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Iyaz - Replay

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aRiskOfRain
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 06 April 2010 at 10:39:35

Artist: Iyaz
Title: Replay
Tags: R&B
BPM: 182
Filesize: 7150kb
Play Time: 02:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.34 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 334 notes)
  3. Normal (3.11 stars, 195 notes)
Download: Iyaz - Replay
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Why is it so hard to think of something to put here? Now awesomely SBed!*

* terms and conditions apply
Last edited by aRiskOfRain , edited 18 times in total.
GladiOol
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GladiOol
o.o Lemme make a Hard for this, already 1/4~ done or so. I was also planning on mapping this xD
  1. Add a Preview Point nub.
  2. Maybe this BG?

aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain

Gladi wrote:

o.o Lemme make a Hard for this, already 1/4~ done or so. I was also planning on mapping this xD Hell yea. Gogogo!

*image* That seems to fit pretty well.

Add a Preview Point nub. Oh, yeah.
Diasios
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Diasios
[General]

  • • Delete the .osb file, then "full submission"
[Easy]

  • • I don't like this "copy & paste" diff :S
[Normal]

  • • I don't like this "copy & paste" diff :S
    • Add a preview point
[Insane]

  • • I don't like this "copy & paste" diff :S
    • Add a preview point
    • 02:38:265 (7) - New combo
aRiskOfRain
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xxheroxx wrote:

[General]

Delete the .osb file, then "full submission" Noooo. Storyboarding's coming. At some point. Just wanna make sure timing's spot on.

*preview points* Added.

*copy paste* It's not that bad, is it...?

02:38:265 (7) - New combo Changed this section
RandomJibberish
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RandomJibberish
Nice map.
Beat placement and timing is wonderful. The only problems I really have are that a lot of the wave sliders and arcs going across the screen are noticably asymetrical. Once they're fixed up, this'll be an awesomely polished map.

Looking forward to the SB :P

Star~
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

Add source.
Add tags.
Add custom combo colours that fits the song, like purple and gray.
Easy:

01:29:034 (1) - Remove new combo.

One thing I should really point out is that:
00:32:372 (2) - Needs a clap. And all the notes that needs a clap after that, aren't clapped. Clap those, following the rhythm. And that's for the whole song, except for the chorus part, which seems you clapped.

Normal:

01:49:803 (2) - Make it not touch the (1).
That's it. Star.
aRiskOfRain
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aRiskOfRain

FuukoLover wrote:

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33' I don't know what that means, but thanks... I think.

General:

Add source. Like?
Add tags. Like?
Add custom combo colours that fits the song, like purple and gray. Nah.
Easy:

01:29:034 (1) - Remove new combo. No.

One thing I should really point out is that:
00:32:372 (2) - Needs a clap. And all the notes that needs a clap after that, aren't clapped. Clap those, following the rhythm. And that's for the whole song, except for the chorus part, which seems you clapped. OK.
Normal:

01:49:803 (2) - Make it not touch the (1). That's what it does earlier, and you never noticed. ;p
That's it. Star.
Kecco
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Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Normal•
1)01:10:902 (1,2,3,4) - Make these more near to 01:09:913 (4) - ?
2)01:33:649 (5) - Make it symmetrical with (1)
3)01:53:100 (1,2,3,4) - Like n 1)

Nothing has to be modded for other diffs
Nice Map~
Star~
aRiskOfRain
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Kecco wrote:

*stuff*
Done all, thanks.
Hikato
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Hikato
[General]
Add tags and source.

[Easy]
No problems.

[Normal]
No problems.

[Insane]
No problems

Awesome map. <3

Have 2 stars~
Lokamp
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Lokamp
Easy
01:07:605 (2) - clap on this slider's repeat
02:00:352 (2) - ^

Normal
01:56:726 (2,4) - clap on the beat and on the slider's 2nd repeat
01:59:363 (2) - clap here
02:23:759 (3) - change this slider's position and/or shape: it covers part of the next slider's path...
02:49:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - move these 1-2 squares left


Insane
[General] the 2nd kiai time zone needs more hitsounds...
01:36:286 (7) - move it 2-3 squares up and a square left

Maybe more hitsounds on the 1st and 2nd chorus of the song (Insane mode) can make the map better.
Everything else was REALLY nice, so let's star this!
Doomsday
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Doomsday
Yo

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

  1. Offset: 5,302 (a tiny difference to yours, but this is just what I got)
  2. You have no tags. Perhaps you could put "R&B" in there or something (I would come up with others, but I can't :( )
  3. A bunch of your SB Images have a lot of transparent pixels, taking up space and memory usage. You should crop those out.
[EASY]

The stack leniency in this is different than the rest of the map. You should change it so it is the same.

