Sphere - Future Stream · forum

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-28T07:24:49+00:00

飞腊

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-11-29T04:14:35+00:00

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere"
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG?

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[

Easy]
I have no complains here.

[

Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[

Hard]
00:34:340 - This beat feels empty with nothing on it, make 00:34:115 (3) - a 1/2 slider with a reverse?
01:12:235 - Something similar about this.
01:25:769 - ^

[

Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-29T05:18:08+00:00

okay, artist again:

according to the official site: http://planet-sphere.jp/main.php
some screenshots:

SPOILER

referring to this p/3455523 (it was not disqualified again, cuz it doesn't worth that, but not mean it's good, right?)

"sphere" only appears in picture not text.
in other words, both fine but we prefer Sphere more.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-29T06:07:22+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Artist should be "sphere", not "Sphere" As fycho said, 'Sphere' has no problem here
http://www.planet-sphere.jp/main.php

Also, no Hatsukoi/sphere BG? i can't find a nice BG which related to this song for this map.and,i think it's not a big issue,if you can find one,ok,i will change it

Didn't plan to check it but I feel bad by just throwing some random post, lol

[ Easy]
I have no complains here.

[ Normal]
00:06:821 (3) - This blanket could be slightly better.
00:08:626 (3) - ^
00:14:942 (1) - So we have this slider going up and the next slider is in the bottom, not a big deal, but could this slider (1) have the end going down?
00:32:084 (6) - This blanketting (7) would be cool.
00:40:205 (1) - This tiny overlap can be easily avoided. Example: http://puu.sh/d9DLx.png
01:17:423 (3,4) - This really feels weird while playing, as we have the strong vocals, then suddenly you go for the instrumental, it'd be nice to have something like you did in 01:02:987 (3,4) -

[ Insane]
00:06:821 (5,6,7,1) - The spacing here is really misleading, as the four notes aren't the same in time, but have a very similar spacing, and the spacing in 00:06:370 (2,3) - is very similar to 00:06:821 (5,6) - , despite being different in time too try using a smaller spacing in 00:07:498 (7,1) - and in 00:06:370 (2,3) -
00:14:490 (10,11) - I don't think this jump fits nicely there, as the next note has not a big impact to deserve it.
00:43:588 (9,1,2,3) - Same issue about misleading 3/4 spacings.
01:25:769 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider for this, I know the intention, but by 1/2 slider you'd have a small pause which would emphasize vocals nicely.

That'd be all, I guess.

my part all fixed,thanks!

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-11-29T06:56:15+00:00

:C

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-11-29T19:56:12+00:00

Man I'm gonna need some industrial bubbles or something with how much they get popped

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-11-30T12:19:32+00:00

osu file format v13

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all fixed

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-11-30T14:18:44+00:00

ok
all updated!

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-12-02T03:56:12+00:00

First of all, I apologize for rushing a bubble pop. As both are correct, artist can stay for consistency with the other ranked versions of this song.
About the BG, eh, I haven't watched the show so I can't help much here and not going to be picky about this.

Just a few stuff I'd want to say before rebubble.

[Normal]
00:14:942 (1) - Rotate this 20° anti-clockwise, so it leads better to the next slider
00:40:205 (1) - I think you're missing a whistle here.
01:17:423 (3) - Remove the finish in the end and add it in the beginning of 01:17:874 (4) - also, you could try moving a bit the long slider because the way it leads next note is a bit bad.

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:12:235 (1) - A finish in the end would be nice.
01:25:769 - ^ Same here, add the whistle like in the previous slider too.

[Insane]
00:14:716 (11) - You could try removing this note to keep clean the strongest beats here.

Don't kudosu this post, poke me back.

