Alright, this is going to be ap3n wrote:
Good job on the SB!
[ Kantan]
Almost all the diff is based on 4/1 patterns, which makes little sense as song is changing its intensity considerably between some sections.
00:19:332 - 00:38:532 - This and the other kiai should be more dense, it's mapped in a very similar way to the previous part where it was really calm, so the 4/1 fit, but here, where song increased the intensity, feels very empty, going a bit more 2/1 here and withj some 1/1 3-note patterns (or even 5) would fit nicely. 00:19:332 - 00:24:132 - Could be like o o ooo o o ooooo, maybe without the 5 note pattern, but that's up to you. Or something like you have in Futsuu, well be increasing the density there too, so you could just put that here instead.
00:38:532 - 00:57:732 - Here we are going 4/1 again, adding a few 2/1 3-note patterns would make it really different from the next section, where it goes calmer.
[ Futsuu]
This diff barely has any 1/2 patterns, even 1/1, but then we have the Muzukashii full of 1/2 patterns, so uhm, you could add some 1/2 patterns here to greatly improve the spread.
00:04:032 - You could add a note here, this would help to mark an end in this part in the music, and the map won't go full 2/1 in this part, which wouldn't represent the song in the same way. Like you did in Kantan with 00:03:732 (4,5,6) -
00:08:832 - ^
00:13:632 - ^
01:01:632 - ^
01:06:432 - ^
01:11:232 - ^
01:16:032 - ^
00:19:332 - 00:38:532 - Something similar as I mentioned in Kantan, and this is the point where the spread breaks the most. You could use 1/1 beats more here, making a few 1/2 3-note patterns. Example: 00:19:332 - 00:24:132 - o o o o o o ooo o o o o o ooo o o.
[ Muzukashii]
00:04:482 - You could add a note here, same reasons as in Futsuu.
00:09:282 - ^
00:14:082 - ^
01:02:082 - ^
01:06:882 - ^
01:11:682 - ^
01:16:482 - ^
00:20:982 (12) - Probably a kat would work better here as how the flow is going (dkdkdkdkddkkd)
00:25:782 (42) - ^
00:30:582 (74) - ^
00:35:382 (104) - ^
00:21:582 (16) - You could remove this note to create a small break after all this 1/2 fast pattern.
00:26:382 (46) - ^ *This one is more recommended, as we have this 1/4 pattern, so difficulty is quite hard here.
00:31:182 (78) - ^
00:35:982 (108) - ^ *
[ Oni]
00:00:132 - 00:14:532 - Probably remove all the notes in the 1/4 divisor, this way you'll keep this patterns exclusively before the last kiai, making it more unique there, (though personally I don't find the 1/4 doubles fitting well).
No other complains here, I liked the consistency in the whole difficulty, making it pleasant to play.
Also I'd want to suggest to consider a difficulty between Muzukashii and Oni, personally I consider the current gap fine, but just in case.
Nice set overall, good luck.