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Demetori - Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End

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swish
;)
Ignacio_old
:D i like it
Hadez
really good map, STAR :)
peppercatastrop
star
NonxE
star ;)
Valetine_old
star :D
Topic Starter
Lybydose
star~
yeahyeahyeahhh

Nocturne wrote:

star~
xierbaliti

Lybydose wrote:

star~
Topic Starter
Lybydose
ok but seriously I'm actually going to finish this soon, just need to do easy + hitsounds
KogumaX
star~☆
Thite
:D
Void
pew pew
YGOkid8
yeah tell me what you think
Download: Demetori - Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End (Lybydose) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu

EDIT: i'm freakin' done. imo, delete your Easy and replace with mine. of course if you don't like mine you don't have to add it at all :o
Download: Demetori - Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End (short ver.) (Lybydose) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu

you may have to change some things to make it match the other diffs, since mine was off the old one (not the newly updated one) so yeahhhh

Topic Starter
Lybydose
Ok added. I made two changes: moved a note somewhere and set tick rate 2. Also slightly increased the difficulty of my Easy and kept it too, so yours is the easiest.

Now waiting for Cyclone to play the Taiko and tell me how much it sucks so I can remove it, then DONE.
Norn_NNN
:)
YGOkid8
i still stand by 5/6 diffs. is way too many esp. with a long song but of course that's just my opinion :)
speaking of long songs, if this is the short version, i shudder to think about the long version

also with that beat you moved 02:55:149 (1) - it would've been nice if you did spacing fixes as well :/
...if um, you didn't do that and that was a mistake on my part, could you move it back a red tick? ^.^
Topic Starter
Lybydose
actually it was 03:00:374 (2) - that I moved
YGOkid8
oh, okay. didn't notice that :S
anyway, now the mods await
YTYuyu
Star :D
GiNa
I believe this map is not going for app.
Star :)
Charles445
If I leave out difficulties, that means I didn't find anything in them.

General
In the tags, it should be YGOKid8, not YGOKid9

YGOkid8's Easy
Set the volume to 80%

Normal
01:01:217 (3,4) - I don't think that spacing is a good idea for a Normal.
02:25:823 (2) - Move one grid to the right (Grid 3)
02:27:846 (8) - ^^
02:51:778 (1) - Add finish
03:13:351 (1) - ^^

Hard
01:47:228 (1,2,3) - This finish spam sounds bad
02:54:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Not sure if that spacing is a good idea. It's okay though.
02:56:160 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
03:16:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^
03:17:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^
Topic Starter
Lybydose
changed most things (everything but the increasing spacing part in Hard)
Waryas
woot
xierbaliti
-Hard-
01:17:565 (4) - nazi spacing, 1 grid left.
03:23:126 (2) - ^ , 1 grid up?

-Lunatic-
01:12:339 (4) - maybe you need finish here.
01:24:474 (6) - can't understand why a tiny jump here ._. in my opinion, add a circle at 01:24:644, and let the spinner start at 01:24:728 will be better. maybe like this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96490
02:28:014 (12) - bad spacing
02:31:384 (6) - 2 grid right
02:37:284 (9) - how about let the spinner start at 02:37:705, and add a 5 circles stream or a slider with 4 repeats? for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96501
02:58:520 (6) - make this jump bigger? like 02:57:003 (1)
03:01:048 (15) - the spacing seems bad here, 2 gird left?

ok. that's all.
Topic Starter
Lybydose

xierbaliti wrote:

-Hard-
01:17:565 (4) - nazi spacing, 1 grid left. k
03:23:126 (2) - ^ , 1 grid up? did you mean 1 left? I did that

