asd123iii wrote:

[General]
metadata統一一下吧
連kiai都不一樣.....


[Mashiro's ADVANCED Lv.12]
00:03:448 - 漏音? 前面同音有加
00:04:967 - ^
00:06:486 - ^
00:06:486 - ^
00:35:536 - 00:38:574 - 建議改成這段比前面難 後面就是休息區了
00:38:574 (38574|3) - LN到00:39:144 -
00:39:144 - 加LN
00:45:030 (45030|2) - 感覺不需要
00:50:726 - 加note
00:59:270 - 漏音
01:24:144 - 01:26:422 - 可以難一些

整體來說 這個難度太難 前1/3的難度要下降
3.2跟底難度差太多了
雖然我的mod幾乎都是加東西(炸

pocket-Gao wrote:

回家更新了 好好好评
顺便生快www

RemiFlan wrote:

Hi. Random mod Thought I'd have more to this though..

0|1|2|3 columns

NOVICE lv.8

00:43:131 (43131|3) - move to 1 Fixed
01:39:334 - Why is there SV change on the easiest diff? Change it to not be so extreme (0.8 -> 1.2 -> 1.0) or remove it. Removed

EXHAUST lv.14

00:20:220 (20220|0) - move to 1 and add note to 3 OK

Just suggestions I have ^^

Selucre wrote:

Hi

Novice:

00:41:938 (41938|0) - move to 3; feels better to me
00:49:343 (49343|3) - move to 0; ^^
This map feels quite 0 heavy, particularly from ~00:51: to ~01:01:
00:51:432 (51432|0,52191|0,52951|0,53426|0,53710|0,54470|0,55229|0,55989|0,56463|0,56748|0) - change it up a bit
I suggest 00:51:432 (51432|0,52191|0,52951|1,53426|3,53710|1,54470|3,55134|3,55989|2,56463|0,56748|2) -

00:56:463 (56463|0,57508|0,58267|0,59027|0,59786|0,60546|0,61305|0) - possibly change these
01:02:729 (62729|3) - remove; rhythm is not intuitive, nicer to play without it
01:17:729 (77729|1) - consider removing; no melody note in the music It has
01:18:299 (78299|1) - remove; note is hard to hear in the music
01:21:432 (81432|0) - extend slider to match 01:22:951 (82951|0) -
01:37:191: 01:37:381 (97381|3) - remove - no corresponding note in melody
01:37:191 (97191|1,97571|2) - Ctrl + H or change to 01:37:191 (97191|3,97571|2,97951|1) - Flows better
01:39:660 (99660) - change slider velocity to 1x throughout the map
EDIT: or add more velocity changes throughout the map. Only having one feels out of place.
01:41:463 (101463|2,101748|1) - move to 3 to make it clearer they are not melody notes
01:41:938 (101938|0) - move to 2 \
01:42:698 (102698|2) - move to 0 - ->better fit the melody line
01:43:647 (103647|3) - move to 2 /
01:44:786 (104786) - missing note; suggest 1

lvl12

00:38:900 (38900|3) - missing note, change to 00:38:900 (38900|3,39470|2,40039|1) -
I'm too bad to mod any harder parts than this

First mod, be gentle
Edit: added image

asd123iii wrote:

[General]
metadata統一一下吧 metadata沒問題啊
連kiai都不一樣..... 改了

[NOVICE Lv.8]
00:12:372 - 00:12:562 - 各加 1note 把兩段接上去? OK
00:12:751 - 最後一個改成LN 跟00:13:891 (13891|3) - 是同性質的音 OK

SPOILER

01:12:372 (72372|3) - 鼓點? 不，前面都沒放了
01:24:524 - 可以切開 切了

SPOILER

[EXHAUST Lv.14]
00:07:815 - 可以把鼓點放同個位置敲 好

SPOILER

00:23:764 - 應該是1/4的三連音 唉我當初怎麼放了1/6

SPOILER

00:41:612 (41612|2,41660|1,41683|0) - 1/6 好像改了
00:44:650 - 1/8 我好像改了

SPOILER

paperlens wrote:

我只是路过玩诗谱的ww
victorica's GRAVITY Lv.15 ：
00:31:929 - 和 - 00:32:308 - 是不是少note了- -我觉得应该是双键鼓音啊
00:53:764 - 这里如果map的是钢琴音的话 应该是三个音啊 间谍哥的难度里就是三个音 需要改一下排列？
no kudos 我就是来玩诗谱的而已

