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Wakeshima Kanon - world's end, girl's rondo

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Natteke desu
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Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
[Ensane]
00:06:559 (1,1,2,1) - can you make it a bit less difficult? Well, it's not a big problem, but, since it's beginning of the map i'd recommend make it less jumpy
00:07:773 (4,5) - maybe it's too subjective, but i don't like this and simmilar moments because they killing all the movement which you made before, moreover what's about changing rhythm in this way (see the spoiler)? It will fit with song much better immo
SPOILER
00:09:680 (5) - two circles jump will make awesome emphazise for music. For example:
SPOILER
00:12:108 (4) - same
SPOILER
00:12:455 (6) - feels more like circle and triplet starting from red tic for me to be honest, also you could replace it by stream (yea, it's can be mapped variably)
00:14:883 (3,4,5) - to be honest because, i don't like that transition because spacings decreasing with no reason here and it plays awkward
00:17:831 (1) - remove dem NC
00:18:004 (2,1) - it's a bit uncomfortable to play for me because second slider almost invisible, something like that will be more playable :
SPOILER
^also don't forget to move 00:18:698 (2) - a bit to make SYMMETRY
00:21:646 (2) - try to move it to 306|290 it will make flow much better
00:22:513 (1,2) - could you please make them a bit more symmetric?
00:30:143 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - just a suggestion for whole things here based on my personal tastes ignore me plez
00:30:143 (3,4,5,6,1) -
SPOILER
00:30:836 (1,2,3,4) -
SPOILER
00:54:247 (1) - ALMOST UNRANKABLE (loved it <3)
00:59:968 (1,2) - 01:01:010 (1,2) - feels a bit strange because the second jump a lot bigger than first one when 00:59:968 - calls for something with bigger spacing
01:01:877 (3,1,2) - i loved it but be carefull with that, because sometimes it plays weridly
01:05:345 (1,2,3) - don't liked how that stack plays, could you make something like this (at least i found it more enjoyable)?
SPOILER
01:11:068 (6,1) - don't liked how these stacks plays, i'd recommend stacking it like that :
SPOILER
01:13:669 (1,2) - things about movement again
01:22:686 (2,3) - and again
01:28:582 (1,2,3) - Y U TROLLED MI

[Hawrd]
00:08:987 (3) - feels much more fitting with music for me
demsquare
00:10:894 (5,6,1) - i'd recommend make 1/4s here a bit more visible
00:17:137 (1,2,3,4,5) - what's about adding some jumpy things here? It may emphasize music a bit better, dunno
SPOILER
00:22:859 (2) - feels like you skipped important vocals on red tic here, maybe you could change rhythms a bit?

[Narmal]
modded vica irc

[Ezy]
same
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Irreversible
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Irreversible

EvilElvis wrote:

[Ensane]
00:06:559 (1,1,2,1) - can you make it a bit less difficult? Well, it's not a big problem, but, since it's beginning of the map i'd recommend make it less jumpy done
00:07:773 (4,5) - maybe it's too subjective, but i don't like this and simmilar moments because they killing all the movement which you made before, moreover what's about changing rhythm in this way (see the spoiler)? It will fit with song much better immo done but i couldn't really guess what your screen means XD
SPOILER
00:09:680 (5) - two circles jump will make awesome emphazise for music. For example: adjusted
SPOILER
00:12:108 (4) - same no fix, imo this isn't strong enough :3
SPOILER
00:12:455 (6) - feels more like circle and triplet starting from red tic for me to be honest, also you could replace it by stream (yea, it's can be mapped variably) Could be fixed, but i want to follow the 3/4 thingy
00:14:883 (3,4,5) - to be honest because, i don't like that transition because spacings decreasing with no reason here and it plays awkward made spacing equal
00:17:831 (1) - remove dem NC ok
00:18:004 (2,1) - it's a bit uncomfortable to play for me because second slider almost invisible, something like that will be more playable : good good
SPOILER
^also don't forget to move 00:18:698 (2) - a bit to make SYMMETRY
00:21:646 (2) - try to move it to 306|290 it will make flow much better done
00:22:513 (1,2) - could you please make them a bit more symmetric? they are symmetric
00:30:143 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - just a suggestion for whole things here based on my personal tastes ignore me plez hi elvis, how are you? xD well i don't like it THAT much.. xD <3
00:30:143 (3,4,5,6,1) -
SPOILER
00:30:836 (1,2,3,4) -
SPOILER
00:54:247 (1) - ALMOST UNRANKABLE (loved it <3) only good feedback, yay!
00:59:968 (1,2) - 01:01:010 (1,2) - feels a bit strange because the second jump a lot bigger than first one when 00:59:968 - calls for something with bigger spacing well.. i don't quite understand what you mean, can you give a suggestion in game? xD
01:01:877 (3,1,2) - i loved it but be carefull with that, because sometimes it plays weridly well it gives good emphasis xD
01:05:345 (1,2,3) - don't liked how that stack plays, could you make something like this (at least i found it more enjoyable)? fixed
SPOILER
01:11:068 (6,1) - don't liked how these stacks plays, i'd recommend stacking it like that : idkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk no ><

