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Planetboom - Lovely Hands

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MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 3월 26일 금요일 at 오후 3:11:45

Artist: Planetboom
Title: Lovely Hands
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJ MAX TECHNIKA BLACK SQUARE Miya Sara Jin
BPM: 132
Filesize: 7942kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.53 stars, 98 notes)
  2. Hard (4.91 stars, 281 notes)
  3. Normal (4.18 stars, 168 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 435 notes)
Download: Planetboom - Lovely Hands
Download: Planetboom - Lovely Hands (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 22th beatmap :3

Space Pop song in DJMAX Series, Included in DJMAX TECHNIKA and BLACK SQARE

Compsed by Planetboom
Sung by Miya
Visualized by Sara, Jin
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 8 times in total.
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Sorry if this seems a little nazi!

Easy;

00:19:766 (2) - In line with the 1, perhaps?

Normal;

Nothing!

Taiko;

Feel free to ignore these suggestions.

00:02:379 (x) - Red here?
00:04:198 (x) - Red here?
And similarily for the rest of the start.
00:19:766 (6), 00:19:879 (7), 00:19:993 (8) - Blue, blue, red?
00:21:584 (6), 00:21:698 (7), 00:21:811 (8) - Blue, blue, red?
And so on for this bit.

Again, I'm no expert. Feel free to disregard that.

Hard;

I see nothing wrong here.

Have a star.
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
DJ Moon :)
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
[Easy]
-100% Acc
-00:39:311 maybe a circle?
-01:04:766 (2) and 01:06:811 (1) don't sound too great to me

[Normal]
-100% Acc
-mmm I don't see problems

[Hard]
-96% Acc
-no problems too (maybe combos but i'm not secure)

And star >:3
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. Your BG's size is bigger than 1024x768. Resize it.
  2. I suggest offset: 2033
~Easy~
  1. 00:43:851 (1,2,3,4) - Make proper formation
~Hard~
  1. 00:40:675 (2,3,4) - Spacing ?_?
  2. 01:06:357 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:18:402 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 01:23:402 (7,8) - Proportions?
  5. 01:23:857 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing.
  6. 01:28:288 (5,6,7) - ^

Star~
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :3
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
Hi~

First to tell you..
we changed some new rules and the Post Example too..
Post Example
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/XXXX
+10SP(we just look here's SP,it means if exceed 15SP when we start mod, we would still mod:D) .I want you focus on blablabla(Do not write if you dont want)
Plsase Respect this .
anyway map doesnt break rules, so mod it!

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Offest=2043 i think it will better
Soft-whistle doesnt fit the song..imo..A bit noisy, Especially the slider-whistle

Easy

[00:09:98] move to next white tick
[00:16:57] slider's shape
SPOILER
[00:41:12] (2,3) move 1 grid right

Normal

[00:35:44] add note?
others good

Hard

[00:15:66] try better shape..plz
[00:47:26] maybe start at [00:47:14] (bule tick) or [00:47:08] (yellow tick)

+star
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
[Easy]
00:03:633 (3) - i'd like to make it start on 00:03:861 (3) and end on 00:05:679(suggestion)
00:09:088 (2) - i'd like to put it on 00:09:315(suggestion)
00:10:906 (2) - i'd like to make it start on 00:10:679 (suggestion)
01:09:088 (1) - i'd like to put it on01:09:315(suggestion)

[Normal]
01:12:043 (x) - add a note?

[Hard]
nothing found

nice choice about custom hitsound

Star!
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Lovely map~

[Normal]
00:47:497 (1) - Decrese the volume of this spin?
[Hard]
00:47:497 (1) - Decrese the volume of this spin?

Other fine~
STAR~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Annyeonghaseyo!

[Normal]
01:16:588 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is not like a triangle, make it perfect triangle?

[Normal]
Disable the countdown, since this diff is no countdown (Song Setup -> Storyboarding -> Unmark the enable countdown)

[Hard]
Disable the countdown, since this diff is no countdown (Song Setup -> Storyboarding -> Unmark the enable countdown)

Not bad
STAR
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
Just a suggestions :P

[General]
- Disable countdown?

[Easy]
fine for me~

[Normal]
fine for me~

[Hard]
00:47:270 (1) - add sound finish? (like other diff)

Nice map like always :3 ~ Starrrrr ~ Go Go MF!!! :oops:
youngdow
321 posts
Joined May 2009
youngdow
[Taiko]

동 - 빨간색 원
캇 - 파란색 원

00:39:315 - 큰캇을 작은캇으로 바꿔주세요 ^^.