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

column 1234
我拜託你把這修了 馬德，原來是記事本就能改的東西

[NOVICE Lv.6]
00:08:005 - add OK
00:11:043 - 很明顯我沒在抓這個音啊
00:45:600 - LN ends here Done
01:16:929 - add Done
01:29:081 - ^ 沒音
01:36:106 - separate LN? OK
01:36:675 - 01:36:770 - add and LN ends? LN ends only
00:32:118 - 00:32:308 - add OK
01:08:574 - add 這裡沒琴音啊，就算有也是在01:08:669 - ，而且不明顯
01:12:467 - add OK

[EXHAUST Lv.14]
00:23:859 (23859|2) - normal notes or 00:24:049 - LN
00:40:663 - no LN?
00:53:812 (53812|1,53835|2) - snap error?
00:57:941 - add
01:03:068 - 為啥兩個
01:23:194 - add
01:32:878 (92878|3) - normal note
01:45:600 - add好像不通
All fix，包括那個不通的

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

column 1234
我拜託你把這修了


[Mashiro's ADVANCED Lv.12]
有些是殺難度的建議 看看吧
00:38:384 (38384|3) - 移除吧
01:09:713 - 到 01:10:473 - 是不是放鋼琴就好?不然有點難 这里要改的话就前后不搭了 所以没改
01:24:049 - 加音
01:26:992 - 移除一個?
01:39:334 (99334|0,99397|2,99460|0,99524|2,99587|0,99650|2) - 要不要試試LN?
01:43:321 - 加
00:17:878 - 到00:18:163 - 都減少一個音吧，和00:01:739 - 這種也不錯 或是00:16:929 -
00:11:232 - 應該要加音吧 和 00:09:713 - 00:08:194 - 一樣
00:31:739 - 可以試試看只放鼓音 00:31:834 (31834|1,32024|3,32213|0,32403|2) - 移除看看好不好
00:13:891 (13891|0,14081|3) - 試著不放音看看
01:20:821 (80821|1,81011|3) - 跟上上個一樣
01:46:549 - 到01:46:929 - 放鋼琴

Marirose wrote:

Hey 400 o/

BN CHECK


[General]

Timing:OK
Audio:OK
BG: OK
Metadata:OK
Preview Point:OK
AiMod:OK


[排列与其他]

Gap=All OK

Cloumn=1,2,3,4

NOVICE Lv.6

00:00:600 (600|3) - finish的hs加上吧，不过可能需要另一个新的wav 就這個finish吧，反正又聽不出來
00:13:226 (13226|0,13606|2) - 同一个音，建议同轨道 不了，這1/4的排列特別放這樣好打多，放同一排會略卡
00:29:270 (29270|0,29460|3) - 两个whistle同轨道，00:29:081 (29081|2,29081|0,29270|0,29270|2) - 做成不同轨，
00:29:270 (29270|2,29270|0,29460|3) - 同轨道一个连点 改了
00:31:739 (31739|0,31929|0) - 这里ok 所以這個有沒有問題
00:49:017 (49017|3) - 放到col3 好
00:56:802 (56802|3) - 少了whistle 好
00:59:840 (59840|2,60600|3) - 我用sample 0%的确有whistle，加上 加了

end

EXHAUST Lv.14

00:09:808 (9808|1,9903|2,9998|1) - 这里的音并不适合左右交替，建议把00:09:998 (9998|1) - 左移
00:12:751 (12751|2) - 最好补上个短的finish音效（如果不加的话请忽视下面相关的*建议
00:17:024 (17024|2) - 漏了whistle，参考00:17:213 (17213|2) -
* 00:17:593 (17593|2) - 短finish
00:28:986 (28986|2) - 右移
00:30:600 (30600|1) - 音效错误，clap，参考00:32:118 (32118|0) - （其他diff都有相同问题，creator去提醒下各位guest吧
00:43:131 (43131|0) - 放在4比放在1好的多，这个钢琴音明明是转过去的，这样太难受
00:53:812 (53812|1,53835|2) - 不建议抓这个音，突然的1/16是坑爹
01:02:498 (62498|1) - 放在col4，连接01:02:688 (62688|2,62878|1) - 形成钢琴的楼梯
01:07:245 (67245|3,67245|2,67340|1,67340|0) - 和01:09:903 (69903|1,69903|3) - 01:10:283 (70283|3,70283|0) -
可是01:12:941 - 和01:13:321 - 为何不上double？（如果是钢琴的清音就可以忽视
01:18:353 (78353|2) - 这个音和01:18:163 (78163|2) - 不大相同，建议与01:18:068 (78068|0,78068|1) - 的任意一个保持同步
01:18:637 - 和01:19:017 - 也是钢琴（*
01:19:207 (79207|2,79207|0,79397|2,79587|2) - 参考 01:11:612 (71612|3,71612|2,71802|0,71802|2,71992|1,71992|0) -
建议忽视chord跟主音就行
01:22:055 - 这里明显是清音你却double。。
01:26:707 (86707|1) - 放在col1，连续同轨手感并不好
01:32:783 - 主音，考虑double，参考01:36:106 -
01:32:878 (92878|2) - 加上whistle
01:47:308 - 这里为何是triple（如果是和01:46:549 - 一样的clap的triple就ok）

