hihi from my queue
sorry i got super lazy LOL orz
[General]
the SB at the beginning.... (and end) feels like my computer going crazy and about to explode >: Mainly because it doesnt really match with the music i guess, idk your call on what to do
timing sounds off but it seems like you still havent applied Near's points hm
[Easy]
A lot of short combos, I recommend you change NC pattern to once every 2 measures so you wouldnt have a NC pattern like 00:07:690 (1,2,1,1) - 1,2,1,1
00:07:690 (1) - maybe a whistle on the reverse?
00:56:216 (1) - this rhythm sounds off because i think the notes on the white ticks (esp. 00:57:227 -) are stronger than this one on the red tick
01:06:325 (3) - ^
01:08:347 (1,4) - this is easily symmetrical, so why not?
01:12:391 (1,2) - some copy paste and rotate 180 degrees would look a lot better!
nice easy w
[Normal]
00:01:625 (1) - 00:02:130 - sounds like a fairly large note you should map imo
00:07:437 (1) - just my 2 cents on the rhythm cuz i think the upbeats have more emphasis here
00:19:822 (5) - i wouldnt really recommend more than 1 reverses in normals, so consider splitting this into 2 1/2 sliders
00:39:788 (5,6,7) - this doesn't sound good because before you had a constant 1/2 rhythm going on then suddenly you go into straight 1/1's which means you stopped mapping the instruments even though they're still going, so it sounds empty
00:45:095 (7) - same as earlier
00:52:930 (2) - 00:57:480 (4) - remove clap on the end (or is this intentional o3o)
00:53:941 (4) - 01:01:018 (2) - usually i dont care about small misstacks like this but this one is reaaally off ><
01:03:040 (1) - the whistle doesnt really emphasize this note enough, u should have more of a percussion hitsound on this (also remove NC cuz it breaks consistency)
01:04:304 (1) - this is the same rhythm as 00:48:128 (1,2) - 00:50:150 (1,2) - 01:06:325 (1,2,3) - I hope you can be more consistent with your rhythms
^not just this actually, a couple others too
[Hard]
00:10:218 (2) - missing clap
00:36:250 (2) - why ignore the white tick in the middle of this slider?
00:47:876 (5,6,1) - 01:22:248 (5,6,1) - hm i think this might be a bit hard for hard (lol) consider stacking?
00:51:414 (4) - this isnt really following anything, not the vocals cuz vocals is on the blue tick..
00:54:952 (3,4,5) - hm looks tricky
01:23:006 (2) - follow vocals this way
01:28:693 (1) - spinner starts in such an awkward place imo, it'd be better if it was 01:28:440 - or 01:29:072 -
[Mocchi]
Mochi!?
00:02:888 (6,7,8) - WOW that's a big triangle jump here; you should make them similar to 00:04:657 (4,5,6,7,1) - since its a similar rhythm
00:12:619 (4) - 1/4 jump like this? wow
00:12:745 (1,2) - 00:11:734 (1,2) - these 2 are the same rhythms but different spacing i think it's best to space the 2nd one out (makes the stream after easier to play imo)
00:25:887 (1,2) - kills your spacing because it was spaced out then you get this which is close together
00:29:931 (1,2) - same as above, space these out?
00:49:139 (3,4,5) - please nerf
00:52:172 (1,2) - um, overmapped?
01:28:693 (1) - same as hard
just the 1/4 patterns are tricky i guess, also be careful not to place kicksliders that don't end on anything in the music cuz that's overmapping
Good luck and have fun!!