forum

LeftyMonsterP - Sayonara no Kawari ni

posted
Total Posts
41
Topic Starter
Natsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 22 de noviembre de 2014 at 22:32:32

Artist: LeftyMonsterP
Title: Sayonara no Kawari ni
Tags: ポンデ王子 桑原草太 GUMI MEGPOID Instead of Goodbye DNA vocaloid
BPM: 150
Filesize: 23802kb
Play Time: 05:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Sayonara (4,71 stars, 1038 notes)
Download: LeftyMonsterP - Sayonara no Kawari ni
Download: LeftyMonsterP - Sayonara no Kawari ni (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
..............
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm19582055
Gero
1st

Where is my kudosu (?)
Topic Starter
Natsu

Gero wrote:

1st

Where is my kudosu (?)
he provide me a video and helped me with timing, I think that deserve a kudo
Mei
hihi

[goodbye]
  1. 00:05:997 (1) - whistle?
  2. 00:08:396 (2) - remove this whistle sounds better for me
  3. 00:09:994 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest only whistle on 1,2,4.
  4. 00:11:194 (5,1) - remove the whistle on5's end and add one on 1
  5. 00:15:577 (3,1) - remove the whistle on 3 but add one to 1's head
  6. 00:48:684 (1) - the finish on the end is weird.. if you really think finish here is nice i would suggest you to put it on 00:49:141 (2) - 's head, which sounds much better
  7. 01:32:542 (1,2,3) - try this?
  8. 01:55:537 (1) - normal sampleset at slider's end?
  9. 02:58:583 (1) - add a clap here
  10. 03:10:004 (5,1) - swap NC?
  11. 03:14:268 (1,3) - ^
  12. 03:17:314 try this?(i changed both NC patterns and placement
  13. 03:43:811 (3,4) - add whistle?
  14. 03:51:426 (3) - i prefer ctrl+g there
  15. 04:00:410 you missed a piano there, try this?
  16. 04:42:593 (1) - the blank part after the slider makes me feel strange, try to use a spinner to 04:44:116 to instead it?
  17. 04:44:877 (4) - clap?
  18. 04:52:796 (4) - ctrl+g?

sweet song i like it <3
gogo
Topic Starter
Natsu
Mei

Mei wrote:

hihi

[goodbye]
  1. 00:05:997 (1) - whistle? yeah, my bad
  2. 00:08:396 (2) - remove this whistle sounds better for me there is one in the song
  3. 00:09:994 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest only whistle on 1,2,4. I'm just adding them, with piano
  4. 00:11:194 (5,1) - remove the whistle on5's end and add one on 1 same reason as above, piano is in 5 end, but not in 1
  5. 00:15:577 (3,1) - remove the whistle on 3 but add one to 1's head ^
  6. 00:48:684 (1) - the finish on the end is weird.. if you really think finish here is nice i would suggest you to put it on 00:49:141 (2) - 's head, which sounds much better removed finish and added clap, was a mistake QQ
  7. 01:32:542 (1,2,3) - try this? About my rhythm here, I always bring click actions to the vocals, that's why
  8. 01:55:537 (1) - normal sampleset at slider's end? sure thing
  9. 02:58:583 (1) - add a clap here but there is not clap in the music
  10. 03:10:004 (5,1) - swap NC? I guess is better to follow the vocals with the combos, since vocals are the main ¨instrument that I'm following¨
  11. 03:14:268 (1,3) - ^ ^
  12. 03:17:314 try this?(i changed both NC patterns and placement for now I'll keep my current one, but I'll consider this
  13. 03:43:811 (3,4) - add whistle? added in 3, but not in 4
  14. 03:51:426 (3) - i prefer ctrl+g there keeping this for now, since I like how it plays, but I'll consider this
  15. 04:00:410 you missed a piano there, try this? fixed on my own, I did a 1/2 slider with 04:00:258 (8) -

  16. 04:42:593 (1) - the blank part after the slider makes me feel strange, try to use a spinner to 04:44:116 to instead it? I really like it, it follow the vocals really nice IMO
  17. 04:44:877 (4) - clap? there is not clap in the music >:
  18. 04:52:796 (4) - ctrl+g? I'll think about this, keeped for now since the song is really slow at this part :c

sweet song i like it <3
gogo
ty ♥
Mortem
Hi~

Goodbye
00:39:852 (2,3,4) - Just a suggestion. Place it like this: (not stack, but put the circles consecutively with little DS).
02:07:720 (3) - Put the end of the slider on X:189 Y:328 (just where the 02:06:502 (4) - is placed).
04:34:370 (3,4) - Same thing. Put it, where the 04:33:151 (4,5) - is placed.

Sorry for poor mod, but I didn't find any other mistakes.
Hope that helps.
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Natsu
Pjecoo

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi~

Goodbye
00:39:852 (2,3,4) - Just a suggestion. Place it like this: (not stack, but put the circles consecutively with little DS). I prefer the stack >:
02:07:720 (3) - Put the end of the slider on X:189 Y:328 (just where the 02:06:502 (4) - is placed). that will ruin the blanket and 4 is not even noticeable in game
04:34:370 (3,4) - Same thing. Put it, where the 04:33:151 (4,5) - is placed. thisis on purpose for better readability, stacked perfect with the previous pattern will cause miss reading

Sorry for poor mod, but I didn't find any other mistakes.
Hope that helps.
Good Luck!

