AlexaBM wrote:

Hi~ as requested bu YuzuPirate
[Easy]

1. 00:02:270 (1) - Maybe delete the middle point? This slider breaks the flow, IMO. Na it's fine
2. 00:21:169 (3) - Maybe something like this? Interesting idea. Guess I'll go like that.

[Normal]

1. 00:03:596 (4,5) - I think this is a bit hard for the Normal diff. Maybe make this way? Ahhh yes. That part. Everyone keeps complaining about it. Guess it's time to change. Your idea seems to be the best fit for these parts. Done with a twist.
2. 00:15:698 (4,1) - You can make this blanket better. Fixed
3. 00:27:469 (4,5) - Like above. Done
4. 00:31:448 (4,5) - ^ Done

[Hard]

1. 00:07:243 (1) - I don't see any reasons to add a NC here. Remove it, please. New music phrase.
2. 00:14:704 (1) and 00:15:698 (1) - ^ Was trying to keep consistency with the NCs of Natural Gem but I guess these can go away.
3. I fully agree with -Bakari- :
   

   00:32:608 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - try to use new combos less. This is abuse of new combos, as they give some extra HP, it makes this part unbalanced and boring. <oreover, it does not look good, if you ask me.

   This moment isn't even hard to give an extra HP! It looks weird and not interesting to play. Leave NCs only at the downbeats for example, but not at every object, orz Oh well. I will say it again. More NC = Higher drain anyway. But I suppose it does look ugly. Did NC every 2 sliders.

[Kyshiro's Insane]

1. 00:42:058 (4) - Add a NC here? Fixed it for him

pro map, pro mod, LOL

That's all I found. Good luck~

Tician wrote:

OK I try my luck, don't laugh about me pls D: Hi!

Easy

00:00:281 (1,2) - ctrl+h is not exactly the same (hope it's not only me cause I don't know why I can't use the normal skin in editor =( Yeah you're right, fixed as well as possible.
00:08:238 (1) - move the middle point of the slider 2 (tiny) grids to the bottom for better blanket The blanket is ok.
00:14:206 (1,2) - Let them both end on a white tick, you don't need to use the red once in the easy diff especially with that high BPM Rhythm gets more interesting, besides the red point shows more emphasis and sounds nicer. 2/1 is boring
00:22:164 (1) - End of this is not fitting to any sound, end on one of the white ticks It fits to the clap that is exist behind the hitsound.

Normal

Check AiMod cause of DS problems Never check AiMod for DS issues.
00:08:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Nice work but I would say the circles over each othe rin the middle are too confusing for beginners They are not because the do not even show being stacked at any point in time during play mode.
00:14:206 (1,2,3,4) - when paying this it felts off, I know it isn't
00:23:324 just my opinion but it's not neccessary to use any hitobject here would use just circles 00:23:158 and 00:23:490 to get the 3 sounds of the instrument playing this Clap too important to ignore.
00:24:153 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds better for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2154989 Hm, maybe, let me get more mods for this.
00:28:132 (1,2) - same ^

Hard

00:00:281 (1,2) - I would not pair them, just keep them as 1 and 3 You mean stack?
00:01:275 (1,2) - same... and like all the others D: Not changing any of these. Map needs a theme and this is the one.
00:25:645 (2) - delete, maybe make the slider longer instead There is clearly a sound there to map this circle to.
00:27:137 (1,2,3) - this is damn hard (u used that several times), don't do it pls It's pretty slow I don't see why not.
00:22:164 (1,2) - would only make a long slider Clap starts on slider so that stays.
00:32:111 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - too much... use the same rhythm but other objects after the half of them other objects???
00:40:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Use the "create polygon circle" Button... this is just ugly I think this was created using polygon circle.

