1. Hard (3.74 stars, 243 notes)
2. Insane (4.75 stars, 305 notes)
3. Normal (1.63 stars, 100 notes)
4. Soarza's Advanced (2.23 stars, 156 notes)

lonniganseaweed wrote:

EDIT: Now that I look at it, I think your BPM is slightly off, it is 191, however I time it at 190. This may be causing some of the problems I mentioned below.
00:01:386 (3) - Seems to be a tick early - ok
00:02:640 (2) - This slider needs to be a tick shorter- Fixed
00:03:973 (4) - This slider needs to be a tick shorter- yup
00:04:835 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Beats seem to be slightly early - I don't think so
00:34:223 (6,1) - I think there should be a beat between the circle and slider - yup
00:35:399 (2,3,4,5) - I think these beats are early - Yes
00:38:299 (1) - This should be a tick shorter - OK
00:39:317 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This section needs to be retimed and redone, it feels awkward. - Done a little
00:44:098 (3) - This slider either seems WAY too early or a tad late depending on what it is mapped to. - Longer
00:51:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - During this section, consider remapping some of the double hitcircles into short sliders to mix it up - Feels really good without sliders
00:55:775 (2,3) - This seem to be off a little - it was
01:06:433 (1,2) - Both sliders a tad late - I don't think so on 25%
01:12:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole section I think needs to be shifted one tick ahead - Done
01:18:031 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This jump may be too much for a hard diff - Changed

Good song, and good mapping except for some timing issues.

Cl9n wrote:

Because you were begging for one. Even licked my shoes for one xD jk
From #modhelp lol

General
Never use 100% volume I know, I haven't hitsounded this map quite yet so I decided to leave volume where it is for now.
Change the SV's a bit more. Add a more variety to it. I will acknowledge I didn't change it much, but SV changes don't have to be made, and in this case, I feel like they are where they should be in each section.
Listing them all is too much so I'm just gonna say it here. Patterns are very boring. I know, but if I changed patterns then I think it would become more pp, which I don't want, I want a more skill based map vs. pp map. Also, you might want to keep in mind how high of a rank you and I are, because it might be much less boring to someone who can't play 5 star maps well.
preview point should start on slider end of 01:05:380 (4) This is kindof a subjective thing so I feel like I'll keep it where it's at for now.

Mods

00:00:049 (1,2) - you should remove these imo. Doesn't feel right. Will keep it in consideration, it is a little strange.
00:04:226 (5,6,7,8,9) - map the vocals I kinda am already, but if you mean make them first priority, I would probably disagree to do that.
00:08:324 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:10:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make different patterns with these instead of putting more distance in them and then reducing it. Very boring. The point of it was to be boring, so the section after the spinner kinda "slams you in the face", you know what I mean?
00:21:879 (3) - because it's a long slider, make it look more appealing. Add some motion to it. Kinda hard to do that inside the context of using 3-point sliders so... yeah.
00:24:400 (2) - c/p 00:23:455 (1) and mirror it (e.g. https://puu.sh/r20HA/29d891cb07.jpg or something nice(r)) First off, I don't like how that flows compared to other slider to slider flow's in this section. And also, currently as it is, the slider end is blanketed, and the slider overlap is the same type of overlap as the previous one with the long sliders. So I think it's probably OK.
00:35:433 (9,10) - change these into 3/4 sliders. Well, you didn't give me much of a reason to do so. I don't see why I should do this, and secondly, it wouldn't match the flow of this section which uses no 3/4 sliders at all.
00:41:107 (3) - ^ and add a another 3/4 slider to fix the random pause This one I can agree with. I think it plays and feels a lot better.
00:44:575 (4,1,2,3) - 00:44:575 (4,1) - ds error compared to 00:45:442 (2,3) I do not understand what you mean sorry. Something is wrong about the spacing between 2,3 versus 4,1 but I don't understand how.
00:46:151 (1,2,3,4) - better patterns pls You can select any number of circles that are all placed randomly and it is a "pattern". Second, I don't think any of the "normal" patterns that you're probably talking about fit here. Squares, triangles, stars, hexagons, etc. I just don't think they have good flow for this section.
00:51:195 (1,2,3,4) - since it's an even number of circles, make a pattern Again, the point of this section is to lead up to the next, giving a "slap in the face" kinda feel to it.
00:52:770 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
00:54:032 (3,4) - put distance in-between them No, I don't see any reason to do so.
00:54:189 (4,5,6) - stack em MM I don't like the aesthetics of that though.
00:55:608 (1,2,3,4) - more distance; weird flow I did.
00:56:238 (1,2,3,4) - pattern pls
00:58:760 (1,2,3) - ^
01:16:413 (1,2) - dont slow down since its still in kiai mods Well, what do you want me to map to? There's nothing to map here besides what I already have.
01:18:934 (1,2) - ^

Ayyri wrote:

Check your timing pleaseeeeee

Soarza wrote:

Glad I could help make a GD for you Osuology! Hope to see this ranked soon!

I hope to see it ranked too, but first we have to work out those issues I was talking about! I think we'll make it though, it's going to be pretty exciting for both of us having a first ranked map haha