Apart from the stack leniency, Its all good. Theres a lot of Copy/Paste though.

[NORMAL]

Seems fine

[INSANE]

'Tis nice

Very nice. once you're done with my mod, I'll come Protobubble :)

Starred
aRiskOfRain
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Done all that you said. ^.^
James2250
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James2250
easy prob shouldn't have a higher overall diff than normal?

Easy:
some sliders could look slightly neater by being a bit more symmetrical but up to you (very nazi I know)
00:16:177 (1)
00:39:583 (1)
01:03:649 (1)
01:32:330 (1)
01:45:847 (1)
01:59:034 (1)
02:54:419 (1)
(will let you decide if you want to go through the other difficulties and check them over for this)

Normal:
00:17:166 (4) - 1 tiny grid down to make the line straight
00:59:363 (4) - ^
01:32:330 (1,4,5) - not aligned on purpose?

Insane:
looks good

*star*
will let doomsday take care of pubble
aRiskOfRain
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James2250 wrote:

easy prob shouldn't have a higher overall diff than normal?

Easy:
some sliders could look slightly neater by being a bit more symmetrical but up to you (very nazi I know)
00:16:177 (1)
00:39:583 (1)
01:03:649 (1)
01:32:330 (1)
01:45:847 (1)
01:59:034 (1)
02:54:419 (1)
(will let you decide if you want to go through the other difficulties and check them over for this) Fixed them up.

Normal:
00:17:166 (4) - 1 tiny grid down to make the line straight Yup.
00:59:363 (4) - ^ ^
01:32:330 (1,4,5) - not aligned on purpose? Yes, they are.

Insane:
looks good Thanks.

*star*
will let doomsday take care of pubble
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
What I've noticed in this song is that there's a clap on every 2nd small white tick (beat 3), so instead of making a long list of "add clap", I'll just say that ~. Also, claps on 1 are good too if executed properly.

General:
STORYBOARDING <3~
THAT LAST SLIDER <3~
You have to end kiai time ~

Normal:
00:11:561 (2) - Remove clap
00:48:484 (2,4) - Remove claps
00:53:759 (2) - Remove clap
02:59:363 - You have to end kiai time
aRiskOfRain
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CDFA wrote:

General:
STORYBOARDING <3~ ^.^
THAT LAST SLIDER <3~ ^.^
You have to end kiai time ~ Yeah.

Normal:
00:11:561 (2) - Remove clap
00:48:484 (2,4) - Remove claps
00:53:759 (2) - Remove clap
02:59:363 - You have to end kiai time OK.
Doomsday
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Doomsday

James2250 wrote:

will let doomsday take care of pubble
<3

Protobubbled
Zekira
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Zekira
Oh god, it's this song lol... How many times have I heard this on the radio?

[Easy]
02:01:671 (1,2,3,4) - adjust 4 so that the spacing is consistent (1 grid down)

[Normal]
02:30:352 (1,2) - symmetry

[Hard]
00:51:122 (7) - symmetry
01:38:923 (6) - ^
01:43:869 (7) - ^
01:56:396 (1) - ^ (...if this was CP'd somewhere before, I have no idea why I only noticed it now... oh wait, this is the first time it appeared lol)
02:23:759 (5) - ^

I actually kinda like how this was mapped. Mapping style reminds me of myself back in the days (...well lol), and I love how the map does indeed capture the feel of the song (justified copy-paste = :) ) . Not going to pop the p-bubble because the matters above are very minor.
aRiskOfRain
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Zekira wrote:

Oh god, it's this song lol... How many times have I heard this on the radio? I know, it's rediculous.

