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Demetori - Kanjou no Matenrou ~ World's End [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
Hehoooh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 Januari 2019 at 19:01:55

Artist: Demetori
Title: Kanjou no Matenrou ~ World's End
Source: 東方星蓮船 ~ Undefined Fantastic Object.
Tags: kanjou no matenrou cosmic mind 曼衍珠汝華 manenjushaka nada upasana pundarika byakuren hijiri undefined fantastic object th12 感情の摩天楼
BPM: 178
Filesize: 11160kb
Play Time: 07:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Marathon World - 7Key (5,9 stars, 6775 notes)
Download: Demetori - Kanjou no Matenrou ~ World's End
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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HAVE FUN and ENJOY :)
7k Marathon World = Finish [ Done ]
Hitsound = Finish [ Done ]
Status : Loved
Thank you for all modders, I really appreciate it ^_^
Special Thanks to : [Shi-Ra] Mwalls Ho KawaEE Blocko Marirose Sky_Demon and Monizotic for stars ^_^
Skalim
The most awesome stamina killer what i was played... go go you can rank it ^^
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

Skalim wrote:

The most awesome stamina killer what i was played... go go you can rank it ^^
hope can rank it >.< thanks :D
Mwallx
Sorry about my lateness :?
Hmm after playing once i think you did a great job :D ,
but i will still try to find your flaws.All is suggestion so feel
free to reject me with reasons.
Okay let's begin~

02:39:540 I dunno if i'm right but this time point offset maybe 20ms later?
And this sv is really sudden ,maybe some inherited points is needed.
I suggest to use a gradual slow down.Same as other svs like this.

03:57:493 to 04:28:232 this is really crazy...I doubt if it's rankable.Even it is,
you need to simplify the notes(more ladder patterns and properly delete ).I think all BAT would be
against this zone.

About the 1/4 stream patterns,you should try to balance them.
For example here, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2425463
Obviously,left more notes.Under this situation,you maybe need to
check all sterams.Maybe this is cruel but if you want it ranked.
It's a must.So I wont mod any stream this time(almost full of streams).But as a friend
I will offer help absolutely,just call me if you want me to help check :D.

01:15:271 (75271|1,76451|4) - LN like these 2,actually has more sound.
I dunno if you ignore them on purpose.If not,add them plz.
(If you cant really hear them,you can refer to this original touhou version
at the same part https://osu.ppy.sh/b/320877 ,I believe you will get it)
My personal simple example 01:15:271 (75271|1) -
can be changed to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2425495
Or you can separate them into different column.
But the 1st 2nd 3rd and 4th LN has the same sound and tone,
So even you want them separated , these 4 feels better when
put in the same column.Same as the afterwards situation.

01:28:922 (88922|6,88922|5,89091|5,89091|4) -
since this sound is all LN front,I firmly suggest to chnage them
into 1/4 snap LN and single colummn is enough.

01:27:237 (87237|3,87490|3) - and 01:29:934 (89934|0,90187|0) -
This should be avoided as much as possible.But when no way to rerange
keep them will not bother much.Just a notice :P.

Hmm cant find more except patterns.Sorry for cant mod pattern this time,
after rerange i will recheck pattern for no kudos.Also I can offer stars
when you need.
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Remains to be my mod...
please mod 7k diff :D
Mwallx

Hassou Tobii wrote:

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Remains to be my mod...
please mod 7k diff :D
I'm still progressing my job since it's 7minutes.
May take me days to finish it.So be patient~
You can get to some mod queues as well.
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

Mwalls Ho wrote:

Sorry about my lateness :? don't worry :3
Hmm after playing once i think you did a great job :D , Thank you :D
but i will still try to find your flaws.All is suggestion so feel
free to reject me with reasons. i don't reject you at all xD
Okay let's begin~ yosh!

02:39:540 I dunno if i'm right but this time point offset maybe 20ms later? no, its fine
And this sv is really sudden ,maybe some inherited points is needed.
I suggest to use a gradual slow down.Same as other svs like this. No, I prefer not change. just listen to music, its not really sudden
.
03:57:493 to 04:28:232 this is really crazy...I doubt if it's rankable.Even it is,
you need to simplify the notes(more ladder patterns and properly delete ).I think all BAT would be
against this zone. Yes, i will change it in the next update.

About the 1/4 stream patterns,you should try to balance them. sure
For example here, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2425463
Obviously,left more notes.Under this situation,you maybe need to
check all sterams.Maybe this is cruel but if you want it ranked.
It's a must.So I wont mod any stream this time(almost full of streams).But as a friend
I will offer help absolutely,just call me if you want me to help check :D. :D Sure :D i'll call you again later ;)

01:15:271 (75271|1,76451|4) - LN like these 2,actually has more sound.
I dunno if you ignore them on purpose.If not,add them plz.
(If you cant really hear them,you can refer to this original touhou version
at the same part https://osu.ppy.sh/b/320877 ,I believe you will get it)
My personal simple example 01:15:271 (75271|1) -
can be changed to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2425495
Or you can separate them into different column.
But the 1st 2nd 3rd and 4th LN has the same sound and tone,
So even you want them separated , these 4 feels better when
put in the same column.Same as the afterwards situation. But, 1 LN is good i think

01:28:922 (88922|6,88922|5,89091|5,89091|4) -
since this sound is all LN front,I firmly suggest to chnage them
into 1/4 snap LN and single colummn is enough. sure, will change and add LN it in the next update.

01:27:237 (87237|3,87490|3) - and 01:29:934 (89934|0,90187|0) -
This should be avoided as much as possible.But when no way to rerange
keep them will not bother much.Just a notice :P. sure ;)

Hmm cant find more except patterns.Sorry for cant mod pattern this time,
after rerange i will recheck pattern for no kudos.Also I can offer stars
when you need.

Thanks for modding :D
UPDATED
Nanatsu
Hi! Here is modding from forum!

First, according to ranking criteria bg size, i recommand to use 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9

you can take source and tags from here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/133693 and mp3 also if you need.

