1. Iron (2.74 stars, 385 notes)
2. SH's Iron (2.74 stars, 355 notes)
3. Sirade's Diamond (4.1 stars, 706 notes)
4. Stone (1.56 stars, 229 notes)
5. Wooden (1.41 stars, 216 notes)

Sirade wrote:

Hey, are you still continuing on this beatmap? If you do, I'll continue on my GD.

sacred covenant wrote:

Sirade wrote:

Hey, are you still continuing on this beatmap? If you do, I'll continue on my GD.

yes, i am

Sirade wrote:

Hey, sry to say this but... The GD will be delayed because of my school's work so please don't expect me to finish it fast.

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Hi, From my Queue.
I'm here again lol
To be sure you can understand what I'm talking about, I use Chinese except Sirade's Diamond in my mod.

General

You have to fix your offset. (But I can't help you because I'm not good at fixing the offset lol)
Maybe you'll want to change the preview point to 00:39:133 - .
Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) EVERY TIME to be sure your map is in good standing
And if there's any problem in the AiMod, please solve them as much as you can.

Sirade's Diamond

This is your first (or almost first) map, right?
Fix the problems in AiMod first.
And, I hope you can use the space in the four corners of the grid.
Wait, You don't add any Hitsounds on your map?
Try to add some more triples.
If you can, please make your map with more consistency.
Further modding is really required, I'm sure about this.

00:01:383 (3) - Why is the Slider curved?
00:16:133 (3) - This can be more closer to the next slider Fixed
00:21:758 (2,3) - These notes are a little bit hard to "read". You can increase their distance to one another, or use a Slider. Fixed
(the same as 00:57:383 (1,2,3) - 00:59:383 (1,2,3) - 01:01:383 (3,4,5) - , etc.) Fixed except 00:59:383 (1,2,3) - since it already looks fine to me
00:23:758 (1) - Why this slider accelerated? the same as 01:27:758 (2) - Just to emphasize the clap sound but changed to normal
00:38:633 (2,3,1) - Separate them from 00:38:133 (1) - Changed to normal notes instead
01:03:633 (2,3,4) - Don't you think they are too far? the same as 02:07:383 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed them, with shorter distance, but the second one, not sure about the pattern though.
01:05:883 (2,3,4) - Separate them from 01:04:883 (2,3,1) - I don't get what you mean...
01:28:133 (3,4,1) - Separate them from the previous slider Can't separate them from the previous slider since I removed it
02:16:383 - to 02:32:383 - is a big problem. you have to separate them into parts, not stuck together, just like a mess.
And also, they are hard to read. Fixed, with better one but still not sure is it good or not?
02:32:383 - Add a break here, and it can end in 02:39:133 - or whenever you want before here. Well... No, thanks.
You did better after 02:56:383 - actually
03:31:883 (6) - Move it away from 03:31:133 (4) - Moved, is it already far enough here?

I believe you can do it better, so keep going.
Good luck for you guys

osu file format v14

[General]
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Title:Revenge
TitleUnicode:Revenge
Artist:CaptainSparkelz
ArtistUnicode:CaptainSparkelz
Creator:sacred covenant
Version:Sirade's Diamond (Insane)
Source:CaptainSparklez's youtube Channel
Tags:"Revenge" - A Minecraft Parody of Usher's DJ Got Us Fallin' in Love - Crafted Using Noteblocks
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363,264,215133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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173,300,215758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,97,216133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,216383,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,216445,12,0,217133,0:0:0:0:

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Hi, From my Queue.
I'm here again lol
To be sure you can understand what I'm talking about, I use Chinese except Sirade's Diamond in my mod.

General

You have to fix your offset. (But I can't help you because I'm not good at fixing the offset lol)
Maybe you'll want to change the preview point to 00:39:133 - .
Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) EVERY TIME to be sure your map is in good standing
And if there's any problem in the AiMod, please solve them as much as you can.

Iron

讓我比較困惑的是，這整張圖的音跟的有時是歌曲的人聲，有時是背景音樂。 兩者不停的切換會變得很亂。
盡量避免讓滑條開頭或是HC落在1/4 (藍線) 上面。
可以試試看讓所有物件之間都沒有遮擋，整個圖比較不會出現"縮在一起"的狀況。
看起來後面是複製貼上的。 盡量避免這樣做，如果一定要，也請Ctrl+H 或是 Ctrl+J (當然，兩個都做也可以)
也是沒有任何的打擊音效。請加上打擊音效，就算是預設也可以。

