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Alphabeat - The Spell

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Behon
Elite Mapper
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Behon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 17, 2010 at 10:20:10 PM

Artist: Alphabeat
Title: The Spell
Tags: alphabeat europop dance the beat is
BPM: 114
Filesize: 17682kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Hard (4.71 stars, 332 notes)
  3. Normal (3.58 stars, 229 notes)
Download: Alphabeat - The Spell
Download: Alphabeat - The Spell (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please download this map again if you already did before October 10th. New audio and video files have been put in and the timing changed.

So after making my Fascination beatmap, I went and looked for some of their other songs and stumbled across this one. After listening, I decided to map it too, because I'll be damned if it isn't one of the catchiest songs I've heard in some time.

3/12: Made al2e10's changes.
3/13: Made DiamondCrash's change in Normal.
3/13: Better background image.
3/14: Made several suggested changes.
3/14: Deleted the .osb and made RandomJibberish's changes.
3/24: Made Hikato's changes.
3/31: Made most of sonnyc's changes.
4/5: Made most of YGOkid8's changes.
4/10: Made VanMoNky's changes.
4/15: Made one of wmfchris's changes and changed a few sound effects in Hard.
10/4: Replaced audio and video with gyt's files, changed offset and timing points to fit it, and made some of his hitsound changes.
10/5: Made Odaril's changes and added source and tags.
10/6: Moved source title to tags.
Last edited by Behon , edited 19 times in total.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
BY AL2e10's MODMODMOD !!!

[Hard] Nice
00:34:368 (6) - Finish ?
01:32:131 (6) - New combo
01:56:999 (2,3) - Clap?
02:55:946 (2,3) - ^also

[Normal] Good
01:06:999 (7,Last) - Remove wistle
02:01:736 (7,Last) - ^also
03:00:683 (7,Last) - ^

I'm not gonna to mod your Easy,
Because that is great @.@
And I think you can change some color for that note ~

Great Song Great Map !! STAR !!
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Easy;

Fine.

Normal;

00:24:894 (6) - In line with the previous slider.

Hard;

Excellent.

Star.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-Search for a better BG and resize to 1024x768

[Easy]
-Acc 100% Nice

[Normal]
-Acc 98% Nice :3

[Hard]
-Acc 92% I think that the song have a problem in offset


Nice song, Star
Behon
Elite Mapper
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Behon

Astom wrote:

Search for a better BG and resize to 1024x768
I found a bigger version of the current picture and adjusted it to those dimensions. Does that work?

Astom wrote:

[Hard]
-Acc 92% I think that the song have a problem in offset
It's the exact same offset as the other difficulties. I just have the difficulty cranked up so it's less lenient with the hit window.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello!

[General]
1) Tags?
2) Source?

[Easy]
00:27:789 (4) - Make symetric?

GREAT SONG!
STAR
dlguiga
60 posts
Joined November 2009
dlguiga
Catchiest. Song. Ever.

Star!

Just one thing (hard):

01:32:131 (6) - Should this be a new combo?
Behon
Elite Mapper
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Behon

Leorda wrote:

Source?
There's a thread saying not to give a Source if it's just lifted from an album.

dlguiga wrote:

01:32:131 (6) - Should this be a new combo?
Yes.
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General:
Delete the .osb~

Easy:
No Problems found.

Normal:
01:08:578 (1) - Even out the curve.
02:03:315 (1) - ^
01:09:894 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make the beats follow a smoother curve. Do the same on all similar beat streams.
02:34:104 (4) - I don't think this really fits...

Hard:
01:02:789 (4) - Would it be possible to make this more symmetrical vertically? Do the same in all the choruses.

Great map, Star~
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
[General]
Tags

[Easy]
02:37:262 - Add a beat.

[Normal]
02:37:262 - Add a beat.

[Hard]
01:53:315 (4) - Make it curve properly

No major problems.

Nice map. Damn song will be in my head for hours now -_-

Please only post maps once in my queue in future.
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[General]

  • • Add some source (if possible) and some tags
That's all
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hi~
19MB orz

Easy
  • 01:21:736 (1) None?
    02:18:052 (2) Clap
    03:16:999 (2) ^
Normal
  • 01:17:262 (3) None
    01:20:683 (6) Finish at end
    02:07:525 (2) 1 Gird right and down
    02:37:525 (2) Whistle
    03:06:473 (2) 1 Gird left and down
Hard
  • Good
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
General:

- All diffs: Re-Kiai Time @03:05:947?

Easy:

- You know me, I like large hitcircles for Easy. Increase.
- Decrease HP Drain Rate by 1.
- Decrease Overall Difficulty by 1.

Normal Mod~
00:36:210 (4) - Make this more like 00:27:789 (4)
02:34:104 (1) - This could be so much more prettier

Normal:

- Decrease HP Drain Rate by 1.
- Decrease Overall Difficulty by 1.

Hard:

Normal Mod~
01:06:999 (8) - Make this more symmetrical
02:01:736 (8) - ^
03:00:683 (8) - ^
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Where are the source and tags go?
2. Who's the blue man in the video? He is look like a dancing bull.
3. Remove the .osb file. You don't need it.

