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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

General:

-- BPM is too fast it should be 162.
-- Nice skin.


Normal:

-- Increase circle size?
-- I recommend a custom slider slide for this difficulty because there are many sliders.

00:26:826 (2) - New combo?
00:29:789 (3) - ^
00:32:752 (4) - ^
00:44:604 (3) - ^
00:56:456 (5) - ^
01:05:345 (5) - ^
01:17:938 (6) - ^
01:29:789 (5) - ^
02:04:604 (5) - ^
02:22:382 (1) - I don't really think this jump is necessary.

This difficulty desperately needs some hitsounds, add some please or use custom

Hard:

-- Small hitcircles....
-- Raise stacking leniency by two ticks
-- Slider velocity is too fast and same as insane.
-- I kind of feel the spacing is too small for the slider velocity also.

00:09:049 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Quick 1/4 sliders always combo break =.=
00:10:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:47:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Way too confusing you expect 3 and 6 to be a return, respace this so it's easier to understand.
00:50:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Overlaps make this too confusing.
00:53:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:12:012 (3,1) - High slider velocity makes the slowdown in spacing feel weird, use a x0.5 section?
01:13:493 (3,1) - ^
01:14:975 (3,1) - ^
01:16:456 (3,1) - ^ etc.
01:29:419 (2) - End of slider is completely covered, respace?
01:30:900 (2) - ^
01:32:382 (2) - ^
01:33:863 (2) - ^
01:34:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same pattern as insane =.=
01:46:826 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping returning sliders are a pain.
01:47:938 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:49:049 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing overlap. - Same for the others.
02:22:382 (1) - Weird jump.

Also needs more hitsounds imo, try custom.

Insane:

-- Same with the slider velocity here.
-- Raise stacking leniency by 2 ticks.
-- For the huge spacing the hit circles are too small imo.

00:00:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These fast returning sliders always combo break!
00:01:919 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ etc etc.
00:36:641 (10,11,12) - Weird slow down kinda hard to read.
00:38:123 (10,11,12) - ^
00:39:604 (10,11,12) - ^
00:41:086 (10,11,12) - ^
00:42:567 (10,11,12) - ^
00:44:049 (10,11,12) - ^
00:45:530 (10,11,12) - ^
00:47:012 (10,11,12) - ^
00:53:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Extremely confusing if you haven't listened to this in editor its almost impossible to catch.
00:54:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
00:56:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ etc.
01:22:382 (3,1,2) - Odd slow down in spacing.
01:23:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Confusing again its hard to read especially if you haven't played it in editor.
01:24:604 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
01:26:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ etc etc.
02:10:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Slow down in spacing is somewhat difficult to play this applies to the others.
02:16:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Seriously? This is combo break heaven and isn't very fun.
02:17:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ etc.
02:22:382 (1) - Evil jump.

Also I find the patterns quite repetitive, I think you could have done more with this imo ^^

Long post, most of it is opinion, but those were my thoughts when playing so yeah maybe get some more test plays

~ Star.

wooo~Thanks so much !!

and some Fixed <3

ehh, not too impressed..
oh wow, 324BPM...
okay, lets see... you probably should remove the "count1-3.png", since the countdown doesn't appear even with 3 seconds lead in
remove "playfield.png", all the selections mods images (since they're not actually of any use to playing the map), "button-left/right/middle.png" and "hitcircleselect.png", and "hit50k.png", "gos.wav", "menuback.wav" "menuclick.wav" "menuhit.wav"
Basically, don't just copy nearly the entire skin into a beatmap folder without knowing which parts aren't used for the map itself
Increase the size of the "default1-9.png" images, they're kinda small, and hard to read during the slider streams? ._.
I honestly don't think the normal hitsound sample is the right choice for this song, I would think soft works better in most parts, if you don't think so, then at least decrease the overall volume by 3-4 ticks

Normal- would prefer bigger hitcircle size.
Kinda... a "square" map? and the parts where the notes are just stacked in the middle is boring (you really -don't- have to move the mouse to play it..)

Hard- .... not sure what to say here.... I don't get the pace of this diff well
Though... it's... fairly insane.. I guess...

Insane- Oh... my gosh... 20mil, too? I wouldn't allow it for rank tbh
I really don't know what to say... umm I guess, I don't like this.. it could sound a lot better though..
Don't stack while using lowest stack leniency please...