Natural Gem

00:00:281 (1,2) - same as in any other diff, I would not pair these, go 1 and 3 Again, theme of the map.
00:22:164 (1,2) - change the position in the timing line and change the circle so it sits between the 2 slider That is rhythmically wrong.
00:23:324 (2) - would delete it Why?
00:24:153 (1,2) - not exactly - copy the first slider, paste it and rotate it by 45° and use it as 2nd slider Wasn't going for symmetry here, would look ugly.
00:25:645 (2) - a bit strange a circle with no sound in the music Listen better.

GL with the map! Thanks~

Tician wrote:

OK I try my luck, don't laugh about me pls D:

General

Yuzu's Diff using a countdown - remove the countdown
Same with the letterbox - just... AiMod^^ I'll have kaguya do that~

Yuzus Insane

00:02:933 (5) - The flow goes to the top not to the left - hope so well it's intended, and should be fine, so keeping it
00:03:265 (6) - make it shorter to the red line - fits more to the music That makes no sense since there's no beat or sound on the red line, but the sound that I'm following disappears on that blue tick
00:05:254 (4) - something that's not looking like... well let's not say it.... would be better I like it :3 Keeping it~

1. ai mod says this diff is an insane, like I know ai mod isn't exactly correct most of the time.. but you know, insane =/= normal it's possible that this is too difficult as a normal
2. 00:16:859 (2,3,4) - really weird flow here. consider just making 4 follow 3, remember that this is a normal diff

1. 00:04:591 (2,3,4) - SUPPPERRR awkward flow here. especially since the slider is so fast. you're going into a downwards motion and then immediately to the right. I'd flip 3 over to the other side of 1 so the downwards motion throws you into the slider and not away from it
2. 00:16:196 (1,2,3) - spacing here is kinda icky. the way the spacing suddenly goes downwards and then back up for 3 and 4 is really awkward. maybe just make these all have the same distance?
3. 00:17:688 (2,3,4) - same issue as above
4. 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - way too many triangles idk even how to explain how much I hate this but I do, MORE DIVERSITY AJSDFJ this part is really unfun to play

1. 00:18:511 (1,2) - unsnapped objects here, unrankable obviously so fix
2. 00:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same thing as in natural gem, this is really hard to read and unfun to play. maybe like.. space them out more in different places or something. bleh
3. 00:41:726 (6,1) - lol, why not just put these on the y axis

1. 00:03:596 (1) - overmapped
2. yea there's like nothing wrong with this diff I really like it

1. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks like a literal nightmare to read, so much flow and stuff that just makes no sense and it's just hurting my brain and agh idk I don't like it. guess maybe it's just me
2. 00:07:575 (2,3,4,5) - make it a little bit less linear for fun factor maybe. zig zags and stuff
3. yea I really like this diff too, not much wrong here

Maeglwn wrote:

eh

[General]
don't think there's anything notable

[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]

1. ai mod says this diff is an insane, like I know ai mod isn't exactly correct most of the time.. but you know, insane =/= normal it's possible that this is too difficult as a normal Look at the star rating it's fine idk why AiMod is being a bastard.
2. 00:16:859 (2,3,4) - really weird flow here. consider just making 4 follow 3, remember that this is a normal diff Should be fine let's wait for more mods.

[Natural Gem]

1. 00:04:591 (2,3,4) - SUPPPERRR awkward flow here. especially since the slider is so fast. you're going into a downwards motion and then immediately to the right. I'd flip 3 over to the other side of 1 so the downwards motion throws you into the slider and not away from it I dunno, it's easily readable and this doesn't really require flowy motion here.
2. 00:16:196 (1,2,3) - spacing here is kinda icky. the way the spacing suddenly goes downwards and then back up for 3 and 4 is really awkward. maybe just make these all have the same distance? This whole section forms a pentagram there. Went for shapes a lot I guess.
3. 00:17:688 (2,3,4) - same issue as above ^
4. 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - way too many triangles idk even how to explain how much I hate this but I do, MORE DIVERSITY AJSDFJ this part is really unfun to play Triangles fit the best this part is not changing. Other people have found this really fun though BibleThump.

