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Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-09T17:36:50+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 March 2010 at 18:49:13

Artist: Cherry
Title: Yesterday
Source: Beatmania IIDX 6th Style
Tags: techno konami
BPM: 158.13
Filesize: 2802kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:

Another (4.92 stars, 265 notes)
Beginner (0.52 stars, 65 notes)
Hyper (4.3 stars, 166 notes)

Download: Cherry - Yesterday
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Song from Beatmania IIDX 6th Style.

Last edited by Natteke 2010-03-21T18:50:03+00:00, edited 20 times in total.

Astom

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Astom 2010-03-13T18:22:31+00:00

In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-Run AIMod

[Easy]
-Acc 100%

[Hyper]
-Acc 100%

[Another]
-Acc 95% Nice dif
-00:54:045 <-> 00:54:803 overlap =( realy hard of see

Star =)

Diasios

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Diasios 2010-03-13T18:47:04+00:00

[General]

• Delete the .osb file, then "full submission"
• Spacing is partially wrong. Keep "Distance snap" active and recheck it

[Hyper]

• 00:20:844 (7) - 1 square to the left (grid level 2)

[Another]

• There are a lot of jumps here... and some of them are evil (more or less~ lol) like 00:51:578 (8,9) or 01:17:569 (1,2). Make them easier.
• 00:00:166 (1) - 1 square to the left (grid level 2)
• 01:09:601 (x) - Add a circle

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-13T19:00:28+00:00

xxheroxx wrote:
[General]

• Delete the .osb file, then "full submission" - Done
• Spacing is partially wrong. Keep "Distance snap" active and recheck it
- Yeah, fixed some, but if you pay a closer attention, you will notice that most of the spacing is "mirrored".

[Hyper]

• 00:20:844 (7) - 1 square to the left (grid level 2)
- Done

[Another]

• There are a lot of jumps here... and some of them are evil (more or less~ lol) like 00:51:578 (8,9) or 01:17:569 (1,2). Make them easier. [color=#0000FF]- Well, it is an Insane diff, and it isn't supposed to be easy At least I passed it o.0
• 00:00:166 (1) - 1 square to the left (grid level 2)
• 01:09:601 (x) - Add a circle[/color]
- Done

Thanks for the fast reply

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-03-13T19:10:47+00:00

>w</ Just some suggestions

[General]
- Hitsound are too loud =3=
- BG Colour: Black?
- Disable Count down?

[All diffs]
01:08:463 (1) - try sound finish at begin of silder ~

[Hyper]
01:08:463 (1) - like [Easy]

[Another]
01:08:463 (1) - try sound finish ~

Starr ~

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-13T19:18:21+00:00

Thanks for your fast reply, Ploy :3

LKs

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LKs 2010-03-14T05:15:38+00:00

hi

general

source Beatmania IIDX 6th Style ---> IIDX 6th Style
tags beatmania techno ---> Beatmania Techno

offest = 168 imo

Easy

[00:55:56] (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) spacing changed (fix them by grid level=3

Good .but although AIMOD didn't find any problems.You still need check spacing yourself I think.
imo,grid level=2 or 1 will make more spacing wrongs than grid level=3

Hyper

[00:01:68] move 1 grid left (level=2
[00:02:82] move 1 gird left and 2 grids down (^
[00:05:47] not to set whistle on slider's body,just on slider's begin and end
[00:36:97] ^
[01:02:20] move 2 grids left? (level=2

Another

about some sliders with whistle.i suggest you'd better just set on slider's begin and end
You need choose the some sliders :p

[00:19:89] (2,3) move 4 grids down(level=2
[00:27:39] no clap here (clap isn't fit blue tick. too noisy
[00:30:23] ^
[00:30:42] ^
[00:33:27] ^
[00:33:46] ^
[00:36:30] ^
[00:36:49] ^
[00:42:37] ^
[00:42:56] ^
[00:54:51] ^
[00:54:70] ^
[00:54:80] add clap
[01:34:35] no clap here
[01:37:39] ^

star

kino77

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kino77 2010-03-14T05:29:01+00:00

Nice map~

[Hyper]
Sounds better with slider tick 1~
01:03:530 - Add note or start spin here?
01:40:714 (5) - Move 1 grid down?

[Another]
00:45:887 - Add note?
00:48:922 - ^
01:40:335 (4) - Right 1 grid?
01:40:525 (5) - Left 1 grid?

Star~

xierbaliti

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xierbaliti 2010-03-14T06:49:01+00:00

Wow good mapset. So just some hitsounds suggestion for another.

-Another-
clap don't fit this music very well.
00:21:414 (1) - add finish
00:20:086 (3) - remove clap and add finish
00:21:224 (6) - ^
00:21:414 (1) - add finish at start of slider
00:22:931 (4) - add finish
00:23:121 (5) - remove clap and add finish
00:30:235 (4,5,6) - remove claps
00:31:658 (3) - remove whistle at the end
00:33:271 (8,9,10) - remove claps
00:36:306 (9,10,11) - ^
00:37:729 (4) - add finish at the end
00:38:298 (5,6) - add finish
00:42:377 (6,7,8) - remove claps
00:43:610 (4) - add whistle at the end
00:44:369 (5,6) - add whistles
00:45:697 - add a ciecle here.
00:54:519 (6,7,8) - remove claps
01:34:264 (4,5,6) - remove clap and (4)(6)need whistle
01:37:300 (2,3,4) - ^
01:38:438 (11) - remove claps and add finish at the end

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-14T12:32:26+00:00

Thanks guys, but I will not take most of hitsound modding, sorry.

