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Triomatic - Mahoro de Mambo (TV Size)

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Sushi
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Sushi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 13 mai 2010 at 22:45:39

Artist: Triomatic
Title: Mahoro de Mambo (TV Size)
Source: Mahoromatic
Tags: Kikuchi Yumi Mizuno Manabi Sanada Asami Kawatsumi Ayako
BPM: 105,92
Filesize: 13053kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,15 stars, 151 notes)
  2. Insane (4,88 stars, 239 notes)
  3. Normal (2,12 stars, 89 notes)
Download: Triomatic - Mahoro de Mambo (TV Size)
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Mahoro de Mambo !

By Triomatic, for the Anime Mahoromatic!

I know some notes can sound weird. But try to time them right, you'll understand :)
Last edited by Sushi , edited 19 times in total.
Fight69
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Joined January 2010
Fight69
Nice map Sushi ! ;)

~Star ! :D
Mutsui
951 posts
Joined February 2009
Mutsui
cette map est a chier :>
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar
Sushi~
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Eeh sushi ^^ let's see what we've got here:

General:
BPM: ok
Offset 1: 224
Offset 2: 27.442
Tags: please add tags to all diffs

Easy:
eeuh

Normal:
dzzzz

Hard:
murg!

Please give me something to mod next time xD
like it, love it, STAR
Crimmi
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Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Crimmi's Judgement <3

[Easy]
I Love It!! =]

[Normal]
Love That Too =]

[Hard]
Curse me if i'm being a neat freak >.>

00:43:446 (3) align with (1)

that is all

*Star*
Garven
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Garven
[Hard]
00:27:442 [1, 2, 3, 4] Maybe apply some silent sliders for the combo here. (download them here)

This map is awesome for this song. I love it. The only thing I can think of that would make it better would be some story boarding for the "I think dirty pictures are bad!" part, hehe.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
ooh nice swingy song!

ok to business.

[general]

SUGGESTION!:you might want to add kiai somewhere around here... 01:05:961

[hard]
00:32:398 (5) - move down one square
00:34:664 (4) - ^
SUGGESTION 00:36:505 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - they're distance is fine from eachother because of the song, but maybe put the whole group closer to the (2)
SUGGESTION 00:52:366 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe change them to this? for spacing sake?
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5705
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5706

01:19:556 (1,1,2) - make these whistles

[normal]

00:07:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - seems a little early to put something like this in... maybe change this one (and only this one) to

SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5708

00:34:239 (3,4) - move up one square

SUGGESTION 01:25:221 (1,2,3) - as a finale, you might want to change this to this:

SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5710

[easy]

01:22:389 (1,2,3,1,1) - move up two squares...

thats it...

Good job with this map.

one big fat shiny star for you :)
James2250
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James2250
you don't need anime in tags as it will be in the genre..try and think of some more?

Easy:
01:14:458 (3,4,1) - might want to move more on grid..not a big deal

Normal:
00:57:889 (2,3) - I would redo this combo so they don't go up so high (they reach the hp bar and some people don't like that)

Hard:
01:19:556 (1) - I would extend this to white tick
consider lowering overall diff by 1 as its kinda high..up to you

*star*
let me know when you have done fixes and I will pubble

try and think of some tags to put before it gets ranked but for now
Pubbled!! :)
Gens
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Gens
I think Normal is a bit too hard... maybe call it Normal+ or something?

Everything else is fine... good job as always. :)
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
hai ;)

Easy
00:33:673 (1) - Add hitsound clap (?)
00:35:938 (1,2) - Add hitsound clap (?)

Normal
00:27:442 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Add hitsound whistle
00:44:435 (4) - New combo here
00:44:719 (1) - Remove new combo here

Hard
00:37:921 (8) - New combo here


Okay starrrr*
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: i get about +10. and since the BPM is not a integer, i think you'd better find a timing expert to have a look at that.
can you find a better mp3 = =?

[Easy]
HP Drain Rate+1
00:31:407 (1) - finish?

[Normal]
00:07:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use 1 or 2 sliders instead of them, it's hard to find it's 2/3 beats when they're stacked, especially as the start of the song.
00:38:204 (1) - remove new combo and new combo on (2)
00:58:455 (4,5) - spacing?
01:04:828 (3,1) - spacing?
01:19:556 (1) - if you want to silence this spinner, make the timing section on 01:19:840

[Hard]
00:07:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - still.. suggest use slider instead, or at least (1,2,3).
00:17:501 (1,2) - too crazy imo.
00:37:638 (7) - new combo?
01:19:556 (1) - if you want to silence this spinner, make the timing section on 01:19:840. and maybe end 1/4 later.

star.~ good map.
edit: i agree that normal should be renamed normal+
Beuchi
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Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~Easy~
01:14:458 (3,4,1) - I'm kinda worried about those notes almost out of the grid, they're fine, but I don't know... xD

~Normal~
- I'd call this Hard, rather than Normal... =x

00:52:932 (1) - Delete New Combo?
00:54:065 (1) - ^
01:05:111 (1) - Fix Spacing (yeah, so nazi D:!)