AIR

1,577 posts

Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-12-02T04:06:52+00:00

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Future Stream.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 57348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Future Stream
TitleUnicode:Future Stream
Artist:Sphere
ArtistUnicode:スフィア
Creator:Kagamine Ren
Version:AIR's Hard
Source:初恋限定。
Tags:eLtigreXXx KokoroStudiox3 AIR opening Hatsukoi Limited Rimiteddo スフィア  kotobuki minako takagaki ayahi tomatsu haruka toyosaki aki 寿美菜子 高垣彩陽 豊崎愛生 戸松遥
BeatmapID:520109
BeatmapSetID:213500

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-103,"op.avi"
0,0,"BOXXy.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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all fixed

DakeDekaane

osu! Alumni

3,500 posts

Joined February 2012

DakeDekaane 2014-12-02T04:47:30+00:00

Mapper poked me and rechecked all again, have your bubble back.

(。･∀･)ﾉ

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-12-05T14:05:54+00:00

k mod tmr

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2014-12-06T21:38:15+00:00

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-12-07T06:03:07+00:00

hard hp6太高了吧
神触又要rank

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-12-07T07:06:19+00:00

Elaine wrote:
hard hp6太高了吧
神触又要rank

作为一个成年人，我看到了这句话，感受到了强烈的震撼！

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-12-07T14:34:08+00:00

[General]

01:29:378 - Kiai在這裡結束
Tag: Delete "スフィア" as it's duplicated with the artist, add "TV Size".

[Insane]

HP7 畢竟這是Insane 儘量比Hard難一點
00:07:724 - Normal-finish
00:18:438 (8) - 這是overmap阿聽清楚的話前面幾個藍線都能放偏偏不放我也是服了
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - 擁擠在一起好醜能不能放開一點反正BPM好低 1/4jump也可以像00:35:468 (5,6,7) -
00:31:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 全都overlap在一起沒有特別的結構我看泡了就算啦下次注意一下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319401
00:42:009 (1,2) - 鼓點放錯了 http://puu.sh/dkD1Z.jpg
00:42:912 - 音量高點現在聽不到加了finish
00:42:460 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 這段突然忽略連擊的鼓點我聽著好不舒服而且那些鼓點很明顯不像前面的電音
00:50:919 - 幹嘛突然降音量聽不到音效啊
00:57:348 - 沒可能kiai開始音量反而降低
01:09:641 (4) - 放錯位置 01:09:528 - 才對
01:22:160 (2) - 刪掉不是重音更不是人聲就像01:22:611 (1,2,3) -
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合
感覺節奏放的好隨便喜歡放3連就放3連聽著那裏舒服就放連打 2連 ;_;

[Hard]

前奏的密度比normal還低難度要提升阿
00:00:506 - Finish
00:01:182 (2) - Whistle 後面00:04:791 (2) - 都放了
00:04:115 (1) - Finish
00:01:408 (3,4) - 怎麼whistle放在尾巴放在頭部跟音樂阿就像00:03:212 (5) -
00:05:919 - 漏了whistle
00:07:724 (1) - Soft-finish阿
00:20:355 (3) - ^ 00:20:581 (4) - whistle在滑條尾為什麼你都在一些跟音樂不配合的地方加whistle 我實在搞不懂音效是用來配合節奏而不是自創節奏
00:18:551 - 我求求你加點clap 現在音效完全聽不出來 http://puu.sh/dkEpx.wav 後面一小節一clap我也聽不懂什麼時候才加?
00:23:964 (4) - 搞不懂這3/2滑條無論鼓點還是人聲都在白線
00:32:310 (6,7) - 這我也搞不懂能告訴我動機麼
00:38:400 (5) - 按照前面的DS 應該這樣放: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319510 另外加finish
01:02:987 (5,6) - 這兩個節奏交換能放clap也能對應人聲
01:03:663 (6,1) - 交換NC
01:09:979 (4) - Finish 01:10:881 - 也加
01:12:686 - ^
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合

[Normal]

00:07:724 - Normal-finish
00:22:836 (2) - 突然從鼓點轉換成跟人聲有點彆扭建議這slider從白線00:23:062 - 開始
00:35:017 (4,5,6) - 太難了在hard我們才用3個1/2圓圈
00:42:799 - I 我說過了
00:54:641 - 氣氛不同了音量提高阿
00:56:445 (1,2) - 變成1個1/2滑條重音不在00:56:445 - http://puu.sh/dkGyF.jpg
00:57:348 - 提高音量
01:27:009 (1) - 低難度的轉盤在白線或者紅線開始因為要考慮到mania的玩家

