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Irreversible

osu! Alumni

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-11-14T19:00:10+00:00

i try to mod in chinese

wan an!

[General]

Try to play with the kiai times a bit, just 3/8 of the map being kiai is so bland imo.

[Easy]

00:04:631 (1) - That slider looks quite odd to me, why not making it a bit more even? (like a thunder shape)
00:26:886 (3) - I suggest a straight slider to get some variation. http://puu.sh/cQAUo/4e82f0e27c.jpg
00:37:220 (3) - bad blanket
00:58:552 (2) - I find this rhythm really questionable, as it follows nothing major ; try this please: http://puu.sh/cQC4B/16246b4122.jpg
01:02:218 (4) - I don't like how this is almost overlapping, please try to rotate 4 a bit to the left.
01:07:552 (4) - overlap with 2, little arrangements should do the trick.
01:09:718 (2) - Please stick to a simple rhythm. What you've mapped to is so silent, nobody can really hear it.
01:17:885 (4) - That's probably really misleading, as the beginners will probably lead to the reverse, and not the head. Try rearranging please, and while you're at it, eliminiate the blue ticks, I think that would probably be an unranking reason.
01:24:385 (1) - I strongly suppose this should end 1/2 earlier.

[Normal]

00:11:011 (1,2) - Try to get the lines paralell, nazi
00:14:887 (1) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Don't use 1/3, it's too difficult for normal. Stick to 1/1 please.
00:18:886 (3) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Well, you can leave it here, seeing it as something special.
00:22:886 (1) - ^, but use 1/1
00:29:553 (3) - idk what this is.. lol
00:33:553 (1) - 1/3, but use 1/1
36220,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0 < this green line is unnecessary 00:36:220 -
00:36:220 (1,2,3) - a pattern like that will be more awesome! http://puu.sh/cQCxl/3364fcb590.jpg and also flow better.
00:40:719 (2) - not following anything major, try again
00:42:719 (2) - same
01:00:885 (3) - moving this to somewhere like 124 212 will improve the flow drastically!
01:07:218 (5) - try 232 248 for a better flow too
01:18:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - I'm honestly not sure about it.. Try to get the blue tick on a repeater, it'll be better I strongly suppose.

Please get someone to check the divisor snap (1/3, 1/4), as I've originally told you; I'm a bit unsure, so it would be better to be on the save side. The normal is okay otherwise, but sometimes you could improve how the slider compliment each other (for instance, 2 curves like 00:17:553 (1,3) - look quite odd)

[Hard]

00:11:011 (1) - I'd suggest a straight slider which goes upwards instead of a curve like this, it's the same as in my comment @normal.
00:20:220 (1,2,3) - That spacing is quite big.. hmm.. mind lowering it a bit?
00:22:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm.. I think you could make this more appealing.. i mean.. following the vocals better, it seems a bit plain for me at the moment.
00:24:886 (7) - get rid off the overlap
00:31:886 (3,4,5) - Flow can be improved here, try to move 4 below 3, so you get a less circulare but more zig zag flow, which, imo, flows better
00:33:553 (1,2,3,4) - ? I don't think that can be enjoyable to play for a hard diff, it seems rather random to me.. i'd stick to the vocals again

00:37:220 (3) - same problem as in normal, maybe it's just me, but i think a straight slider works better here (or an opposite curve)
00:37:720 (4,5) - put the same spacing? I think a stack doesn't make much sense here.
00:38:720 (2,3) - ^
00:40:219 - Mhh, about this rhythm, I can see improvement. Try this: http://puu.sh/cQDoN/e1566fb198.jpg It flows better with the vocals! Also, your spacing atm is a bit messed up and proportionally too big.
01:23:052 (1) - overlap
01:16:552 (2,3,4) - Again, this combination looks weird to me.please don't use a curve downwards here!
01:24:052 (4) - I guess people will miss that one, because it's pretty not guessable that it's 3 repeats instead of two. What do you think?

The kiai was pretty cool, the rest could use some polishment, the rhythm seems a bit messed up at some points.

[Irie's Insane]

People keep thinking Irie = Irre ..

