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kiddly
looks fine.
star~
Topic Starter
Dotsu

S i R i R u wrote:

STAR+

Silver Forest ♥

kiddly wrote:

looks fine.
star~
Thanks!
Leorda
NI HAO

[Skin]
reversearrow.png it's looks bigger, you have to scale them and don't let the reversearrow.png is out of circle

[Timing]
Set this Offset and Time Signature
00:05:63 4/4 160,00bpm
00:23:63 3/4 160,00bpm

I can't find something wrong :cry:
Nice song
STAR
Astom
Hi =)

In red maybe important, In blue suggetions

[General]
-comburst.png, resize this, Max. 500 pixels of width

Uhmm that's all, nice song =)

StaR
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

[Skin]
reversearrow.png it's looks bigger, you have to scale them and don't let the reversearrow.png is out of circle Fixed!

[Timing]
Set this Offset and Time Signature
Hmm...

DJPop wrote:

The whole song is 3/4 (Simple Triple).
00:05:63 4/4 160,00bpm
00:23:63 3/4 160,00bpm

I can't find something wrong :cry:
Nice song
STAR Thank you!

Astom wrote:

Hi =)

In red maybe important, In blue suggetions

[General]
-comburst.png, resize this, Max. 500 pixels of widthFixed!

Uhmm that's all, nice song =)

StaR
Thank you!
Kecco
Nothing need to be modded for me.
All is ok.
Star~
DeletedUser_151115
Finished Date: 10th April 2010 // Skin request at Davidz123's Skin Modding Queue

Finished skin request. I saw you already had a few skin parts but that's okay.



[attachment=0:5c198]silverforesteverlastingskin.zip[/attachment:5c198]

If you would like to request more, please request again at the queue saying the other parts you want skinned.

Star~!

Would you mind crediting me in this way?
[date] - Added Davidz123's sliderb and spinner items.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Davidz123 wrote:

Finished Date: 10th April 2010 // Skin request at Davidz123's Skin Modding Queue

Finished skin request. I saw you already had a few skin parts but that's okay.



[attachment=0:b3758]silverforesteverlastingskin.zip[/attachment:b3758]Thanks a lot!

If you would like to request more, please request again at the queue saying the other parts you want skinned.

Star~!

Would you mind crediting me in this way?
[date] - Added Davidz123's sliderb and spinner items.Of course I'll add it.
Asutarotto
[General]
也许是个人感觉吧……note的皮肤太花哨了?也许更单纯些的更适合幽幽子~ ;)

[Lunatic]
[00:25:855]1,2,3:间距还是相等比较好吧……虽然是小地方
[01:00:010]建议加一个Note
Topic Starter
Dotsu

no-7 wrote:

[General]
也许是个人感觉吧……note的皮肤太花哨了?也许更单纯些的更适合幽幽子~ ;) 这个,我对东方不太了解...或许大多数人不会在意吧

[Lunatic]
[00:25:855]1,2,3:间距还是相等比较好吧……虽然是小地方已改正
[01:00:010]建议加一个Note已添加
-Xero-
Nihao,

[Overall]
No Kiai Time?

[Beginner]
00:52:885 (2,3,1,2,3) - Like this?:


[Lunatic]
00:29:635 (4,5) - 1 tick to the right

Star and good luck with the map!
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Xero_HT wrote:

Nihao,

[Overall]
No Kiai Time?

[Beginner]
00:52:885 (2,3,1,2,3) - Like this?:


[Lunatic]
00:29:635 (4,5) - 1 tick to the right

Star and good luck with the map!
All fixed!Thank you
Kurai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Beginner]
Fine.

[Easy+]
Fine.