-Lunatic-
01:12:339 (4) - maybe you need finish here. added finish here in every difficulty
01:24:474 (6) - can't understand why a tiny jump here ._. in my opinion, add a circle at 01:24:644, and let the spinner start at 01:24:728 will be better. maybe like this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96490 the spinner was too short after I did that, so I made a totally different pattern instead
02:28:014 (12) - bad spacing fixed this
02:31:384 (6) - 2 grid right moved the other side 2 grid right instead
02:37:284 (9) - how about let the spinner start at 02:37:705, and add a 5 circles stream or a slider with 4 repeats? for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/96501 did almost that exact pattern
02:58:520 (6) - make this jump bigger? like 02:57:003 (1)
03:01:048 (15) - the spacing seems bad here, 2 gird left? moved this somewhere
Mismagius
xierbaliti

Blue Dragon wrote:

That’s it!
DarkDunskin
Delicious :3
Jenny
Stared, since i like that song and that map :)
Charsi
star
SoulPrism
I like song just star ~ :oops:
Louis Cyphre
eh... i'm sorry, but shouldn't it be (Short ver.) instead of (short ver.) ? ._.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26334
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28489
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27315
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29105
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25967
. . .
Sure

Louis Cyphre wrote:

eh... i'm sorry, but shouldn't it be (Short ver.) instead of (short ver.) ? ._.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26334
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28489
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27315
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29105
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25967
. . .
(Short Ver.) is most used. We need a standardized form.
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... m=0&page=1
Ikillforpies
Star~
creativ_old
Star.
Natteke

ykcarrot wrote:

Louis Cyphre wrote:

eh... i'm sorry, but shouldn't it be (Short ver.) instead of (short ver.) ? ._.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26334
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28489
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27315
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29105
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/25967
. . .
(Short Ver.) is most used. We need a standardized form.
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... m=0&page=1
Does it really matter? One letter won't change much
Sure

Natteke wrote:

Does it really matter? One letter won't change much
No, it doesn't.
Just, unified form looks better.
Glass
or just put nothing at the end \:D/
Kite
.
YGOkid8

Lybydose wrote:

actually it was 03:00:374 (2) - that I moved
yeah um is it possible to change it back to how it was before? i actually prefer it that way D: (moving the (2) forward a red tick and killing (3) i think)
pieguyn
Perhaps try these combo colors?

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 64,0,128
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 0,0,255
Just a suggestion and there's no need to do it, but imo it looks a bit nicer.

star :)
yeahyeahyeahhh

Glass wrote:

or just put nothing at the end \:D/
Topic Starter
Lybydose

YGOkid8 wrote:

Lybydose wrote:

actually it was 03:00:374 (2) - that I moved
yeah um is it possible to change it back to how it was before? i actually prefer it that way D: (moving the (2) forward a red tick and killing (3) i think)
but it's so....weird like that, that note isn't emphasized at all in the song; it was the only thing in the map that felt off >_>
YGOkid8
but imo, it's a sudden change because the succession of the beats are closer than the others throughout the map (if you know what i mean). for me, it was really unexpected :/
Topic Starter
Lybydose
well, it's no closer than say 03:07:284 (2,3,1) or 03:02:565 (1,2,3) -
YGOkid8
those are all on the white ticks, so it's easier to predict. the one you changed makes it the only one that goes offbeat really suddenly. even with the stuff i did near the beginning, those were slider stuff so it's easier to play. basically it's sudden and unexpected and me no like D:
yeahyeahyeahhh

YGOkid8 wrote:

those are all on the white ticks, so it's easier to predict. the one you changed makes it the only one that goes offbeat really suddenly. even with the stuff i did near the beginning, those were slider stuff so it's easier to play. basically it's sudden and unexpected and me no like D:
I personally don't really see what you're trying to do here.... if anything the way you want to put it back is more confusing and unexpected than whats current. What's current is fine and makes 100% sense IMO.

