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DJ Genericname - Dear You

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The Gambler
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February 8, 2015 at 4:21:54 AM

Artist: DJ Genericname
Title: Dear You
Source: Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni
Tags: DJGenericname Yuduki Higurashi DnB Baraatje123
BPM: 174.11
Filesize: 5676kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Baraatje123's Dear Normal (1.81 stars, 128 notes)
  2. Dear Hard (3.05 stars, 310 notes)
  3. Dear Insane (4.58 stars, 492 notes)
  4. Dearest (4.85 stars, 476 notes)
Download: DJ Genericname - Dear You
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3/11/14: Timing and BG based on Nemis' mapset. Once again, my first beatmap in months
Anyone willing to help mod is greatly appreciated

7/11/14: Minor tweaks to map. Still need to do soundset

8/11/14: Soundset somewhat made. Still have some work to do on it

10/11/14: Minor tweaks to jumps (Insane)

19/12/14: Started to work on easier diffs

25/12/14: Finished Hard, new diff added as well

26/12/14: Finished all planned difficulty spread. Ready for modding

29/12/14: Updated hitsounds on D34R You. Hitsounds should be more consistent now. HP drain reduced as well

5/1/15: Redid some sliders on D34R You

9/1/15: Mod follow-up on D34R You.

31/1/15: D34r You - Remapped and renamed to Dear Insane. Redid some hitsounds on Dearest

5/2/15: Decided to remap Dearest. New BG. Took Milhofo's, Nya's and Baraatje123's mods and implemeted them.

8/2/15: More minor touch ups
Last edited by The Gambler , edited 40 times in total.
ilvax
3 posts
Joined October 2013
ilvax
Good map IMO
I would probably give it 7-7.5/10
there were good patterns in it and the streams fit
only problems might be the spinner near the end and some weird sliders
but overall GJ
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Here as requested from modding queue. But at the moment this is an unfinished beatmap like I mentioned on my forum.
So I will just adjust and discuss a few things to get this moving.
Change Bpm to 170 you don't need the decimals at the end ever unless it has timing changes such as piano for slow songs and transitions to fast in between them.
And generally with 170 bpm slider speed should be around 1.70 or 1.80 because of how it fits in with the song because when I played it, the transitioning between notes seemed off, especially with the sliders in double hit. You do have creativity and a way of mapping I can tell you that much. Just make sure to have symmetry, balance, consistency, the proper spacing, and make sure sliders don't end on blue ticks when it's by itself. :)
I hope this will start you off into a world of mapping because osu! needs more dedicated mappers :) :) :)
When you do get the chance to make all the other difficulties don't forget send me a message and I'll take a look at it.
Also give kudos to people who gave you advice on your map and how it should work/flow. I learned my lesson last time by giving kudos away randomly and it got revoked. So I hope to see this amazing song in the near future. Just keep working hard.
The Gambler
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The Gambler
Timing isn't an issue here, as this was already timed from another map. Slider velocity however, might be an issue as I'll have to tear apart the timing sections altogether to get a new slider velocities. Whatever witchery is involved, enlighten me ;)
formi
88 posts
Joined November 2012
formi
Please don't just copy Tags, as they are incorrect with this mapset!
The Gambler
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Joined September 2013
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The Gambler
ahh okay i'll fix that
IOException_old
IOException_old
gj dude
Monstrata
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
4,642 posts
Joined May 2013
Monstrata


Hi! From Astral Horizons modding queue :). I remember spamming this song when i was new to osu. You have a lot of fun patterns that just need a bit of touching up. This mod mainly consists of touch-ups, and only one or two rhythmic concerns, all easy to fix up.

[Dear SS]

00:01:775 (3,5) - Stack better
00:17:267 (4,6) - ^
00:19:852 (5,7) - ^
00:26:745 (2) - Move to 200||192
00:26:917 (3) - Move to 108||340
00:29:846 (12) - Move to 344||200
00:35:187 (1,3) - Space them apart a bit? So no overlap.
00:54:830 (13,14,15,16,1) - Fix up the end of the stream, it look's a bit untidy.
00:56:208 (6) - Make this slider curved instead? To flow better into the stream behind it.
01:01:205 (3,5) - Space them further apart so no overlap.
01:13:095 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:568 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Stream doesn't flow well into the slider because of the angle change...
01:37:217 (3,4) - Consider just making them circles? The 1/4th sliders are kind of out of place imo because the music isn't particularly strong at this part.01:39:974 (4,5) - ^
01:44:454 (7,1) - Try making them parallel? And move 1 so that it is in between 6, and 7.
01:47:469 (10,1) - Spacing isnt the same as the rest of the stream. Move 1 a bit further up.