Second, you need to make hitsound setting for ranked. it's necessary for ranked map.

and check your aimod.


and, sorry. since the difficulty length is 7 mins, i will not going to detail modify..

[World's End]

Click!


  • * 01:02:967 (62967|0,63052|1) - Ctrl + H

    * 01:15:102 - add note

    * 01:16:113 (76113|0) - well, it should be stop 01:16:282 - here to follow instrument and 01:16:619 (76619|1) - here is start from 01:16:451 -

    * 01:17:462 (77462|2,77967|1) - ^

    * 01:21:507 (81507|1,82012|3) - ^

    * 01:21:928 - add note

    * 01:21:928 - add to somewhere, it's not suitable to emphasize sound by putting jackhammar here.

    * 01:47:630 - add on 3

    * 01:52:687 - 01:53:024 - how about put some notes? here has more sound than other

    * 02:03:473 (123473|5,123473|3,123473|2,123557|4,123557|1,123642|3,123642|2) - Ctrl + H for hand balance

    * 02:13:922 (133922|6,133922|2,133922|0,133922|4,134007|2,134007|0,134007|4,134007|6,134091|2,134091|4,134091|0,134091|6,134260|3,134260|1,134260|5,134344|5,134344|1,134344|3,134428|5,134428|1,134428|3) - ugh.. lol.. it's kinda not good i guess.

    * 02:19:400 - add on 2

    * 02:19:484 - add on 4

    * 02:21:170 (141170|6) - LN start is 02:21:085 - here

    * 02:22:349 (142349|2,142434|3,142518|4,142602|5) - move to each left 1 side

    * 02:23:529 (143529|2) - LN start is 02:23:613 - here

    * 02:23:866 - and recommanding put a LN here

    * 02:27:574 (147574|5,147658|4) - change each column ( like 5>6, 6>5 )

    * 02:24:709 (144709|1) - turn to short note and 02:24:793 (144793|4) - start from 02:24:709 - here

    * 02:33:810 - put note

    * 02:34:316 - put note

    * 02:54:019 (174019|3,174103|4) - turn to short note, it will be better

    * 03:16:771 - make LN here too to follow music

    * 03:17:108 - ^

    * 03:18:288 (198288|1) - this start from 03:18:204 - here

    * 03:40:114 (220114|0,220198|0) - did you intend here?

    * 03:40:114 (220114|0,220198|0,224285|1,224299|1) - dafonz

    * 03:44:665 - add

    * 03:44:707 - add

    * 03:44:749 - i dont know why you turned to 1/6 since the sound is same

    * 03:50:479 (230479|3) - sound start is 03:50:564 - here so increasing 03:50:311 (230311|2) - LN length to here too

    * 03:55:367 (235367|3) - 3

    * 03:55:451 (235451|4) - 2

    * 03:57:726 - 04:26:041 - here has some overmapped pattern. as you know, some parts were overed than exact music sounds.

    for example, 04:17:951 - 04:26:041 - here is not 1/8 beatsnap.

    make sure about these kind of things if you really aimming ranked.

    * 04:05:816 - 04:07:165 - dafuq

    * 04:28:232 (268232|6,268232|4) - increase LN length to 04:28:738 - here

    * 04:31:266 (271266|4,271266|5,271350|6) - better to be ctrl g? idk

    * 04:31:097 - add a note

    * 04:36:153 - 04:36:828 - hmmm

    * 04:38:007 (278007|6,278092|5) - ctrl g

    * 04:54:560 (294560|2,294616|4) - hmm? is it reasonable?

    * 04:59:729 - add more notes

    * 04:58:886 - 04:59:223 - perhaps here need rearrange

    * 05:15:394 (315394|3,315479|4) - better to be short note since doesn't follow elec guitar sound

    * 05:15:563 (315563|5) - LN start from 05:15:479 - here

    * 05:34:945 - add on 2

    * 05:36:040 - add on 5

    * 05:35:619 - 05:38:484 - these overall LNs are doesn't follow elec guitar sounds correctly

    * 05:57:192 - 06:00:057 - ^

    * 06:05:366 (365366|3,365451|3) - rearrange

    * 06:06:799 - 06:08:147 - how about ctrl h all of notes for pattern / hand balance

    * 06:10:928 - add note

    * 06:26:743 (386743|3,386799|2,386911|4,386967|5) - i think those were overed pattern

    * 06:31:967 (391967|2,392024|3,392136|5,392192|3,392248|2,392305|3,392361|4) - ^

    * 06:43:203 (403203|2,403288|2) -

    *
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

Hi! Here is modding from forum! HI!

First, according to ranking criteria bg size, i recommand to use 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9 done

you can take source and tags from here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/133693 and mp3 also if you need. sure thanks for the info

Second, you need to make hitsound setting for ranked. it's necessary for ranked map. Understand, will do it later

and check your aimod. aa lazy to make new diff, lol


and, sorry. since the difficulty length is 7 mins, i will not going to detail modify.. okay ;w;

[World's End]

Click!


  • * 01:02:967 (62967|0,63052|1) - Ctrl + H ok

    * 01:15:102 - add note ok

    * 01:16:113 (76113|0) - well, it should be stop 01:16:282 - here to follow instrument and 01:16:619 (76619|1) - here is start from 01:16:451 - ok

    * 01:17:462 (77462|2,77967|1) - ^ ok

    * 01:21:507 (81507|1,82012|3) - ^ ok

    * 01:21:928 - add note ok

    * 01:21:928 - add to somewhere, it's not suitable to emphasize sound by putting jackhammar here. ok

    * 01:47:630 - add on 3 ok

    * 01:52:687 - 01:53:024 - how about put some notes? here has more sound than other ok

    * 02:03:473 (123473|5,123473|3,123473|2,123557|4,123557|1,123642|3,123642|2) - Ctrl + H for hand balance ok