[Hard]

1. 00:18:511 (1,2) - unsnapped objects here, unrankable obviously so fix Wow I missed that, fixed. Thanks.
2. 00:34:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same thing as in natural gem, this is really hard to read and unfun to play. maybe like.. space them out more in different places or something. bleh Remapping this part completely at some time.
3. 00:41:726 (6,1) - lol, why not just put these on the y axis Final note is in the center to give a feel of finality.

good set yo

Maeglwn wrote:

eh

[Yuzu's Insane]

1. 00:03:596 (1) - overmapped It's... actually not! xD If you listen closely, it's a drum hit :3
2. yea there's like nothing wrong with this diff I really like it Thank you! <3

Maeglwn wrote:

[Kyshiro's Insane]

1. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks like a literal nightmare to read, so much flow and stuff that just makes no sense and it's just hurting my brain and agh idk I don't like it. guess maybe it's just me guess it's just you then lolol, it even makes sense according to the music, lower spacing at less strong beats
2. 00:07:575 (2,3,4,5) - make it a little bit less linear for fun factor maybe. zig zags and stuff kind of the style i used for this diff :c would ruin it
3. yea I really like this diff too, not much wrong here

Okoratu wrote:

Yuzu-'s Insane

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1. 
2. 00:14:206 (1,5) - I don't think these 2 1/1 sliders do the sounds on the red ticks there any justice, you could probably do something else star-pattern-y without ignoring 00:14:372 - and 00:15:367 - , if you can and want to, please do. At first I didn't even hear these sounds, but I'm going to keep the 1/1 sliders. It gives a feeling of pause, maybe even "suspence" between the jumps and it follows the violin very well.
3. 00:23:490 (3) - said the same thing about Natural gem, an 1/2 slider would / could be cool here imo I really don't see the reasoning for this, I hear nothing on the red tick. Besides, the 1/1 gap fits very well with the instrument playing in the background.
4. 00:23:158 (1,2,3) - also i think a triangle pattern could be way better here than a somehow forced looking stack thing, as it would support the sounds in each object better if you had a back forth movement similarly to 00:21:666 (5,6,7) - there 00:23:158 (1,2,3) - These fit better here, since I'm following the instrument on the song that's increasing in volume and pitch at the same time.
5. 00:34:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - i would pretty much appreciate if you scaled this pattern up a bit because things like 00:35:426 (2,3,4,5) - use much higher spacing, so stuff like that would be less sudden if the spacing in this one pattern was bigger than 00:32:608 (1,2,3) - and smaller than the aforementioned pattern - ... does that make sense? While it does make sense, if you notice closely 00:34:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - are very close in terms of spacing. These have a certain whistle hitsounding every 1/1 measure. 00:33:105 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:35:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - , however, use one additional whistle that I feel that fits best and adds more hype into the spacing which translates into increased spacing. That's my reasoning, we can discuss this for a better solution however if you feel like it.
6. 00:38:245 (2,3) - i again don't think that the sliders do the loud whistle sound-things that much justice, you started the thing with something like 00:32:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - , so why not end it with something like that The pitch at this section is dropping, it isn't bouncing around like the part where the triangles are mapped, and sliders map this perfectly imo. 00:38:908 (4,1,2) - These however, are circles, because mapping the downbeat with a slider tail would look bad, and the pitch goes back up again with 00:39:239 (2).
7. 00:42:058 (1) - could stack it with 00:40:731 (3) - to highlight the end of the map Did something different, stacked it with 00:41:063 (4) - since the pitch increase is fairly large and allows for the movement.

Gl with your map!

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Okoratu wrote:

General

• 
  

1. ok, here I am HI! o/
2. you added ryuu to honou no monogatari to tags but not 竜と炎の物語 which is the kanji for that and also featured right above their album title here
3. same goes for seifuu no meigetsu and 清風明月 I was pretty sure I added them lol. Adding now thx.
4. they also provide a 400x80 banner here
5. Does Audioleadin do anything? I mean the song starts at 00:00:281 - idk if this is an issue. I think it gets autofixed when the mapset gets qualified? Gotta ask someone about it though.

