Kazamastar11 wrote:

Hello, i'm sorry..
I can't mod this beatmap, because of school task, and exam..

Star for you..

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Mod from modding queue

General: 老实说谱子非常不错 几乎不需要改进什么东西 非常的Friendly。。 （所以已射星）

给我的感觉(错觉)就是 MUZU和ONI差不多难- - （虽然星的数目上看不出来 但是最好能把 ONI弄得密集点 MUZU松散一点。。）

Oni01:53:932 (592,593,594) - may be a little bit strange. Change it from kdk to d D? The triplet could accompany the guitar well imo.
Awesome in general, it would be better with more 1/4s probably? Anyway its my private opinion... I will consider this again after Jikson comes back to check the mods.

Enjoy~

Grimbow wrote:

Hi! From mod queue o/

d - Small don
D - Big don
k - Small kat
K - Big kat

Black means something that I think needs changed
Orange is just a suggestion

[Kantan]

00:43:642 - Add a k here, I think it maps the buildup nicely It's a good idea. But I would like to keep mine here to make a better difficulty spread with Futsuu.
01:42:944 (162) - Change this to a K to help emphasize the vocals here As the vocal has similar strength as 00:38:758 (56) - , it'd be better to use k for consistency.
01:47:828 - Add a k here for the same reason as the first suggestion same as above

Really nice Kantan!

[Futsuu]

00:28:293 (70) - Change this to a d, the drums are lower here fixed

Muzukashii and Oni look alright to me!

Overall I couldn't find much wrong with the map! Sorry for the late reply too Have a star for a really fun map! (∩｀-´)⊃━.*･｡ﾟ

azintairin710 wrote:

NM mod :3

[General]
nothing particular :3 just in my case the BG is cracked ._. consider to resize the BG (tho it'salready meet the BG req) The BG is already 1024x768, which is a 4:3 equivalent.

[Kantan]
00:19:921 (24) - k sound better but it won't make the sense of lower sound No change since the vocal is not high-pitched.
00:20:618 (25,26) - ctrl + g d k could follow the snare well.
00:53:235 (79) - k Retained since the vocal pitch goes down.
01:22:014 - my mod in this part is same as above (the kiai is included) ^
02:35:967 - just opinion to make a fountain effect here :3 it's your decision to use it or not The real kiai starts at 02:41:549 - , so I prefer not making such an effect there.
02:43:467 (265) - k same as 00:53:235 (79) -
02:53:758 (284,285) - ctrl+g Remain unchanged for snare consistency.

[Futsuu]
00:47:130 (110,111) - ctrl+g k d could follow the drop in vocal pitch well.
00:58:293 (141,142) - ^ ^
01:01:607 (150) - i think k will follow the vocal better (if it's what you supposing to do) The vocal pitch at 01:01:781 (151) - is higher, so d could fit.
01:25:502 (205,206) - ctrl+g fixed
01:26:897 (209) - d? Retained since the vocal pitch is relatively high.
01:29:339 (216) - d.. i deeply suggest this :3 k could follow the snare there.
01:34:921 (232,233) - ctrl+g I prefer keeping it the same as 01:33:525 (228,229) - since the vocal pattern is similar.
01:52:188 (277,278,279) - i suggest to do this :3 some variations on your beats... https://puu.sh/dHNja.jpg I prefer a rise of don at 01:52:188 - compared to the first kiai.
01:53:758 (282,283) - ctrl+g... second part of this kiai's mod is same from the first part of same kiai (i'm lazy typing much) I followed the increase in vocal pitch there.
02:38:758 (397,398,399) - this pattern kinda confusing maybe... just pointing this out I used more dons in this part intentionally for the guitar.

i still can't pass Oni on taiko ;w; i'm sorry

Jikson[m9] wrote:

sorry for being afk
did quite a lot of changes, mainly simplyfying the map
thanks a lot for the mods

http://puu.sh/e6Jih/4d6f29441d.osu

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

02:15:037 - 02:24:804 - 建议把这段塞满二分拍然后在那几个地方放大饼

ikin5050 wrote:

ONI

02:26:200 -> 02:35:795 add a break here There are enough breaks in this session.
I'd say that seeing as this is oni this calls for some longer patterns as well, try and add some 7 patterns and some 5 patters instead of all the 3 patterns I would prefer an Oni with simpler patterns.

