1. Insolence (5.07 stars, 464 notes)

1. pls snap all these green points to the blue ticks/the ticks right after themjk i'll do that for you
2. 01:05:558 (7) - make this slider go to the next white tick
3. 01:12:453 (1,2,3,4) - to increase difficulty, maybe add spacing between the sliders?
4. 01:23:833 (3,4,5) - pls fix stack to something like this
5. 01:30:557 (3) - move this from x208/y136 to x188/y140 and 01:30:384 (2) to y140 so that 3 stacks with the end of 01:30:041 (1) for #aesthetics
6. 01:31:591 (7) - x288/y284 -> x296/y284 to stack with start of next slider for #aesthetics
7. going from 01:31:764 (8) to 01:32:281 (1,2) looks a bit weird and idk try spacing out those two from the slider to increase difficulty hooray, if you don't want to do that pls at least make sure 01:31:764 (8,1,2) look nicer by either stacking 01:32:281 (1) with the end of the slider and maybe make some kind of blanket thing with 01:32:453 (2) like this? i'm terrible at blanketing
8. 01:34:006 (4,4) - pls stack these
9. the spacing between the end of 01:39:350 (1), 01:40:126 (2) and 01:40:212 (3) is uneven rn so maybe do something like this and space 01:40:384 (4) out a little more away from them
10. 01:43:143 (1,2) - crying
11. i feel like more spacing between the end of 01:47:281 (1) and the start of 01:47:626 (2) would be more appropriate
12. move 02:12:799 (2) to the end of 02:12:454 (1) and ctrl+h
13. 02:33:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - try redoing the stream before the slider to a slider that would kinda compliment 02:34:523 (5) so that the 2 sliders (with the first slider/the new one you'll make) will go with the current slider to make it into a curved shape that's made up of 2 sliders u feel me (basically, copy+paste, ctrl+j, ctrl+g, try making a slider like this, convert slider to stream and get the desired amount of circles by adjusting distance snap and damn son where'd you find this)

[Chisaki-san] wrote:

:^)

[insane]

1. pls snap all these green points to the blue ticks/the ticks right after themjk i'll do that for you
2. 01:05:558 (7) - make this slider go to the next white tick

fixed01:12:453 (1,2,3,4) - to increase difficulty, maybe add spacing between the sliders? spaced a little, small spacing was the idea ;^)01:23:833 (3,4,5) - pls fix stack to something like this fixed01:30:557 (3) - move this from x208/y136 to x188/y140 and 01:30:384 (2) to y140 so that 3 stacks with the end of 01:30:041 (1) for #aesthetics fixed01:31:591 (7) - x288/y284 -> x296/y284 to stack with start of next slider for #aesthetics fixedgoing from 01:31:764 (8) to 01:32:281 (1,2) looks a bit weird and idk try spacing out those two from the slider to increase difficulty hooray, if you don't want to do that pls at least make sure 01:31:764 (8,1,2) look nicer by either stacking 01:32:281 (1) with the end of the slider and maybe make some kind of blanket thing with 01:32:453 (2) like this? i'm terrible at blanketing tried xD01:34:006 (4,4) - pls stack these fixedthe spacing between the end of 01:39:350 (1), 01:40:126 (2) and 01:40:212 (3) is uneven rn so maybe do something like this and space 01:40:384 (4) out a little more away from them fixed i think xD01:43:143 (1,2) - crying samei feel like more spacing between the end of 01:47:281 (1) and the start of 01:47:626 (2) would be more appropriate fixed maybemove 02:12:799 (2) to the end of 02:12:454 (1) and ctrl+h fixed02:33:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - try redoing the stream before the slider to a slider that would kinda compliment 02:34:523 (5) so that the 2 sliders (with the first slider/the new one you'll make) will go with the current slider to make it into a curved shape that's made up of 2 sliders u feel me (basically, copy+paste, ctrl+j, ctrl+g, try making a slider like this, convert slider to stream and get the desired amount of circles by adjusting distance snap and damn son where'd you find this) fixed
idk i'll think of more later :'^)

