Himeki Chifuyu wrote:

其实我还是第一次正式mod啊 鸭梨;w;

[Collab Normal]

00:27:730 (4) - NC?√
01:08:265 (4) - ^√
00:43:761 - 加个Circle?√
01:24:524 - 加个3/4小节的滑条或者转盘 finish收尾? (下面hard也是)√
01:05:975 (4) - 尾巴加个finish 然后音量拉小点? (后面少了个clap感觉略别扭)√
01:13:532 (1) - 滑条开头^√

排列还行 没啥想说的

[Hard]

00:18:570 (2) - NC在这里分吧
后面还有很多 你再看看 比如00:23:608 (5) - NC 00:24:524 (1) - 这个NC不要了 00:25:898 (6) - NC这里分
00:56:585 (5) - 这里不分别人会以为2345连着的 你看看你这里01:01:395 (6,7,8,9) - 其他的不说了我NC太差了ORZ修改了几组
00:20:631 (3) - 结尾的clap?√加掉了TAT
00:35:059 (1) - 中间少个音略别扭对VOCAL中。。。
00:36:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 顺序有点乱啊 改成三角形转圈 或者5、7移到1的位置√
00:51:318 (4) - 结尾来个finish? ；类似的01:05:975 (5) - √
01:19:944 (4) - 改成和2一样的折返吧

Yuyuko suki wrote:

HARD
00:20:402 - 00:20:517 - 2连√
00:25:211 (5) - 移到00:25:097 - 没按照你这样改。。不过修正了
00:35:059 (1) - 3拍对VOCAL。。。
就这么多吧。

SPOILER

我绝对不是来水KD的

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Collab Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:44:219, ends on 01:13:532

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:44:219, ends on 00:58:875

Mei wrote:

先马。。。今天写作业写久了orz

Crystal wrote:

good luck!

Crystal wrote:

good luck!

• 00:08:265 这里的绿线移到00:08:036 来， 这样让普通的clap变成s:c2的clap
  00:26:814 (4,7,1) - 这几个没加上24clap啊，前面类似的地方（00:19:028 (3,6) - ）都加了这里没道理不加
  00:29:104 (1,2) - 换一下NC
  你的NC排列有点乱，建议试试2个长白线一NC
  00:43:761 (8) - 突然用这个clap好突兀
  00:59:791 (3) - 滑条头上的clap移到尾巴上

• 
  00:35:059 (5) - 滑条尾巴漏clap

Mei wrote:

[hard]

• 00:08:265 这里的绿线移到00:08:036 来， 这样让普通的clap变成s:c2的clap
  00:26:814 (4,7,1) - 这几个没加上24clap啊，前面类似的地方（00:19:028 (3,6) - ）都加了这里没道理不加
  00:29:104 (1,2) - 换一下NC
  你的NC排列有点乱，建议试试2个长白线一NC
  00:43:761 (8) - 突然用这个clap好突兀
  00:59:791 (3) - 滑条头上的clap移到尾巴上

[normal]

• 
  00:35:059 (5) - 滑条尾巴漏clap

还有你这根本没有s:c1啊，红线直接s就行了

ZZHBOY wrote:

这个妹打了星标人美丽 我帮你打爆他
[General]
unused .wav files: normal-hitnormal2.wav 把这个删了
[Normal]
01:28:646 - useless time point把删了好
00:14:448 (6) - 间距好尴尬 还是和前面差了3/2拍 我认为也许可以去掉这个圈去掉了
00:22:005 (6) - 加个Normal clap好
00:35:975 (1,3) - 调整下形状把blanket好点好
00:40:555 (1) - 提前到00:42:387 - 结束 有必要和后面空的多点好
00:58:875 (1,2) - 低难度最好别放一起 把移开吧√
01:02:998 (2,3) - 低难度连续单点我认为并不好 也许可以考虑把01:03:227 (3) - 删了 √
01:07:807 (3) - 放328 304附近 这个包的好丑已调整
01:08:265 (1,2) - 移开 别放一起√
01:09:868 (1) - 这个感觉真的好丑 你可以试试这个 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3017736 √
建议在01:11:242 - 加个圈 只空一拍这样容易打点√
01:24:524 (1) - 这里没有任何理由用转盘 把转盘去了好好map了解ORZ
01:26:356 - 相反的我建议从这里放一个一直到01:28:646 - 结束的转盘 这样会比较好点好
[Hard]
00:07:578 - 加速去了 没必要类似加速的都去掉了
00:08:150 (5) - 这个snap的不对 这里不是四分拍我建议还是把这个圈去了好点 当然你也可以换成这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3017754嗯
00:10:326 (3) - 这里不是1/4 我建议把这个折返滑条换成一个1/2滑条 免得这里听的太乱好
00:15:822 (3) - 这个弧度怎么比其他几个大了点 调成一样会美观点已调整
00:22:005 (6) - 加个Normal clapOK
00:14:448 - 不要总是变速 没意义 hard就要做的清爽点
00:38:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个不适合放在hard里 节奏弄简单点吧改了QWQ
01:14:677 - 漏音√
01:15:364 (1,2) - 折返箭头和前一个滑条尾别碰到√
01:16:280 (3,4) - 也是建议直接用1/2的滑条免得声音听的乱√
01:22:005 - 建议这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3017800√
01:22:578 (7) - 这里不是四分拍 建议这个圈去了免得听的乱√
01:22:692 (3,4,5,6) - 也许这四个可以用一个滑条复制粘贴然后旋转 那样会好看点√

先改着吧 我去打爆妹

1. it's offset is little late. i think 240 better.

1. 00:08:265 (2) - better delete note this part.
2. 00:13:074 (4,5) - this 1/3 rhythm sound. change please
3. 00:35:059 (5,1) - Swap NC
4. 00:36:891 (3,1) - same (^)
5. 00:44:219 (2) - NC? cus start vocal this part.
6. 01:26:356 (1) - add finish

1. 00:13:074 - clap better

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi,

[General]

1. it's offset is little late. i think 240 better.

√

[Collab Normal]

1. 00:08:265 (2) - better delete note this part.i think it doesn't matter....
2. 00:13:074 (4,5) - this 1/3 rhythm sound. change please fixed
3. 00:35:059 (5,1) - Swap NCfixed
4. 00:36:891 (3,1) - same (^)√
5. 00:44:219 (2) - NC? cus start vocal this part.√
6. 01:26:356 (1) - add finish

√

[Hard]

1. 00:13:074 - clap better

√

this map set need Easy diff imo. add Easy diff after 3 get modding call me please

1. widescreen support没关
2. NC下的太频繁了，改成两个大白线一个NC
3. 00:17:644 (3,1) - 试试都用直滑条，然后避免00:16:728 (1,1) - 碰到
4. 01:24:972 - ？？这后面怎么不map，转盘前不用空这么多的
5. 00:14:438 - 加个圈试试

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[Easy]

1. widescreen support没关√
2. NC下的太频繁了，改成两个大白线一个NC好
3. 00:17:644 (3,1) - 试试都用直滑条，然后避免00:16:728 (1,1) - 碰到√
4. 01:24:972 - ？？这后面怎么不map，转盘前不用空这么多的了解。。。
5. 00:14:438 - 加个圈试试ZZB刚要我最好不要这个QWQ

Wing My Way wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:690 (2) - 类似这种叠到1上面试试 后面也是叠的好少EASY叠了不好吧QWQ
00:52:453 (2) - 建议改成1/4折返不太舒服的感觉。。。
00:58:865 (1,2) - 建议改成slider好
非kiai的物件到比kiai的物件数要密集orzQWQ
感觉Easy摆的太随意了

sodarose wrote:

M4M

[Easy]
00:28:636 (4) - 头尾对调？
01:16:270 (4) - ^
00:46:957 (5) - 结尾Finish
00:58:865 (1) - Finish
01:02:072 (5) - 结尾Finish
01:19:018 (3) - 拉直

Good luck

1. Rakuen suggests offset +10
2. artist is wrong maybe...other mapsets have オーイシマサヨシ as artist
   
3. normal-hitnormal2.wav is unused, must delete

1. 00:31:385 - remove finish since it doesn't fit music and isn't consistent with hard
2. 00:42:377 - add finish ^
3. 01:03:217 (2,3,4) - too many 1/2 gaps, please remove at least one of them. i suggest deleting 01:04:820 (4) - and extending previous slider to this time.
4. 01:08:484 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:24:514 (1) - unnecessary to end there, should end at 01:24:972