[D34R You]

00:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Flow here isn't really good.
00:29:850 (4) - Move to 300||84
00:46:219 (5,6) - Flow isn't good here.
00:49:321 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make them same curve.
01:16:889 (4,5,6,7,1) - Stream looks like it was mapped by hand rather than Ctrl+F Make them more even please.
01:20:336 (5) - Move to 156||288
01:22:748 (1) - Move to 80||60
01:26:194 (3) - Remove repeat so you can map a circle on 01:26:539 - Since there is an audible beat here.
01:31:018 (1,3) - Don't overlap.
01:37:738 (1,2,3) - Make the stream same angle as the slider.
01:48:938 - This is a strong beat on a white tick. Consider taking out 01:48:766 (3) - And replacing with a Circle, and starting the stream here instead.

[Dear Hard]

00:08:322 (1) - Make this repeat... I'm not even sure if this slider is rankable :P.
00:28:295 - Missing a circle here. There is an audible beat.
00:29:674 - ^
00:31:052 - ^
01:08:959 (1) - Make this slider shorter. You want to have the next slider begin at 01:09:304 - Right now the sliders are starting on Red tick and are on the wrong polarity. Compare them to 01:10:338 (1,2,3,4,5) - which is correctly timed.
01:12:750 (5) - Same slider concern as before.
01:49:278 (5,6) - Don't overlap.

[Dear Normal]

This difficulty needs the most work imo. Aside from the Distance Snap issue, I find the map to be lacking in patterns. Maybe just me, but even though it's Normal, you can still include polygon shapes, fun sliders, and blankets.

00:27:620 (1,2,3) - Try and center 2 in between the two sliders.
01:14:487 (1,2) - They are not parallel. Fix 1 since 2 and 3 are parallel.
01:23:792 (2,1) - Not perfectly stacked. Though I would recommend putting the combo elsewhere so there is no overlap whatsoever. Difficult for new players.
01:28:272 (1,2,3,1) - I understand this is Kiai Time so the distance snap increase is warranted, but you switch back to normal distance snap later on while in Kiai Time at 01:39:299 - . The music is still strong at 01:39:299 - , there isn't a shift that would indicate a switch back to lower Distance Snap. Since this is Normal I wouldn't recommend increasing Distance Snap to begin with, but you should try and make it uniform.



Good luck~
The Gambler
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Joined September 2013
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The Gambler
Yaay^^ first mod ;)
The Gambler
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The Gambler

monstrata wrote:




[D34R You]

00:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Flow here isn't really good.
Meant that to be a hub and spoke triple/stream , and should match my audio intentions
00:29:850 (4) - Move to 300||84
Moved it at 288||100 to stack at the slider start
00:46:219 (5,6) - Flow isn't good here.
Won't visually match the follow up pattern I made here 0:46:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I see what you mean though and I'll think of something
00:49:321 (4,5,6,7,1) - Make them same curve.
Done and should match the setup to the next set of jumps at - 00:49:665 (1,2,3,4) -
01:16:889 (4,5,6,7,1) - Stream looks like it was mapped by hand rather than Ctrl+F Make them more even please.
Stream was already spaced fine, but I've smoothed out the curve
01:20:336 (5) - Move to 156||288
Done
01:22:748 (1) - Move to 80||60
Did you mean to say 80||160? If so, done
01:26:194 (3) - Remove repeat so you can map a circle on 01:26:539 - Since there is an audible beat here
Done.
01:31:018 (1,3) - Don't overlap.
Wasn't gonna overlap to begin with, but fixed.
01:37:738 (1,2,3) - Make the stream same angle as the slider.
Done
01:48:938 - This is a strong beat on a white tick. Consider taking out 01:48:766 (3) - And replacing with a Circle, and starting the stream here instead.
Done
The Gambler
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The Gambler

monstrata wrote:



[Dear SS]

