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Seikon no Qwaser cast- Passionate squall

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AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 16, 2010 at 7:08:33 AM

Artist: Seikon no Qwaser cast
Title: Passionate squall
Source: Seikon No Qwaser
Tags: Ayumi Fujimura, Aki Toyosaki, Minori Chihara, Aya Hirano, Yoko Hikasa,
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5712kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. -CalmTide- (3.21 stars, 133 notes)
  2. -RipTide- (0 stars, 0 notes)
Download: Seikon no Qwaser cast - Passionate squall
Download: Seikon no Qwaser cast - Passionate squall (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First Map not ready yet still making improvements =O


~Normal~
03/9/10
*Added ErufenRito's Timing

03/10/10
*Added Soradg's Offset
*Added blissfulyoshi's Suggestions
*Finished 1:39:00 of the song

03/14/10
*Fixed 30 seconds of Song
*Added rust45's fixes and placement
*Finished 1:34:922 of Song
*Added TheKiller's fixes,placements,timing

03/15/10
*Added Rito's Placement, Timing fix
*Added GlassLakes Placement and Fixings
*Added Kiai and FixedTiming
*Added Hit Sounds
*Added Garven's Fixes and Placement

*Hard*
03/16/10
*Added hard difficulty RipTide
Last edited by AtemiskKun , edited 37 times in total.
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Good luck with your map. Heres my nooby timing

BPM: 120
OFFSET: 13129

As well as gave some help thought irc :x
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran
OSU! Timing Help!
  • 1. BPM 120 , Offset -870
    2. BPM 120 , Offset 72130 (Optional)
    3. BPM 120 , Offset 129130 (Optional)
Good Luck!
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun
Thank you ^^
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Did a quick mod in irc. Here is a list of things covered:

Change artist to Seikon no Qwaser cast because you did not want to list all the singers but you should properly credit them (might want to add all the singers to the tags)
Change the title to "Passionate squall" (from looking at the album cover, I believe squall is not supposed to be capitalized)
Remove Passionate Squall from the tags since it is already covered by the title
Do not have large blank spaces between notes if it not a break or serving a purpose (you had quite a few randomly placed blank spots)
Increase the spacing because it felt cramp.
Use distance snap for the entire map. There are places such as 00:15:130 (1,2,3,4,5) that do not obey distance snap.

I wish you the best of luck in mapping this song. Feel free to forum pm me when you finish. I will hopefully give you a star then.
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Did a quick mod in irc. Here is a list of things covered:

Change artist to Seikon no Qwaser cast because you did not want to list all the singers but you should properly credit them (might want to add all the singers to the tags)
Change the title to "Passionate squall" (from looking at the album cover, I believe squall is not supposed to be capitalized)
Remove Passionate Squall from the tags since it is already covered by the title
Do not have large blank spaces between notes if it not a break or serving a purpose (you had quite a few randomly placed blank spots)
Increase the spacing because it felt cramp.
Use distance snap for the entire map. There are places such as 00:15:130 (1,2,3,4,5) that do not obey distance snap.

I wish you the best of luck in mapping this song. Feel free to forum pm me when you finish. I will hopefully give you a star then.

Fixed ^^
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
T.T I can't download this map, Plz full submit again

yay, work now :3
rust45
1,088 posts
Joined May 2009
rust45
Here it is with sora's timing:
Download: Seikon no Qwaser cast - Passionate squall (AtemiskKun) [-CalmTide-].osu

You need to add a lead in of maybe at least a second, if not more. You can adjust the lead in by going to "Song Setup" and selecting the "Audio" tab, from there you'll see and slider at the bottom you use that to adjust the lead in time.

You seem to have a bunch of notes that are off by just 1/4, it doesn't help that the singers can't really sing in time well. Really try at it to place the notes in the correct place.

00:01:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Most of this seems randomly placed and doesn't sound too good IMO. The rest of the map you seemed to put in some honest effort and just missing some of the notes by a little be, but I don't know what you're doing here. Maybe don't map this part? If you do that you don't need the lead in time anymore.

