1. Hard (3.87 stars, 331 notes)
2. Normal (3.15 stars, 143 notes)

1. comboburst.png is added . full submitted.
2. new combos, tags, Kiai Time fixed. thank you for modding this map, gentlemens.

1. removed the .osb file. small place fixed.
2. the break in [Hard] will be done soon. ;P

1. added some notes in [Hard].
2. several hitsounds fixed
3. costom override enabled and REDOWNLOAD please.

1. all notes replaced with a larger distance.
2. storyboard at the end of the song is added.REDOWNLOAD please.
3. hitsounds added

1. intro of [Normal] is mapped.

1. combos&hitsounds moded.

• • 00:50:870 (3) - make the end-slider more visible

• • 00:15:015 (6) - New combo
  • 00:29:649 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 00:31:844 (4) - New combo
  • 00:45:746 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 04:00:381 (4) - New combo

1. osb文件没有用,请删掉再full submit
2. Yuugao不用再加到tag里,因为标题就是Yuugao

1. 这个难度不用audio lead-in,去掉
2. 00:25:990 (T) - 这条红线没有用,应该删掉
3. 00:50:868 (3) - 这个slider被遮住比较多部分,我感觉不太好
4. 01:52:331 (4) - Spacing有点远,这个应该改改,不然可能误读

1. 01:25:259 (x) - KIAI这开始感觉好些
2. 01:46:478 (3) - 离2稍微近了点
3. Break时间感觉长了点(30秒),或许该考虑加点note?
4. 03:01:112 (6) - New combo,7有jump

Natteke desu wrote:

Good, calm song and map. Like it.
Can't really say anything about it.

Noto Mamiko - Yuugao (Colin Hou).osb isn't needed.You don't have any storyboard, right? As far as I know there shouldn't be any unused files in the folder, so delete the osb and full submit.

o.o how this file came up? done.

Good map, stard.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi

Here are some suggestions for your map. You don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Delete "Yuugao" from Tags, it's unnecesary because it's already on the title.
- Delete the .osb file, you don't have storyboard so it's unnecesary :3

done.

~Normal~
- Delete the Timing Section on 00:25:990, you don't need it.
- Resnap all notes (Go to Timing - Resnap All Notes)
- Decrease HP Drain Rate, it's too high for the easiest diff.

done. HP Drain Rate is deceased a little bit.

00:34:040 (4) - Stack properly under (2). really careful @_@, done.
00:50:870 (3) - This could be really confusing for new players because almost the whole slider is hidden. It would be better if you move it or chenge the slider track
00:51:601 (4) - Fix Spacing.
01:15:382 (1) - Delete New Combo.
01:16:479 (1) - ^
01:25:260 (1) - ^
01:25:992 (1) - ^
01:26:724 (1) - ^? (This one is optional)
01:52:333 (4) - Fix Spacing.

all done.

~Hard~
- Why are the combocolours different in this diff? If the background doesn't change, please use the same for all diffs :3 fixed
- Same with Kiai, try to keep the same Kiai parts on all diffs, the kiai part on Hard it's a bit different from the part on Normal. fixed
- Increase Slider Velocity, if feels slow for a Hard and makes everything look a bit crowded >.< Also, it's always recommendable to change the slider velocity from one diff to another :3 ahh, will consider this
- I'd decrease HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty a little bit. Up to you though. HP Drain Rate decreased.

00:15:015 (6) - New Combo. done.
01:13:550 (1) - Delete New Combo. done.
01:15:380 (1) - This one was totally unexpected xD. Though, like I said before you should have faster sliders so take this one as a refference :3 new comboed this slider.
01:16:477 (3) - Delete New Combo.
01:25:258 (1) - ^
01:25:990 (1) - ^ 3 done.
01:31:111 (2) - Flip horizontally, it looks better imo. will consider this.
03:42:820 (1) - Ahhh Ninja Spinner D: Make it longer please it ruins the relaxing atmosphere on the map >o< XD now it's twice long.

