kamikin wrote:

Hi hi! For M4M!

Easy

In this diff I think the claps are too loud, also AR could be reduced by 1 - 0.5 as the song is quite slow Might consider this since lower AR can be a bit hard to play too, the clap sound fine here imo

00:02:518 (2) - Whistle to make it consistent with 1 doesn't sound right for me
00:04:162 (1) - try and make this slider so that it is even (the lengths on each side of the red point are the same) to make it look more appealing fixed a bit
00:05:601 (1) - Finish k
00:10:327 (2) - this is quite a calm part of the song so I wouldn't put a clap here I put clap because there is drum sound like in the music
00:10:738 (1) - NC as the NC before is very short fine as it is imo
00:15:669 (2,3) - Remove whistles from the repeat and 3 as it sounds better that way imo not good for me
00:18:546 (2,4) - Remove whistle as otherwise it gets over used and hitnormal is used less, the hitsounds start to lose their effect if they are always used (maybe try and place whistles on the large white tick and the second tick after that then the second tick after that (a big white tick)) I can't use clap here since , there aren't any drum sound in the music so I use whistle at 2nd and 4th white tick , well fixed a bit here
00:37:039 (1) - imperfect blanket looks fine
00:38:683 (3,4) - place claps on the end of these sliders to be conistent with 2 there aren't any drum sound in the music
00:41:970 (2) - make the second part of this curved to blanket 1 better? I like the current pattern
00:55:121 (3) - This blanket looks awkward imo looks fine
00:58:409 (3) - Make this a long slider as it feels better with the vocals Sound weird if I leave the drum sound there empty
01:01:285 Hitcircle? No
01:05:806 (3) - Slightly imperfect blanket looks fine
01:13:203 (1) - Imperfect blanket looks fine , I guess , I don't know lol the slider just disappear before I can check if it blanket correct or not
01:16:491 (1) - Awkward and imperfect blanket fine for me
01:25:532 (1) - No NC for consistency witht the other combos no, it fine as it is

Normal

Reduce AR by 1 why?

00:04:162 (1) - Remove whistle at the end I want to emphasis the vocal
00:05:806 (1) - Finish k
00:12:381 (1,2,3,4) - these slider ends don't seem to map anything and sound strange what? there is a beat there, isn't it ?
00:14:847 (2) - Remove whistle at the end vocal on 1/4 ....sfadsadsad
00:15:669 (4) - Remove whistle on repeat no
00:16:902 (5) - Remove whistle no
00:17:313 (1) - Remove whistle at the end (just try and reserve whistle and not use them more often than you use nothing) Since I can't use clap here because no drum sound in the music so I use whistle on 2nd and 4th white tick instead
00:33:751 The claps disappear here for some reason fixed a bit
00:38:683 (3,4) - Claps on the ends of these sliders can't hear drum sound there
00:09:916 (1,2) - Swap NC whoops
00:12:381 (1) - No NC (to keep all NC around 2 stanzas long like it is for a lot of the beatmap) not weird, it make people know that the rhythm is changing imo
00:22:244 (1) - No NC k
00:23:888 (3) - NC k
01:26:559 (1) - No NC emphasis the impact here
01:27:792 (1) - No NC? ^

Hard

00:13:511 This space feels empty fixed
00:29:642 (3) - Imperfect blanket looks fine
00:30:464 (1,3) - Imperfect blankets fixed a bit
00:42:792 (2) - imo, this should face the same way as 1 to improve flow not really need to do that
00:51:011 (3) - Straighten this to make a cleaner overlap with 1 I like mine
00:56:251 (3) - Imperfect blanket fine
01:03:957 (3) - Imperfect blanket fixed a bit
01:21:011 (6) - Imperfect blanket fine

Thanks for the mods

1. Soft-hitclap.wav is a lot longer than needed
2. Offset sounds a bit too late to me
3. I think the mapset needs more work, and while it plays fine most of the time it is visually not very appealing

1. Consider using AR7.5 instead, because of the density and the SV used in this diff. I believe it will make it easier to read

1. Please take a closer look to every blanket, in an easy it's easily visible when they are off by a few pixels

A Mystery wrote:

Hello, from my queue (very late, I know)

General

1. Soft-hitclap.wav is a lot longer than needed try shorten a bit
2. Offset sounds a bit too late to me fixed a bit
3. I think the mapset needs more work, and while it plays fine most of the time it is visually not very appealing Thanks