00:56:588 - 큰동을 작은동으로 바꿔주세요 ^^.

01:07:952~01:08:179 - 노트와 슬라이더 간격이 너무 가까워요, 살짝만 띄워주세요 ~


다른 문제점은 없는 거 같습니다.

생각보다 정말 잘만드셔서, 본인은 기가 죽어버린 orz..

+Star !
woodrockman
252 posts
Joined June 2009
woodrockman
00:27:270 (-) 동 추가
00:30:906 (-) 동 추가
(약간 어색한감이 없지 않아 있어요)
01:18:406 (1)~끝 - 여기 왠지 카키타임을 추가해야할 것 같은 필이!! (?!)
00:33:293 ,00:35:111 , 그 뒤의 비슷한 패턴들에 같은 부분에
동을 넣으면 더 좋을것 같습니다 ^^
00:16:361 (10) 삭제

소리가 일정했으면 합니다. (그것도 크게요)
태고는 역시 소리가 커야한다랄까... 뭐, 자신의 맵핑스타일이라면 어쩔수 없지만.. (?!)


그리고, 대음노트과 일반노트와 겹치지 않았으면 합니다. (16비트..)


뭐랄까, 1/4 기준으로
0..00.0.00 이런 패턴의 어색함이 없지 않아 있긴 합니다만,
전체적으로 괜찮고, 딱히 지적할부분은 찾기 힘듭니다.

그렇기에 위의 모딩은 패턴 제안형 모딩입니다. ^^ 아무튼 수고하세요~ >//<
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :3
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Pubbled~
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
Easy:
-Try Slider Tick Rate 2

Normal:
-00:11:588 (3) - Align with (1) and then fix the other notes.

Hard:
-01:23:633 (8) - Try this way http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot013-22.jpg

Nice Song&Map~
Star~
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Very nice map, I didn't find anything :D

Star + Kudos Star.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Not going to touch the pubble
just some tiny issues

[General]
  1. You could turn off countdown in all difficulties, ther won't used while playing
  2. This map need no audio lead-in, but if you want add a 0.75s audio lead-in, that's fine
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:452 (4) - New combo, 5 is a jump
  2. 01:04:202 (1) - This one feel a little off, fine for me, 1/6 snap can't solve the problem. I think no need to set a new timing section for just a slider lol, so pass it. Or maybe you can avoid fit the background music just put your own rhythem
  3. 01:23:633 (8) - This spacing is unusual than others :/ Put like Kecco posted is fine for me, a bit offscreen is allowed
others are all fine
star
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
I'm everywhere where taiko map exist.
(underlined=important, gray=not important)

Taiko
Basically scroll speed should be proportional to BPM (and this makes gap between notes are always same when beat(1/4 or 1/3 or something) is same). So use 1.4 if there are no special issues. Well actually I think this isn't that special case and SV should be 1.4, but if you change SV you should change all sliders so do as you want. (and actually osu taiko is gone somewhat too far to force these restrictions, though there are 'standard' or 'criteria') But remember, in most case difficulty of taiko map is determined by patterns, not scroll speed. (and there are modders who hate SV =/= 1.4 like me, though modders who mod taiko aren't much exist.)
00:02:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well actually I prefer d dk d dk but whatever.
00:03:406 (7) - I recommand to avoid too short yellow note like this too often, but whatever.(and it isn't prohibited) Pattern is almost done and I know it's hard to change.
00:24:088 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - I can see these kinds of long and hard 1/4 streams relatively often. Compared with other parts, these pattern is 'stand out' too much. Well that can be style of the map though. (But make sure you don't uses pattern like these too often)
01:03:633 - In almost all authentic maps kiai time appears with barline and turned off with bar line. It would be better be turned off at 01:03:861, but interpretation of the song can be really varied by mappers so I don't care that much.
01:18:406 - kiai? because this part is really similar with 00:49:315 ~ 01:03:861. but as I said, interpretation of the song can be really varied by mappers.

