1. Hard (4,24 stars, 157 notes)
2. Insane (4,7 stars, 187 notes)
3. Normal (3,1 stars, 106 notes)

Ichigo-Sora wrote:

I love the storyboard, but I think you should get someone with timing experience to check the offset >< I got 2137, but I'm not complete sure its correct ^^" I'll probably mod this when the timing gets sorted out, but for now have a star (:
Don't kudosu this post please.

Vikon wrote:

Im not a pro-modder, just a few I can find.

[ALL]
set a preview point rdy
Lack of hitsoundrdy

[Normal]
00:50:596 (5)(6)(7)(8) a little bit messy rdy
01:03:404 (9) distance snap rdy

[Hard]
00:37:904 (4) overlapped,quite hard to get I only move it a bit, but it's a necesary circle <.<
01:07:673 (7) distance snap moved 1 square and added new combo

[Insane]
00:37:904 (4) overlappedmoved
00:41:596 (7,8,9) distance snap I use the same distance as the rest of the map


quite good, get my star~

James2250 wrote:

remove the break at the beginning of the song for all diff's rdy
you can get rid of [ ] in tags rdy
background has to be 1024x768 and below (yours is 1039x768 so resize it) rdy
keep kiai the same on all diff's mmm.. why?

Normal:
I would lower hp drain and overall diff by 1 rdy
00:09:981 - break isn't needed rdy
00:22:673 (1) - add a repeat rdy
00:27:750 (9) - add note rdy
00:34:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:54:519 - add some notes around here? rdy
01:19:673 (2) - add note rdy
01:20:596 (1) - end at 01:21:519 rdy

Hard:
00:10:442 - break isnt needed rdy
00:15:288 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:23:135 (5) - add note rdy
00:34:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:48:981 (7) - add note rdy
00:54:750 (4) - ^? fixed in another way :3
01:07:673 (1) - remove new combo rdy
01:19:673 (2) - add note rdy
01:20:596 (1) - end at 01:21:519 rdy

Insane:
00:09:981 (1,1) - I would just stack these at center of grid rdy
00:15:288 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:38:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make it different from hard rdy
00:48:981 (7) - add note rdy
01:20:481 (1) - start at 01:20:596 end at 01:21:519 rdy
this diff uses many of the same patterns as hard...try and mix it up some more

*star*

James2250 wrote:

it is generally said if its the same song on all diff's and the same creator there is no reason to change the kiai (you can argue with other modders about that if you don't want to change it)
-end kiai time at the end of the last spinner? mmmm

remodding because im avoiding doing an essay atm

Normal:
00:15:288 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:16:211 (6,1) - switch new combo's? rdy
00:24:981 (6) - straighten this out? rdy
00:48:288 (7) - add a repeat rdy
00:55:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy

Hard:
00:54:981 (1) - remove new combo rdy
01:01:673 (1) - ^ rdy

Insane:
00:10:211 (1) - remove new combo rdy
00:21:519 (4,5,6) - align? rdy
00:30:981 (14) - this is only diff where this doesnt have a new combo in english again please xD, i don't understand
00:38:596 (5) - new combo? rdy
00:49:904 (4) - I wouldn't put this slider under previous notes rdy
01:05:135 (1) - auto has to be able to get 2000 on spinners for them to be rankable rdy
01:20:481 (1) - start on white tick rdy

good luck

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hello Astom

Nice map
Especially the sliders with wing pattern absolutely love it

Comment on the SB even though not pro on it, the white flashes are quite distracting for me maybe reduce some of it or give longer interval for each flashes, any way it's a good Sb and skin. Also the jump and 2xtime SB in normal and hard are still visible even though there aren't any jump in normal or speed up in hard on, ask someone good with SB to hide those

that's all I can point up good luck with the map
Here's your star

1. - Add the name of anime instead of "Anime" tag.
2. - Set slider tick rate to "1" on Normal. It will sound better.
3. - Re-place all notes using Distance Snap.
4. - The SB text is a bit hard to read

Midget wrote:

>Requested Mod<

~Overall~

1. - Add the name of anime instead of "Anime" tag. Anime name in Source Already
2. - Set slider tick rate to "1" on Normal. It will sound better. I think about it
3. - Re-place all notes using Distance Snap. this is for u viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919
4. - The SB text is a bit hard to read I think about it

Request a mod again, when you'll re-place all notes with Distance Snap. I'll check it again.
And next time you'll ask the mod, specify the type of mod please.

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- Red - You must fix that

- Orange - You should fix that

- Blue - A Suggestion

Astom wrote:

Anime name in Source Already If Source is OST, it's Ok then.
this is for u viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919 Lawl

FishHook wrote:

First off, I must have watched this part 10 times over before continuing watching the rest of the episode ^_^ I love this song. <3 Too bad the mangaka is taking so damn slow with his releases.

Now off to modding. I focused mostly on spacing, but also looked at combo patterns. I like symmetry so if you think the song would be better without the change, just say so. I'm still new at modding and making maps so I'm not going to label anything as YOU MUST CHANGE THIS because as far as I know, it might not be best for the map. Take everything as a suggestion. (Until I start feeling what I say is 100% better for the map ) Now, change your grid level to 3 before making any of my movement/spacing suggestions.

[Normal]
maybe (xD) I fix all of this in another way
0:35:365 (4),(5),(6),(7),(8) All move 2 squares up, and 1 square right for alignment.
0:36:750 (7),(8) Now move these two 1 square left for spacing.
0:42:750 (2) Move up just a tiny tiny bit for alignment. (I think beat snapping might do it.)
0:48:288 (7) Move 2 squares left. You would then want to move the next beats 1,2,3 to match spacing. (Maybe create a slant to the slider instead of a straight line down. (1) 3 squares left, (2) 2 squares left, (3) 1 square left. I don't think the spacing between (7) and (1) would be too much of a problem since its [Normal] difficulty. )
1:00:981 (2) all the way to (2) in the next combo move 1 square down.
1:02:365 (6) Up 1 square. Right 1 square.
1:02:596 (7) Right 2 squares
For (8), (9), (1), (2) maintain 1.2x spacing and re-position to your liking. I don't quite understand the reason for how you placed those beats . battery?

[Hard]
maybe (xD) I fix all of this in another way
0:21:519 (4), (5), (6) Snap align with the end of the (3) slider. (It's a bit nazi modding but it shouldn't effect the following combo with spacing and it makes the song just a tad ever more beautiful then it already is haha.)
0:30:288 (11), (12), (13) Basically, (11) and (13) could be symmetric with (8) and (9). Best bet would be to move the whole combo to the x-axis. Then turn off grid snapping. Make sure spacing is at 0.83x (Hold down alt+shift for fine tuning). Now align (11) and (13) on top of (9) and (8) respectively and then do Shift+J to flip the beat vertically. Finally, fit (12) in between (11) and (13) and you got symmetry. Move the whole combo back to its original position.I fix this in another way
0:30:981 (1) Same spacing, align with (13)
0:49:442 (2), (3), (4). The same thing as 0:30:288. Move to y-axis and match (2) with (5) in the previous combo. (3) with (3). (4) with (1). I fix this in another way
0:49:904 (4)-(10) Might need to re-arrange spacing after you do the last suggestion, but I think it will match up fine afterwards. Just a word of caution.
1:11:365 (1) Move down 2 squares.

[Insane]
This part is new so i didn't notice
0:11:596 (3) - (5) Spacing is irregular. Keep it at a static 1.0x spacing like the rest of the song. (3) and (4) up 1 square. (5) up 2 squares. rdy
0:12:981(1) - (6) Same as above. Keep a 1.0x spacing. rdy
0:12:519 (6) Re-adjust its' spacing due to note placement changing. rdy

0:19:442 (8) Move down 2 squares so it matches (1), (2), (3), in the combo. I don't see the problem
0:23:596 If you were making the combo the shape of half a heart, ignore. If you weren't move (2) down 1 square, left 1 square. Move (3) right 4 squares. Move (4) right 5 squares, down 1 square. Move (5) right 6 squares, down 2 squares.
This also matches 1.0x spacing with the following combo. I like the heart
0:41:365 (4), (5), (6) I don't like the way this looks with the rest of the combo. Either make it into a slider or have (2) be a triplet of notes to match (4), (5), (6). "fixed"
0:45:058(7)-(13) Why did you stop making square jump patterns? Its possible to make 3 squares with the third square ending with (1) of the next combo. The two new squares could be placed anywhere as long as it matches spacing. "fixed"
1:11:365 (1) Move 1 square down.rdy

Really nice designing by the way. Got my +star.

.i did this before and when i read the nazi post and viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919 well...

FishHook wrote:

.i did this before and when i read the nazi post and viewtopic.php?f=56&t=16919 well...

lol, everyone has their own degree of neatness and tidiness. If I were to Nazi post, I'd have spent an extra 1.5hours checking the spacing between every note. Even the notes between combos. I was only looking at things that caught my eye when playing through that didn't seem right, trying to avoid sounding like a Nazi modder

Glad it helped tho. Gonna go check out what you've done now.

orioncomet wrote:

~[General]~
- lovely skin <3 thx
- offset seem fine ok thx =)
- Disable countdown [Song Setup > Storyboarding > Countdown > remove mark on Enable countdown] rdy
- 00:38:596 kiai time don't fit here mm ok
- 00:43:673 ^ i like this =(
- 00:49:904 start kiai time here's better

~[Normal]~
00:05:827 (1) - try sound finish rdy
00:16:211 (1) - try sound finish at last silderrdy
00:49:904 (4) - try sound finish at begin of silderi like a whistle
01:12:750 (4) - try sound finish rdy
01:19:673 (1) - ^ added in the last version haha
01:20:596 (1) - ^ previous circle has a finish

~[Hard]~
00:05:827 (1) - try sound finish rdy
00:24:981 (1) - remove new combo? no <.< following the sound of the piano
00:49:904 (4) - try sound finish rdy
01:20:596 (1) - ^ =( no

~[Insane]~
- Circle Size +1, plz omg o_o no
- Silder Velocity ailttle slow.. But It's not a big problem >_< i don't like fast slider, except sometimes
00:05:827 (1) - try sound finish added in the last version :3
00:24:981 (1) - remove new combo? no :3
00:49:904 (4) - try sound finish at begin of silder rdy
01:08:365 (1) - try sound finish i like a whistle :3
01:20:596 (1) - ^ no <.<

cute song ~ star ~ >.<

lordfoster wrote:

wasaaa xd
la foto pensativa xd lol

e aqui esta mi star


una estrella media rara xd

Arusha Shuna wrote:

Request Acce~~
WTF ecchi Spinner-BG
I TOLD you to not post the map if it has ecchi element well... sorry, if your mind have problems with something like that I erase it, because I haven't problems wiht erase it
consider yourself lucky i realized the skin after i finish modding it for someone like you? maybe i comet a error in request your help, i don't like people what make a rage for things like this

Normal
00:22:673 (1) - lengthen the slider by 1/4 beat and remove 2 repeats rdy
00:30:288 (11) - lengthen the slider by 1/4 beat and remove 1 repeat rdy
00:42:981 (x) - add a note? no
00:49:211 (1) - move 1 tiny grid right? no
00:57:981 (7) - move 1 tiny grid left no
00:58:442 (8) - move 1 tiny grid down no
01:03:404 (9) - start at the previous red tick, lengthen the slider by 1/4 beat, remove 1 repeat rdy
01:04:673 (2) - symmetry? no

Hard
00:16:442 (2,4) - spacing issue? no
00:17:365 (1,2,3) - start 1/2 beat later please listen to 25%...
00:41:827 (9) - remove rdy

Insane
00:27:750 (x) - since it's insane diff, add a note please listen the batery to
00:31:673 (1) - finish at the previous red tick no rankeable
01:15:981 (3,1) - u sure u wanna go with those shapes? first person who complains about this, I like these sliders

there's more of them, too much flaws, no star, and you're blacklistedI read that
if you don't wanna follow this mod or you don't give me kudosu go ahead, i won't rage I don't cry and make things worse like you, so I give a kudosu to you

Sushi971 wrote:

[Hard]
00:31:899 (2,4) - symetry? lol thx
00:39:053 (3,5) - ^ thx

[Insane]
01:15:976 (3,1) - i know this is supposed to be slider art, but it is ugly.insane? i can pass it and There are others who can

Dusty wrote:

The flashes are bright. Maybe try playing around with the fade?mmm maye

In "spinner-osu.png" you spelled it "YEY!" Is this intentional? (normally people spell it YAY!)yea is intentional

The lyrics are hard to see, maybe put a black border around them? Something like this:[attachment=0:0ae47]blu.png[/attachment:0ae47]
Try it out (if you don't know how to do it for the rest of them, PM me) I make the skin so I know how do that, thx

"star.png" isn't actually needed for beatmap skins, you can delete it.okey

[Normal]
01:07:206 (4,5,6) - Triple 1/4'ths were unexpected, maybe remove 5? rdy
01:07:668 (6,7,8) - If you keep the triple 1/4'ths then please unstack these. Because of the stacking I expected the second set to be triple 1/4ths toommm rdy
01:19:206 - Add a note here maybe? I make this only in insane
01:19:437 - And here? I make this only in insane

I liked the slider art near the end

[Hard]
01:19:206 - If you added notes her in Normal you should also add them in this diff I make this only in insane
01:19:437 - ^ I make this only in insane

[Insane]
Make the Time x2 warning appear earlier ok
^but I think you SB'd that well, it's nice how it pops out thx

*star

xxheroxx wrote:

"fondik.png" is... i mean, is that on purpose? Not a huge deal, though. I think it's unnecessary, delete it hahaahahahaha xDD I had not really noticed,anyway in use, perhaps later I change its name

kino77 wrote:

Nice map~

Nothing found,just some suggestion~
[Insane]
Amost world of circle,try to add some slider and reverse slider?They can also work well~
The sign "JUMP" is unnecessary to me for the jump is not big enough to need a warning~
The KIAI time - I only like the middle one,and better start at 00:50:130 (5)~

That's all~
Star~

1. Maybe you need an easier difficulty... [Normal] has too many tricks to be considered the easiest difficulty in the mapset.

1. Scanning the beatmap's folder, I see these files aren't used:
   
   1. J.png
   2. P.png
   3. Q.png
   4. V.png
   5. X.png
   Please delete or use them.

1. The comboburst contains unnecessary transparency, which is unrankable. Cut down the image.

1. As I said above. Other than that, the difficulty is pretty good.

1. I agree with kino77, the "Jump" warning isn't needed. Also, it'd be better if the 2x warning appeared earlier.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. Maybe you need an easier difficulty... [Normal] has too many tricks to be considered the easiest difficulty in the mapset.

[Storyboard] rdy

1. Scanning the beatmap's folder, I see these files aren't used:
   
   1. J.png
   2. P.png
   3. Q.png
   4. V.png
   5. X.png
   Please delete or use them.

[Skin]rdy

1. The comboburst contains unnecessary transparency, which is unrankable. Cut down the image.

[Normal]

1. As I said above. Other than that, the difficulty is pretty good.

[Insane]rdy

1. I agree with kino77, the "Jump" warning isn't needed. Also, it'd be better if the 2x warning appeared earlier.

~ ~ ~

Very well done storyboard and skin, good job on that.

Armin wrote:

Optimize the offset: -5ms

[Normal]I start to work again in normal

Overall: The Distance Snap is too high for a normal difficulty... anyway good pattern-mapping, considering also the "slider-art".

00:14:129 (4) Spacing, consider to fix it (maybe stacking this with the end of the previous slider)
00:31:668 (1) Finish
00:32:360 (4) Add a whistle instead
00:33:283 (1) Delete two repeats
00:41:360 (7,8,9) Replace these making a straight line
00:43:668 (1) Make it 1/4 longer?
01:15:976 (3,4) Are these butterflies°-°? make them better please
01:20:591 (1) Hard spinner for a normal, you should move it 3/4 back and 2/4 longer

Overall Rating: 8/10

[Hard]

Overall: No major problems found. Good work this time~thx =)

00:45:514 (8,9,10) Bad position. Make a perfect triangle? naa xD sry

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

[Insane]

Overall: Is REALLY necessary the sb-warning for the jumps? DD:fixed rdy

01:15:976 (3,1) Brb, ugly to see and play. Many players will hate you for this.maybe but not impossible and yea is INSANE XD

Anyway, that's all.

Overall rating: 8,5/10

NoHItter wrote:

Storyboard

Ideally you should make jump.png be at the front of all other sb objects, but it would be hard since all diff specific images are put at the back.rdy

timex2.png should appear for a longer period of time. I could barely see it with how it suddenly appeared and faded. Maybe you could move the warning back more.rdy

I also would advise that you recheck spacing with AIMod with all diffs.rdy

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:

[01:51:971(T)] put a circle and replace [00:55:201(3)] [00:55:432(4)] with a slider. mm ok
[01:07:201(4)] put a circle here and a slider from [01:07:432] to [[01:07:984].no

of course, just some suggestions.
if they are strange then ignore them

Amazing SB and skin! star~