00:00:383 (1) - 為什麼這裡折返兩次，但是00:02:383 (4) - 只折返一次? 統一一下會好點。(已統一)
00:01:383 (2) - 為什麼這個滑條的結尾在1/6的線上? 可以拉到1/4的線(像00:03:383 (5) - )，然後做一次折返，把下一個HC刪掉。(修復完成)
00:03:383 (5) - 同上，可以折返一次，刪掉下一個HC(修好了)
00:19:883 (8,1) - 靠太近了(完成)
00:23:383 (8,9) - 也是可以折返一次 刪掉HC(修復完畢)
00:25:383 (2,3) - ^(我也同上)
00:33:383 (3,1) - 距離太近。
00:36:883 (2,3,4) - 平衡一下他們之間的距離吧（平衡完了）
00:38:883 (3,1) - 距離太近了。(修完了)
01:15:133 (4,5) - 為什麼這裡會有二連?(我是音癡已修復)
01:26:633 (6) - 把整個滑條試著移到Grid裡面。(我盡力的把它拉進來了)
02:32:383 - 到大約 02:38:883 - 這一段，可以考慮加個休息時間(加了8秒@@)
02:39:133 - 這裡聽起來是有東西的，放個HC?(被拿去休息了)
後面幾乎都是複製貼上，我不再贅述。(已水平或垂直翻轉)

我會持續關注這張圖，同時如果有問題，也可以找我或是版上熱心的人發問。
(但請盡量先以中文為主不然很容易看不懂)<<推薦某隻叫做Koalazy的無尾熊(別說是我叫的)s.c:我會去問的
I believe you can do it better, so keep going.
Good luck for you guys

FinaIes FunkeIn wrote:

Hello! Thank you for entering my Q, i'll continue this mod as the week goes on


Diamond:

SPOILER

00:00:383 (1) - This hits on a funny offbeat, consider moving it so it fits the rhythm or beat Fixed with LexiaLovesU's offset, thanks to her.

00:00:383 (1) - Same goes for here It's exactly the same as above, lol

00:21:758 - This hit doesn't match the beat or rhythm, move it one tick over [This note lands on some sounds, maybe synth or something and I'm not following the kick sound

00:39:133 - For this jump segment consider making it a shape, like a star or some sort of proper polygon Changed into tilted diamond pattern

00:43:758 - Consider making this a slider from 00:43:758 - to 00:44:008 - Done, did I do it right?

00:55:383 - This doesn't seem to land on a beat or rhythm, it sounds close but not actually It was because of the old offset

00:58:133 (3) - Again with the jumps try not to make the notes land so random across the board Well, moved nearer to the next slider

00:58:133 (3) - The repeat into the end of the slider doesn't match the rhythm or beat Uh... I don't get what you mean...

00:58:133 (3) - The end of the first 2 sliders doesn't match rhythm or beat Um, not sure about this, if other modders point this out too then I'll change it

00:58:133 (3) - This sustained slider doesn't match rhythm or beat, the syncopation is nice but feels funny to play Um.. Which sustained slider?

00:58:133 (3) - Same case with this slider as well What slider?

01:20:383 (1) - Consider making this slider match the rhythm I don't know what to do with this slider so I'll left it just for now

01:21:383 (3) - Consider making this slider match the rhythm I don't know what to do with this slider so I'll left it just for now

01:39:758 (4) - This beat doesn't land on the rhythm or beat, it's syncopated This note lands on some sounds, maybe synth or something and I'm not following the kick sound

01:40:133 (5) - Same case as above here This note lands on some sounds, maybe synth or something and I'm not following the kick sound

01:40:383 (1) - Sliders 1-4 all sustain a but too long and the ends of them dont match very well with the rhythm or beat Hm... Not sure how to explain, I'll just leave there for now

01:43:133 (1) - Again try not to make the jumps so random Changed into star shaped pattern

01:53:883 (5) - There's no reason for a double tap to be here Done

01:55:758 (5) - Same here Fixed

02:00:383 (1) - Slider sustains for a bit too long Done

02:00:883 (2) - Slider sustains for a bit too long Fixed

02:17:883 (1) - Be consistent with your rhythm or beat hits here Uh, I think it looks fine to me, I think.

03:29:633 (6) - A triple hit here is very awkward Hm... Moved to other locations, is it good now?

03:33:758 (2) - Consider moving this slider closer to the first one then move it back one tick and extend it to the rhythm Is it better now?

03:36:445 (1) - Not enough time to spin, consider using a slider instead Ok, will change it but however, I can spin in just fine (with 300 (idk the 300 for the end of the combo) around 270-300 RPM though.

Koalazy wrote:

Hihi- ㄜfrom巴哈
when i use english that means we have some issues concerned with Sirade's diff
and sorry my mod seems to be late, this is the version i've got 3 days before, so it may conflict to Sirade's update

[General]

1. about the diff settings, it's really noticeable that Sirade's Diamond has HP5 but Iron with HP6; also Iron has OD5 but Stone with OD6
   my suggestion for this:
   Wooden AR+1
   Stone OD-2 HP-1 CS-0.5
   Iron HP-1
   Sirade's Diamond HP+1
2. BG大小不合規定，1363*768差了一點，建議改成1366*768。或是裁掉一部分，修成符合16:9或4:3的比例就可以←規定是這樣
3. Uninherited timing points conflict with Sirade's diff. BUT in my opinion, Sirade's timing point is better. 簡單來說就是你3個diff的紅線要改放在和Sirade的diff一樣的地方00:00:383 - ，而且從那邊開始map

[/ notice]