Just reiterating what bliss said but, you seem to have really pointless gaps in the map in areas where you can map. This can be very annoying to players. And also, your spacing should be consistent, nice looking, and readable all at the same time. Distance snap can help you achieve this. If you don't like the spacing it's giving you, try messing around with the rate, just hold down your alt key and adjust the slider in the upper right corner. And for the record, the nice looking part isn't as big of a deal as being consistent and readable, but please try to achieve a nice looking map.

I can see potential in this map, just keep at it.
rayxdgreatx
52 posts
Joined February 2010
rayxdgreatx
~starred.

good luck on your map, this star is to mark your start.
Last edited by rayxdgreatx , edited 1 time in total.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
nice song. heres what i think

00:13:130 - new timing section with normal sound. return to soft at 00:31:130

00:13:130 - add a slider to end on the red beat.

00:18:630 (4,5,6) - space it out proportionately to the following notes

00:23:630 (3) - move down two squares to make spacing even between the four notes

00:24:630 (1) - move down two squares

00:26:630 (1,2,3) - even the spacing out to make it proportionate to the following set of notes

00:33:130 (1,2) - oh no, no, no... slider beginning at the same as another ending? sorry, this needs to go. do this:

00:34:630 (4) - delete this note, move the rest of the combo (timing wise) down to end where it was

00:33:130 (1) - shorten this to end on the red note.

00:47:630 (1,2,3,1,2) - space evenly please

00:50:130 (3,4,5) - make the length of spacing smaller.

00:52:130 (3,4,5) - ^

00:54:130 (3,4,5) - ^

00:55:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space these out further

01:08:880 (8) - take away repeat, shorten it so that it begins at 01:09:130 and ends at 01:09:880

01:12:130 timing section - change sound to normal.

01:12:130 this section all seems to be the same as the previous chorus. i propose you

1. make the same changes to it as the first chorus
2. highlight this chorus and click Edit > Flip horizontally. this will at least make it seem different

going well so far. i hope you plan to continue mapping this song.

have a star!
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

rust45 wrote:

Here it is with sora's timing:
[attachment=0:66e3b]Seikon no Qwaser cast - Passionate squall (AtemiskKun) [-CalmTide-].osu[/attachment:66e3b]

You need to add a lead in of maybe at least a second, if not more. You can adjust the lead in by going to "Song Setup" and selecting the "Audio" tab, from there you'll see and slider at the bottom you use that to adjust the lead in time.

You seem to have a bunch of notes that are off by just 1/4, it doesn't help that the singers can't really sing in time well. Really try at it to place the notes in the correct place.

00:01:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Most of this seems randomly placed and doesn't sound too good IMO. The rest of the map you seemed to put in some honest effort and just missing some of the notes by a little be, but I don't know what you're doing here. Maybe don't map this part? If you do that you don't need the lead in time anymore.

Just reiterating what bliss said but, you seem to have really pointless gaps in the map in areas where you can map. This can be very annoying to players. And also, your spacing should be consistent, nice looking, and readable all at the same time. Distance snap can help you achieve this. If you don't like the spacing it's giving you, try messing around with the rate, just hold down your alt key and adjust the slider in the upper right corner. And for the record, the nice looking part isn't as big of a deal as being consistent and readable, but please try to achieve a nice looking map.

I can see potential in this map, just keep at it.
Fixed =O
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

nice song. heres what i think

00:13:130 - new timing section with normal sound. return to soft at 00:31:130

00:13:130 - add a slider to end on the red beat.

00:18:630 (4,5,6) - space it out proportionately to the following notes

00:23:630 (3) - move down two squares to make spacing even between the four notes

00:24:630 (1) - move down two squares

00:26:630 (1,2,3) - even the spacing out to make it proportionate to the following set of notes

00:33:130 (1,2) - oh no, no, no... slider beginning at the same as another ending? sorry, this needs to go. do this:

00:34:630 (4) - delete this note, move the rest of the combo (timing wise) down to end where it was

00:33:130 (1) - shorten this to end on the red note.

00:47:630 (1,2,3,1,2) - space evenly please

00:50:130 (3,4,5) - make the length of spacing smaller.

00:52:130 (3,4,5) - ^

00:54:130 (3,4,5) - ^

00:55:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space these out further

01:08:880 (8) - take away repeat, shorten it so that it begins at 01:09:130 and ends at 01:09:880

01:12:130 timing section - change sound to normal.