[Normal]
Fine :3

[Lunatic]
01:12:010 (7) - New combo ? (Suggestion)Add new combo


Very Nice map, I think you must contact a MAT for pubbled that :D Thanks!I'll do it.
Star~
Numbers 596108
star~
24522897
star
alieokiro
star
yuyuko saigyouji
star
Kami_Kaze_old
Randy96
:)
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
不要kiai吗?
offset:感觉是+10(用taiko和Normal测试)

[Beginner]
……果然是beginner,个人想法是要不要用些whistle音效呢?
01:17:260 (2) - 建议换成一个1/2拍slider可以压到两个音,第二个音效是soft-whistle……(我个人比较偏爱这个音效。)

[Easy+]
00:05:635 (1,2) - spacing.
00:34:885 (7) - new combo?
00:42:760 (2) - 左下一格给我感觉更好
00:48:385 (7) - new combo?
01:00:760 (1) - 这个上的timing section往前放,为了修音效音量的绿线别砸在音上。
01:15:760 (2) - 不太好看。

[Normal]
4.3x的Normal,还是叫Normal+会好些。
00:08:260 (8) - ……为什么不在5正上方呢。。
00:32:635 (1) - 既然前面随了次鼓,从这里开始升下音量或是换音效怎么样呢?
00:56:260 (2) - 不对称感强了点……= =
01:16:885 (6) - [nazi] 右一格

[596108's taiko]
HP Drain Rate:5或者6,你现在这样就是不想让新人玩嘛……OA可以考虑减,但其实我比较喜欢OA6
整体给我的堆砌节奏感挺大的(overmapped. note过多)……我希望谱子能更张弛有度一点,该紧时紧该松时松,从头到尾都在三连五连更像是练习专用而不是实际打的谱子。嘛……这话可能严了点,数字君要继续努力啊~

[Lunatic]
我觉得作为最高难,这个间距太小了。
00:08:260 (1) - 或许可以把它弄的曲折点,这样2会在1首尾的中间轴上。
01:06:760 (1) - ……之前几个难度没写写在这里好了。。。SB上那个箭头到底何必啊。。。应该是看的清的。。。我还以为要加速了。。。
这个难度整体没什么太多可说的,但给我感觉是整体间距过小而个别间距又太大……总之挺奇怪。

star。对mod有任何疑惑可以PM我,如果Lunatic整体调整了可以叫我remod。
Topic Starter
Dotsu

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
不要kiai吗? 这个……我不太想加Kiai Time :P
offset:感觉是+10(用taiko和Normal测试) 已改正

[Beginner]
……果然是beginner,个人想法是要不要用些whistle音效呢? 我试着添加了些
01:17:260 (2) - 建议换成一个1/2拍slider可以压到两个音,第二个音效是soft-whistle……(我个人比较偏爱这个音效。) 好主意

[Easy+]
00:05:635 (1,2) - spacing. 已改正
00:34:885 (7) - new combo? 已改正
00:42:760 (2) - 左下一格给我感觉更好 已改正
00:48:385 (7) - new combo? 已改正
01:00:760 (1) - 这个上的timing section往前放,为了修音效音量的绿线别砸在音上。 已改正
01:15:760 (2) - 不太好看。 已改正

[Normal]
4.3x的Normal,还是叫Normal+会好些。 已改正
00:08:260 (8) - ……为什么不在5正上方呢。。 已改正
00:32:635 (1) - 既然前面随了次鼓,从这里开始升下音量或是换音效怎么样呢?
00:56:260 (2) - 不对称感强了点……= = 已改正
01:16:885 (6) - [nazi] 右一格 已改正

[596108's taiko]
HP Drain Rate:5或者6,你现在这样就是不想让新人玩嘛……OA可以考虑减,但其实我比较喜欢OA6
整体给我的堆砌节奏感挺大的(overmapped. note过多)……我希望谱子能更张弛有度一点,该紧时紧该松时松,从头到尾都在三连五连更像是练习专用而不是实际打的谱子。嘛……这话可能严了点,数字君要继续努力啊~

[Lunatic]
我觉得作为最高难,这个间距太小了。 提高了0.2X的间距
00:08:260 (1) - 或许可以把它弄的曲折点,这样2会在1首尾的中间轴上。已改正
01:06:760 (1) - ……之前几个难度没写写在这里好了。。。SB上那个箭头到底何必啊 。。。应该是看的清的。。。我还以为要加速了。。。 我已经改到看不清了
这个难度整体没什么太多可说的,但给我感觉是整体间距过小而个别间距又太大……总之挺奇怪。

star。对mod有任何疑惑可以PM我,如果Lunatic整体调整了可以叫我remod。
NatsumeRin
00:37:520 (2) - 我猜你是想要尾音whistle的
其他没了,我觉得不错= =,这个贴不要给kud。
thepianist
I just dropped by for a random mod :3 Hope you don't mind.