01:13:669 (1,2) - things about movement again ??????????????????????
01:22:686 (2,3) - and again ??????????????????????
01:28:582 (1,2,3) - Y U TROLLED MI ??????????????????????
really useful. Thanks a lot!
Damnae
Elite Storyboarder
640 posts
Joined July 2011
Damnae

Konei wrote:

  1. 00:36:732 (2,3) - Quite hard of a spacing change for a Hard, could make it a bit lower.
  2. 01:19:391 (1) - Could lower this spacing aswell, plays harsh.
  3. Really good difficulty indeed, maybe a bit harsh for a Hard.
Shortened both jumps, and also a few others.

EvilElvis wrote:

00:08:987 (3) - feels much more fitting with music for me I don't get what that fits? I follow the violin that starts at 00:08:640 - with 00:08:813 (2,3) - stacked, 00:08:987 (3) - for the drum, then its tail + 00:09:507 (4,5,1) - for the next 4 violin sounds. I'd miss 00:09:333 - this violin sound + kick if I had a 1/1 slider starting at 00:09:160 -
demsquare
00:10:894 (5,6,1) - i'd recommend make 1/4s here a bit more visible tried
00:17:137 (1,2,3,4,5) - what's about adding some jumpy things here? It may emphasize music a bit better, dunno I think all these circles in a row are enough emphasis
SPOILER
00:22:859 (2) - feels like you skipped important vocals on red tic here, maybe you could change rhythms a bit? yup changed
Thanks!

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Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
Irre is fast
Konei
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Konei
Missed some inconsistencies in hitsounding, sorry.

[Insane]

  1. 00:18:351 - The start should have a finish (Hard could consider this aswell).
  2. 00:29:449 - Missing a finish on this start aswell, according to Easy.

[Normal]

  1. 00:29:449 - Misses a finish on the start.
  2. 01:05:345 - Missing a finish according to Insane.

No kudos, of course.
Irreversible
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Irreversible
fixed, thanks
Natteke desu
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Natteke desu
bye broccoly goodlick luck
Irreversible
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XD thanks a lick lot
Myxo
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[General]

  1. The difficulty settings for Easy / Normal are not okay at the moment:
    1. Easy definitely needs AR 3.
    2. Normal should have AR 5.5. 6 seems too much for a Normal, even of this difficulty level. (Also, it will improve the diff spread to change it)
    3. OD 4 & HP 4 is maximum for Normal imo. It fits the spread much better this way.
  2. The Video has an Audio Track.
[Easy]

  1. 01:24:247 (4,5) - Please unstack them, don't use stacks (especially a single stack) in the easiest difficulty :)
[Damnae's Hard]

  1. You could use Irre's kiais, they make more sense to me and are less long ;w; (It's always better to reduce the amount of kiai a bit, it shouldn't cover half of the beatmap)
[Insane]

  1. 01:28:582 (1,2) - Change the Sampleset of the tails to Soft please, otherwise this sounds pretty overmapped.
Call me~
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Desperate-kun wrote:

[General]

  1. The difficulty settings for Easy / Normal are not okay at the moment:
    1. Easy definitely needs AR 3.
    2. Normal should have AR 5.5. 6 seems too much for a Normal, even of this difficulty level. (Also, it will improve the diff spread to change it)
    3. OD 4 & HP 4 is maximum for Normal imo. It fits the spread much better this way.
  2. The Video has an Audio Track.
done

[Easy]

  1. 01:24:247 (4,5) - Please unstack them, don't use stacks (especially a single stack) in the easiest difficulty :)
no

[Damnae's Hard]

  1. You could use Irre's kiais, they make more sense to me and are less long ;w; (It's always better to reduce the amount of kiai a bit, it shouldn't cover half of the beatmap)
no

[Insane]

  1. 01:28:582 (1,2) - Change the Sampleset of the tails to Soft please, otherwise this sounds pretty overmapped.
done

Call me~
Myxo
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We did some irc-modding where we deleted a circle in Insane that was snapped to vocals that were not onbeat and an unused hitsound-file.