Natural Gem

• 
  

1. HP 6.5 would be easily possible imo Sure.
2. 00:11:885 (3) - the way this flows doesn't really complement the movement that 00:11:222 (1,2) - create that well so I'd advise you to curve it To be honest I like that curve but it indeed doesn't flow well. Fixed another way.
   
   Example

   
3. 00:23:490 (1) - because there's a sound on 00:23:656 - which might be considerably weaker than 00:23:490 - , this might not really be an issue i just think it captures the instrument better than just 2 circles with an 1/1 break between them The sounds in the red lines don't really need to be mapped with sliderends, would have to silence them and I hate doing that :/
4. 00:31:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - i found the way 00:26:806 (3,1,2) - read was way easier than this, considering that the whole rest afterwards is full circles this one can completely frustrate you if you're trying to FC it if this 1/3 stream before a full 1/2 part is hard to read. Done!
   The song is 45 seconds, what do

Hard

• 
  

1. ......
2. 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - due to ar 7 this stuff is pretty much hard to read if you don't have control over your fingers and know Hard Players are not all that good at that stuff Raised AR to 7,5. I really want these in here.
3. 00:04:259 (1,2) - same^ ^
4. 00:04:922 (4,1) - ok even i panickingly hit that one extremely early because it jsut stacks at the sliderend and is visible for so long Yeah you're right, fixed.
5. 00:08:901 - why did you skip this??? Fixed.
6. 00:24:153 - i don't get the SV change to something smaller than 1, because imo the part like 00:32:111 (1) - is more intense than the beginning which uses SV 1.0x if at all you could probably have the beginning be 0.8x and the end 1.0x I think they're okay though. Start is really powerful and plays the most instruments.
7. 00:32:111 - this part is a whole lot copy paste, which might end up looking a bit lazy compared to like.... all the insanes This is what fits most what am I supposed to do. Didn't copypaste it though!

Normal

• 
  

1. ...
2. 00:19:511 - is this green line necessary???, same goes for 00:25:479 - , 00:26:474 - Green lines are there for the ticks.
3. 00:25:811 (4,1) - if you move 00:26:143 (1,2) - a bit up the transition could be a bit better here Should be fine the way it is :/

Easy

• 
  

1. .
2. 00:08:238 (1) - it kind of annoys me that this one isn't parallel to the previous slider Not sure if I fixed it...
3. 00:30:121 (4) - if you moved it a bit to the left the transition could be better here Done
4. 00:34:100 (1) - this one is a bit REALLY close to the HP bar on the default skin Remapped those sliders because I hated them.

I think out of all diffs the hard needs most work |:, ppl stealing hitsounds should at least remove unnecessary green lines

Gl with your map!

neonat wrote:

So I'm here to take a look.
Please don't shoot me down Up to you :3

Easy

00:30:121 (4,5) - I find the movement here really awkward, because of how angled 00:31:116 (5) is towards the previous slider, instead of a smooth motion to that slider, it has to cut left once you reach it. Rotating it 30 degrees clockwise eases the angle: It does but then it doesn't transition well enough with the next object. Rotated 15 degrees + ruined blanket.

SPOILER

00:32:111 (1,1) - I know the time between them is a lot...but they really are too close, even if time allows some slack in spacing. Also 00:34:100 (1) appears before 00:32:111 (1) ends
00:36:090 (1,1) - ^ I don't think I'll change either of them, they are readable enough.

Normal

00:02:270 (1,2) - I just can't really see how it would be consistent and related to the part of 00:00:281 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm and music had changed, it felt like a different pattern, but it was still the same. 00:02:270 (1) - just feels weird being extended, instead of being a 1/2 slider. I think it should have the same pattern as 00:06:249 (1) because they are the same tune in the song: True enough, fixed.