thanks, but I didn't agree with your suggestions, mainly cuz that parts are done on purpose or they affect the gameplay
Jemmmmy
hello
since you are good, and i think you can understand the mods, i didn't write much description.
stack leniency-> 2 why trying to kill hd player
00:22:172 (2,3) - blanket
01:39:700 (11,12) -
01:56:603 (1,2,3) -
02:15:639 (3) -
02:22:948 - add note? follow the piano
02:23:710 (1,2,3,4) - not look good but follow the vocal :o
02:27:974 (3) - ...not fit the music, but i see what you want to do
02:50:969 (3,5) - U shape slider in here don't looks that good
02:57:212 (2) - rotate -30 degree
02:58:887 -
03:17:314 -
03:54:319 (5) - use same shape with 03:53:862 (3) -
04:05:436 (3) - not good, bro
05:15:943 (3) - angel too large
01:28:735 (1) - use same sound with 01:28:431 (3) -

nice job
Topic Starter
Natsu
Jemmmmy

Jemmmmy wrote:

hello
since you are good, and i think you can understand the mods, i didn't write much description.
stack leniency-> 2 why trying to kill hd player changed to 4
00:22:172 (2,3) - blanket fixed
01:39:700 (11,12) - I don't like to overlap too much, that's why I prefer stacks with triplets
01:56:603 (1,2,3) - yeah
02:15:639 (3) - mm okis
02:22:948 - add note? follow the piano sound there is almost inaudible, that's why I didn't mapped it
02:23:710 (1,2,3,4) - not look good but follow the vocal :o my sliders are weird sometimes T-T
02:27:974 (3) - ...not fit the music, but i see what you want to do there is a small sound, that I think is 1/8 int bg music, but I'm kinda unsure about this, I'll try to get more opinions
02:50:969 (3,5) - U shape slider in here don't looks that good I improved this
02:57:212 (2) - rotate -30 degree I kind of want to keep my linear flow with the next slider
02:58:887 - 02:59:192 is music at that point, plus I prefer tobring click actions to the vocals instead of instruments mostly
03:17:314 -
03:54:319 (5) - use same shape with 03:53:862 (3) - this seems interesting, will get more opinions about this one
04:05:436 (3) - not good, bro ikr, same as the other one I'll ask for more opinions
05:15:943 (3) - angel too large fixed
01:28:735 (1) - use same sound with 01:28:431 (3) - I prefer the current one :c

nice job

TY ♥
P A N
  1. 00:11:194 (5) - place on 278|105, middle on 270|199 and tail on 206|177
  2. 00:23:172 (3) - you can move this a bit up for better blanket like this
  3. 01:23:862 (3) - better blanket.
  4. 02:22:948 - imo add 1/1 slider here and delete 02:23:101 (1) is really better since there has piano sound too.
  5. 03:17:314 (4,5) - imo again, the three sliders (1,2,3) was fit with vocal perfectly but I think 4,5 are have the same pattern as first three is a bit.. weird? because the vocal is not 1/2 anymore. maybe change to other pattern or change to circle instead?
  6. 03:47:771 (1) - make some jump since it's cymbal?
  7. 01:51:425 (1,2) - mute tail? better fit imo.
  8. 03:29:497 (1) - this slider speed it looks same as the previous two sliders so I think remove 1.0SV on 03:28:887 to make their speed a bit different to give more feel of beginning of kial or you can change the SV how many you want but recently is.. meh kind of don't feel any changed of rhythm cuz of similar speed if compared with first kial.
  9. 03:54:928 (1) - move tail one grid left? >_>
  10. 03:57:365 (5) - ^ 2 grid left
GL!
Topic Starter
Natsu
P A N

P A N wrote:

  1. 00:11:194 (5) - place on 278|105, middle on 270|199 and tail on 206|177 ups about this, can't be helped... due to the timing, I need to do a manual snap from a notepad to get this slider snapped... so is kinda impòsible to get it stacked correctly, cause I can't move it in the editor or it will get unsnnaped again
  2. 00:23:172 (3) - you can move this a bit up for better blanket like this done in previous mod
  3. 01:23:862 (3) - better blanket. I tryed
  4. 02:22:948 - imo add 1/1 slider here and delete 02:23:101 (1) is really better since there has piano sound too. but 1 has vocals and I'm a vocal mapper T-T, btw that piano is varely audible, that's why I ignored it
  5. 03:17:314 (4,5) - imo again, the three sliders (1,2,3) was fit with vocal perfectly but I think 4,5 are have the same pattern as first three is a bit.. weird? because the vocal is not 1/2 anymore. maybe change to other pattern or change to circle instead? changed both sliders to circles..since jemmmy said that too
  6. 03:47:771 (1) - make some jump since it's cymbal? I'll consider, since I kinda don't like to do jumps after a circle pattern that follow a consistent spacing
  7. 01:51:425 (1,2) - mute tail? better fit imo. that's was actually a mistake, they are 1/2 sliders now owo
  8. 03:29:497 (1) - this slider speed it looks same as the previous two sliders so I think remove 1.0SV on 03:28:887 to make their speed a bit different to give more feel of beginning of kial or you can change the SV how many you want but recently is.. meh kind of don't feel any changed of rhythm cuz of similar speed if compared with first kial. yeah but is not like the first kiai, I still prefer the current way
  9. 03:54:928 (1) - move tail one grid left? >_> k
  10. 03:57:365 (5) - ^ 2 grid left k
GL!

