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Rita - Hajimari no Toki

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taka1235
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年7月31日 at 18:11:06

Artist: Rita
Title: Hajimari no Toki
Source: Onimari
Tags: asari tezuka ryouko azuki
BPM: 151
Filesize: 20926kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Azuki's Easy (3.33 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 420 notes)
  3. Normal (4.32 stars, 178 notes)
Download: Rita - Hajimari no Toki
Download: Rita - Hajimari no Toki (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7/27 added Azuki's Easy
7/28 added Alace's customhitsound

thakns azuki & alace
miccoliasms
1 get
Breeze
takaさん~(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ

[General]
  1. Please delete osb.file since it's didn't used
[Normal]
  1. Please raise HP drain rate 3-5 grid, it's toooooooooo low now (*゚д゚*)
[Hard]
  1. 00:48:900 - I thought from then on are 0.5 x BPM, but it's 1 x BPM, just feel a little unexcepted, but it's OK
  2. I feel some place use normal hitsound instead of soft clap would sound better, such as
  3. 01:19:496 (6,8,10)
  4. 01:21:085 (4,5,7)
    and other three clap like these
  5. 01:26:648 (1-5) - use normal hitsound better, and advance gradually in sound volume would be perfect
  6. 01:38:171 (1,2,3,5-10) - ^
  7. 01:50:092 (5-12)
    etc.
nice map
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ☆ノノstar
Topic Starter
taka1235

Breeze wrote:

takaさん~(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ(ノ゚ω゚)ノ

[General]
  1. Please delete osb.file since it's didn't used
fixed

[Normal]
  1. Please raise HP drain rate 3-5 grid, it's toooooooooo low now (*゚д゚*)
fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:48:900 - I thought from then on are 0.5 x BPM, but it's 1 x BPM, just feel a little unexcepted, but it's OK
  2. I feel some place use normal hitsound instead of soft clap would sound better, such as
  3. 01:19:496 (6,8,10)
  4. 01:21:085 (4,5,7)
    and other three clap like these
  5. 01:26:648 (1-5) - use normal hitsound better, and advance gradually in sound volume would be perfect fixed
  6. 01:38:171 (1,2,3,5-10) - ^ fixed
  7. 01:50:092 (5-12)
    etc.
nice map
(ノ゚ω゚)ノ☆ノノstar
thank you :)
Cyril Scarlet
積もる想いを今伝えよう~

今星投げる~
Topic Starter
taka1235
今星をもらう~            ☆ヽ(゚ω゚ヽ)
DeadAlready
taka san new map again~ >w</

star again <3

gogogo taka~ :D

SPOILER
oh and taka...here's a very little advice 0.0
this song's long white tick(the first beat of a section) need move forward 3 beats ( that's mean offset is 1218, now you use 26. )
so if you can, please change offset to 1218. :P
lol it's not a important thing when play, so just a little advice XD
Topic Starter
taka1235
fixed. thank you~ 五條 :oops:
Aenna
Chou Tanosii
Shinxyn
Nice map~!
offset -10 (1208)
there's an unused .osb in the folder...

Normal- despite star rating, this is a fairly Normal diff, though, it might be safe to map something easier
00:21:473 (1) - please don't mix hitsounds (the start has finish+clap) (and the first timing panel is unused)
00:44:917 (1,2) - ehh, lower volume for the normal hitsounds here
01:00:414 (1,2,3) - ^ same thing, volume jumps from soft and normal could be a bit... "smoother"
01:32:599 - mmm add another clap or finish to this?
02:04:288 - this timing panel... its... er.. too sudden, I mean the volume drop, if you wanna make the spinner quieter, add more and slowly decrease instead of having it suddenly just turn (nearly) silent

Hard- the claps were kinda fast paced, but it works well
00:50:082 (5) - a bit close, up a tick and move notes after this as well?
02:04:287 - same thing as normal
O-o the hitsounds and volume control here are much better

There were places you could've added more finish hitsounds, but it's fine~
Topic Starter
taka1235

Shinxyn wrote:

Nice map~!
offset -10 (1208)changed
there's an unused .osb in the folder... i can't find...