Rest of the diffs look fine to me, i'm sorry for this sort of bad mod but this has already been modded quite a bit and i can't find anything that might need changing

game rock wrote:

Hi Nardoxyribonucleic, from Game's Queue~

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Kantan]

00:18:525 - Change to k? for the pattern. d would be better since snare is absent and the pitch of the vocal is relatively low compared to 00:18:351 - .
00:24:107 - ^ ^
00:53:235 - Change to k? d could fit the drop in vocal there.
01:04:397 - ^ ^
01:22:711 - Change to k for the pattern. Retained for pattern consistency as 00:18:525 -
01:57:421 - ^ same as 00:53:235 -
02:08:584 - ^ ^
02:17:130 - Change to d? is better. I followed the guitar there.
02:19:921 - ^ ^

[Futsuu]

01:50:444 - Change to d for kd dk. k would be better since it has the same vocal pitch as 01:50:270 (270) -
01:51:665 - Change to k? d could reflect the pitch difference compared to 01:50:270 (270,271) -
02:01:607 - Change to d for kd dk. same as 01:50:444 -
02:02:828 - Change to k? same as 01:51:665 -

[Oni]

02:25:851 - Change to k, is more convenient. I prefer d here as there is no high-pitched sound.
03:12:770 - Change to k. d would be better for the progressively increasing pitch across 03:12:770 (1033,1034,1035) -

Great Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful, good luck~

qoot8123 wrote:

[ NC's Oni]


Notes

1. 01:21:665 - 這裡加個d會比較好 - fixed and with changing 01:21:490 (450,451) - into k for the sound difference and also add note on 01:21:839 - for the same sound as above

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]

[ Jik's Muzukashii]

General

:idea: 00:17:828 - ~ 00:40:153 - 這裡note的密度太高了,必須有3/2或2/1的break
kiai的部分也要簡化一下,有些1/2的pattern用太長了,舉例來說: 00:45:735 - ~00:49:921 - 有兩種選擇eg.1 eg.2,其他段也是有類似的問題

Muzu感覺有點危險,break盡量放多一點

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]


Notes

1. 00:56:025 (84) - 建議刪掉,或是把它移到00:56:549 - ,我個人覺得3/2的pattern後面如果沒有接note在00:56:549 - 這裏的話打起來有點彆扭 刪了
2. 02:00:211 (190) - ^ ^
3. 02:46:258 (270) - ^ ^

[ Futsuu]

General

:idea: 建議sv改成1.4 fixed
01:49:921 - ~ 02:15:037 - 這一段感覺有一點難,建議簡化一下,最後的kiai也是 改了這一段. 最後的kiai沒有改, 可以營造難度漸進的感覺

Notes

1. 00:18:177 (39) - 這個Note我覺得可以刪掉,雖然你是跟vocal和beat,但是這裡如果有個break感覺會跟00:20:618 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - 有不錯的效果 好吧
2. 00:23:758 (56) - ^ ^
3. 00:27:944 (69) - 移到00:28:642 - 跟接下來的pattern做搭配,而且也跟vocal比較搭 改了
4. 01:32:130 (225) - ^ ^
5. 02:25:851 (372) - 感覺這個note可以刪掉 現在聽起來感覺這note沒那麼必要, 刪了

[ Oni]

Notes

1. 00:22:537 (91,93) - 建議把這兩個note調換,打起來會比較順暢 感覺這裡不跟00:22:886 - 的鼓聲會有點奇怪, 所以還是放d k 比較好
2. 01:23:060 (419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427) - 感覺note有點放太多了 改了

Muzu感覺有點危險,break盡量放多一點

Jikson[m9] wrote:

qoot8123 wrote:

[ Kantan]

[ Jik's Muzukashii]

General

:idea: 00:17:828 - ~ 00:40:153 - 這裡note的密度太高了,必須有3/2或2/1的break
kiai的部分也要簡化一下,有些1/2的pattern用太長了,舉例來說: 00:45:735 - ~00:49:921 - 有兩種選擇eg.1 eg.2,其他段也是有類似的問題

Muzu感覺有點危險,break盡量放多一點

done
http://puu.sh/fORCr/20c39c32cf.osu

qoot8123 wrote:

Muzu :

