Lissette wrote:

quita Anime de los Tags, porque va a estar en genero

Hard
00:38:355 (1) - quita new combo listo
00:39:048 - agrega new combo listo
espero que aya quedado bn, nose io lo veo raro como quedo el combo x-x, igual estaba raro antes xd


Normal
00:43:663 (1) - termina este spinner en este punto 00:44:586listo
01:02:125 (3) - mueve esta nota medio beat hace atras omg rdy
01:17:586 (1) - haz que el spinner termine en este punto 01:19:663 - y quita la nota que esta aqui, suena mejor no crees?mmm sep

avisame cuando arregles estas cositas que se me pasaron en la otra moderacion

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Your combo colors are really hard to see, the SB stars and lyrics are exactly the same color as your hit100 and hit300 etc, so you have to really concentrate on the circles to hit correctly, maybe change colors? I change color of circles, looks better now

Normal:

-- This is actually pretty tricky for a normal with a few small jumps...i think it's pretty easy =/

00:31:663 (1,1) - Spacing! (No anti jumps in normal please) ???
00:42:509 (1,2) - Stack? rdy
00:53:817 (3,4) - Space this so it doesn't overlap? (The colors are too similar for overlap imo) rdy
00:55:432 (6,1) - Spacing? rdy
00:59:125 (8,1) - ^ rdy
01:13:201 (5) - New combo? rdy
01:20:586 (1) - Sounds better ending on red tick imo. mm ok

Hard:

00:24:971 (1,2,3) - Probably better as regular stack or stream.rdy
01:20:586 (1) - Sounds better ending on red tick at 01:21:278 start earlier if you take this suggestion.rdy

Insane:

-- Raise circle size by 1 it makes it much more fun.oke
-- I don't think you need "JUMP" it actually put me off >_> okey... but if another MATcry please take responsability x3

01:13:894 (2) - Move so it doesn't overlap? rdy
01:15:971 (3,1) - The two shapes don't go well together, I almost always combo broke on the second. rdy
01:17:586 (1) - Slider shape is hard to follow.try now
01:20:586 (1) - I this should end on the red tick at 01:21:278 with a finish, start the spinner earlier if you take this suggestion. rdy

Nice overall. Star.

Leorda wrote:

Bivuendo!

[Skin]
1) Do not transparent the hitcircle.png, it could be hard to see rdy

[Hard]
00:33:625 (4,5) - Remove? yea thx

[Insane]
00:33:625 (4,5) - Remove? yep thx

Nice song
STAR

• • 01:17:586 (1) - I don't like this slider; delete it and do something different, like this

xxheroxx wrote:

[Insane]

• • 01:17:586 (1) - I don't like this slider; delete it and do something different, like this [attachment=0:5da94]screenshot058.jpg[/attachment:5da94]

Fix this and call me again for a pubble.

Teara wrote:

Your spinner needs work, make sure you can see the cross hair and middle point clearly.

~

Watch this space for a full mod tomorrow

MarioBros777 wrote:

That is an awesome skin. I'm going to use that for a while.

Though I do have a few problems with the SB...

Storyboard

The stars that are at the beginning appear randomly, could you make them offscreen at the start and then make them appear? rdy

Also, at around 01:13:20, the singer says "Fallen Down" again but there's no SB'd lyrics. Could you SB that in too? rdy

You might want to move the "prese.png" so we can actually see your username. ^_^rdy

I'm still a bit shaky as to how the stars exit the play area, but I guess that it could do to leave it there.ok <.<

Mapping

Love the sliderart in this, it matches with the skin. The Insane difficulty was actually pretty easy, but I won't complain. 0.0

Might want to start the Kiai time at 00:50:12 instead. rdy

00:36:04 (6) - For Normal. A few of the sliderpoints here are unnecessary, might want to clean that up.rdy
01:20:58 (1) - Suggsetion for Normal that you might want to slow down this slider and adjust accordingly.rdy

After you done these changes, I'll be happy to pubble this.

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- The skin is looking much better now and it's easier to see, good job ^_^

Normal:

-- The only thing I can suggest to make this flow a little better is to increase the distance between combo examples below.

00:24:048 (3,1) - You could move 1 further away from 3 with distance snap, it would flow better imo.
00:31:663 (1,1) - ^
00:54:278 (4) - You might want to silence the return at 00:54:625 because the vocal comes earlier.
00:55:432 (6,1) - Move 1 further away from 6.
00:59:125 (8,1) - ^

Hard:

-- If you decide to -1 OD on Insane then make sure to -1 here to XD

00:22:663 (1) - A stack like 00:24:971 (1,2,3,4) - might work well here.
01:20:355 (1) - Make spinner longer like insane?

Insane:

-- The spacing here is closer than [Hard] and it doesn't suit the high OD, imo -1 OD might help your map look and play better, you could also increase the spacing slightly for some variation. Apart from that there isn't much else to comment on ^_^

All suggestions, you can ignore all of them if you want XD

1. You can put all SB items into a "SB" folder so that looked more neat

1. 01:20:355 (S) - I don't like this spinner, maybe you could use 0.5xBPM slider like what you used in normal

MarioBros777 wrote:

I forgot to say that this was pubbled at the time of my previous post. So yeah. ^_^;

Second pubble, yay.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me.
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
As MarioBros777 said, the singer says a final "Fallen Down" at the end of the song (01:20:586) which isn't storyboarded. It will be so nice if you do it rdy x_x

~Normal~
00:27:509 (6) - New Combo.rdy

~Hard~
00:31:663 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the Spacing, specially between (2,3,4) Sounds nazi, but it looks weird on play mode oxordy

~Insane~
No problems, good job!!

*star*~ :3

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. You can put all SB items into a "SB" folder so that looked more neat Sry but i can't do that, if I do that, I lost all of my work and that SB take a lot of hours

[Hard]

1. 01:20:355 (S) - I don't like this spinner, maybe you could use 0.5xBPM slider like what you used in normal Rdy

Others are all good
Impressive SB and Skin
I like it

Glasslake wrote:

Everything seemed fine.

Awesome, starred.

abalee wrote:

Fine.