[notice][Sirade's Diamond]
hmm...no hitsoundings?
00:00:633 - how about making the volume of the slider end lower(though sound like mute but still audible)? try 25% volume on this point and 00:01:133 - 00:01:633 - 00:02:008 - 00:02:633 - ...and similar patterns until 00:08:008 - here
00:17:883 (5) - move it a bit higher like 396|160 would be better Done
00:20:383 (1,2,3) - make it the same distance, it would be really better to help the player to read it smoothly (like 00:21:758 (2) - on 487|159 with 1.8xDS) Done
00:23:758 - add a note to follow the electronic sound, i'd recommend to put it on 00:23:883 (3) - Hm.. You probably modded the non-lastest one but I get your idea, added
00:33:883 (5,6) - it will be nice to follow 1.4xDS which is the same as 00:31:383 (3,4,5) - Done
00:36:883 (1,1) - try NCs on it? Done, I think
00:40:383 - really weird to have no finish hitsoundings on this strong beat, and the finish of Drum sampleset is extremely not good to interpret this. so i suggest either go use some custom hitsounds or use Addition on the upper left>soft>finish, though i strongly recommend you to use a custom hitsound instead
anyway please add hitsounds ;w;
00:53:383 (3) - better with blanket↓ Done, but not a fine-knitted blanket.

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01:03:258 - add a note? Done
01:06:383 (1,2) - too close, rotate01:06:383 (1) - or make a different shape↓ Done, with a... Uh... New slider shape

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01:11:383 (3) - try copy paste 01:10:883 (2) - Well, it already looks fine as it is and it is already copied and pasted
01:16:383 (1,2,3) - how about this?↓ No, thanks, I was going to let the slider start to stack each other and arranged properly, just slider start

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01:39:383 (3,4,5) - you've followed the vocal at the previous patterns, this 3 makes it a bit weird... i suggest to map the beat on white and red ticks where the vocals are Done
01:55:633 (4,5) - uh i believe this 2 should put at 01:55:758 - which is 1/8 (blame the music itself D:) and also 02:21:883 - we still clearly have a clap here, so i recommend to do this↓ Well, I listened this in 25% playback, and... It is fined as it is and just added another note there

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02:34:508 (3) - hmm..the sound here is off, try to compose them in slider↓ Done and it is off because of the old offset

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02:33:633 - ~02:39:133 - i think map this in consistent DS like 1.0x will work better, it is hard to tell when to click correctly without approach circle in this point Done
03:36:445 (1) - comparing to other diffs this spinner is should be deleted as to make every diff ends at the same point Well, I already replaced with slider on last mod, lol
Also don't forget to add hitsounds Ok, custom hitsounds, here I come

Whoops, forgot to add one extra HP drain so please add it for me, thanks in advance.

sacred covenant wrote:

OMG is so more moding@@
Thank you everybody~
I'am maby fix your mod in my map on Friday to Sunday:)
I say last time(if you not BAT)
This is Minecraft song map@@
I want change difficulty name to minecraft style!!
Don't say Iron change to Hard again!!

Koalazy wrote:

Hihi- ㄜfrom巴哈
when i use english that means we have some issues concerned with Sirade's diff
and sorry my mod seems to be late, this is the version i've got 3 days before, so it may conflict to Sirade's update

[General]

1. about the diff settings, it's really noticeable that Sirade's Diamond has HP5 but Iron with HP6; also Iron has OD5 but Stone with OD6
   my suggestion for this:
   Wooden AR+1
   Stone OD-2 HP-1 CS-0.5
   Iron HP-1
   Sirade's Diamond HP+1
2. BG大小不合規定，1363*768差了一點，建議改成1366*768。或是裁掉一部分，修成符合16:9或4:3的比例就可以←規定是這樣(已經改了大小)
3. Uninherited timing points conflict with Sirade's diff. BUT in my opinion, Sirade's timing point is better. 簡單來說就是你3個diff的紅線要改放在和Sirade的diff一樣的地方00:00:383 - ，而且從那邊開始map*(阿...他是00:00:400 -)

[Iron]
摁...我整體看了幾次，你的難度還需要很多的修改才能讓他更好
00:00:383 (1) - 摁...我會希望你盡量迴避這種折返2次的，這種滑條限制很多，要做好不太容易，因為這種滑條很難讓玩家讀懂怎麼玩。而且你可以聽到00:00:383 - 和00:00:883 - 是重音所在，重音就是讓玩家"按下去"的地方(雖然不是通則)，你用這種擺法很顯而易見的就無視掉了00:00:883 - 的重音。我建議改成雙滑條或是放兩個單點在重音點上
00:02:383 (3) - ^ 另外我認為你可以去View>Grid Level>4 (most precise)改成這個，接著直接開著Distance Snap重新手動調整過一遍，排列不整齊或美觀很容易讓人覺得不夠好
就像是00:01:383 (2,3) - 這兩個，兩個重疊到了，就會看起來不OK
我自己排了一個Hard的排列你看看覺得如何↓