Cute and relaxing song, and the map isn't that bad xP. Good luck with this!! *star*

Astom wrote:

[Normal]
-100% Acc
-mm I don't see problems

[Hard]
-95% Acc
-00:24:893 clean this break?
-01:16:478 (1)(2)(3) and 01:17:209 (1)...(9) this part maybe have problems, try a slider or take off some circles

[01:17:759(4)] deleted and much better.

Star =)

xxheroxx wrote:

Delete the .osb file, then "full submission"
Delete this section::: BPM: 82 || Offset: 25990 done.
Offset should be 380 :U feel better now.

[Normal]

• • 00:50:870 (3) - make the end-slider more visible

done.

[Hard]

• • 00:15:015 (6) - New combo
  • 00:29:649 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 00:31:844 (4) - New combo
  • 00:45:746 (1) - Remove New combo
  • 04:00:381 (4) - New combo

all done.

Breeze wrote:

前面别人的mod post如果对你有用的应该给kudosu o.o

呃..现在刚看到这么多回复 o.o

只有红色部分是我觉得你应该改的,其他的都只是建议

[General]

1. osb文件没有用,请删掉再full submit
2. Yuugao不用再加到tag里,因为标题就是Yuugao

改掉了.

[Normal]

1. 这个难度不用audio lead-in,去掉
2. 00:25:990 (T) - 这条红线没有用,应该删掉
3. 00:50:868 (3) - 这个slider被遮住比较多部分,我感觉不太好
4. 01:52:331 (4) - Spacing有点远,这个应该改改,不然可能误读

改掉了.

[Hard]

1. 01:25:259 (x) - KIAI这开始感觉好些 的确.
2. 01:46:478 (3) - 离2稍微近了点 改掉了.
3. Break时间感觉长了点(30秒),或许该考虑加点note? 其实一直在考虑从哪里开始 @_@
4. 03:01:112 (6) - New combo,7有jump 这个jump在Hard里应该可以接受的吧...改掉的话会稍微影响到后面对称的部分

nice map

samipale wrote:

As your request,我选了note的部分来mod
[Normal]

SPOILER

01:06:965(1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/01-15.jpg
01:12:819(1) - suggestion,这里用circle引导slider比较好(就是01:12:819和01:13:185放circle)

Normal难了点，这样的话BAT可能会叫你做一个Easy难度

改掉了. 记得谁说过有个三星半的Normal就可以了的?

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:16:478(8) - suggestion,(9)删掉，(8)延长到(9)那里
00:29:649(1) - suggestion,换成无折返slider
00:32:576(5) - suggestion,换成1/4 slider 保持原样感觉好点
00:38:429(3) - suggestion,延长到00:38:978 这样感觉有点怪..
00:40:441(x) - suggestion,加一个circle
00:53:246(3) - 这个circle删去
00:55:259(1~9) - 这里三连不要压白线，参考附件
[attachment=2:b3785]1.jpg[/attachment:b3785]
01:17:210(1~9) - 这串不好听，试下隔开，隔成5连 3连 1连 (好像有奇怪的连混进去了。。)
01:19:405(1) - suggestion,换成无折返slider
01:24:527(1) - ^
01:59:832(6) - circle删去
02:55:259(1) - suggestion,参考附件
[attachment=1:b3785]2.jpg[/attachment:b3785]
02:58:185(1) - ^ 这里后面就是跟着背景的琴声了 暂时没改
[attachment=0:b3785]3.jpg[/attachment:b3785]
03:34:039(4) - suggestion,延长到03:34:588
03:42:820(1) - suggestion,我个人觉得这个spinner太短不好听，虽然加长也不是很对音乐，不过觉得加长比较好 这里把[03:41:335]换成两个circle了 可能感觉会好点?

