find something wrong :cry:
Nice song
STAR
Astom
Hi =)

In red maybe important, In blue suggetions

[General]
-comburst.png, resize this, Max. 500 pixels of width

Uhmm that's all, nice song =)

StaR
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[Skin]
reversearrow.png it's looks bigger, you have to scale them and don't let the reversearrow.png is out of circle Fixed!

[Timing]
Set this Offset and Time Signature
Hmm...

DJPop wrote:

The whole song is 3/4 (Simple Triple).
00:05:63 4/4 160,00bpm
00:23:63 3/4 160,00bpm

I can't find something wrong :cry:
Nice song
STAR Thank you!

Astom wrote:

Hi =)

In red maybe important, In blue suggetions

[General]
-comburst.png, resize this, Max. 500 pixels of widthFixed!

Uhmm that's all, nice song =)

StaR
Thank you!
Kecco
Nothing need to be modded for me.
All is ok.
Star~
DeletedUser_151115
Finished Date: 10th April 2010 // Skin request at Davidz123's Skin Modding Queue

Finished skin request. I saw you already had a few skin parts but that's okay.



[attachment=0:5c198]silverforesteverlastingskin.zip[/attachment:5c198]

If you would like to request more, please request again at the queue saying the other parts you want skinned.

Star~!

Would you mind crediting me in this way?
[date] - Added Davidz123's sliderb and spinner items.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Davidz123 wrote:

Finished Date: 10th April 2010 // Skin request at Davidz123's Skin Modding Queue

Finished skin request. I saw you already had a few skin parts but that's okay.



[attachment=0:b3758]silverforesteverlastingskin.zip[/attachment:b3758]Thanks a lot!

If you would like to request more, please request again at the queue saying the other parts you want skinned.

Star~!

Would you mind crediting me in this way?
[date] - Added Davidz123's sliderb and spinner items.Of course I'll add it.
Asutarotto
[General]
也许是个人感觉吧……note的皮肤太花哨了?也许更单纯些的更适合幽幽子~ ;)

[Lunatic]
[00:25:855]1,2,3:间距还是相等比较好吧……虽然是小地方
[01:00:010]建议加一个Note
Topic Starter
Dotsu

no-7 wrote:

[General]
也许是个人感觉吧……note的皮肤太花哨了?也许更单纯些的更适合幽幽子~ ;) 这个,我对东方不太了解...或许大多数人不会在意吧

[Lunatic]
[00:25:855]1,2,3:间距还是相等比较好吧……虽然是小地方已改正
[01:00:010]建议加一个Note已添加
-Xero-
Nihao,

[Overall]
No Kiai Time?

[Beginner]
00:52:885 (2,3,1,2,3) - Like this?:


[Lunatic]
00:29:635 (4,5) - 1 tick to the right

Star and good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Xero_HT wrote:

Nihao,

[Overall]
No Kiai Time?

[Beginner]
00:52:885 (2,3,1,2,3) - Like this?:


[Lunatic]
00:29:635 (4,5) - 1 tick to the right

Star and good luck with the map!
All fixed!Thank you
Kurai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Beginner]
Fine.

[Easy+]
Fine.

[Normal]
Fine :3

[Lunatic]
01:12:010 (7) - New combo ? (Suggestion)Add new combo


Very Nice map, I think you must contact a MAT for pubbled that :D Thanks!I'll do it.
Star~
Numbers 596108
star~
24522897
star
alieokiro
star
yuyuko saigyouji
star
Kami_Kaze_old
Randy96
:)
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
不要kiai吗?
offset:感觉是+10(用taiko和Normal测试)

[Beginner]
……果然是beginner,个人想法是要不要用些whistle音效呢?
01:17:260 (2) - 建议换成一个1/2拍slider可以压到两个音,第二个音效是soft-whistle……(我个人比较偏爱这个音效。)

[Easy+]
00:05:635 (1,2) - spacing.
00:34:885 (7) - new combo?
00:42:760 (2) - 左下一格给我感觉更好
00:48:385 (7) - new combo?
01:00:760 (1) - 这个上的timing section往前放,为了修音效音量的绿线别砸在音上。
01:15:760 (2) - 不太好看。

[Normal]
4.3x的Normal,还是叫Normal+会好些。
00:08:260 (8) - ……为什么不在5正上方呢。。
00:32:635 (1) - 既然前面随了次鼓,从这里开始升下音量或是换音效怎么样呢?
00:56:260 (2) - 不对称感强了点……= =
01:16:885 (6) - [nazi] 右一格

[596108's taiko]
HP Drain Rate:5或者6,你现在这样就是不想让新人玩嘛……OA可以考虑减,但其实我比较喜欢OA6
整体给我的堆砌节奏感挺大的(overmapped. note过多)……我希望谱子能更张弛有度一点,该紧时紧该松时松,从头到尾都在三连五连更像是练习专用而不是实际打的谱子。嘛……这话可能严了点,数字君要继续努力啊~