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00:02:383 (4) - NC
00:08:383 - 你可能想跟vocal，不跟長白線上的重音我覺得很可惜，而且00:13:633 (4,4,5) - 都不是只單跟vocal的。這裡多加一個note吧
00:09:133 (2,4) - 重疊到了
整體上沒有什麼梗可尋我不知道該怎麼幫助你比較好...
像是00:12:383 (1,2,3,4) - 你做出了一個看起來有意思的梗，卻沒有好好的把它擺好，這就是問題...
我用圖來跟你解釋，這樣擺↓

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00:16:383 - 這裡有重音不跟? 前面都用00:15:883 (5) - 鋪陳了...
00:18:383 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這種排列看不太出他的秩序在哪，你已經試著開著DS做了，接下來就試著利用DS的穩定優勢來排出好看的排列吧!↓別忘了00:18:383 - 要NC

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00:20:383 (1,2,3) - 這樣呢?↓

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00:22:883 - 這裡vocal有音，也是重音(通常重音都在白線上)，這裡讓玩家有按下去的感覺會更好↓

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00:23:883 (4) - 尤其這裡是第一個出現的clap音，更適合要map到他
00:24:883 - 這裡也是很明顯的clap音，無視他我想是很不明智的
其實往後找問題大概都差不多，為了不要讓篇幅太長(你累我也累)，我大致解釋一下你的問題：
1. 白線上只要有音，基本上就要跟，尤其是長白線，這些一首歌中可能就會有很多不同。像是00:20:383 - 你可以很清楚的聽到這邊有音，就是vocal唱的地方，所以這裡要讓玩家"按下去"；可是00:22:383 - 雖然是長白線卻錯過了vocal的重音，但是這裡很重要的是還是有背景的重低音在，所以我們不能無視他，這時候就可以結合前面vocal用一條滑條來完成↓

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和

2. 基本上開著DS作譜的用意是為了讓譜面乾淨又整齊好看(對我來說)，就像01:22:383 (4,5,6,7,8) - 整個動線很不順，雖然它能玩，但不好玩。你作譜的時候可以找一段音樂中，重音在哪裡? 玩家按在哪裡會比較好玩又舒適? 再來我們是要看譜的，一個無章法又動線不順的譜面，很難令人喜歡
我感覺你已經快要抓住該下什麼地方的問題了，再修改我相信你能做更好(上面基本都跟大大討論過了，應該沒問題了......吧)

[Stone]
這個難度定位上是Normal吧? 那作為一個normal就有normal的規則在
Slider velocity不適合和Iron的一樣1.4，降低一點到1.3或1.2之後重新map一遍(Normal不會花太多時間的)，記得normal的DS全部都要一致(改了1.2拉到要瘋啦)
00:00:383 - 在General那邊有提到，我認為紅線應該要搬運到這裡，並且你應該要從這裡開始map(是400拉~)
00:08:883 (1,2,3) - 和Hard一樣問題，排列並不好看，這裡是normal，自然不需要跟非常細節的音樂，但是最重要的重音絕對要跟到
00:13:383 (6,1) - normal硬性規定距離全部都要一樣除了重疊0.0xDS，這裡不可以改成0.7
00:15:383 (3,1) - ^ 你在改完Slider速度之後一定會重新remap一遍，我也會推薦你整個翻修一遍會比較好
normal的DS全部都要一致
00:32:383 - 不適合擺休息時間
你總體的節奏斷點很奇怪，00:25:383 - 像這邊明明就有重音卻不擺，00:16:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - 像這樣很穩定的節奏才比較符合normal的要求
所以像是00:44:383 - 明明在kiai中卻擺休息時間，kiai就是一首歌高潮的地方，你卻把它空在那邊，這是很奇怪的
02:16:883 - 而像從這邊開始的休息時間就是可以讓人接受的(02:16:383 - 這邊要擺個note)，這一段rap在normal可以用滑條接，可以不用像hard或insane那個仔細但一樣重音要跟到。可是這段如果你放休息時間的話我想是可以接受的
因為太多了，就掌握幾點：
1. 別隨便就在有音樂的時候擺休息時間，normal擺的音要維持順暢，不要這邊缺一個那邊又多幾個
2. 重音都要跟到
3. 記得DS全部都要一致，然後排列盡量美化一下...
能做到上面幾點我相信就快接近成品了
(老實說上面好多都看不懂阿~(抓頭)但自己多看其他Normal譜歸類出以下幾點
1.要有主節奏，不能像Hard一下跟人音一下跟背景音(基本都修好了)
2.normal基本不需要紅線(我把紅線上的基本都移走了)
3.不要重疊(我盡力)
end)