[Easy]
02:01:671 (1,2,3,4) - adjust 4 so that the spacing is consistent (1 grid down) Correct.

[Normal]
02:30:352 (1,2) - symmetry Tweaked.

[Hard]
00:51:122 (7) - symmetry
01:38:923 (6) - ^
01:43:869 (7) - ^
01:56:396 (1) - ^ (...if this was CP'd somewhere before, I have no idea why I only noticed it now... oh wait, this is the first time it appeared lol)
02:23:759 (5) - ^ Well spotted.

I actually kinda like how this was mapped. Mapping style reminds me of myself back in the days (...well lol), and I love how the map does indeed capture the feel of the song (justified copy-paste = :) ) . Not going to pop the p-bubble because the matters above are very minor. Well, when it says "Replay" in the song...
Thanks!
Gens
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Gens
letterboxing is disabled only on easy d: is that intended

also, on the SB:

02:27:715 - I think these would look better if you fade them out slowly instead.

*isn't Normal's OD a bit low for a normal?

Everything else is fine.
(too lazy to build a proper mod post :P)
aRiskOfRain
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Gens wrote:

letterboxing is disabled only on easy d: is that intended No. Thanks for pointing that out. ;p

also, on the SB:

02:27:715 - I think these would look better if you fade them out slowly instead. Made them slower.

*isn't Normal's OD a bit low for a normal? Yup.

Everything else is fine.
(too lazy to build a proper mod post :P)
Larto
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Larto
=]
aRiskOfRain
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Larto wrote:

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0_o
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0_o
General
Sexy map needs sexy combo colours. Maybe something like

Combo1 : 255,255,45
Combo2 : 72,255,72
Combo3 : 0,255,255
Combo4 : 255,0,255

That's purely an example, but yeah I really do think the appearance of the map would improve greatly with more customized colours.

Easy
01:45:847 (1) - symmetry nazi, make it even plz ^_^

Normal
Perfect.

Insane
-I would really just call this Hard, it's not toooo challenging and Easy Normal Hard is just a nicer looking set.
01:05:298 (8) - Why no whistles? They sound nice and it'll also be consistent with the previous parts in the map as well as the other difficulties.
01:47:496 (8) - ^
01:58:045 (7) - ^

This is basically a big suggestion post, this map is awesome. Great work on the SB ^_^
aRiskOfRain
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Good show 0_o. I changed the combo colours; I think they look OK.
0_o
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0_o
*don't kudo this*

You forgot to change the colours of Easy and Normal :P Also, the white circles are realllly hard to play with during kiai since the cursor is pretty much invisible. Could you make it a pale blue or green or something?
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
omfg, THIS song!? I'm sick of all the girls in my class singing this... nevertheless, it is a good song.

Easy:

Nazi Mod~
02:22:440 (1,2) - These sliders aren't 100% parallel

Normal:

Normal Mod~
01:06:287 (1,2) - I think it'd look better if (2) wasn't touching (1) (I know it already isn't, but you know what I mean >:()
01:48:485 (1,2) - ^
aRiskOfRain
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YGOkid8 wrote:

Easy:

Nazi Mod~
02:22:440 (1,2) - These sliders aren't 100% parallel Right you are.

Normal:

Normal Mod~
01:06:287 (1,2) - I think it'd look better if (2) wasn't touching (1) (I know it already isn't, but you know what I mean >:()
01:48:485 (1,2) - ^ I don't know what you mean, but OK.
Thanks.
gyt
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gyt
Cooool

Normal
00:33:979 (1) - move this circle to previous white tick?

Hard
02:32:990 - I don't very like it. So it's only one jump in this diff, is it?
aRiskOfRain
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gyt wrote:

Normal
00:33:979 (1) - move this circle to previous white tick? No.

Hard
02:32:990 - I don't very like it. So it's only one jump in this diff, is it? What's wrong with that?
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
:D
Ephemeral
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Ephemeral
Doing things I never do.
Larto
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Larto
Replay
-ay
-ay
-ay
aRiskOfRain
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Thanks guys.
Derekku
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Derekku
Storyboard <333

and purple <3333
Card N'FoRcE
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Awesome job, osu! needs more maps like this one :)
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