Hello cupcake, strong mod incoming.
Easy
00:05:089 (2) - Testplaying it I noticed that you can improve the flow a bit by moving this slider somehere near the head of the previous slider (00:03:089 (1) - ), a good place would be near the center of the screen, x232 y212.
00:12:422 (3) - Always try to emphasize the strong beat on the beginning of a slider and not at the end of it, like you did with 00:11:089 (1) - , you can't really change now because this part is already made and changing it would completely ruin the flow, but try to remember this the next time c:
00:15:089 (3) - I REALLY hate modding nazis, but I could notice this blanket is a bit wrong testplaying it, I'd strongly recommend to fix it.
00:19:756 (2) - You can improve the flow by rotating this slider a bit, press Ctrl + Shift + R, check Selection Centre and turn it 15º, see if you like it, also if you accept this, don't forget to adjust the 00:21:089 (3) - DS.
00:31:089 (3) - You can rotate this like I mentioned above, same thing, but this time would be -10º.
00:31:089 (3) - Again with the same slider. Do the same thing I've mentioned above about the strong beat, but this is REALLY recommended to be changed since it's a new section of the song. You can delete the repeat and add 2 notes after it, after that you just need to adjust 00:33:089 (2) - and 00:33:756 (3) - spacing. I did an example for you:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442555.
01:22:589 (1) - Instead of adding a slider here ending on a strong beat, what do you thing about adding a note, and here 01:23:089 - you add a big slider ending on 01:24:256 - . Here is an example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442711.
01:37:756 (1) - Stop starting new sections with ending a slider on a strong beat ;_;
01:44:089 (2) - I know what you tried to do here, but it would be better if you move this note to somewhere near x336 y132.
01:49:422 (2) - Same thing here. You can move it to x500 y204 to stay consistent with the one I meantioned above and improve quite a bit the flow.
01:50:756 (4) - And here you can move to x364 y220 to improve the transition between this note and 01:51:089 (1) - asadadasdadasdasdadsadasd. But this is not that necessary, since the next slider is straight.
01:52:089 (2) - Again moving notes to improve the flow, move it to x276 y68.
01:56:756 (3,4) - I noticed this blanket testplaying it too, you should fix it too ;_;
01:59:089 (6,1) - This is beautiful \:D/
02:20:422 (5) - You can, instead of ending the slider on 02:21:756 - you can end it on 02:01:422 -, since the vocal ends here and a strong beat starts on 02:21:756 - , that would be MUCH better than the way it's now. See if you like:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442795.
02:29:256 (5) - You remember the last kiai I've mentioned you should add a note and then add a big slider? If you did that you should do here too.
02:45:756 (1,2) - You were always adding 1-repeat sliders, I don't know if this is just me, but it's confusing
03:33:422 (3) - Move it a bit to the left to improve the flow a bit, somewhere near x368 y132, and then fix 03:33:756 (4) - DS.
Normal
00:31:756 (4) - Again with the thing of ending on strong beats ;_; and you know, since it's a new section of the song, you should add a note there or a slider, and it could be easily done because you left a big break between this slider and 00:33:089 (1) - .
00:36:422 (3) - A bit too much nazi but you can do the thing of rotation here to improve the flow. This time would be 10º.
00:43:089 (1) - Try to reverse the slider, would be more beautiful and would improve the flow. See if you like c:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2442899.
00:45:089 (1) - Ctrl + G to improve the flow, and it wouldn't ruin the DS spacing too much. If you agree with this, just move 00:46:256 (2) - to x132 y284 and 00:46:756 (3) - to x256 y336.
01:06:756 (4) - Instead of stacking this note, what do you thing about moving it somewhere near the slider's end like x192 y112 for a better transition?
01:22:589 (6) - YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO HERE
01:59:089 (6) - You can put a curve here, where the slider is straight for aestheticals things, but I guess this is just a preference.
02:29:256 (3) - a
03:27:089 (1) - You didn't add a cicle on this beat on Easy, you should delete it to keep consistency, or add one on Easy.
Hard
00:13:422 (6) - I'm not sure about this spacing, while testplaying it I thought it was a 3/4 but it's a common 1/2, I suggest you to make a higher spacing and put it not too much closer to 00:13:089 (5) - .
00:18:756 (5) - Same thing here, this part is more ~intense~ than the previous one.
00:18:922 - You should add a note here to keep the consistence.
00:21:756 - At this part you should've increased the spacing, since it's a bit more strong, you can't do anything now because it's all made, but remember this next time :c
00:29:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You should REALLY increase the spacing here, this part is strong and the DS is the same as the previous part.
00:58:589 (2) - Not sure if it's just me, but it can confuse the players since you were adding only one slider with 4 repeats, I recommend doing the same here because of consistence and flow.
01:31:089 (3) - Would be better to move this note near the previous slider's end to improve the transitions plus flow. x232 y80.
01:49:422 (6) - The spacing is a bit low here, and this part of the song is more strong than the previous part, you should, instead of decreasing, increase the spacing here. Or if you don't want, try a repeat.
02:05:256 (2) - Same thing I mentioned before about the 1/4 slider.
02:30:922 (7) - You added a circle here, but you didn't on the previous kiai, you can delete this circle or add one on the other kiai.
02:49:756 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure if the players would read this properly because of the 1/4 sliders you added, they show a stream, players can think this is a continuation of the streams and booom, the miss it. You can increase the DS here.
03:37:256 (2) - Again, you know what to do here, a.
04:08:422 (1) - You didn't do this on Easy or Normal, I don't think it's a good idea to add only on Hard :c
02:09:756 That's really cool!