[Easy]
-- For safety, remove any blue tick note in this diff. You can change them into slider, or something that make this [Easy] diff really easy.
00:27:394 (3) - This beat is hard to catch. At first you follow the music, then suddenly follow the vocal. I'm not really sure but I have solution if you want to keep the note. Move (1) backward one 1/1 tick. Well, at least it looks easier now. Or you can replace the (2) and (3) with a slider. Hey, I'm trying!
00:35:815 (3) - I'm afraid someone will protest about this ;__; But they looks good.
02:30:289 (3) - This one too. Maybe, remove this then add another repeat at slider (2)?

[Normal]
01:11:736 (9) - Silence the end of it.

[Hard]
Very nice.
Star. You mapped this song greatly. Good luck.

Anyway, I want to pubble this. May I? :P
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[hard] nice!
2:10:157 (4) Not on the stright line of (1,2,3)...?
2:22:262 (6) left 1 grid to make vertical line with (4)? It refers to similar pattern later in this song...

The remaining difficultiss are fine enough <3
star~
Behon
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Behon

wmfchris wrote:

[hard] nice!
2:10:157 (4) Not on the stright line of (1,2,3)...? It would go offscreen if it stuck to that line.
2:22:262 (6) left 1 grid to make vertical line with (4)? It refers to similar pattern later in this song...Done.

The remaining difficultiss are fine enough <3
star~
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Halo Behonkiss

The only thing I can't understand is 00:22:262 (1) on Easy diff. Does the new combo really necessary ?
Also add "The Beat is..." as tags

Yeah I'm not really helping sorry :(
But it's a great map
Star~
gyt
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gyt
Really cool! :)
gyt
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gyt
Hello! I'm glad to see this revived! :)

Random hitsound suggestions:

[Easy]
01:06:955 (3) - remove clap at the end?
01:22:789 (3) - remove clap at the start?
02:01:736 (3) - remove clap at the end?
02:22:789 (3) - replace clap to finish?
03:00:683 (3) - remove clap at the end?

[Normal]
01:11:736 (9) - add finish at the end?
01:26:999 (4) - replace whistle to finish at the end?
02:27:262 (6) - replace claps to whistle?
02:28:052 (7) - remove clap?
02:30:289 (4) - remove whistle at the end?
02:34:104 (4) - remove whistle at the end?
02:37:920 (3) - remove clap at the start?
02:39:894 (6) - remove whistle at the end?

[Hard]
01:11:210 (8,9) - add whistle?
02:05:947 (8,9) - ^
02:22:789 (8) - ^
02:23:315 (10) - add whistle at the start?
03:04:894 (8,9) - add whistle?

Also I found video with better quality (flv file is big but awful): http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1679696/thespell.avi

from Official Ranking Submission Criteria:
"The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file should be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 256kbps"
Your mp3 has 320kbps, so I grab new 256kbps mp3 from my video: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1679696/thespell.mp3

Offset will slightly change with new audio. I get 4 860.

Replace files and do full submission! Good luck with the map!
Shiro
Global Moderator
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Joined May 2009
Shiro
Sorry for the late mod, I've been really busy lately.

Please remember that all these are suggestions. Feel free to ignore any of them.

General:
Your mp3 bitrate is 320 kbps, which is unrankable. Reduce it to 256kbps at most and 128kbps at least.
EDIT: I realized my .osz was too old and didn't have the right mp3 - I'm sorry for the inconvenience )= here's a star icon that you deserve, and a star that you deserve as well.
No source ?

Easy:
00:22:228 (1) - I don't think you need that new combo - unless it has a peculiar meaning ?
00:27:755 (2) - maybe you can make this slider more symmetrical ? like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/29274
392,40,30123,2,0,B|144:16|108:192|144:368|392:344,1,630,8|4
00:36:176 (3) - Same for this one ? you can just copy the previous one and flip it horiontally
01:16:965 (1) - I don't think you need this new combo either

Normal:
Nothing wrong on this one =o it was really nice to play

Hard:
Nothing wrong here again, you did a very good job with the hitsounds !

Fix these few errors and I might bubble it. (send me a PM when you did, and don't forget to check the offset when you have changed the mp3)
Last edited by Shiro , edited 1 time in total.
Behon
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Behon
I made your changes in Easy and added tags and a source (The album the song is from, if that works), but I have to ask, did you download the song before yesterday? I was provided with a 256kbps MP3 in the post above yours and did a full reupload. If that didn't work, I did another reupload just now, so try downloading it again.
Shiro
Global Moderator
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Shiro
I'm sad you didn't fix the slider in Easy )=

EDIT: rechecking the map, I found this: album title doesn't go in source, but in tags
popping my own bubble for now
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Spell_ ... t_album%29 might help ?

EDIT2: I'm sad you didn't fix the slider and the new combo in Easy )=
the rest is fine, so... re-bubble.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
jericho2442
well checked over all the maps and rank wise these are solid and fine

only thing i dont like is how normal and hard are dang similar, they almost feel like the same map rather than two different diff's

lotta breaks too

thats just opinion though, these a solid (if abit ugly in someplaces xD)

have my star
Verdisphena
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Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
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Shiro
Global Moderator
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Joined May 2009
Shiro
You shouldn't bump bubbled maps... They're sorted by star priority anyway, so bumping has absolutely no effect.

Bubble repair.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
This map sure did put me under some kind of spell. Wonderful.
Verdisphena
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Joined June 2010
Verdisphena
omg
Shiro
Global Moderator
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Joined May 2009
Shiro
Grats on that Behonkiss !

woah, first bubble that gets ranked
Sallad4ever
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Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Finally ranked this take soo long to bubble :P

anyway congratz :)
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