Edit:
If you really think its that confusing.. make it a slider... I guess
YGOkid8
main reason i don't like it is because it'd be the only time i'd be doing that in my diff, which is why i find it sudden and unexpected

edit: i've got an idea, just wait a bit

edit: will this do?
Download: Demetori - Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End (short ver.) (Lybydose) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Lybydose
ok, uploaded that one
Mercurius
8-)
xierbaliti
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ re
yeahyeahyeahhh

xierbaliti wrote:

(ノ゚ω゚)ノ re
Sugisaki Ringo
That's crazy。。。
Garven
[YGOkid8's Easy]
01:26:835 (3) - These kinds of sliders don't feel like they belong in Easy diffs to me. There are several throughout though. Meh.
01:55:823 (1,2) - And sliders like this can be confusing as to when they are going to end - having another object to hit one beat after the end of one is possibly quite confusing.
03:01:216 (3) - ^

[Easy]
01:17:902 (1) - I just have to say that I love the rhythm with these sliders.

[Normal]
01:11:329 (2,3,4,5) - This spacing was kind of surprising, but I can see why you did it.
01:17:902 (1,2) - Again here, but it feels like it's going a bit beyond the Normal-level of jump. Same with c/p later on.
01:43:014 (3) - Maybe have this bow downwards a little so the slider body doesn't overlap with the circle part of the 4?

[Hard]
AR7, maybe?
02:28:183 (1) - Wow, I foresee a LOT of deaths here. Huge difficulty spike. :/

[Lunatic]
Damn.
lolcubes
Loved the Lunatic, although I recommend lowering HP drain by 1 notch, once you miss a few notes (well I suppose you shouldn't be missing doh) it's near impossible to get the hp back. :|
Too hard on HR for me though. :3
Topic Starter
Lybydose

Garven wrote:

[YGOkid8's Easy]
01:26:835 (3) - These kinds of sliders don't feel like they belong in Easy diffs to me. There are several throughout though. Meh.
01:55:823 (1,2) - And sliders like this can be confusing as to when they are going to end - having another object to hit one beat after the end of one is possibly quite confusing.
03:01:216 (3) - ^

Though I agree, I'm going to ask YGO what he wants to do

[Easy]
01:17:902 (1) - I just have to say that I love the rhythm with these sliders.

[Normal]
01:11:329 (2,3,4,5) - This spacing was kind of surprising, but I can see why you did it.
01:17:902 (1,2) - Again here, but it feels like it's going a bit beyond the Normal-level of jump. Same with c/p later on. changed this nevermind, I made a lot of changes involving using sliders similar to Easy; this fixed a later spacing jump problem and also fixed like a billion sliders too and also made me horizontally flip pretty much the entire map and also make long run-on sentences
01:43:014 (3) - Maybe have this bow downwards a little so the slider body doesn't overlap with the circle part of the 4? changed this and it took waaaay longer than it probably should have

[Hard]
AR7, maybe? yeah ok
02:28:183 (1) - Wow, I foresee a LOT of deaths here. Huge difficulty spike. :/ somewhat remapped this section. it's easier now (maybe)

[Lunatic]
Damn.

lolcubes wrote:

Loved the Lunatic, although I recommend lowering HP drain by 1 notch, once you miss a few notes (well I suppose you shouldn't be missing doh) it's near impossible to get the hp back. :|
Too hard on HR for me though. :3
I kind of want to do this, but the star difficulty system is really stupid and apparently HP Drain 7 is some magic number that always reduces difficulty to 4.90, and this would make "Hard" appear to be more difficult, and I'd rather it show up correctly like that.

Also changed some stuff like adding a couple claps in Lunatic, changing the sliders at 01:12:677 (5,6) in Hard, and making the stacks at 01:30:205 (5,6) into sliders.
lolcubes

Lybydose wrote:

I kind of want to do this, but the star difficulty system is really stupid and apparently HP Drain 7 is some magic number that always reduces difficulty to 4.90, and this would make "Hard" appear to be more difficult, and I'd rather it show up correctly like that.
Fair enough. Current drain is alright for people who can follow such hard maps, but I was just pointing out that for people who are just starting ar9 maps might not get far.
Still, thumbs up, the map looks very nice.
YGOkid8

Garven wrote:

[YGOkid8's Easy]
01:26:835 (3) - These kinds of sliders don't feel like they belong in Easy diffs to me. There are several throughout though. Meh.
01:55:823 (1,2) - And sliders like this can be confusing as to when they are going to end - having another object to hit one beat after the end of one is possibly quite confusing.
03:01:216 (3) - ^
i fixed up those don't belong in easy sliders, except for one. otherwise it'd be too boring imo :U
not 100% sure why you were trying to say with those other sliders, but hopefully this made it better

EDIT: made one other change that Garven asked me to do.
Download: Demetori - Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End (Lybydose) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu
Jing
good!very nice :)
Garven
[YGO]
02:16:217 (2,3) - These felt like they'd be better as a slider imo
02:36:273 (1,2,3) - Considering the rhythms you used up to here, suddenly sticking to the white tick for 2 was kind of disorienting. -via IRC: YGO said these were fine, so no change-

YGO just edited his older post with the update.

[Easy]
02:37:453 (1) - Maybe start this at 02:37:453 (1) - and end at 02:39:475 - ? If you do, remove the finish

[Hard]
02:05:767 (6,7) - It keeps feeling weird having a stack here, but it still plays okay. *shrug*
02:35:430 (4,5) - Maybe tone this one down a tad? A grid or two felt a little better for this level of difficulty
Topic Starter
Lybydose

Garven wrote:

[YGO]
02:16:217 (2,3) - These felt like they'd be better as a slider imo
02:36:273 (1,2,3) - Considering the rhythms you used up to here, suddenly sticking to the white tick for 2 was kind of disorienting. -via IRC: YGO said these were fine, so no change-

YGO just edited his older post with the update.

[Easy]
02:37:453 (1) - Maybe start this at 02:37:453 (1) - and end at 02:39:475 - ? If you do, remove the finish made it end at the next white tick instead (sounds better to me)

[Hard]
02:05:767 (6,7) - It keeps feeling weird having a stack here, but it still plays okay. *shrug* changed this. I think. probably. The editor was acting really buggy with the combo numbers.
02:35:430 (4,5) - Maybe tone this one down a tad? A grid or two felt a little better for this level of difficulty Made it a star pattern instead, which I think is easier than the ztrot style thing.
Also made the additional change of spacing out 03:12:677 (1,2) because I didn't really like them stacked how they were before.

Also removed a clap somewhere on Normal and Hard.

Oh right, and I also made 02:39:644 (1,2) in Normal use soft hits to match the other difficulties.
YGOkid8
because i am a poop head, i misread the section Garven wanted me to change. kinda remapped that whole small area because i just realised how much i don't like those spinners so close to each other.

Download: Demetori - Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End (Lybydose) [YGOkid8's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Lybydose
Uploaded that
yeahyeahyeahhh
:idea:
Garven
yeahyeahyeahhh


Ranked, congrats!
ooooooops
2012!
star~! :)
kfun25500
STAR!!!!
I will be back
2012!
NeNe_GoShyuJiN
cool :)
zxc2043
8-)
Ash Cat
Moee~ <3
hjijsjdis
star
INaBaAAA
:)
Wishy
Wow I forgot to star this.
Karyuken
star :) :) :)
yeahyeahyeahhh
POSTING IN YOUR BEATMAP TOPIC
yeahyeahyeahhh
8-)
Alace
well designed diffs,good diff spread
should be ranked!!
Waryas
gratz
yeahyeahyeahhh
Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:01 am (over 1 year ago)

8-)
KRZY
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Anticloud
excellent map finally be ranked
Dai
LOL
Equivalent_old
You slow mapper Lybydose.... Anyway, congratz on rank
xierbaliti
wow finally ranked~
grats :3
Mitiai
wow. gratz^
Glass
wat anime is the bg from?? plis gibe huaheuaheau
Ikillforpies
Gz on ranking~
Phish_old
over one year ago? ._____.
k... ?
gz for ranked c: nice map
Garr
HELLO WORLD :D
Andrea
What kind of necro is this? You should explain me, seriously.
Acecade
Oh my god this is amazing. ;w;
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