    * 02:13:922 (133922|6,133922|2,133922|0,133922|4,134007|2,134007|0,134007|4,134007|6,134091|2,134091|4,134091|0,134091|6,134260|3,134260|1,134260|5,134344|5,134344|1,134344|3,134428|5,134428|1,134428|3) - ugh.. lol.. it's kinda not good i guess. ok changed

    * 02:19:400 - add on 2 ok

    * 02:19:484 - add on 4 ok

    * 02:21:170 (141170|6) - LN start is 02:21:085 - here ok

    * 02:22:349 (142349|2,142434|3,142518|4,142602|5) - move to each left 1 side ok

    * 02:23:529 (143529|2) - LN start is 02:23:613 - here ok

    * 02:23:866 - and recommanding put a LN here ok

    * 02:27:574 (147574|5,147658|4) - change each column ( like 5>6, 6>5 ) ok

    * 02:24:709 (144709|1) - turn to short note and 02:24:793 (144793|4) - start from 02:24:709 - here ok

    * 02:33:810 - put note ok

    * 02:34:316 - put note ok

    * 02:54:019 (174019|3,174103|4) - turn to short note, it will be better ok

    * 03:16:771 - make LN here too to follow music ok

    * 03:17:108 - ^ ok

    * 03:18:288 (198288|1) - this start from 03:18:204 - here maybe here 03:18:120 (198120|1) - for LN combo

    * 03:40:114 (220114|0,220198|0) - did you intend here? yes, for cymbal sound

    * 03:40:114 (220114|0,220198|0,224285|1,224299|1) - dafonz ?????

    * 03:44:665 - add ok

    * 03:44:707 - add ok

    * 03:44:749 - i dont know why you turned to 1/6 since the sound is same ok, changed to 1/4

    * 03:50:479 (230479|3) - sound start is 03:50:564 - here so increasing 03:50:311 (230311|2) - LN length to here too ok

    * 03:55:367 (235367|3) - 3 ok

    * 03:55:451 (235451|4) - 2 ok

    * 03:57:726 - 04:26:041 - here has some overmapped pattern. as you know, some parts were overed than exact music sounds.

    for example, 04:17:951 - 04:26:041 - here is not 1/8 beatsnap.

    make sure about these kind of things if you really aimming ranked. ok, sure

    * 04:05:816 - 04:07:165 - dafuq changed

    * 04:28:232 (268232|6,268232|4) - increase LN length to 04:28:738 - here ok

    * 04:31:266 (271266|4,271266|5,271350|6) - better to be ctrl g? idk sure

    * 04:31:097 - add a note ok

    * 04:36:153 - 04:36:828 - hmmm jackhammer time

    * 04:38:007 (278007|6,278092|5) - ctrl g ok

    * 04:54:560 (294560|2,294616|4) - hmm? is it reasonable? nope, okay changed

    * 04:59:729 - add more notes ok

    * 04:58:886 - 04:59:223 - perhaps here need rearrange ok done

    * 05:15:394 (315394|3,315479|4) - better to be short note since doesn't follow elec guitar sound ok sure

    * 05:15:563 (315563|5) - LN start from 05:15:479 - here ok

    * 05:34:945 - add on 2 ok

    * 05:36:040 - add on 5 ok

    * 05:35:619 - 05:38:484 - these overall LNs are doesn't follow elec guitar sounds correctly ok will change in the next update

    * 05:57:192 - 06:00:057 - ^ ok will change in the next update

    * 06:05:366 (365366|3,365451|3) - rearrange ok

    * 06:06:799 - 06:08:147 - how about ctrl h all of notes for pattern / hand balance ok sure

    * 06:10:928 - add note ok

    * 06:26:743 (386743|3,386799|2,386911|4,386967|5) - i think those were overed pattern ok changed

    * 06:31:967 (391967|2,392024|3,392136|5,392192|3,392248|2,392305|3,392361|4) - ^ ok changed

    * 06:43:203 (403203|2,403288|2) - ok changed

    *
Thanks for mod :D really appreciate it ^^
Nanatsu
no kudosu

i pointed out something wrong place.

03:44:285 (224285|1,224299|1) - check here, it was overlapped.
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

no kudosu

i pointed out something wrong place.

03:44:285 (224285|1,224299|1) - check here, it was overlapped.
Fixed. will Update later~
Topic Starter
Hehoooh
UPDATED
ArcherLove
no need to make other diff :D
7K and 4K marathon is good for approval :3
tapi butuh 3 BAT =w=)

nunggu bentar ya lagi proses "nyoba" mod :3 /
pporse
Hi~

i'm from ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue (Mania)▣▣▣

wow very coooool song.

i love it <3


column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7


7K Marathon World
01:14:133 (74133|5,74133|4,74133|1,74133|2) - misplaced.. move to 01:14:147 (1/3 snap)
01:14:386 (74386|2,74386|4,74386|3) - ^ move to 01:14:372 (1/3 snap)

01:23:192 (83192|6,83192|2) - change from normal notes to 1/1 LNs. and
01:23:361 (83361|2,83361|6) - delete.

01:28:585 (88585|1) - change endpoint to 01:28:922. and
01:28:754 (88754|6,88754|2) - delete.

01:34:821 - if follow ur pattern, here need to LN. there has sound.
umm.. suggestion


02:34:821 (154821|2) - move to 5th column.
02:34:906 (154906|4) - move to 3th column.
for pitch of 02:34:821 (154821|2,154990|3)

02:45:592 (165592|3,165929|1) - mispitch

02:53:681 (173681|0) - misplaced.. move to 02:53:513 and change endpoint

02:54:019 - add 1/2 LN somewhere.
02:55:198 (175198|1,175198|5,175367|1,175367|5,175535|6,175535|2,175704|6,175704|2)
why don't use 1/1 LNs?
it's different with 02:56:547 (176547|1,176547|5,176715|1,176715|5,176884|2,176884|6,177052|2,177052|6)

02:58:401 (178401|4) - change endpoint to 02:59:412 and
02:59:412 - add 1/1 LN on 1st column.