00:08:932 (10) - 刪掉這個note,難度跟oni有點相似

00:14:514 (30) - ^

01:13:118 (10) - ^

01:18:700 (30) - ^

03:03:351 (10) - ^

03:08:933 (31) - ^

00:17:828 - ~ 00:28:118 - 密度跟oni非常接近,不過因為futsuu也偏難,所以2/1break在這一段就不用用太多,可是一定要簡化

01:22:014 - ~ 01:32:304 - ^

00:28:990 - ~ 00:44:339 - 跟futsuu 和oni比較一下,這一段的密度跟oni也很接近

01:33:177 - ~ 01:48:525 - ^(注意一下這一段的futsuu有變難)

02:15:037 - ~ 02:34:572 - 一樣要簡化

03:11:549 (39,40,41,42,43) - 5連在muzu還是不要有比較好

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

@Next nominator: The same song is in qualified status . Don't qualify this mapset till' ZZHBOY's map will be moved to ranked section

Genocide wrote:

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

@Next nominator: The same song is in qualified status . Don't qualify this mapset till' ZZHBOY's map will be moved to ranked section

you are one of us now son.

[Oni]
01:07:188 (342,343,344) - kkd , seems more fit with rhythm song imo. also 01:07:188 (342,343) - are high pitch. Keeping this as ddd could emphasize the next snares at 01:07:537 (345,346) - in a way better. Also, the flow would be smoother imo.
01:08:235 (350) - kat, if am i not wrong, the sound pitch is high so D kdk would be nice when playing. fixed
01:54:456 (594,596) - ctrl + g. 01:54:456 (594) - there is have no any sound. and 01:54:717 (596) - sound pitch more high. There is a snare at 01:54:456 (594) - . Also, the vocal pitch is high at 01:54:804 (597) - only.
02:36:316 (824) - as D. it would be more reflect the next 02:37:363 (826,827,828,829) - . KKKK would be fine since the vocal pitch there is identical.
03:12:770 (1032) - kat, seems the pitch is high The pitch is just the same as 03:12:421 (1030) -

Checking on behalf of Jikson as authorized.

[Jik's Muzu]
00:22:886 (55) - d ples, the sound is similar with 00:22:711 (54) - . The snare sound is similar to 00:23:060 (56) -
00:43:816 (135) - delete pls `-`, i know those are fit with rhythm, but please take a bit breaks too. deleted the note at 00:43:467 - instead.
00:45:299 (139) - delete, muzukashii have no allowed about oox xxo etc. ddk/kkd is actually allowed, patterns that are not allowed including dk/kd/dkk/kdd/dkd/kdk. However deleted 00:45:211 and 00:45:299 - as there is no sound to map with. Your Souzou Diary also has ddk in Muzukashii too.
01:37:363 (94) - delete this. and 01:37:537 (94) - move 1/2 backward. Retained for consistent length of 1/2 notes like 01:34:049 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85) -
01:40:502 (107) - delete this or 01:39:979 (104) - delete this ^
01:48:002 (134) - delete if you delete this too 00:43:816 (135) - deleted 01:47:653 -
01:49:485 (140) - delete if you delete 00:45:299 (139) - refer to 00:45:299 (139) -
02:18:700 (266) - delete, give more free spaces. fixed
02:20:008 (271) - delete. ^
02:25:677 (299) - delete. ^
02:34:049 (327) - delete. deleted 02:33:700 -
02:41:113 (348) - delete. refer to 00:45:299 (139) -
what i mentioned above are unnecessary beat and triplets issues

kantan futsuu are fine for me.
call me back

Genocide wrote:

[NC's Oni]
01:48:351 (616) - change this as d the sound is more fit, if you keep this seems like overemphasis imo. //well i used k in all 3 similar cases in the song.. other than that i still love how this all k works. So i will keep it unchanged
i like the rhythm you made!

kantan futsuu are fine for me.
call me back

Genocide wrote:

[Muzu]
02:23:496 (290) - delete this, the rhythm broke imo deleted the triplet and changed the colour of neighbouring notes.
02:51:665 (394) - delete this consistent with 00:50:270 - 01:01:432 - 01:54:456 - 02:05:618 - fixed

Genocide wrote:

ByBy_ChAn wrote:

@Next nominator: The same song is in qualified status . Don't qualify this mapset till' ZZHBOY's map will be moved to ranked section

you are one of us now son.