ByBy_ChAn wrote:

Hey :3

I'll check only easy majority of issues being hitsounds

asdf - nazi or suggestion
asdf - important

General

1. The viseo offset should be 313 ms not -207 ms \:p Set the video offset on all diffs at 313 ms
2. The offset fits better on 00:00:801 where the song begins

Easy

1. Why you use 2.0x for easy diff imo ? D: Try to use 1.0x or 1.1x orz
2. 00:10:259(2)- Remove finish from slider's head and keep whistle . I don't hear cymbal sound here and it doesn't fit so well the cymbal here
3. 00:18:830(1)- Remove finish cuz I don't hear a cymbal sound here and the finish is placed already on previous object where's cymbal
4. 00:19:717(2)- Remove clap from slider's tail cuz there's doesn't fit so better imo . Instead add clap on next note where fits much better
5. 00:20:899(1)- Why on this spinner soft is as sampleset and addition ? I suggest to keep only soft as addition and remove soft sampleset it fits better and a sampleset and a addition placed on same note is not allowed I guess
6. 00:36:860(5)- Remove clap form slider's head . It not fits so better imo D: and it sounds weird . Instead add clap at 00:37:747(6)- 's tail . It will fit much better placed there
7. 00:40:998(1)- Why you not add finish on slider's head ? I heard a cymbal sound here and it will fit much better then before
8. 00:40:998(1,2)- I don't like the current pattern D: The sliders are not alligned which makes the pattern look weird . Try this : http://puu.sh/gnI63/6a37fe8dd5.jpg It will looks perfect and more better than before
9. 00:42:180(2)- Maybe you should add finish on slider's head cuz I hear a cymbal sound and it shouldn't be ignored also it will fit much better
10. 00:43:362(1)- On slider's head add finish cuz it's cymbal sound not clap . I don't hear a clap sound so there's no reason to put clap there
11. 00:44:840(2)- Don't forget to add clap on slider's tai and headl . I feel there's clap beat and it will fit so good
12. 00:45:727(3)- Remove clap cuz there's no clap sound and add instead finish . There's cymbal sound \:p
13. 00:52:081()- Why you not add a note ? I feel there's a beat which you shouldn't ignore it and it'll fit better
14. 00:55:776(4)- Remove clap from slider's head . It sounds weird and I don't hear a clap sound from song here . Add instead on next slider's head the clap
15. 00:56:663(5)- Remove clap form reverse cuz placed there it sound weird imo and I don't hear a clap here
16. 00:58:732(2)- Remove finish from slider's head . There's no cymbal sound and it sound weird to my ears imo
17. 01:11:737(1)- Remove finish . There's not a cymbal sound
18. 01:20:013(2)- Remove finish form slider's tail . It sounds weird and there's no cymbal sound
19. 01:24:742(2)- Remove finish cuz no cymbal sound and the current sound is weird

That's all from me :3 Before ranking it , try to get some mods for NCs and hitsounds

Good Luck ~

1. Easy & Normal : Slider tick rate = 1 - Hard & Insane : Slider tick rate = 2 (Please fix this)

1. 00:23:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - you can increase those distances by make some jumps there. It looks so bad too see those crowded notes in a little space.
2. 00:01:983 (1) - this spinner. I didn't hear any effect or instrument in the song at 00:04:052 - so why did you make the spinner ended at 00:04:052 - ? I can understand if this spinner is accompanied with an unclear hitsound (like soft-hitnormal).
3. 00:10:702 (6,7,8,9,10) - a bad design in my vision x_x . you can make it neater with : move 00:10:998 (8) - to x:158 y:134 and 00:11:145 (9) - to x:134 y:162
4. 00:26:663 (6) - You don't need to use this many repeats in Insane diff. And also since the vocal at 00:26:663 - was a long vocal I suggest to make the pattern more like this http://puu.sh/gqfQe/31723423a4.jpg
5. 00:44:988 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:49:717 (2) - you can make the tail stack with 00:49:126 (7) - . And also I think this part need more distance because of energy up in the song, so that suggestion will work.
7. 00:52:377 (2,3,4) - you don't need to force to use 1/4 in this part. just remove 00:52:377 (2,3) - .
8. 00:55:037 (1,2,3) - I see here you missed the pattern. you ignored the vocal at 00:55:480 - that have a big effect in the song. I suggest to change it like this > http://puu.sh/gruhj/0e3921feff.jpg
9. 01:01:687 (5) - NC for SV change ? And also I don't know why you decrease the NC here.
10. 01:13:953 (9) - umm.... why finish ?