03:02:108 - add 1/2 LN somewhere.
03:02:277 - ^

03:16:940 (196940|2) - delete. needless LN

03:17:024 (197024|5) - move to 5th column.
03:17:108 (197108|4) - change to 1/1 LN and move to 6th column.
03:17:277 (197277|5) - delete.

03:18:120 (198120|1) - change to 1/1 LN and
03:18:288 (198288|2) - delete.
03:18:457 (198457|1) - move to 3rd column.
03:18:625 (198625|2) - move to 2nd column.

03:34:805 ~ 03:43:906 - omg! is this ur intension? my space bar crash lol
if is not intension, then i recommend to move some 4th column notes to anyway

04:37:839 (277839|4) - change 1/4 LN and
04:37:923 - add 1/4 LN somewhere.

04:39:187 (279187|1) - ^
04:40:535 (280535|6) - ^
04:41:884 (281884|1) - ^

04:47:867 (287867|2,287867|4,287867|6,287867|5) - misplaced.. move to 04:47:839 (1/3 snap)
04:48:120 (288120|2,288120|1,288120|5,288120|6) - ^ move to 04:48:064 (1/3 snap)


04:49:954 - offset misplaced. change it.
if u doubt it, look at the 04:55:347 (295347|1,295347|5,295347|3) -
hear in playback rate 25% u will find wrong point.
i suggest that use Timing points only once. need not 45 BPM
it is enough by using inherited point.


05:15:057 (315057|1,315057|5,315394|6,315394|2) - i think.. they are just 1/1 LNs..change to 1/1 LNs and
05:15:226 (315226|1,315226|5,315563|6,315563|2) - delete

05:36:630 (336630|5,336630|1,336799|1,336799|5,336967|2,336967|6,337136|6,337136|2) - ^

05:41:012 (341012|3) - delete.. needless LN

05:58:203 (358203|5,358203|1,358372|5,358372|1,358540|4,358540|0,358709|4,358709|0) - same opinion with above it

in fact.. i could not mod in detail at 04:49:954 ~ END
cuz mis offset ;w;

if u fixed offset, send pm. i'll add to mod :3

good luck :)
Ciel
Difficult marathon :O. gogogo plz tyvm.

To prevent myself putting question marks on every suggestion, I'll just bold blatantly incorrect things. Otherwise everything is a suggestion.

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:52:349 - aka beginning section - seems quite repetitive, though it does get better quckly.
01:08:698 - add? Missing note for snare, compared with before and fater
01:09:035 - ^
01:09:372 - ^
01:09:203 - remove? Opposite reason as above
01:16:113 (76113|0) - extend? Main sound (no idea what its called) persists until the start of the next LN/sound. At least its the same note until the 2nd blue line from the start (1/4 divisions)
01:17:462 (77462|2) - ^
01:21:507 (81507|1) - ^
01:20:243 - missing note? Just from looking at the previous pattern (rhythm) established
01:20:580 - ^
01:23:276 - ^
01:28:248 - ^
01:30:945 - ^
01:31:282 - ^
01:32:293 - ^
01:32:630 - ^
01:33:642 - ^
01:33:979 - ^ These last few might not be a missing note, depending on if you are counting the LN as a replacement for the pattern
01:58:585 - Not sure if missing notes or building up to 4 note chords.
01:58:922 - This leads me to believe buildup though.
Chord section in general - RIP Keyboard ;; Not sure if there's a pattern to the chords, but I can't tell~
02:23:529 - missing note? Could possibly be for following the pattern though
02:24:540 - ^ Same extra comment too
03:03:625 - missing note? Refer to extra comment after 1.33.979
03:12:895 - missing note? (add on 4 works nicely I guess) More rhythm following
03:15:760 - missing note? Refer to extra comment after 1.33.979
04:34:131 - add notes? Crash to start off the new section
05:29:552 - missing note??? Refer to extra comment after 1.33.979. Far more debatable as to whether a note should go there though
06:26:855 - missing note? More certain this time :P

Heh there you go. I may have missed/overstated some things, especially since I'm not at a level where I can truly playtest this. Good luck on your map! (And rank plz XP)
[Shi-Ra]
Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diff)
There are alot of mods for 7K diff so I better check your 4K if you don't mind ^w^

4K Marathon World
Inside :3
01:07:687 (67687|1,67771|0,67855|1,67939|3,68024|1) - I recommend you to replace these notes with LN from 01:07:687 to 01:08:024 - you can use 1st column for it, make little break according to the guitar here, endless streams aren't so good

01:10:805 (70805|0) - remove this note to accent strong beats before and after this note correctly according to the cymbals

01:25:467 (85467|1,85805|2) - I suggest you to remove these notes on blue ticks, sound here is too quiet to accent it in triplet, so better try removing it

01:36:422 (96422|0) - move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for this note here, current position makes shield which is bad for your patterns here, better continue your stream without dividing it

01:36:844 (96844|0) - hum...maybe remove this note? two note chord is enough to accent strong beat here coz this fast jack is uncomfortable to play a little

01:52:602 (112602|1,112687|3,112771|2) - same break between cymbal accents here, remove this triplet and accent it correctly, it'll be awesome

02:08:613 (128613|1,128951|2) - same situation like previously, these sounds are too quiet to accent them here

02:51:659 (171659|3) - remove this note, three LNs are enough here to accent all sounds, just try to avoid these uncomfortable jacks, this song is fast enough and they aren't good reason for your stream patterns

03:01:603 (181603|1,181771|1,181940|1) - remove these notes and perform simple trill in all the way, there are no any strong sounds so no need to accent them with chords, single notes are enough for it

03:45:255 (225255|2,225339|2,225423|2,225507|2) - sounds here aren't identical (drums - divide on two hands, giutar - use stream) to place all notes in the same column so I suggest you to re-arrange them between different columns like previously

04:27:389 (267389|2,267474|2,267558|2,267642|2) - same situation like above, re-arrange these notes

From 04:36:153 to 04:36:828 - turn these jacks into trills here or even you can perform some alternation, what do you think about that?