Insane

00:09:916 (3) - In the Hard you made a return slider to map the streamy sound in the background music. However, you don't map this in the insane. Maybe a little stream would fit. It's up to you fixed
00:16:696 (4) - Stack is off fixed
00:17:313 (1,2,5) - I don't see why the DS should be different between (5) and (4) compared to (1) and (2) remap a bit here
00:21:422 (4) - You can map to the vocals by making the slider 1 tick shorter and it's possible to add a circle after it as well k
00:23:272 (4) - I would rather see this unstacked, since the very small distance doesn't really make sense and plays awkwardly. Consider moving it to somewhere else remap this part
00:25:943 (4,6) - Improve the blanket fixed a bit
00:28:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I see what you're trying to do, but why not a regular triangle instead of this? Again, there is no real reason for the distances to be different from each other k
00:32:724 (3) - Unnecessary offbeat slider, consider removing this, it would sound better if the rhythm of the slider and the next circle was swapped remap a bit
00:51:422 (6) - Improve this blanket fixed
01:03:957 (1) - Why is the entire slider whistled? fixed
01:14:025 (1) - ^ fixed
01:27:587 (5,1) - I really don't like this overlap, though, see for yourself what you will do with it fixed
01:28:409 - Why not move this inherited to where the slider starts or ends? Currently the slider ticks are suddenly (and with no valid reason) a lot softer halfway through the slider, which doesn't really make sense to me moved to slider end

Hard

1. Consider using AR7.5 instead, because of the density and the SV used in this diff. I believe it will make it easier to read k

00:14:642 (3,4) - Consider making this a blanket k
00:30:464 (1,2,3) - You can also improve this, by making the blankets the same I tried
00:32:724 (3,4) - Swap the rhythms to avoid unnecessary offbeat sliders k
00:44:436 (3) - Again the whistle on the slider itself doesn't really make sense fixed
00:56:251 (3) - ^ fixed
01:19:162 (4,5) - This jump might be a bit too hard since the music doesn't really do something obvious that this jump would represent. I lower spacing a bit
Same thing about the inherited point fixed

Normal

00:23:888 (1,2,3) - I don't really see what these sliders are mapped to, eg you could make (1) 1 tick shorter so it will represent the vocal. k
01:08:888 (5) - Why not make the slider tale blanket 01:09:916 (1) - ? If I do the slider will just looks weird
01:13:614 (2) - Another offbeat slider which doesn't really fit okay this might be the things I don't understand tbh I don't know how this offbeat slider work I just mapped to a snare here
Same thing about the inherited point fixed

Easy

1. Please take a closer look to every blanket, in an easy it's easily visible when they are off by a few pixels pls ;; a pixel!! what a bulleye

00:46:902 (1,2) - This doesn't sound very good, why not make 2 2/1 sliders instead? Currently the slider ends on a downbeat and then there is an empty space while the vocals continue. k
01:27:176 (3) - Finish on slider head like in the normal? k
Same thing about the inherited point fixed

Good luck!

1. Don't need the comma after Haruka Yamazaki in tags
2. Add tv size to tags?
3. I'd set the preview point a 1/4 beat earlier so the fade-in doesn't occur while the chorus has already started.
   Hitsound suggestions apply to all diffs that have them.
4. 00:37:848 - clap doesn't fit music here
5. 00:40:930 (2) - ^
6. 00:54:081 to 00:54:389 - ^

1. 01:26:341 (2,3) - I get that you're going polarity here, but it follows the music a lot better if you do this:
   

1. 00:02:505 (1) - Curve the slider the other way, it'll play better.
2. 00:21:718 (5) - Was the whistle an accident? I didn't hear it on the Insane.

1. 00:26:546 (4,5,6) - Maybe this is easier to play:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:916 (4,5) - This is a really awkward transition because the cursor is moving northeast in order to hit (4) but then it has to slightly change its direction to hit (5) and then reverse the direction to play the slider and head towards (6). Try the following, which should play much better:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:54:081 (3,4,5,6) - Remove claps from these, since they don't start in the music yet.
4. 00:54:183 (4,6) - Really I'd delete these since they're overmapped and rework 00:53:875 (2,3,4,5,6) - into this rhythm:
   
5. 01:09:697 (8) - This may flow better:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:10:725 (4,5,6) - Moving these lower and changing the curve on the first slider makes it more comfortable to play:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:18:841 - There is a vocal here that you should map, since you've been following the vocals for the whole map so it sounded out of place to ignore it here.

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue.