Beginner
I think it's fine.

Easy+
00:36:770 (3) - Personally, I think it looks nicer when it's directly underneath the slider, but this being an "easy"...with the new guidelines, I dunno if it is allowed.
01:15:770 (2) - Ends too early. Extend by 1/4

Taiko
Hmmph. Some of the ddkdd etc combo's are a little evil, but my taiko skills aren't too great. (But perhaps turn the volume a little quieter...)

Lunatic
IMHO I don't agree with most of the jumps between combos (the music doesn't really seem to call for it...) But at least it's somewhat consistent? Yeah. You can probably afford to make the circle size one tick larger, but it's up to you.

Skin

In my humble opinion, I think the sliderball is way too colorful (I see the rainbow effect-ish, but when it turns at a high rate, it just becomes more of a blurry mess...) I also think the hitcircle overlay rainbow just...doesn't fit. Then again it's just me.

Spinner-clear, spinner-spin, and spinner-osu.png are quite...err. 很不怎麼樣. 快要跟我的中文程度一樣...爛.... Perhaps you can take a look at the attached and see if these are better? Or ask S i R i R u for some of his/her "Loos/Koi Yomi Zakura" skin elements?

Hitcircle.png seems to have disappeared my download (looking at the screenshots.)

But overall, it is well done.^^ Star.





thepianist
Oh yes, and this spinner circle/background/meter probably goes better with the spinner sprites if you are interested. Do not kudos this post.

EDIT: Circle replaced, background/meter added if you like.





Derekku
[General]
*There's a hitcircleoverlay in the folder, but no hitcircle. Please add one (even if it's the default).
*spinner-spin/osu/clear are a bit tacky, imo ( sorry D: ) and they get in the way of notes after spinners (especially in normal+ and lunatic)
*bluecursor shows up in the taiko diff, but it's not very noticeable. :S
*offset is a bit late. Try 5,633 and resnap on all diffs please.

[Beginner]
01:06:770 (2) - Even with the arrow, this is too confusing because of the repeat on it telling the player to go the other way. :V

[Easy+]
*I suggest renaming this to "Normal"
00:14:270 (1,2) - strange overlap
00:26:832 (4) - it's hard to tell that this is only 1/2 after because of the stacking.
00:35:832 (2) - ^
00:36:770 (3) - just overlapping like this would be a lot better, I suppose :U
00:43:895 (3,4,5) - tricky stacking, again
01:08:270 (1,2) - ^
01:09:770 (3,4) - ^
01:15:770 (2) - extend to the white tick

[Normal+]
*I suggest renaming this to "Hard"
00:20:645 (2,3) - a bit tricky to read; could you rotate 2 a bit so that it doesn't overlap so much?

[Lunatic]
Fine, I suppose.

Hitsounds feel a bit off at the beginning/end; like that they're to a 4/4 song rather than a 3/4 one, but they don't sound "bad".

EDIT: pianist's skin elements might be better O:
thepianist
I lol'd at the osu logo, but why? x)
Topic Starter
Dotsu

thepianist wrote:

I just dropped by for a random mod :3 Hope you don't mind.

Beginner
I think it's fine.

Easy+
00:36:770 (3) - Personally, I think it looks nicer when it's directly underneath the slider, but this being an "easy"...with the new guidelines, I dunno if it is allowed. Fixed
01:15:770 (2) - Ends too early. Extend by 1/4 Fixed

Taiko
Hmmph. Some of the ddkdd etc combo's are a little evil, but my taiko skills aren't too great. (But perhaps turn the volume a little quieter...)
Fixed
Lunatic
IMHO I don't agree with most of the jumps between combos (the music doesn't really seem to call for it...) But at least it's somewhat consistent? Yeah. You can probably afford to make the circle size one tick larger, but it's up to you.