[Wooden]
最後終於來到了最簡單的diff，同時限制也和normal很類似，首先滑條速度也不該和stone iron一樣1.4，我覺得1.0或1.1剛好(改1.1ok??)
1. 新的mapping起點請從00:00:383 - 開始，紅線當然也要改到這個位置起頭(最後一次吐槽，是400)
2. 和normal一樣別隨便擺休息時間，特別是KIAI中，擺的音要順暢，除非必要不然請維持固定的節拍長度(像00:42:133 (2,3,1) - 不知道你到底在跟什麼音，同時也會讓新手很難分辨你這個怎麼玩，另外請別放在紅tick上(修好了，如果沒記錯沒跟紅線了)
Easy大多數音樂都是放在白線上的，只有少數的點可以放紅線上(好像)，而且紅線上的譜面還是要用滑條來讓新手可以容易了解和分辨和打擊(主流移至白線)
3. DS全部都要一致，而且Easy不可以有過多的遮擋和重疊(看不懂ds拉~但我沒重疊了)
Easy的話就跟跟長白線和白線基本上就好了，這是我的圖，你可以參考看看https://osu.ppy.sh/s/144668 (我自認為Easy Normal Hard都還算做得很正統
其他詳細的就不說了

先說聲抱歉有些地方語氣並不是很好，還有你的diff我沒有mod完整，我認為與其讓我一個一個慢慢挑毛病不如直接你自己重新map一遍(尤其是因為我的map和你不同，要是我全部都挑出來那還不如我自己做一個...
這mod花了3天才寫出來...
還有什麼問題可以在我in game的時候找我，加油，祝你能成功

m1223961117 wrote:

無尾熊來過了嗎...我是路過某個Queue時看到的，剛好你被列他的黑單了
我還以為這張在巴哈已經死了，在那邊我有給建議，這次碰巧又看到就來幫你一把
我被列黑單了!!(這不是重點好嗎)

[General]

1. 首先是Kiai Time，從Ai裡面看超過整張圖的1/3。我看過一次，感覺像是設錯位置，給你看看你要不要把Kiai重設成下面這樣↓
   How about change kiai Time like below?? I think more better than now you set
   00:39:400 - remove Kiai，add Kiai at 00:40:400 -
   01:43:400 - remove Kiai，add Kiai at 01:44:400 -
   02:56:400 - remove Kiai，add Kiai at 03:04:400 -
   我是覺得保持原樣就好了......有修的就wooden跟stone
   
2. Preview Point沒對好：00:39:150 (某大大，你欺騙我(是你太笨好嗎))
   
3. 你沒有放Finish，感覺就是少了什麼東西，把Finish放在這幾個點：(Both you don't add finish in each diff, so try add finish at these point)
   00:24:400 - 00:32:400 - 00:40:400 - 00:48:400 - 00:56:400 -
   01:04:400 - 01:12:400 - 01:28:400 - 01:44:400 - 01:52:400 -
   02:00:400 - 02:08:400 - 02:16:400 - 02:40:400 - 02:56:400 -
   03:04:400 - 03:12:400 - 03:20:400 - 03:28:400 - 03:36:400 -
   放wooden跟stone~因為究這兩個連音效都沒有
4. About Sirade's Diamond: Please fix to 0.4 http://puu.sh/gUScM/0fc356f12d.png (from Ai mod)

[Wooden]

• 
  00:04:650 (1) - 轉盤和下個物件要有4格白線的空格(在Easy難度)，建議是把它刪掉再拉幾條滑條帶過OK
  00:16:900 (2,3) - 在Easy和Normal裡要盡量避免和下一個Circle(00:18:400 (3) - )被Slider蓋到已經都更完畢
  02:39:400 (1,2) - DS沒對好OK
  
  節奏沒問題，不過就整體來看，怎麼都是同方向的水平和直滑條，感覺很像3年前以上的舊圖
  多嘗試讓滑條像這樣彎曲：01:50:400 (9) -
  有彎了拉!!拉好累呀@@
  還有，作圖是平面的，不要把它想得太難。試試把自己的圖修到連Auto都可以走得很順

[Stone]

• 
  00:04:400 (1) - Easy建議，把它砍掉跟背景音樂的節奏OK
  ※和無尾熊說的一樣，Normal要完全跟著DS走，00:12:400 (4,5,6,1,2) - 改好了~
  
  00:15:900 (4,2) - 一樣相疊的情形要避免，因為這是給新手玩的難度，所以要清楚的把物件露出來給玩家作判讀
  00:19:900 (5,1,2) - DS，Normal難度是沒有跳點這回事的
  00:23:900 (1) - ^
  00:38:400 (4,1) - ^，這很嚴重的偏離了，記得折返箭頭一次會讓Slider會到原點，所以頭和下個物件距離要正確
  00:58:400 (3,4) - ^
  01:17:400 (3,1) - ^
  01:24:400 (1,2) - ^
  01:26:400 (4,5) - 箭頭不要遮到(5)
  01:42:400 (4,1) - 為什麼不把它01:42:400 (4) - 作成這樣呢?? http://puu.sh/gUT61/bdead08f0c.jpg，蓋到下個滑條違規喔
  01:58:400 (4,5) - DS沒對好
  02:02:400 (3) - 折返箭頭要完全露出來，沒有例外。這是違規的，把它重新調整02:01:400 (2) -
  03:08:400 (6,7) - DS沒對好
  03:32:400 (6,7) - ^
  不用講了因為我都有修
  
  老實說你把相同節奏作完一次後完全複製到下個一模一樣的節奏然後貼上的這種行為可以，不過請你更動一下外觀好嗎??
  不要讓它和前面完全一樣，連位置都沒變動，這樣被抓還蠻好笑的...
  討厭被發現了@@
  
  和Easy有一樣的感覺，Slider都是往同個方向，折返也都是一個方向。物件是360度都可以轉的，我不相信你的腦袋沒有更多想法
  (怒)我NORMAL幾年沒玩啦(你有資格發怒嗎??)