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-03-14T14:50:43+00:00

Yesterday ~ I have a dream ~

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-14T15:06:22+00:00

S i R i R u wrote:
Yesterday ~ I have a dream ~

Thank you siriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriruriru

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-14T15:20:58+00:00

The map is well passable btw

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-03-15T08:44:40+00:00

Hello

[General]
1) Add "konami" in tags, since this song from Konami Game

[Easy]
How about this change to "Beginner"
00:39:628 (3) - Make symetric?
01:25:919 (4) - Move 1 grid left?

[Hyper]
01:07:706 (1,1) - No new combo
01:13:777 (1,1) - ^
01:40:716 (5,6,7) - Move 1 grid down?

[Another]
00:04:341 (4,1) - Move 2 grid down?
01:04:007 (1) - Remove the spinner at 01:05:524 (1) and extend this spinner to 01:06:947

GREAT EUROBEAT!
STAR

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-15T18:59:53+00:00

Leorda wrote:
GREAT EUROBEAT!
STAR

Fixed most of it, thanks.

Glass

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Glass 2010-03-15T19:42:10+00:00

Cool song, nice maps.

[General]
Delete the .osb file and full-submit

[Beginner]
Perfect

[Hyper]
00:00:926 (2,3) - Perhaps too far from (1) comparing to how (5) is so close to (4).
00:06:238 (4) - New combo or move it closer to (3).
00:20:467 (5,6,7,8,9) - Move them closer to (4).
00:27:107 (4,5) - Move these closer to (3).
00:41:146 (7) - Too close to (6). (Nazi)
00:42:284 (8) - A bit too far from (5). (Nazi)

[Another]
00:04:341 (4) - New combo, or move it farther from 3(maybe just move it on top of (2) and do a vertical flip.
00:23:502 (6) - New combo
00:31:660 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing; Either move (4) closer to (3), or move (5) farther from (4).
00:41:146 (4) - New combo
01:00:687 (7) - New combo
01:00:876 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:343 (5) - New combo
01:09:224 (1) - Remove new combo
01:10:741 (6) - Move it closer to (5).
01:11:121 (7) - New combo
01:11:500 (1) - Remove new combo
01:28:954 (1) - Remove new combo
01:29:334 (2) - New combo
01:29:713 (1) - Remove new combo
01:44:511 (6) - New combo

Starred :3

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-15T20:22:45+00:00

Glasslake wrote:
Starred :3

Fixed some. Thanks

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-03-17T08:56:27+00:00

Beginner

Combo Mod~
00:45:699 (4) - New Combo here instead of 00:46:458 (1)
00:48:735 (4) - New Combo here instead of 00:49:493 (1)

Hyper

Combo Mod~
00:06:238 (1) - No New Combo

00:39:438 (5) - New Combo

00:27:486 (5) - New Combo here instead of 00:29:004 (1)
00:30:522 (9) - New Combo here instead of 00:30:901 (1)
00:42:664 (9) - New Combo here instead of 00:43:043 (1)

Normal Mod~
00:05:480 (3) - Make more symmetrical?
01:03:532 (x) - Sounds empty... think you should add beat here

Nazi Mod~
00:30:901 (1,2) - These aren't perfectly parallel

Another

Combo Mod~
00:23:502 (1) - No New Combo
01:09:224 (1) - ^

Fuuko

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Fuuko 2010-03-17T19:21:28+00:00

Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

General:

Remove "beatmania" from tags, since it's alrady on the source.

Another:

00:30:237 (4,5,6) - The claps here sound ugly, I recommend removing them.

That's it, star.

Hikato

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Hikato 2010-03-19T00:25:13+00:00

Nice.

[Another]
01:19:848 (3) - Move it up. D:!

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-03-19T20:18:53+00:00

Hyper

00:59:359 (5,7) - move 1 gird up ?
01:13:397 (4) - new combo ?

Beginner

Slider Tick Rate : 1

00:39:628 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5311 ?
00:53:667 (1) - start at 00:53:667 ? (its hard for Beginner)
01:31:420 (1) - ^
01:22:883 (2,4) - overlap ?

Jinxy

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Jinxy 2010-03-20T11:52:10+00:00

Honestly I'm like screw you and your errorless mapping right now.

Garven

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Garven 2010-03-20T16:27:41+00:00

[Hyper]
01:23:642 [1, 2, 3] These sliders feel really close together for their rhythm compared to the spacing used for the rest of the map. Especially at that part of the song when the singer sings a note during the space between 1 and 2. I keep clicking early.

[Another]
00:47:027 This slider looks a bit out of place compared to all the other straight and slight tilde (~) sliders on the map.

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-20T18:26:39+00:00

JInxyjem wrote:
Honestly I'm like screw you and your errorless mapping right now.

Thankies <3

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2010-03-20T21:39:26+00:00

Beginner
00:00:168 (1,2) - move them a square up (grid level 1)
00:53:477 (spinner) - start it on 00:53:667 (same end point)
01:31:420 (spinner) - start it on 01:31:610 (same end point)

Hyper
Sounds fine. Just see some of the AIMod fixes!

Another
[General] try to avoid too much rapid beat triplets with normal-clap-clap... after a bit, it's quite ugly to listen. Try with whistles sometimes!
00:20:467 (4,5) - start them with clap
00:57:461 (7) - clap here
01:00:497 (6,7,8) - ^
01:13:397 (7,3,6) - ^
01:20:796 (3,6,3) - ^

I suggest you to add some hitsounds on Beginner and Another, the rest was nice :3
Star'd.

EDIT: Sounds like now it's P-bubble worthy. Enjoy!

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-21T00:30:46+00:00

Thanks Lokamp :3

yaya

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yaya 2010-03-21T18:51:04+00:00

not bad . take a bubble