00:10:211 (4,5) - That extended slider does not fit at all. Please remove it.
00:38:220 (3,4,5) - omg i love that
00:47:219 (4) - You should indicate that with NC imo
00:38:220 (3) - same
00:49:219 (3) - same
00:51:553 (5) - same
00:54:219 (1) - I think a normal-whistle hitsound would fit way better than ~nothing~ . Please try!

Sometimes quite overmapped, but well, 2014. I'm a bit sceptic about 01:09:718 (4) - this technique, as it plays pretty unintuitive and misleading.

[Insane]

Begin - Kiai: The rhythm is made quite bad. I'll talk to you IRC about it, so I can explain a bit better (it is .. uhm.. correct, but it can be done way better.. 1/3 is a thing for itself, i assume)
Kiai:
01:16:552 (2,3,4,5) - Try to use a bit more spacing here? It will look less clustered.
I really like the kiai, so, good job on that!

[HW's Insane]

00:02:964 (2,3) - ..delete 2.. that doesn't fit at all, can't even hear it on 25%
00:06:164 (3,4) - I can sadly hear this on 25%, so I guess you can leave that one.. although I think it's quite odd.
00:27:720 (4,5,6,1) - Use equal spacing here? Can't see why you lowered the spacing from 6 > 1.
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - party time
01:02:718 (9,1) - really strong voice here, why did you use so less spacing for 9 > 1?

good map o.o looks hard, but good

So, after we've improved the rhythm on insane, I'll think what to do next ~

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-14T21:10:20+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
[Irie's Insane]

People keep thinking Irie = Irre .. ....;w;

00:10:211 (4,5) - That extended slider does not fit at all. Please remove it. fixed
00:38:220 (3,4,5) - omg i love that :D
00:47:219 (4) - You should indicate that with NC imo fixed
00:38:220 (3) - same ^
00:49:219 (3) - same ^
00:51:553 (5) - same ^
00:54:219 (1) - I think a normal-whistle hitsound would fit way better than ~nothing~ . Please try! ^

Sometimes quite overmapped, but well, 2014. I'm a bit sceptic about 01:09:718 (4) - this technique, as it plays pretty unintuitive and misleading.
it seems fine to me, i asked some friends around my level for testplays and they all got 300s at this part, of course it could be changed if i really need to, but i still want to keep it for now

再不更新我diff我就要打人啦

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Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-15T05:59:40+00:00

Minakami Yuki wrote:
[HW's Insane]
00:20:553 (3,4) - stack? fixed，这你都能看得出来？？orz
00:20:886 (4,2) - stack better... fixed
00:27:720 (4,5,6,1) - 这个间距看上去有点不对劲啊还好吧
01:02:718 (9) - 这个为什么不stack在01:01:385 (5) - 的尾巴上？想和01:00:885 (2,3,4) - 对称
01:08:718 (2) - ctrl+g? 其实感觉都行，不过既然vocal声音类似我就搞成同向了
01:21:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里的白线三连感觉太off music，怎么听怎么奇怪鼓这么来我就这么放了，顺便为何都觉得连打应从红线起，从白线起我觉得亦毫无违和感

感觉还是改叫ex比较好xD 这显然只有insane等级噗

Irreversible wrote:
[HW's Insane]

00:02:964 (2,3) - ..delete 2.. that doesn't fit at all, can't even hear it on 25% there's music box's beats here, maybe i can just keep it coz that's the track i'm following...
00:06:164 (3,4) - I can sadly hear this on 25%, so I guess you can leave that one.. although I think it's quite odd. uhh, it plays really fine i promise.
00:27:720 (4,5,6,1) - Use equal spacing here? Can't see why you lowered the spacing from 6 > 1. alright, i'll just reverse 00:28:220 (1) - and ds can be good to u now imo.
00:52:219 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - party time kiai kiai
01:02:718 (9,1) - really strong voice here, why did you use so less spacing for 9 > 1? rearranged 01:02:385 (7,8,9) - 's order into 8,9,7, and now it'll be better indeed in ds.

good map o.o looks hard, but good w

thx for modding!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-11-15T07:24:12+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
i try to mod in chinese

wan an! 晚安

[General]