01:12:130 this section all seems to be the same as the previous chorus. i propose you

1. make the same changes to it as the first chorus
2. highlight this chorus and click Edit > Flip horizontally. this will at least make it seem different

going well so far. i hope you plan to continue mapping this song.

have a star!
In Progress~
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

AtemiskKun wrote:

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

nice song. heres what i think

00:13:130 - new timing section with normal sound. return to soft at 00:31:130

00:13:130 - add a slider to end on the red beat.

00:18:630 (4,5,6) - space it out proportionately to the following notes

00:23:630 (3) - move down two squares to make spacing even between the four notes

00:24:630 (1) - move down two squares

00:26:630 (1,2,3) - even the spacing out to make it proportionate to the following set of notes

00:33:130 (1,2) - oh no, no, no... slider beginning at the same as another ending? sorry, this needs to go. do this:

00:34:630 (4) - delete this note, move the rest of the combo (timing wise) down to end where it was

00:33:130 (1) - shorten this to end on the red note.

00:47:630 (1,2,3,1,2) - space evenly please

00:50:130 (3,4,5) - make the length of spacing smaller.

00:52:130 (3,4,5) - ^

00:54:130 (3,4,5) - ^

00:55:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - space these out further

01:08:880 (8) - take away repeat, shorten it so that it begins at 01:09:130 and ends at 01:09:880

01:12:130 timing section - change sound to normal.

01:12:130 this section all seems to be the same as the previous chorus. i propose you

1. make the same changes to it as the first chorus
2. highlight this chorus and click Edit > Flip horizontally. this will at least make it seem different

going well so far. i hope you plan to continue mapping this song.

have a star!
Done~
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
CalmTide:
Im going to suppose that this is a medium difficulty

- I can see that you have improved a lot since i las saw it, but i dont like this map alot still and still needs a lot of improvements in pattern/enjoyable wise. You should try to improve in your patterns. But nevertheless, good work at your improvement
- I gotta say that the first 12 seconds were quite confusive to me. I dont know what part of the song those circles/sliders are snapped to.
- If i were you, i would fade out the end of the map. Don't really like the song suddenly ending.
- 00:13:505 (5) - Too jumpy and sudden, use distance snap, or even better, stack it to the slider end by using distance snap = 0, and turning grip snap off
- 00:15:630 (2,3) - The vocals here is way too offbeat or i dont know, but thing is that they hear way too early if you are following the vocals
- 00:19:380 (1) - same as 00:13:505 (5)
- 00:19:380 (1,1,1) - I dont think these new combos are needed
- 00:26:630 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:19:380
- 00:44:630 (7) - extend to 00:45:130
- 00:46:630 (1) - Unrankable spinner. For a spinner to be rankable, it should be able to do at least 3000 bonus points in auto i think. Dont remember well
- 01:15:630 (4) - Having this placed right here is not such a good idea in my opinion, I would move them barther from (3)

Please, keep in mind that i like consistency, so if im saying something in a specific place, it should apply for the other places that have similar issues.

Also last but not least, please, take your time in making this map better, theres no rush. Look, my first submitted map was submitted in around july 2009, ever since then, i have no ranked maps yet. So if i could, others can too.
Glass
1,527 posts
Joined January 2010
Glass
[General]
Set a preview time; go to the part of the song that you'd like to be the preview, then go in Timing menu -> bottom option.
I suggest you to use another combo color than black.