[ Rizen ] wrote:

yahuu

1. 00:21:598 (1) - remove nc, it's unneccessary fixed
2. 00:21:081 (1,1,1) - about these sliders, shouldn't they all be same slider velo? for consistency fixed
3. 00:30:391 (6) - you can definitely make a prettier slider :^) fixed
4. 00:55:736 (4) - you can probably make it blanket around the circle 3 fixed
5. 00:59:012 (4,5,6) - equal spacing fixed
6. 01:16:598 (2,3) - copy and paste slider 2 and ctrl+h was already like this lmao
7. 01:23:495 (1) - i don't think this should be that close to end of slider 3, because there's a gap in between (in beats) fixed the whole pattern
8. 01:28:840 (4) - make this slightly lower so it's in line with the rest of the stream fixed
9. 01:37:633 (5) - ctrl+g and angle it slightly? img fixed
10. 01:40:736 (2) - move to x:239 u:68? changed pattern ds
11. 01:51:081 (4,5,6,7) - better to make it symmetrical? copy and paste a slider at 45deg, then ctrl+h, then select the two slider and ctrl+j fixed
12. 01:52:978 (3) - copy/paste and ctrl+h 01:52:633 (1) - for symmetry fixed
13. 01:53:495 (5) - ^ but with 01:53:150 (4) - fixed
14. 01:53:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice circle polygon u2
15. 02:22:978 (6,7,8) - maybe try instead of (6) right (7,8) left, try (6)left, (7)right, (8)left fixed
16. 04:01:867 (6,7,8) - too spread out imo (since this is the "slow" part) try making them closer fixed
17. 04:03:153 (1) - slider doesn't really suit it. maybe a circle? fixed
18. 04:49:689 (4) - nc? fixed
19. 05:24:861 (2) - curve it the other way? better flow idk what you mean, show me

good work on fully mapping a 6min song

-Kanzaki wrote:

Hey, from my m4m queue.

Insolence :

• 
  
  00:22:202 (1) - add spin or long slider even if you want there empty add break time but since you did this one 00:30:391 (6) you should do something to others too. fixed them all
  
  00:24:960 (1) - ^
  
  00:28:064 (1) - ^ there are more i think you know them.
  
  00:31:771 (7) - add circle extended slider with no silent end
  
  00:54:357 (1) - 00:55:047 - I dont know what you followed with that spin but i tried shorter spin and used at this time try. just moved spinner along
  
  01:03:172 - at this section using the same drum hitsound fits better. fixed
  
  00:55:623 - use slower SV at this section dont think 2.00 neccesary also u used this SV here but at kiai time u used less SV i didnt understand that. lol idek i did this part ages ago and didn't realise, fixed i think
  
  01:06:253 - use more SV at this section or use less SV previous parts because it feels easy or empty w/e you call it after the previous part fixed kinda
  
  01:49:012 (4) - NC fixed all
  
  01:51:081 (4) - ^
  
  01:59:357 (4) - ^
  
  02:40:391 (2) - ^ except this, unneccesary
  
  02:49:702 (5) - ^
  
  02:51:426 (4) - ^ (basicly if you follow another sound use NC)
  
  03:56:939 (1) - stack better fixed
  
  02:25:219 (3,4) - Doesn't seems good fixed
  
  02:05:564 (5,6) - this distance isnt ok fixed
  
  03:55:975 (7,8) - ^ fixed
  
  03:44:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 03:57:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Isn't this parts are same but why used another sv and used less taps. fixed sv, less taps because of sliders
  
  04:35:207 (1) - The BPM feels like starting going down again from here to here : 04:40:724 charles timed it
  
  05:04:344 (1,2) - Doesn't seem and feel good while playing. fixed
  
  05:48:137 (6) - delete i don't see why, if someone else suggests i will
  
  05:49:517 (7) - ^
  
  05:52:275 (2) - ^
  
  05:53:655 (1) - ^ and there are more

Good luck wtih the map!