Try to play with the kiai times a bit, just 3/8 of the map being kiai is so bland imo. Perhaps will change a bit kiai time,I keep it first

[Easy]

00:04:631 (1) - That slider looks quite odd to me, why not making it a bit more even? (like a thunder shape) Okay,slider end move a bit to become the thunder.
00:26:886 (3) - I suggest a straight slider to get some variation. http://puu.sh/cQAUo/4e82f0e27c.jpg Okay,fixed.
00:37:220 (3) - bad blanket End move a bit.
00:58:552 (2) - I find this rhythm really questionable, as it follows nothing major ; try this please: http://puu.sh/cQC4B/16246b4122.jpg Sure,fixed.
01:02:218 (4) - I don't like how this is almost overlapping, please try to rotate 4 a bit to the left. Move a bit.
01:07:552 (4) - overlap with 2, little arrangements should do the trick. Move a bit.
01:09:718 (2) - Please stick to a simple rhythm. What you've mapped to is so silent, nobody can really hear it. Okay,change a easy rhythm here.
01:17:885 (4) - That's probably really misleading, as the beginners will probably lead to the reverse, and not the head. Try rearranging please, and while you're at it, eliminiate the blue ticks, I think that would probably be an unranking reason. Reduce a slider reverse here.
01:24:385 (1) - I strongly suppose this should end 1/2 earlier. The end voice release at 01:25:385 (Red line here),if deduce 1/2 will not play so flow I think

[Normal]

00:11:011 (1,2) - Try to get the lines paralell, nazi
00:14:887 (1) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Don't use 1/3, it's too difficult for normal. Stick to 1/1 please. Sure, (I select not use 1/3),so I remove the (2) note ,and change a 1/1 slider here.
00:18:886 (3) - 1) This is 1/3 2) Well, you can leave it here, seeing it as something special. Same reason,change a 1/1 slider here.
00:22:886 (1) - ^, but use 1/1 Fixed
00:29:553 (3) - idk what this is.. lol Fixed. lol
00:33:553 (1) - 1/3, but use 1/1 Fixed.
36220,-100,3,2,1,60,0,0 < this green line is unnecessary 00:36:220 - Deleted
00:36:220 (1,2,3) - a pattern like that will be more awesome! http://puu.sh/cQCxl/3364fcb590.jpg and also flow better. Fixed.
00:40:719 (2) - not following anything major, try again Change a note here.
00:42:719 (2) - same Same as above.
01:00:885 (3) - moving this to somewhere like 124 212 will improve the flow drastically! Fixed.
01:07:218 (5) - try 232 248 for a better flow too Change a bit here.
01:18:885 (1,2,1,2,3) - I'm honestly not sure about it.. Try to get the blue tick on a repeater, it'll be better I strongly suppose. This rhythm I think the playing it is fine,so I don't fix it.

Please get someone to check the divisor snap (1/3, 1/4), as I've originally told you; I'm a bit unsure, so it would be better to be on the save side. The normal is okay otherwise, but sometimes you could improve how the slider compliment each other (for instance, 2 curves like 00:17:553 (1,3) - look quite odd) Sure,will ask someone (445 or lfj) to check this divisor snap,and improve some slider shape here.

[Hard]