00:01:775 (3,5) - Stack better
Done
00:17:267 (4,6) - ^
Done, moved it a bit closer to make a 'W' pattern instead
00:19:852 (5,7) - ^
Done
00:26:745 (2) - Move to 200||192
Done
00:26:917 (3) - Move to 108||340
Done
00:29:846 (12) - Move to 344||200
Done
00:35:187 (1,3) - Space them apart a bit? So no overlap.
Done
00:54:830 (13,14,15,16,1) - Fix up the end of the stream, it look's a bit untidy.
Remapped the entire stream so the curve is more even
00:56:208 (6) - Make this slider curved instead? To flow better into the stream behind it.
Done
01:01:205 (3,5) - Space them further apart so no overlap.
Done
01:13:095 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Done
01:27:568 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Stream doesn't flow well into the slider because of the angle change...
Switched it with a straight line stream
01:37:217 (3,4) - Consider just making them circles? The 1/4th sliders are kind of out of place imo because the music isn't particularly strong at this part.01:39:974 (4,5) - ^
Wouldn't really match the stream sounds at kiai, but done
01:44:454 (7,1) - Try making them parallel? And move 1 so that it is in between 6, and 7.
Done
01:47:469 (10,1) - Spacing isnt the same as the rest of the stream. Move 1 a bit further up.
Done
LordRaika
Elite Mapper
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Joined September 2013
LordRaika
Hitsound Mod request from my Modding Queue


osuu~ :)
Here is my mod as request :

Hitsound Mod
the custom hitsound looks okay ^^b
about the hitsound itself... at the first glance , nothing weird jst some inconsistent on them

[General]
  1. try to check AiMod on each dif, CTRL+SHIFT+A , there are several issue on each dif...
    especially the red timing, is not the same... fix this...
  2. also, the name of "D34R You" dif is different with the other, change the other with D34R too, or change all to Dear
  3. on higher dif, some of the combo is a bit too long, try to split or add new combo between them.

[Hitsound Check]
  1. 00:16:583 - here, u use normal-hitfinish on "D34R You" but not on any other dif, u forgot to set the additional into normal
  2. 00:54:145 - same goes for here to, each dif kind a have different hitsound at this part as well.
  3. 01:06:207 - 01:11:720 - and so on...
    really maybe u jst forgot to add the additional to normal.. remember that slider always have 3 part to be hitsound...
    1 start of the slider
    2 BODY of the slider
    3 end/repeat point of the slider
  4. ALSO, there are loooooooots of place where u can use the normal-hitclap, i rarely seen u use it except for some stream on "D34R You" dif
    try to add those additional normal, with clap... on each kick sound like this 00:11:931 -
    actually, forget it... but do this instead :
    Copy your normal-hitclap.wav and rename and overwrite your current soft-hitwhistle.wav
And try to check most whistle part.... it fits the kick, but u might have to fix some unrelated whistle as well...
anyway your current soft-hitwhistle.wav does nothing, its sounds exactly the same with default soft-hitwhistle ;w;
i hope u got the point of what i mod XD, really...
the hitsound works is good ^^b u jst need to check 'em a little bit detailed.
GL~
Bara-
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Bara-
From LordRaika's Modding party

[General]
diff names are unrankable
D34R You is probably the biggest problem
Also, why Dear SS? SS is Star Streams diff name XD
I recommend
Dear Normal, Dear Hard, Dear Insane, Dearest
Also, the red points are inconsistent between diffs, make them the same on all diffs (So delete them all except the first one, as D34R You diff uses correct timing)

Note, all things with images are just drafts, they are not perfect, but they should be followed. You need to polish it a little

[Dear Normal]
Please NEVER use a whistle on a slider. You can double click on the end/start of the slider and then equip a whistle, but never do it like this. Normal-sliderwhistle.wav and soft-sliderwhistle.wav can be awful to listen to, especially in soft songs
This diff is not ready for mod actually. It looks rather bad, sorry
Why?
Bad usage of sliders: Slider need to have good flow, which is something I miss, as most sliders are straight, or use red nodes
Terrible Blankets. Blankets are used to make maps look nicer.
00:08:322 (5,6) - Taking these as example. It looks ugly, but look at the image

