Planetboom - River Flow · forum

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-17T23:30:01+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 2월 26일 금요일 at 오후 8:52:33

Artist: Planetboom
Title: River Flow
Source: DJMAX
Tags: Black Square Trilogy Ayamy
BPM: 175
Filesize: 9419kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.98 stars, 329 notes)
Normal (3.75 stars, 177 notes)

Download: Planetboom - River Flow
Download: Planetboom - River Flow (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 20th beatmap

Yeah! XD

Groovy Pop song in DJMAX Series
Included in DJMAX Online, Trilogy, and BLACK SQUARE

Composed by Planetboom
Visualized by Ayamy & Eter

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2010-02-26T11:55:50+00:00, edited 12 times in total.

subarasikibuta

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subarasikibuta 2010-02-18T05:44:55+00:00

omg finally you made it lol. This is my most favourite song!> <

lzy

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Joined July 2009

lzy 2010-02-18T05:52:12+00:00

GJ :33
i like ur style,nice song and nice map:333

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-02-18T14:16:45+00:00

[General]

Do not forget to delete osb.file if you didn't use it :3
soft-hitclap sounds a little loud, lower it a bit if possible (soft-hitfinish is proper)
And I think countdown doesn't fit this song :/ It's boring. But anyway, it's all depends on you

[Normal]

00:45:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Here sounds not so good, although background music has drum sound here like you set, but it's really loud. If you don't lower the sound of soft-hitclap, at least set a timing section at this part to low hitsound a bit, that would be sound better
01:09:256 (2) - 1 grid right (lv3)

[Hard]

00:11:999 (1) - unrankable spinner, auto play could only get 1000 bonus (auto play should at least could get 2000)

A nice map as usual
star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-18T14:42:41+00:00

fixed :3
thank you for modding XD

Nakagawa-Kanon

Featured Artist

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Nakagawa-Kanon 2010-02-18T15:18:54+00:00

mod in irc!
이라고 하고시픈데

[Hard]
00:03:771 (3) - 여기 슬라이더 화면 뚫었으니까 좀 올리세요
참고로 에딧할때 뚤리지만 플레이할때 안뚫리므로
그래도 딴지걸수 있으므로 난 nazi 하니깐

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2010-02-18T15:26:17+00:00

하이

Normal

음, 스피너는 없네요

01:14:410 (5) 더 완벽한 대칭 (2번째 점을 1칸 밑으로)
01:16:125 (2) 더 완벽한 대칭 (3번째 점을 1칸 밑으로)
01:42:525 (5) 휘슬
01:54:867 (3) ^

Hard

굳

스타

Astom

1,588 posts

Joined October 2008

Astom 2010-02-18T21:02:10+00:00

hello, I had no problem in playing the song

[hard]
-No problem

good luck ;3

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-19T01:57:14+00:00

fixed :3

Arusha Shuna

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Arusha Shuna 2010-02-19T11:11:23+00:00

Request Accepted
OMG lots of nazis >_<

General
need an easier diff?
Normal
00:26:410 (1) - make them symetry?
00:27:782 (2) - ^
00:42:867 (1) - line up w/ 00:42:353 (7)?
Hard
00:20:239 (5,6) - move down 3 tiny grid & left 1 tiny grid
00:24:696 (3) - line up w/ 00:24:182 (2)'s slider end
00:31:039 (3,4) - left 1 tiny grid
00:51:610 (2) - line up w/ 00:51:096 (1)
01:42:696 (3) - make the slider shape mirror of 01:42:010 (1)?
01:43:553 (5) - make the slider shape mirror of 01:43:210 (4)
01:45:439 (4) - screenshot below

SPOILER

move that point move 1 tiny grid down
01:46:810 (4) - screenshot below

SPOILER

move that point 1 tiny grid up

Another great map! STAR!

