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Awaken has last logged in two months ago... Toumei Elegy's done for for now.
I really hope he comes back asap, I loved his maps and especially this map.
I really hope he comes back asap, I loved his maps and especially this map.
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I loved his maps and especially this map.
Never forget...
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Never forget...
This map
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awakened
has been
awakened
old bg was cooler imo 
I'm going to miss the old BG 
Though, I do respect the creators wish if he wants to use another BG.
Though, I do respect the creators wish if he wants to use another BG.
SPOILER
15:06 Awaken: hi index, do you have some time for testplay now?
15:07 _index: uh
15:07 _index: i might, but dont expect too much from me
15:07 *Awaken is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/724015 Konuko - Toumei Elegy]
15:07 Awaken: ><
15:07 Awaken: I actually remap many parts
15:08 Awaken: and need some feeling about before and after
15:14 _index: okay
15:14 _index: everything ill say is completely subjective, please take that into account
15:14 _index: and also hr, oh fuck, i forgot to turn it off
15:14 _index: theres few patterns that plays horribly
15:15 _index: 00:22:675 (1,2,3,4,5) -
15:15 _index: this one for example
15:15 _index: reverse slider just doesnt fit here
15:16 Awaken: hmm okay, i also would like to change
15:16 Awaken: anything else
15:17 _index: i think my editor is bugged
15:17 _index: i cant select and copy notes
15:17 _index: 01:08:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also this one, consider changing triple to double?
15:17 Awaken: restart it yah
15:18 _index: or maybe something with it, idk
15:18 _index: triple kinda ruins flow while playing, but that might be just me
15:19 _index: if u're sure its cool, ignore me then
15:19 _index: 01:12:857 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this one, i just dont know, it plays really strange
15:19 _index: if i remember correctly, before remap there was just a bunch of singles
15:19 _index: try it in a nice patterns, seems like an okay idea
15:20 Awaken: yes it is and when I change a pattern and use the same rhythm, do you think how it is?
15:21 _index: well, if you will change slider to something else
15:21 _index: then yeah, it should be okay
15:21 _index: right now it feels too much stacked
15:21 Awaken: umm okay
15:21 _index: 02:51:311 (1) - starting from there, maybe you should lower SV a bit?
15:21 _index: like a build-up
15:22 _index: i feel there can be like 3 parts
15:23 _index: everything else plays smoothly
15:23 Awaken: if the last kiai sliders flows well?
15:23 _index: completely
15:23 _index: just those i mentioned seems off-side
15:24 _index: everything else is completely fine
15:24 Awaken: really glad to hear that
15:24 _index: sorry if u was mean or not correct somewhere
15:24 Awaken: i'll try to fix what you mention
15:24 _index: actually modding for first time
15:24 _index: i suck balls at it haha
15:24 Awaken: hah you may post it for a kudosu xD
15:25 _index: ya prob
15:25 _index: i always wanted to try, but idk, i just dont feel like correcting someone's own style of mapping
15:26 Awaken: sometimes you'll really get them better and keep their styles as well
15:07 _index: uh
15:07 _index: i might, but dont expect too much from me
15:07 *Awaken is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/724015 Konuko - Toumei Elegy]
15:07 Awaken: ><
15:07 Awaken: I actually remap many parts
15:08 Awaken: and need some feeling about before and after
15:14 _index: okay
15:14 _index: everything ill say is completely subjective, please take that into account
15:14 _index: and also hr, oh fuck, i forgot to turn it off
15:14 _index: theres few patterns that plays horribly
15:15 _index: 00:22:675 (1,2,3,4,5) -
15:15 _index: this one for example
15:15 _index: reverse slider just doesnt fit here
15:16 Awaken: hmm okay, i also would like to change
15:16 Awaken: anything else
15:17 _index: i think my editor is bugged
15:17 _index: i cant select and copy notes
15:17 _index: 01:08:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - also this one, consider changing triple to double?
15:17 Awaken: restart it yah
15:18 _index: or maybe something with it, idk
15:18 _index: triple kinda ruins flow while playing, but that might be just me
15:19 _index: if u're sure its cool, ignore me then
15:19 _index: 01:12:857 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this one, i just dont know, it plays really strange
15:19 _index: if i remember correctly, before remap there was just a bunch of singles
15:19 _index: try it in a nice patterns, seems like an okay idea
15:20 Awaken: yes it is and when I change a pattern and use the same rhythm, do you think how it is?