[-CalmTide-]
00:13:130 (4) - New combo
00:13:130 (4) - Move this closer to 5
00:13:755 (6) - Do not keep this too close to 5
00:13:755 (6,7,8,9) - Equalize the spacing
00:19:380 (1) - Move this closer to 6
00:19:880 (1) - Remove new combo
00:20:380 (1) - Remove new combo
00:20:880 (1) - Remove new combo
00:24:630 (1) - Move this closer to the previous note
00:26:630 (1) - Move this slightly farther from the previous note
00:26:630 (1,2,3) - Keep these closer to each other
00:27:380 (1) - Remove new combo, move this closer to 3
00:27:880 (1) - Remove new combo
00:28:380 (1) - Remove new combo
00:36:630 (3) - New combo
00:37:380 (1) - Remove new combo
00:43:630 (5) - New combo
00:45:630 (9) - Move this farther from the previous note
00:46:130 (10) - Move this farther from the previous note
00:46:630 (1) - This spinner is too short, replace it with a slider
00:49:130 (1) - Remove new combo
00:50:130 (3) - New combo
00:51:130 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:130 (3) - New combo
00:53:130 (1) - Move this farther from the previous note
00:59:630 (5) - New combo
01:02:630 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:630 (2) - New combo
01:07:630 (6) - New combo
01:10:130 (x) - Feels empty, add a spinner from here to 01:11:630
01:15:630 (4) - New combo, move this farther from the previous note
01:16:380 (1) - Remove new combo
01:16:880 (1) - Remove new combo
01:17:380 (1) - Remove new combo
01:17:880 (1) - Remove new combo
01:21:130 (1) - Remove new combo
01:21:630 (1) - Remove new combo, move it closer to the previous note
01:24:130 (3) - Move it closer to the previous note
01:24:380 (1) - Remove new combo, move it closer to the previous note
01:24:880 (1) - Remove new combo
01:25:380 (1) - Remove new combo

Good luck on your first map, have a shiny star~

Also, I'll recheck and post a hitsound mod after the fixes.
Glass
1,527 posts
Joined January 2010
Glass
Rechecked.

[General]
I just realized this... the Kiai time is way wrong; The first kiai should be from 00:15:130 to 00:31:130, the second one from 01:12:130 all the way to the end.
Delete this timing section: 2:09:13
Check "Inherit previous timing settings" for the timing section at 01:12:13

[-CalmTide-]
00:11:130 (1) - Move this closer to the previous note
00:14:505 (3,4,5) - Incorrect spacing
00:19:630 (2) - Too far from 1, when you move this, move the whole combo(2,3,4,5,6,etc) with it.
00:26:630 (5) - New combo
00:26:630 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Equalize the spacing
00:36:630 (3) - Too close to 2, move this along with 4 and 5.
01:23:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Equalize the spacing

Hitsounds:
00:06:630 : Finish
00:07:630 : Clap
00:08:630 : Clap
00:09:630 : Clap
00:10:630 : Clap
00:11:630 : Clap
00:13:130 : Whistle (Only the slider's start)
00:13:755 : Whistle
00:15:130 : Clap
00:15:880 : Clap
00:16:880 : Clap
00:17:880 : Clap
00:18:630 : Whistle
00:19:130 : Clap
00:19:630 : Whistle
00:20:130 : Clap
00:20:630 : Whistle
00:21:130 : Whistle (Both the slider's start and the slider's middle part. not the end)
00:22:130 : Finish
00:23:130 : Clap
00:24:130 : Clap
00:25:130 : Clap
00:26:130 : Clap
00:26:630 : Whistle
00:27:130 : Clap
00:27:630 : Whistle
00:28:130 : Clap
00:28:630 : Whistle
00:31:130 : Finish
00:32:130 : Clap
00:33:130 : Clap
00:34:130 : Clap
00:34:630 : Clap
00:35:130 : Clap
00:36:630 : Finish
00:37:380 : Clap
00:37:880 : Clap
00:38:380 : Clap
00:38:880 : Clap
00:40:130 : Clap
00:41:130 : Clap
00:42:130 : Clap
00:43:130 : Clap
00:44:130 : Clap
00:45:130 : Clap
00:45:630 : Clap
00:45:880 : Clap
00:48:130 : Clap
00:49:130 : Clap
00:50:130 : Clap
00:51:130 : Clap
00:52:130 : Clap
00:53:130 : Clap
00:54:130 : Clap
00:55:630 : Clap
00:56:630 : Clap
00:57:630 : Clap
00:58:630 : Clap
00:59:630 : Clap
01:00:630 : Clap
01:01:630 : Clap
01:02:630 : Clap
01:03:630 : Clap
01:04:630 : Clap
01:05:630 : Clap
01:06:630 : Clap
01:07:630 : Clap
01:08:630 : Clap
01:09:130 : Clap
01:11:630 : Finish
01:12:130 : Clap
01:13:130 : Clap
01:14:130 : Clap
01:15:130 : Clap
01:15:630 : Whistle
01:16:130 : Clap
01:16:630 : Whistle
01:17:130 : Clap
01:17:630 : Whistle
01:18:130 : Whistle (Both the slider's start and the slider's middle part. not the end)
01:20:130 : Clap
01:21:130 : Clap
01:22:130 : Clap
01:23:130 : Clap
01:23:630 : Whistle
01:24:130 : Clap
01:24:630 : Whistle
01:25:130 : Clap
01:25:630 : Whistle
01:28:130 : Finish

That's it for now
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

Glasslake wrote:

Rechecked.

