1. Easy (1.65 stars, 121 notes)
2. Hard (4.98 stars, 430 notes)
3. Normal (3.22 stars, 209 notes)
4. orioncomet (4.99 stars, 523 notes)

JInxyjem wrote:

Gudu SHAMEIMARU Mapu.

YGOkid8 wrote:

General
.osb file not in use. Delete from Song Folder, then Full Submit - Done
Maximum dimensions for backgrounds are 1024x768. Resize both of your backgrounds. - Both of them are 1024x768
Crop unused audio(?) - Done
Your normal diff. is too hard for the easiest diff. I suggest making an Easy diff.

Normal

IMO, you should rename this diff. to Normal+. My reasons are that the beats are... how should I put this... too frequent. Also, the Slider Velocity is too fast imo. Was good at the beginning, maybe keep the velocity like that? - No :3

Combo Mod~
/me send instead of post. Save time.
[attachment=1:43e89]Silver Forest - Fanatic Wind (Natteke desu) [Normal].osu[/attachment:43e89]

Normal Mod~
01:30:137 (1,2) - Flip these vertical? -Done

Hard

Combo Mod~
[attachment=0:43e89]Silver Forest - Fanatic Wind (Natteke desu) [Hard].osu[/attachment:43e89]

orioncomet wrote:

offset 565 resnap all note and check all notes too
star, nice song

Ps. I've help out about BG, TAG too

Astom wrote:

[Normal]
-Acc 100% nice :3

[Hard]
-Acc 94%
-Maybe the life bar drops too fast - Nah it's fine for hard :3


Nice song star :3

Natteke desu wrote:

Astom wrote:

[Normal]
-Acc 100% nice :3

[Hard]
-Acc 94%
-Maybe the life bar drops too fast - Nah it's fine for hard :3


Nice song star :3

thanks for checking

YGOkid8 wrote:

you don't kudosu! post if you didn't find anything useful.

Natteke desu wrote:

Well, he checked the map and that is useful to me.

orioncomet wrote:

Orz... Anton don't waiting for me.. This week I'm busy again T^T

General:

Why a green colour combo? Try using these for normal:

Combo1 : 114,141,252
Combo2 : 229,229,229
Combo3 : 255,128,64


And these for hard:

Combo1 : 255,255,108
Combo2 : 255,128,64
Combo3 : 255,0,0

orioncomet wrote:

I will dies

BG size is wrong (BG should be 1024x768. Yours is 1089x767...

AngelHoney wrote:

orioncomet
00:00:631 (1,2,3,4) - symmetry ?
isn't it?
00:02:297 (7,8) - ^
isn't it?
00:24:589 (1) - remove ? or remove new combo ,00:24:797 (2) - new combo ?
X
00:43:339 (7,8,9) - overlap ?
X
01:49:172 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - symmetry ?
X, Sorry I don't like symmetry.
01:55:839 (5) - move 1 gird right ?
X
02:03:339 (7,8,9) - overlap ?
X

The 2nd half of the map is pretty boring , especially compared to the first half ,Try to be more creative
0 stack leniency is unrankable...
Fine =] about half of my diff is boring I don't think you will notice this If you've playing, and maybe I will fix it later, about 0 stack leniency

AngelHoney wrote:

Hard

00:15:215 - move this timing point to left (Volume is different) - What? you didn't check audio settings for the previous timing section, did you?
00:21:882 - ^ - ????????????? There is a bpm change, not sound
00:23:027 (8) - move to 00:23:236 ? - wat
00:24:694 (4) - ^ - ^
00:26:986 - add a note ? - No
01:05:215 (1) - end at 01:06:465 ?
0 stack leniency is unrankable... - If it was, then it wouldn't be included in the editor

Normal

00:15:215 - move this timing point to left (Volume is different
00:21:882 - ^

Easy

BG size is wrong (BG should be 1024x768. Yours is 1089x767...

H1ko wrote:

My ployyyy awesome like alwayss <3333

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
00:37:298 (3) - move this beat a square right (Grid level 3)
01:01:882 (1,2,3) - a little suggestion to make this part more original: replace the 2nd slider with a copy flipped horizontally of the 1st slider!
01:18:548 (7,1) - try to fill this little break time (maybe like you've done during the 2nd kiai time section...)

Done!


Normal
01:48:965 (2) - move it a square left

Done!

Hard
Sounds fine. - ^_^

orioncomet
00:54:381 (6) - clap & finish this slider's start
02:14:381 (6) - ^

Changed, but didn't put claps. Sorry ploy I didn't ask you


A good map that it can be improved with some of the AIMod advises along Normal and Hard.
Beside, some copy-pasted sections on the guest mode don't lower its quality. Good job!

Natteke desu wrote:

Lokamp wrote:

orioncomet
00:54:381 (6) - clap & finish this slider's start
02:14:381 (6) - ^

Changed, but didn't put claps. Sorry ploy I didn't ask you

Shulin wrote:

~ Random mod (sort of) Lokamp asked me to check this XD ~

General:

-- Offset 215 on all difficulties.
-- Delete .osb and full submit lol.

Done.

Easy:

02:46:882 (3) - Hits HP bar so it's kinda ugly. Not that important but you could reposition this?

Done

Normal:

-- Remove countdown.

00:51:881 (1,2) - Imo it would be best not to map the vocal here because the everything before this is mapped on 1/2 so it plays a bit weird. - Done
01:51:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Sudden spacing change is weird compared to the rest of the 1/1 spacing. - It just makes a flower I use this kind of thing alsmot everytime

Hard:

-- Remove countdown.

01:35:007 (5) - New combo here makes the double easier to see, maybe space it like 02:53:965 (1,2,3,4,5) - I liked that better lol.
02:55:007 (5) - ^ for the new combo.
Done.

orioncomet:

-- Didn't like the white combo color here, especially since there is white in the BG. - Up to orioncomet...
-- Offset starts on the wrong note, use 215. - Done.
-- Preview point is different to the others. - Done

01:04:172 (6,1) - Spacing? Looks like a 1/4, if its supposed to be an anti jump its terrible imo.(Also compare to 02:24:172 (6,1) - ) - Up to orioncomet.

Nice maps over all, I could pubble this if you wanted

~ Star.

Shulin wrote:

orioncomet:

-- Didn't like the white combo color here, especially since there is white in the BG. < fixed owo

01:04:172 (6,1) - Spacing? Looks like a 1/4, if its supposed to be an anti jump its terrible imo.(Also compare to 02:24:172 (6,1) - )
Noooo ~ sorry