TY ♥
SkinnyJommy
Hi there! M4M from your queue

[Goodbye]

01:04:370 (2) - Maybe change this slider into a longer slider http://puu.sh/csHRH.jpg

02:03:456 (5,6) - Switch these 2 notes on the timeline? so the long slider starts on the vocals and the piano, it sounds really nice http://puu.sh/csI34.jpg

02:21:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try out this note sequence instead? http://puu.sh/csIsM.jpg

02:58:583 (1,2,3) - Try this note squence too, i think it follows the rhythm of the song better http://puu.sh/csIDz.jpg

03:40:918 (5,6) - Switch these notes on the timeline to follow the vocals better http://puu.sh/csIZH.jpg

04:50:969 (1) - Another note sequence suggestion yay http://puu.sh/csJhB.jpg

04:53:405 (1) - The same exact thing as ^ this

Well, that's all i could really see that maybe needs some fixing, really cool map! and the song is very nice too!

GL
Topic Starter
Natsu
skinnyjimmy

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi there! M4M from your queue

[Goodbye]

01:04:370 (2) - Maybe change this slider into a longer slider http://puu.sh/csHRH.jpg there is a clearly drum in 01:04:522 -, I don't see a valid reason to ignore it

02:03:456 (5,6) - Switch these 2 notes on the timeline? so the long slider starts on the vocals and the piano, it sounds really nice http://puu.sh/csI34.jpg uhhh, this actually something that I'll consider, is a nice suggestion, bt need some more opinions

02:21:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try out this note sequence instead? http://puu.sh/csIsM.jpg 02:21:730 - this is almost inaudible that's why I didn't map it as slider tail, circle my rhythm is better here tho

02:58:583 (1,2,3) - Try this note squence too, i think it follows the rhythm of the song better http://puu.sh/csIDz.jpg yeah... but to someone that is following everything, I'm following mostly vocals, that's why my 3 hits 02:58:583 (1,2,3) - are following just the vocals and the repeat slider follow the other sounds, that I don't want to me clickables

03:40:918 (5,6) - Switch these notes on the timeline to follow the vocals better http://puu.sh/csIZH.jpg mmm not sure about this, I like my current rhythm a bit, but need to think a bit more about this

04:50:969 (1) - Another note sequence suggestion yay http://puu.sh/csJhB.jpg 04:50:969 (1,2,3) - same explain as 02:58:583 (1,2,3) -

04:53:405 (1) - The same exact thing as ^ this ^

Well, that's all i could really see that maybe needs some fixing, really cool map! and the song is very nice too!

GL

TY ♥
Gero
Nuked ~

Just kidding xD, poke me in-game if you need a mod here.
kakifly
for m4m from your queueue

Goodbye

  1. your nc's are a bit random for me, but maybe its just your style of mapping (?)
  2. 00:02:499 - maybe try emphasizing the sound here?
  3. 00:11:194 (5) - stack is off, unless you did this on purpose
  4. 00:31:781 (2) - theres nothing to emphasize here, i think a 1/1 slider starting at 00:31:629 - would work too
  5. 00:51:121 (1) - this could be hard to read, maybe stack on 00:50:816 (7) - ?
  6. 00:54:623 (1,2,3) - imo these repeats starting on the red line feels weird, i think you can have 1/2 sliders here instead starting on every beat (because the sounds on the white ticks are more dominant)
  7. 01:11:070 (3) - ^
  8. for this part 01:18:989 (4,1,2) - the piano sound starts at 01:19:293 - but you kinda start mapping it 1/2 later which imo feels weird, 01:19:293 - should be emphasized with a note if that makes sense..
  9. 01:21:578 - maybe have this downbeat something clickable?
  10. 01:29:420 (4) - remove this, theres barely a sound here (so faint its not worth mapping; with 25% speed i had to replay a few times to finally hear it)
  11. 02:00:258 (4,1) - swap NC's?
  12. 02:01:324 - map this part? you can hear the bass sound here
  13. 02:21:578 (3) - add repeat or place a circle at 02:21:882 - ? same reason as ^
  14. 02:23:710 (1,3) - fix stack
  15. 02:28:583 (1) - why dont you place the red node (red squares thing in slider) on the slider tick? not sure how to explain the reasoning behind this
  16. 02:59:040 - i think this downbeat should be emphasized (maybe put 1/1 slider here?)
  17. 03:14:116 - map this piano sound?
  18. 03:59:344 - ^
  19. 04:31:629 - imo i think you should map the piano here, it would make nice jumps but i see you are a vocal oriented mapper so... your choice xD
  20. 04:43:507 - ^
  21. 04:46:248 (3) - This slider is very inconsistent (first slider with 2 repeats) it could surprise players easily so maybe try something else here?
  22. 05:30:258 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe change one of these triplets into 1/4 repeat slider? so the player isnt constantly spamming their keys and gets a tiny break?
  23. 05:48:837 - map this part? you were following piano a bit before so you should here too or else theres an awkward pause
good luck :3
Topic Starter
Natsu
kakifly

kakifly wrote:

for m4m from your queueue

Goodbye

  1. your nc's are a bit random for me, but maybe its just your style of mapping (?) I don't see how my comboing can be random.. since them are following vocals or the music when vocals are not present, adding then by bpm measure is just too simple and doesn't fit when you map to the vocals, that's why my comboing rarely follow the mainstream way of adding them, but if you can point the ones that are random to you, will be nice
  2. 00:02:499 - maybe try emphasizing the sound here?it is almost inaudible and doesn't follow the vocal lines
  3. 00:11:194 (5) - stack is off, unless you did this on purpose Is not on purpose, but can't be helped, since due to the slider ending in a bpm line, I have to snap it in a mnaul way from .osu, basicaly I can't move it in the editor or it get unsnapped :c
  4. 00:31:781 (2) - theres nothing to emphasize here, i think a 1/1 slider starting at 00:31:629 - would work too there is a little sound, but yeah a 1/1 sound better
  5. 00:51:121 (1) - this could be hard to read, maybe stack on 00:50:816 (7) - ? no one in the test plays that I asked missed it, since this is a common pattern used for years, and I like it T-T, gonna keep this for now, unless people complain a lot for this
  6. 00:54:623 (1,2,3) - imo these repeats starting on the red line feels weird, i think you can have 1/2 sliders here instead starting on every beat (because the sounds on the white ticks are more dominant) yeah if you are mapping to the instruments, but mapping to the vocals make more sense to have this 00:54:623 (1) - mapped as it is, the second one 00:55:080 (2) - is mapped by your logic and the sounds in the third one are almost the same so yup
  7. 01:11:070 (3) - ^ I'm following the vocals, since I'm a mapper that always give priority to the vocals than the instruments
  8. for this part 01:18:989 (4,1,2) - the piano sound starts at 01:19:293 - but you kinda start mapping it 1/2 later which imo feels weird, 01:19:293 - should be emphasized with a note if that makes sense.. vocals are starting here 01:18:989 -, there is nothing wrong with it
  9. 01:21:578 - maybe have this downbeat something clickable? vocals are starting in 01:21:425 -, downbeat doesn't have vocals that's why
  10. 01:29:420 (4) - remove this, theres barely a sound here (so faint its not worth mapping; with 25% speed i had to replay a few times to finally hear it) that's weird o.o, I can hear it perfectly at 50% speed O.O, I prefer to keep it for now
  11. 02:00:258 (4,1) - swap NC's? nice
  12. 02:01:324 - map this part? you can hear the bass sound here nah, I'll lose the priority to the vocals in 02:01:476 -
  13. 02:21:578 (3) - add repeat or place a circle at 02:21:882 - ? same reason as ^ mmm not sure about this one, but I'll consider, since for now I prefer my way to have a little break between the pianos
  14. 02:23:710 (1,3) - fix stack hope is better now
  15. 02:28:583 (1) - why dont you place the red node (red squares thing in slider) on the slider tick? not sure how to explain the reasoning behind this I know what you mean, but I don't hear nothing in the ticks there >: probably just in the first one, anyways I was planning to change this slider shape, so I'll apply this when I found a better shape :3
  16. 02:59:040 - i think this downbeat should be emphasized (maybe put 1/1 slider here?) vocals mapping
  17. 03:14:116 - map this piano sound? blame vocals
  18. 03:59:344 - ^ this one doesn't follow the track that im following, that's why i just ignored it
  19. 04:31:629 - imo i think you should map the piano here, it would make nice jumps but i see you are a vocal oriented mapper so... your choice xD yup blame me for my love to vocals T-T
  20. 04:43:507 - ^ ^
  21. 04:46:248 (3) - This slider is very inconsistent (first slider with 2 repeats) it could surprise players easily so maybe try something else here? is a 1/1 slider, I don't think someone who is capable to play 191 bpm insanes will missread a 1/1 2 repeat sliders, but I'll consider if someoe suggest me a better rhythm
  22. 05:30:258 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe change one of these triplets into 1/4 repeat slider? so the player isnt constantly spamming their keys and gets a tiny break? uh maybe is me, but I dont have some much problems to play this part... also circles fit better the music mmm need more opinions
  23. 05:48:837 - map this part? you were following piano a bit before so you should here too or else theres an awkward pause okis
thanks for mod sorry for deny a lot, but I'm afraid to break my vocal mapping, since is usual on me T-T, myonly map where I didn't follow the vocals was an instrumental one T-T

good luck :3TY ♥
Atsuro
Holas, de #spanish Mapping Help Team
Soy nuevo en esto del moddeo, no esperes mucho :P

Goodbye
  1. El soft hitclap que usas no es muy audible, considera subirle un poco el volumen.
  2. 00:11:194 (5) - Nazi :x, Encima esto perfectamente
  3. 00:23:956 (1) - Creo que este slider deberia empezar un poco después, posiblemente en el siguiente timing point?
  4. 01:31:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Intenta esto para mejorar un poco el flujo
  5. 01:45:943 (1,2,3) - Rota a 3 un poco (-1 o -2 grados) se nota que no está simetrico cuando se juega el mapa. También coloca a 2 a la misma altura que 1, aunque esto ni se note XD.
  6. 02:22:948 - Agrega una nota aca si quieres, para seguir al piano.
  7. 02:28:583 (1) - Creo que seria mejor si terminaras este slider en el red tick anterior
  8. 03:17:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Solo algo que se me ocurrió, puedes intentarlo o ignorarlo :D
  9. 05:30:106 (1) - Creo que deberias eliminar esta nota y extender el spinner, es menos confuso de esta manera (al menos para mi)
Eso es todo, espero que sea de ayuda
Buena suerte :)
Topic Starter
Natsu
Atsuro
[quote="Atsuro"]Holas, de #spanish Mapping Help Team Hola
Soy nuevo en esto del moddeo, no esperes mucho :P