[General]
I just realized this... the Kiai time is way wrong; The first kiai should be from 00:15:130 to 00:31:130, the second one from 01:12:130 all the way to the end.
Delete this timing section: 2:09:13
Check "Inherit previous timing settings" for the timing section at 01:12:13

[-CalmTide-]
00:11:130 (1) - Move this closer to the previous note
00:14:505 (3,4,5) - Incorrect spacing
00:19:630 (2) - Too far from 1, when you move this, move the whole combo(2,3,4,5,6,etc) with it.
00:26:630 (5) - New combo
00:26:630 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Equalize the spacing
00:36:630 (3) - Too close to 2, move this along with 4 and 5.
01:23:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Equalize the spacing

Hitsounds:
00:06:630 : Finish
00:07:630 : Clap
00:08:630 : Clap
00:09:630 : Clap
00:10:630 : Clap
00:11:630 : Clap
00:13:130 : Whistle (Only the slider's start)
00:13:755 : Whistle
00:15:130 : Clap
00:15:880 : Clap
00:16:880 : Clap
00:17:880 : Clap
00:18:630 : Whistle
00:19:130 : Clap
00:19:630 : Whistle
00:20:130 : Clap
00:20:630 : Whistle
00:21:130 : Whistle (Both the slider's start and the slider's middle part. not the end)
00:22:130 : Finish
00:23:130 : Clap
00:24:130 : Clap
00:25:130 : Clap
00:26:130 : Clap
00:26:630 : Whistle
00:27:130 : Clap
00:27:630 : Whistle
00:28:130 : Clap
00:28:630 : Whistle
00:31:130 : Finish
00:32:130 : Clap
00:33:130 : Clap
00:34:130 : Clap
00:34:630 : Clap
00:35:130 : Clap
00:36:630 : Finish
00:37:380 : Clap
00:37:880 : Clap
00:38:380 : Clap
00:38:880 : Clap
00:40:130 : Clap
00:41:130 : Clap
00:42:130 : Clap
00:43:130 : Clap
00:44:130 : Clap
00:45:130 : Clap
00:45:630 : Clap
00:45:880 : Clap
00:48:130 : Clap
00:49:130 : Clap
00:50:130 : Clap
00:51:130 : Clap
00:52:130 : Clap
00:53:130 : Clap
00:54:130 : Clap
00:55:630 : Clap
00:56:630 : Clap
00:57:630 : Clap
00:58:630 : Clap
00:59:630 : Clap
01:00:630 : Clap
01:01:630 : Clap
01:02:630 : Clap
01:03:630 : Clap
01:04:630 : Clap
01:05:630 : Clap
01:06:630 : Clap
01:07:630 : Clap
01:08:630 : Clap
01:09:130 : Clap
01:11:630 : Finish
01:12:130 : Clap
01:13:130 : Clap
01:14:130 : Clap
01:15:130 : Clap
01:15:630 : Whistle
01:16:130 : Clap
01:16:630 : Whistle
01:17:130 : Clap
01:17:630 : Whistle
01:18:130 : Whistle (Both the slider's start and the slider's middle part. not the end)
01:20:130 : Clap
01:21:130 : Clap
01:22:130 : Clap
01:23:130 : Clap
01:23:630 : Whistle
01:24:130 : Clap
01:24:630 : Whistle
01:25:130 : Clap
01:25:630 : Whistle
01:28:130 : Finish

That's it for now
Done~
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

ErufenRito wrote:

CalmTide:
Im going to suppose that this is a medium difficulty

- I can see that you have improved a lot since i las saw it, but i dont like this map alot still and still needs a lot of improvements in pattern/enjoyable wise. You should try to improve in your patterns. But nevertheless, good work at your improvement
- I gotta say that the first 12 seconds were quite confusive to me. I dont know what part of the song those circles/sliders are snapped to.
- If i were you, i would fade out the end of the map. Don't really like the song suddenly ending.
- 00:13:505 (5) - Too jumpy and sudden, use distance snap, or even better, stack it to the slider end by using distance snap = 0, and turning grip snap off
- 00:15:630 (2,3) - The vocals here is way too offbeat or i dont know, but thing is that they hear way too early if you are following the vocals
- 00:19:380 (1) - same as 00:13:505 (5)
- 00:19:380 (1,1,1) - I dont think these new combos are needed
- 00:26:630 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:19:380
- 00:44:630 (7) - extend to 00:45:130
- 00:46:630 (1) - Unrankable spinner. For a spinner to be rankable, it should be able to do at least 3000 bonus points in auto i think. Dont remember well
- 01:15:630 (4) - Having this placed right here is not such a good idea in my opinion, I would move them barther from (3)

Please, keep in mind that i like consistency, so if im saying something in a specific place, it should apply for the other places that have similar issues.

Also last but not least, please, take your time in making this map better, theres no rush. Look, my first submitted map was submitted in around july 2009, ever since then, i have no ranked maps yet. So if i could, others can too.

Done~
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

Glasslake wrote:

Rechecked.

[General]
I just realized this... the Kiai time is way wrong; The first kiai should be from 00:15:130 to 00:31:130, the second one from 01:12:130 all the way to the end.
Delete this timing section: 2:09:13
Check "Inherit previous timing settings" for the timing section at 01:12:13

[-CalmTide-]
00:11:130 (1) - Move this closer to the previous note
00:14:505 (3,4,5) - Incorrect spacing
00:19:630 (2) - Too far from 1, when you move this, move the whole combo(2,3,4,5,6,etc) with it.
00:26:630 (5) - New combo
00:26:630 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Equalize the spacing
00:36:630 (3) - Too close to 2, move this along with 4 and 5.
01:23:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Equalize the spacing

Hitsounds:
00:06:630 : Finish
00:07:630 : Clap
00:08:630 : Clap
00:09:630 : Clap
00:10:630 : Clap
00:11:630 : Clap
00:13:130 : Whistle (Only the slider's start)
00:13:755 : Whistle
00:15:130 : Clap
00:15:880 : Clap
00:16:880 : Clap
00:17:880 : Clap
00:18:630 : Whistle
00:19:130 : Clap
00:19:630 : Whistle
00:20:130 : Clap
00:20:630 : Whistle
00:21:130 : Whistle (Both the slider's start and the slider's middle part. not the end)
00:22:130 : Finish
00:23:130 : Clap
00:24:130 : Clap
00:25:130 : Clap
00:26:130 : Clap
00:26:630 : Whistle
00:27:130 : Clap
00:27:630 : Whistle
00:28:130 : Clap
00:28:630 : Whistle
00:31:130 : Finish
00:32:130 : Clap
00:33:130 : Clap
00:34:130 : Clap
00:34:630 : Clap
00:35:130 : Clap
00:36:630 : Finish
00:37:380 : Clap
00:37:880 : Clap
00:38:380 : Clap
00:38:880 : Clap
00:40:130 : Clap
00:41:130 : Clap
00:42:130 : Clap
00:43:130 : Clap
00:44:130 : Clap
00:45:130 : Clap
00:45:630 : Clap
00:45:880 : Clap
00:48:130 : Clap
00:49:130 : Clap
00:50:130 : Clap
00:51:130 : Clap
00:52:130 : Clap
00:53:130 : Clap
00:54:130 : Clap
00:55:630 : Clap
00:56:630 : Clap
00:57:630 : Clap
00:58:630 : Clap
00:59:630 : Clap
01:00:630 : Clap
01:01:630 : Clap
01:02:630 : Clap
01:03:630 : Clap
01:04:630 : Clap
01:05:630 : Clap
01:06:630 : Clap
01:07:630 : Clap
01:08:630 : Clap
01:09:130 : Clap
01:11:630 : Finish
01:12:130 : Clap
01:13:130 : Clap
01:14:130 : Clap
01:15:130 : Clap
01:15:630 : Whistle
01:16:130 : Clap
01:16:630 : Whistle
01:17:130 : Clap
01:17:630 : Whistle
01:18:130 : Whistle (Both the slider's start and the slider's middle part. not the end)
01:20:130 : Clap
01:21:130 : Clap
01:22:130 : Clap
01:23:130 : Clap
01:23:630 : Whistle
01:24:130 : Clap
01:24:630 : Whistle
01:25:130 : Clap
01:25:630 : Whistle
01:28:130 : Finish

That's it for now
Done~
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]

I noticed the distance snap was set to 0.0. Consider using 1.0 to 1.2 for the snap, then turn it on. This will help set your beats into a much more readable pattern.

