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Beniiro Litmus - Rin to Shite Saku Hana no Gotoku (Full Ver.

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lzy
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Topic Starter
lzy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月28日 at 5:03:07

Artist: Beniiro Litmus
Title: Rin to Shite Saku Hana no Gotoku (Full Ver.)
Source: Pop'n Music 15 Adventure
Tags: konami pop kara no kyoukai
BPM: 95
Filesize: 17417kb
Play Time: 02:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. 5Button (3.24 stars, 186 notes)
  2. 7Button (4.45 stars, 378 notes)
  3. 9Button (4.78 stars, 672 notes)
Download: Beniiro Litmus - Rin to Shite Saku Hana no Gotoku (Full Ver.)
Download: Beniiro Litmus - Rin to Shite Saku Hana no Gotoku (Full Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My second map

this is my favorite song in pop. it's awesome OwO

also a aaaaawesome kara no kyoukai's mad with this song in it(also have lyrics)
hope u enjoy it

3.17 some fix in each diff
3.18 changed diff name
3.20 added custom hitsound plz redownload it.. thx xier:333

Special thanks:xierbaliti 3kinnagi DeeN Hintendo~
5Button - done
7Button - done
9Button - done
Last edited by lzy , edited 34 times in total.
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
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xierbaliti
lol I love this song.

a bit modding in QQ.

soft音效的部份似乎需要無聲的sliderslide和slidertick.

我給cLaZY難度+了音效 中醫看看._.

Download: Beniiro Litmus - Rin to Shite Saku Hana no Gotoku (Full Ver.) (lzy) [cLaZY with hitsounds].osu

Download: hitsounds.rar
Last edited by xierbaliti , edited 1 time in total.
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
awesome MAD!
awesome map!
awesome lzy!
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]
  1. 所有难度设置一个相同的preview postion
  2. 标题Rin to shite saku hana no gotoku应该写为Rin to Shite Saku Hana no Gotoku
  3. 空之境界?那么source应该是Kara no Kyoukai或者The Garden of sinners吧?嗯...Pop'n Music游戏里的? 好吧...
  4. 我下载的文件夹里有flv文件但是editor里不会放出来,应该是命名的原因(我这显示文件名是乱码),最好重命名为英文和数字的,记得修改osu文件里的相关code
[Timing]
  1. 第一个offset : 468
  2. 第二个offset : 24470


[7button]
  1. 00:08:573 (5) - 间距有误,太近了
  2. 01:07:169 (x) - KIAI这开始
  3. 01:20:420 (x) - KIAI这结束
  4. 01:45:083 - 01:49:868 - 这一串用soft音效比较好
  5. 01:53:181 (2) - 这个有点难按,建议去掉这个然后让1多反弹一次
  6. 02:03:120 (x) - KIAI这开始
  7. 02:34:776 (11) - soft finish
[9button]
  1. 00:08:573 (5) - spacing还是有问题
    ...怎么和感觉和7 button前面部分很多一样orz,这样是不行的
  2. 00:53:181 (3,4) - 间距有误,3太远,4太近
  3. 01:07:169 (x) - KIAI这开始
  4. 01:20:420 (x) - KIAI这结束
  5. 02:03:120 (x) - KIAI这开始
  6. 03:10:850 (x) - KIAI这开始
还有很重要的两点
整个map都没有一点音效(或者用得太少以至于我没听出来),应该多加些音效
还有点就是两个难度都偏难
还至少要做一个简单点的难度
然后两个难度后面部分有些1/6拍的2连打再接一个note那个感觉不好,不如用1/4拍的3连打
lxy
108 posts
Joined March 2009
lxy
中医啥时候回来触我~ :lol:
Last edited by lxy , edited 1 time in total.
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. 所有难度设置一个相同的preview postion

    等其他难度完成了会加的 :)
  2. 标题Rin to shite saku hana no gotoku应该写为Rin to Shite Saku Hana no Gotoku

    done
  3. 空之境界?那么source应该是Kara no Kyoukai或者The Garden of sinners吧?嗯...Pop'n Music游戏里的? 好吧...
  4. 我下载的文件夹里有flv文件但是editor里不会放出来,应该是命名的原因(我这显示文件名是乱码),最好重命名为英文和数字的,记得修改osu文件里的相关code
done

[Timing]
  1. 第一个offset : 468
  2. 第二个offset : 24470
fixed


[7button]
  1. 00:08:573 (5) - 间距有误,太近了
  2. 01:07:169 (x) - KIAI这开始
  3. 01:20:420 (x) - KIAI这结束
  4. 01:45:083 - 01:49:868 - 这一串用soft音效比较好
  5. 01:53:181 (2) - 这个有点难按,建议去掉这个然后让1多反弹一次
  6. 02:03:120 (x) - KIAI这开始
  7. 02:34:776 (11) - soft finish
7button还没开始做。。。直接复制的9BUTTON还没改。。注明有点不醒目啊Q_Q 不过确实写得7button - 1%