我直接re大多數的地方了，你重新看一下
end

victorica's GRAVITY Lv.15

00:07:815 (7815|0) - 多了个clap
00:17:024 (17024|2) - 少了whistle
00:30:600 (30600|3) - 是clap不是whistle
00:40:663 (40663|1) - 这里的音和00:38:574 - 一样，所以建议col1或者col4，然后把00:40:663 (40663|1) - 放在3
01:02:213 (62213|0) - 放在col2，clap在右边保持，主音变化用左边
01:04:017 (64017|3) - 音效错误，clap
01:12:467 (72467|3,72562|1) - 这里ctrl+g，参考01:12:277 (72277|3) - ，并保持左右手平衡，转折到左边 Fixed，代回
01:35:346 (95346|3,95441|1) - 的01:35:441 (95441|1) - ，参考01:34:967 (94967|1,95062|2) - ，把jack放在面条下面更好
01:41:992 (101992|0) - 音效错误，clap
01:43:511 (103511|0) - 0%sample并没有finish


end

woc我头像和这曲子同步了！ woc
Good Luck

Marirose wrote:

Hey 400 o/

BN CHECK


[General]

Timing:OK
Audio:OK
BG: OK
Metadata:OK
Preview Point:OK
AiMod:OK


[排列与其他]

Gap=All OK

Cloumn=1,2,3,4

Mashiro's ADVANCED Lv.12

00:01:739 (1739|2,1834|1,1929|2,2024|1) - 都加个whistle，漏了
00:13:321 - 漏了clap
00:20:093 (20093|3) - - 这个在col4有些不舒服，不如把这四个做成左右交替或者左到右的楼梯
00:23:005 (23005|0,23100|1) - 这两个whistle不明显，00:23:194 (23194|2,23289|3) - 反而漏了whistle
00:26:232 (26232|1,26327|0) - 这两个就加对了，你可以做个参考
01:17:973 (77973|1,78068|2) - ctrl+g，因为和01:17:593 (77593|1,77688|0,77688|2) - 这个做对比，从2-13到3-24更符合
01:18:258 (78258|1) - 然后把这个修到3
01:18:068 - 从这里，如果你没抓那个副音，只抓主音的话，那么01:19:492 - 这个音绝对比01:19:112 (79112|2) - 明显，可是你却没有抓而抓了01:19:112 (79112|2) - 这个，我建议直接删了01:19:112 (79112|2) -
01:22:625 - 这里到01:24:144 - ，你也是舍弃了副音，可以和上面做一下对比（ps：这里是ok的
01:32:878 (92878|1) - 建议补上whistle的音效
01:34:017 (94017|1) - 音效错误，这里是whistle
01:35:156 - 到01:36:296 - 也是主副音的问题
01:43:511 (103511|1) - 音效错误，没有finish
01:46:169 (106169|0,106359|2) - 音效错误，是whistle而不是clap
01:48:448 (108448|3) - 在这里加上whistle的音效，参考01:49:207 -

end

woc我头像和这曲子同步了！
Good Luck

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Go Go bubble and rank it XD . . .

tehee ^ ^

Marirose wrote:

irc hs mod

23:11 *Marirose is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/545804 Soleily - Violet Soul [NOVICE Lv.6]]
23:11 Marirose: 00:08:194 - 漏whistle
23:12 Spy: 好
23:12 Marirose: 00:13:891 (13891|3) -最好也加上whistle
23:12 Spy: 好
23:12 Marirose: 00:20:346 (20346|3) - whistle
23:13 Spy: done
23:13 Marirose: 00:23:005 (23005|3) - whistle
23:13 Spy: 直接繼續貼
23:13 Marirose: 我在看啦
23:14 Spy: 嗯
23:14 Marirose: 等下我要post下吗
23:14 Spy: 看你啊
23:15 Spy: 阿不然你也可以直接在post說irc修了hitsound
23:15 Marirose: 我还是po一下，等会查aimod还有其他的,hs先看，你帮忙修下其他diff的hs
23:16 Spy: 哦好
23:16 Marirose: 01:05:916 (65916|0) - whistle
23:16 Marirose: 01:08:479 (68479|1) - 错了,没有clap
23:16 Marirose: 去了
23:16 Marirose: 01:08:954 (68954|0) - whistle
23:17 Marirose: 01:10:473 (70473|0,70853|1,71232|2,71612|3) - w,c,w,c
23:17 Marirose: 01:15:030 (75030|0) - W,F
23:17 Marirose: 01:17:308 (77308|1) - W
23:18 Marirose: 01:20:346 (80346|2,80726|1,81106|0) - WCW
23:18 Marirose: 01:22:625 (82625|0) - W
23:18 Marirose: 01:24:524 (84524|0) - W
23:18 Marirose: 01:25:093 (85093|1) - W
23:18 Marirose: 01:27:182 (87182|2) - W
23:19 Marirose: 01:29:840 (89840|3) - W,不是C
23:20 Marirose: 啊上面那个错了，01:29:840 (89840|3) - 是C
23:21 Marirose: 01:31:739 (91739|3) - w
23:21 Marirose: 01:33:258 (93258|0) - W
23:21 Marirose: 01:34:777 (94777|0,95156|1,95536|2,95916|3) - WCWC
23:21 Marirose: 01:36:296 (96296|1) - W
23:22 Marirose: 01:37:055 (97055|3) - W
23:22 Spy: woc怎麼這麼多
23:22 Marirose: 01:38:954 (98954|0) - 漏W
23:22 Marirose: 01:39:713 (99713|3) - 明明是C和F你却加了W
23:22 Marirose: 醉了
23:23 Marirose: 01:42:372 (102372|2) - w
23:23 Marirose: 01:43:891 (103891|3) - w
23:23 Marirose: 01:46:929 (106929|0) - cf
23:23 Marirose: 01:47:688 (107688|3,108068|2) - wc
23:24 Marirose: 修好了吗
23:24 *Marirose is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/547326 Soleily - Violet Soul [Mashiro's ADVANCED Lv.12]]
23:24 Spy: 簡直是射了，還沒，但你繼續貼，不過別貼太快，會被判定成spam
23:24 Marirose: 我等等你吧
23:26 Spy: 好了
23:26 *Marirose is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/547326 Soleily - Violet Soul [Mashiro's ADVANCED Lv.12]]
23:27 Marirose: 00:02:118 (2118|3) - W
23:27 Marirose: 00:11:232 (11232|3) - F
23:28 Marirose: w
23:28 Marirose: 00:14:081 (14081|1) - W
23:28 Marirose: 00:14:270 (14270|3) - extra F
23:28 Marirose: 00:17:973 (17973|1) - W
23:28 Spy: done
23:30 Marirose: 00:36:865 (36865|1) - W
23:30 Marirose: 00:56:802 (56802|0) - W
23:32 Marirose: 01:17:973 (77973|2) - ...
23:32 Marirose: 01:17:973 (77973|2) - remove,add W at 01:18:068 (78068|3) -
23:32 Spy: 好
23:33 Marirose: 01:39:334 (99334|0,99397|2,99460|0,99524|2,99587|0,99650|2) - W
23:34 Marirose: 没了，修好了传下，我要更新你的lv6做参考
23:37 Marirose: 01:39:334 (99334|0,99397|2,99460|0,99524|2,99587|0,99650|2) - W
23:37 Marirose: 没了
23:40 Marirose: ?
23:41 Marirose: ?
23:43 Marirose: 01:39:334 (99334|0,99397|2,99460|0,99524|2,99587|0,99650|2) -
23:43 Marirose: w
23:44 Marirose: ?
23:45 Marirose: 01:39:334 (99334|0,99397|2,99460|0,99524|2,99587|0,99650|2) - W
23:45 Marirose: 没了，修好了传下，我要更新你的lv6做参考
23:46 Spy: 更上了
23:47 Marirose: 继续
23:47 *Marirose is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/545063 Soleily - Violet Soul [Spy VS. S.Star's EXHAUST Lv.14]]
23:51 Marirose: 00:58:701 (58701|3) - c
23:51 Spy: 有東西嗎
23:51 Marirose: DB
23:51 Marirose: 有
23:52 Spy: db ?
23:52 Spy: 還是我的
23:52 Spy: 哦改了
23:52 Marirose: db的这里加了
23:52 Spy: 嗯
23:52 Spy: 其他的呢
23:52 Marirose: 有音，我确定
23:52 Spy: 嗯
23:55 Marirose: 没了
23:55 *Marirose is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/549849 Soleily - Violet Soul [Eulb's INFINITE Lv.14]]
23:56 Marirose: 00:03:258 (3258|3) - extra W
23:57 Spy: 好
23:58 Marirose: 00:18:827 (18827|3) - 漏W，顺便加在lv6，刚刚没看到
23:59 Spy: 好
00:04 Marirose: 00:28:701 (28701|3) - w
00:04 Marirose: 00:30:220 (30220|2) - w
00:05 Marirose: 00:30:125 - 豆包哥diff，漏w
00:06 Marirose: 00:30:979 (30979|1) - w
00:06 *Spy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/549849 Soleily - Violet Soul [Eulb's INFINITE Lv.14]]
00:06 Spy: 這個呢
00:06 Spy: 還有嗎
00:06 Spy: 哦
00:07 Marirose: 00:30:979 (30979|1) - c
00:07 Spy: w拿不拿
00:07 Marirose: 00:30:979 (30979|1) - DB diff, extra C
00:08 Spy: 沒問題啊
00:08 Marirose: 手误，00:30:979 (30979|1) - 是w
00:08 Spy: 等等。。
00:08 Spy: 所以是要把c拿下來 ?
00:08 Spy: 蛤
00:08 Spy: db的那個沒有多出來
00:08 Marirose: 多了C
00:08 Marirose: extra
00:09 Spy: 沒有，db的就一個w
00:13 Spy: 你時間點貼錯啦
00:13 Marirose: 恩
00:13 Marirose: 玛德在哪
00:13 Spy: db那個你就貼錯了
00:13 Marirose: db的有个多余的我看到
00:14 Marirose: 01:28:321 (88321|0) - C
00:14 Marirose: 01:30:979 (90979|1) - W
00:14 Marirose: 01:35:916 (95916|0) -
00:14 Marirose: 01:35:916 (95916|0) - C
00:15 Spy: 01:35:916 - 有c啊
00:15 Spy: 等等。
00:15 Spy: 看錯diff了
00:15 Marirose: 01:37:055 (97055|2) - W
00:16 Spy: 好
00:16 Marirose: 01:46:169 (106169|0,106359|0) - wrong,both of them is W
00:17 Spy: 好
00:17 Marirose: 没了，我去看看db的，保险
00:17 Spy: 我先更
00:18 Spy: 好了
00:19 Marirose: 00:22:245 (22245|3) - 果然
00:19 Spy: 唉，改了
00:20 Marirose: 01:02:403 (62403|0) - 有一个
00:21 Spy: 好
00:21 Marirose: end