Consider what you had:
SPOILER

vs. snapped at 1.2:
SPOILER

That being said, try setting the snap (hold down ALT then use your mouse wheel to change the value) and just click and drag all of your notes. That will make things a lot easier to read, and give you a better base for how to design things. You can still include jumps, but this will make the parts where you don't want jumps more fluid. (considering the general difficulty of this map, you may not want to do too many jumps, either)

Another thing - looking at the combo color progression, the two reds coming right after one another makes it hard to distinguish the next combo beyond reading the numbers. Consider swapping color 4 and 5 in progression.

Although what is mapped of the song is pretty short, you may want to put in a break. The section around 00:55:630 would be a good one. Maybe just put it in for a measure (four beats [four white ticks]) or so.

[-CalmTide-]

00:06:630 Maybe set the sound to mute here for the amped lead into the beat of silence. I like the way it sounds, but a lot of people don't.
00:11:130 The clap here doesn't feel right.
00:15:630 Move this note to 00:15:505 to go with the vocals.
00:15:880 The bounceback point on this slider doesn't fit well with the music. I don't know if you want to accentuate that with a clap.
00:44:630 Short this slider to 00:44:880
00:46:130 End this spinner at 00:47:380. This gives the player a little bit of time to reset instead of almost no time at all.

It's looking good though - keep it up!
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

Garven wrote:

[General]

I noticed the distance snap was set to 0.0. Consider using 1.0 to 1.2 for the snap, then turn it on. This will help set your beats into a much more readable pattern.

Consider what you had:
SPOILER

vs. snapped at 1.2:
SPOILER

That being said, try setting the snap (hold down ALT then use your mouse wheel to change the value) and just click and drag all of your notes. That will make things a lot easier to read, and give you a better base for how to design things. You can still include jumps, but this will make the parts where you don't want jumps more fluid. (considering the general difficulty of this map, you may not want to do too many jumps, either)

Another thing - looking at the combo color progression, the two reds coming right after one another makes it hard to distinguish the next combo beyond reading the numbers. Consider swapping color 4 and 5 in progression.

Although what is mapped of the song is pretty short, you may want to put in a break. The section around 00:55:630 would be a good one. Maybe just put it in for a measure (four beats [four white ticks]) or so.

[-CalmTide-]

00:06:630 Maybe set the sound to mute here for the amped lead into the beat of silence. I like the way it sounds, but a lot of people don't.
00:11:130 The clap here doesn't feel right.
00:15:630 Move this note to 00:15:505 to go with the vocals.
00:15:880 The bounceback point on this slider doesn't fit well with the music. I don't know if you want to accentuate that with a clap.
00:44:630 Short this slider to 00:44:880
00:46:130 End this spinner at 00:47:380. This gives the player a little bit of time to reset instead of almost no time at all.

It's looking good though - keep it up!
Done~
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
thekillerhjkhjk
zomfg that new timing for the new .mp3 file took FOREVER, thank god its over :D
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
AtemiskKun

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

zomfg that new timing for the new .mp3 file took FOREVER, thank god its over :D
:D thanks for all your help ^^
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
You'll only need 1 red timing section.

Offset: 330
BPM: 120.00

That's all, really.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
There seems to be a LOT of unsubbmitted files so please do a full submit!

(I suggest you raise the slider velocity)
Well my main, BIG gripe is the spacing.....
No distance snap has been used and it shows... a lot...
Please use it, I didn't do it on my early maps and it was pretty awful (But you can do it if you do it in a good way)
Well the beat seems kinda fine although it feels like you couldn't decide if you wanted to make a Normal or and Hard

Well I don't want to star it now.. I might mod it later when it's in pending though
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