Well, that's all. What I need to say:
- try to make some breaks in all the way according to the music, it's hard enough to play streams all 5 mins but it's boring and player need some rest even if it's 1 second;
- what's about decreasing count of shield notes and other jacks? they are ruining your LN patterns and some streams, check them please ^w^

I like this song so I wish you could finish it, take this star and continue wokin' ^w^
Good luck :3/
momo1101
column:0~6
mod
  1. 00:54:962 (54962|5) - remove
  2. 02:19:569 add
  3. 02:27:069 add
  4. 02:30:271 (150271|3,150271|0) - end in 02:30:397 or add bw note in 02:30:439 like 02:31:788
  5. 02:43:064 remove a note or add note here 02:42:389 02:42:726
  6. 02:53:681 (173681|3) - remove like 02:47:277
  7. 03:05:985 add note
  8. 03:12:389 add
  9. 03:14:749 add
  10. 04:14:328 remove one
  11. 04:48:120 (288120|2,288120|1,288120|5,288120|6) - move to 04:48:078
  12. 04:49:954 wrong timing 04:49:996 is correct, resnap all notes and timing from 04:49:954 to 07:07:599

listen careful, the timing is wrong from 04:49:954
good luck :oops:
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

pporse wrote:

Hi~ Hi too~

i'm from ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue (Mania)▣▣▣

wow very coooool song. Thank You!

i love it <3 <3


column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7


7K Marathon World
01:14:133 (74133|5,74133|4,74133|1,74133|2) - misplaced.. move to 01:14:147 (1/3 snap) ok
01:14:386 (74386|2,74386|4,74386|3) - ^ move to 01:14:372 (1/3 snap) ok

01:23:192 (83192|6,83192|2) - change from normal notes to 1/1 LNs. and ok
01:23:361 (83361|2,83361|6) - delete. ok

01:28:585 (88585|1) - change endpoint to 01:28:922. and ok
01:28:754 (88754|6,88754|2) - delete. ok

01:34:821 - if follow ur pattern, here need to LN. there has sound.
umm.. suggestion sorry i prefer the origin


02:34:821 (154821|2) - move to 5th column. ok
02:34:906 (154906|4) - move to 3th column. ok
for pitch of 02:34:821 (154821|2,154990|3) ok

02:45:592 (165592|3,165929|1) - mispitch o_O ??

02:53:681 (173681|0) - misplaced.. move to 02:53:513 and change endpoint ok

02:54:019 - add 1/2 LN somewhere.
02:55:198 (175198|1,175198|5,175367|1,175367|5,175535|6,175535|2,175704|6,175704|2)
why don't use 1/1 LNs? has same sound so i put in same column and its not a problem i think
it's different with 02:56:547 (176547|1,176547|5,176715|1,176715|5,176884|2,176884|6,177052|2,177052|6)

02:58:401 (178401|4) - change endpoint to 02:59:412 and ok
02:59:412 - add 1/1 LN on 1st column. ok

03:02:108 - add 1/2 LN somewhere. ok
03:02:277 - ^ ok

03:16:940 (196940|2) - delete. needless LN ok

03:17:024 (197024|5) - move to 5th column. ok
03:17:108 (197108|4) - change to 1/1 LN and move to 6th column. ok
03:17:277 (197277|5) - delete. ok

03:18:120 (198120|1) - change to 1/1 LN and ok
03:18:288 (198288|2) - delete. ok
03:18:457 (198457|1) - move to 3rd column. ok
03:18:625 (198625|2) - move to 2nd column. ok

03:34:805 ~ 03:43:906 - omg! is this ur intension? my space bar crash lol
if is not intension, then i recommend to move some 4th column notes to anyway no no,, its the style. left-center-right-center-left~

04:37:839 (277839|4) - change 1/4 LN and ok
04:37:923 - add 1/4 LN somewhere. ok

04:39:187 (279187|1) - ^ ok
04:40:535 (280535|6) - ^ ok
04:41:884 (281884|1) - ^ ok

04:47:867 (287867|2,287867|4,287867|6,287867|5) - misplaced.. move to 04:47:839 (1/3 snap) ok
04:48:120 (288120|2,288120|1,288120|5,288120|6) - ^ move to 04:48:064 (1/3 snap) ok


04:49:954 - offset misplaced. change it.
if u doubt it, look at the 04:55:347 (295347|1,295347|5,295347|3) -
hear in playback rate 25% u will find wrong point.
i suggest that use Timing points only once. need not 45 BPM
it is enough by using inherited point. will think about it


05:15:057 (315057|1,315057|5,315394|6,315394|2) - i think.. they are just 1/1 LNs..change to 1/1 LNs and no no
05:15:226 (315226|1,315226|5,315563|6,315563|2) - delete no no

05:36:630 (336630|5,336630|1,336799|1,336799|5,336967|2,336967|6,337136|6,337136|2) - ^ no no

05:41:012 (341012|3) - delete.. needless LN ok

05:58:203 (358203|5,358203|1,358372|5,358372|1,358540|4,358540|0,358709|4,358709|0) - same opinion with above it no no

in fact.. i could not mod in detail at 04:49:954 ~ END
cuz mis offset ;w;

if u fixed offset, send pm. i'll add to mod :3 ok,, Sure

good luck :)

Thank you,, really appreciate it ;)
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

Yoshiap wrote:

Difficult marathon :O. gogogo plz tyvm. ok

To prevent myself putting question marks on every suggestion, I'll just bold blatantly incorrect things. Otherwise everything is a suggestion. ok sure