[Easy]

OD2
00:40:205 - whistle
00:42:912 - Unrankable as of inaudible hitsounds, also for the next green line. Please raise the volume to 40%.
00:57:348 - Same as above, and it's also quite non-sense to have lowest volume at the beginning of the kiai
01:09:077 - Finish for the stress of vocal
01:11:784 - Descending volume is unnecessary here
01:23:513 - whistle
01:25:318 - ^
01:25:769 - Soft-clap with 40% volume, add back a 50% green line at 01:26:220 -

AIR

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Joined November 2012

AIR 2014-12-07T16:36:18+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[Hard]
前奏的密度比normal還低難度要提升阿对
00:00:506 - Finish
00:01:182 (2) - Whistle 後面00:04:791 (2) - 都放了
00:04:115 (1) - Finish
00:01:408 (3,4) - 怎麼whistle放在尾巴放在頭部跟音樂阿就像00:03:212 (5) -
00:05:919 - 漏了whistle
00:07:724 (1) - Soft-finish阿
00:20:355 (3) - ^ 00:20:581 (4) - whistle在滑條尾為什麼你都在一些跟音樂不配合的地方加whistle 我實在搞不懂音效是用來配合節奏而不是自創節奏你说的好有道理，我只能吃了电视
00:18:551 - 我求求你加點clap 現在音效完全聽不出來 http://puu.sh/dkEpx.wav 後面一小節一clap我也聽不懂什麼時候才加?我实在搞不懂给大白加好还是二白三白，越听越别扭快炸了
00:23:964 (4) - 搞不懂這3/2滑條無論鼓點還是人聲都在白線
00:32:310 (6,7) - 這我也搞不懂能告訴我動機麼这里有一个3/4，我又不囍昂把红线空着，已改
00:38:400 (5) - 按照前面的DS 應該這樣放: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319510 另外加finish
01:02:987 (5,6) - 這兩個節奏交換能放clap也能對應人聲
01:03:663 (6,1) - 交換NC
01:09:979 (4) - Finish 01:10:881 - 也加
01:12:686 - ^
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合

全改了，节奏又加了点

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60,208,69979,1,6,0:0:0:0:
188,156,70318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70656,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,72,70881,2,0,P|136:48|88:144,1,251.999992309571,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,150,71784,6,0,P|148:132|268:144,1,167.999994873047,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,196,72460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,72686,1,4,0:0:0:0:
452,192,72912,2,0,L|504:204,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,284,73363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,73588,2,0,P|304:204|208:216,1,167.999994873047,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,74265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,172,74490,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,260,74942,2,0,L|60:352,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,336,75393,2,0,L|240:328,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,316,75844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,212,76295,6,0,P|492:156|420:60,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,76972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,52,77197,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,77423,2,0,L|160:60,1,83.9999974365235,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,62,77874,2,0,B|112:32|52:56|52:56|12:128|68:184,1,251.999992309571,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,78776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,79002,2,0,L|216:240,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,79453,2,0,L|392:252,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,79904,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,180,80355,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,80806,2,0,P|392:96|264:96,1,167.999994873047,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,104,81709,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,140,82047,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,272,82385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,192,82611,1,6,0:0:0:0:
176,324,82949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,300,83513,2,0,P|132:268|228:288,1,167.999994873047,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84190,6,0,L|344:368,2,41.9999987182618,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,324,84641,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,84866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,112,85092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,44,86220,2,0,B|152:96|152:96|144:140|144:140|172:188,1,125.999996154785,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,228,86896,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87009,12,6,88701,0:0:0:0:
144,124,89152,5,2,0:0:0:0:
144,280,89378,1,6,0:0:0:0:

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2014-12-08T01:59:25+00:00

Repairing bubble as requested.