00:11:011 (1) - I'd suggest a straight slider which goes upwards instead of a curve like this, it's the same as in my comment @normal. Fixed
00:20:220 (1,2,3) - That spacing is quite big.. hmm.. mind lowering it a bit? Feel fine,keep 1.0x consistent DS here.
00:22:886 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm.. I think you could make this more appealing.. i mean.. following the vocals better, it seems a bit plain for me at the moment. Okay,(2) and (5) move to 1/3 rhythm here
00:24:886 (7) - get rid off the overlap Move a bit.
00:31:886 (3,4,5) - Flow can be improved here, try to move 4 below 3, so you get a less circulare but more zig zag flow, which, imo, flows better Move a bit here.
00:33:553 (1,2,3,4) - ? I don't think that can be enjoyable to play for a hard diff, it seems rather random to me.. i'd stick to the vocals again I try to testplay few times to play it ,feel fine to me,so not change it.
00:37:220 (3) - same problem as in normal, maybe it's just me, but i think a straight slider works better here (or an opposite curve) Keep the same shape part with 00:36:220 (1,3,1) - here. (Express the vocal soft shape )
00:37:720 (4,5) - put the same spacing? I think a stack doesn't make much sense here. Fixed.
00:38:720 (2,3) - ^ Fixed.
00:40:219 - Mhh, about this rhythm, I can see improvement. Try this: http://puu.sh/cQDoN/e1566fb198.jpg It flows better with the vocals! Also, your spacing atm is a bit messed up and proportionally too big. Follow the downbeat,this part not follow vocal here,but reduce a DS there.
01:23:052 (1) - overlap Where? owo
01:16:552 (2,3,4) - Again, this combination looks weird to me.please don't use a curve downwards here! Sure,keep the straight slider here.
01:24:052 (4) - I guess people will miss that one, because it's pretty not guessable that it's 3 repeats instead of two. What do you think? Then I fix the 01:23:718 (3) - this slider become 2 reverse? Just become the 4 repeats , will be guessable to playable I think

The kiai was pretty cool, the rest could use some polishment, the rhythm seems a bit messed up at some points. Rhythm change a bit,but kiai time set will consider to it.

[Insane]

Begin - Kiai: The rhythm is made quite bad. Ehh? But I still feel fine to me lol I'll talk to you IRC about it, so I can explain a bit better (it is .. uhm.. correct, but it can be done way better.. 1/3 is a thing for itself, i assume) Sure.
Kiai:
01:16:552 (2,3,4,5) - Try to use a bit more spacing here? It will look less clustered. Move (3) a bit DS here 0.0
I really like the kiai, so, good job on that! Thanks ww

good map o.o looks hard, but good Thanks again ~!

So, after we've improved the rhythm on insane, I'll think what to do next ~ Sure.

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,416 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2014-11-18T19:31:47+00:00

requested by Irreversible; no kudosu because this is a mere snap check and not a mod post

[Insane]

00:15:553 (3) - should be 2/3
00:16:220 (1,2) - ^
00:26:886 (1,2) - ^

[Irie's Insane]

00:26:553 (3) - 2/3

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-18T20:03:12+00:00

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这次特意查了AiMod 应该没错了

thanks, TicClick!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-11-19T17:36:23+00:00

TicClick wrote:
requested by Irreversible; no kudosu because this is a mere snap check and not a mod post

[Insane]
00:15:553 (3) - should be 2/3 Fixed
00:16:220 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
00:26:886 (1,2) - ^ Fixed

Thanks TicClick divisor snap check ~ !:)

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2014-11-19T18:35:25+00:00

after several IRC mods, I think this mapset is ready to go.

Bubbled!

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-22T01:11:34+00:00

Dank!!!

Highest diff:
00:02:964 (2) - I get what you're doing the person is doing a flam (or grace note, I forget what they call it for bells), and that's not supposed to really be in time. It's just there for sort of effect. So tl;dr don't map to it.
00:06:164 (3) - ^
00:07:811 (1,2,3,4) - This looks like you made a pattern and you're like "yes!!! i must put this here!!! wow great great!!" without thinking like how it fit with the msuic.
00:30:553 (6,7) - like honestly
00:49:219 (1,2,3) - like the spacing is so small here on the thing I think would get the biggest jump
01:04:885 (1,2) - You're way too hopeful in how much leniancy a slider has
01:15:135 (2) - oh. . . this is a 1/4. . . I literally couldn't tell.

Irie:
00:12:411 (6,7,8) - Don't have patterns fall back on each other like this.
01:28:718 (6) - Boy do I love my hidden sliders

Normal:
00:33:553 (1) - Is there a reason why there's no sound here?

dank

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-22T11:27:08+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Dank!!!