SPOILER

Natural Gem

00:01:607 (2,3,4) - I just found the repetition of 00:00:612 (2,3,4) weird, I feel, a slight change of position could make it more exquisite I find this to be fitting the best since it is the exact same rhythm repeated once.
00:17:190 (1) - I am not sure about you, but I feel the flow to this slider could be better, it seems too low from 00:17:025 (4) - straight movement would be better than having an indentation in the movement, curling upwards to the slider. Maybe something like this, of course, adjust to blanket again, this just an example: Really, noone notices the pentagles here? Whatever. Changed.

SPOILER

00:30:950 (4,1) - you already broke the anti-jump here which you used at 00:26:806 (3,1) - with the change in pattern, it makes 00:31:448 (2,3,4,5) look weird with the lopsided look, I suggest adjusting how this looks also, to be different from 00:27:469 (2,3,4,5) as how the other notes did change too The antijump had 1/1 interval in every section. I don't use 1/2 antijumps in this diff except for the beginning. I don't really see what you want me to do here. I hope I did the right fix.
00:35:095 (1,2,3) - change the rotation direction for this one? You changed the direction for the 4th one 00:33:603 (1,2,3) - so possibly do so every 4th triangle?
00:36:587 (1,2,3) - ^ Nah I aint touching this part LOL

Good Luck Thank youuu :3

Okoratu wrote:

General

• 
  

1. ok, here I am
2. you added ryuu to honou no monogatari to tags but not 竜と炎の物語 which is the kanji for that and also featured right above their album title here
3. same goes for seifuu no meigetsu and 清風明月
4. they also provide a 400x80 banner here
5. Does Audioleadin do anything? I mean the song starts at 00:00:281 - idk if this is an issue.

Natural Gem

• 
  

1. HP 6.5 would be easily possible imo
2. 00:11:885 (3) - the way this flows doesn't really complement the movement that 00:11:222 (1,2) - create that well so I'd advise you to curve it
   
   Example

   
3. 00:23:490 (1) - because there's a sound on 00:23:656 - which might be considerably weaker than 00:23:490 - , this might not really be an issue i just think it captures the instrument better than just 2 circles with an 1/1 break between them
4. 00:31:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - i found the way 00:26:806 (3,1,2) - read was way easier than this, considering that the whole rest afterwards is full circles this one can completely frustrate you if you're trying to FC it if this 1/3 stream before a full 1/2 part is hard to read.
   The song is 45 seconds, what do

Irre's Extra
Was zum teufel heisst Irreversible eigentlich:

ah, ok - ok

• 
  

1. Du solltest wirklich drueber nachdenken die AR auf deiner Diff hier zu erhoehen, ich erklaer mal kurz wieso:
   
   Erklaerung, subjektiv

   Das Hier ist die groesse eines Approachcircles CS7AR9:
   
   Das hier ist zum vergleich die von CS4AR9:
   
   Das verhaeltnis is bei beiden 1.25x zwischen CS und Approachcircle, aber weil der Circle in CS7 so verdammt klein ist kommt mir der Approachcircle immer etwas langsamer vor als auf CS 4 und es spielt sich - , da das verhaeltnis von Approachcircle und Sliderlaenge anders zu sein scheint besser wenn die AR auch bei 9.3 um den dreh waere,
   ausserdem hast du die "Extra" mit 4.44 stars, was ich auch schon irgendwo grenzwertig finde, das einzige was diese map als extra qualifizieren koennte waere halt wirklich nur CS7 und nichts weiter
2. Entfern mal Green lines wie 00:07:575 - oder willst du mir jetzt erzaehlen dass du in diesem einen slider den slidertick leiser machst weil du kannst das hab ich gemacht weil ichs kann. : )
3. 00:08:072 - ich find 40% audo arg grenzwertig leise, 50% tun's eigentlich genauso gut fuer nen circle
4. 00:12:217 (5) - ich glaub du hast hier nen NC vergessen - siehe 00:10:227 (1,2) - , 00:09:233 (1,2) -
5. 00:18:185 (4,1) - Deine NCs wtf done
6. 00:24:153 - wenn du deine diff wirklich extra nennen willst solltest du vielleicht
   
   1. 00:20:257 (1,1) - nicht einfach 2 spinner ueber jede menge zeug legen (obwohl ich find die spinner passen ganz gut)
   2. bis 00:27:469 - nicht so wenig objects verwenden, weil das lied an sich ist 45 Sekunden und du machst 10 sekunden davon sachen, die man in einer normal oder Hard machen koennte - und nennst es dann extra ... weil CS7? warum muss in einer hohen diff alles voll gekleistert sein? da passt einfach zur Atmosphäre hier.
7. 00:30:121 (4) - wenn du die combo so kurz halten willst wie in 00:25:148 (1,2,3,4) - , solltest du vielleicht hier sinnvoller weise NCn
8. 00:35:758 (3,1) - das hier stackt ingame anders als alles andere, ich weiss nicht wieso, aber es scheint was anderes zu tun als 00:31:116 (7,1) - , 00:03:265 (1,2) - , 00:04:259 (1,2) - , 00:05:254 (1,2) - , 00:09:233 (1,2) - .....? uhm, fixed nc
9. 00:25:479 - sinnvoll etc - dasselbe gilt fuer andere copypasta lines ._. naja..
10. 00:39:239 (2) - koenntest diesen circle etwas nach oben bewegen, damit er insgesamt etwas mittiger in deinem Dreieck da erscheint:
    
    Beispiel

    

Eigentlich mag ich die diff ja, aber wieso musst du die Extra nennen.......?

Okoratu wrote:

[*]idk how to mod this
[*]00:33:934 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - please, all your patterns like 00:32:277 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - look like you made them geometrical shapes and stuff but this one is oddly off just to stack stuff which kinda destroys the spacing between 00:33:934 (4,1) - .... Didn't mean for (4) to be part of that pattern, changed it a bit so it's more obvious[/list][/notice]

neonat wrote:

Kyshiro's Insane

00:09:233 (4) - NC to be more consistent with the following few patterns? Fixed
00:13:212 (4) - ^ Would leave me with a combo of just 2 objects, in this case it's fine not to put an NC
00:38:079 (4) - ^ Fixed
00:37:582 (3,1) - stack them perfectly? doesn't really affect the spacing I'd rather not :c prefer to keep the triangle like pattern

CDFA wrote:

Irre:
Irreversible I'm going to kick your ass I'll tell you what god like shit like name me 1 person that thinks this is unironically fun that isn't just trying to be all new and counter culture and all like "THIS IS FUN BECAUSE IT ISDIFFERENT" and not taking into account that some people actually play the game.
00:16:196 (1) - This spacing is a poo poo fixed

CDFA wrote:

Bunnies owo

Natural Gem:
00:00:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It isn't very fun how this is all grouped together ;w; I kept them grouped together but changed the pattern around a little bit for more fittingness with the tunes!
00:27:469 (2,3,4,5) - Because of the 1/3, it'd be nice to at least put a NC, and preferably a spacing change. Good idea. Fixed this and the rest of the 1/3 stacks!

Normal:
00:01:275 (3) - Remove finish How'd that get there? Go away finish!
00:32:111 - From here onward, it's a little bit TOO easy, and it'd be nice if more notes were put here Told you my opinion on this over chat <:

This mapset looks good. Unless Im missing something painfully obvious, I'd be happy to bubble this. Good news!

EvilElvis wrote:

[Yuzu's Insane]
Big amount of finishes bothers me to be honest i don't see an issue with this but it's debatable
00:02:601 (3,4) - cntrl+g will make flow much better I want to keep this, it doesn't flow bad as is and ctrl+G as you mentioned would pretty much eliminate the jump between 00:02:436 (2,3) that I see as important to keep
00:03:265 (6,1,2,3,4) - you could try to make that cool stream over here nice **** bro k
00:34:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - well, mind some kind of increased spasing here? Because objects too close to each other it makes that star uncomfortable to play it

SPOILER

^if you curious about overlaps, it won't overlap anything in game okoratu mentioned this previously, fine I'll change ;_;

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