[9button]
  1. 00:08:573 (5) - spacing还是有问题

    done


    ...怎么和感觉和7 button前面部分很多一样orz,这样是不行的
  2. 00:53:181 (3,4) - 间距有误,3太远,4太近

    fixed

  3. 01:07:169 (x) - KIAI这开始
  4. 01:20:420 (x) - KIAI这结束
  5. 02:03:120 (x) - KIAI这开始
  6. 03:10:850 (x) - KIAI这开始
fixed

还有很重要的两点
整个map都没有一点音效(或者用得太少以至于我没听出来),应该多加些音效

我会加的


还有点就是两个难度都偏难
还至少要做一个简单点的难度

7BUTTON会做简单的:D


然后两个难度后面部分有些1/6拍的2连打再接一个note那个感觉不好,不如用1/4拍的3连打

是哪来着。。我好像没用过1/6。。。
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Hello izy =)

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-BG.jpeg, search for a better img and resize to 1024x768
-okey.. i don't know if u are looking for aproval or ranked, but u need a easy o normal dif with less of 3.5 stars

[7Button]
-Nice =)

[9Button]
-don't copy and paste
-+1 Circle Size (more small)
-00:53:909 (1)(1)(1)(1) this new combos are necesary?

mmmm.... call me again when u finish the map.
Star for now.
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
好歌好图啊…如果tobe来个他那个guestdiff就完美了…(逃
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

Astom wrote:

Hello izy =)

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-BG.jpeg, search for a better img and resize to 1024x768
-okey.. i don't know if u are looking for aproval or ranked, but u need a easy o normal dif with less of 3.5 stars

[7Button]
-Nice =)

[9Button]
-don't copy and paste
-+1 Circle Size (more small)
-00:53:909 (1)(1)(1)(1) this new combos are necesary?

mmmm.... call me again when u finish the map.
Star for now.
thx i will fix:33
and...7b is copy from 9b and it not finished..so..9b is the original version=-=..

then...i am lzy not izy Q_Q
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom

lzy wrote:

Astom wrote:

Hello izy =)

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-BG.jpeg, search for a better img and resize to 1024x768
-okey.. i don't know if u are looking for aproval or ranked, but u need a easy o normal dif with less of 3.5 stars

[7Button]
-Nice =)

[9Button]
-don't copy and paste
-+1 Circle Size (more small)
-00:53:909 (1)(1)(1)(1) this new combos are necesary?

mmmm.... call me again when u finish the map.
Star for now.
thx i will fix:33
and...7b is copy from 9b and it not finished..so..9b is the original version=-=..

then...i am lzy not izy Q_Q
haha sry for that, my mistake lzy
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
general
删除 .osb 文件
或许[00:24:47]之后的offest应该减去3~5ms
soft-hitfinish的custom音效似乎没用上?可以删去

7Button

[00:24:47] 这里之后的所有绿线的 inherit previous timing settings全部+8ms

[00:24:47] 这之前的sliderside音比较闹,请使用Custom音效 使其无声
[00:50:23] (3,4) 间距太近
[00:58:70] 向左一格
[01:20:42] 这里结束kiai
[02:02:38] 这里开始kiai
[02:16:37] 这里结束kiai
[02:37:53] 向右一格
[02:58:35] add finish

9Button

[00:24:47] 这里之后的所有绿线的 inherit previous timing settings全部+8ms

[00:24:47] 这之前的sliderside音比较闹,请使用Custom音效 使其无声
[00:44:16] 为什么间距突然变小了
[01:20:42] 这里结束kiai
[02:02:38] 这里开始kiai
[02:16:37] 这里结束kiai
[03:10:85] 这里开始kiai
[03:47:66] 这里结束kiai

star
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

LKs wrote:

general
删除 .osb 文件
或许[00:24:47]之后的offest应该减去3~5ms
soft-hitfinish的custom音效似乎没用上?可以删去

7Button

[00:24:47] 这里之后的所有绿线的 inherit previous timing settings全部+8ms

[00:24:47] 这之前的sliderside音比较闹,请使用Custom音效 使其无声
[00:50:23] (3,4) 间距太近
[00:58:70] 向左一格
[01:20:42] 这里结束kiai
[02:02:38] 这里开始kiai
[02:16:37] 这里结束kiai
[02:37:53] 向右一格
[02:58:35] add finish

9Button

[00:24:47] 这里之后的所有绿线的 inherit previous timing settings全部+8ms

[00:24:47] 这之前的sliderside音比较闹,请使用Custom音效 使其无声
[00:44:16] 为什么间距突然变小了
[01:20:42] 这里结束kiai
[02:02:38] 这里开始kiai
[02:16:37] 这里结束kiai
[03:10:85] 这里开始kiai
[03:47:66] 这里结束kiai

star

fixed

thx:33
yuyuyuko
57 posts
Joined October 2009
yuyuyuko
nice map & song :)
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
你媽LZY神MAPPER啊不解釋

用太鼓音效會很棒 沒什麽好挑的
rustbell
734 posts
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rustbell
送分MAP啊1200W+
cool map wwwwww
star




建议难度名别用alazy...
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kiddly
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kiddly
0.0
Sagisawa-Yukari
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Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari
Star~
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

xierbaliti wrote:

lol I love this song.

a bit modding in QQ.

soft音效的部份似乎需要無聲的sliderslide和slidertick.