Highest diff:
00:02:964 (2) - I get what you're doing the person is doing a flam (or grace note, I forget what they call it for bells), and that's not supposed to really be in time. It's just there for sort of effect. So tl;dr don't map to it. adsjf;alisjdfnalshdfkasjdasjkhakldfh why people always hate patterns like this? am i making mistake to follow the rhythm exsist indeed but not noticed by the player? lololol, i think this note is really necessary to express this quiet part, but somehow, if u force me to change that, i'll consider a bit.
00:06:164 (3) - ^ ^
00:07:811 (1,2,3,4) - This looks like you made a pattern and you're like "yes!!! i must put this here!!! wow great great!!" without thinking like how it fit with the msuic. hmm what? ;w; idk how this part goes wrong orz, maybe need further words or i can't get u >.<
00:30:553 (6,7) - like honestly ^??? >.<
00:49:219 (1,2,3) - like the spacing is so small here on the thing I think would get the biggest jump haha ok, i exchanged 2 and 3 's position.
01:04:885 (1,2) - You're way too hopeful in how much leniancy a slider has i didn't do stack here on purpose orz, maybe symm will be broked but the pausing aiming here can be good in playing, really >.<
01:15:135 (2) - oh. . . this is a 1/4. . . I literally couldn't tell. spaced stream... well, it'll be easy to combo even players can't aim that as well, coz it's ds's kind enough. 0.0

dank dank here

thx for modding!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2014-11-22T14:22:35+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Dank!!! o /

Irie: -> She call me help her fix this
00:12:411 (6,7,8) - Don't have patterns fall back on each other like this. Then add a NC here?
01:28:718 (6) - Boy do I love my hidden sliders Change a bit placement

Normal:
00:33:553 (1) - Is there a reason why there's no sound here? Okay,add a clap at slider head.(For my all diff added here)

dank ww

Thanks CDFA,updated.

Last edited by smallboat 2014-11-22T14:54:12+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-22T14:23:52+00:00

smallboat wrote:
CDFA wrote:
Dank!!! o /

Irie: -> He call me help him fix this 我干 use SHE pls

edit: @CDFA: i'm sure both of the two patterns are visible under ar9, so can i just add nc to remind players for this one 00:12:411 (6,7,8) - ?

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-22T17:29:57+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
CDFA wrote:
Dank!!!

Highest diff:
00:02:964 (2) - I get what you're doing the person is doing a flam (or grace note, I forget what they call it for bells), and that's not supposed to really be in time. It's just there for sort of effect. So tl;dr don't map to it. adsjf;alisjdfnalshdfkasjdasjkhakldfh why people always hate patterns like this? am i making mistake to follow the rhythm exsist indeed but not noticed by the player? lololol, i think this note is really necessary to express this quiet part, but somehow, if u force me to change that, i'll consider a bit.
00:06:164 (3) - ^ ^
00:07:811 (1,2,3,4) - This looks like you made a pattern and you're like "yes!!! i must put this here!!! wow great great!!" without thinking like how it fit with the msuic. hmm what? ;w; idk how this part goes wrong orz, maybe need further words or i can't get u >.<
00:30:553 (6,7) - like honestly ^??? >.<
00:49:219 (1,2,3) - like the spacing is so small here on the thing I think would get the biggest jump haha ok, i exchanged 2 and 3 's position.
01:04:885 (1,2) - You're way too hopeful in how much leniancy a slider has i didn't do stack here on purpose orz, maybe symm will be broked but the pausing aiming here can be good in playing, really >.<
01:15:135 (2) - oh. . . this is a 1/4. . . I literally couldn't tell. spaced stream... well, it'll be easy to combo even players can't aim that as well, coz it's ds's kind enough. 0.0

dank dank here
thx for modding!

Reply time!!!

Firstly, for the first two things.

That's the thing. The rhythm doesn't exist in that exact time. That is called a grace note. Here is how its notated

They are not done in any sort of particular time. In music, this is called an "ornament" which is used to make things sound more interesting. Because we're focusing primarily on the rhythm of the song, we have to focus on what is actually rhythmically notated.

I'd show a video of the difference but I'm shirtless right now and my music notation software sucks donkey balls.