Normal- despite star rating, this is a fairly Normal diff, though, it might be safe to map something easier
00:21:473 (1) - please don't mix hitsounds (the start has finish+clap) (and the first timing panel is unused)fixed
00:44:917 (1,2) - ehh, lower volume for the normal hitsounds herefixed
01:00:414 (1,2,3) - ^ same thing, volume jumps from soft and normal could be a bit... "smoother"fixed
01:32:599 - mmm add another clap or finish to this?
02:04:288 - this timing panel... its... er.. too sudden, I mean the volume drop, if you wanna make the spinner quieter, add more and slowly decrease instead of having it suddenly just turn (nearly) silentfixed

Hard- the claps were kinda fast paced, but it works well
00:50:082 (5) - a bit close, up a tick and move notes after this as well?fixed
02:04:287 - same thing as normalfixed
O-o the hitsounds and volume control here are much better

There were places you could've added more finish hitsounds, but it's fine~
thank you mod&star~

>>cyborg
a,arigatou
ignorethis
Fine imo. Get more stars (~13 I think) and it's time for pubble.
Doomsday
Hi

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

  1. Timing seems fine
  2. There are no tags in the map. Maybe you could put "rock vocal" in there or something.
  3. Over 50% of the MP3 has not been mapped. You should cut the MP3 down to save some space.
  4. Delete the .osb file in the folder. It isn't being used
[NORMAL]

Maybe this is a bit hard for the easiest difficulty? I can let this pass, but you should make an easy :P

Map looks good

[HARD]

7 mil score on a 2 min map. orz

Looks good

Nice, fun map. You should make an easy though. You are only mapping 2 minutes of the song so It shouldn't be a problem :).

Fix the tags and delete the .osb, and I will come back and protobubble

Starred
Topic Starter
taka1235
ok,fixed~
thank you for modding!
Scar
Star~
Sure
[General]
MP3 quality is 128kbps now, but it heard like under 96kbps.
Please change it to high quality MP3 if you can.


[Normal]
00:28:227 (3) - finish at start of slider
00:32:996 (1) - ^
00:39:353 (1) - finish
00:48:890 (1) - finish at start of slider
01:01:605 (1) - ^
01:50:876 (1) - ^
01:57:234 (1) - ^
02:03:592 (1) - How about make silence at end of spinner ?


[Hard]
00:39:353 (7) - finish
01:27:830 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:227 (3) - new combo
00:48:890 (3) - finish at start of slider
01:01:605 (1) - ^
01:41:340 (3) - new combo
01:46:108 (1) - remove new combo
01:57:234 (7) - finish
02:03:592 (1) - How about make silence at end of slider ?


Nice map! ;)
Topic Starter
taka1235
all fixed~
thank you for modding ;)
Doomsday
Looking good.

Protobubbled

If you still want to find a better MP3, it won't pop the protobubble.
orioncomet
☆⌒ヽ(*'、^*)
MegaManEXE
Fun (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Topic Starter
taka1235
thx ploy☆⌒ヽ(*'、^*) and mega (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
abalee
Also the difficulty issue. Normal shown as insane. And the"mp3 hasn't been use fully"(it's optional)

Hard:
01:12:532 (5,6) - Spacing?
happy30
since you only mapped the 'TV Size' length..

Use the TV version mp3
(fits with the map, it only got a slightly different ending. Also better quality than your current mp3.)

Download: Hajimari no Toki.mp3

Add the video
http://www.mediafire.com/?ozy2t3dgehm
Ozouni
star.
blissfulyoshi
Very late mod. Sorry.
Not touching the p-bubble

I still get the old mp3 and no video. Is that how you want the map?
Capitalize the 'o' in "onimari" in the source?

Normal:
Combo mod:
01:40:943 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 01:34:585 (1)
01:47:300 (2) - ^

Timing section mod:
you might want to make sure the kiai timing is consistent between the 2 diffs (look at the little gap between the 3rd and fourth kiai section)

Hard: fine

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Very nice map. Good luck in ranking this. Star.
azuki
wow
ponsaku
夢に出てくる神譜面
Furawa
:) takanyan
PSPDS Eddie
なにこれたのしい
Rusty
(ノ゚∇゚)ノ⌒☆
swish
☆ミ
Topic Starter
taka1235
みんな星ありがとう‼ in ipod
ReimuSS
ReimuSS
tsuka
☆あげる
AisamaDX
Shinxyn
Normal -feels- like a Normal, but its now required that all maps have a "E" or "N" diff
That's all that's lacking before a bubble ><!

And it doesn't seem like you're ganna change mp3 or add video or whatnot, that's okay.
gowww
nice!
yuyuyuko
≡ヽ( ^ω^)ノ☆
bakatii
kami humen :D
Pettan_old
good ! :)
aokumo
good :)
Ozouni
quo
x_x
Muya
:)
NanaDesu
:D
azuki
Topic Starter
taka1235
arigato~~~~
Aenna
video offset : -100
Topic Starter
taka1235

Cyborg wrote:

video offset : -100
siteki thx!
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