ZUN - The Sealed-Away Youkai ~ Lost Place · forum

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-06T18:54:07+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 March 2010 at 18:22:50

Artist: ZUN
Title: The Sealed-Away Youkai ~ Lost Place
Source: Touhou
Tags: Yamame Kurodani Subterranean Animism yeahyeahyeahhh yyy
BPM: 165
Filesize: 4003kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Hard (5 stars, 272 notes)
Normal (4.28 stars, 135 notes)
yyy's Easy (2.99 stars, 51 notes)

Download: ZUN - The Sealed-Away Youkai ~ Lost Place
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Quite a short song.

Yamame Kurodani's theme

Last edited by Natteke 2010-03-30T17:22:58+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

KIA

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KIA 2010-03-06T20:11:51+00:00

D:

James2250

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James2250 2010-03-07T00:28:49+00:00

bg needs to be 1024x768 and below so resize yours
you don't need touhou in tags as its already in source
don't have stack leniency all the way to the left
break isnt needed

Normal:
00:04:628 (4,5) - spacing
00:07:537 (4,5) - spacing
00:10:446 (3,4) - spacing
00:16:265 (4,5) - ^
00:19:174 (4,5) - ^
00:27:901 (4,5) - ^
00:30:810 (5,6) - ^
00:39:537 (4,5) - ^
end kiai time at the end of this slider 00:52:265 (7)
why not map to where hard ends

Hard:
00:04:628 (4) - maybe new combo for the jumps
00:07:537 (4) - ^
00:42:719 (4,5,6) - spacing
00:43:901 (1,2) - ^
00:47:537 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - don't overuse finish (part before this too)

*star*

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-07T00:30:22+00:00

Will fix this tomorrow. Thanks for the feedback

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-03-07T11:59:10+00:00

Σ(･ω･ﾉ)ﾉ☆

Astom

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Astom 2010-03-10T23:33:46+00:00

In blue suggestions,in red maybe important
[Normal]
-Acc 100% nice :3

[Hard]
-Acc 92%
-01:04:992 maybe u can start mapping in this part
-01:16:628 <-> 01:17:265 maybe in this part u can follow piano :3 (erase this 01:16:901 (8) and 01:17:265 (11))
-Run AIMod

Star :3

Fuuko

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Fuuko 2010-03-19T17:55:03+00:00

Star.

Jinxy

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Jinxy 2010-03-20T11:29:03+00:00

Gudu ~~NOT SHAMEIMARU~~ mapu again

Glass

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Glass 2010-03-25T18:38:11+00:00

star4spider~~man~~girl

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-25T20:28:08+00:00

:3 Thank you~

Dotsu

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Dotsu 2010-03-27T11:25:11+00:00

Suggestions:
[General]
You should add an [easy] difficulty.
Normal
00:17:537(6): New combo
00:20:265(6): New combo
00:23:355(5): New combo
00:40:810(6): ^
00:43:537(6): ^
01:08:446(5): ^
01:11:174(6): ^
01:14:265 Add a note here
Hard
Hard is good.
Very nice map! ~star~

Xgor

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Xgor 2010-03-28T14:18:03+00:00

Need a easier difficulty

[Tags]
Add Subterranean Animism to tags.

[Preview point]
I think 00:38:083 is a better Preview point although it's quite similar to the one you have.

[Background]
The current background proportions are horrible. Resize/crop it to 1024x768

[Hitsounds]
There is no claps whatsoever but there is tons of whistles and that is kinda annoying.

[Normal]
Not too found of the 10s break on this difficulty.

Could you use finishes at the same places as in Hard please.

[Hard]
Somewhat hard for an Hard

00:22:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this to look extremely ugly, cluttred and quite confusing the first time playing this but it might be just me.
00:27:355 - 00:37:355 - Can you please add finishes at the same places as in 01:17:355 - 01:25:719
01:12:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same this as in 00:22:083.

Pretty good but you need to work on the hitsounds and make an easier difficulty.

Well here's a star
*star*

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-28T14:53:07+00:00

Xgor wrote:
Need a easier difficulty - It's a short song, I don't wanna make tons of difficilties on that. Normal and Hard is fine IMO

[Tags]
Add Subterranean Animism to tags. - done

[Preview point]
I think 00:38:083 is a better Preview point although it's quite similar to the one you have. - I will leave mine

[Background]
The current background proportions are horrible. Resize/crop it to 1024x768 - oops, forgot

[Hitsounds]
There is no claps whatsoever but there is tons of whistles and that is kinda annoying. - I don't think clap fits in this song

[Normal]
Not too found of the 10s break on this difficulty. - remapped

Could you use finishes at the same places as in Hard please. - No :3

[Hard]
Somewhat hard for an Hard
00:22:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this to look extremely ugly, cluttred and quite confusing the first time playing this but it might be just me. - Others find it pretty cool Will see what MATs/BATs will say.
00:27:355 - 00:37:355 - Can you please add finishes at the same places as in 01:17:355 - 01:25:719 - No
01:12:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same this as in 00:22:083.

Pretty good but you need to work on the hitsounds and make an easier difficulty.

Well here's a star
*star*

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-29T16:47:20+00:00

Technically you're supposed to have a difficulty that is 3 stars (or close) or less.

At least two difficulties per song is required. If your beatmap's difficulty is 4 or more difficulty stars (in the song selection screen), it is necessary that you also include an easier version with 3 or less stars. There are a lot of players who are not so skilled at rhythm games - and this is one of the more difficult ones to get used to, so we should look at providing beatmaps which are passable for even beginners!

But I think your normal is easy enough... Just be wary a BAT might make you make an easier one before a bubble...

Oh and I forgot to star

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2010-03-29T17:57:09+00:00

okay here's a mod

Hard:
00:55:355 (1) - Move this to the white tick a put a single note here? Kinda like how you have in the beginning 00:04:083 (2,3) -

Here is the .osu with some adjusted hitsounds, take if you wanna.

Download: ZUN - The Sealed-Away Youkai ~ Lost Place (Natteke desu) [Hard].osu

Normal:
Might just be me.. but I think the OD is WAY to slow. At least for a normal. On a marked E or something this would be fine, but too many notes placed for this OD IMO. Just try a solid Normal OD? Or 1 tick below, but I think normal is fine.

Here is my easy, take it if you want. I hope you do :X No hard feelings if you don't lol

Edit: Update
Download: ZUN - The Sealed-Away Youkai ~ Lost Place (Natteke desu) [yyy's Easy].osu

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2010-03-29T21:57:52+00:00

...And heres another mod

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

Offset: 3,170 (only a minor difference. Thats just what I got when I timed it)

[YYY'S EASY]

Feels more like a normal to me, but since theres a normal already, I guess this works. Looks good

[NORMAL]

Looks good

[HARD]

Lower overall difficulty by 1 notch? Feels like the approach circles come in a bit too fast imo.

'tis fine

Very nice. Once you're done with my suggestions, I'll come and protobubble

Starred

Natteke

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Natteke 2010-03-29T22:04:14+00:00