白线三连不要随便用，不在适当的地方用效果很差的

没有备注的地方都改掉了~

nice map。。本来想mod多点的，由于时间关系我只看了这么多，如果你需要remod再post/pm我吧
mod到一半发现你更新了图，如果有重复请无视掉>.<

SPOILER

以下是吐槽。。
01:06:966(1) - 果然是"丸で"啊>.< XD

Colin Hou wrote:

改掉了. 记得谁说过有个三星半的Normal就可以了的?

al2e10 wrote:

想不到有人跟我都喜歡看School Rumble ~
我mod mod 吧~

samipale wrote:

School Rumble这么好看怎么还“想不到”呢

纯引用

[Hard]
00:07:697 (1) - Why here should New combo??
00:56:721 (3) - New combo??
01:10:623 (5) - Finish on 01:12:087 is it??
01:18:306 (6) - Spacing is something wroung
01:42:818 (1) - Remove new combo
02:02:026 (Break) - That too long @.@
02:41:354 (6) - Should it finish on 02:42:819

done. 那个break正在想怎么填掉点``

[Normal]
00:54:892 (4-5) - Spacing
01:15:379 (4) - New combo
01:26:721 (1) - REmove new combo
01:27:453 (2) - New combo

all done.

[ALL]
That is a good song and good map,
But the break of the Hard should have some changes for it.
I look forward your map be rank.

STAR !!

LKs wrote:

歌美~

简单的mod一下

general
不需要 MUSIC TRACK - LEAD IN

Normal

[00:28:91] 间距问题
[00:51:59] ^
[00;54:89] 和之前的slider重合
[01:01:84] 间距问题
[01:13:55] 这里开始kiai如何？
[01:51:55] 间距问题

done.

Hard

[00:23:79] 这个break太短了 删去
[00;29;64] （7，8，9） 间距和前面保持一致
[00:55:25] ^
[01;15:01] 结束kiai的话在这里
[01:35:38] 这一个2X弄的不是很有意义 取消2x把slider换成两个circle了
[01:18:30] 间距问题 并且请new combo
[01:30:38] 结束kiai的话在这里
[01:36:96] 这个break太短了 删去
[03:01:47] 结束kiai的话在这里
[03:12:81] ^
[04:06:59] 这条绿线没用吧0.0 可以删去

done.

建议，建议你以后做图把hard的slider速度弄快一点，用1.4玩这张图如果间距做的不好会比较头疼

记住了:P

star

orioncomet wrote:

[General]
- If possible delete .osb file and full submit again

done. i find that it came up once i click "desing" in edit...

[Normal]
seem fine for me ~

glad to know this xp

[Hard]
01:25:257 - this timing selection seem uesless? fixed
02:02:026 - 30sec for break time is so long will be done.
03:40:623 (4) - spacing? or new combo oh,new combod

starr ~

kudosu~

ykcarrot wrote:

Sorry for delay >.<


[Normal]
00:46:111 (1) - remove new combo. Followed your new comboing pattern.
00:51:599 (4) - whistle
01:03:306 (4) - whistle at start of slider and remove end's one
01:56:721 (6) - new combo
01:58:184 (1) - remove new combo
01:55:623 (5) - remove whistle from slide of slider.


[Hard]
00:20:867 (4) - finish at end of slider instead of whistle ?
00:31:111 (9) - whistle
00:56:721 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:940 (4) - whistle at end of slider
01:05:867 (4) - ^
01:10:623 (5) - ^
01:15:013 (10) - whistle
02:34:037 (5) - whistle at start of slider and remove end's one
03:16:477 (7) - I suggest BPM x0.5 at here. Then its end should be 03:19:404. Feel better in my opinion.

all done! really thx~ especially for the hitsounds

Relax song. Yakumo~ <3

xierbaliti wrote:

lol School Rumble

-Overall-
.osb没有用 删掉。
这种歌.. 我也没什么hitsounds的好点子 ._. 先把slidertick和sliderslide弄成无声吧 把这2个.wav放进去 然后选择Custom Overrride1

-Hard-
FL好图._.(雾
00:29:648 (7) - 往右边1个格
00:50:136 (3) - 这个spacing不是很好 把(3)拿远一些
00:44:831 (4) - 往左边1个格

-Normal-
01:52:331 (4) - 左移1格

Real1 wrote:

Offset: I get 375

fixed.