15:21 _index: well, if you will change slider to something else
15:21 _index: then yeah, it should be okay
15:21 _index: right now it feels too much stacked
15:21 Awaken: umm okay
15:21 _index: 02:51:311 (1) - starting from there, maybe you should lower SV a bit?
15:21 _index: like a build-up
15:22 _index: i feel there can be like 3 parts
15:23 _index: everything else plays smoothly
15:23 Awaken: if the last kiai sliders flows well?
15:23 _index: completely
15:23 _index: just those i mentioned seems off-side
15:24 _index: everything else is completely fine
15:24 Awaken: really glad to hear that
15:24 _index: sorry if u was mean or not correct somewhere
15:24 Awaken: i'll try to fix what you mention
15:24 _index: actually modding for first time
15:24 _index: i suck balls at it haha
15:24 Awaken: hah you may post it for a kudosu xD
15:25 _index: ya prob
15:25 _index: i always wanted to try, but idk, i just dont feel like correcting someone's own style of mapping
15:26 Awaken: sometimes you'll really get them better and keep their styles as well
1516now
I randomly played the current version. the Extra and
01:01:402 (1) - I think this is just a mistake here, right? Bcs that's an horrible pause lol.
01:01:402 (1) - I think this is just a mistake here, right? Bcs that's an horrible pause lol.
Hello Awaken! I got interested in your map, so here I go!
While I modding, I went through the whole thread and found posts left with ungiven kudosu. You might want to check if you want.
I'll try to give more opinions until the map satisfied me if I have any. Call me back!
General
- normal-slidertick6.wav doesn't seem to be used. You'll either have to use it or delete it.
- The background could be JPG file because of the large filesize. Saving as JPG will get a low filesize, but isn't lossless as PNG. However there wouldn't really have a difference unless you get deep, but yeah, you could still save some KBs when it's JPG.
Here's a JPG version
Regraz's Normal
- 02:36:039 (3,1,2) - Because of the stack and different rhythm, this could cause readability problems. I'll have to suggest you try something else. You can try to change the rhythm (something like slider, circle, and slider) or change the placement and change the patterns.
Hard
- 00:28:402 - You seem to have missed something on the big gap. You should do something like you do in the following, like 00:29:493 (1,2) .
This is applicable to 01:22:948 . - 00:46:130 (2) - Maybe flipping it horizontally (Ctrl + H) would get a better flow since the previous slider ends to go right and the following hitcircle is also gone to the right. And maybe reduce the distance between this and the previous slider. Seems random.
- 01:29:493 (2,3) - I don't think this is suitable for Hard. The length of those two repeat sliders are not even, which can be hard to situate when to stop and restart. This is put in consideration because currently they fit perfectly the music. But if you decide to change it, try this:
G's Insane
- 01:18:039 (2,3) - Move it a little down because it almost touches the bar.
- 01:18:448 (3) - I barely can see this circle due to the stack. Do this instead:
Another
- 00:06:584 (3) - There's a similar case in your hardest difficulty which you'll see later (because I mod the last one first). Starting from the very first object, you kind of strictly follow the vocals. Yet, the slider I mentioned should then follow the vocals, else it sounds weird (well, for me) and gets a little inconsistent. I suggest you replace it by two 1/2 sliders on 1/1 snap.
- 00:31:130 (3) - Not sure if you intended to add a circle here, but this feels out of blue. Similar to above, it hits on a vocal yet previously you follow the drum. I would remove it.
- 00:40:402 (1,2) - 00:41:493 (1,2) - Those types of patterns with that kind of placement don't flow very well. I suggest you try something else. I don't have anything to suggest, but I know you have some ideas.
- 00:49:948 (3,1) - It seems hard to catch the slider (1) since the distance it quite big. How about you nerf it a little, maybe ~2.60x? Something like in the previous patterns would fit best.