Goodbye
El soft hitclap que usas no es muy audible, considera subirle un poco el volumen. a mi me gusta y lo encuentro bastante audible
00:11:194 (5) - Nazi :x, Encima esto perfectamente ya habia explicado porque esto me queda mal, y es xq no puedo mover el slider en el editor, ya que para snapearlo lo tengo q hacer manualmente desde el notepad, ademas en juego se ve bien
00:23:956 (1) - Creo que este slider deberia empezar un poco después, posiblemente en el siguiente timing point? si estas siguiendo el piano si, pero yo estoy siguiendo las vocales
01:31:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Intenta esto para mejorar un poco el flujo movi un poco el pattern, pero con mi misma idea
01:45:943 (1,2,3) - Rota a 3 un poco (-1 o -2 grados) se nota que no está simetrico cuando se juega el mapa. También coloca a 2 a la misma altura que 1, aunque esto ni se note XD. si esta simetrico, ctrl c ctrl v nunca falla
02:22:948 - Agrega una nota aca si quieres, para seguir al piano. estoy siguiendo las vocales mayormente.
02:28:583 (1) - Creo que seria mejor si terminaras este slider en el red tick anterior el sonido no se detiene en el tick rojo actualmente sigue, creo que lo que hice sigue la musicarealmente bien
03:17:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Solo algo que se me ocurrió, puedes intentarlo o ignorarlo :D lo que no tuviste en cuenta es que a tu manera tengo qrehacer todo lo siguiente, y costaria demasaido trabajo debido a como mapeo yo QQ
05:30:106 (1) - Creo que deberias eliminar esta nota y extender el spinner, es menos confuso de esta manera (al menos para mi) no veo como esto puede ser confuso o.o, estamos hablando de una insane >:

Eso es todo, espero que sea de ayuda
Buea suerte :) [quote]

TY ♥
Aerous
M4M From your Queue

I'm new to modding and I hope this might help you !


General :

Really fun map to play , hope it gets ranked soon !


Goodbye

00:08:586 (3) I don't know if its just only me , but this slider isn't perpendicular ( http://puu.sh/cDD0L/0919493e36.jpg )
00:12:210 (1,2,3,4) Suggestion : Move these notes closer to the bottom of the map
00:14:354 (1) Suggestion : Make this slider into a repeat and add a note at 00:15:377
00:16:377 Suggestion : http://puu.sh/cDDcB/5e7fc56c68.jpg
00:45:7921 (3,4,5) Change it to repeat slider? I just don't like playing triples after triples . http://puu.sh/cDDi0/35ceeacd65.jpg
02:23:710 (4,5,6) Suggestion : change it to a straight slider. http://puu.sh/cDDxb/ec5473bb20.jpg + http://puu.sh/cDDxQ/a8ccd72904.jpg
04:46:248 Suggestion : Add sliders to this , more fun in my opinion http://puu.sh/cDDIQ/f5b5c1880c.jpg
05:30:258 Suggestion : I usually don't like playing triplets after triplets , maybe mix it with repeat sliders and triplets?
Topic Starter
Natsu
Aerous

Aerous wrote:

M4M From your Queue

I'm new to modding and I hope this might help you !


General :

Really fun map to play , hope it gets ranked soon !


Goodbye

00:08:586 (3) I don't know if its just only me , but this slider isn't perpendicular ( http://puu.sh/cDD0L/0919493e36.jpg ) I moved it a bit, but still in a / way
00:12:210 (1,2,3,4) Suggestion : Move these notes closer to the bottom of the map I don't see why, I keep my current way for now
00:14:354 (1) Suggestion : Make this slider into a repeat and add a note at 00:15:377 this is a nice suggestion, but to be honest that doesn't it my vocal mapping >:
00:16:377 Suggestion : http://puu.sh/cDDcB/5e7fc56c68.jpg uh this is actually something that I need to think a bit more, seems really interesting, but at the same time I want to keep the first time based on slider mostly cuz the timing is weird
00:45:7921 (3,4,5) Change it to repeat slider? I just don't like playing triples after triples . http://puu.sh/cDDi0/35ceeacd65.jpg mmm maybe you pasted a wrong time? since I don't have any triplet at this part
02:23:710 (4,5,6) Suggestion : change it to a straight slider. http://puu.sh/cDDxb/ec5473bb20.jpg + http://puu.sh/cDDxQ/a8ccd72904.jpg no sorry, I really dislike to have that kind of overlaps T-T
04:46:248 Suggestion : Add sliders to this , more fun in my opinion http://puu.sh/cDDIQ/f5b5c1880c.jpg there is not music at the red ticks, that's why
05:30:258 Suggestion : I usually don't like playing triplets after triplets , maybe mix it with repeat sliders and triplets? nah triplets are fun to play, also the music is the same in every beat, so based on this logic if one is mapped as a circle all the others must be mapped as circles, I'm baka XD

thanks :3
Amasuro
Hi, M4...Ticket from your queue


[Goodbye]
  1. 00:12:394 (2) - Whistle here? You were whistling all the piano notes and I think you missed this one.
  2. 00:32:085 (2) - Break this slider into two notes? The break here sounds nice to me and goes along with the break you mapped at 00:32:542 (3,1) -
  3. 00:46:248 (1,2) - The music makes it feel like there could be a small jump between these notes
  4. 00:47:466 (1,2) - Same here if you took above suggestion
  5. 00:48:684 (1,2) - Same here if you took above suggestion
  6. 01:27:365 (3,4) - Make these two notes into a slider?
  7. 02:08:634 (2,5) - Stack is off a little here
  8. 02:58:887 (3) - Remove the repeat here? Since your following the vocals, I think it fits better
  9. 03:02:085 (2) - Ctrl-G? I think the jumps would be appropriate for this part
  10. 03:10:918 (1,2) - Turn into a slider?
  11. 03:56:299 (1,3,5) - Stacks are off here
  12. 04:46:248 (3) - Not really a fan of multiple repeat sliders. You could turn this into two sliders if you wanted.
  13. 05:27:974 (3,4) - You could stack (3) on the head of (4)
  14. 05:28:431 (5,6) - Then you can stack these two notes as well, if you took the last suggestion
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Natsu
Amasuro