速速Mod這一樣，Hard有機會在幫你吧，只要我上線隨時都可以抓我問
(歡迎再度光臨)

FinaIes FunkeIn wrote:

Hello! Thank you for entering my Q, i'll continue this mod as the week goes on

small_hins wrote:

Wooden

00:04:900 (3) - 移至 00:04:400 (3) 會比較好ok
00:06:900 (5) - 刪除這個我不打算刪掉他~感覺會怪怪的
00:08:400 (5) - 在這New Combo較好ok
00:21:900 (6) - 移至 00:22:150 (6) 會比較好移好啦
00:37:900 (3) - 移至 00:38:150 (3) 會比較好同上
00:56:400 (3) - 在這New Combo較好ok

小小意見~
希望您會接受
感覺你的combo設計好好@@

small_hins wrote:

啊~忘記送禮物了

Guest Difficulty(GD)接受嗎?
(GD Name : SH's Redstone)

osu file format v14

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sacred covenant wrote:

small_hins wrote:

啊~忘記送禮物了

Guest Difficulty(GD)接受嗎?
(GD Name : SH's Redstone)

SH's Redstone

osu file format v14

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Title:Revenge (Minecraft Creeper Song)
TitleUnicode:Revenge (Minecraft Creeper Song)
Artist:TryHardNinja feat. CaptainSparkelz
ArtistUnicode:TryHardNinja feat. CaptainSparkelz
Creator:sacred covenant
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Tags:Usher DJ got fallin' in lone Doc Exx Bootstrap Buckaroo Yves Lenaerts R&B Single Sirade
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464,248,201400,2,0,P|464:152|456:144,1,105.000000298023
424,152,201900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,96,202150,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,202400,2,0,P|224:152|184:160,1,105.000000298023
176,120,202900,2,0,P|104:128|56:144,1,105.000000298023
56,168,203400,2,2,P|32:240|40:288,1,105.000000298023
64,296,203900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,272,204150,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,304,204400,2,0,P|360:288|376:264,1,105.000000298023
352,240,204900,2,8,P|368:184|384:136,1,105.000000298023
408,128,205400,2,0,P|384:64|336:48,1,105.000000298023
328,80,205900,2,8,P|224:104|112:80,1,210.000000596046
80,64,206650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,192,206900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,328,207150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,207400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,207650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,288,207900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,288,208150,2,2,P|440:184|400:72,1,210.000000596046
376,96,208900,2,0,P|312:112|264:112,1,105.000000298023
248,72,209400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,209650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,128,209900,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,232,210150,2,0,P|160:240|216:216,1,105.000000298023
224,200,210650,2,0,L|320:272,2,105.000000298023
240,168,211400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,152,211650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,211900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,212150,6,0,P|432:208|472:184,1,105.000000298023
488,192,212650,2,2,P|496:112|296:72,1,315.000000894069
280,144,213650,2,0,P|200:152|160:144,2,105.000000298023
280,248,214400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,272,214650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,214900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,104,215150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,144,215400,6,8,P|256:128|176:64,1,210.000000596046
144,40,216150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,216400,12,4,217275,0:0:0:0:

能夠修一些部分嗎??
前面mod有說，不要休息時間@@
02:40:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊有點太單調了
02:16:525 (1) - 後面接的有點太趕了
02:54:400 (1) - 同上
當然以上純屬不專業mod，有些小問題幫你修好了ex因放錯(快或慢一格)
所已請麻煩用我上傳上去的進行修改
感謝GD
P.S譜給人的感覺不錯~

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

嗨，我又回來了
再來做個提點
1.背景圖太大我回外公家在改~
2.Redstone這個難度名是看不出難度定位的，必須改掉都忘記問他能改Iron了@@
3.for small_hins: 請利用DS功能，避免無法讀圖的狀況發生
以上

加油

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

嗨，我又回來了
再來做個提點
1.背景圖太大
2.Redstone這個難度名是看不出難度定位的，必須改掉 (可以把Redstone改成Iron )
3.for small_hins: 請利用DS功能，避免無法讀圖的狀況發生 晚點再改
以上

加油

Karen wrote:

时间太长了，我就挑两个diff说了。

Sirade's Diamond

1. First, please add hitsounds in your diff.
2. 00:03:400 (3,4,5) - overlap like this seems very very weird.
3. 00:07:400 (3,4,5) - ^
4. 00:10:275 - this overmap doesn't fit much the song imo.
5. 00:40:900 (2,3,4) - this is 1/4 but you used such a large spacing, really confusing.
6. 01:02:400 (1,2,3) - this is weird to play. Try stack 01:02:775 (2) - on 01:02:900 (3) - this slider's head.
7. 01:27:775 (2,3,4,1) - this spacing is too hard to read.
8. 01:55:400 (1,2,3,4) - why choose this kind of rhythm here? you didn't use this kind of rhythm in your diff which is not consistent and confusing.
9. 02:29:775 - i suggest to add a note here. If you take this advice, rework the placement here.
10. 03:21:400 (3,4,5) - should enlarge the spacing for consistency.