- 01:09:857 (1,2,3,4,1) - C-C-Combo breaker! These suddenly turned into anti-jumps and don't play very well when you have jumps before. It makes a little uncomfortable move to the arm. Try this rhythm instead:
- 01:48:857 (2) - Sounds weird because the tail is on a downbeat which holds generally a strong beat, and something clickable would go better. Try turning this into a 1/2 slider and a circle, or two 1/2 sliders.
This can be also applied to 01:55:948 (2) . - 01:49:539 (6,1) - Petite imperfection sur le blanket.
- 02:05:766 (2) - I think you add an extra finish on the head. Doesn't sound nice when you have 02:05:493 (1) with a finish on its head.
- 03:19:266 - Maybe a circle here? It felt something is missing.
Riziawa's Couple Extra
- 01:01:675 to 01:02:220 - Something is OBVIOUSLY missing lol.
- 01:50:902 (2,3) - I suggest you try these position instead:
Although I am not a really pro player, this still plays weird. It's best if you go with a unique movement, like you don't have to return. I had a little difficulty playing 01:51:175 (4,1,2) . I can't explain it to you well, but if you have questions about that, I'll try my best. - 02:05:220 (1) - Is the 1/8 repeat slider intended? Not sure if 1/8 will do the trick, as it isn't really the right snap, unless I'm deaf.
- 02:09:448 (7,8) - This distance pretty large yet doesn't emphasize anything in the music. I would just leave a big jump between 02:09:584 (8,1) instead of both as (1) currently holds a stronger beat than (8). Which means that you should reduce a little the distance to get a distance around 2.30 ~ 2.50x.
Second Gonkanau
- 00:22:130 to 00:27:311 - After that drum hitsound, you seem to forget to add hitsounds for this part.
- 00:23:766 (1,2) - Honestly, it would suit better if you switch the sliders in the timeline. Which means that the long slider starts first, then the short in the following. Having a clickable object on 00:24:039 doesn't get any emphasis due to the lack of strong sound in my opinion, yet having it on 00:24:175 will be best. This way, I don't know how the instrument used as a foreground is called, but it'll follow "that" sound (it's a sound aside the drums and guitar). Also it will keep consistency since you did that to 00:12:993 (1,2) - 00:21:720 (1,2) and others.
- 00:26:221 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This is absolutely not following anything in this part of the music, quite overmapped, and it just adds useless intensity. You should just try something that would follow the music better. I highly recommend you try something else, try this rhythm instead:
- 00:40:402 (1,1) - I would want to see them somewhere other than the right side of the playfield. It's getting annoying and no fun when you have 00:38:220 (1,1) and others going on the same direction over and over. Doesn't also quite follow the music to me as 00:40:402 gets a new tone due to the beat.
- 01:01:130 (1) - The whistle hitsounds are really noisy for a quiet part. I'd remove all whistles on that slider. This also applies to 03:07:675 (1) .
- 01:10:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You have this followed by the vocals, yet later you changed the rhythms and you followed the instruments, which can be an obvious inconsistency to me. It's so weird to have that, especially the triplets like 01:12:857 (2,3,4) where they all doesn't sound good. Since you follow mostly the instruments, it's best that you stick with the instruments. You can still follow the vocals, but mainly, it should be the instruments.
- 01:11:220 (2) - It could get more "flowy" if you flip it horizontally (Ctrl + H). You have previously 01:10:811 (4) that goes on the same direction as the 1/2 slider. It currently makes me feel uncomfortable to play because of the same direction.
- 01:41:084 (3) - Little imperfection, but was noticeable when I testplay. The distances in-between are not even, and it makes feel weird lol. Just make them 1.30x ~ 1.40x and it should fine.
- 01:43:675 (6) - Might need a new combo if you follow a pattern.
- 01:56:220 (6) - It sounds better for the drums and "that sound" if you extend this slider into a 1/2 length and remove 01:56:357 (1,2) . Currently it sounds random and not suiting for this part.
While I modding, I went through the whole thread and found posts left with ungiven kudosu. You might want to check if you want.
I'll try to give more opinions until the map satisfied me if I have any. Call me back!
rank this map at october 4th pls
This re-map ruined the map. It used to be good, now it's bad.
Good luck, though.
Good luck, though.
idk about last diff, but i think the extra is better than before.-Enzy- wrote:
This re-map ruined the map. It used to be good, now it's bad.
Good luck, though.
or maybe it's my imagination.