Amasuro wrote:

Hi, M4...Ticket from your queue

[Goodbye]
  1. 00:12:394 (2) - Whistle here? You were whistling all the piano notes and I think you missed this one. added
  2. 00:32:085 (2) - Break this slider into two notes? The break here sounds nice to me and goes along with the break you mapped at 00:32:542 (3,1) - I want to keep this a slider, since the timing at the beggining is just weird T-T
  3. 00:46:248 (1,2) - The music makes it feel like there could be a small jump between these notes for this one I prefer to keep my current way (don't want to rework those patterns, mainly cuz I like them XD
  4. 00:47:466 (1,2) - Same here if you took above suggestion
  5. 00:48:684 (1,2) - Same here if you took above suggestion
  6. 01:27:365 (3,4) - Make these two notes into a slider? 01:27:365 (3,4) - each one have vocals, yeah I got blamed a lot for my obsession with vocals when mapping
  7. 02:08:634 (2,5) - Stack is off a little here fixed I hope
  8. 02:58:887 (3) - Remove the repeat here? Since your following the vocals, I think it fits better if I do that, the next slider 02:59:649 (4) - will fit bad, also the repeat doesn't need click action just a hold
  9. 03:02:085 (2) - Ctrl-G? I think the jumps would be appropriate for this part sure why not
  10. 03:10:918 (1,2) - Turn into a slider? 03:10:918 (1,2) - same as 01:27:365
  11. 03:56:299 (1,3,5) - Stacks are off here fixed
  12. 04:46:248 (3) - Not really a fan of multiple repeat sliders. You could turn this into two sliders if you wanted. wella lot of people are suggesting this, yeah done
  13. 05:27:974 (3,4) - You could stack (3) on the head of (4) I prefer my current way here
  14. 05:28:431 (5,6) - Then you can stack these two notes as well, if you took the last suggestion ^
Good luck!

Ty c:
Sakura
From my modding queue:
(Suggestions, Feel free to change or not)
(Personal criteria, Inconsistencies, Issues)
Unrankable, Major issues)


[Timing]
Really unsure on the timing of this, it doesn't feel like it needs that many red lines, in fact it feels like it should only need 2 or 3, i suggest you double check this

[Goodbye]
02:23:710 (1) - Don't like sliders like these the curve looks way too forced because the slider is pretty small, try to smoothen the curve on them.
03:23:253 (3) - This curve here feels pretty awkward

Natsu wrote:

Gero wrote:

1st

Where is my kudosu (?)
he provide me a video and helped me with timing, I think that deserve a kudo
Post logs of this otherwise the mod is invalid.
Topic Starter
Natsu
Here is the log with gero (since this was before the map was uploaded):

2014-10-20 01:02 Gero: borra todas tus lineas rojas por cierto
2014-10-20 01:02 Gero: me falto un poco de la hard
2014-10-20 01:02 Gero: xD
2014-10-20 01:02 Natsu: yella te dijo q ya no?
2014-10-20 01:03 Gero: no
2014-10-20 01:03 Gero: todavia me espera xD
2014-10-20 01:03 Gero: checa el foro gorda
2014-10-20 01:08 Natsu: todaS?
2014-10-20 01:09 Gero: todas
2014-10-20 01:09 Gero: antes de pegarlo
2014-10-20 01:10 Gero: 00:13:977 - esta linea muevela a 00:14:054 - se me paso xD
2014-10-20 01:12 Natsu: ahahha
2014-10-20 01:13 Natsu: podes hacer videos vos?
2014-10-20 01:13 Gero: si
2014-10-20 01:15 Gero: que video quieres? haz collab e invitame, me gusto la canción ;w;
2014-10-20 01:16 Natsu: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=thRMxrZvAtc
2014-10-20 01:16 ese *-*
2014-10-20 01:41 Gero: http://puu.sh/cjbCa/6e6ddc9a58.rar
2014-10-20 01:41 Gero: Video offset: 0
2014-10-20 01:44 Natsu: http://i.ytimg.com/vi/djpcC-A1ybM/maxresdefault.jpg
2014-10-20 01:44 bg *-*
2014-10-20 01:45 Gero: de nada (?)
2014-10-20 01:46 Natsu: gracias nigga
2014-10-20 02:05 Natsu: q lento mapear y snapear slider manualmente
2014-10-20 02:06 Gero: yo se lo que se siente xD
2014-10-20 01:17 Gero: Vale
2014-10-20 01:22 Gero: y bien, que te parecio el timing?
2014-10-20 01:22 Natsu: esta decente

Sakura wrote:

[Timing]
Really unsure on the timing of this, it doesn't feel like it needs that many red lines, in fact it feels like it should only need 2 or 3, i suggest you double check this I'll ask to captin1 probably, but I'm really sure that I need those (maybe all) lines, since the piano parts usually doesn't follow a tempo, this also happen in my compilation

[Goodbye]
02:23:710 (1) - Don't like sliders like these the curve looks way too forced because the slider is pretty small, try to smoothen the curve on them. this ones play really nice >:
03:23:253 (3) - This curve here feels pretty awkward sure I fixed this one

Post logs of this otherwise the mod is invalid.
thanks for mod
Gero

Sakura wrote:

he provide me a video and helped me with timing, I think that deserve a kudo
Post logs of this otherwise the mod is invalid.
Seriously...