Skin

In my humble opinion, I think the sliderball is way too colorful (I see the rainbow effect-ish, but when it turns at a high rate, it just becomes more of a blurry mess...) I also think the hitcircle overlay rainbow just...doesn't fit. Then again it's just me.

Spinner-clear, spinner-spin, and spinner-osu.png are quite...err. 很不怎麼樣. 快要跟我的中文程度一樣...爛.... Perhaps you can take a look at the attached and see if these are better? Or ask S i R i R u for some of his/her "Loos/Koi Yomi Zakura" skin elements?

Hitcircle.png seems to have disappeared my download (looking at the screenshots.)Added one.

But overall, it is well done.^^ Star.
Thank you very much for your modding and your skin.Thanks a lot!!!

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*There's a hitcircleoverlay in the folder, but no hitcircle. Please add one (even if it's the default). Added
*spinner-spin/osu/clear are a bit tacky, imo ( sorry D: ) and they get in the way of notes after spinners (especially in normal+ and lunatic)
*bluecursor shows up in the taiko diff, but it's not very noticeable. :S
*offset is a bit late. Try 5,633 and resnap on all diffs please.Thanks,I'll check it.

[Beginner]
01:06:770 (2) - Even with the arrow, this is too confusing because of the repeat on it telling the player to go the other way. :V

[Easy+]
*I suggest renaming this to "Normal" Renamed
00:14:270 (1,2) - strange overlap
00:26:832 (4) - it's hard to tell that this is only 1/2 after because of the stacking.
00:35:832 (2) - ^
00:36:770 (3) - just overlapping like this would be a lot better, I suppose :U
00:43:895 (3,4,5) - tricky stacking, again
01:08:270 (1,2) - ^
01:09:770 (3,4) - ^
01:15:770 (2) - extend to the white tick Fixed

[Normal+]
*I suggest renaming this to "Hard" Renamed
00:20:645 (2,3) - a bit tricky to read; could you rotate 2 a bit so that it doesn't overlap so much? Fixed

[Lunatic]
Fine, I suppose.

Hitsounds feel a bit off at the beginning/end; Fixed
like that they're to a 4/4 song rather than a 3/4 one, but they don't sound "bad".

EDIT: pianist's skin elements might be better O:

Thank you for your modding!!
Derekku
The old spinner-background seems to still be in the folder. :S

The hitcircle is cute. o:

no kudos ;p
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Derekku Chan wrote:

The old spinner-background seems to still be in the folder. :S
I forget it. :P

EDIT:Full submitted
jazsxdc1230
stars
Numbers 596108
咦?
NR的回覆沒看到呢lol
晚點我回到家在改吧= = (囧...雖然很懶的改note
多謝指教啦~
D7Heaven
Very good
SamiPale
没有大问题可以挑了。。挑刺对谱的整体不好,就star吧 0.0
Pokie
許哥 :)
Sallad4ever
Sorry for the delay

Wow good map insta star~
First thing I want to say is if you include the default - numbers you have to include the default - comma, dot, x and percent because they are a one set just like spinner bg, spin, metre, circle, approach circle, osu, and clear. I'm pretty sure this is needed, correct me if I'm wrong
Edit : apparently it's not a problem :D
The last is the color of default-numbers, it clash with the red combo color.

Yeah sorry for not being any help :o
You should find a BAT for this
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Sallad4ever wrote:

Sorry for the delay

Wow good map insta star~
First thing I want to say is if you include the default - numbers you have to include the default - comma, dot, x and percent because they are a one set just like spinner bg, spin, metre, circle, approach circle, osu, and clear. I'm pretty sure this is needed, correct me if I'm wrong
Edit : apparently it's not a problem :D
The last is the color of default-numbers, it clash with the red combo color.

Yeah sorry for not being any help :o
You should find a BAT for this
So many problems with the default numbers :o So I think I should delete it.