1. 00:08:255 (2) - snapped wrong since no sound on this tick. you have 3 choices: move circle to 00:08:178, delete circle, or delete circle and also end slider at 00:08:178
2. 00:10:087 (2) - also recommend deleting because sound on 00:10:087 is very faint and should not be followed
3. 00:11:919 (2) - same as 00:08:255 (2), delete or snap to 00:11:843
4. 00:28:636 (3,1) - spacing error?
5. 01:00:698 (5) - NC
6. 01:15:354 (3) - ^
7. 01:20:850 (3) - nc and 01:21:766 (1) - remove nc and 01:22:682 (4) - add nc (stay consistent with nc pattern)
8. 01:21:537 (4) - same thing i said earlier, sound is on 01:21:461
9. 01:23:369 (3) - this one is hard to tell, but it's definitely not on the 1/2 tick, so it's best to delete
10. 01:25:201 (2) - sound is on 01:25:125

1. 01:17:644 (2) - snap to 1/4

xxdeathx wrote:

some irc

2015-04-25 02:21 [ Abhor ]: 你好，请问能看一张bubbled tv size吗？QWQ
2015-04-25 02:22 xxdeathx: 哪一个
2015-04-25 02:22 [ Abhor ]: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/601661 Oishi Masayoshi - KIMIJYANAKYA DAMEMITAI]
2015-04-25 02:23 xxdeathx: hmm
2015-04-25 02:23 [ Abhor ]: QWQ
2015-04-25 02:30 xxdeathx: 对不起，这张图不该泡的
2015-04-25 02:30 [ Abhor ]: ORZ
2015-04-25 02:31 xxdeathx: 还有很多objects被snap错了
2015-04-25 02:31 [ Abhor ]: 新人一只。。。
2015-04-25 02:31 xxdeathx: 你去叫zzhboy帮你看snap
2015-04-25 02:31 [ Abhor ]: 唔。。。好
2015-04-25 02:31 xxdeathx: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/647119 Oishi Masayoshi - KIMIJYANAKYA DAMEMITAI]
2015-04-25 02:32 xxdeathx: 这个是ranked，可以帮助你们
2015-04-25 02:32 [ Abhor ]: 嗯好谢谢
2015-04-25 02:33 xxdeathx: 修完以后可以再找我点心
2015-04-25 02:35 xxdeathx: 你hard里 00:08:026 (5) - 这个尾巴应该在 1/6 的 00:08:178 -
2015-04-25 02:35 [ Abhor ]: 唔。。。好的
2015-04-25 02:37 xxdeathx: 我觉得还有几个，就要仔细跟bn或者qat看看
2015-04-25 02:38 xxdeathx: 其实我可以看，但是我这里快三点钟了，所以我懒..
2015-04-25 02:38 [ Abhor ]: 好。。。
2015-04-25 02:38 [ Abhor ]: QWQ
2015-04-26 01:18 [ Abhor ]: 唔。。。你好
2015-04-26 23:06 [ Abhor ]: 请问现在有时间么。。。
2015-04-26 23:11 xxdeathx: orz
2015-04-26 23:11 xxdeathx: 我要出去
2015-04-26 23:12 [ Abhor ]: QWQ好吧
2015-04-26 23:12 xxdeathx: 等我两个小时
2015-04-26 23:13 [ Abhor ]: 谢谢!没问题
2015-04-27 00:49 [ Abhor ]: are you come back?QWQ
2015-04-27 01:25 [ Abhor ]: are you free now?
2015-04-27 01:32 xxdeathx: yeah
2015-04-27 01:32 [ Abhor ]: XD
2015-04-27 01:33 [ Abhor ]: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/601661 Oishi Masayoshi - KIMIJYANAKYA DAMEMITAI]
2015-04-27 01:33 [ Abhor ]: Thanks ...
2015-04-27 01:34 [ Abhor ]: i realized you are live in US,but i spoke chinese to you for last time....so sorry
2015-04-27 01:34 [ Abhor ]: QWQ
2015-04-27 01:34 xxdeathx: lol
2015-04-27 01:34 xxdeathx: my chinese is 60% maybe
2015-04-27 01:35 [ Abhor ]: wow
2015-04-27 01:49 xxdeathx: hmm
2015-04-27 01:49 xxdeathx: offset is early i think
2015-04-27 01:50 [ Abhor ]: habiholic let me change it... so....
2015-04-27 01:50 xxdeathx: nvm
2015-04-27 01:50 xxdeathx: i think its fine
2015-04-27 01:51 xxdeathx: one place it was early a little
2015-04-27 01:51 [ Abhor ]: where?
2015-04-27 01:52 xxdeathx: who helped you fix snap?
2015-04-27 01:52 [ Abhor ]: Regraz QWQ
2015-04-27 01:52 xxdeathx: ok
2015-04-27 01:55 xxdeathx: well offset was early at 00:08:713 -
2015-04-27 01:55 xxdeathx: but it's small difference
2015-04-27 01:56 [ Abhor ]: ....so i should revise it?
2015-04-27 01:58 [ Abhor ]: my english is not very good....这里感觉不太好调整对齐啊。。。
2015-04-27 01:59 xxdeathx: i don't know
2015-04-27 01:59 xxdeathx: let me think
2015-04-27 01:59 [ Abhor ]: well QWQ
2015-04-27 02:00 xxdeathx: maybe i will ask about snapping in bn forum
2015-04-27 02:01 xxdeathx: because it still conflicts with ranked versions
2015-04-27 02:01 [ Abhor ]: emm....well
2015-04-27 02:06 [ Abhor ]: i change the offset as 250 and it sounds well....
2015-04-27 02:07 xxdeathx: ok
2015-04-27 02:07 xxdeathx: 00:09:858 (2) - i think should be 1/43
2015-04-27 02:07 xxdeathx: 1/4
2015-04-27 02:08 [ Abhor ]: ok ,revised
2015-04-27 02:20 xxdeathx: t/323731 i asked around for you
2015-04-27 02:20 xxdeathx: this is too hard to take care of quickly
2015-04-27 02:21 [ Abhor ]: thanks!