George wrote:

---General---
Fix metadata to be "TryHardNinja - Revenge (feat. CaptainSparklez)"I don't how to fix it because TryHardNinja feat. CaptainSparklez is in the artist
---Wooden---
00:21:900 (6,1) - I'd try to fix this so it doesnt overlapthere are not any overlap,did you use old version to mod??
00:28:400 (6) - turn this into a red point and put it on the middle tickI don't want to do this beause this sound is terrible
00:36:900 (2) - I'd curve this slider less fixed
00:40:400 (1,2,3) - fix DSfixed
00:44:400 (2,3,1) - ^fixed
00:48:400 (4) - curve this slider lessfixed
00:55:400 (2) - curve this slider lessfixed
00:56:400 (3,4) - Fix flowI don't know what is flow but i maybe fixed
01:00:400 (8,9,10) - ^maybe i fixed
01:02:400 (10,2) - Remove overlapthere are not any overlap
01:06:400 (4,5,6) - Fix DSfixed
01:12:900 (2) - Curve this slider lessfixed
01:12:900 (2,3,4) - fix flowmaybe i fixed

So just look for that stuff, I don't feel like modding the rest of this map, I dont want to take up a whole page.

Sirade wrote:

Well, sacred...
This is very unexpected but..
I think I have to send GD tomorrow instead of today (probably around next 18 hours) because my internet is down for many hours, I can't send my GD, and this message is sent from my mobile, which uses 3G and router currently doesn't work, which mean my PC can't use internet, so please wait...

Sorry for the delay...
Hope the router works tomorrow...

RVMathew wrote:

Hi there. Sorry for the late reply (you requested a mod around June): I just finished exams so I can now mod.

As my Mandarin is bad, I will mod in English. Note that whatever I say is my own opinion, so you do not have to follow it. Changes are separated into boxes.

General Changes

1) For difficulty names. Diff 1 is easiest and Diff 5 is the hardest.
Diff 1: Change from Wooden to Wood
Diff 2: Stone
Diff 3: SH's Iron
Diff 4: Gold
Diff 5: Diamond

Wood (Easy)

1) Hitsounding: At the very least, there should be clap hitsounds every 2nd and 4th beats, such as at 00:00:900 and 00:02:900 and so on. However, I notice that the 2nd and 4th beats are at times in the middle of sliders, so to add a clap hitsound to it, you will have to use the slidertick method.

Slidertick Method For Hitsounding
For this example, we will use the slider at 00:00:400, and we need to add the clap hitsound at 00:00:900

a) Go to your song folder, make a copy of the clap hitsound and rename it to soft-slidertick2
b) At 00:00:900, press Ctrl + Shift + P, and go to audio and select soft, custom 2. On the right hand side it should say S:C2
c) Immediately after that, say at 00:01:025, press Ctrl + Shift + P and go to audio and select soft default. On the right hand side it should say S
d) You should use a different clap sound as the slidertick, because the current one in the folder clashes with the song.

2) For general volume: 40% seems too low and if it is inaudible, the map will be unranked because of low hitsound volume. Bump it up to around 60%.

3) 00:12:400 and 00:13:400. I would recommend not using 2 separate notes; instead combine both of the notes to have a slider that starts at 00:12:400 and ends at 00:13:400.
Place the slider like this:

SPOILER

4) Add a note at 00:13:900 and then copy the previous slider and add it at 00:14:400. The pattern should look like this:

SPOILER

5) 00:30:400. Other instances include 01:38:400, 02:42:400, 02:47:400, 02:52:400, 03:00:400 and 03:08:400. You cannot use sliders which repeat more than 2 times because for easy and some normal difficulties, it is considered very hard for new players. I would recommend splitting the beat up into a note and a repeating slider, or split it into 2 sliders of equal length.

6) 00:04:900 Should be a new combo. Make sure that you make your new combo's every 8 beats.

7) 00:34:900 Curve like this?

SPOILER

8) 00:36:400 Assuming you made the above change, you need to rearrange the note.

9) 00:40:400 You added a hitfinish, but it also plays at the end of the slider. Remove the hitfinish, and then at 00:40:400 Double click the slider and add your hitsounds like so (only add hitfinish.

SPOILER

Other instances where it occurs: 01:28:400, 01:44:400, 02:08:400, 02:40:400, 02:56:400, 03:27:900.