Log
2014-10-20 00:49 Natsu: tiing request thanks
2014-10-20 00:49 Natsu: timing
2014-10-20 00:50 Gero: yo?
2014-10-20 00:50 Gero: bueno, puedo intentarlo ;w;
2014-10-20 00:50 Natsu: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=thRMxrZvAtc
2014-10-20 00:51 Gero: es piano...
2014-10-20 00:51 Gero: bueno, dale
2014-10-20 00:51 Natsu: solo son los primeros 25 secs lo demas ya lo tengo
2014-10-20 00:51 Gero: vale vale, enviame el mapa
2014-10-20 00:51 Natsu: descarga ese mp3 es el mismo ahhahah
2014-10-20 00:51 Gero: nah
2014-10-20 00:52 Gero: dame el map xD
2014-10-20 00:52 Natsu: okay e.e
2014-10-20 00:55 Natsu: http://puu.sh/cj7nX/964460522e.osz
2014-10-20 00:56 Gero: apestas en timing xD
2014-10-20 00:56 Natsu: lol what
2014-10-20 00:56 Natsu: esta bien raro aahahha
2014-10-20 00:56 Gero: si, bastante
2014-10-20 00:57 Gero: vale tu encargate de mapear xD ya yo hago el inicio
2014-10-20 00:57 Natsu: 00:02:033 - 00:02:133 -
2014-10-20 00:57 Natsu: eso es bien raro
2014-10-20 00:57 Gero: es que el piano no encaja con la voz
2014-10-20 00:57 Gero: mapearas la voz o el piano?
2014-10-20 00:58 Natsu: la voz como siempre hahaha
2014-10-20 00:58 Gero: vale pues es mas facil
2014-10-20 00:58 Gero: jajaja
2014-10-20 00:59 Natsu: jajajaja e.e
2014-10-20 01:01 Gero: pero ya sabes gorda, yo no soy pro T.T
2014-10-20 01:02 Natsu: is ok mai nigga
2014-10-20 01:29 Gero: yo soy bueno en los timings que van decendiendo
2014-10-20 01:29 Gero: pero estos son complicados orz
2014-10-20 01:29 Natsu: XD
2014-10-20 01:44 Gero: dios, no se que estoy haciendo xD
2014-10-20 01:44 Natsu: ahhhahaha a ver
2014-10-20 01:44 Gero: deja termino
2014-10-20 01:44 Gero: pera jajajaja
2014-10-20 01:59 Gero: Termine
2014-10-20 01:59 Natsu: a ver xDF
2014-10-20 02:00 Gero: vale, espera te paso el codigo por pm
2014-10-20 02:00 Gero: forum pm
2014-10-20 02:00 Natsu: Okay o.o
2014-10-20 02:01 Gero: me da flojera subir el codigo a puush xD
2014-10-20 02:02 Gero: borra todas tus lineas rojas por cierto
2014-10-20 02:04 Gero: checa el foro gorda
2014-10-20 02:09 Natsu: todaS?
2014-10-20 02:09 Gero: todas
2014-10-20 02:09 Gero: antes de pegarlo
2014-10-20 02:11 Gero: 00:13:977 - esta linea muevela a 00:14:054 - se me paso xD
2014-10-20 02:12 Natsu: ahahha
2014-10-20 02:13 Natsu: podes hacer videos vos?
2014-10-20 02:14 Gero: si
2014-10-20 02:16 Gero: que video quieres? haz collab e invitame, me gusto la canción ;w;
2014-10-20 02:16 Natsu: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=thRMxrZvAtc
2014-10-20 02:17 ese *-*
2014-10-20 02:17 Gero: Vale
2014-10-20 02:21 Gero: y bien, que te parecio el timing?
2014-10-20 02:22 Natsu: esta decente
2014-10-20 02:23 Gero: luego le dices a pishifat o a alguien mas pro que lo revise y eso
2014-10-20 02:24 Natsu: a captin1 me jodedere
2014-10-20 02:26 Gero: jajaja
2014-10-20 02:27 Natsu: te atrapo la sekai
2014-10-20 02:27 Gero: quiere que le haga un timing
2014-10-20 02:28 Gero: yo apesto pero bueno xD
2014-10-20 02:28 Gero: si quieren un wrong timing, estoy aceptando peticiones (?)
2014-10-20 02:30 Natsu: AHHAHAHHA
2014-10-20 02:31 Gero: yo quiero hacer una diff ahi (?) ;w;
2014-10-20 02:31 Natsu: es app baka
2014-10-20 02:31 Gero: por eso (?)
2014-10-20 02:32 Natsu: D:
2014-10-20 02:33 Gero: ya ya u.u
2014-10-20 02:41 Gero: http://puu.sh/cjbCa/6e6ddc9a58.rar
2014-10-20 02:41 Gero: Video offset: 0
2014-10-20 02:45 Natsu: http://i.ytimg.com/vi/djpcC-A1ybM/maxresdefault.jpg
2014-10-20 02:45 bg *-*
2014-10-20 02:45 Gero: de nada (?)
2014-10-20 02:47 Natsu: gracias nigga
2014-10-20 04:08 Natsu: pedire check a captin de nuevo ?)
2014-10-22 03:41 Natsu: es muy pesado y le tengo q poner de nmbre marathon al mapa ahahha
2014-10-22 03:41 Gero: como paso esto
2014-10-22 03:41 Natsu: ademas la cagamos esta en español hahahahaa
2014-10-22 03:41 Gero: desprecias mis videos T.T
2014-10-22 03:41 Gero: jodete
2014-10-22 03:42 Natsu: maje es q pesa bastante y no me deja subirlo T-T
2014-10-22 03:42 Gero: lo redusco o que?
2014-10-22 03:42 Gero: dame el link