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-19T11:12:43+00:00

All fine to me

Star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-19T12:05:30+00:00

fixed :3

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-02-20T04:40:42+00:00

[Normal]
00:45:610 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 이런식으로 딴지 걸기도 뭐하지만 히트사운드가 꼭 템포가 올라간다고 말해주는것 같은데 피식 죽어버리는것 같아요;;
01:41:153 (3) - 슬라이더 몸통에 있는 호루라기 제거?
01:56:410 (8) - 슬라이더 머리에 박수?
01:57:782 (3) - ^
02:01:896 (6) - ^

이거 노래가 애매하게 끝나네요;; 어떻게 무마시켜보기도 뭐하네요

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-20T04:54:19+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

aRiskOfRain

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aRiskOfRain 2010-02-20T17:08:59+00:00

Awesome, have a star. Love the hitsounds.

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-02-20T17:32:54+00:00

[general]
Timing seemed a bit early to me. Maybe you can try to use +2~+4 ms to your current offset.

[Normal]
I think you should lower HP drain by ~2 ticks and eventually overall diff by ~1 tick. (It got the same drain rate as [Hard] right now)

Nice map, fumoffu star :3

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-20T23:59:37+00:00

Adjusted the HP drain, but i think overall diff is fine :3
Offset is fixed

Dangaard

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Dangaard 2010-02-21T00:13:32+00:00

fumoffu pubble :3

YGOkid8

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YGOkid8 2010-02-22T07:02:45+00:00

General
Even though it's at the very end of the song, you still need to set an end point for Kiai Time

Normal
Fine.

Hard

Normal Mod~
01:29:834 (1,2) - Move 1 grid down (Lv3) so when playing, it'll be in the middle of playfield.
02:02:405 (1) - Unless you REALLY want to keep to Distance Snap, I suggest moving it do the middle of the playfield (with the 2 grids (Lv3) down thing)

Nazi Mod~
omg, my first nazi mod

only suggestions. so, just replace the "." with "?"

00:44:577 (3,5) - Make these align. (if you know what I mean)
00:47:662 (3,4) - ^
00:52:805 (2,3) - Align with 00:53:319 (4,5).
01:06:691 (2,3) - Align.
01:11:148 (1) - Not really symmetrical. Think you can do better.

01:18:005 (4) - ^
01:33:091 (3) - 1 grid left (Lv3)
01:39:605 (3) - Move the 3rd point on the slider 1 grid (Lv3) left to obtain perfect symmetry.
01:58:634 (2,3) - Align.

chocomint

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chocomint 2010-02-25T10:14:08+00:00

별이예여 star~/

Ra-s

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Ra-s 2010-02-25T10:25:51+00:00

Star

Gothic_old

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Gothic_old 2010-02-25T12:57:35+00:00

!

[Exit]

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[Exit] 2010-02-25T13:04:40+00:00

적절하네요!

예전맵들은 솔직히 어려운난이도들은 난해했는데

김대기비트맵임 굿ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Leorda

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Leorda 2010-02-26T11:06:14+00:00

Annyeonghaseyo!

[File]
1) Delete .osb in folder and do resubmit, because that's not useful

I can't find some issue

orz
Nice map
STAR

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-02-26T11:52:42+00:00

fixed :3

bmin11

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bmin11 2010-02-27T04:42:30+00:00

쿠도스 하나 더 생기는데로 Access 쏴드리겠습니다. 고르는데 고민 좀 했다능 ㅡㅜ

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2010-03-01T07:14:32+00:00

bmin11 wrote:
쿠도스 하나 더 생기는데로 Access 쏴드리겠습니다. 고르는데 고민 좀 했다능 ㅡㅜ

읭 감사용 ~_~

La Valse

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La Valse 2010-03-03T13:06:53+00:00

룰에 의해서 별만 줘버립니다

Sushi

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Sushi 2010-03-07T19:19:34+00:00

Nothing to say.

Oh yeah, just one thing. this is not worth popping your proto-bubble, but, I think you need an easier diff.

it may be difficult for beginner.

abalee

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abalee 2010-03-11T12:05:51+00:00

keep it at this stats

yaya

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yaya 2010-03-17T18:29:26+00:00

rank