~Hard~
- And I'd call this one Insane... xD

00:59:730 (5,1) - Too sudden jump maybe? x_x
01:04:262 (3,1) - ^
01:17:290 (4,5) - Same as Easy, the endpoints are completely out of the grid, and the hitbursts get almost cut when playing oxo

Just some suggestions, nothing big :P Great map and so fun! Good luck~
*star*
Lokamp
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Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
00:42:736 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove previous new combo
00:44:719 (1,4) - new combo on 4th, remove previous new combo

Hard
00:56:048 (1,1) - maybe move these 1-2 squares right: the previous passage can make the 1st slider quite tricky to beat
01:09:360 (5,1) - a sudden jump that it can be avoided...
01:13:750 (5,1) - even this part's spacing is odd, according to the mode's overall rhythm...

Insane
01:03:695 (1,2) - move these some squares up and left...
01:17:290 (4,5) - silence the slider-ticks here

Catchy and fun to play. Insane mode still needs some new combo works, but it has personality to be good. Have a star!
GabrielRKF
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GabrielRKF
Niiice, Sushi :D
Just maybe add a few tags? '-'
DJPop
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DJPop
Title: Mahoro de Mambo (TV Size)
Tags: Kikuchi Yumi Mizuno Manabi Sanada Asami Kawatsumi Ayako


Should be used this BG, since this song was sung by 3 girls below (not include Mahoro)
And don't forget MV >_>


Sushi
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Sushi
Thanks for Title and tags, but for the BG, I prefer mine. Even if the one who are singing are these 3, the BG itself is... well, not very nice.

I'll try to find a better BG where the three are there, but if I fail finding one, I'll take the one I have.

And what do you mean by MV?
Kurai
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:3
Eirene
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Eirene
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arien666
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arien666
[Normal]
00:25:714 (2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:27:442 (1) - How about make this slider seems symmetric via y-axis? But little thing ;_;
01:22:389 (1,2,3,1,1) - [Suggestion] How about move 2 grid up?

[Hard]
00:14:810 (2,3,4) - [Suggestion] Well? How about move (3) without grid snap? It would be better :3
00:52:366 (1,1,1,1) - [Suggestion] Maybe, delete all 'New combo' ;_;?
01:14:175 (1) - How about off 'New combo'?

[Insane]
00:25:431 (4) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:47:551 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:13:042 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?



Good song anyway ;_;
Then? Good luck XD
FluffRat
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Joined September 2008
FluffRat
Timing sounds good. Didn't check the video.

[Insane]
01:07:944 (7) - Kinda tucked up under the health bar a bit far and the green combo doesn't seem to be tied to anything that requires it to be up there.

[Normal and Hard]
01:22:389 (1,2,3) - These beats clash with the heavy drum; [Insane] sounds much better at this spot. You might try building that same rhythm out of easier to hit things like perhaps a pair of sliders for [Normal] and a hit/bounce-slider/hit or something for [Hard].

Very nice. +Star
Sakura
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Sakura
[Insane]
01:07:944 (7) - Out of bounds

orz that's all i could find, feel free to not kudosu if you expected more +Star
Nakagawa-Kanon
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Nakagawa-Kanon
all fine.... ~.~

+Star~
Krisom
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Krisom
HiHi!

The... ..the backgroud is kinda suggestive <_<? I'd change it for DJPop's BG or another one....
Otherwise, I really enojyed this one ^^! [Normal] 00:26:139 (3) did caugh me off guard during my first playthrough, but I could land it the second/third time, only sayin'.

Good luck ^^! Star!
MaxwellDemon
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[Normal]

All good.

[Hard]

All good too.

[Insane]

Purely only suggestions with your jumps. XD

00:27:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - I didn't really think it is necessary to have such large spacing in such a "peaceful" part of the song. But that is just me, you are trying to make an insane. XD XD
01:00:580 (1,2) - I know in the previous verse, you had a jump too... and this isn't a hard jump to say anyway... but I definitely found the placing for it funny that I quirked my eyebrow when I played it. XD
01:05:111 (1,2) - ^ Same thing, I just find it funny how you stuffed those notes into the corner, I guess?
01:07:944 (7) - Just barely in the playing field, considering moving this for skin-related purposes?

Anyway, good maps, definitely ranking quality. I'll be happy to give this a bubble once my post has been acknowledged. XD
Cyril Scarlet
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:D
MaxwellDemon
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Perfect.

Bubb.
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