This looks nice huh?
the approach circle completely follows the sliderborder. This is something which even in higher difficulties is really important, and can make diffs look really bad if used incorrectly
00:11:079 (1,2,3) - These for example can be made into this

Note, I made it fast, and the blanket is bad (see how much precision it needs)

Also, things like 00:33:134 (1) are unrankable. You MUST have the same Distance everywhere in an Easy/a normal diff
For this map, 1/1 and 2/1 are the best options for a normal
Please don't use 1/2, like in 00:40:715 (1,2)
00:44:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is actually quite a good blanket

The approach circles flows good with the circles' border
Also, you hightened Distance snap in the KIAI, which is UNRANKABLE
Please fix

I recommend you to remap this diff, or you can ask someone to make a GD
If you want, you can ask me

[Dear Hard]
This diff is ready to be modded :3

00:00:052 (1) - This slider looks kinda ugly, for Long sliders like this, I recommend you to make it have only one grey node

for example.
Then you can Blanket (1,2) like this


Slider points: Start (64:132) - Grey (244:132) - End (216:304)
Circle: 155:205 (click the coordinates at the top-right when having the note selected, and you'll see what to do)
00:02:119 (3) - Move to 218:303
00:02:464 (4) - Move to 155:205
00:06:254 (2) - Move to 180:184
00:08:322 (1) - UNRANKABLE. You cannot have such sliders
00:08:322 (1,2) - Make it like this
slider: Start (360:92) - Grey (324:44) - End (176:36)
Circle 244:144
00:13:821 (1) - Ugly slider, better make it straight horizontal
00:18:646 (2,3,4) - These circles can be a better blanket

00:20:714 (1,2) - Delete whistle (see explanation in Dear Normal)
00:23:471 (1,1) - These 2 sliders are overlapping, and it looks ugly
Make it like this

00:24:849 (1,1) - They also overlap, move (1) to 301:270 to fix it
00:36:566 (1,2) - It flows bad, make it like this

00:39:667 (4,5,6) - Uneven distance, make (6) also at 0.80, instead of 0.92
00:42:079 (1,2,3) - Looks rather ugly


(2) Blankets (1), and (3) Blankets (2) (Or vice versa, but there are blankets involved)
00:44:147 (1,2,3) - Try to do the same as ^^
00:46:904 (5,6) - Make it flow better

00:47:766 (2) - In order to prevent it from overlapping, move it up (So it's above (1) and (3), so the pattern is /\\/)
00:50:350 (2,3,4,5) - Try to blanket better, see above
00:53:797 (5) - Give NC
01:12:750 (5) - Unrankable slider (You can make it a 1/2 reverse though)
01:18:263 (5,2) - Ugly overlap, move (2) so they don't overlap
01:22:743 (1,2,3,4) - Try to work better on blankets, select the circle, and then click on the coordinates and then move slightly to see if they Blanket PERFECTLY
01:28:257 (1,2) - Distance is to low. Delete (2) and reverse (1)
01:33:427 (9) - Move to 238:326
01:37:907 (5,6,7,8) - Blanket better
01:42:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change, make it like this (For the ease, I Ctrl G'd (10). If you do this, then don't forgot to Ctrl G it again

01:47:555 (7,8) - Ctrl G


[D34R You]
What's with the weird hitsounds?
Weird as in, the other diff don't have it, so I don't think this diff should have it as well (or the other diffs should have it)
00:03:057 (3) - Delete
00:04:435 (11) - Delete
00:06:934 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This needs some fixing


(5,2,1) Are on the same place, and (1,3) are on the same place
00:15:549 (3) - Move to 268:228
00:17:617 (7) - Delete whistle
00:33:813 (3) - Would be better at 326:211 (but that's just an opinion)
00:45:013 (5) - Move to 132:110
00:44:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - change

For (5), I recommend you to make the slider starting at (1) flowing to the middle, and then Ctrl G it, so it ends at the start of (1) perfectly (see image)
00:48:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remap this please. Make a slider at (1) (1/2) (Current one is okay) , and then Ctrl D + Ctrl > it for (2), Then do it again for (3) and then again for (4), you can then Convert (4) into a stream
00:50:527 (5) - Make it 1/2
01:07:585 (1) - Move to 357:136
01:08:447 (4) - Move to 203:179
01:09:480 (1) - Blanket