[Lunatic]
我觉得作为最高难,这个间距太小了。
00:08:260 (1) - 或许可以把它弄的曲折点,这样2会在1首尾的中间轴上。
01:06:760 (1) - ……之前几个难度没写写在这里好了。。。SB上那个箭头到底何必啊。。。应该是看的清的。。。我还以为要加速了。。。
这个难度整体没什么太多可说的,但给我感觉是整体间距过小而个别间距又太大……总之挺奇怪。

star。对mod有任何疑惑可以PM我,如果Lunatic整体调整了可以叫我remod。
Topic Starter
Dotsu

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
不要kiai吗? 这个……我不太想加Kiai Time :P
offset:感觉是+10(用taiko和Normal测试) 已改正

[Beginner]
……果然是beginner,个人想法是要不要用些whistle音效呢? 我试着添加了些
01:17:260 (2) - 建议换成一个1/2拍slider可以压到两个音,第二个音效是soft-whistle……(我个人比较偏爱这个音效。) 好主意

[Easy+]
00:05:635 (1,2) - spacing. 已改正
00:34:885 (7) - new combo? 已改正
00:42:760 (2) - 左下一格给我感觉更好 已改正
00:48:385 (7) - new combo? 已改正
01:00:760 (1) - 这个上的timing section往前放,为了修音效音量的绿线别砸在音上。 已改正
01:15:760 (2) - 不太好看。 已改正

[Normal]
4.3x的Normal,还是叫Normal+会好些。 已改正
00:08:260 (8) - ……为什么不在5正上方呢。。 已改正
00:32:635 (1) - 既然前面随了次鼓,从这里开始升下音量或是换音效怎么样呢?
00:56:260 (2) - 不对称感强了点……= = 已改正
01:16:885 (6) - [nazi] 右一格 已改正

[596108's taiko]
HP Drain Rate:5或者6,你现在这样就是不想让新人玩嘛……OA可以考虑减,但其实我比较喜欢OA6
整体给我的堆砌节奏感挺大的(overmapped. note过多)……我希望谱子能更张弛有度一点,该紧时紧该松时松,从头到尾都在三连五连更像是练习专用而不是实际打的谱子。嘛……这话可能严了点,数字君要继续努力啊~

[Lunatic]
我觉得作为最高难,这个间距太小了。 提高了0.2X的间距
00:08:260 (1) - 或许可以把它弄的曲折点,这样2会在1首尾的中间轴上。已改正
01:06:760 (1) - ……之前几个难度没写写在这里好了。。。SB上那个箭头到底何必啊 。。。应该是看的清的。。。我还以为要加速了。。。 我已经改到看不清了
这个难度整体没什么太多可说的,但给我感觉是整体间距过小而个别间距又太大……总之挺奇怪。

star。对mod有任何疑惑可以PM我,如果Lunatic整体调整了可以叫我remod。
NatsumeRin
00:37:520 (2) - 我猜你是想要尾音whistle的
其他没了,我觉得不错= =,这个贴不要给kud。
thepianist
I just dropped by for a random mod :3 Hope you don't mind.

Beginner
I think it's fine.

Easy+
00:36:770 (3) - Personally, I think it looks nicer when it's directly underneath the slider, but this being an "easy"...with the new guidelines, I dunno if it is allowed.
01:15:770 (2) - Ends too early. Extend by 1/4

Taiko
Hmmph. Some of the ddkdd etc combo's are a little evil, but my taiko skills aren't too great. (But perhaps turn the volume a little quieter...)

Lunatic
IMHO I don't agree with most of the jumps between combos (the music doesn't really seem to call for it...) But at least it's somewhat consistent? Yeah. You can probably afford to make the circle size one tick larger, but it's up to you.

Skin

In my humble opinion, I think the sliderball is way too colorful (I see the rainbow effect-ish, but when it turns at a high rate, it just becomes more of a blurry mess...) I also think the hitcircle overlay rainbow just...doesn't fit. Then again it's just me.

Spinner-clear, spinner-spin, and spinner-osu.png are quite...err. 很不怎麼樣. 快要跟我的中文程度一樣...爛.... Perhaps you can take a look at the attached and see if these are better? Or ask S i R i R u for some of his/her "Loos/Koi Yomi Zakura" skin elements?

Hitcircle.png seems to have disappeared my download (looking at the screenshots.)

But overall, it is well done.^^ Star.





thepianist
Oh yes, and this spinner circle/background/meter probably goes better with the spinner sprites if you are interested. Do not kudos this post.

EDIT: Circle replaced, background/meter added if you like.





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