EHhhhh.... yea, I'll repeat what I said, I don't think the normal hitsound sample works well in the most part, cuz the maps can sound a lot better... playwise... Hard is kinda fast, and I don't think Insane is rank friendly...

;-; no star yet, sorry

STAR~

Fixed :3

[General]

• 324BPM...

1. osb文件没有用到,请删掉吧
2. bgm不该是tag吧,那个包含太多了

[Normal]

1. 感觉音量有点大,00:12:012之前建议60%,00:12:012开始可以音量从最大逐渐减到60%:
   00:12:012 - 100%
   00:13:493 - 90%
   00:14:975 - 80%
   00:16:456 - 70%
   00:17:938 - 60%
   另外这几个时间开始的note(1)加上finish感觉会很好,注意如果要加这些timing section的话记得提前1/2或者1/4拍
2. 02:22:382 (1) - 这里的whistle太突兀了

[Hard]

• 这完全是insane...有些连续的slider的地方完全感觉不可能连得上lol

1. 02:22:382 (1) - whistle还是很怪

[Insane]

• ...你在挑战人类极限么...

note没什么问题,但是实在是太难了啊(*ﾟдﾟ*),你准备approve么?
还有就是声音确实大了点,听起来啪啪啪啪的有点吵
hitsound感觉比较缺:/ 其他没什么了

Hard rename to Insane
and
Insane rename to Impossible

Insane(Hard)里的slider 我自己試了都能連上而且300 所以覺得沒啥(找了很多觸手測試下來也是這樣:3
音量什麽的都改過了 分數也沒一開始的22m那麼高了:3 (現在就18m了)

thx so much 微風

Hi hi!

Some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me.
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Nice backgr...OMG IS HER ARM CUT OFF? O_O
- 324 BPM... I agree with Shulin :/
- Delete all "selection-mod-xxx" from yoour skin, you don't need them.
- That star2.png is... really annoying sometimes... e_e'
- 3rd and 4th combocolours are so similar, delete one of them?
- Combo numbers on hitcircles are so hard to see :/

~Normal~
- Increase Circle Size, please :<

00:23:863 (1,1,1,1) - Make this "circle" more cute?
00:41:641 (1,2,1,2) - These overlappings look ugly :/
02:10:530 (1) - ^. You can move the previous slider to fix this.

~Insane~
- I would increase Circle Size a bit.

00:07:197 (4) - Hard to see.
00:08:678 (4) - ^
00:10:252 (x) - Add a note here?
00:11:734 (x) - ^
00:37:197 (2) - Ugly overlapping :<
00:40:160 (2) - ^
00:43:123 (2) - ^
00:46:086 (2) - ^
00:47:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - More ugly overlappings, same on the next 3 combos.
01:05:900 (3) - Spacing.
01:08:863 (3) - ^
01:10:900 (5) - ^
01:29:419 (2) - Hidden slider, change this please. It's almost impossible to see because of the speed of the sliders.
01:30:900 (2) - ^
01:32:382 (2) - ^
01:33:863 (2) - ^
01:34:975 (1) - Spacing?
01:46:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This is a real nightmare to see and follow...

~Impossible~
- What? 17m? I'm afraid to say this diff couldn't maybe be ranked oxo.
- I would increase Circle Size a bit.
- Decrease HP Drain o_o'

00:01:549 (6,7) - Unintuitive 1/2 sliders ._.
00:02:752 (4,5) - ^
00:04:512 (6,7) - ^
00:05:715 (4,5) - ^
00:07:475 (6) - ^
00:08:771 (5,6) - ^
00:09:975 (4,5) - ^
00:11:456 (5,6,7) - ^
00:45:901 (12,1) - Spacing.
01:53:308 (7,1) - Too high jump imo.
01:54:049 (7,1) - ^
01:54:789 (7,1) - ^


Could be much better. There's too much slider spam imo, and that could become so boring, even if the map is so insane like this. About the overlappings... meh, those little sliders are really hard to see, and Kiai doesn't help to it. Keep working!