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:52:349 - aka beginning section - seems quite repetitive, though it does get better quckly. ok little changed
01:08:698 - add? Missing note for snare, compared with before and fater ok
01:09:035 - ^ ok
01:09:372 - ^ ok
01:09:203 - remove? Opposite reason as above ok
01:16:113 (76113|0) - extend? Main sound (no idea what its called) persists until the start of the next LN/sound. At least its the same note until the 2nd blue line from the start (1/4 divisions) no need
01:17:462 (77462|2) - ^no need
01:21:507 (81507|1) - ^no need
01:20:243 - missing note? Just from looking at the previous pattern (rhythm) established ok
01:20:580 - ^ ok
01:23:276 - ^ not
01:28:248 - ^ok
01:30:945 - ^ok
01:31:282 - ^ok
01:32:293 - ^ok
01:32:630 - ^ok
01:33:642 - ^ok
01:33:979 - ^ These last few might not be a missing note, depending on if you are counting the LN as a replacement for the pattern thanks for remembering me ;)
01:58:585 - Not sure if missing notes or building up to 4 note chords. ok
01:58:922 - This leads me to believe buildup though. changed
Chord section in general - RIP Keyboard ;; Not sure if there's a pattern to the chords, but I can't tell~ but its doesnt matter..
02:23:529 - missing note? Could possibly be for following the pattern though ok
02:24:540 - ^ Same extra comment toook
03:03:625 - missing note? Refer to extra comment after 1.33.979 ok
03:12:895 - missing note? (add on 4 works nicely I guess) More rhythm following ok
03:15:760 - missing note? Refer to extra comment after 1.33.979 ok
04:34:131 - add notes? Crash to start off the new section ok
05:29:552 - missing note??? Refer to extra comment after 1.33.979. Far more debatable as to whether a note should go there though ok
06:26:855 - missing note? More certain this time :P ok wkwkwk xD

Heh there you go. I may have missed/overstated some things, especially since I'm not at a level where I can truly playtest this. Good luck on your map! (And rank plz XP)
ok,, dont worry, your mods helping me found "missing notes" so i can fix it xD thank you :D
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:[/color]

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 for 4K diff)
There are alot of mods for 7K diff so I better check your 4K if you don't mind ^w^ ok sure ;)

4K Marathon World
Inside :3
01:07:687 (67687|1,67771|0,67855|1,67939|3,68024|1) - I recommend you to replace these notes with LN from 01:07:687 to 01:08:024 - you can use 1st column for it, make little break according to the guitar here, endless streams aren't so good ok changed

01:10:805 (70805|0) - remove this note to accent strong beats before and after this note correctly according to the cymbals ok

01:25:467 (85467|1,85805|2) - I suggest you to remove these notes on blue ticks, sound here is too quiet to accent it in triplet, so better try removing it ok sure

01:36:422 (96422|0) - move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for this note here, current position makes shield which is bad for your patterns here, better continue your stream without dividing it ok sure

01:36:844 (96844|0) - hum...maybe remove this note? two note chord is enough to accent strong beat here coz this fast jack is uncomfortable to play a little ok sure

01:52:602 (112602|1,112687|3,112771|2) - same break between cymbal accents here, remove this triplet and accent it correctly, it'll be awesome ok sure

02:08:613 (128613|1,128951|2) - same situation like previously, these sounds are too quiet to accent them here ok sure

02:51:659 (171659|3) - remove this note, three LNs are enough here to accent all sounds, just try to avoid these uncomfortable jacks, this song is fast enough and they aren't good reason for your stream patterns ok sure

03:01:603 (181603|1,181771|1,181940|1) - remove these notes and perform simple trill in all the way, there are no any strong sounds so no need to accent them with chords, single notes are enough for it ok sure

03:45:255 (225255|2,225339|2,225423|2,225507|2) - sounds here aren't identical (drums - divide on two hands, giutar - use stream) to place all notes in the same column so I suggest you to re-arrange them between different columns like previously ok changed

04:27:389 (267389|2,267474|2,267558|2,267642|2) - same situation like above, re-arrange these notes ok changed

From 04:36:153 to 04:36:828 - turn these jacks into trills here or even you can perform some alternation, what do you think about that? ok changed

Well, that's all. What I need to say:
- try to make some breaks in all the way according to the music, it's hard enough to play streams all 5 mins but it's boring and player need some rest even if it's 1 second; ok sure ;)
- what's about decreasing count of shield notes and other jacks? they are ruining your LN patterns and some streams, check them please ^w^ yes sure!

I like this song so I wish you could finish it, take this star and continue wokin' ^w^ Thanks for star. sure ;)
Good luck :3/SURE
Thank you,, i will re-arrange it what it should re-arranged. ;)
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

momo1101 wrote:

column:0~6
mod
  1. 00:54:962 (54962|5) - remove ok
  2. 02:19:569 add ok
  3. 02:27:069 add ok
  4. 02:30:271 (150271|3,150271|0) - end in 02:30:397 or add bw note in 02:30:439 like 02:31:788 ok
  5. 02:43:064 remove a note or add note here 02:42:389 02:42:726 ok
  6. 02:53:681 (173681|3) - remove like 02:47:277 no
  7. 03:05:985 add note ok
  8. 03:12:389 add ok
  9. 03:14:749 add ok
  10. 04:14:328 remove one ok
  11. 04:48:120 (288120|2,288120|1,288120|5,288120|6) - move to 04:48:078 no
  12. 04:49:954 wrong timing 04:49:996 is correct, resnap all notes and timing from 04:49:954 to 07:07:599ok sure, will do it

listen careful, the timing is wrong from 04:49:954 ok, will change it later~
good luck :oops:
THANKSS !! :D
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

ArcherLove wrote:

no need to make other diff :D
7K and 4K marathon is good for approval :3
tapi butuh 3 BAT =w=)

nunggu bentar ya lagi proses "nyoba" mod :3 /
sure thanks for the infos~ ;)
ok ditunggu klo jadi mod nya o_O (?)
Constantine
kalo postnya pendek bisa di multi quote kan biar enak aja diliatnya .-.

good luck
Aii-
Mod via message ^_^

[4K Marathon World]

01:14:934 - LN start at this time

01:16:451 - ^

01:17:462 (77462|1) - LN finish at 01:17:630 -

01:17:799 - LN start

01:21:844 - ^

01:23:192 (83192|3) - finish at 01:23:529 -

01:25:552 - add note

01:27:237 - LN start

01:32:630 - ^

01:43:838 - add note

01:52:687 - sengaja di kosongin apa gmna ? soalnya sound bagus buat stream, kalo mau di kosongin disini juga sekalian 01:52:855 (112855|3,112855|0,112939|2) -