You can mod this one or this one

I'll fix these up and mod yours when I wake up, thanks

Anxient wrote:

fak

m4m~
00:19:529 (1) - 00:19:357 - sttart here because thats where the high pitched sound begins fixed
00:24:529 (3,5) - try to allign sliderend with 3? lmao didn't even realise when i made it, fixed
00:32:115 - why the normal hitsound? the previous was better imo fixed
00:42:978 (1) - start on blue tick previous or later?
00:54:098 (1) - 00:54:012 - starts here m8 fixed
00:55:219 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle plz? use equal ds for this or use polygon circles. fixed kinda
00:56:426 (6,7,8) - equal ds fixed
01:00:909 (4,5,6) - triangle fixed
01:01:771 (2,3,4,5) - square? polygon circles. fixed basically
01:12:460 (1,2,3,4) - why not space these out? these look like 3/4 sliders idk, fixed i guess
01:20:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - perfect triangles plz u makin me die, fixed
01:25:047 (1) - pretty sure you dont need an overlap here. relocate. fixed
01:45:047 (5,8) - avoidable overlap fixed
01:57:288 (4,5,6) - ayy dont do this m8 klmao i ran out of ideas, fixed
02:16:771 (3,4) - woaa ctrl+g. makes a nice jump. fixed
well for the most part, the majority of the jumps you put here seems random. out of place, but let us continue shall we? lmao
03:43:653 - 03:44:082 - stream? fixed all, didn't even hear that originally xD
03:47:082 - 03:47:510 - ^
03:50:510 - 03:50:939 - ^except here, hitting those sliders would be difficult
04:10:653 - 04:35:207 - dont put a break here... map something ;w; maybe if it's requested again
04:42:448 (6,7) - overlap? fixed
05:14:517 (8) - curve this slider the other way fixed
05:16:586 (1,4) - use the same slider plz i thought i did lol, fixed
05:18:999 (4,5) - overlap fixed all
05:19:517 (6,8) - ^
05:19:517 (6,8) - ^uwot
05:29:689 (7,1) - ^
05:32:103 (7,8) - blanket plz fixed

well for a first map this isnt too bad... but still needs a ton of work. but im sure you can pull it off if you have the motivation to do it! \:D/ thanks!

moph wrote:

yooo

[General]

1. any reason HP is so low? Try increasing it to 6.5 or 7 I felt hp7 would be a bit difficult originally, never thought to change it. fixed
2. AR could be increased to 9.3 unless you specifically want it to be 9 I was thinking that xD fixed
3. untick widescreen support as there is no storyboard fixed
4. aimod stuff - 03:33:981 (1) - slider end is not snapped - 02:34:528 - kiai end is not snapped fixed
5. set a preview point plz
6. set a few combo colours?

[Insolence]

1. 00:19:529 (1) - I think the spinner should start here 00:19:357 - as that noise starts there fixed in previous mod
2. 00:22:115 (5) - I'm pretty sure 5% volume is unrankable on sliders and singles, try increasing to 20% to be safe, applies to all the other sliders only used for slider ends, it isn't always unrankable
3. 00:54:098 (1) - don't think this spinner is necessary, if you want to keep it try starting it on a less obscure beat like a large white tick. shifted from previous mod
4. 00:57:288 (9,1,2,3) - rather awkward flow here from (9) to the triple as it goes against the flow set out by (9), try placing it somewhere else or change the direction of the triple fixed
5. 01:02:633 (1) - I don't recommend starting these sliders on a red tick, the more dominant beat is on the white tick here 01:02:805 - so that note should be clickable compared to 01:02:633 - fixed
6. If you listen carefully the 1/4 notes don't actually start until 01:03:322 (3) - so you should remove this note 01:03:236 (2) - woops mb, fixed
7. 01:03:753 (1) - It would make more sense to start this here 01:03:840 - at the 1/1 instead of the 3/4 beat. It would make it less awkward to play as players won't have to stop at an awkward time if that makes sense (I'm bad at explaining). kinda get you, fixed both
8. 01:04:615 (1) - ^
9. 01:05:564 (9) - seems like a wasted opportunity to cover the notes up with this long slider. Try this made something of it
   
   example

   
   