*star*

haha <3

Thanks for mod :3

( 22m → 20m →17m....) Q_Q

Nice song! good luck

-__________________________- wow

*star
can't say anything bad about it really

delete all the selection stuff in folder (which has been said before)
you don't need mod-hidden mod-spunout etc
even on double time you can't see countdown so take it off
change bpm to 162 like mentioned before...the sliders are just too fast with this bpm
all maps could use some more hitsounds

Normal:
kind of small circles for a normal
very repetitive map...you might want to try moving things around more
from 00:59:419 to 01:34:975 is all centered exactly around the middle..it gets dull after a while..I would use more of the grid
01:46:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesn't need to be so clustered together
02:22:382 (1) - you might want to end kiai time here

Although there isn't much technically wrong with the map you need to put some more creativity into it and think of new patterns

Insane:
same basic issues as normal
you might want to use some curved sliders instead of straight all the time
01:29:049 (1,2) - slider overlap isnt good..move these somehow
01:30:530 (1,2) - ^
01:32:012 (1,2) - ^
01:33:493 (1,2) - ^
01:46:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - overmapped
I do like the clap usage in this diff...but some areas are still lacking hitsounds

Impossible:
you are not getting this ranked with that score (and its very similar to insane in lots of ways)
I don't think this diff is needed..I would just take some elements of this and put them into your insane to make it more interesting and then maybe you could make a hard

*star*

Fixed

and impossible diff ...i think its fine <3

fight (*ﾟдﾟ*)b

°W°

Pubbled~

[Normal]
boring...
太跟音乐了。

[Insane]
01:46:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - hard to read
总的来说这张节奏下的不好，感觉紧的地方特别紧张，半拍地方就很放松那种感觉，没有配合起来。也是，太跟音乐了

[一个脑]
01:20:715 (3) - 移出来，不好读
01:54:975 (5) - new com
others really nice.

[Impossible]
00:53:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - hard to read
试着摆脱一下背景音乐放节奏。

All fixed

其他一些地方也稍微改了下 :3

I love the new update! Spinner needs more Erika in it yes<3
Haha now if only I could be good enough to play all the difficulties. Love the skin & song.

This skin is great...
star~

Hentai bg...? :/

~Normal~
Fine.

~Insane~
00:10:160 - add note
00:11:641 - ^

~ignore's Insane~
00:16:456 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - spacings D:
00:19:419 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
01:57:938 (6) - new combo
02:00:160 (5) - ^
02:03:123 (9) - ^
02:17:938 (5) - ^

~Impossible~
00:59:049 (6,7,8) - unexpected spacings D:


+Star


Got from O2Jam, is this the right artist?

I'd like to see a difficulty in the middle aka [Hard]
Max score on the easiest difficulty is around 1.2 million while the next difficulty is a whopping 8.3 million? ヽ(´Ａ｀)ノ

That star2.png is sexy~

this map have 4 diffs....i think its enough....its fine...

-The background may be a bit too suggestive. I'm not one to judge though. (not only the sexual implication, but her right hand is cut off)

-I agree with Mafia. Add a hard or greatly decrease the difficulty of one of the insanes. (I understand it's Touhou, but that shouldn't stop a map from having a good difficulty spread)

Starred.

Rename Insane to Hard

now , Hard only 4mil score...

and added section-fail.png/section-pass.png , redownload it ...

Looks good now.
So bubbled!

Star, awesome. Skin isn't to my liking (hard to distinguish 300 and 100) but the map itself is kickass.

star

WoW...WoW...WoW

well,I want a diff,but,it's Bubbled and has already 3[I] diffs.

Just

Star~

啊

rebubbled

bakabaka

star~　＝ω＝

star~

Hard:
00:47:561 - Notes are hard to see due to kiai fountain here
02:10:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The new combos don't fit the music at all

Normal:
00:22:376 (4,1) - spacing?

EDIT: kay

Blah, I'm not popping or ranking cuz of this-

Hard- Overall diff+1~
I find out most of the patterns nearly unplayable with its current OD (most parts are really annoying to read the first time around)

(Also don't like the whistle end on Normal and Hard, but that's fine)

Discussed about overall with mapper and decided to rank~

Can someone tell me who that girl is, in the pause-screen picture, with Battler?

so good map > <

YumiGarretson wrote:

Can someone tell me who that girl is, in the pause-screen picture, with Battler?

Erika Furudo.

test +10ms