10) 03:36:400 Make this into a slider and the slider ends at 03:37:150. Then at 03:37:150 Ctrl + Shift + P and make the hitsound volume 5%. I would like to use a spinner, but since the sound is short, a short spinner will make the map unrankable.

11) Aesthetic Purposes. Some Sliders which have the same length can be copied since you can create beautiful patterns.
Instances include: 00:10:900 (copy the slider at 00:08:900, 00:42:400 (copy 00:40:400), 01:30:400 (copy 01:28:400), 02:58:400 (Copy 02:56:400)

12) Add a note at 01:17:900 like this:

SPOILER

13) 03:24:400 to 03:24:900 and 03:25:900 to 03:26:400, use sliders since they fit with the vocals.

General note: Try and restructure the placement of the notes, because right now the flow is fine but aesthetically it does not look right. Get someone else to check map aesthetics.

Stone (Normal)

1) See point 1 on easy about hitsounds. In fact I assume that the other diffs may have the same issue. Just check to make sure before you do anything.

2) For general volume: 40% seems too low and if it is inaudible, the map will be unranked because of low hitsound volume. Bump it up to around 60%.

3) Check your combo's are every 8 beats. Some combo's have varying length, especially around the chorus.

4) Follow point 10 on the easy difficulty.

5) On normal difficulties, you can stack beats. At times this will make the map more aesthetically pleasing.
Instances include: (00:59:900 and 01:00:400 stack), (01:59:900, 02:00:150 and 02:00:400 stack). You may find some of your own.

6) See point 9 on easy difficulty about hitfinish. The same problem can be found here.

7)

SPOILER

If you notice this area, you can see that the distance between notes are not consistent, which may feel weird to some players. Try and make your distances between notes consistent as that is good practice and makes your map a lot more pleasing to the eye.

8)

SPOILER

See above image. There are more instances. Try and find them yourself so you can understand what I am getting at.

SH's Iron (Hard-)

1) For general volume: 40% seems too low and if it is inaudible, the map will be unranked because of low hitsound volume. Bump it up to around 60%.

2) 00:12:400 The slider is 1/4 tick too long. Shorten it to 00:12:650.
Other instances where it occurs: 00:20:650, 00:21:150, 00:36:650, 00:37:150, 00:37:650

3) Maybe make this one CS4 to keep it in line with the next hardest diff? If not then we make the next diff CS5.

4) 01:12:400 Why break? I would recommend mapping this area. Other instance where it occurs: 02:52:525 (Perhaps put a spinner here if you want).

5) 02:56:900 Copy and paste slider 1 and orient it to the current position to make it look nice.

6)

SPOILER

The note here looks really squashed next to the slider. I would rearrange the notes after that long slider.

7) 03:37:150 Spinner ends here, and add a timing point here; make the volume 5%.

Gold (Hard)

1) For general volume: 40% seems too low and if it is inaudible, the map will be unranked because of low hitsound volume. Bump it up to around 60%.

2) It feels quite easy for the star rating. That said, some notes are not evenly spaced, so I would check that.

3) 03:36:400 Make this into a slider and the slider ends at 03:37:150. Then at 03:37:150 Ctrl + Shift + P and make the hitsound volume 5%. I would like to use a spinner, but since the sound is short, a short spinner will make the map unrankable.

4) Hit sounding. Again I am referring to adding claps. You can use the hitsound copier (search on google) and then copy hitsounds from one difficulty to another for consistency).

5)

SPOILER

Don't place note 5 like that because it does not look good. I would place the note an even distance, mirroring note 3 like so:

SPOILER

. In addition fix the slider as the shape is uneven.

6)

SPOILER

Try this pattern as it feels much better in my opinion. You can always revert back if you do not want to use this one.

7) 00:26:650 Bad curve. Reduce the amount of curve because it looks so compressed.

Sirade's Diamond (Insane)

1) Hitsound volume. I understand what effect you are trying to achieve with the hitsound volume. However, the beginning is inaudible and will lead to an immediate unrank. If I were you, I would shift all values by at least 40%. However, the max hitsound volume should be 65%.

2) 03:36:400 Make this into a slider and the slider ends at 03:37:150. Then at 03:37:150 Ctrl + Shift + P and make the hitsound volume 5%. I would like to use a spinner, but since the sound is short, a short spinner will make the map unrankable.

3) Make sure there are hitclaps in the beginning of the song.

4)

SPOILER

Slider 2 is not curved properly. Fix that please.

5)

SPOILER

I would stack this since the notes look weirdly placed. In addition, some triples feel too far apart, but as it is an insane that may not be the case. I would check this with someone else just to be sure.

6)

SPOILER

It looks better if slider 3 is pointing down a little bit more.

7)

SPOILER

Perhaps another difficult stream? Again check because I may be wrong.

8) Stack leniency must be between 0.3 and 0.9. If you want to keep the spaced notes, you can always disable distance snap for that area.

Final thoughts: The map needs improving but overall you are getting there.

Good luck and sorry for the late reply. If you need anymore help, PM me (goes to guest mappers as well).

I must go now as my flight awaits.