1. 00:01:983 (1) - I better like this way than Trinity diff
2. 00:08:929 (6) - why it's here when it must be at 00:09:076 - ?
3. 00:16:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - it looks so crowded. I see the one make it so crowded is the repeated slider. I think you can remap this part. (If you need help to do it just catch me in Game )
4. 00:18:387 (1) - why this slider started at 00:18:367 - since it must be started at 00:18:534 - ? Give me the reason.
5. 00:23:264 (5) - like I said in Easy diff before.
6. 00:58:584 (3,4,5) - I think you missed the pattern here. Since you start it with vocal I think you can continue it with vocal too > http://puu.sh/grvCm/410b4f4c11.jpg
7. 01:25:924 (1) - To be honest, Those ticks are really bother me.

1. first I want to say, at part from 00:33:904 - to 00:51:638 - You can make it more fit to the song with use more 3/2 pattern (but don't overuse it :p). for example, you can make pattern 00:34:200 (2,3,4,5,6) - to be like http://puu.sh/grxrG/f7d738246d.jpg . It'll fit to the song. I'll give the part that can use 3/2 pattern by including it into my mod above
2. 00:12:771 (4,1) - hmm... avoid the overlap ?
3. 00:23:264 (4) - like I said in Easy diffs before.
4. 00:36:860 (2,3) - hmm... you ignore 00:37:303 - that have a big effect in music. I suggest to make 00:36:860 (2) - ended at 00:37:303 - and repeated then remove 00:37:451 (3) -
5. 00:38:633 (1,2,3,4) - make the pattern just like the first thing that I've said
6. 00:43:362 (1,2,3,4) - you can change the pattern to be like http://puu.sh/grxKA/adaa0b4bcf.jpg to make it fit to the song. And apply it to 00:45:727 (1,2,3,4) - too.
7. 01:00:801 (3,4) - It really don't fit to the song. you can remove 01:01:687 (4) - and make 01:00:801 (3) - more longer slider ended at 01:01:244 - and keep repeated. It'll fit to the song.
8. 01:11:737 (1,2,3,4) - to be honest, It's really hard to use this many 1/2 so suddenly.
9. this slider should be repeated at 01:14:534 - not 01:14:692 -
10. 01:25:924 (1) - like I said in Hard diff. those ticks are really bother me.

• 
  Okay, back to easy XD

1. 01:04:643 (4,5) - avoid the overlap
2. 01:25:924 (1) - like I said in other diffs. those ticks are really bother me
   Nothing much I want to say because the pattern looks good since this is Easy diff
   And I think you need a hitsound mod in this diff.

Fantastica wrote:

Hi hi :3~~~
I'm back as promised :3

No Kudos Please because I've got one before.

[General]

1. Easy & Normal : Slider tick rate = 1 - Hard & Insane : Slider tick rate = 2 (Please fix this)

[Trinity]

1. 00:23:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - you can increase those distances by make some jumps there. It looks so bad too see those crowded notes in a little space.
2. 00:01:983 (1) - this spinner. I didn't hear any effect or instrument in the song at 00:04:052 - so why did you make the spinner ended at 00:04:052 - ? I can understand if this spinner is accompanied with an unclear hitsound (like soft-hitnormal).
3. 00:10:702 (6,7,8,9,10) - a bad design in my vision x_x . you can make it neater with : move 00:10:998 (8) - to x:158 y:134 and 00:11:145 (9) - to x:134 y:162
4. 00:26:663 (6) - You don't need to use this many repeats in Insane diff. And also since the vocal at 00:26:663 - was a long vocal I suggest to make the pattern more like this http://puu.sh/gqfQe/31723423a4.jpg
5. 00:44:988 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:49:717 (2) - you can make the tail stack with 00:49:126 (7) - . And also I think this part need more distance because of energy up in the song, so that suggestion will work.
7. 00:52:377 (2,3,4) - you don't need to force to use 1/4 in this part. just remove 00:52:377 (2,3) - .
8. 00:55:037 (1,2,3) - I see here you missed the pattern. you ignored the vocal at 00:55:480 - that have a big effect in the song. I suggest to change it like this > http://puu.sh/gruhj/0e3921feff.jpg
9. 01:01:687 (5) - NC for SV change ? And also I don't know why you decrease the NC here.
10. 01:13:953 (9) - umm.... why finish ?

[Hard]

1. 00:01:983 (1) - I better like this way than Trinity diff
2. 00:08:929 (6) - why it's here when it must be at 00:09:076 - ?
3. 00:16:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - it looks so crowded. I see the one make it so crowded is the repeated slider. I think you can remap this part. (If you need help to do it just catch me in Game )
4. 00:18:387 (1) - why this slider started at 00:18:367 - since it must be started at 00:18:534 - ? Give me the reason.
5. 00:23:264 (5) - like I said in Easy diff before.
6. 00:58:584 (3,4,5) - I think you missed the pattern here. Since you start it with vocal I think you can continue it with vocal too > http://puu.sh/grvCm/410b4f4c11.jpg
7. 01:25:924 (1) - To be honest, Those ticks are really bother me.

[Normal]

1. first I want to say, at part from 00:33:904 - to 00:51:638 - You can make it more fit to the song with use more 3/2 pattern (but don't overuse it :p). for example, you can make pattern 00:34:200 (2,3,4,5,6) - to be like http://puu.sh/grxrG/f7d738246d.jpg . It'll fit to the song. I'll give the part that can use 3/2 pattern by including it into my mod above
2. 00:12:771 (4,1) - hmm... avoid the overlap ?
3. 00:23:264 (4) - like I said in Easy diffs before.
4. 00:36:860 (2,3) - hmm... you ignore 00:37:303 - that have a big effect in music. I suggest to make 00:36:860 (2) - ended at 00:37:303 - and repeated then remove 00:37:451 (3) -
5. 00:38:633 (1,2,3,4) - make the pattern just like the first thing that I've said
6. 00:43:362 (1,2,3,4) - you can change the pattern to be like http://puu.sh/grxKA/adaa0b4bcf.jpg to make it fit to the song. And apply it to 00:45:727 (1,2,3,4) - too.
7. 01:00:801 (3,4) - It really don't fit to the song. you can remove 01:01:687 (4) - and make 01:00:801 (3) - more longer slider ended at 01:01:244 - and keep repeated. It'll fit to the song.
8. 01:11:737 (1,2,3,4) - to be honest, It's really hard to use this many 1/2 so suddenly.
9. this slider should be repeated at 01:14:534 - not 01:14:692 -
10. 01:25:924 (1) - like I said in Hard diff. those ticks are really bother me.

[Easy]

• 
  Okay, back to easy XD

1. 01:04:643 (4,5) - avoid the overlap
2. 01:25:924 (1) - like I said in other diffs. those ticks are really bother me
   Nothing much I want to say because the pattern looks good since this is Easy diff
   And I think you need a hitsound mod in this diff.

That's all
If you have anything to ask you can PM me or catch me in Game
Good luck~

I'll be dealing with this tomorrow 3/10/15 due to school works. my classmate is waiting for something that I need to finish asap. so please wait for the next update! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Anxient wrote:

i never did a mod for you didn't i?
Trinity
00:05:382 (6,7) - better blanket
try moving 00:06:860 (2) - x40 y148, 00:07:008 (3) - x40 y44, 00:07:155 (4) - x128 y87
00:13:658 (10,1) - better blanket
00:18:387 (6,1) - ^
00:29:027 (5) - why no NC?
00:33:904 (1,2) - not sure if supposed to be blanket or no?
00:40:998 (1,3) - overlap?
00:43:510 (4,5) - blanket?
00:50:160 - added HC
00:50:234 - start spinner here
00:51:638 - end spinner here
00:57:549 (1) - not sure if 00:57:845 - of slider supposed to have finish hitsound
01:03:461 (6,7) - better blanket
01:11:441 (1,2,3,4,1) - dunno about you, but i think it would be better to turn it into something like this?

suggestion

01:12:623 (3,4) - better blanket?
01:13:362 (5) - NC?
01:25:924 - hitcircle
01:25:998 - spinner start
01:27:241 - spinner end
01:27:254 - unsnapped timing point?
01:29:014 (6) - stack with 01:27:536 (1) -

good luck~

1. 00:09:077 (1,3) - 2/1 sliders here cause you to completely miss the drums on white tick, if you don't want a more dense rhythm then using 1/2 repeats could also work
2. 00:18:535 (1) - Missing a finish on the head
3. 00:36:860 (2) - A 1/1 slider and a circle on the red tick would allow you to have something on the white tick while making the vocals clickable
4. 00:40:998 (1) - I would probably use a 1/2 repeat instead so you still have the hold on vocals but the repeat lands on the white tick again, also the head is missing a finish
5. 00:45:727 (1) - Same thing mentioned in 00:36:860 (2)
6. 00:48:091 (1,3) - Maybe turn into 1/2 repeats for the same reason mentioned earlier
7. 00:57:549 (1) - Use a finish instead, it's the downbeat
8. 01:00:801 (3) - Probably add a NC here for the weird rhythm change into blue ticks
9. 01:06:416 (5) - Try a 1/1 slider and a circle instead so the finish+downbeat is clickable

1. 01:25:924 (1) - End isn't snapped
2. 00:19:126 (2) - A 1/1 slider and a circle would work much better, your current rhythm here ignores a white tick plus the little bit of vocals on the tail can be made clickable with a circle
3. 00:20:973 (1) - Have the spinner start a tick later and add a circle instead, downbeat should be clickable
4. 00:46:909 - Shouldn't ignore this downbeat
5. 00:59:766 (1,2) - Decrease spacing a bit, a 1/4 repeat in a hard like that might cause some sliderbreaks
6. 01:02:131 (9,1) - Space these out, accent the vocals, also you could maybe form a triangle here

1. 00:11:293 (10,1) - Try placing these further away, the downbeat on 00:11:441 (1) needs some emphasis and the jump is awkwardly small to play
2. 00:26:219 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing for these should be slightly larger, the vocals are a bit stronger compared to before
3. 00:39:668 (4) - The vocals here are also lacking some emphasis, modifying the slider shape to change up flow like you did in 00:38:633 (1) or increasing spacing could work
4. 00:50:160 - Add a circle here, shouldn't just ignore the vocals
5. 00:50:234 (1) - You could also shorten the spinner a bit and add a circle on the downbeat instead, would be nicer if it was clickable
6. 00:52:525 (2,1) - Maybe stack these since there are vocals for both notes and 00:52:525 (2) is weaker than 00:52:820 (1)
7. 00:57:549 (1) - What's with the finish at the tail? I don't think it's needed
8. 00:59:914 (1,2) - How about flipping both curves to accentuate the vocals again, it sounds weird but it flows too nicely causing them to lack emphasis
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:25:998 (1) - Same spinner thing I mentioned earlier
   
   I think you could do more with your object placement, overall it doesn't feel completely composed
   Also your hitsound volumes need to be toned down a bit, the max should be like 85-90% not 100% lol

sukiNathan wrote:

Random Mod

[Normal]

1. 00:09:077 (1,3) - 2/1 sliders here cause you to completely miss the drums on white tick, if you don't want a more dense rhythm then using 1/2 repeats could also work
2. 00:18:535 (1) - Missing a finish on the head
3. 00:36:860 (2) - A 1/1 slider and a circle on the red tick would allow you to have something on the white tick while making the vocals clickable
4. 00:40:998 (1) - I would probably use a 1/2 repeat instead so you still have the hold on vocals but the repeat lands on the white tick again, also the head is missing a finish
5. 00:45:727 (1) - Same thing mentioned in 00:36:860 (2)
6. 00:48:091 (1,3) - Maybe turn into 1/2 repeats for the same reason mentioned earlier
7. 00:57:549 (1) - Use a finish instead, it's the downbeat
8. 01:00:801 (3) - Probably add a NC here for the weird rhythm change into blue ticks
9. 01:06:416 (5) - Try a 1/1 slider and a circle instead so the finish+downbeat is clickable

[Hard]
SV seems pretty unbalanced, Normal has 0.7 then it jumps to 1.3 in Hard

1. 01:25:924 (1) - End isn't snapped
2. 00:19:126 (2) - A 1/1 slider and a circle would work much better, your current rhythm here ignores a white tick plus the little bit of vocals on the tail can be made clickable with a circle
3. 00:20:973 (1) - Have the spinner start a tick later and add a circle instead, downbeat should be clickable
4. 00:46:909 - Shouldn't ignore this downbeat
5. 00:59:766 (1,2) - Decrease spacing a bit, a 1/4 repeat in a hard like that might cause some sliderbreaks
6. 01:02:131 (9,1) - Space these out, accent the vocals, also you could maybe form a triangle here

[Trinity]

1. 00:11:293 (10,1) - Try placing these further away, the downbeat on 00:11:441 (1) needs some emphasis and the jump is awkwardly small to play
2. 00:26:219 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing for these should be slightly larger, the vocals are a bit stronger compared to before
3. 00:39:668 (4) - The vocals here are also lacking some emphasis, modifying the slider shape to change up flow like you did in 00:38:633 (1) or increasing spacing could work
4. 00:50:160 - Add a circle here, shouldn't just ignore the vocals
5. 00:50:234 (1) - You could also shorten the spinner a bit and add a circle on the downbeat instead, would be nicer if it was clickable
6. 00:52:525 (2,1) - Maybe stack these since there are vocals for both notes and 00:52:525 (2) is weaker than 00:52:820 (1)
7. 00:57:549 (1) - What's with the finish at the tail? I don't think it's needed
8. 00:59:914 (1,2) - How about flipping both curves to accentuate the vocals again, it sounds weird but it flows too nicely causing them to lack emphasis
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:25:998 (1) - Same spinner thing I mentioned earlier
   
   I think you could do more with your object placement, overall it doesn't feel completely composed
   Also your hitsound volumes need to be toned down a bit, the max should be like 85-90% not 100% lol

jloughman14 wrote:

How isn't this ranked yet!?

MastersTGOK wrote:

and another version of this randomly gets ranked...

Slackin_Dx wrote:

Is this complete already? o.o

jloughman14 wrote:

Still waiting for this to be ranked >.<

ranger93 wrote:

Yeah I'm waiting too because the only one beatmap of Seven Doors is really hard to play --'