01:57:827 - add note

01:57:321 (117321|1) - move to col 1

01:59:597 - LN start

02:00:608 (120608|1) - LN finish at 02:00:776 -

02:00:945 - LN start

02:31:198 - add note

02:31:788 - add note

02:31:872 - ^

02:55:198 - LN start

02:56:547 - ^

03:02:108 - add note

03:45:255 - 1/6 sampe disini

04:52:333 (292333|1) - move to col 1

05:05:816 - add note

05:10:872 - add note (Longnote ikut instrumentnya jadi normal note juga harus di taruh, coba cek di stiap pergantian LN juga perlu tambah normal note)

05:14:243 - ^

05:17:951 - ^

05:19:299 - ^

GoodLuck~
pporse
no kudo :3

add MOD ~

7K Marathon World

HP, OD : 7 → 8

05:43:063 ~ 05:43:232 - 1/4 snap
05:43:232 ~ 05:43:401 - 1/6 snap
05:43:401 ~ 05:43:906 - 1/4 snap
it is not that only 1/6 snap

06:05:226 (365226|3) - delete. there has no sound.


nice song nice map :3

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

pporse wrote:

no kudo :3

add MOD ~

7K Marathon World

HP, OD : 7 → 8

05:43:063 ~ 05:43:232 - 1/4 snap
05:43:232 ~ 05:43:401 - 1/6 snap
05:43:401 ~ 05:43:906 - 1/4 snap
it is not that only 1/6 snap

06:05:226 (365226|3) - delete. there has no sound.


nice song nice map :3

Good Luck~
Done thanks ;)


Aii- wrote:

Mod via message ^_^

4K Marathon World
01:14:934 - LN start at this time ok

01:16:451 - ^ ok

01:17:462 (77462|1) - LN finish at 01:17:630 - ok

01:17:799 - LN start ok

01:21:844 - ^ ok

01:23:192 (83192|3) - finish at 01:23:529 - ok

01:25:552 - add note ok

01:27:237 - LN start ok

01:32:630 - ^ ok

01:43:838 - add noteok

01:52:687 - sengaja di kosongin apa gmna ? soalnya sound bagus buat stream, kalo mau di kosongin disini juga sekalian 01:52:855 (112855|3,112855|0,112939|2) - ok sudah diganti jadi terisi

01:57:827 - add note ok

01:57:321 (117321|1) - move to col 1ok

01:59:597 - LN start ok

02:00:608 (120608|1) - LN finish at 02:00:776 - ok

02:00:945 - LN start ok

02:31:198 - add note ok

02:31:788 - add note ok

02:31:872 - ^ ok

02:55:198 - LN start ok

02:56:547 - ^ ok

03:02:108 - add note ok

03:45:255 - 1/6 sampe disiniok

04:52:333 (292333|1) - move to col 1 no

05:05:816 - add note ok

05:10:872 - add note (Longnote ikut instrumentnya jadi normal note juga harus di taruh, coba cek di stiap pergantian LN juga perlu tambah normal note) ok

05:14:243 - ^ ok

05:17:951 - ^ ok

05:19:299 - ^ ok

GoodLuck~
thank you ;)
Topic Starter
Hehoooh
UPDATED
PeteN00b
no audio :S

edit: Never mind, I found the audio :D
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

PeteN00b wrote:

no audio :S

edit: Never mind, I found the audio :D
lol~ okay .. wkwk 8-)

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to do list :
~ working on hitsound now (re-arrange) ~ and wait some modders ;w;
RuberusuScarlet
hi

mod request from my queue

|1|2|3|4|
[General]

tag add : 感情の摩天楼

[4K Marathon World]
HD8
01:57:406 - add 2

02:11:900 (131900|1) - delete
02:11:731 (131731|2) - end to 02:12:069 -

02:57:052 (177052|1) - delete

02:59:496 (179496|2) - move to 1
02:59:580 - add 3 and hitsound finish

04:05:648 (245648|1,245732|0) - move to 3 and 2

05:59:580 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2535263

good luck >w</
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi

mod request from my queue

4K Marathon World
|1|2|3|4|
[General]

tag add : 感情の摩天楼 Done

[4K Marathon World]
HD8 Done
01:57:406 - add 2 Done

02:11:900 (131900|1) - delete Done
02:11:731 (131731|2) - end to 02:12:069 - Done

02:57:052 (177052|1) - delete Done

02:59:496 (179496|2) - move to 1 Done
02:59:580 - add 3 and hitsound finish Done

04:05:648 (245648|1,245732|0) - move to 3 and 2 Done

05:59:580 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2535263 Done

good luck >w</
Thank you for Mod~ really :) :) :)
Fubukicat
Hello~ Mod request from 『 Hitsound Mod(All) & Normal Mod(Mania & STD only) 』
I'll take care of the 7K diff~ also DEMETORI FTW <3

Collumn 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

7K Marathon World
01:34:316 (94316|6,94484|5,94653|0,94990|1,95158|2,95327|3) - You could make this mirror pattern , 7,6,5 1,2,3 , but it will need some pattern re-arrange
02:22:265 (142265|4) - move to 7
02:24:203 (144203|2) - add a note
02:29:260 (149260|4,149344|1) - make this like you did for this > 02:31:956 (151956|3,151956|0,152040|4,152040|1) -
02:33:052 (153052|1,153052|5,153220|5,153220|1,153389|1,153389|5) - What about making this single notes instead ?
02:39:372 (159372|1) - add 2 notes on 2 and 6
02:45:760 (165760|4) - add a note
02:49:131 (169131|6) - ^ same
02:54:187 (174187|3) - ^ to 1 or 3
02:54:861 (174861|1) - remove , you use only 3 press previously just keep it 3
02:56:884 (176884|3) - ^ you should also but pattern here look so cool x) Up to you
03:00:592 (180592|6) - add note
03:00:929 (180929|5) - ^
03:04:974 (184974|5) - remove ? up to you
03:05:311 (185311|3) - add note
03:22:165 (202165|0) - ^
03:29:412 (209412|6) - remove
03:32:108 (212108|5) - ^
03:40:114 (220114|1) - Move to 6
04:01:350 (241350|5) - Remove finish hitsound on this note please and put it on this one instead 04:01:266 (241266|4) -
04:04:131 (244131|3) - You could make this single note instead , up to you
04:59:580 (299580|0,299580|5,299580|2,299580|1,299580|4,299580|6,299749|3,299749|5,299749|4,299749|1,299749|2) - Ctrl+J ?
05:16:434 (316434|5) - move to 7 , only for reading xD actually it's fine
05:48:457 (348457|2) - guitar sound -LN- should start here