Need to fix snapping in several places first

sorry for being so late in checking this thoroughly

[General]

1. Rakuen suggests offset +10√
2. artist is wrong maybe...other mapsets have オーイシマサヨシ as artist√
   
3. normal-hitnormal2.wav is unused, must delete

√


[Easy]

1. 00:31:385 - remove finish since it doesn't fit music and isn't consistent with hard
2. 00:42:377 - add finish ^
3. 01:03:217 (2,3,4) - too many 1/2 gaps, please remove at least one of them. i suggest deleting 01:04:820 (4) - and extending previous slider to this time.
4. 01:08:484 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:24:514 (1) - unnecessary to end there, should end at 01:24:972

[Normal]

1. 00:08:255 (2) - snapped wrong since no sound on this tick. you have 3 choices: move circle to 00:08:178, delete circle, or delete circle and also end slider at 00:08:178
2. 00:10:087 (2) - also recommend deleting because sound on 00:10:087 is very faint and should not be followed
3. 00:11:919 (2) - same as 00:08:255 (2), delete or snap to 00:11:843
4. 00:28:636 (3,1) - spacing error?
5. 01:00:698 (5) - NC
6. 01:15:354 (3) - ^
7. 01:20:850 (3) - nc and 01:21:766 (1) - remove nc and 01:22:682 (4) - add nc (stay consistent with nc pattern)
8. 01:21:537 (4) - same thing i said earlier, sound is on 01:21:461
9. 01:23:369 (3) - this one is hard to tell, but it's definitely not on the 1/2 tick, so it's best to delete
10. 01:25:201 (2) - sound is on 01:25:125

[Hard]

1. 01:17:644 (2) - snap to 1/4

I think that's it, call me back

all fixed

ziin wrote:

Where do you guys keep getting these shitty encodes?

https://copy.com/IJmTWqGdUyjXm7jj (you can use mp3directcut to fix the offset).

1. 00:09:410 (1) - i did not say you could snap this to 1/6. this is snapped wrong.

xxdeathx wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:09:410 (1) - i did not say you could snap this to 1/6. this is snapped wrong.

Also, Ziin gave you a better mp3 and video to use. Why aren't you using them? Add his files as instructed and ask someone to find the new offsets.

ziin wrote:

[collab normal]
00:10:296 (1) - Are you sure about this snapping? Looks like it should be on 1/6 like the others.

[ Abhor ] wrote:

ziin wrote:

[collab normal]
00:10:296 (1) - Are you sure about this snapping? Looks like it should be on 1/6 like the others.

in fact,1/4 sounds better than 1/6