我給cLaZY難度+了音效 中醫看看._.

神音效不解释。。
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
少了個音效._.

Download: hitsounds.rar
otakumak
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otakumak
star~
ZeTia
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ZeTia
awesome D:
ignorethis
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ignorethis
神map pubble 不解释
soulfear
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soulfear
わたしと関係ないわ、ただ醤油を買いに来ただけ．
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Pubbled already! I can see why, too
Still tried to find suggestions though, nothing you have to change

5Button-
awesome

7Button-
could use a higher overall diff, gets a bit clustered, but no big deal

9Button-
00:54:926 (1,2) - its hard to tell that the (1) was a 1/4 beat because of your custom spacing (most would expect this part to start on a white tick), I mean the formation before this makes players believe this starts later (imo), remove (1)? or change the custom spacing?
01:52:809 (1) - maybe reduce a repeat? (kinda a personal preference)

hmm, yea, if this wasn't already pubbled, I would've pubbled it >:
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

Shinxyn wrote:

Pubbled already! I can see why, too
Still tried to find suggestions though, nothing you have to change

5Button-
awesome

7Button-
could use a higher overall diff, gets a bit clustered, but no big deal

9Button-
00:54:926 (1,2) - its hard to tell that the (1) was a 1/4 beat because of your custom spacing (most would expect this part to start on a white tick), I mean the formation before this makes players believe this starts later (imo), remove (1)? or change the custom spacing?
01:52:809 (1) - maybe reduce a repeat? (kinda a personal preference)

hmm, yea, if this wasn't already pubbled, I would've pubbled it >:

thx i will fix:33
Dotsu
996 posts
Joined March 2009
Dotsu
需不需要我给你来个Guest Diff？（easy hard都行）
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

impossiblexu wrote:

需不需要我给你来个Guest Diff？（easy hard都行）

这回就这样全靠自己了:|
以后想要GUEST DIFF再来找你吧
abalee
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abalee
lol 5key? 7key? 9key?

5button:
02:29:251 (1,1) - Spacing.

9button:
01:17:472 (1,2) - Spacing.
03:02:012 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to remove finish at these notes.
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

abalee wrote:

lol 5key? 7key? 9key?

5button:
02:29:251 (1,1) - Spacing.

9button:
01:17:472 (1,2) - Spacing.
03:02:012 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to remove finish at these notes.

fixed thx:33
ah..it's from pop portable so it is button not key :P
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Chacha17
Shouldn't the source be Pop'n Music 15 Adventure? and i think that (Full Ver.) should be removed in the title since it really is the original one? I mean, the shorter version was from Beatmania IIDX 16 Empress and this one came from Pop'n Music.

and this needs a Kanoko background :(
abalee
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abalee
I finally post bubbled here.
lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

Chacha17 wrote:

Shouldn't the source be Pop'n Music 15 Adventure? and i think that (Full Ver.) should be removed in the title since it really is the original one? I mean, the shorter version was from Beatmania IIDX 16 Empress and this one came from Pop'n Music.

and this needs a Kanoko background :(
thank ur star:33
i will fix..because a same song(short ver.) ranked before so i use full ver.
hmm...but the vedio is kara no kyoukai..i think that bg is better:p
anyway.thank u for ur advise:333
abalee
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abalee

abalee wrote:

I finally post bubbled here.
Sorry I'm lazy.
Starrodkirby86
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Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Fun. <3
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
Grats~
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
好图!

好久没有图让我花60+的PC来搞定了...[当然只是7BUTTON]

综合性很强的 >_>
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
I know this is too late to fix , but need to say

Lyrics in movie are incorrect about half of them.
yeah I know it won't matter cept Japanese native or who can read em, but nm yeah too late to fix...

If I can find this song before ranked , nm too late.
Beuchi
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Beuchi

dvorak wrote:

I know this is too late to fix , but need to say

Lyrics in movie are incorrect about half of them.
yeah I know it won't matter cept Japanese native or who can read em, but nm yeah too late to fix...

If I can find this song before ranked , nm too late.
Blame the creator of the video then (I think lzy didn't make the video, if he did, it's my bad). If the problem was on a Storyboard, maybe it could be fixed...

EDIT: WTF why did you change the Thread Name?! o_o
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lzy
183 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
lzy

dvorak wrote:

I know this is too late to fix , but need to say

Lyrics in movie are incorrect about half of them.
yeah I know it won't matter cept Japanese native or who can read em, but nm yeah too late to fix...

If I can find this song before ranked , nm too late.

oh i find that video in niconico,i think all will be right but...sry :(
lzy
183 posts
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Topic Starter
lzy

Colin Hou wrote:

好图!

好久没有图让我花60+的PC来搞定了...[当然只是7BUTTON]

综合性很强的 >_>

:33
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