01:10:342 (6) - Move to 189:200
01:11:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete, use Create Polygonal Circles for a proper star
01:15:253 (5) - Delete
01:23:265 (3,4) - Delete, and move (2) to 235:102 for the slow down effect the song gives
01:34:292 (3) - Move to 460:153


Also, Do NOT give kudosu to not-mod posts, like these

formi wrote:

Please don't just copy Tags, as they are incorrect with this mapset!

ilvax wrote:

Good map IMO
I would probably give it 7-7.5/10
there were good patterns in it and the streams fit
only problems might be the spinner near the end and some weird sliders
but overall GJ

A BAT/QAT/Moderator will probably revoke the kudosu for these posts ;-;

Good Lcuk, and if you need someone for the Normal, you may ask me if you want (or somebody else of course)
Last edited by Bara- , edited 1 time in total.
The Gambler
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The Gambler
I was wondering how to remove kudosu in the first place though^^^

Btw, nice skin ;)
-Nya-
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-Nya-


Hello! Sorry for the delay.
Well, here's my mod:

General:
Remove “DJGenericname” from the tags since it’s already in the Artist section.Uncheck “Enable countdown”, “Widescreen support”, “Display storyboard in front of combo fire” and “Display epilepsy warning” in all your diffs since you don’t have a storyboard.Use this: ひぐらしのなく頃に for the source.Why do you only have two combo colours? I’d say add two more colours.Why do you have a SB folder but no storyboard?The red points are conflicting in every diff. (The red timing points) Please make sure they are the same in every diff.

Dear Normal:
Unsnapped kiai time according to AiMod. Please fix. 00:00:052 (1,2) – Improve this blanket please. Use the approach circle of 00:02:119 (2) – like I did in the pic below.
Picture
00:02:808 (3,4) – Same here about the blanket. Use the approach circle of 00:04:876 (4) – to help you.00:05:565 (1,2) – Fix this blanket too please.
Picture
00:08:322 (5) – Move the red square till it’s in the middle of the slider to make the slider look more symmetric.
Picture
00:09:356 (6) – Maybe place this circle in the middle of the slider’s crook.
Picture
00:09:701 (1,1) – The reaction time between the spinner and the next note is way too short. And it’s unrankable. I suggest removing the spinner and placing a slider there.00:11:079 (1,2,3) – The distance between these three sliders doesn’t look the same. Please make sure the distance is consistent throughout the entire mapset.00:12:457 (3,4) – Please fix the blanket. Use the approach circle 00:13:147 (4) – to help you.00:17:282 (2) – Rather do this?
Picture
Looks neater in my opinion. Copy and paste 00:16:593 (1) – then Ctrl+G00:28:309 (2,3) – It looks a bit ugly if the slider is almost touching the circle. Maybe make a blanket here instead:
Picture
00:30:722 (2,4) – Avoid this slight overlap.00:32:445 (5,1) – Fix this distance please. Remember, no jumps are allowed in Easy or Normal diffs.00:41:405 (3) – Move the tail of this slider a bit upwards till it’s more parallel with 00:40:715 (1,2) – 01:06:906 (3,3) – Make these two sliders look similar. Use the copy and paste option.01:12:420 (2,3) – Make a better blanket here by moving the circle more to the right.01:13:109 (3,5) – Try to avoid this overlap please.01:23:792 (2,1) – Check the distance between these two notes again please.01:26:548 (5) – Rather place this slider here:
Picture
01:26:893 (1,1) – Again, the reaction time between the spinner and the next note is too short. Rather remove the spinner and place a slider there.01:28:272 (1,2) – Check the distance again please.

Dear Hard:
Please check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A). There are stuff that has to be fixed on there.00:00:052 (1) – This slider looks weird. Just make it a normal curved slider.
Picture
As you can see in the above pic, I only have one grey square in the middle of the slider.00:08:322 (1) – What kind of a slider is this?? Please redo this slider and make sure the end point is visible. Or if you want a repeat just make a repeat slider.00:32:775 (5) – I suggest stacking this circle on 00:32:431 (4) – 00:34:843 (8) – Same here. Stack this circle on 00:34:498 (7) – There are other places where you can do this as well, but I’m not going to point out every single one.00:36:566 (1,2) – Avoid this slight overlap please.00:40:012 (6) – Move this slider closer to 00:39:839 (5) – so the distance between 00:39:322 (2,3,4,5,6) – are the same.00:40:701 (1,2,3,4,5) – Also make sure the distance between these notes are the same.00:44:837 (3,4,5,6,7) – Same here.00:46:215 (1,2,3,4,5) – Same here01:12:750 (5) – Same as previous suggestion. Please redo this slider and make a normal repeat slider or make sure the end point is visible.01:22:743 (1,2,3,4) – Fix these blankets please.01:28:257 (1,2) –Maybe make the distance between these two notes a bit bigger.