Just suggestions coming up. No need to fix.

[Normal]
Maybe map the intro like in Hard? It's lazy enough to end it so early.
00:46:111 (6) - Consider making this new combo done.

[Hard]
01:42:082 (1) - Sounds better if you make this a 1/2 beat slider like the following (2) done.
02:17:453 (1,2,3) - Maybe make these a repeating 1/6 slider since it's pretty hard to get 300's on it. made (2,3) a slider now.

Relaxing map, starred

Shulin wrote:

General:

Offset 387 imo

ye, fixed

Normal:

01:12:814 (1) - 01:12:814 (1) - Start kiai here?
01:24:521 (1) - Kiai start here?
01:48:669 (7) - Bezier slider type might be better here imo. done.

Hard:

-- Generally I think you could increase the spacing a little so there isn't so much overlap.
-- -1 on Overall Difficulty makes your map look nicer ^_^ done.
-- Why BG color different to normal? oh, forgot that.

00:39:887 (5,6,7) - Overlap here doesn't look so great, space it out? (6) is removed.
00:53:789 (4,5,6) - May look better as a stack. done.
01:12:814 (1) - Kiai start here imo.
01:13:911 (5) - Right one square? Adjust 01:14:277 (6) - if you decide to move it.
01:24:521 (1) - Start kiai here imo it looks better starting on a new combo.
01:26:716 (9) - Up one square? Adjust 01:27:082 (1) - if you do this. done.
02:17:488 (1,2,3,4) - Is off sync to the BPM so I wouldn't recommend mapping it, however if you want to follow it see below.
02:17:387 (1) - Move to 1/8 moved to 3/8
02:18:667 (3) - ^ If you are following the string instrument.
03:35:141 (6) - Make horizontal to 03:34:775 (5) - ? done.

Nice mapl. Star.

1. I suggest offset: 385 (Yours feels a bit late.)
2. 03:01:484 - 03:06:972 | 01:18:677 - 01:25:263 - This part should be kiai covered too.
3. New timing section: BPM: 78 | Offset: 243318 (This will solve the problem with last slider on hard.)

1. Tick Rate: 1 (Depending on slider speed)
2. 00:27:458 (1,2) - Stack those properly.
3. 00:29:653 (5) - Sliders like this one don't fit the song. (I'm not forcing you to replace them by 2 notes, but think of it.)
4. 00:49:409 (1,2,3) - These stacked bad. (1,2) Spaced wrong.
5. 01:07:702 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (Try to avoid notes overlay next time.)

1. 00:49:777 (2,3) - Look carefully. It stacked wrong.
2. 00:56:728 (1) - Move it to (8)
3. 00:58:191 (1) - Remove NC.
4. 01:02:582 (3) - Place it on (2)'s end.
5. 01:06:972 (1) - Orz
6. 02:17:704 (2) - Resnap it with 1/3 (Don't use 1/8)
7. 02:18:679 (3,4) - ^
8. 03:19:411 - Last kiai should end here.
9. 04:03:318 (1) - Resnap it with new timing section.

Midget wrote:

~Overall~

1. I suggest offset: 385 (Yours feels a bit late.)
2. 03:01:484 - 03:06:972 | 01:18:677 - 01:25:263 - This part should be kiai covered too.
3. New timing section: BPM: 78 | Offset: 243318 (This will solve the problem with last slider on hard.)

thx but I still think 387 is better. the new timing section is nice.

~Normal~

1. Tick Rate: 1 (Depending on slider speed) done.
2. 00:27:458 (1,2) - Stack those properly.
3. 00:29:653 (5) - Sliders like this one don't fit the song. (I'm not forcing you to replace them by 2 notes, but think of it.) er.. just keep this like it used to be..
4. 00:49:409 (1,2,3) - These stacked bad. (1,2) Spaced wrong.
5. 01:07:702 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (Try to avoid notes overlay next time.)

~Hard~

1. 00:49:777 (2,3) - Look carefully. It stacked wrong.
2. 00:56:728 (1) - Move it to (8)
3. 00:58:191 (1) - Remove NC.
4. 01:02:582 (3) - Place it on (2)'s end.
5. 01:06:972 (1) - Orz
6. 02:17:704 (2) - Resnap it with 1/3 (Don't use 1/8) done.
7. 02:18:679 (3,4) - ^ done.
8. 03:19:411 - Last kiai should end here.
9. 04:03:318 (1) - Resnap it with new timing section.

done.

Star~

Breeze wrote:

我都mod过了为什么还post我的queue里呢

NoHItter wrote:

Overall
Delete the .osb file and full submit

this file always came up... so i have to make it usefull XD (SB is added!)

I would suggest not using kiai time on this map since the song is slow and relaxing. good idea
Make the lead in 3 seconds Normal is unnecessary, in Hard is done.

Another complaint is the lack of hitsounds. I can hear whistles and a finish (only one).

not only one exists... more have been added now.

Normal
00:50:143 (2,3) - Overlapping sliders look ugly. Separate them? done.
01:37:338 (x) - Add break here ohh.3 seconds break? well...
01:48:679 (7) - Looks ugly IMO. Change it to a curved slider? reshaped (am i an ugly man ;_;)

Hard
01:06:972 (1) - Ugly slider ;_; done.
01:37:338 (x) - Add break here done.
02:18:679 (3) - Extend slider by 1/4 oh, mistake. done.

1. Offset: 391 (A little later than yours)
2. Resnap all notes in both hard and Normal (go into Timing < Resnap All Notes)

Doomsday93 wrote:

Lets see here~

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

1. Offset: 391 (A little later than yours)
2. Resnap all notes in both hard and Normal (go into Timing < Resnap All Notes)

done.

[NORMAL]

Seems fine

[HARD]

Nice storyboard at the end there

Lower the overall difficulty by 2 notches? feels a little bit better to me that way.

that's better

Nothing wrong with the map. Nice

Good job on this. Its good to see someone map a slow song without overmapping it.

Starred

NoHItter wrote:

Notes in Normal are unsnapped. please fix and I'll pubble.

Edit: Pubbled

H-boy wrote:

首先,还是说中文方便....
蓝色只是我的建议,剩余的就是我认为重要的
Normal
00:05:878(X) - 加一个note,然后用finish,左右蓝线各加一个绿线,前面一条调整音量缩小至第4格,然后后面一条恢复音量,这个你可以试试看看效果如果满意,就加入吧 NOTE的确需要加的 但是finish音太突兀了...本来这首歌的伴奏就很弱 即使30%的音量听上去还是有点违和``如果有其他效果音可以考虑...
00:26:000(1) 在slider的最后,加finish hitsound,然后缩小它的音量
00:30:391(6) 同上
00:36:976(7) 加finish hitsound,减小音量
00:53:805(3) 在slider的最后,加finish hitsound,然后缩小它的音量
01:00:391(8) 加finish hitsound,减小音量
01:06:244(4) 同上
01:12:098(9) 同上
01:41:355(4) 同上
01:48:683(7) 在slider的最后,加finish hitsound,然后缩小它的音量
Hard
00:05:878(1) 加finish hitsound,仅在开始加,无须调整音量
00:35:512(7) 结束加入finish hitsound
00:58:927(7) 同上
01:23:805(3) 加入 finish hitsound
01:48:683(8) 结束加入finish hitsound
02:41:366(6) 同上
03:04:964(1) add a finish hitsound
03:31:122(8) 结束加入finish hitsound
其余的一些finish如果觉得normal里的还可,可以如此加到hard里
一些hitsound如果感觉不太好,就不用更改了
不错的图,但我总觉得这是地狱少女里的...记不住了~
star~

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:49:415 (1,2) - Too close. done.

[Hard]

00:46:854 (8) - Move it 1 square left. Nazi I know