MOMOIRO CLOVER Z - SARABA ITOSHIKI KANASHIMI TACHIYO · forum

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-24T03:22:25+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月30日 at 22:14:47

Artist: MOMOIRO CLOVER Z
Title: SARABA ITOSHIKI KANASHIMI TACHIYO
Tags: Good-bye Dear Sorrows maimai kawaiwkyik
BPM: 168
Filesize: 3497kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.73 stars, 138 notes)
Hard (3.43 stars, 333 notes)
Master (4.91 stars, 438 notes)
Normal (1.93 stars, 192 notes)
wkyik's Insane (4.43 stars, 449 notes)

Download: MOMOIRO CLOVER Z - SARABA ITOSHIKI KANASHIMI TACHIYO
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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https://osu.ppy.sh/s/212126
Good-bye, Dear Sorrows

Insane by Kawaiwkyik

今天早上女朋友送给我一双手套打maimai，我十分感动！因为我昨天在蓝翔考花式驾驶挖掘机的时候我不小心磨坏了一双手套

Last edited by Sellenite 2014-10-31T08:32:13+00:00, edited 44 times in total.

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-24T03:27:46+00:00

行くの? 行かないの?
行っちゃえばいーじゃん
言えよ言いたいよVS言えない
裏か表か底なしのクエスチョン
だけどどうしてどうにもこうにもだいたい

Ah-Ha Dig it,Dig it
Ah-Ha Dig it,Dig it
Ah-Ha Dig it,Dig it
Ah-Ha Dig it up

見ざる言わざる
聞かざるでござる
君子、危うきに近寄らずデス
お願いされたら、やめたくなります
だったら、許すだったら、笑え

こころの声が木霊する
涙と希望のカーニバル
生意気なくらいの夜明けに

行かないで… 行かないで…
泣かないで… 泣かないで…

サラバ、昨日をぬぎすてて
勇気の声をふりしぼれ
じぶんという名の愛を知るために
眠れない羊の群れよ
迷えるこころの叫びを
振り返るな我らの世界は
まだ始まったばかりだ

Narcissu

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Narcissu 2014-09-24T11:22:15+00:00

你自己把沙發占了別人水貼的理由就美麗了惹……

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-24T12:12:58+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
你自己把沙發占了別人水貼的理由就美麗了惹……

sad

Pururut

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Pururut 2014-09-25T17:09:47+00:00

就你这网速还想跟我抢沙发？大声告诉我这是几楼？

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-26T06:02:28+00:00

Pururut wrote:
就你这网速还想跟我抢沙发？大声告诉我这是几楼？

可啪

Rizia

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Rizia 2014-09-26T18:01:27+00:00

沙發

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-27T01:26:16+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
沙發

地板

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-09-29T14:02:19+00:00

你们就会抢二楼, 有本事抢倒数第二楼啊

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-29T14:07:31+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
你们就会抢二楼, 有本事抢倒数第二楼啊

分分钟美丽啊

Rizia

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Rizia 2014-09-29T16:43:11+00:00

大家好

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-09-30T17:36:51+00:00

靠，终于做完了

Crystal

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Crystal 2014-09-30T22:53:53+00:00

._.

xxdeathx

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xxdeathx 2014-10-01T05:58:49+00:00

[General]

Increase volume 20-30%, I can barely hear the hitnormal especially at the beginning.
This 1.79-2.01-3.43-4.43 difficulty spread is not good. Easy and Hard are too hard.

[Easy]

00:03:136 (4,5) - Use slider so you don't have 3/2 gap (polarity).
00:10:814 (2,1) - ^

The diff itself is very nice and well mapped, but the rhythm is too similar to Normal's, so star rating is high. You should lower SV more and simplify the rhythm further. I know this song is hard to map without 1/2 at some parts, but 1/2 should be used very little or not at all in Easy. Also from 00:56:350 (1) - to the end there are no 2/1 breaks, and easy players need frequent 2/1 breaks.

[Normal]

00:03:136 (4,5) - Use slider here so you don't have a 3/2 gap
00:08:850 (4,5) - ^
01:12:600 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too many circles in a row. Also stacking most of them is confusing. I suggest making 01:13:314 (3,4,5) - and 01:14:743 (3,4,5) - into 1/2 repeat sliders so the stacks are all 1/1.
01:45:457 (2,1) - Why not stack?

[Hard]

00:02:779 (5,6,1) - DS is pretty confusing here especially for hard diff, and the flow is awkward. Make it a little easier by stacking 00:02:957 (6,1) -
01:33:493 (2,1) - How about arrange in a way that has (2) blanket (1) so it will look nice
01:40:279 (4) - You should not have a slider that starts on the red tick and ignores the vocal and beat of the white tick at 01:40:457.
01:43:136 (4) - ^

I think this diff's SV and spacing are a little high for a hard diff, so it's 3.43 stars and only 168 bpm. You will probably have to change these to make a better diff spread.

[Kowaiwkyik's Insane]

00:22:421 (7,1) - It's best not to leave 3/4 gap because that can be hard to read and throw players off. I suggest repeating the slider so it ends at 00:22:600
01:12:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is kind of confusing here. Use more consistent DS.
01:14:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Master]

00:02:779 (6,7) - Since the transition between 00:02:957 (7,1) - breaks flow (player has to move up to slider and then down to play the slider) I think ctrl-G 00:02:779 (6,7) - plays better by improving the flow. You have several other ones like this so this is the only one I'll mention.
00:04:207 (2,3,4) - Check stack
00:15:814 (3) - I think this plays better:
SPOILER
00:16:172 (4) - Middle slider point at 176, 116 blankets better.
00:18:136 (3,4,1) - Why not stack
00:47:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I won't say anything >.<
00:56:707 (2,1) - Swap NC's then you can use NC to group by DS.

Try to improve the lower diffs' spread, since it looks pretty uneven now. Good luck!

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-10-01T09:04:34+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
[General]
Increase volume 20-30%, I can barely hear the hitnormal especially at the beginning. it will be very loudly imo
This 1.79-2.01-3.43-4.43 difficulty spread is not good. Easy and Hard are too hard. explain below
[Easy]
00:03:136 (4,5) - Use slider so you don't have 3/2 gap (polarity). want to change the rhythm，not only slider owo
00:10:814 (2,1) - ^ i think this 1 is should be a circle，it is an accent
The diff itself is very nice and well mapped, but the rhythm is too similar to Normal's, so star rating is high. You should lower SV more and simplify the rhythm further. I know this song is hard to map without 1/2 at some parts, but 1/2 should be used very little or not at all in Easy. Also from 00:56:350 (1) - to the end there are no 2/1 breaks, and easy players need frequent 2/1 breaks.
actually that is why i made harder easy （rhythm is too similar to Normal's），i just want to maximum reduction the rhythm，so i dont want to cut off the normal and made a easy，but it still harder..beside this，the 1/2 is fit the song （hot song），then the star is under 1.8，it is still a easy imo.and in order to make some break，i also use some long slider instead

[Normal]
00:03:136 (4,5) - Use slider here so you don't have a 3/2 gap same reason as easy
00:08:850 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:12:600 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Too many circles in a row. Also stacking most of them is confusing. I suggest making 01:13:314 (3,4,5) - and 01:14:743 (3,4,5) - into 1/2 repeat sliders so the stacks are all 1/1. yeah,it let me think several times，changed
01:45:457 (2,1) - Why not stack? 233，fixed

[Hard]
00:02:779 (5,6,1) - DS is pretty confusing here especially for hard diff, and the flow is awkward. Make it a little easier by stacking 00:02:957 (6,1) - yes，reduced ds and changed pattern
01:33:493 (2,1) - How about arrange in a way that has (2) blanket (1) so it will look nice on purpose lol，not a blanket
01:40:279 (4) - You should not have a slider that starts on the red tick and ignores the vocal and beat of the white tick at 01:40:457. here is also on purpose，cuz i use this rhythm above，so i follow another track here，and i think always follow the vocal is boring imo，so i create some new and let it not beat the white tick，also i use the slider shape to express the vocal
01:43:136 (4) - ^ ^
I think this diff's SV and spacing are a little high for a hard diff, so it's 3.43 stars and only 168 bpm. You will probably have to change these to make a better diff spread. hard 3.43 is fine imo

[Master]
00:02:779 (6,7) - Since the transition between 00:02:957 (7,1) - breaks flow (player has to move up to slider and then down to play the slider) I think ctrl-G 00:02:779 (6,7) - plays better by improving the flow. You have several other ones like this so this is the only one I'll mention. changed this and make some different in other ones
00:04:207 (2,3,4) - Check stack wtf
00:15:814 (3) - I think this plays better: pretty right,changed
SPOILER
00:16:172 (4) - Middle slider point at 176, 116 blankets better. this is not a blanket...
00:18:136 (3,4,1) - Why not stack wtf
00:47:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I won't say anything >.< lol
00:56:707 (2,1) - Swap NC's then you can use NC to group by DS. no,1 is the new rhythm so i use nc at
1
Try to improve the lower diffs' spread, since it looks pretty uneven now. Good luck!

thanks hentai~~

sjoy

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sjoy 2014-10-01T09:07:52+00:00

换东方BG阿

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-10-01T09:09:02+00:00

sjoy wrote:
换东方BG阿

233，我现在很喜欢这个啊

litoluna

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litoluna 2014-10-03T11:34:26+00:00

hi~
from my queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:46:883 - snap to 00:46:886 (all diffs)

[Easy]

00:08:671 (4,5) - stack note is not good in the easiest diff
00:11:350 (1,2) - I felt chaned slider is better
this point is changed beats(start red line)
so difficult in easy diff
00:56:350 (1,2) - I felt chaned slider is better
reason: same as 00:11:350 (1,2) -
01:19:743 (4) - I think the clear contrary slider is better
I felt you can next Circle following
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:21:886 (2,1) - this stack point very hidden;w;
01:22:600 (4) - Double reverse slider is not good in Normal diff
my idea:

SPOILER

[Hard]

00:34:207 (2,3,4,5,6) - umm I think this jump Stream difficult in Hard
I want you to respond without stacking it at least
SPOILER
01:16:171 (1,2,3) - I hate Double reverse slider
t is hard to judge it to be a first interview and is confused

[Insane]

01:22:423 (4) - Unsnapped circle.

[Master]

01:46:529 (4,5) - copy 01:46:171 (2,3) - ctrl +G J?
trapezoid pattern.
nice jump map

sorry my poor english

good luck

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-10-04T10:11:12+00:00

litoluna wrote:
hi~ yooo
from my queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:46:883 - snap to 00:46:886 (all diffs) fixed all
[Easy]
00:08:671 (4,5) - stack note is not good in the easiest diff changed rhythm
00:11:350 (1,2) - I felt chaned slider is better although at red line，but here need hit
this point is changed beats(start red line)
so difficult in easy diff
00:56:350 (1,2) - I felt chaned slider is better changed rhythm
reason: same as 00:11:350 (1,2) -
01:19:743 (4) - I think the clear contrary slider is better changed
I felt you can next Circle following
SPOILER
[Normal]
00:21:886 (2,1) - this stack point very hidden;w; on purpose ;w;
01:22:600 (4) - Double reverse slider is not good in Normal diff changed
my idea:

SPOILER
[Hard]
00:34:207 (2,3,4,5,6) - umm I think this jump Stream difficult in Hard actually not very difficult here when play，just easy to get 100...
I want you to respond without stacking it at least I like stacking jump ;w;
SPOILER
01:16:171 (1,2,3) - I hate Double reverse slider sad
t is hard to judge it to be a first interview and is confused not really，double reverse is depend on the rhythm，also this is a hard so is fine imo
[Master]
01:46:529 (4,5) - copy 01:46:171 (2,3) - ctrl +G J? nice jump pattern but i just want to go circle here ;w;
trapezoid pattern.
nice jump map
sorry my poor english mine also baddd lol

good luck

thanks luna~

hehe

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hehe 2014-10-04T15:11:01+00:00

hi m4m

[master]

OD 8.5! singletaps are too easy!
HP 7, hard to die :3
i think will be fun to watch hvick try DT this @_@

00:04:296 (3) - is this needed? :/ no sound
00:05:279 (6,7,8) - make 8 closer to 7, or 6 further from 7. the DS now is still a bit confusing, imo.
00:07:600 (3) - i suggest change shape, not same sound with 00:06:886 (1) - . maybe like 00:01:886 (4) - ?
00:10:100 (3,5) - soz but blanket still can be better!
00:12:064 (1) - this is better to give more feeling to the loud sound at 00:12:600 - http://i.imgur.com/920bhB6.png i forgot NC orz
00:13:850 (5,6) - blanket?

00:16:172 (4,5) - blanket
00:22:332 - add circle? i hear sound~
00:31:886 (4,5) - easy mistake for 1/4, maybe overlap with sliderend.
00:45:189 - add circle too here
00:57:154 - vocal triple like 00:34:207 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ?

01:09:207 (4) - move to 76,264 to parallel with 5, and not touch 01:09:743 (1) . proof? > http://i.imgur.com/qx2k0Zk.png
01:30:457 (2) - why ignore the vocal on sliderend here only

keep 2 circle pattern?
01:42:600 (1,2) - curve more? it look really weird with mirror now

01:54:029 (1) - maybe turn this into a nice slider?

[insane]

00:28:850 (2,3,4) - this isn't in the center
00:37:689 (3) - blanket~
01:09:207 (3) - maybe do 2 circles, the sound is different~

this was really welldone

[hard]

00:47:064 (2,3,4) - move 2 to make better triangle?
01:33:493 (2,3) - this looks ugly, make a blanket? maybe
01:40:279 (4) - bad rhythm, turn into circle+1/2 slider. like previous patterns
01:53:314 (3,4,1) - triangle maybe!

[normal]

00:02:600 (4) - this is too weird of a reverse. the rhythm not good, follow 00:05:457 (3,4). the red tick must be press!
00:09:743 (1) - move red point one grid to the left to perfect 'blanket'.
00:28:850 (4) - move higher? for better flow
00:29:029 (5,1) - blanket?
00:51:171 (4,5) - if you do the bend in 4, just blanket 5?

01:11:886 (4) - i suggest move to the right more, now it looks kind of bad. http://i.imgur.com/x4VP6h0.png
01:27:243 (2) - i suggest make this 1/1 repeat, so the vocal hitcircles 01:28:314 (3,4) - feels better to play, like 01:31:171 (3,4) -
01:47:957 (3,1) - blanket!

thats all

nice diff, i like the sliders.

[easy]

easy and normal not much difference orz, maybe increase CS?

00:04:029 - please map this!!
00:05:100 (2,3) - hmm 1/2 in easy, im not so sure if its ok.

00:39:743 (4,5) - ^
00:40:279 (5,1) - blanket?
00:56:707 - if you want to keep mapping 1/2, maybe map this too

01:06:886 (1) - suddenly too easy...

imo i think the spread is quite weird... 1.77 > 1.93 > 3.46!! maybe you want to rename Normal > Easy, and make new normal?

just saying. right now the easy very similar to normal.

done!

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sjoy

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sjoy 2014-10-05T15:01:57+00:00

http://puu.sh/c0hTN/61c616cd25.wav KIAI第一大白线的铃
http://puu.sh/c0ia8/20072a2d9b.wav 第二大白线铃然后交替你会发现 ***
[Master]
00:06:707 (3) - 00:08:671 (6) - 强迫症表示不叠不舒服
00:11:350 (1,2) - 感觉用3/4比较粘滞
00:16:886 (6,7) - 这个ANTI -JUMP感觉莫名
00:18:076 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/c0ina/df3545731e.jpg我听到节奏是这样，你在听听看
00:20:279 (1) - 建议跟 00:19:029 (4) - 一样形状有递进感
00:21:350 (2,3) - ctrl+g?
00:22:779 (1,2) - 同00:11:350 (1,2)

00:27:243 (2,3,4) - 这种我打起来十分反人类
00:30:993 (6) - 感觉变成1/4滑条比较爽
00:32:421 (5) - 我觉得黏太近不好，比较这是间隔1/2
00:49:743 (1) - 这里NC闹哪样
00:52:600 (1) - ^感觉没什么意义
01:14:743 (1,2,3) - 我的天
后面的随机跳我就不挑了
01:27:243 (2) - 这种滑条建议尾巴都消音
KIAI尼玛节奏是AR3完全一样太假了吧
[wkyik's Insane]
00:13:314 (3) - 红线有音还是1/2感觉好点
01:14:922 (6,7) - 我觉得大跳爽点
01:26:350 (4) - 删？参考01:20:457 (4,5) -
[Hard]
00:23:136 (2) - 我觉得相同DS比较好
01:27:064 (2) - 感觉能删
妈呀连HARD都抄节奏01:16:171 (1) - 这个印象太深了
01:40:279 (4) - 后移半拍，缩1/2
01:43:136 (4) - 同上毕竟你都是跟VOCAL 这里不跟有点奇怪

美丽

LucyS

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LucyS 2014-10-05T18:37:51+00:00

M4M
=D

[Eazy]
AR -1 ?
00:37:243 (4,5) - as said before, stack notes isn't good in eazy. Is better if you do like here 00:39:743 (4,5). Really, in both cases, I never see this rhythm in a ranked map, but i think the last is alright. Consider it.
00:42:957 (4,5) - Same ^
00:56:350 (1,2) - You should use this Rhythm:

Because of the strong beat here 00:56:707 , and is better to read.
01:06:886 (1) - Move the tail like: http://puu.sh/c0sjQ/516239d78f.jpg to become more symmetrical.
01:12:600 (1,2,1,2) - Try unstack these

[Normal]
00:10:457 (2) - End this here 00:10:814 I can't hear any beat in the red tick.
00:28:850 (4) - Move this a little up?

[Hard]
00:02:421 (4,5,6) - I had to play this three times to get this rhythm lol, I think that the song suggest MORE that the next note is in the white tick. So I suggest this rhythm:

Than you can stack 00:02:600 (4) - in 00:01:886 (3) - tail. like 00:19:029 (3,4)
00:04:564 - Add a note here.
00:52:600 (1) - Move this to the same place as 00:53:671 (5) de gosaru.
00:56:707 (2,1) - Delete this jump plz, is better to read.

[Insane]
01:12:600 - This rhythm fits better here:

Good Luck

~

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-10-06T04:14:30+00:00

handsome wrote:
hi m4m

[master]

OD 8.5! singletaps are too easy! od 8 is ok for this song
HP 7, hard to die :3 so haard imo...
i think will be fun to watch hvick try DT this @_@ no more twice lol

00:04:296 (3) - is this needed? :/ no sound delete and changed pattern
00:05:279 (6,7,8) - make 8 closer to 7, or 6 further from 7. the DS now is still a bit confusing, imo. here i want to create a jump
00:07:600 (3) - i suggest change shape, not same sound with 00:06:886 (1) - . maybe like 00:01:886 (4) - ? on purpose
00:10:100 (3,5) - soz but blanket still can be better! ah i cant improve anymore..
00:12:064 (1) - this is better to give more feeling to the loud sound at 00:12:600 - http://i.imgur.com/920bhB6.png i forgot NC orz stop at blue line is so hard
00:13:850 (5,6) - blanket? like above
00:16:172 (4,5) - blanket
00:22:332 - add circle? i hear sound~ have sound but not obvious and i want to keep 1/2 rhythm
00:31:886 (4,5) - easy mistake for 1/4, maybe overlap with sliderend. changed
00:45:189 - add circle too here same as above
00:57:154 - vocal triple like 00:34:207 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ? good idea,but i dont want to follow the vocal..
01:09:207 (4) - move to 76,264 to parallel with 5, and not touch 01:09:743 (1) . proof? > http://i.imgur.com/qx2k0Zk.png haha,fixed but not your x,y
01:30:457 (2) - why ignore the vocal on sliderend here only keep 2 circle pattern? want to make some different
01:42:600 (1,2) - curve more? it look really weird with mirror now is ok imo..
01:54:029 (1) - maybe turn this into a nice slider? circle is enough

[hard]

00:47:064 (2,3,4) - move 2 to make better triangle? it is obtuse angle already..
01:33:493 (2,3) - this looks ugly, make a blanket? maybe on purpose and not a blanket
01:40:279 (4) - bad rhythm, turn into circle+1/2 slider. like previous patterns on purpose too，i dont want to make the same rhythm
01:53:314 (3,4,1) - triangle maybe! parallel with 4

[normal]

00:02:600 (4) - this is too weird of a reverse. the rhythm not good, follow 00:05:457 (3,4). the red tick must be press! actually i follow 00:08:314 (4) - this..
00:09:743 (1) - move red point one grid to the left to perfect 'blanket'. yes
00:28:850 (4) - move higher? for better flow had been moved and i think it is fine now
00:29:029 (5,1) - blanket? nope
00:51:171 (4,5) - if you do the bend in 4, just blanket 5? also not a blanket
01:11:886 (4) - i suggest move to the right more, now it looks kind of bad. http://i.imgur.com/x4VP6h0.png fine imo..
01:27:243 (2) - i suggest make this 1/1 repeat, so the vocal hitcircles 01:28:314 (3,4) - feels better to play, like 01:31:171 (3,4) - follow 01:30:457 (2) -
01:47:957 (3,1) - blanket! yes

thats all nice diff, i like the sliders.

[easy]

easy and normal not much difference orz, maybe increase CS? esay and normal i usually use 3

00:04:029 - please map this!! i preferr empty
00:05:100 (2,3) - hmm 1/2 in easy, im not so sure if its ok. for further consider
00:39:743 (4,5) - ^
00:40:279 (5,1) - blanket? nope
00:56:707 - if you want to keep mapping 1/2, maybe map this too i just use two place in 1/2..so i dont want to increase difficult
01:06:886 (1) - suddenly too easy...yes

imo i think the spread is quite weird... 1.77 > 1.93 > 3.46!! maybe you want to rename Normal > Easy, and make new normal? just saying. right now the easy very similar to normal. fine imo，but i think i cant increase normal anymore and i will decrease the easy

done!

sjoy wrote:
http://puu.sh/c0hTN/61c616cd25.wav KIAI第一大白线的铃卧槽你从哪里找到的简直一模一样。。不过我都试过了啊这个音效的拖音太长了，很影响我的whistle整体发音。。所以就不加啦
http://puu.sh/c0ia8/20072a2d9b.wav 第二大白线铃然后交替你会发现 *** 同上，这个比较刺耳
[Master]
00:06:707 (3) - 00:08:671 (6) - 强迫症表示不叠不舒服爷爷打图的时候打不出的
00:11:350 (1,2) - 感觉用3/4比较粘滞蓝线的确有音但这会变得很激霸我就不换3/4了。。
00:16:886 (6,7) - 这个ANTI -JUMP感觉莫名用来强调8的
00:18:076 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/c0ina/df3545731e.jpg我听到节奏是这样，你在听听看听了，其实你现在的3是snap在1/8上面的，不是蓝线，后面的才是蓝线
00:20:279 (1) - 建议跟 00:19:029 (4) - 一样形状有递进感好主意，改了
00:21:350 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 不啦
00:22:779 (1,2) - 同00:11:350 (1,2) 同上
00:27:243 (2,3,4) - 这种我打起来十分反人类的确。。改了
00:30:993 (6) - 感觉变成1/4滑条比较爽 1/2啊不要啊
00:32:421 (5) - 我觉得黏太近不好，比较这是间隔1/2 换了
00:49:743 (1) - 这里NC闹哪样觉得比较帅不过既然提了我就取消了
00:52:600 (1) - ^感觉没什么意义取消了
01:14:743 (1,2,3) - 我的天爽啊
后面的随机跳我就不挑了
01:27:243 (2) - 这种滑条建议尾巴都消音
KIAI尼玛节奏是AR3完全一样太假了吧不行啊我听了ar3的做出来的也好像是差不多节奏。。。

[Hard]
00:23:136 (2) - 我觉得相同DS比较好跳跳啦
01:27:064 (2) - 感觉能删三连后不放东西我觉得很空。。就加了个circle
妈呀连HARD都抄节奏01:16:171 (1) - 这个印象太深了不行啊这个不抄我没梗啊
01:40:279 (4) - 后移半拍，缩1/2 好多人提这个啊。。我就是想不同节奏而已，变一下
01:43:136 (4) - 同上毕竟你都是跟VOCAL 这里不跟有点奇怪同上

美丽

LucyS wrote:
M4M
=D

[Eazy]
AR -1 ? keep ar3
00:37:243 (4,5) - as said before, stack notes isn't good in eazy. Is better if you do like here 00:39:743 (4,5). Really, in both cases, I never see this rhythm in a ranked map, but i think the last is alright. Consider it. let me for further thought
00:42:957 (4,5) - Same ^
00:56:350 (1,2) - You should use this Rhythm:

Because of the strong beat here 00:56:707 , and is better to read. pretty right，changed
01:06:886 (1) - Move the tail like: http://puu.sh/c0sjQ/516239d78f.jpg to become more symmetrical. keep..
01:12:600 (1,2,1,2) - Try unstack these stack is good imo

[Normal]
00:10:457 (2) - End this here 00:10:814 I can't hear any beat in the red tick. i know want you mean but i want to keep..just like hard and ex，it is something sound start’s place
00:28:850 (4) - Move this a little up? yes

[Hard]
00:02:421 (4,5,6) - I had to play this three times to get this rhythm lol, I think that the song suggest MORE that the next note is in the white tick. So I suggest this rhythm: well，i try this but found two red line is more clear than white line..

Than you can stack 00:02:600 (4) - in 00:01:886 (3) - tail. like 00:19:029 (3,4)
00:04:564 - Add a note here. add
00:52:600 (1) - Move this to the same place as 00:53:671 (5) de gosaru. want to create a jump here
00:56:707 (2,1) - Delete this jump plz, is better to read. fine imo

Good Luck ~

thanks all guys!!

Last edited by Sellenite 2014-10-06T10:03:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2014-10-06T09:05:47+00:00

M4M from your queue~

My map: Hanatan - Hajimete no Oto

[General]
:3
Nice bg and song ;D

[Diff Spread]
Take a note that Easy and Normal are quite close in stars (E1.7 - N1.9), meanwhile Hard is like 3.4
My suggestion is to make Easy become easier, use more long 1/1 white ticks (Easy is hard for easy players tbh)
And then make Normal just a bit harder, 1/2 reverse slider could be used

[Diff Name]
Master could be "Extra", I din't get the meaning of "Master" for diff name anyways

[Metadata]
You can put in Japanese title as Tags seems you used English name...whatever, it's good to have a check with metadata pros
Add: サラバ、愛しき悲しみたちよ
The tag "goodbye" could be "good_bye" I guess, just a little correction

[KIAI Times]
01:12:600 - and 01:14:029 - don't abuse KIAI?

[Easy]
SV is slightly fast (but fine for the song speed and bpm i guess), I'd prefer 0.8SV
00:11:350 (1,2) - Prefer this to a slider, might be slightly hard to read for Easy and seems you did 2 circles in Normal diff
00:34:029 (3) - Make this shape same as 00:32:600 (1) - (with rotate) looks better to flow 00:34:743 (4) - ? (opt.):

Image

00:37:243 (4) - This can be removed in Easy, hard for the tap
00:42:957 (4) - ^ , actually something like this would do 00:45:636 (1) -
00:47:243 (1) - Minor blanket
01:06:886 (1) - Rhythm suggest, remove the reverse and place it at 01:08:314 - to make it likely same as 01:02:600 (1) - , they're close to each other

[Normal]
00:25:457 - At this point it's better to have a hit instead of ending with slider reverse cuz it's a strong beat, something like 00:28:314 - or 00:29:743 - works
00:41:529 (1,2) - Minor, prefer them to look same shape, nothing much (opt.)

[Hard]
Try and reduce the number of jumps and it's distance (which some might look unnecessary) to fix the diff spread too, other than that are all fine
00:26:171 (3) - Minor blanket with 00:25:457 (1) - , refer slider ball
01:43:671 (5) - Suggest to unstack this from 01:43:136 (4) - cuz it's a long slider, which (5) are mosltly hidden from it. Try to move to the tail of 01:43:136 (4) - (right side)

[wkyik's Insane]
00:22:957 (2,3,4) - Rhythm, the triplets should start at red tick which is 00:22:779 - , slightly off the song imo. Can swap the timing of 00:22:779 (1) - and 00:22:957 (2,3,4) -
00:23:850 - Prefer no clap for here, like Clap > Hit + Hit > Hit from 00:23:671 -
00:45:368 - In the song there should be a hit there, with a lower volume or some thing sorta soft sampleset
00:58:314 - The SV starting here should be like 0.8 ~ 1.0 SV, which is likely something between pre-chorus and chorus, lead to KIAI too (if you notice the bg music)
01:13:850 - Put something for vocal, or maybe you want to make it same as 01:15:279 - (still prefer something there to sound the vocal)
01:49:029 (5) - Strange jump, imo (5) should be at like here (pic), check with someone else:

Image

[img]http://puu.sh/c1qdy/9e7d0ea56b.jpg[[/img]

01:52:600 - In here I'd prefer rhythm like this (pic) to fit slider pattern, it's optional tho:

Image

[Master]
Blue ticks drag such as 01:28:582 - which the hit (slider tail etc) at that point could be a little low in volume, I feel it's a bit annoying. Could try, for instance 60% / 70% volume at 01:28:582 - and then back to 80% at 01:28:671 - , tested and it sounded better. Please apply to other drags in KIAI part if you agree with this.
^ And especially for the part 01:47:154 - , could be more lower if you wish to, a bit annoying for vocal (you know, the vocal is kawaii)
00:11:350 (1,2) - In here there's 1/6 guitar scratch at 00:11:588 - and 00:11:648 - , you can consider to extend the sldier length of 00:11:350 (1) - and 00:11:707 (2) - (for balance) OR add 2 circles separately at the both 1/6 place to increase the difficulty
00:22:779 (1,2) - ^ Same for this one, you can make like a long drag for both
00:45:636 (1,2) - In here would be like a drum hit at 00:45:904 - , well they're all up to you
01:14:386 (2) - Make this one on the top, looks better for me (something like mirror jump)
01:37:600 (5,6) - Just to mention if you realize they are actually smaller jump than 01:36:886 (1,2) - but in 01:37:957 (7,8) - you made the jump bigger again
01:38:314 (1) - Minor, this one doesn't look straight to 01:38:135 (8,9,1) - , should be somewhere around X:320 Y:304 (slightly left)
01:47:243 (1,1,1) - Not sure why you NC this, could be flowe patterns, but NC sliders give a lot HP if you're okay with this

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-10-06T15:41:54+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
M4M from your queue~

My map: Hanatan - Hajimete no Oto

[General]
:3
Nice bg and song ;D yesssssss

[Diff Spread]
Take a note that Easy and Normal are quite close in stars (E1.7 - N1.9), meanwhile Hard is like 3.4
My suggestion is to make Easy become easier, use more long 1/1 white ticks (Easy is hard for easy players tbh)
And then make Normal just a bit harder, 1/2 reverse slider could be used i will make easy easier a bit，but normal i think is very difficult now and hard to increase..

[Diff Name]
Master could be "Extra", I din't get the meaning of "Master" for diff name anyways master is related to maimai highest difficult name

[Metadata]
You can put in Japanese title as Tags seems you used English name...whatever, it's good to have a check with metadata pros
Add: サラバ、愛しき悲しみたちよ
The tag "goodbye" could be "good_bye" I guess, just a little correction will check finally

[KIAI Times]
01:12:600 - and 01:14:029 - don't abuse KIAI? here deserve it

[Easy]
SV is slightly fast (but fine for the song speed and bpm i guess), I'd prefer 0.8SV
00:11:350 (1,2) - Prefer this to a slider, might be slightly hard to read for Easy and seems you did 2 circles in Normal diff changed
00:34:029 (3) - Make this shape same as 00:32:600 (1) - (with rotate) looks better to flow 00:34:743 (4) - ? (opt.):keep，prefer current flow
Image
00:37:243 (4) - This can be removed in Easy, hard for the tap changed rhythm
00:42:957 (4) - ^ , actually something like this would do 00:45:636 (1) -
00:47:243 (1) - Minor blanket fix
01:06:886 (1) - Rhythm suggest, remove the reverse and place it at 01:08:314 - to make it likely same as 01:02:600 (1) - , they're close to each other keep，i prefer some tick voice here

[Normal]
00:25:457 - At this point it's better to have a hit instead of ending with slider reverse cuz it's a strong beat, something like 00:28:314 - or 00:29:743 - works need to adjust flow and i totally like this..
00:41:529 (1,2) - Minor, prefer them to look same shape, nothing much (opt.) changed

[Hard]
Try and reduce the number of jumps and it's distance (which some might look unnecessary) to fix the diff spread too, other than that are all fine
00:26:171 (3) - Minor blanket with 00:25:457 (1) - , refer slider ball fix
01:43:671 (5) - Suggest to unstack this from 01:43:136 (4) - cuz it's a long slider, which (5) are mosltly hidden from it. Try to move to the tail of 01:43:136 (4) - (right side) cant think better flow than this，so keep for further thought

[Master]
Blue ticks drag such as 01:28:582 - which the hit (slider tail etc) at that point could be a little low in volume, I feel it's a bit annoying. Could try, for instance 60% / 70% volume at 01:28:582 - and then back to 80% at 01:28:671 - , tested and it sounded better. Please apply to other drags in KIAI part if you agree with this. hum..actually i dont feel many strange about this cuz there are many whistle on white or red line..the whistle had made them more noisy，equivalent to the decreasing the vol. as your mention
^ And especially for the part 01:47:154 - , could be more lower if you wish to, a bit annoying for vocal (you know, the vocal is kawaii)
00:11:350 (1,2) - In here there's 1/6 guitar scratch at 00:11:588 - and 00:11:648 - , you can consider to extend the sldier length of 00:11:350 (1) - and 00:11:707 (2) - (for balance) OR add 2 circles separately at the both 1/6 place to increase the difficulty nononooooo..i just want to stop in some place where is no sound，stop in 1/6 is too strange
00:22:779 (1,2) - ^ Same for this one, you can make like a long drag for both same as above
00:45:636 (1,2) - In here would be like a drum hit at 00:45:904 - , well they're all up to you same..
01:14:386 (2) - Make this one on the top, looks better for me (something like mirror jump) want to let it below
01:37:600 (5,6) - Just to mention if you realize they are actually smaller jump than 01:36:886 (1,2) - but in 01:37:957 (7,8) - you made the jump bigger again just a jump pattern
01:38:314 (1) - Minor, this one doesn't look straight to 01:38:135 (8,9,1) - , should be somewhere around X:320 Y:304 (slightly left)
01:47:243 (1,1,1) - Not sure why you NC this, could be flowe patterns, but NC sliders give a lot HP if you're okay with this it is totally my mind lol，it will be more beautiful just like a flower，but i will consider it

thanks rakuen~

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-10-07T14:44:38+00:00

xxdeathx wrote:
[Kowaiwkyik's Insane]
00:22:421 (7,1) - It's best not to leave 3/4 gap because that can be hard to read and throw players off. I suggest repeating the slider so it ends at 00:22:600 no :p
01:12:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is kind of confusing here. Use more consistent DS.
01:14:029 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

litoluna wrote:
[Insane]
01:22:423 (4) - Unsnapped circle. FIXED

handsome wrote:
[insane]

00:28:850 (2,3,4) - this isn't in the center
00:37:689 (3) - blanket~ i don't want blanket here
01:09:207 (3) - maybe do 2 circles, the sound is different~

this was really welldone

sjoy wrote:
[wkyik's Insane]
00:13:314 (3) - 红线有音还是1/2感觉好点 這裡故意不觸及紅線的
01:14:922 (6,7) - 我觉得大跳爽点好
01:26:350 (4) - 删？参考01:20:457 (4,5) - 這裡有音

LucyS wrote:
[Insane]
01:12:600 - This rhythm fits better here: good idea but not fixed, i hear 01:13:136 (3,4) - have some sound

Good Luck ~

Rakuen wrote:
[wkyik's Insane]
00:22:957 (2,3,4) - Rhythm, the triplets should start at red tick which is 00:22:779 - , slightly off the song imo. Can swap the timing of 00:22:779 (1) - and 00:22:957 (2,3,4) -
00:23:850 - Prefer no clap for here, like Clap > Hit + Hit > Hit from 00:23:671 -
00:45:368 - In the song there should be a hit there, with a lower volume or some thing sorta soft sampleset
00:58:314 - The SV starting here should be like 0.8 ~ 1.0 SV, which is likely something between pre-chorus and chorus, lead to KIAI too (if you notice the bg music)
01:13:850 - Put something for vocal, or maybe you want to make it same as 01:15:279 - (still prefer something there to sound the vocal)
01:49:029 (5) - Strange jump, imo (5) should be at like here (pic), check with someone else:
Image
[img]http://puu.sh/c1qdy/9e7d0ea56b.jpg[[/img]
01:52:600 - In here I'd prefer rhythm like this (pic) to fit slider pattern, it's optional tho:
Image

lazylazybusybusy

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Sellenite

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Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-10-07T15:29:40+00:00

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-10-19T03:00:08+00:00

Forum PM.

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

Add WidescreenStoryboard in Master diff.
00:01:172 (1) to 00:12:064 (2) this part seems sounds like hitsound have a bit small,maybe you can consider to add 50% volume here.
01:15:457 (1) - This whistle sound have a bit smalll,turn up to 65% volume ?

[Easy] I feel can combine with some rhythm to reduce the stars,look some rhythm already appear in normal diff,so suggest change some rhythm to reduce this star,do a few some suggestion :

00:01:529 (2,3) - Combine 2/1 slider here? (Because has been appeared in normal diff,suggest combine with it.)
00:07:243 (2,3) - The same as above.
00:25:814 (4,5) -
SPOILER
00:28:671 (3,4) - Combine 2/1 slider here?
00:38:671 (2,3) - The same as above.
01:10:100 (1,2) - Combine 2/1 slider here.

Kiai就不挑了，因為我覺得可以跟的多一些。

[Normal]

00:28:850 (4) - This pattern look a bit weird,move up a bit keep curve?

[Hard]

00:02:421 (4,5) - Suggest change a 1/1 slider here,have a bit hard to read (Because (5) stack (4) feel not good play feeling which I think,not so comfortable.)
00:11:350 (1,2,3) - This jump DS should be placed consistent.
00:22:779 (1,3) - The same as above.
00:34:029 (1) - Feel this DS have a bit far,keep 1.8x ~2.0x for this note?
00:58:136 (2,3,1) - Move to (347|264) keep curve?
00:59:743 (4) - Forgot set a NC?
01:12:957 (2) - Too close the HP bar here,move down a bit. (Fix done,and 01:14:029 (1,2) - remember symmetry.)

[wkyik's Insane]

00:10:993 (4) - If use ctrl+g will be played better.
00:49:029 (5) - Because this vocal is second start,so feel add a NC will easy to read here.
00:56:350 (3) - The same as above.
01:31:171 (1) - Feel use ctrl+g will have a good flow,and (2) move a bit placement?
SPOILER

[Master]

00:16:886 (6,7) - Why these do a anti-jump ? Feel have a bit hard to read here,maybe you stack (6) better.
00:23:136 (2) - Sounds like this music seems can enlarge a bit DS,move to (128|188)?
00:29:921 (1) - Move to (239|134) feel better.
00:31:171 (1) - Use ctrl+g?
00:35:814 (3) - Have a bit far,move to (430|290)?
01:14:922 (2) - Perhaps can use a ctrl+j here,make have a different pattern with 01:13:314 (1,2,3).
01:38:135 (8,9,1) - Perhaps can move to (252|284),make see clear this stream.
01:46:886 (1,1,1,1) - Prevent to NC spam,use slider speed change here?

[Other]

有點擔心N到H的spread，你可以降低一點Hard diff的stars，和彼此位置間的間距 (個人覺得還是有點大)
If fix done,call me back (But still hope the spread can reduce it better (N to H) in my next recheck.)

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-10-19T09:40:58+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Forum PM.

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
Add WidescreenStoryboard in Master diff. fix
00:01:172 (1) to 00:12:064 (2) this part seems sounds like hitsound have a bit small,maybe you can consider to add 50% volume here. all diff fix
01:15:457 (1) - This whistle sound have a bit smalll,turn up to 65% volume ? all diff fix
[Easy] I feel can combine with some rhythm to reduce the stars,look some rhythm already appear in normal diff,so suggest change some rhythm to reduce this star,do a few some suggestion :
00:01:529 (2,3) - Combine 2/1 slider here? (Because has been appeared in normal diff,suggest combine with it.) fix
00:07:243 (2,3) - The same as above. fix
00:25:814 (4,5) - fix
SPOILER
00:28:671 (3,4) - Combine 2/1 slider here? fix
00:38:671 (2,3) - The same as above. 前面有个类似的改了，这个就不改啦，多样性
01:10:100 (1,2) - Combine 2/1 slider here. 这个一改效果弱了不少，还是保持比较爽

Kiai就不挑了，因為我覺得可以跟的多一些。
[Normal]
00:28:850 (4) - This pattern look a bit weird,move up a bit keep curve? 怎么这么多人提这个。。这里我是比较想凹下去=w=
[Hard]
00:02:421 (4,5) - Suggest change a 1/1 slider here,have a bit hard to read (Because (5) stack (4) feel not good play feeling which I think,not so comfortable.) fix
00:11:350 (1,2,3) - This jump DS should be placed consistent. fix
00:22:779 (1,3) - The same as above. fix
00:34:029 (1) - Feel this DS have a bit far,keep 1.8x ~2.0x for this note? fix
00:58:136 (2,3,1) - Move to (347|264) keep curve? 故意放开的。。
00:59:743 (4) - Forgot set a NC? 两条大白线一次NC
01:12:957 (2) - Too close the HP bar here,move down a bit. (Fix done,and 01:14:029 (1,2) - remember symmetry.) fix
[Master]
00:16:886 (6,7) - Why these do a anti-jump ? Feel have a bit hard to read here,maybe you stack (6) better.玩的时候觉得anti可以突出下一个跳，原地stack不是太好效果
00:23:136 (2) - Sounds like this music seems can enlarge a bit DS,move to (128|188)? 主要是想来个123的递进DS
00:29:921 (1) - Move to (239|134) feel better. fix
00:31:171 (1) - Use ctrl+g? fix
00:35:814 (3) - Have a bit far,move to (430|290)? 移近了，不过不是你xy
01:14:922 (2) - Perhaps can use a ctrl+j here,make have a different pattern with 01:13:314 (1,2,3). fix
01:38:135 (8,9,1) - Perhaps can move to (252|284),make see clear this stream. 与7形成一个直线。。
01:46:886 (1,1,1,1) - Prevent to NC spam,use slider speed change here? 不变SV了。。主要是那里DS我改变了，加几个NC爽爽
[Other]
有點擔心N到H的spread，你可以降低一點Hard diff的stars，和彼此位置間的間距 (個人覺得還是有點大) 应该是没问题的啊。。N是非常难的，但不知道为什么不能在星级表现出来，我觉得至少也有2.1左右的难度了，而H也不是太多跳，没改跳的我都没跳了。。这么洗脑激情的歌做得也算是比较善良=w=，很难降下去啊
If fix done,call me back (But still hope the spread can reduce it better (N to H) in my next recheck.)

谢谢船业
updated my diff，等柚子

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-10-19T10:01:40+00:00

沒FIX ctrl+g

45645

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Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-10-19T10:09:44+00:00

up

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-10-19T17:01:55+00:00

Everything looks fine on all diffs are okay imo.

Bubbled !

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-10-19T17:10:04+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Everything looks fine on all diffs are okay imo.

Bubbled !

谢谢船业
希望平安无事

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2014-10-23T05:13:41+00:00

和AR3的那张还真有够像的呵呵

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-10-23T06:39:52+00:00

送点星

本来就拿的我的mp3做的嘛..

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Sellenite 2014-10-23T07:37:46+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
和AR3的那张还真有够像的呵呵

wya&noyb hehe

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-10-30T13:39:53+00:00

[General]

Disable Widescreen Support.
1500 ms audio-leadin for each diff.
Metadata Reference from official Youtube channel of artist's agency: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWSbfCPkTBk
```
Romanised Artist: MOMOIRO CLOVER Z
Romanised Title: SARABA ITOSHIKI KANASHIMI TACHIYO
```
Tag隨便搞搞加short version 把本來的title移過來之類

[Master]

00:10:457 (5) - CTRL+G的flow好像比較舒暢
00:16:886 (6,7) - 這是梗?
00:31:886 (4,5) - 這blanket在這diff裡特別不完整
00:40:814 (5,6) - 要是滑條的話多合歌詞後面也是用滑條來表達耶 00:45:189 - 這裡的連打都放棄了
01:09:654 - 01:11:082 (7) - 有鼓的地方不map 反而在沒鼓的加圓圈求解釋 :<
01:35:814 (2) - CTRL+G
01:36:172 (3) - ^ circular flow

[Insane]

Delete redundant green lines: 00:22:779 - 00:45:636
00:12:064 - Similar hitsounds as 00:11:350 and 00:11:707 .
00:56:886 (1,2,3,4) - 有d空 probably needs some whistles.
01:03:850 (7,8,1) - Stack.
01:11:707 - 這whistle是加錯了還是怎樣? 對比前後的slider 感覺加在前面白線對應vocal比較合理

[Hard]

00:26:171 (3) - 太誇張啦這跳 CTRL+G好不好還有00:25:993 (2,3,1) - 本來的排列就比較誤導玩家很容易理解中間是小跳instead of 停頓
00:34:654 (5,6) - 太難啦很多跳跟SV很高再加1/4跳太難了 :@
00:45:279 (4,1) - Stack.
01:38:314 (1) - 不用NC 單獨一個有點神奇

[N+E]

Normal: 01:44:029 (6,1) - Swap NC.
Easy: 01:41:171 (6,1) - ^

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-10-30T14:22:03+00:00

有d空那個加了whistle覺得怪怪地所以沒fix

643

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 86886
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:SARABA ITOSHIKI KANASHIMI TACHIYO
TitleUnicode:サラバ、愛しき悲しみたちよ
Artist:MOMOIRO CLOVER Z
ArtistUnicode:ももいろクローバーZ
Creator:Sellenite
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:
Tags:Good-bye Dear Sorrows maimai kawaiwkyik
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-10-30T14:41:09+00:00

全大写感觉好奇怪啊没问题吗

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-10-30T14:47:58+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
全大写感觉好奇怪啊没问题吗

不知道啊，应该可以吧，官方频道，找了好久

Sellenite

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Sellenite 2014-10-30T15:23:43+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
Disable Widescreen Support. 都改了，short version就不加啦，不好看
1500 ms audio-leadin for each diff.
Metadata Reference from official Youtube channel of artist's agency: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OWSbfCPkTBk
Romanised Artist: MOMOIRO CLOVER Z
Romanised Title: SARABA ITOSHIKI KANASHIMI TACHIYO
Tag隨便搞搞加short version 把本來的title移過來之類
[Master]
00:10:457 (5) - CTRL+G的flow好像比較舒暢故意的钝角后锐角跳
00:16:886 (6,7) - 這是梗? 是啊
00:31:886 (4,5) - 這blanket在這diff裡特別不完整改了另一种形状。。改了半天也blan不好就用直角了
00:40:814 (5,6) - 要是滑條的話多合歌詞後面也是用滑條來表達耶 00:45:189 - 這裡的連打都放棄了改了滑条和加了连打
01:09:654 - 01:11:082 (7) - 有鼓的地方不map 反而在沒鼓的加圓圈求解釋 :< 有屁股的地方不加是因为我想大跳，加了我就爆炸了，没屁股的加了是因为前面那个红线听上去有延迟音，所以我变成三连打感觉好听很多
01:35:814 (2) - CTRL+G 故意的同方向滑条，我很多图都这样
01:36:172 (3) - ^ circular flow 同上
[Hard]
00:26:171 (3) - 太誇張啦這跳 CTRL+G好不好還有00:25:993 (2,3,1) - 本來的排列就比較誤導玩家很容易理解中間是小跳instead of 停頓改了
00:34:654 (5,6) - 太難啦很多跳跟SV很高再加1/4跳太難了 :@ 全改了，换梗
00:45:279 (4,1) - Stack. ed
01:38:314 (1) - 不用NC 單獨一個有點神奇 my bad
[N+E]
Normal: 01:44:029 (6,1) - Swap NC. 不了，那个kiai因为很多折返或滑条尾踩白线，我直接跟歌词nc了，而且1和后面折返是同一个梗，就不nc了
Easy: 01:41:171 (6,1) - ^ 同上