2014-10-22 03:44 Natsu: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm19582055
2014-10-22 03:44 Natsu: Si ese es el original q no tiene sub español ahahhaa
2014-10-22 03:44 Natsu: q mi mapa pese menos de 24 mb gordaT-T
2014-10-22 03:44 Natsu: no le quiero cambiar mi nombre
2014-10-22 03:45 Natsu: espera ese no tiene en ingles Tt.
2014-10-22 03:45 Natsu: este http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm19582055
2014-10-22 03:45 Natsu: es el mismo a vale madre xD deja busco mas
2014-10-22 03:46 Gero: busca y pasamelo
2014-10-22 03:46 Gero: de cuanto peso quieres el video?
2014-10-22 03:50 Natsu: ese q te pase hace vale madre
2014-10-22 03:50 Natsu: es el unico T-T
2014-10-22 03:50 Gero: busca busca
2014-10-22 03:50 Gero: xd
2014-10-22 03:50 Natsu: del peso q no supere 24 megas mi mapa
2014-10-22 03:50 Natsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/525022 LeftyMonsterP - Sayonara no Kawari ni [Goodbye]]
2014-10-22 03:52 Gero: que link entonces?
2014-10-22 03:53 Natsu: ptm el de español usaron uana fuente buena... nah ese de ingles q te pase el de nico nico
2014-10-22 23:34 Natsu: como ves este
2014-10-22 23:34 Natsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/525022 LeftyMonsterP - Sayonara no Kawari ni [Goodbye]]
2014-10-22 23:39 Gero: con los ojos (?)
2014-10-22 23:39 Gero: deja rebajo
2014-10-22 23:39 Natsu: O.O
2014-10-22 23:40 Natsu: y me das el video HDP T-T, da sentimiento mapear con el video y mapeas mejor <3
2014-10-22 23:41 Gero: dame otra vez el link
2014-10-22 23:41 Gero: lo perdi xD
2014-10-22 23:42 Natsu: GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
2014-10-22 23:42 Natsu: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm19582055
2014-10-22 23:44 Gero: Vale, voy a descargarlo
2014-10-22 23:44 Gero: y a codificarlo
2014-10-22 23:45 Gero: de que tamaño lo querias?
2014-10-22 23:45 Natsu: q ni oese mas de 24 megas con mi video
2014-10-22 23:45 Natsu: el mapa entero o.o
2014-10-22 23:45 Gero: cuanto pesa el mapa?
2014-10-22 23:45 Gero: sin video
2014-10-22 23:46 Natsu: 8,53 mb
2014-10-22 23:47 Gero: perfecto unos 10 mb por el video
2014-10-22 23:47 Gero: :3
2014-10-22 23:48 Natsu: o 12
2014-10-22 23:49 Gero: VALE ENTONCES
2014-10-22 23:49 Gero: caps orz
2014-10-22 23:50 Natsu: TE VOY A PEGAR
2014-10-22 23:50 Gero: ACTION slaps Natsu*
2014-10-23 00:12 Gero: sabes descargar los videos de ahi?
2014-10-23 00:12 Gero: no puedo xD
2014-10-23 00:25 Natsu: OMG
2014-10-23 00:25 Natsu: no maje no puedo ahahha
2014-10-23 00:25 Gero: vale ya veo como me las arreglo
2014-10-23 00:34 Gero: no puedo gorda.. no tienes otro video?
2014-10-23 00:37 Natsu: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZDt5qjSQS5g
2014-10-23 00:37 Natsu: ahi
2014-10-23 00:44 Gero: que fea calidad
2014-10-23 00:44 Gero: D:
2014-10-23 00:44 Gero: seguro que ese?
2014-10-23 00:46 Natsu: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7aY6bNks2z8
2014-10-23 00:47 Gero: es perfecto
2014-10-23 00:47 Gero: 12 mb entonces?
2014-10-23 00:48 Natsu: si :D
2014-10-23 02:08 Gero: ya casi lo termino
2014-10-23 02:08 Gero: e.,e
2014-10-23 02:08 Natsu: e.e
2014-10-23 02:14 Gero: lo maximo que puedo reducirlo son 15 mb
2014-10-23 02:14 Gero: ...
2014-10-23 02:18 Gero: me avisas si lo vas a querer de ese tamaño
2014-10-23 02:18 Natsu: pasamelo quiero ver si lo puedo subir
2014-10-23 02:18 Gero: vale, pera
2014-10-23 02:34 Gero: http://puu.sh/cn7n4/1604abe258.rar
2014-10-23 02:46 Natsu: proba si podes descargarlo
2014-10-23 02:46 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/224930#
2014-10-23 02:47 Gero: ando en ello
2014-10-23 02:47 Gero: si me deja
2014-10-23 02:47 Gero: por?
2014-10-23 02:49 Natsu: el video y todo?
2014-10-23 02:49 Natsu: funciona?
2014-10-23 02:49 Gero: si, por?
2014-10-23 02:49 Gero: now where is my kudosu?
2014-10-23 02:49 Natsu: ni has visto hdp
2014-10-23 02:49 Gero: pesa 23 mb como no va a funcionar xD
2014-10-23 02:51 Natsu: y mi estrella por ese freekudo!!!!
2014-10-23 02:55 Gero: done
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply