Nakae Mitsuki - On my Sheep -TV size- · forum

DahplA

Joined March 2014

DahplA 2015-03-27T12:10:23+00:00

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

Ctrl+Shift+A (Don't mind the bg, I accidently deleted yours)
SPOILER

Mira's Insane

00:09:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could be mapped better.
00:10:508 (1) - I'd move the spinner 1/2 beats back and put a circle in replacement.
00:16:440 (3,4,5) - Triple doesn't fit.
00:47:626 (1,2,3,4) - You were previously mapping to the lyrics, then changed. I'd consider changing this.
01:11:694 (1,1) - These sliders kinda ruin the flow.

Insane

01:00:677 (1) - Should the hitfinish be on the end of this.
00:06:270 Maybe add a circle here?

Hard

00:33:897 (1,2,3) - This part doesn't really sound right. I'd recommend mapping to the lyrics.
00:35:931 (6,1,2) - ^

AIR's Normal

00:09:660 (1) - This slider (despite it's odd shape) doesn't seem to fit the song.
01:17:118 (1,4) - These don't really fit the song either.

Damn I still need to watch this animu...

IamKwaN

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-05-09T05:53:01+00:00

http://puu.sh/hGJGw/09ac2c31ef.rar

快給老娘revive了 \3/

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

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Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2015-05-13T11:03:08+00:00

好

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2015-05-19T14:36:56+00:00

there are mods wat i never noticed

will get onto it ASAP

Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2015-05-19T14:38:10+00:00

aha I'm lazy mapper mira-san

DDDDDDDDD

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2015-05-24T00:46:58+00:00

Aleycks wrote:
Hi ! from my modding queue. This is my first mod, hope it'll be helpful.

[Mira's Insane]

00:30:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Very awkward, I wasn't able to read this. Consider unstacking, or changing the whole pattern ?
01:00:169 (8,9,10,11,12) - Stream shape is a bit weird, nothing bad but just visually.
Very good map too except for that awkward pattern !

Very nice set overall, hope my mod was helpful, and good luck !

Fixed all.

liangv587 wrote:
[Mira's Insane]
GOOD JOB
how about add some od and hp
00:38:982 (1,2,3,4,5) - jumps should be 2-3 and 4-5, so 2 is on 1's tail and thishttp://puu.sh/gORCL.jpg
01:00:592 - add a circle here and thishttp://puu.sh/gORIW.jpg
01:12:880 - add a circle here and spinner begains at 01:11:779 -
01:12:880 - add a circle here and spinner begains at 01:12:965 -

Fixed all.

DahplA wrote:
Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

Mira's Insane
00:09:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could be mapped better.
00:10:508 (1) - I'd move the spinner 1/2 beats back and put a circle in replacement.
00:16:440 (3,4,5) - Triple doesn't fit.
00:47:626 (1,2,3,4) - You were previously mapping to the lyrics, then changed. I'd consider changing this. | wat.
01:11:694 (1,1) - These sliders kinda ruin the flow.
Damn I still need to watch this animu...

Changed all except the one I commented on. I was following the beats there hehe.
I did some big changes on some parts.
Here's the code. Thanks everyone!

Updated

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: daito_op.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:On my Sheep -TV size-
TitleUnicode:On my Sheep -TV size-
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:中恵光城
Creator:examination
Version:Mira's Insane
Source:大図書館の羊飼い
Tags:Daitoshokan no Hitsujikai opening August Mira-san
BeatmapID:518441
BeatmapSetID:220956

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sep_11060_04.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lavender

886 posts

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2015-06-08T21:23:42+00:00

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z1085684963

327 posts

Joined August 2012

z1085684963 2016-06-17T12:19:44+00:00

2016-06-17 20:51 z1085684963: hi
2016-06-17 20:52 examination: 在
2016-06-17 20:52 z1085684963: zai 
2016-06-17 20:52 z1085684963: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/517044 Nakae Mitsuki - On my Sheep -TV size- [Insane]]
2016-06-17 20:52 examination: hao
2016-06-17 20:53 z1085684963: 问一下啊
2016-06-17 20:53 z1085684963: 是不是你原来想搞个跳图
2016-06-17 20:53 examination: 没
2016-06-17 20:53 z1085684963: 。
2016-06-17 20:53 examination: 顺着摆就摆成这样的
2016-06-17 20:53 z1085684963: 那没事了
2016-06-17 20:53 examination: 你看好多地方都是按着ds
2016-06-17 20:53 z1085684963: 跳有点崩
2016-06-17 20:53 z1085684963: 恩
2016-06-17 20:53 examination: hao
2016-06-17 20:53 examination: 告诉我怎么改跳
2016-06-17 20:54 z1085684963: 不用
2016-06-17 20:54 z1085684963: 00:09:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
2016-06-17 20:54 z1085684963: 这边的跳没啥好改的
2016-06-17 20:54 z1085684963: 因为后面接转盘路
2016-06-17 20:54 z1085684963: 了
2016-06-17 20:54 examination: 这是一段几何zzz
2016-06-17 20:54 examination: 不过要改也可以改
2016-06-17 20:55 z1085684963: 没
2016-06-17 20:55 z1085684963: 打起来还是没问题的
2016-06-17 20:55 z1085684963: 00:06:270
2016-06-17 20:55 z1085684963: 这里能不能加个节奏
2016-06-17 20:55 examination: hao
2016-06-17 20:55 examination: 我觉得有道理 加一个note
2016-06-17 20:55 z1085684963: 阔以
2016-06-17 20:55 z1085684963: 00:14:745 (1,2,3,4) - 
2016-06-17 20:56 z1085684963: 2啊4啊都叠到1的尾巴上
2016-06-17 20:56 z1085684963: 你看可好
2016-06-17 20:56 z1085684963: 后面好像也要小改一下
2016-06-17 20:57 examination: 我看看啊
2016-06-17 20:57 z1085684963: 恩
2016-06-17 20:57 examination: 口以 改了
2016-06-17 20:58 z1085684963: 00:32:880 (5) - 这边可以不要6 5原地碟个连打或者短滑条
2016-06-17 20:58 z1085684963: 比较和节奏也能改善下flow
2016-06-17 20:59 examination: 好 改了个1/4的reverse
2016-06-17 20:59 z1085684963: 可
2016-06-17 20:59 z1085684963: 00:34:914 (1) - 
2016-06-17 21:00 z1085684963: 怎么说呢，我比较讨厌这样的只碰到一点点的
2016-06-17 21:00 examination: 唔
2016-06-17 21:00 z1085684963: 挪开或者靠近跟多的话比较顺眼
2016-06-17 21:00 z1085684963: 我截个图
2016-06-17 21:01 examination: 我把8跟1往右挪吧
2016-06-17 21:01 z1085684963: 恩
2016-06-17 21:01 z1085684963: 你也可以参考下我发群的那个
2016-06-17 21:02 z1085684963: 当然比较玄学
2016-06-17 21:02 z1085684963: 233
2016-06-17 21:02 examination: 哦 好像也可以
2016-06-17 21:02 examination: 让我试试
2016-06-17 21:02 z1085684963: 噫
2016-06-17 21:03 examination: 我就普通往右移好了 不大改了
2016-06-17 21:03 z1085684963: 其实这图基本上就是些美观性问题
2016-06-17 21:03 z1085684963: 恩
2016-06-17 21:03 z1085684963: 00:39:660 (4) - 
2016-06-17 21:04 z1085684963: 这个建议不g好
2016-06-17 21:05 z1085684963: 00:48:643 (2) - 这里并没有音。。。
2016-06-17 21:05 examination: 有道理
2016-06-17 21:05 examination: 后面那个nc再g一下
2016-06-17 21:05 z1085684963: 阔以
2016-06-17 21:07 z1085684963: 00:53:897 (1,2,3) - 
2016-06-17 21:07 z1085684963: 这样有点蠢
2016-06-17 21:07 z1085684963: 看群
2016-06-17 21:08 examination: hao
2016-06-17 21:08 z1085684963: 这样可能会好点
2016-06-17 21:09 z1085684963: 00:56:101 (5) - 这个也是
2016-06-17 21:09 z1085684963: 可以的话5叠一下
2016-06-17 21:09 z1085684963: 3的尾巴
2016-06-17 21:09 examination: 嗯 这一段我都改一下
2016-06-17 21:10 z1085684963: 01:05:762 (2,3) - 
2016-06-17 21:10 z1085684963: g下比较好
2016-06-17 21:10 z1085684963: 后面的两个滑条再互换一下
2016-06-17 21:12 examination: 好
2016-06-17 21:12 z1085684963: 后面有点鬼
2016-06-17 21:12 z1085684963: 不过没啥好讲的
2016-06-17 21:12 z1085684963: 就这样~
2016-06-17 21:12 examination: 01:06:270 (1,2) - 这两个g一下？
2016-06-17 21:13 z1085684963: 不
2016-06-17 21:13 z1085684963: 互换
2016-06-17 21:13 z1085684963: 不g
2016-06-17 21:13 z1085684963: flow的问题。。
2016-06-17 21:14 examination: 嗯 好
2016-06-17 21:14 examination: 后面全是几何完加了各种g的结果
2016-06-17 21:15 z1085684963: 恩
2016-06-17 21:15 z1085684963: 阔以
2016-06-17 21:15 z1085684963: 我发了
2016-06-17 21:15 examination: hao

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-06-17T12:28:23+00:00

[General]
有种音质感人的感觉

[Mira's Insane]
00:04:575 (5) - Turn this to one slider+ one note
00:09:152 (10,1) - These are a bit closed
00:32:372 - Please do not igonre the rhythm here
01:11:694 (1,1) - I don't recommend you do this. Map with notes and sliders would be better

[Insane]
00:07:965 (9,1) - 这间距...怎么说呢既可以说是太近也可以说是太远总之就是不近不远作为1/1的间隔不是很好
00:09:152 (6,1) - ^
00:10:338 (6,7) - 太大了
00:44:406 (1) - 白线好想，就这样用滑条带过去？
00:46:101 (9,1) - 还是有点远（近），不过比前面的缓解一些

[Hard]
00:39:152 - 一个道理
01:10:169 (1,2,3) - 这一坨真不怎么好节奏和排列方面都是
kiai结束那段间距就这么缩了，感觉不是很好

[ARI's Normal]
00:18:643 (4,5) - 全图很少这么叠而且和下面的那条也没照应，所以我建议都改一下
01:03:050 (6,1) -
00:48:643 (1,1) - 间隔太短，这个不容许的
00:55:423 (1,3) - 很浪虽然可以这样

[kWAn'S eASY]
我觉得不用看

好吧随便看了一眼应该没啥

GL

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2016-06-20T09:48:26+00:00

Yay!

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49321
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:On my Sheep -TV size-
TitleUnicode:On my Sheep -TV size-
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:中恵光城
Creator:examination
Version:Mira's Insane
Source:大図書館の羊飼い
Tags:Daitoshokan no Hitsujikai opening AIR Mira-san
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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applied the entirety of yf_bmp's mod
did some big changes (again).

ncuh

185 posts

Joined July 2013

ncuh 2016-06-20T12:05:16+00:00

NM request from my queue

Mira's Insane

00:03:559 (2,4) - I love ideal blankets. That's not ideal))
00:16:609 (5) - better to do this slider shorter http://i.imgur.com/ebHromK.png
00:22:033 (8) - same^
00:25:253 (10,11) - not sure about such a strong distance changes
00:29:830 (6,8,9) - fix blanket
00:30:847 (1) - I guess you can space that note much more to up-right, it's will be ok
00:32:202 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I was rly confuced, when played it. It's will rly much better to do smth like this http://i.imgur.com/sGLHKgq.jpg (put 1 more note 00:32:372 - and move 00:32:711 (6) - away)
00:33:389 - empty? Why? ki-mi ga? mi forever ignored(
00:40:338 (5,6) - blanket is not perfect

00:43:050 (7) - it's should be HS'ed aswell with Whistle
00:48:558 (1) - hmm I think it's should be started from white
00:51:524 (7,9) - blanket is not perfect
01:10:508 (7,8,9,10) - will be nice to change spacing of these notes
01:24:236 (5,6) - blanket)

Insane

00:08:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strange flow
00:55:253 (1,2,3) - not sure why is triple there
00:59:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - triples should be there http://i.imgur.com/gjqfFTB.png

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2016-06-20T14:30:18+00:00

Hi lol.

Did all except http://i.imgur.com/sGLHKgq.jpg because I made it a different pattern.
This map is old so it's not kinda well-made lol.

Also, exam did not apply the changes I just made so some of the mods you made were changed into something else already lol.

newcode

osu file format v14

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Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

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Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2016-06-30T03:51:43+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
[General]
有种音质感人的感觉

[Insane]
00:46:101 (9,1) - 还是有点远（近），不过比前面的缓解一些这个就不改了

GL

ncuh wrote:
NM request from my queue

Insane
00:08:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strange flow
00:55:253 (1,2,3) - not sure why is triple there
00:59:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - triples should be there http://i.imgur.com/gjqfFTB.png

no reply = fixed! thx all

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2016-08-30T16:14:16+00:00

https://www.dropbox.com/s/v45xwrcbnxkgk ... e-.7z?dl=0

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-09-06T08:53:20+00:00

不飞我也想开了，快飞

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

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Topic Starter

Yumeno Himiko 2017-02-24T04:09:54+00:00

挖坟

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2017-02-26T08:57:00+00:00

post前一看,撒谎都飞了,,,,

M4M -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/513294

[kwan's Easy]

神ez,摸不动

[AIR's Normal]

00:18:643 (4,5) - 我觉得还是不要这样叠

00:55:423 (1,3) - ^

01:03:050 (6,1) - ^ 我不太清楚现在的style了

00:32:372 (3) - 有点丑

01:16:440 (6) - 这边后面好长,打着很累

转盘好像都挨得太近

[Hard]

00:07:118 (2) - 对称放下面比较舒服

00:16:440 (1,2) - 这俩调换节奏

01:02:711 (3,4) - ^

00:21:694 (1) - 换俩圈?

00:58:135 (4) - NC似乎有2长白和1长白的建议统一

[Insane]

00:07:118 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这几个跳感觉挺乱的

00:13:897 (3,4) - 这俩调换节奏

00:25:423 (7,1) - 准确的说1的音比较重7比较轻,跳1不跳7

00:28:135 (5,1) - ^

00:31:863 (1,4) - 叠好

[Mira's Insane]

00:05:084 (7) - straight-line not so well, How about blanket 00:04:575 (5) , like ↓

SPOILER

01:22:541 (1) - how about ctrl+g

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2017-02-28T06:25:43+00:00

thanks! update

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Title:On my Sheep -TV size-
TitleUnicode:On my Sheep -TV size-
Artist:Nakae Mitsuki
ArtistUnicode:中恵光城
Creator:Yumeno Himiko
Version:AIR's Normal
Source:大図書館の羊飼い
Tags:Daitoshokan no Hitsujikai opening August AIR Mira-san IamKwaN
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Arf

901 posts

Joined December 2013

Arf 2017-02-28T14:19:01+00:00

Hello, from your M4M queue! Here's my map once again: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/522233

KwaN's Easy
00:25:592 (1,2) - Consider replacing "1" with a 1/1 repeat slider and the sliderend of "2" with a circle. Sounds better rhythmically in my opinion.
00:33:897 (1) - The current rhythm sounds very strange to me, sort of like it's trying to follow multiple sounds and ends up following nothing. Why not try something like this, sounds a lot better in my opinion and the gaps between notes are still 1/1!
00:36:609 (1) - Hmm I know rhythmically the song is evil here for Easy diff but perhaps try something like this instead?
01:00:169 (4) - Feels slightly strange to have strongest beat on the end of the repeat slider, it would feel better if it were clickable in my opinion, especially as its the start of a new verse

Clean, not much to poke at in Easies usually

AIR's Normal
00:01:694 (2) - Skipping the sound at 00:02:202 - is not good in my opinion, perhaps make this pattern a little different since you can freely use 1/2 in normals.
Similarly at places like 00:03:558 (1) - and especially 00:05:084 (1) - you miss out some piano beats, it's a little strange to have that big slider go through multiple sounds before ending on a separate one.
00:10:508 (1) - Consider a note on the star of this spinner and moving the start of the spinner to the right maybe 1/4 or 1/2 beat. It's a very heavy sound sop being clickable is good in my opinion.
00:17:965 (2,4) - If you turn on stacking in the editor from "View" menu you will see that in gameplay this blanket is off because of the stack from 3. Recommend fixing this
00:29:491 (4) - I get the other little vocal skips but this one being a slightly held vocal I think a slider here could work instead of a note
00:32:372 (3) - Oh boy..... are you sure about this shape? It isn't really suited to the sound at all imo since there's no weird noise here and the slider track is also a bit smudged together for a normal. Recommend a more orthodox slider here
00:38:304 (2,3) - This rhythm is a bit weird to play, consider mapping the note between these so the beat isn't left out.You could use a 1/2 slider instead as well. like 00:41:524 (4) -
00:55:084 (6,1,2) - This visual spacing can be quite hard to read for players of normals, recommend at least getting this tested by some 150k or something to see how they react
01:01:186 (2) - Consider Ctrl+J this for a better movement towards 3
01:02:541 (5) - Consider circle here and 1/2 slider starting where the current slider ends, sounds better rhythmically in my opinon
01:05:253 (5) - Conversely, I feel that this note isn't really needed here, as there's no vocal or instrumental here and a gap between two sounds that are mapped with finish hitsounds is good in my opinion
01:11:694 (1) - Consider mapping the 1/2 before this
01:15:762 (5,6) - Consider blanketing these? Already 4 looks too curved compared to 3 in my opinion, so it could look better if blanketed perhaps
01:25:084 (1) - Consider a note and then the spinner starts on the next 1/4 or 1/2

Good diff, excellent consistency on when to place circles and when not to.

Hard
00:02:033 (3) - In a hard i think simplifying the three beats here into one slider is not good, perhaps rhythmically it is better to follow all the sounds here
00:02:711 (4) - Here as well
00:05:762 (4,1) - Hmm are you sure about this overlap, it is rather unsightly in my opinion
00:15:931 (4,2) - Similar concerns at places like this, it makes the map look a bit untidy and structurally unsound in my opinion. Would be better to perhaps change the pattern so it doesn't overlap under any circumstances.
00:17:965 (2,3) - Consider changing these to be like http://arf.s-ul.eu/bUuwTJEb, despite the red to white slider it sounds better rhythmically imo, sort of like at places like 00:23:728 (3,4) -
00:24:067 (4,1) - Similarly here i think it is better to do like http://arf.s-ul.eu/QWpIhdfA
00:26:779 (1,2) - This could look better with a better blanket in my opinion, more like http://arf.s-ul.eu/pmMXEUCg
00:32:202 (1) - Consider stacking "1" on the previous sliderend? You've stacked most of the notes with 1/1 gaps so it seems fitting imo
00:33:897 (1,2,3) - I am not sure what this follows to be honest, in a Hard this is very much too simplified of a rhythm, try something more like http://arf.s-ul.eu/gDquDzGa. Or you can use repeat sliders or only circles but either way the three beats should be represented as three beats in my opinion
00:35:931 (7,1) - Hmm here as well I think the rhythm is slightly questionable. Again 7 has three beats within it but it's mapped as a two beat slider, and 1 should be on the red tick after where it currently starts. Sure it's currently on a big white tick but there is no sound there, the stronger sound is after it so in a Hard difficulty that's where the slider should start. What's odd is that the notes after it are snapped to the different sounds pretty correctly, so both in editor and in gameplay this little section sounds off
00:41:694 (2,1) - Bit odd that the spacing decreases between these despite the slider speeding up
00:58:982 (6) - I reckon this works better as two circles since both the start and end beat are strong and it's in the kiai
01:00:338 (1) - Another slider that I feel undermaps the three beat rhythm, and especially because it's in the kiai I feel it should be, if not three circles, something that represents the rhythm slightly better
01:00:847 (2) - Also I feel that this note shouldn't really be here, especially as the finish hitsound has appeared before it already
01:04:745 (4,1) - Up to you because the current pattern kind of fits, but 4 being a held vocal I would have expected a held note like a slider there instead of a circle
01:09:491 (4,1) - -I get what you're trying to do here. I think if you really want to do this, making it go actually through the previous 4 slider's track (http://arf.s-ul.eu/mhOTevgm) might be a good idea, but then you run the risk of it being too hard to read for players of Hards. Up to you.
01:14:406 (1,2) - Consider making these blanket each other, like http://arf.s-ul.eu/nzzmiHw7
01:20:677 (3,4) - Again about the undermapping. I know you used it a lot in the map and that makes me think maybe it's your style or something, but in a Hard difficulty choosing to not map sounds is often very noticeable and very jarring so it is my recommendation that you do map these as groups of three beats, there many ways to map them that showcase all three beats here. Please consider it. See how you did it at 01:22:541 (1,2) - and even at 01:23:389 (3,4) - 01:24:067 (5,6) -

Overall the Hard felt slightly untidy in terms of both aesthetics and rhythm. I've pointed out most of the things I noticed in the mod but it is often a good idea to pay attention while mapping to avoid overlapping notes, rhythm which puts the emphasis on the wrong notes, and general tidiness in terms of mapping/aesthetic structure. It's not a bad diff and has more potential than many other Hards I've seen but it needs a bit more polish before it's fully ready in my opinion.

Insane
00:01:186 (1,2,3,4) - Okay while playing this pattern looked a little strange to me and I didn't understand it but in the editor it seems that since 4 is the strongest note you tried to emphasize it with a jump. I think if that was your intention you could space 4 a little more because at the moment it looks like you fudged up some sort of DS instead of looking like a proper jump haha
00:04:406 (1,2,3,4) - This should REALLY be a perfect square in my opinion, right now it just looks very strange. 00:05:084 (1) - could be located somewhere else if you really want to make it a jump
00:06:270 (3) - I think moving this note so that it is between slider "2" and the next "1" is a good idea that way slider 2 points directly at it instead of the slightly confusing movement at present. Or if you don't want to do that, consider fixing the blanket between 3 and 00:06:609 (3) - , it's a little off
00:09:152 (6) - Strange to me that there are many large jumps before this but this note which has the strongest sound and also a finish hitsound is not part of a jump? Better to make it a jump for emphasis in my opinion, like 00:10:338 (6,7) -
00:20:677 (2,3,1) - large spacing between 2 and 3 but then sudden spacing drop for 1? Doesn't make much sense imo since 1 has some emphasis to it as well.
00:24:914 (4,5) - In my opinion 4 is the beat with more emphasis so the jump should be 3 to 4 not 4 to 5
00:28:304 (1) - Again i feel that if you want to put jumps in places like 00:27:796 (3,4) - where there isn't really much reason to (except looks good or plays fun) then I feel you must also use higher spacing in places which deserve it like here. The emphasis here is much greater than from 3 to 4 in my opinion, and because of that deserves a higher spacing to match.
00:34:914 (1) - Hmm in the middle of 00:33:558 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:592 (3,4,5,1) - this held slider is a little weird. IMO the gvocal isn't held enough to justify the change in rhythm but if you really want some variation here that's okay too
00:36:948 (4) - I don't feel this fits. I think it takes away from the emphasis you have been putting in this section and that it would work better as a simple 1/2 slider followed by two notes like 00:36:270 (1,2,3) - Similar concerns at 00:40:338 (1) -
00:38:982 (1,2) - Similarly i think the order of these should be slider->circle not circle->slider. It fits better rhythmically in my opinion
(minor) 00:52:202 (4,1) - stack is very slightly off
00:53:897 (1,3) - i don't think this looks very nice because of how short of a slider 3 is. Consider moving 2 down a bit more and stacking 3 on the sliderhead of 1 to avoid the overlap looking ugly?
00:57:626 (4,1) - Nice.
01:02:372 (2) - Better rhythm sound as two circles in my opinion
01:17:118 (5) - space this more than the others, like a jump, for emphasis?

Good diff! Impressed me more than Hard, well done. Need a very slight bit of polish and I think it's pretty good to go. Some slight aesthetic faux pas here and there but that's an experience thing and also as an old map person I like linear flow so I am not too bothered about that. Good mix of flows in this diff, readable, fun to play while not being horrendously overspaced. Very acceptable.

Mira's Insane
00:10:508 (7) - consider stacking this with 3
00:14:236 (5) - Rhythmically I believe this sounds better as two circles. You don't have to space them much since it's still the calm part but in my opinion it sounds better than a single red tick to white tick slider
00:46:101 (2) - Hmm, perhaps this is spaced a little further than necessary? Up to you, but just my feelings
01:22:541 (1) - Hmm I'm not sure if skipping the beats in the slider is a good idea. I know there's a spam of circles here but even hen perhaps some lesser spaced circles could have the similar effect of a break from the jumps? Up to you, though since you mapped them at 01:19:830 (1,2,3) - I think it is better to map them

Very clean! Well polished, follows through with its ideas in such ways that there is not really any way to poke holes in the difficulty without ruining your frankly stellar work. Shoving ideas on people is bad after all haha. Excellent job.

Well that's about all I could find, really. Hope I wasn't too heavy handed with my comments and I hoe you don't feel that I am forcing you to map a certain way or anything like that. Remember that above all your map is your map and you're the one who should make final decisions about it. It's a good set and it has good potential to be ranked (having a QAT GD helps eh). I hope you find success, and good luck!

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2017-03-04T08:49:36+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/546149

[General]
Hard和Insane的preview time和其他难度不一样

[KwaN's Easy]
00:22:711 - 可以和3一样加一条绿线处理一下音效
01:04:575 - 这里也是加一个clap音不影响后面finish的效果

[AIR's Normal]
00:17:965 (2,4,5) - 实际玩的时候这组是歪的开stack看一下
00:27:287 (5,6,7,8) - 后面改成reverse slider好点吧连着两个1/2有点不好打
00:55:423 (1,3) - 这个叠其实读起来有时候会有问题
01:00:508 (6) - 换个1/2滑条吧忽然换轨不太好

[Hard]
00:00:677 (1) - 应该是个1/4折返
00:13:050 (3,3) - 这俩贴边了建议把123间距都拉大
00:30:508 (1,2,3,4) - 那个 drum音效真的不要这么用听着很傻比
00:33:219 (5,1,2,3,4) - 123跟的是个啥没听出来感觉下的有点乱
01:00:677 - finish不在这啊

[Insane]
drum音效同hard
00:08:643 (3,4,5,6) - 这个flow和前后两组跳不太搭我个人可能倾向于把6放在5的左下
00:17:118 (4) - ctrl+g和00:14:067 (4,5) - 弄个一样的梗 flow也依然没问题
00:54:914 (4,5,1,2,3) - 其实这样画个大弧线打起来不是很舒服可以试试把5放到下边做成一个折线（顺便三连摆的有点丑
01:00:338 (6,7,8) - 考虑到转向的话这个三连应该间距缩小而不是变大、

[Mira's Insane]
00:26:101 (3,4) - flow feels a bit awkward. try move 4 rightward?

Last edited by Fushimi Rio 2017-03-05T14:22:05+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

a32

630 posts

Joined February 2010

a32 2017-03-04T09:06:42+00:00

M4M:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/547538
[General]

不知道怎么回事= =
不清楚audio lead-in不一样可不可以

[*KwaN's Easy*]
00:29:321 (3,4) – 我觉得这里跟前面一样下clap就好

[*AIR's Normal*]
00:01:694 (2) – 结尾柑橘需要一个finish
00:30:847 (1) – 这个音有点突兀感觉可以去掉whistle或者在00:31:524 00:31:863 00:32:202 上加normal-whistle的音
00:38:813 - 这个地方空的不太舒服建议和后面那个note并成一个slider
01:22:202 (7,1) -这样叠不太好看感觉= =

[*Hard*]
00:00:677 (1) – 我觉得像I一样变成折返3连更切合音乐..反正也没什么难度
00:30:847 (2) – soft-finish感觉更好听这个drum音在这怪怪的
00:31:524 (4) – 同上
00:41:355 (1,2,1) – 间距放成一样的好看点
00:45:762 (5) - 下面这段有的drum我觉得也该改成soft-finish(和上面一样

[*Insane*]
00:07:965 (9) - 感觉往下放放到6的位置附近更好点
00:30:847 (6) - 这段音效上的建议同Hard
00:45:762 (8) - 同上
00:45:931 (9) - 感觉这个note略多余可删
00:59:321 (5,1) - 感觉并成一个滑条更好?
01:00:592 (9) - +个note?

[*Mira's Insane*]
00:05:084 (7) - This looks better imo

00:31:863 (3) - drum-whistle(same as 00:31:524 (2) - ) sounds better here
01:04:745 (4) - use finish on the head since it fits better
01:05:762 (7,8) - make the blanket better

祝早日rank!~

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-03-04T13:40:08+00:00

Arf

00:25:592 (1,2) - Consider replacing "1" with a 1/1 repeat slider and the sliderend of "2" with a circle. Sounds better rhythmically in my opinion. hmm, tried it and seems mine is more comfortable imo
00:33:897 (1) - The current rhythm sounds very strange to me, sort of like it's trying to follow multiple sounds and ends up following nothing. Why not try something like this, sounds a lot better in my opinion and the gaps between notes are still 1/1! I'm basically following drums!
00:36:609 (1) - Hmm I know rhythmically the song is evil here for Easy diff but perhaps try something like this instead? The white tick on 00:37:118 - seems to be the most obvious beat to me, so missing it doesn't sound well.
01:00:169 (4) - Feels slightly strange to have strongest beat on the end of the repeat slider, it would feel better if it were clickable in my opinion, especially as its the start of a new verse The reversed slider is for the vocal. If I cut it, it feels strange lol

Clean, not much to poke at in Easies usually

@imoutosan: 你說對，都漏了
@a32: 你說的對，下錯了
Thanks for mods!

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Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2017-03-04T15:38:25+00:00

remapped Hard diff

updated KwaN's diff

will check the mods later

Mira-san

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Mira-san 2017-03-06T14:06:34+00:00

Applied all mods (and some got overwritten by some structural and rhythm changes)

Thanks! http://puu.sh/uwApm/e526d1e3e6.zip

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2017-03-10T14:44:59+00:00

Checking the hard difficulty as requested

[Hard]

Check over your blankets - most of them aren't properly done. Don't want to list down a huge amounts of them here.
Your jumps on this difficulty are placed at weird places in the kiai. Not to mention the earlier parts of the difficulty lacks jumps in general. To give an example, 01:07:457 (4,4) - these 2 - they aren't even stronger than those downbeats, and they are the same as the 2nd snare in every measure, yet making them have a small jump doesn't really make sense as you didn't do it for any others.
00:22:711 (5,6,1) - This is a good place to add a jump as this is the part transition.
00:30:169 (3,1) - A totally avoidable overlap. You can just rotate (1) anti-clockwise a few degrees, selection centre to avoid it.
00:33:558 (1) - Another good place to have a jump, as this is yet another part transition.
00:52:711 (1) - As this is the chorus and the song is a lot more intense, and since there's a cymbal on this note, I would add a jump here. Also applies to 01:03:558 (1) - for it having the same synth.
00:54:575 (3,1) - Another unnecessary overlap which you can fix easily. Just move down (1) a little bit more.
00:56:779 (1) - You can clearly hear the cymbals here, so you should be adding a finish here. And since there's a cymbal here, would also add a jump again.(Try to add a jump here if you applied my point at 00:52:711 (1) - for consistency)
01:04:745 (1,3) - Both has very high pitched vocals and cymbals which calls for jumps. Would add a stronger one at (1) then a weaker one at (3) as (3) has a lower pitched vocals and weaker cymbals. Also remember to add finishes to both of their heads.
01:06:609 (2,3,4) - Unnecessary increase of overall distance. While the pattern might look cool, the sudden increase in the overall distance might feel somewhat of a unseen 'difficulty spike' to hard players as nothing special in the song, other than the song actually becoming less intense than before, so this isn't properly justified. Would just use normal distances for this, and this also applies to 01:08:304 (3,4) - .
01:19:830 (1) - Would make another jump here for the part transition.

That's really it. I didn't look into detail for the structure but on the baseline it looks fine.
GL!

sahuang

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sahuang 2017-03-23T22:09:42+00:00

飞

Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2017-03-24T14:00:57+00:00

Arf wrote:
Hello, from your M4M queue! Here's my map once again: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/522233

Hard
00:02:033 (3) - In a hard i think simplifying the three beats here into one slider is not good, perhaps rhythmically it is better to follow all the sounds here
00:02:711 (4) - Here as well
00:05:762 (4,1) - Hmm are you sure about this overlap, it is rather unsightly in my opinion
00:15:931 (4,2) - Similar concerns at places like this, it makes the map look a bit untidy and structurally unsound in my opinion. Would be better to perhaps change the pattern so it doesn't overlap under any circumstances.
00:17:965 (2,3) - Consider changing these to be like http://arf.s-ul.eu/bUuwTJEb, despite the red to white slider it sounds better rhythmically imo, sort of like at places like 00:23:728 (3,4) -
00:24:067 (4,1) - Similarly here i think it is better to do like http://arf.s-ul.eu/QWpIhdfA
00:26:779 (1,2) - This could look better with a better blanket in my opinion, more like http://arf.s-ul.eu/pmMXEUCg
00:32:202 (1) - Consider stacking "1" on the previous sliderend? You've stacked most of the notes with 1/1 gaps so it seems fitting imo
00:33:897 (1,2,3) - I am not sure what this follows to be honest, in a Hard this is very much too simplified of a rhythm, try something more like http://arf.s-ul.eu/gDquDzGa. Or you can use repeat sliders or only circles but either way the three beats should be represented as three beats in my opinion
00:35:931 (7,1) - Hmm here as well I think the rhythm is slightly questionable. Again 7 has three beats within it but it's mapped as a two beat slider, and 1 should be on the red tick after where it currently starts. Sure it's currently on a big white tick but there is no sound there, the stronger sound is after it so in a Hard difficulty that's where the slider should start. What's odd is that the notes after it are snapped to the different sounds pretty correctly, so both in editor and in gameplay this little section sounds off
00:41:694 (2,1) - Bit odd that the spacing decreases between these despite the slider speeding up
00:58:982 (6) - I reckon this works better as two circles since both the start and end beat are strong and it's in the kiai
01:00:338 (1) - Another slider that I feel undermaps the three beat rhythm, and especially because it's in the kiai I feel it should be, if not three circles, something that represents the rhythm slightly better
01:00:847 (2) - Also I feel that this note shouldn't really be here, especially as the finish hitsound has appeared before it already
01:04:745 (4,1) - Up to you because the current pattern kind of fits, but 4 being a held vocal I would have expected a held note like a slider there instead of a circle
01:09:491 (4,1) - -I get what you're trying to do here. I think if you really want to do this, making it go actually through the previous 4 slider's track (http://arf.s-ul.eu/mhOTevgm) might be a good idea, but then you run the risk of it being too hard to read for players of Hards. Up to you.
01:14:406 (1,2) - Consider making these blanket each other, like http://arf.s-ul.eu/nzzmiHw7
01:20:677 (3,4) - Again about the undermapping. I know you used it a lot in the map and that makes me think maybe it's your style or something, but in a Hard difficulty choosing to not map sounds is often very noticeable and very jarring so it is my recommendation that you do map these as groups of three beats, there many ways to map them that showcase all three beats here. Please consider it. See how you did it at 01:22:541 (1,2) - and even at 01:23:389 (3,4) - 01:24:067 (5,6) -

Overall the Hard felt slightly untidy in terms of both aesthetics and rhythm. I've pointed out most of the things I noticed in the mod but it is often a good idea to pay attention while mapping to avoid overlapping notes, rhythm which puts the emphasis on the wrong notes, and general tidiness in terms of mapping/aesthetic structure. It's not a bad diff and has more potential than many other Hards I've seen but it needs a bit more polish before it's fully ready in my opinion.
remapped this diff, thx a lot for your suggestions~

Insane
00:01:186 (1,2,3,4) - Okay while playing this pattern looked a little strange to me and I didn't understand it but in the editor it seems that since 4 is the strongest note you tried to emphasize it with a jump. I think if that was your intention you could space 4 a little more because at the moment it looks like you fudged up some sort of DS instead of looking like a proper jump haha I think it's ok, I don't want to add the ds to increase the difficulty here as the jump is obtuse.
00:04:406 (1,2,3,4) - This should REALLY be a perfect square in my opinion, right now it just looks very strange. 00:05:084 (1) - could be located somewhere else if you really want to make it a jump agree here, made it a square
00:06:270 (3) - I think moving this note so that it is between slider "2" and the next "1" is a good idea that way slider 2 points directly at it instead of the slightly confusing movement at present. Or if you don't want to do that, consider fixing the blanket between 3 and 00:06:609 (3) - , it's a little off fixed the blanket
00:09:152 (6) - Strange to me that there are many large jumps before this but this note which has the strongest sound and also a finish hitsound is not part of a jump? Better to make it a jump for emphasis in my opinion, like 00:10:338 (6,7) - The "butterfly" pattern is already a challenge for players, so I'm not gonna emphasize here.
00:20:677 (2,3,1) - large spacing between 2 and 3 but then sudden spacing drop for 1? Doesn't make much sense imo since 1 has some emphasis to it as well. fixed
00:24:914 (4,5) - In my opinion 4 is the beat with more emphasis so the jump should be 3 to 4 not 4 to 5 ok
00:28:304 (1) - Again i feel that if you want to put jumps in places like 00:27:796 (3,4) - where there isn't really much reason to (except looks good or plays fun) then I feel you must also use higher spacing in places which deserve it like here. The emphasis here is much greater than from 3 to 4 in my opinion, and because of that deserves a higher spacing to match. yep
00:34:914 (1) - Hmm in the middle of 00:33:558 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:35:592 (3,4,5,1) - this held slider is a little weird. IMO the gvocal isn't held enough to justify the change in rhythm but if you really want some variation here that's okay too I think it's perfect to follow the vocal, so I'll just keep this pattern
00:36:948 (4) - I don't feel this fits. I think it takes away from the emphasis you have been putting in this section and that it would work better as a simple 1/2 slider followed by two notes like 00:36:270 (1,2,3) - Similar concerns at 00:40:338 (1) - I understand your ideas, but I want to keep this original pattern.
00:38:982 (1,2) - Similarly i think the order of these should be slider->circle not circle->slider. It fits better rhythmically in my opinion hmm no, this follows the vocal
(minor) 00:52:202 (4,1) - stack is very slightly off yep
00:53:897 (1,3) - i don't think this looks very nice because of how short of a slider 3 is. Consider moving 2 down a bit more and stacking 3 on the sliderhead of 1 to avoid the overlap looking ugly? remapped this pattern, I feel it's ugly too lol
00:57:626 (4,1) - Nice.
01:02:372 (2) - Better rhythm sound as two circles in my opinion agree
01:17:118 (5) - space this more than the others, like a jump, for emphasis? hmm, not adding for makiong it easier

Good diff! Impressed me more than Hard, well done. Need a very slight bit of polish and I think it's pretty good to go. Some slight aesthetic faux pas here and there but that's an experience thing and also as an old map person I like linear flow so I am not too bothered about that. Good mix of flows in this diff, readable, fun to play while not being horrendously overspaced. Very acceptable.

Well that's about all I could find, really. Hope I wasn't too heavy handed with my comments and I hoe you don't feel that I am forcing you to map a certain way or anything like that. Remember that above all your map is your map and you're the one who should make final decisions about it. It's a good set and it has good potential to be ranked (having a QAT GD helps eh). I hope you find success, and good luck!

thx a lot for your long mod!

imoutosan wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/546149

[General]
Hard和Insane的preview time和其他难度不一样不知道咋回事 fix了

[Hard]
00:00:677 (1) - 应该是个1/4折返
00:13:050 (3,3) - 这俩贴边了建议把123间距都拉大
00:30:508 (1,2,3,4) - 那个 drum音效真的不要这么用听着很傻比
00:33:219 (5,1,2,3,4) - 123跟的是个啥没听出来感觉下的有点乱
01:00:677 - finish不在这啊

[Insane]
drum音效同hard
00:08:643 (3,4,5,6) - 这个flow和前后两组跳不太搭我个人可能倾向于把6放在5的左下改完难度飞升不过就这么摆吧
00:17:118 (4) - ctrl+g和00:14:067 (4,5) - 弄个一样的梗 flow也依然没问题好
00:54:914 (4,5,1,2,3) - 其实这样画个大弧线打起来不是很舒服可以试试把5放到下边做成一个折线（顺便三连摆的有点丑这段全re了太jb丑了
01:00:338 (6,7,8) - 考虑到转向的话这个三连应该间距缩小而不是变大、我摆的时候倒没考虑这么多以为是一样的ds嘿嘿

谢妹桑

a32 wrote:
M4M:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/547538
[General]
不知道怎么回事= =
不清楚audio lead-in不一样可不可以不可以我也不知道为啥这样的反正改了

[*Hard*]
00:00:677 (1) – 我觉得像I一样变成折返3连更切合音乐..反正也没什么难度
00:30:847 (2) – soft-finish感觉更好听这个drum音在这怪怪的
00:31:524 (4) – 同上
00:41:355 (1,2,1) – 间距放成一样的好看点
00:45:762 (5) - 下面这段有的drum我觉得也该改成soft-finish(和上面一样

[*Insane*]
00:07:965 (9) - 感觉往下放放到6的位置附近更好点这个就不挪了感觉也不卡手
00:30:847 (6) - 这段音效上的建议同Hard 好
00:45:762 (8) - 同上这个加了反而怪就不改了
00:45:931 (9) - 感觉这个note略多余可删 drum音应该还是很明确的吧
00:59:321 (5,1) - 感觉并成一个滑条更好? 并了打三连会有点怪
01:00:592 (9) - +个note? 不加了就单纯的三连不搞半stream

祝早日rank!~

谢a32

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Checking the hard difficulty as requested

[Hard]
Check over your blankets - most of them aren't properly done. Don't want to list down a huge amounts of them here.right
Your jumps on this difficulty are placed at weird places in the kiai. Not to mention the earlier parts of the difficulty lacks jumps in general. To give an example, 01:07:457 (4,4) - these 2 - they aren't even stronger than those downbeats, and they are the same as the 2nd snare in every measure, yet making them have a small jump doesn't really make sense as you didn't do it for any others. checked over the diff and make the dashes more reasonable now
00:22:711 (5,6,1) - This is a good place to add a jump as this is the part transition. fixed
00:30:169 (3,1) - A totally avoidable overlap. You can just rotate (1) anti-clockwise a few degrees, selection centre to avoid it.ok
00:33:558 (1) - Another good place to have a jump, as this is yet another part transition. fine
00:52:711 (1) - As this is the chorus and the song is a lot more intense, and since there's a cymbal on this note, I would add a jump here. Also applies to 01:03:558 (1) - for it having the same synth. yep and all finishes after this have jumps now
00:54:575 (3,1) - Another unnecessary overlap which you can fix easily. Just move down (1) a little bit more. sure
00:56:779 (1) - You can clearly hear the cymbals here, so you should be adding a finish here. And since there's a cymbal here, would also add a jump again.(Try to add a jump here if you applied my point at 00:52:711 (1) - for consistency) hmm not for this one, I don't think the cymbal is strong enough for a finish and a dash, so I just keep the original one.
01:04:745 (1,3) - Both has very high pitched vocals and cymbals which calls for jumps. Would add a stronger one at (1) then a weaker one at (3) as (3) has a lower pitched vocals and weaker cymbals. Also remember to add finishes to both of their heads.nice suggestion
01:06:609 (2,3,4) - Unnecessary increase of overall distance. While the pattern might look cool, the sudden increase in the overall distance might feel somewhat of a unseen 'difficulty spike' to hard players as nothing special in the song, other than the song actually becoming less intense than before, so this isn't properly justified. Would just use normal distances for this, and this also applies to 01:08:304 (3,4) - . accepted
01:19:830 (1) - Would make another jump here for the part transition. sure
That's really it. I didn't look into detail for the structure but on the baseline it looks fine.
GL!

Thx a lot sc4!

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sahuang 2018-05-21T13:51:43+00:00

sahuang wrote:
飞

Normal
00:10:508 (1,1) - gap rule
00:17:965 (2,4,5) - better blanket please
00:32:372 (3) - hard to recognise slider path..and it is a normal diff so change it pls
01:16:440 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too long
Hitsounding is not good in this diff, missing many finishes especially before kiai. Maybe just copy from top diff.

Hard
00:34:745 (4,1) - bl
00:39:491 (2,3) - etc. blanket not going to mention all
00:53:897 (1,2,4) - no overlap
01:15:084 (2,1) - stack
01:19:830 - 缺音效。。感觉这个set好几个diff音效都不太好，建议从主难度复制一下，whistle太多然后缺了重音
01:23:050 (2,1) - 分开吧

Insane
00:31:863 (1,4) - stack
两个转盘把kiai很多音都无视了，感觉很偷懒

感觉top diff音效也不太好，加点重音就行，然后这个old style不知道行不行，先试试看吧

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Yumeno Himiko 2018-05-21T13:53:07+00:00

音效过两天重下一下

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