EDIT:Full submitted
Lunah_old
Starr**
mtmcl
Alright, I don't see a problem with this. Bubble+star.
Topic Starter
Dotsu

mtmcl wrote:

Alright, I don't see a problem with this. Bubble+star.

Thank you mtmcl!!!
Numbers 596108

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
不要kiai吗?
offset:感觉是+10(用taiko和Normal测试)

[Beginner]
……果然是beginner,个人想法是要不要用些whistle音效呢?
01:17:260 (2) - 建议换成一个1/2拍slider可以压到两个音,第二个音效是soft-whistle……(我个人比较偏爱这个音效。)

[Easy+]
00:05:635 (1,2) - spacing.
00:34:885 (7) - new combo?
00:42:760 (2) - 左下一格给我感觉更好
00:48:385 (7) - new combo?
01:00:760 (1) - 这个上的timing section往前放,为了修音效音量的绿线别砸在音上。
01:15:760 (2) - 不太好看。

[Normal]
4.3x的Normal,还是叫Normal+会好些。
00:08:260 (8) - ……为什么不在5正上方呢。。
00:32:635 (1) - 既然前面随了次鼓,从这里开始升下音量或是换音效怎么样呢?
00:56:260 (2) - 不对称感强了点……= =
01:16:885 (6) - [nazi] 右一格

[596108's taiko]
HP Drain Rate:5或者6,你现在这样就是不想让新人玩嘛……OA可以考虑减,但其实我比较喜欢OA6
這..我倒是覺得還可以 因為這張的3&5連組合都不是說很難 所以調成7算是在範圍之內
整体给我的堆砌节奏感挺大的(overmapped. note过多)……我希望谱子能更张弛有度一点,该紧时紧该松时松,从头到尾都在三连五连更像是练习专用而不是实际打的谱子。嘛……这话可能严了点,数字君要继续努力啊~

note 這倒是還好 何況1:19嗎@_@ 所以499combo這倒是還好@_@ 至於鬆的地方鬆 緊的地方緊這倒是不用太在意
何況當個練習譜也不錯@_@ 給伊些新來的沙包多點圖練練@_@ 這道也不壞吧??

[Lunatic]
我觉得作为最高难,这个间距太小了。
00:08:260 (1) - 或许可以把它弄的曲折点,这样2会在1首尾的中间轴上。
01:06:760 (1) - ……之前几个难度没写写在这里好了。。。SB上那个箭头到底何必啊。。。应该是看的清的。。。我还以为要加速了。。。
这个难度整体没什么太多可说的,但给我感觉是整体间距过小而个别间距又太大……总之挺奇怪。

star。对mod有任何疑惑可以PM我,如果Lunatic整体调整了可以叫我remod。
Lybydose
You need to include a cursortrail.png if you are including a cursor.png

-10ms to offset (5,635).

The time signatures are set wrong. The section from 00:23:633 to 00:59:258 should be 3/4.
Everything else should be 4/4. You can use inherited timing sections to change the time signature.

Hard difficulty would play better with +1 Overall Difficulty
Topic Starter
Dotsu

Lybydose wrote:

You need to include a cursortrail.png if you are including a cursor.png

-10ms to offset (5,635).

The time signatures are set wrong. The section from 00:23:633 to 00:59:258 should be 3/4.
Everything else should be 4/4. You can use inherited timing sections to change the time signature.

Hard difficulty would play better with +1 Overall Difficulty
All fixed and thank you very much!!
Lybydose
rebubbled
Gens
Quick pop~ you need to add an approachcircle and a spinner-approach circle.
Also, more of a minor thing, but the "combo4" color sometimes gets mixed with the reverse arrow color... might want to check that.

EDIT: Rebubbled
Lybydose
Ok ranked. Congrats on first ranked map!
Pokie
恭喜許哥~~~ 太好了, 這首總算rank掉了...
NatsumeRin
恭喜~
Asutarotto
:D 可喜可贺~喂喂lybydose求recheck啊…(哭
Colin Hou
:o 许哥我转圈圈比赛输掉了 让我死了吧...
Topic Starter
Dotsu
谢谢大家啦 :)
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