Rebubbled (ﾉ 'ω')ﾉ
smallboat
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smallboat
Kanon fans come,just a bit suggestion.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Add j.c.staff tag,it is a anime company.
  2. Well,maybe the kiai time can consider to keep consistent in your diff ,just imo.
  3. Notice! Check your ins diff,there are the same green line in the same time point here,need to be fixed :
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:576 (1) - Why this this hitsound so quiet? Maybe you can set a hitsound with the same 00:14:189 (2) head here?
  2. 00:45:403 (2) - The same as above.
  3. 00:50:952 (2) - Seems add a finish or whistle stress the vocal better.
[Normal]
  1. 01:01:010 (2) - Suggest add a note follow the piano voice will be played better.
  2. 01:23:380 (3) - Add a whistle stress this vocal?
[Damnae's Hard]
  1. 01:26:241 (4) - This hitsound sounds like noisy,maybe can change the additions to Auto ,removed clap and add whistle will sounds like better.
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:952 (5) - The same as easy diff.
  2. 01:23:206 (3) - Add a whistle in end stress this vocal?
[Other]
  1. Cool mapset,if fix done ,call me back to qualify it.
Irreversible
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thanks! fixed all

updated~
Aka
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WHY I STILL CANT DL THIS?
smallboat
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smallboat
Okay,looks fine , this looks good to go for me

Kanon fans go go~ :3

Qualified ~ !
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
Gz~
Irreversible
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yay, thank you!
Piine
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Piine
Gratz~~~
Mao
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Mao
Gratz zur 10. Ranked Irre-Fluff <3
Umi
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Umi
gratz irre :3/
Breiz
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Breiz
thanks for the awesome map oo
Kiiwa
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Kiiwa
8-) 8-) gratz
Myxo
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Garzt :3
Gero
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Gero
Woow... I was thinking to mod your map today orz...
Grats irry :3
Rakuen
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Grats Irre~



Irreversible
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Gero wrote:

Woow... I was thinking to mod your map today orz...
Grats irry :3
i thought your computer was broken again? v_v sorry!


thanks everyone!! :D
Broccoly
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Broccoly
bye irre
Irreversible
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BYE BROCCOLY
Broccoly
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Broccoly
PLZ NO UNRANK
Aka
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Aka
broccoly crazy
Gero
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Gero
Maybe it's just me but I think that these circles 00:50:489 (2,4) - are 1/3 rhythm.
Lust
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Gero asked me to confirm this and yes, I can reassure him that the rhythm there is indeed 1/3. Listen to it on 25% playback and you can hear the sounds on 00:50:489 - here and 00:50:836 -. Although the second one is not as clear as the first one, it is there without a doubt.
Broccoly
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Broccoly
please....
Damnae
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Damnae
I think you're hallucinating 1/3, these are 1/4 like the other triples before.
Fycho
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1/4 is fine imo, though the beats are at 1/3. Also triplets make it easier to hit than 1/3 snap. This can be recognized as a kind of self-created rhythm.
those
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those

Fycho wrote:

self-created rhythm.
...which tells us it shouldn't be there in the first place.

If it is indeed 1/3, it should be mapped in 1/3.
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Just ep 2, so fast!!
Gratz!! Irre-chan :D
Zero__wind
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I told ya

Zero__wind wrote:

Irre is fast
and btw, video with audio track is no longer unrankable for quite a while oh what I'm wrong ?
Nyukai
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seems like I'm a bit late to comment that 00:50:518 (2,4) - should be 1/3 snapped

I guess
Kenezz
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Be sure to check the title again, is kinda weird because in some places is without the space between the comma and "girl's" and others with the space. (Even in the official site exists both versions lol). In three days is the official cd release, so maybe wait until to be sure with the correct title is.

Just keep this in mind in case of an unqualified.
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