This is my favorite anime from last season. I love this song >w<

[General]

1. Don't need the comma after Haruka Yamazaki in tags fixed
2. Add tv size to tags? k
3. I'd set the preview point a 1/4 beat earlier so the fade-in doesn't occur while the chorus has already started. nice
   Hitsound suggestions apply to all diffs that have them.
4. 00:37:848 - clap doesn't fit music here I don't think so
5. 00:40:930 (2) - ^ ^
6. 00:54:081 to 00:54:389 - ^ agree on this one , I would delete clap on streams here and let the crescendo in the music do the thing here

[Easy]

1. 01:26:341 (2,3) - I get that you're going polarity here, but it follows the music a lot better if you do this: k
   

[Hard]

1. 00:02:505 (1) - Curve the slider the other way, it'll play better. k
2. 00:21:718 (5) - Was the whistle an accident? I didn't hear it on the Insane. whoops lol

[Insane]

1. 00:26:546 (4,5,6) - Maybe this is easier to play: okay lol
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:916 (4,5) - This is a really awkward transition because the cursor is moving northeast in order to hit (4) but then it has to slightly change its direction to hit (5) and then reverse the direction to play the slider and head towards (6). Try the following, which should play much better: k
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:54:081 (3,4,5,6) - Remove claps from these, since they don't start in the music yet. k
4. 00:54:183 (4,6) - Really I'd delete these since they're overmapped and rework 00:53:875 (2,3,4,5,6) - into this rhythm: I try listen this part at 25% and I actually hear a beat on blue tick so I think it not overmapped , the beats here have crescendo effect
   
5. 01:09:697 (8) - This may flow better: yea , I'm kinda don't know why I make the flow like that <.<
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:10:725 (4,5,6) - Moving these lower and changing the curve on the first slider makes it more comfortable to play: k
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:18:841 - There is a vocal here that you should map, since you've been following the vocals for the whole map so it sounded out of place to ignore it here. k

Great map, call me back!

No Dap wrote:

random check :3 cuz song is moe
[General]

1. video offset should be 200 imo mhmh..yea ok

[Easy]

1. 00:02:505 (2) - I don't see why you would end this here. End it 00:03:122 - to follow vocal and guitar ok , I'm ending there to balance the polarity but ending at 1/2 also fine
2. 00:32:094 - whistle? Doesn't sound right to me
3. 00:41:546 - clap? ok ( after this for hitsound , no reply = fixed )
4. 00:41:957 - whistle instead of clap?
5. 00:44:423 - ^
6. 00:44:834 - clap insated of whistle?
7. 00:48:122 - random finish, delete?
8. 01:07:437 - whistle instead of clap?
9. 01:19:355 - whistle? Doesn't sound right to me
10. 01:21:409 - random finish, not really fitting imo. you can add finish 01:19:766 - instead replace with whistle
11. 01:28:807 - maybe 20% volume? the lower, the better with the music :3 ok
    the hitsounds apply to all diffs

[Normal]

1. 00:02:505 (2) - same as easy fixed
2. 00:46:375 - this finish is really random and erratic fixed
   00:49:355 - ^ fixed
   same to all diff
3. 00:25:108 (2,4) - you can try to avoid such overlap. not really looking good :3 fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:08:875 (4) - maybe move it down a little. the spacing is kinda too much for nothing k lower spacing a bit here , I make jumps because I think 00:09:081 (1) - is emphaisized enough to make a jumps
2. 00:32:505 (2,3,4) - try to have a better spacing here. 2->3 and 3->spacing gap is almost double. ok
   
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3. 00:46:375 - I wish this was mapped. really fun melody.. ok
4. 01:01:478 (4,1) - jump is really too big lower spacing a bit
5. 01:04:971 (1) - maybe better shape? lol ok
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:05:793 (2,3,4,5) - how about this? too many circles and hard flow ok
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:17:094 (2) - 01:18:738 (3) - I wish the vocals were mapped, but that would make things complicated I guess yea, rhythm kinda a bit too complex so no
8. 01:24:697 (1) - this felt really awkward to me. starting on vocal 01:24:903 - makes much more sense. delete this note please.
   or just map the spinner for alternative choice. ok

[Insane]

1. HP7? mmhmmm...k
2. 00:26:341 (3,4,5,6) - 00:26:649 - i think you should focus on the 3/4 sound here I guess I want to emphasis the 1/2 and 1/1 beat more here , it doesn't sound that bad , I think it because I really don't think that 1/4 beat is really sound emphasized and 1/4 slider is a bit noisy enough to make this rhythm sound good imo
3. 00:27:985 (4,6,7,1) - the stack is appears ugly in game, doesn't affect the game play much though fixed
4. 00:33:533 (7,1) - too close compared to 00:33:327 (6,7) - ? fixed
5. 00:36:204 (3,4) - missed claps added clap to (4) 's tail
6. 00:55:622 (2) - you should place this further so it's easier to tell its 3/4. ok
7. 01:07:437 (4,5,6,7) - claps here sound too much and erratic fixed

call me back~ sure :>

Tari wrote:

00:13:601 (5) - I thought this was 1/6 snapped :O