00:09:811 (4) - Well. . . There are words here. Words that are not being mapped. Which is weird because you mapped the other words. So I feel like you just sort of had the idea of a pattern and were like "uhhh yeah it begins and ends at the same time ok"

00:30:553 (6,7) - I'm talking about the jump. The jump is really big. For no reason. and only one note is even a jump. I get like patterns and all, but you should be mapping the patterns to the music, not just mapping patterns and being like "uhhhh that kinda fits ok"

01:05:052 (2) - Thats. . . not at all what I was saying. I was saying that the slider is REALLY far from the first. I've seen the excuse "oh, sliders have a lot of leniancy", which while it is true, I think you're overshooting that.

01:13:052 (3) - I still don't like it but like ugggghhhhhh

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-22T17:30:44+00:00

Irie Miyuki wrote:
smallboat wrote:
edit: @CDFA: i'm sure both of the two patterns are visible under ar9, so can i just add nc to remind players for this one 00:12:411 (6,7,8) - ?

well the thing is that they're visible but they suck

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-22T17:42:06+00:00

well at least i tried

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心灰意冷

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-22T17:52:42+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Reply time!!!

Firstly, for the first two things.

That's the thing. The rhythm doesn't exist in that exact time. That is called a grace note. Here is how its notated

They are not done in any sort of particular time. In music, this is called an "ornament" which is used to make things sound more interesting. Because we're focusing primarily on the rhythm of the song, we have to focus on what is actually rhythmically notated. yeah i know that coz i've already played piano for 12 years, so i can say that ornament is some kind of necessary to me coz it's a part of that rhythm. it'll be really different if u remove that melody from it, just like u playing piano and trace ur fingers on the key with 2 or more times' tapping. so it'll be really same in osu game playing: if i remove that note, it'll be a completely different pattern i can express to that beat. well, regard this as a explaination here, and i still not change it this time, but if u think it's some kind of issue u really wanna get rid of... ok, just tell me again orz.

I'd show a video of the difference but I'm shirtless right now and my music notation software sucks donkey balls. lol orz

00:09:811 (4) - Well. . . There are words here. Words that are not being mapped. Which is weird because you mapped the other words. So I feel like you just sort of had the idea of a pattern and were like "uhhh yeah it begins and ends at the same time ok" u mean i should give a beat at 00:10:211 because there's a vocal lyric there right? well............................................................................................. i think that under map can be fine... orz, i just choose what i wanna follow >.<

00:30:553 (6,7) - I'm talking about the jump. The jump is really big. For no reason. and only one note is even a jump. I get like patterns and all, but you should be mapping the patterns to the music, not just mapping patterns and being like "uhhhh that kinda fits ok" no, i don't think i map things only following my feeling, still give logic but seems like it's not ur taste. well anyway i can accept to change this and give a kind version may good to u imo now. >.<

01:05:052 (2) - Thats. . . not at all what I was saying. I was saying that the slider is REALLY far from the first. I've seen the excuse "oh, sliders have a lot of leniancy", which while it is true, I think you're overshooting that. u mean the ds's too large here? lol fine, shortered it now :3

01:13:052 (3) - I still don't like it but like ugggghhhhhh because that overlap? come on... lol it's just a overlap >.<

thx for modding!

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-22T18:06:58+00:00

我草我才意识到这第三页就我一个黑名我有点stress

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-22T21:13:00+00:00

I could go on for hours about the grace note and be like "well I'm 2 years away from a Bachelor's Degree in Music going to a Masters degree" but like tbh like if you're this adamant about keeping it then like whatever like.

Bug me when changes are made

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-11-23T04:45:43+00:00

CDFA wrote:
I could go on for hours about the grace note and be like "well I'm 2 years away from a Bachelor's Degree in Music going to a Masters degree" but like tbh like if you're this adamant about keeping it then like whatever like. lol i'm not tend to offence, just explain that pattern orz... anyway, i don't that insist the pattern so just removed those grace notes and now i think it's better to u >.< (hope u can understand

Bug me when changes are made orz OVQ

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-25T18:44:16+00:00

I was bugged

Yes!!!

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-11-25T18:55:42+00:00

Yes!!!

xxdeathx

2,661 posts

Joined July 2013

xxdeathx 2014-11-25T19:01:33+00:00