Done :3 Seriously , I just wish something like this get ranked ahah insaness of the thing is real >w< I may not find anything on harder part since i'm not goot enought to play them lol aniway .

DEMETORI FOR THE WIN , Good Luck , I hope I helped you at least a bit :3/ have a nice day
Topic Starter
Hehoooh

Eternalie wrote:

Hello~ Mod request from 『 Hitsound Mod(All) & Normal Mod(Mania & STD only) 』 Hello ~ :D
I'll take care of the 7K diff~ also DEMETORI FTW <3 thank you

Collumn 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7

7K Marathon World
01:34:316 (94316|6,94484|5,94653|0,94990|1,95158|2,95327|3) - You could make this mirror pattern , 7,6,5 1,2,3 , but it will need some pattern re-arrange Not change
02:22:265 (142265|4) - move to 7 Done
02:24:203 (144203|2) - add a note Done
02:29:260 (149260|4,149344|1) - make this like you did for this > 02:31:956 (151956|3,151956|0,152040|4,152040|1) - Done
02:33:052 (153052|1,153052|5,153220|5,153220|1,153389|1,153389|5) - What about making this single notes instead ? Sure
02:39:372 (159372|1) - add 2 notes on 2 and 6 Done
02:45:760 (165760|4) - add a note Done
02:49:131 (169131|6) - ^ same Done
02:54:187 (174187|3) - ^ to 1 or 3 Done and change a bit
02:54:861 (174861|1) - remove , you use only 3 press previously just keep it 3 Done
02:56:884 (176884|3) - ^ you should also but pattern here look so cool x) Up to you not change :3
03:00:592 (180592|6) - add note Done
03:00:929 (180929|5) - ^ Done
03:04:974 (184974|5) - remove ? up to you Done
03:05:311 (185311|3) - add note Done
03:22:165 (202165|0) - ^ Done
03:29:412 (209412|6) - remove Done
03:32:108 (212108|5) - ^ Done, i delete another note
03:40:114 (220114|1) - Move to 6 No, its better there
04:01:350 (241350|5) - Remove finish hitsound on this note please and put it on this one instead 04:01:266 (241266|4) - Done
04:04:131 (244131|3) - You could make this single note instead , up to you Not change
04:59:580 (299580|0,299580|5,299580|2,299580|1,299580|4,299580|6,299749|3,299749|5,299749|4,299749|1,299749|2) - Ctrl+J ? No, it follow the notes before it
05:16:434 (316434|5) - move to 7 , only for reading xD actually it's fine Done
05:48:457 (348457|2) - guitar sound -LN- should start here Done fixed

Done :3 Seriously , I just wish something like this get ranked will happen soon >:) ahahaha ahah insaness of the thing is real >w< I may not find anything on harder part since i'm not goot enought to play them lol aniway .

DEMETORI FOR THE WIN , Good Luck , I hope I helped you at least a bit Yes, it helped me :D :3/ have a nice day Thanks!
Thank you for this mod~ I fix some part too :) :)
Lirai
[General]
Unsnapped plz, check Aimod

Start at 00:52:349 you can cut the mp3 it if you dont use it
[4K]
00:54:878 until 00:55:889
00:57:911 until 00:58:585
01:00:102 until 01:01:282
^ Double placement is so wrong, plz put it on the redline (BSD = 1/4)

01:13:333 (73333|1) - Move to 1
01:13:417 (73417|0) - Move to 2
^ Trill on 1 n 4, as before

01:14:133 (74133|0) - Add C

01:14:386 (74386|0,74386|1,74386|2) - 1/6 and add F on 1 note

01:25:046 (85046|0) - Move to 2
01:25:130 - Add to 1

01:25:720 (85720|2) - Move to 4
01:25:805 - Add to 3

01:30:439 (90439|1) - Move to 3
01:30:524 - Add to 2

01:32:630 (92630|3) - Delete
01:35:664 (95664|3) - Delete

02:08:866 - Make it same with 01:20:327

02:18:810 (138810|3,139316|3,139484|1) - delete, this double is Unnecessary for the drumroll sound

02:24:793 (144793|2) - No need to represent the Guitar, there's a drumroll which is good if you use 1/4 stream instead LN

03:45:198 (225198|2) - 1/4
03:45:676 (225676|2,225760|1,225844|2) - 1/6
04:01:153 (241153|2,241210|1,241490|2,241547|1) - 1/4

04:07:165 - 1/8? Why ;w;

04:12:783 (252783|2,252839|1,252951|1,253007|2,253288|1,253344|2,253457|2,253513|1) - Guitar and drum use 1/4

04:28:232 (268232|0) - Add F

05:08:513 - Add to 3
05:11:125 - Add to 2
^ Dont break the stream

05:43:120 (343120|2,343176|1) - 1/4

06:03:794 (363794|3) - Move to 3
06:03:878 - Add to 4

07:04:805 - 1/4 plz, 1/8=overmap (drum and guitar 1/4)
RuberusuScarlet
sorry…i forget wrote ><

[4K Marathon World]

02:55:535 (175535|3) - delete

02:55:704 (175704|3) - start to 02:55:535 -

02:55:704 - add 2


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