   01:05:564 (9) - also keep in mind you should end a slider on such as strong note here 01:06:253 - Its generally a good idea to make them clickable
10. 01:09:357 (4) - the spacing of this note should not be similar to the 1/2 spacing you used earlier as this can be hard to read. A lot of the placement in this area seems rather random to me, Its a good idea to use distance snap when you first start mapping to get used to using spacing correctly. um, ill try something
11. 01:11:771 - another example of a slider end that got covered up, try making this beat clickable. fixed
12. 01:12:460 (1,2,3,4) - any reason you spaced these like this? It kinda makes them seem like 3/4 sliders. I recommend spacing them out normally as there really is not need to nuke the spacing here imo fixed in previous mod
13. 01:18:322 (2,3,4) - I assume you're trying to add variety by using these triples here, however they feel a little out of place as there aren't really any 1/4s in the music. I not sure about this so it's up to you whether you keep them or not idk i did this ages ago and thought it was cool xD
14. 01:30:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - its kinda the same story with these streams, kinda just seem like unnecessary overmap, but again its up to you whether you want to keep them or not fixed it a bit
15. 01:39:874 - here would be the idea place for a 5 note stream as you can hear the 1/4 notes, like what you did here 01:42:633 (4) - relating to the previous two points these are the idea places to use them as the music supports it eh I'll leave it as is
16. 01:47:633 (2) - can't say i really agree with this being here, too long and covers up a lot of strong beats for this difficulty. fixed
17. 02:11:771 - you should map this note, feels weird skipping it imo eh okay fixed
18. 02:36:771 - ^ but apply to the whole section, few random gaps that feel rather weird skipping over. Try listening closely to the song (with lower playback maybe) and plot out what notes you want to map. i kinda try follow the main beat
19. 04:01:439 (5,6,7,8) - its a bit of an awkward transition from the reverse slider to the triple, if you want to keep the reverse slider its probably a good idea to reverse the order so put the circles before the slider which would play a lot nicer imo. If you do that probably take away a reverse and add an extra circle so its not a quad. i did something, let me know in game what you think
20. 04:12:355 - you should map this part :3 ehhhhhh alrighttttttt
21. 04:40:207 (9) - same suggestion as before fixed
22. 05:29:861 (1) - any reason for this anti-jump from (7) to (1), try spacing it out more consistently fixed
23. 05:46:930 (1,2,3) - awkward flow here as each note's flow seems to go in a conflicting direction to the last one. Try re-positioning (2) and maybe reverse (1)? #aesthetics (fixed)
24. 05:58:482 - as mentioned earlier, good place to do a steam of 5 notes, and several other points in this section as well, try using them as it will add variety to the game play nicely instead of mostly 1/2 beats. the idea was it was the end and I didn't wanna be the guy who caused breaks at the end of his map, but I guess I can sacrifice that xD

Overall it plays nicely but currently lacks a bit in the structure department if you want to eventually rank this. Its definitely got promise tho! Message me if you've got any questions and I'll be happy to do a recheck sometime in the future.
Good luck \:D/

pkk wrote:

taking a look soon™

pkk wrote:

Insolence

• 
  The part before the first break was really nice and the jumps were sik dank
  Anyways, your NCs are sometimes inconsistent (e.g. 05:05:206 (1,2) - should be switched). Try to have them either on the downbeat of every measure or every other measure, with some exceptions if you need to emphasize notes/make patterns easier to read. ic

