Hi
M4M from your queue
[General]
Diff names are unrankable
Only the highest diff in a mapset can have a custom name (Wandering)
Change level 40 to normal
[Level 40]
Ar 8.0/Hp 7.0/OD7.0 WTF, it's normal, set AR to 5.0, HP to 4.5 and OD to 4.5 at MAX
Remember to Always use Distance snap in lower difficulties
00:06:796 (1,2) - These are better if they are like this
00:08:587 (3) - Move to 00:08:363 (You need to change location of (1,2,3) to keep the Distance proper
00:10:378 (1) - Remove New combo, instead give it to 00:10:826 (2) (It's recommended to do a new combo at a Big white tick
00:13:512 (1,2) - ^^
00:11:721 (3) - Move to 00:11:497
00:15:303 (3) - Move to 00:15:080
00:17:094 (3) - Don't use sliders with red points in calm songs. Red points usually mean harsh sounds, while grey points feel calm
00:18:885 (3) - Move to 00:19:109 (3) - In this song, the beat is very weak, so I recommend you to follow the tune of it, and not the beat
00:25:154 (3) - New combo, the tutututu appears, so that's why I think it feels better
00:25:378 (4) - Too curvy, it gives a bad flow (Try to do what I said in the spoilerbox)
SPOILER
This is how I'd do it, the slider also blankets the circle, which is Always nice (In case you don't know what a blanket it, it means the the slider goes perfectly with a(n) (approach)circle. As you see in the image, the slider follows the approach circle
00:26:721 (2) - What did I tell you about red points? This slider is a no-go, also, such wiggle sliders are unrankable afaik. Also, this slider would be better if it was 1/2, like
00:28:065 (3,4) - Please make this 1 reverse slider, 3/4 is kinda weird for normal in circles
00:30:527 (3) - Please think about distance, also, because it goes straight up, it doesn't flow really good. Try moving it to the right (For example 408:200)
00:32:318 (1) - Red point slider, but this one is most definitely unrankable afaik, I really recommend changing
00:39:035 (6) - Distance, place it farter from (5)
00:43:960 (3) - Red point slider, which I recommend changing, but it has good flow. Maybe add grey points to it so it looks like this
This one is pure own preference (Note, my slider looks really ugly, if you want a curve, don't copy the things from mine
Also, DISTANCE
00:46:647 (4,5) - You know what I'm gonna say, don't you? Red points, however, grey flow really well, for example
00:49:333 (3,4) - Make (3) a reverse slider, and place a note at the big white tick
00:57:393 (1,2) - You can't have more than 1 reverse on a small slider in Easy/Normal, change
01:00:975 (6) - New combo (Combo of 11 is way to long for Easy/Normal)
01:02:542 (9) - Jump is way to big for Normal, change to make distance smaller
00:57:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Rhythm is really weird (Song's rhythm), thus this part feel weird, not much you can do about it, except use some reverses for same time differences, for example (3,4,5, as they are all 1 beat apart)
01:20:677 (1) - Distance
01:22:468 (4) - ^^
01:23:363 (1,2,3,4) - Please look at the distance
01:29:632 (1) - Slider looks kinda ugly, and it has a red point
01:38:587 (6) - ^^
01:40:378 (1) - ^^
01:45:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part needs some fixing. Set beat snap divisor to 1/1, and press ctrl shift D (Create polygon circles)
Set that to 5, with offset angle of 18, and distance of 0.6. Then move the notes un the upper bar to get the star with DS of 0.97. Then moveall the notes
01:58:288 (1) - This feels really out of place. A break, and then a spinner, and then the end. Or delete it, or move it to 01:47:766 (1) - , ending at 01:51:124
Also, consider mapping the rest, Afaik, all diff must have same start/end time
[Wandering]
Ar --> 7.0 (It's quite slow, map +song)
Hp --> 6.0 (Seriously, 9.0?)
Od --> 6.0 (Seriously, 9.0?)
I'll NOT note the red point sliders, as I have seen, you used quite a lot
00:06:796 (1) - Delete, it seems better to start on the Big white tick
00:09:035 (6) - Never EVER use 3/4, when the music is 1/2 or 1/1
00:09:482 (7) - Distance, compared with (6) and (8) is weird. Even though it's hard, people will think, it all 1/4 away from each toher
00:14:408 (1) - Make it 1/2 reverslider, a 1/2 slider + circle, or 3 1/2 circles
00:16:647 (4) - Distance is way to big for 1/4. People will thik it's 1/2
00:17:094 (5) - WTF, there is no 1/8 in the song, let alone 1/4
00:21:348 (1) - move to 00:21:404 and delete 1 reverse
00:24:930 (1) - This one uses 1/6, not 1/8
00:26:721 (3,4,5) - The overlap looks really ugly tbh, place (4) a little higher
00:32:318 (1) - God, this slider, try to make it like this
00:34:781 (2,3,4) - Make it one 3/4 reverse slider
00:50:229 (5) - The only hitsound in the map huh?
01:00:975 (1,2) - These two have quite ugly overlap
01:03:662 (4) - Please don't. Also, silencing slider heads is unrankable afaik
01:17:990 (3) - ^^
01:18:662 (1) - Red point sliders like these are generally okay, but ones like 01:19:333 (2) - aer so awful imho
01:33:885 (5) - Too high, it overlaps with HP bar, which is afaik unrankable
01:42:617 (3,4) - Please don't. Also, silencing slider heads is unrankable afaik
01:45:751 (8) - New combo? The combo gets kinda long
TBH, I really like the way this kiai is mapped
02:09:930 (7,8) - Reayyl ugly overlap
02:12:057 (6) - This flows terrible with (5), for the best flow, make it a weak normal curve, or make it smth like this
02:15:751 (6) - Low distance feels really bad tbh. I'd recommend stacking it to (5)
02:17:990 (1,4) - Wow, I really LOVE this blanket
02:26:945 (1) - Long sliders don't really fit, make it 1/2
Please, also map the last second. Ending at (4) feels so blank. I recommend
Good luck!