Overall, the Normal and Hard still require a lot of improvement. Especially the neatness and structure of the diffs.
Good Luck! :D
The Gambler
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The Gambler
I'll be on hiatus for a while.. Extracurriculars and school is gonna get in the way of my editing at the moment. I'll resume around the beginning of March at the earliest.
The Gambler
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Joined September 2013
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The Gambler
SPOILER

baraatje123 wrote:

From LordRaika's Modding party


[D34R You]
What's with the weird hitsounds?
Weird as in, the other diff don't have it, so I don't think this diff should have it as well (or the other diffs should have it)
00:03:057 (3) - Delete
00:04:435 (11) - Delete
00:06:934 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This needs some fixing


(5,2,1) Are on the same place, and (1,3) are on the same place
00:15:549 (3) - Move to 268:228
00:17:617 (7) - Delete whistle
00:33:813 (3) - Would be better at 326:211 (but that's just an opinion)
00:45:013 (5) - Move to 132:110
00:44:152 (1,2,3,4,5) - change

For (5), I recommend you to make the slider starting at (1) flowing to the middle, and then Ctrl G it, so it ends at the start of (1) perfectly (see image)
00:48:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remap this please. Make a slider at (1) (1/2) (Current one is okay) , and then Ctrl D + Ctrl > it for (2), Then do it again for (3) and then again for (4), you can then Convert (4) into a stream
00:50:527 (5) - Make it 1/2
01:07:585 (1) - Move to 357:136
01:08:447 (4) - Move to 203:179
01:09:480 (1) - Blanket

01:10:342 (6) - Move to 189:200
01:11:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete, use Create Polygonal Circles for a proper star
01:15:253 (5) - Delete
01:23:265 (3,4) - Delete, and move (2) to 235:102 for the slow down effect the song gives
01:34:292 (3) - Move to 460:153

Renamed D34R You to Dear Insane as per your request and this post concerns this diff only.

Did pretty much all of them but i question the last one at 01:34:292 (3) - Move to 460:153, as it ruins the spacing a bit. If overlap is the issue then I have no problems with it.
The Gambler
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The Gambler
Took out some of the weird repeat sliders on Dear Hard, so that should take care of that. Further changes are coming soon, and Dear Normal is definitely gonna be remapped.
- Milhofo -
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Joined February 2014
- Milhofo -
Hey, here's my mod after all this time :)