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Karen 2014-12-08T05:28:24+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
01:29:378 - Kiai在這裡結束
Tag: Delete "スフィア" as it's duplicated with the artist, add "TV Size".
[Insane]
HP7 畢竟這是Insane 儘量比Hard難一點
00:07:724 - Normal-finish
00:18:438 (8) - 這是overmap阿聽清楚的話前面幾個藍線都能放偏偏不放我也是服了
00:25:769 (1,2,3) - 擁擠在一起好醜能不能放開一點反正BPM好低 1/4jump也可以像00:35:468 (5,6,7) -
00:31:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 全都overlap在一起沒有特別的結構我看泡了就算啦下次注意一下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319401
00:42:009 (1,2) - 鼓點放錯了 http://puu.sh/dkD1Z.jpg
00:42:912 - 音量高點現在聽不到加了finish 这里改成了soft-finish，应该清楚了
00:42:460 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 這段突然忽略連擊的鼓點我聽著好不舒服而且那些鼓點很明顯不像前面的電音
00:50:919 - 幹嘛突然降音量聽不到音效啊
00:57:348 - 沒可能kiai開始音量反而降低
01:09:641 (4) - 放錯位置 01:09:528 - 才對
01:22:160 (2) - 刪掉不是重音更不是人聲就像01:22:611 (1,2,3) -
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合
感覺節奏放的好隨便喜歡放3連就放3連聽著那裏舒服就放連打 2連 ;_;
[Hard]
前奏的密度比normal還低難度要提升阿
00:00:506 - Finish
00:01:182 (2) - Whistle 後面00:04:791 (2) - 都放了
00:04:115 (1) - Finish
00:01:408 (3,4) - 怎麼whistle放在尾巴放在頭部跟音樂阿就像00:03:212 (5) -
00:05:919 - 漏了whistle
00:07:724 (1) - Soft-finish阿
00:20:355 (3) - ^ 00:20:581 (4) - whistle在滑條尾為什麼你都在一些跟音樂不配合的地方加whistle 我實在搞不懂音效是用來配合節奏而不是自創節奏
00:18:551 - 我求求你加點clap 現在音效完全聽不出來 http://puu.sh/dkEpx.wav 後面一小節一clap我也聽不懂什麼時候才加?
00:23:964 (4) - 搞不懂這3/2滑條無論鼓點還是人聲都在白線
00:32:310 (6,7) - 這我也搞不懂能告訴我動機麼
00:38:400 (5) - 按照前面的DS 應該這樣放: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2319510 另外加finish
01:02:987 (5,6) - 這兩個節奏交換能放clap也能對應人聲
01:03:663 (6,1) - 交換NC
01:09:979 (4) - Finish 01:10:881 - 也加
01:12:686 - ^
01:27:009 (1,1,2) - whistle比finish更適合
[Normal]
00:07:724 - Normal-finish
00:22:836 (2) - 突然從鼓點轉換成跟人聲有點彆扭建議這slider從白線00:23:062 - 開始
00:35:017 (4,5,6) - 太難了在hard我們才用3個1/2圓圈
00:42:799 - I 我說過了
00:54:641 - 氣氛不同了音量提高阿
00:56:445 (1,2) - 變成1個1/2滑條重音不在00:56:445 - http://puu.sh/dkGyF.jpg
00:57:348 - 提高音量
01:27:009 (1) - 低難度的轉盤在白線或者紅線開始因為要考慮到mania的玩家
[Easy]
OD2
00:40:205 - whistle
00:42:912 - Unrankable as of inaudible hitsounds, also for the next green line. Please raise the volume to 40%.
00:57:348 - Same as above, and it's also quite non-sense to have lowest volume at the beginning of the kiai
01:09:077 - Finish for the stress of vocal
01:11:784 - Descending volume is unnecessary here
01:23:513 - whistle
01:25:318 - ^
01:25:769 - Soft-clap with 40% volume, add back a 50% green line at 01:26:220 -