Well better than before but I still feel kinda 'standardtic' when playing this map. At least taiko map should different from standard map playing taiko mod, but whatever.
Just think these are just advise. Not that important thing. I didn't mod precisly so don't mind them too much. (That means pattern is pretty nice with 'locally')
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Easy~
00:47:497 (1) - start on left red tick

~Normal~
00:47:497 (1) - start on left red tick
01:09:770 (5,1,2) - different beats but same spacings D:

~Hard~
01:06:361 (1,2) - wrong spacing


+Star
MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

DJPop wrote:

~Hard~
01:06:361 (1,2) - wrong spacing
It's a small jump D:

Others almost fixed :3
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
역시 문제점은 발견하지 못함...

Taiko의 SV 같은 경우 1.4를 보통 쓰지만 1.5같은거 안되고 1.6이면 괜찮네요. 영도형도 이걸로 올려서 랭크시켰으니까.
플레잉 해봤는데 노트 잘만드셔서 손배치도 저절로 잘되서 좋네요. 랭크되면 꼭 해야겠음.
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Easy
Fine.

Normal
A bit hard, but it's okay...

Normal Mod~
00:18:861 (1) - Remove. IMO, spin recovery time is a bit low for Normal
00:25:452 (3) - Remove?

01:02:042 (1,2,3) - Stack, make it bit easier
01:02:952 (4,5,6) - ^

Hard
Fine.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Normal]
00:25:679 (4) - I don't like the sudden slowdown

nothing really else to complain about

Nice job like usual :D
Neo Adonis
320 posts
Joined November 2009
Neo Adonis
[Normal]
00:25:679 (4) - Too large slider. Make a new combo ^^
01:27:497 (3) - Flip this slider and use it on 01:26:588 (2). The figure will look more symetric and also you'll fix a little inconsistence between the space of the heads of 01:25:679 (1,2,3,4).

[Hard]
This aren't errors, but styling suggestions.
00:05:224 (3) - Move it 1 grid to the right.
00:08:406 (2,3,4,5,6) - Follow the grid makes the figure unneat. Try disabling grid snap OR you could move 00:08:633 (4) 1 grid up.
00:10:679 (4) - Move it 1 grid to the right.
00:25:679 (6) - Why don't you move it 1 grid up?
00:32:270 (4) - Move it 1 grid to the left

[Taiko]
Did you make this diff? It looks so good!!

lepidopodus wrote:

Basically scroll speed should be proportional to BPM (and this makes gap between notes are always same when beat(1/4 or 1/3 or something) is same). So use 1.4 if there are no special issues.
Agree, but I tried using 1.4 slider velocity and the map looks awful. So, I think in this case 1.6 velocity works. ^^
01:05:452 (8) - Why don't you move the start of the slider 1/2 beat after and add here a circle?
01:11:588 (1) - I don't see the need of use a slider with a finish sound (why giving more points on this one?). Remove the finish sound, please.

I loved the song!!! Psychedelic the video, as I like.

Dusty wrote:

Nice job like usual :D
Agree ^^
MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

YGOkid8 wrote:

Normal
01:02:042 (1,2,3) - Stack, make it bit easier
01:02:952 (4,5,6) - ^
I don't think stack makes note easier <_<
I fixed what i picked :3
Gothic_old
265 posts
Joined June 2009
Gothic_old
별
[Exit]
312 posts
Joined February 2009
[Exit]
별이 요기잉네?

것보다 오프셋조절조금만햇으면하는자그마한바램이요기잉네?
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
☆
yaya
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2008
yaya
[hard]
00:23:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why this part use default hitsound ? sounds wired..
01:05:452 (6,1,2) - and this part use custom hitsound ?
01:08:406 (1,2,3) -
01:14:997 (3,4) - these 3 parts i suggest use default hitsound..

and same with Normal and Easy ..


same rhythm .better use same hitsound
Orkel
osu! Alumni
450 posts
Joined September 2008
Orkel
Great map, star'd.
hian_old
193 posts
Joined August 2009
hian_old
우왕 재미있네요 > <
MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

yaya wrote:

[hard]
00:23:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why this part use default hitsound ? sounds wired..
- They are fitted to synth sounds :)

01:05:452 (6,1,2) - and this part use custom hitsound ?
01:08:406 (1,2,3) -
01:14:997 (3,4) - these 3 parts i suggest use default hitsound..
- They are fitted to drum sounds (Hi-hat, bass, snare)
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
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Nakagawa-Kanon
throw
[Dango]
841 posts
Joined December 2009
[Dango]
pow star wer
yaya
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yaya
bubbled.
ztrot
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ztrot
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