The map itself is good, but you have a lot of timing and map unrelated problems:
[General]
  1. Your timing points are all over the place, why do you use so many red lines? As far as I know they're usefull only for changing BPM, and imo you only need 1 at the start of the map (in all diffs, in the same spot)
  2. Love the new background, but for some reason it triggers AiMod to say it's larger then 1366x768, I would resize it / cut it just in case
  3. You don't need Higurashi in the tags as it is already in the source (unless you change it to the Japanese title), also you could add mix / remix to the tags and the name of the characters, since people might search the character songs from the series.
  4. I think this set had a normal right? So I assume you're working on it but it isn't uploaded. If not, you need one :D
[Dear Hard]
  1. You could make 00:05:565 (1) blanket 00:06:254 (2) by moving 00:05:221 (4) to the right (while keeping teh same distance snap)
  2. Why is 00:06:944 (3) so close to the previous slider end? It's not using consistent spacing
  3. 00:08:322 (6,7) - the overlap is kind of ugly and noticeable during gameplay
  4. 00:15:200 (1,2) - could be a better blanket (increase 1's radius a little bit)
  5. 00:22:093 (1,1) - would be better if they had the same shape (ctrl+c, ctrl+v, move and ctrl+g)
  6. 00:55:175 (1) - two timing point on the same spot (1 of them is useless)
  7. 00:36:566 (1,2) - they're not blanketing each other, either make the blankets better or make the parallel
  8. 00:38:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is not consistent, 2 should be further from 1
  9. 00:42:424 (7,8) - blanket could be better (like 00:42:079 (6,7) )
  10. 00:53:797 (5) - could be divided into 2, it's a bit too long
  11. 00:55:175 (1) - Unrankable! Spinner is overlapping the last tick of the slider, you can't have two elements on top of each other (timing wise)
  12. 01:22:571 (8,1) - spacing not consistent
  13. 01:22:743 (1,2) - can be blanketed better (center the mid tick of the slider)
  14. 01:23:605 (3,4) - ^ same as above, this one is more noticeable though
  15. 01:28:257 (1,2) - should be more apart, spacing here is really weird
  16. 01:29:636 (6,1) - ^
  17. 01:33:771 (1,2) - this one feels better, this is the spacing you should use on the above
  18. 01:49:278 (5,6) - ugly overlap
[Dear Insane]
  1. Imo this diff should be easier, you already have a 4.7 star insane, and the hard is 3 stars, this diff should be around 4 stars to fill the space between both the other ones. This feels too close to the other insane so it's not a rememberable map, between this and the insane people will just play the other one because, in all honesty, they look and play alike, so the one that's worth more score will be played more. They're both good, they're both fun, but they feel like they're the same map at some points (except for spacing). I'm not saying to remap anything, this is just a reminder for your next mapsets!
  2. 00:08:140 (5,1) - this breaks flow a bit, 1 should be rotated clockwise
  3. 00:54:318 (4,5) - distance between these should be the same as the distance between 3's slider end and 4's slider start for example, to keep consistency
  4. 01:12:410 (15,16) - can be stacked better (slider ends)
  5. Add an end point to kiai time
[Dearest]
  1. 00:05:565 (1,1,1) - the big three xD they're on timing, but their shapes break the flow, mostly the first 2 (the last doesn't bother me much, but the shape still feels weird), maybe you could try some new shapes to try and improve flow on this part
  2. 00:09:701 (1) - the slider end doesn't feel right, even when slowing down the song it's not following anything (vocals, instruments..), imo it should be shorter with a note after, or longer by 1 tick
  3. 00:26:228 (1,2,3) - ^ , the idea is good, but as it's not following anything it becomes quite hard to hit this with perfect timing
  4. 00:52:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is good, but I guess you could make the spacing bigger on this part, as it is an important part of the song, also to improve star rating a little bit and to differenciate it from the other insane
  5. 01:26:189 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ , same as above
  6. 01:48:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - instead of making it a really long stream you could play a bit with sliders, to end big. Here's an example: Don't follow my example though, it plays horrible, it was just to show what I was talking about xD
  7. Now this is just a suggestion, but you could also make bigger spacing in the whole chorus (the kiai time part), I know this requires a slight remap, but imo it would improve the map and the set. The rest of the song is a build up for the chorus, so it made sense it would be a little bit harder. But only the streams are harder, the jumps stay the same, so my suggestion is to make the jumps a little bit harder on the chorus
I wrote quite a lot on this one, sorry :) Take it all as suggestions and my personal opinion on what would make the map more enjoyable for me, apply what you think would improve the map overall. Good luck!
The Gambler
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The Gambler
Sorry for the fuss, but I decided to remap Dearest as I was rather unsatisfied with the way I mapped it. Something about my inconsistency with jumps was throwing me off.
The Gambler
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Joined September 2013
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The Gambler
I really should stop wandering off into mapping insanes and focus on the hards and normal.. uguu >_<
- Milhofo -
683 posts
Joined February 2014
- Milhofo -
Your jumps seemed fine though, they were not inconsistent. The problem was both insanes had almost the same difficulty, which isn't the best feature in a set. This is why I told you about making spacing bigger in Dearest, the map by itself was fine and fun to play for an insane ^^ just don't forget the normal and that spinner in hard o/
Bara-
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Joined April 2013
Bara-
For normal, you can add the diff I sent you :3
Also, I'm not sure if the star gap is fine atm
The hardest diff should be higher (5.00+ to be safe, or smth like that)
The Gambler
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The Gambler
anyone still willing to mod? or should i get a BAT mod
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