BN RE-CHECK
ai-mod = OK
folder no change = OK
hitsounds all fixed = OK

LET'S GO
QUALIFIED

Starry- wrote:

grats Spy and grats Marirose for 1st icon :3/

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Grats Spy owo/

Feerum wrote:

Nice Map! Grats Spy! :3

Starry- wrote:

grats Spy and grats Marirose for 1st icon :3/

Julie wrote:

Starry- wrote:

grats Spy and grats Marirose for 1st icon :3/

^ this

now go sleep~ :3

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

Grats ! >w</

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Spy, go to sleep !

Spy wrote:

lol,good night ~

REDYUMiKA wrote:

finally congrats!

Sky_Demon wrote:

太神 太神

[ Mephisto ] wrote:

Congrats ( ﾟ▽ﾟ)/

toara_fict wrote:

Gratz Moe Spy :3v

No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together. For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties. The person who should upload the map is the one who contributed most to it. Maps with an ambiguous set of difficulties such as collabs will be evaluated on a case-by-case basis to ensure that the submitting mapper is properly accounted for.

Halogen- wrote:

I guess now would be a good time to ask for clarification on some confusion I had regarding the ranking criteria about guest difficulties, since I was under the impression that the main mapper had to have more difficulties than all of the guest difficulties:

No guest mapper should have more difficulties in the mapset than the creator, all modes together. For collaboration mapsets, the uploader should take part in all collab difficulties. The person who should upload the map is the one who contributed most to it. Maps with an ambiguous set of difficulties such as collabs will be evaluated on a case-by-case basis to ensure that the submitting mapper is properly accounted for.

This map has 1.5 maps credited to Spy, with 3.5 guest difficulties (Eulb, Mashiro, victorica, and half credit to S. Star) -- is this legitimate because Spy has 1.5 maps and then everyone else has either one map or half a map credited?

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

What is this?