1. 01:03:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this can be a confusing pattern since the spacing varies a lot. Mostly the problem lies at 01:03:150 (1,2) - , the 1/2 gap looks like it's 1/4 and that (1) is part of the stream because of the spacing, when there's actually a pause after it. I suggest you space (1) away from (2) so that they're not touching, this way it's easier to predict that there's a gap after (1). Also for 01:03:322 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - , if you didn't have a specific reason for using different spacing in the stream then I suggest using the same spacing between each note to make the stream look neater. fixed all
   
2. 01:10:909 (2,2) -, 01:12:460 (1,2) - , 03:09:702 (7,9) - , etc - not sure if this was intentional, but they can be perfectly symmetrical if you copy one slider, paste and then ctrl+h+j fixed dem except 1:12 one
   
3. 01:37:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice i should probably change this lmao
   
4. 01:43:322 (2,3) - consider switching the order of these objects since you usually have the downbeat mapped to a circle or the start of the slider instead of the slider tail. It creates more emphasis/is more intuitive to have a clickable object on a downbeat/strong beats. Of course, it's also fine to have slider tails on strong beats in some cases but for the most part you usually have circles/slider heads on strong beats. Same suggestion for 02:16:426 (2,3) - , etc but you can also use either ctrl+h or ctrl+j in combination with ctrl+g fixed
   
5. 02:47:633 (1,2) - imo this can be difficult to read because it's spaced almost the same as 02:47:460 (6,1) - which is a 1/2 gap, but there's actually a 1/1 gap in between 02:47:633 (1,2) - . What you can do to make this slightly less confusing is to remove NC from 02:47:633 (1) - and put NC at 02:47:978 (8) - instead. This will signify a gap in between the two combos. At 02:48:840 (2,3) - it's pretty much the same thing, here you can NC 02:49:184 (3) - to indicate that it's its own pattern and there's a gap between 02:48:840 (2,3) - so players don't hit the note too early. just changed the spacing and changed the nc
   
6. 02:55:219 (1) - in cases where a spinner starts on a strong beat, you can instead put a circle on the strong beat and start the spinner 1/4 beats later. So in this case if you want to emphasize the strong beat, you can add a circle at 02:55:219 - and move the spinner to 02:55:305 - fixed
   
7. 02:56:943 (1,1) -, 03:18:155 (2) - imo there isn't a need for the NCs here so I suggest removing them fixed
   
8. 02:59:184 (9) - just adding on to what I mentioned earlier about emphasis and slidertails. Here a lot of emphasis is lost because a slider tail was used to map the strong beat 02:59:357 - . If you want to use a slider, I suggest swapping the position of 02:59:012 (8,9) - so the slider comes before the circle, that way you have the circle to emphasize the beat. fixed
   
9. 03:13:150 (7) - should be a NC here according to your previous NCing pattern. Also consider spacing it out from 03:12:460 (6) - , I don't see any need for them to be hugging each other fixed
   
10. 03:16:598 (3) - consider adding NC here to make it easier to read the speed-up fixed
    
11. 05:32:103 (7,8) - just an example of where you can copy paste ctrl+h+j to make it symmetrical fixed
    
12. 06:08:999 (9) - consider using normal or soft addition (ctrl+w or ctrl+e) and then adding a finish. That way even though your inherited timing point is on a drum sample, you can use the finish hitsound from other samples (normal/soft). Personally I think the normal finish sounds better here dank

Nice map, but it can be cleaned up a bit, visually. Try to avoid small overlaps/small spacing like 05:50:379 (4,5) - or 05:59:344 (2,1) - and it will make your map look that much neater itadankimasu
Good luck and have fun mapping

zeborg wrote:

here coems a mod after a year (well I suck at modding so pls cooperate) Oh man I got no notification of this, and I can't give kd now, maybe delete this and repost so i can?

[Insolence]00:24:874 (5,1) - ew | not ew me irl
00:30:391 (6,1) - overlap can be improved
01:47:978 (4) - clap? these will all be fixed sometime
02:30:736 (4) - ^
02:36:943 (9) - ^
05:05:896 (2) - ^
02:57:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - recheck hitsounds

~GJ for completely mapping it~ :o