Philip Glass - Music Box [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Ylinestra44

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-13T13:51:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 4. September 2014 at 18:08:25

Artist: Philip Glass
Title: Music Box
Source: Candyman
Tags: Sey Kurokami Helens Theme
BPM: 83,2
Filesize: 1943kb
Play Time: 01:02
Difficulties Available:

Hard (2,39 stars, 118 notes)
Kurokami's Platter (5,49 stars, 119 notes)
Normal (1,59 stars, 90 notes)
Sey's Salad (4,68 stars, 104 notes)

Download: Philip Glass - Music Box
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Discovered this melody and just fell for it. This is what happened then.
Special thanks to:
- Sey for his Diff.
- Kurokami for the Platter.
- Ringating for the bg.

Last edited by Ylinestra44 2014-09-04T16:08:32+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2014-08-13T14:26:40+00:00

Horor movie? WOW~

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2014-08-14T01:07:26+00:00

Nothing found.

I'm ACGer,so background should not have real human...or animal.

Baka!baka!baka!
So scary!
bites you :B

Atsuro

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Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2014-08-15T18:24:24+00:00

From my queue

[General]

The volume of the mp3 is too low

[Hard]

00:20:107 (8,1) - This jump doesn't flow good
00:20:462 (1,3) - Blanket the start of 3 with 1, same with 00:23:352 (1,3) -
00:34:891 (1) - Add a whistle at the end

[Normal]
All good here

Sorry for the short mod x.x nice map
GL

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-08-16T11:54:43+00:00

Hi, from my queue here.

General

I wonder if your song name is correct or not. According to this, the title should be:
```
Music Box
```
and "Helen's Theme" belongs to another song name. Also, the album name "The Music of Candyman" can be put into the tags instead. Source should be the movie name - "Candyman".
Consider adding an audio-leadin of 1500 ms since current one is too fast.
Disable these stuff:
1. Enable Countdown - there's not enough time for the system doing so.
2. Widescreen Support - a Storyboard can't be found.
3. Letterbox during breaks - there're no breaks for these two diffs.

Hard

Personally, I think soft-samples fit the song more, especially whistles. How about you?
00:31:285 (3) - I don't know if a clap is intentionally missed on the slider head, coz u place a clap on 00:34:169 (3)'s head.
00:59:468 (3) - NC for the BPM change, at least it indicates players there's something different.
01:01:044 (5) - ^
01:02:835 (7) - The sound is really soft and I can only hear it by increasing the volume, so you may either remove this circle or replace 01:02:387 (6,7) by a slider.

Normal

OD and HP 4 seem too high, provided that this is the lowest diff in the set. Consider reducing both of by 1?
00:31:285 (3) - Clap on head fits better as I mentioned in Hard.

Not much to say, hope some of these help! Good luck!

Ylinestra44

547 posts

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Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-17T20:18:31+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hi, from my queue here.
General
I wonder if your song name is correct or not. According to this, the title should be:
Music Box
and "Helen's Theme" belongs to another song name. Also, the album name "The Music of Candyman" can be put into the tags instead. Source should be the movie name - "Candyman". Changed the title, and added Candyman to Source, deleted it from tags, but didn't add "The Music of Candyman" to Tags, since Candyman is Source and with that also a tagg, and Music is in the title, and just adding "The" and "of" to tags seems senseless to me.
Consider adding an audio-leadin of 1500 ms since current one is too fast.
Disable these stuff:
1. Enable Countdown - there's not enough time for the system doing so.
2. Widescreen Support - a Storyboard can't be found.
3. Letterbox during breaks - there're no breaks for these two diffs. All three done
Hard
Personally, I think soft-samples fit the song more, especially whistles. How about you? I tried it at the start, but somehow I was not satisfied with it
00:31:285 (3) - I don't know if a clap is intentionally missed on the slider head, coz u place a clap on 00:34:169 (3)'s head. It is intentionally. By adding a clap here, the following (1) with the clap sounds not good following the music
00:59:468 (3) - NC for the BPM change, at least it indicates players there's something different. Done
01:01:044 (5) - ^ ^
01:02:835 (7) - The sound is really soft and I can only hear it by increasing the volume, so you may either remove this circle or replace 01:02:387 (6,7) by a slider. Replaced with slider
Normal
OD and HP 4 seem too high, provided that this is the lowest diff in the set. Consider reducing both of by 1? I think with this low BPM and SV it should work with These Settings. But I will Keep it in mind
00:31:285 (3) - Clap on head fits better as I mentioned in Hard. Same reason as in Hard
Not much to say, hope some of these help! Good luck!

atsuro0 wrote:
From my queue

[General]

The volume of the mp3 is too low

[Hard]
00:20:107 (8,1) - This jump doesn't flow good Reduced the spacing a bit and replaced the (8). Should be better now
00:20:462 (1,3) - Blanket the start of 3 with 1, same with 00:23:352 (1,3) - The start of (3) is in the middle of start and end of (1), just kept the DS here. I will leave it for the moment
00:34:891 (1) - Add a whistle at the end Done
[Normal]
All good here

Sorry for the short mod x.x nice map
GL

THanks for the mods =)

Sey

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Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-08-17T22:04:54+00:00

Sey's Salad

Ylinestra44

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Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-18T17:18:30+00:00

Updated.

Sey

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Sey 2014-08-19T09:15:54+00:00

My old username isn't necessary in Tags anymore. Just keep Sey, please.

Kyouren

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Kyouren 2014-08-19T13:39:40+00:00

If this song is Helen's Theme, why you don't add in tags?

Ylinestra44

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Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-19T20:05:42+00:00

@Sey: Okay okay.

Ringating

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Ringating 2014-08-20T20:10:11+00:00

from my queue:

I used a bit of the image you linked then took the text from a different source. made it 16:9 and voila:

jsfgsgjhdgjsd

no kudosu

Ylinestra44

547 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-21T15:42:18+00:00

Ringating wrote:
from my queue:

I used a bit of the image you linked then took the text from a different source. made it 16:9 and voila:
jsfgsgjhdgjsd

no kudosu

Thanks a lot :3

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2014-08-23T07:34:11+00:00

Opps I forgot to send it to you. q.q

SPOILER

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Artist:Philip Glass
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Source:
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Ylinestra44

547 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-24T19:26:11+00:00

Updated!

PatZar

3,079 posts

Joined March 2013

PatZar 2014-08-26T07:19:15+00:00

requested from moehuehue
by owner

[sey's salad]
00:16:321 - add note here suggest x288
00:44:626 (1) - x224

[Kurokami's Platter]
00:16:862 (5) - ctrl + g
00:43:905 (3,4) - ctrl + g

[Hard]
00:06:405 (2) - delete | use circle same as 3
2=364 72
3=384 176

00:38:136 (2) - delete | use circle same as 3
2= 492 96
3=416 164 or make it triangle

00:49:675 (3) - delete | use slider
3=232 224

00:56:525 (7) - ctrl + g

good luck~

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2014-08-26T12:26:01+00:00

Genocide wrote:
requested from moehuehue
by owner

[sey's salad]
00:16:321 - add note here suggest x288 There is no beat to map here x.x
00:44:626 (1) - x224 Why?

Sorry no change

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2014-08-26T14:34:23+00:00

Heyo!

Requested by Sey !

[Normal]

00:00:276 (1,2) - The placement here is fine but I guess you could improve the flow here. Maybe you can try to rotate 00:00:276 (1) - like that ? :
Example
00:08:929 (1) - This slider is really down and can be confusing because the approach circle go out of the screen. Maybe consider to move it higher?
00:36:333 (3,4) - Here , I think you could do a better slider for (4) for increase cursor's movement. Maybe you can try to do like that:
Example²
00:38:857 (2,3) - I guess you miss a blanket here. Maybe you can try to inprove that pattern like that one : 00:25:516 (3,4,1) -
00:55:083 (1) - I'm sure you could make a better triangle here ! Maybe try to move 00:55:083 (1) - here : x:380 y:160

Solid Normal!

[Hard]

00:00:276 (1) - I'd rather make a double here instead of a slider cause it fits better with the melody imo.
00:00:636 (2,3) - You could rotate a bit 00:00:636 (2) - in the direction of 00:01:357 (3) - , it'd be really be an improvement for the flow.
Example
00:06:405 (2,3,4,5) - I think you really could do a diamond shaped pattern or a parallelogramm here :3 Here's a little suggestion :
Example²
00:22:631 (3) - Maybe you can move that note further for make a triangle shaped pattern or you can basically stack it on the tail of 00:20:468 (1) -
00:25:516 (3) - Same thing mentionned as above.
00:31:285 (3) - I don't get the huge jump here Maybe you can reverse that note : It'll done a great flow with the previous object and the cursor's movement will be much comforatable with 00:32:006 (1) -
00:34:169 (3) - Same thing mentionned above but I guess you can keep that pattern because the jump isn't really big.
00:37:054 (6,1) - I guess you could do a symmetrical with these sliders. Maybe you can rotate (6) a little bit :
Example
01:00:652 (2) - I think your triangle isn't perfect :b And the flow with 00:59:468 (1) - is a bit weird. Maybe move (2) here : x:348 y:276

Relaxing~

Haven't much to say o/
Short song , basic map but it plays well!
You did well deserved a star ! (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Ylinestra44

547 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-26T22:24:09+00:00

Thanks for the mod and the star Secretpipe. I added everything mentioned.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-08-28T05:48:54+00:00

Changed both although not the same way. Thanks.

SPOILER

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49314
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Helen's Theme (Music Box)
TitleUnicode:Helen's Theme (Music Box)
Artist:Philip Glass
ArtistUnicode:Philip Glass
Creator:Ylinestra44
Version:Kurokami's Platter
Source:
Tags:candyman
BeatmapID:486291
BeatmapSetID:202488

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Ylinestra44

547 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

Ylinestra44 2014-08-28T18:06:43+00:00

Updated!

Tari

osu! Alumni

1,671 posts

Joined July 2012

Tari 2014-08-28T23:58:07+00:00

From Sey's Queue :3

Kami's Platter

00:17:583 (1,2,3,4) - This could of formed a better square, at its current state I don't think it looks quite nice, plays fine but you would get same effect by just moving 4 down , movement for ryuuta won't change at all.
click
00:38:136 (3,4) - For these notes I think you should use regular DS? I don't see why they should be higher spacing them usual, it kinda breaks your consistency to a point.
00:31:285 (4,5) - Since you seem to be emphasizing the bell sound, I'd rather you ctrl+g both of these notes, it would put more emphasis on them if you did it that way.
00:02:800 (8) - Same for this note, I think higher spacing should be here, since this is part of your style of mapping, I'd best think you want to increase these.
rhythms in this diff are fine.

Sey's Salad
1. 00:03:160 (1,2) - I think to match with 00:04:602 (3,4) - , the spacing of 1 and 2 here should be increased a little bit more here, currently the spacing is too low in the combo, putting note 2 farther to the right would fix this issue definitely,
2. 00:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is good, but its not as effective as you did at 00:11:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , for 00:11:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it fits really well with the music, the way you did back and forth movements, but not so much at 00:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - , cause music is slightly different here. Personally, I'd feel if you could do
  
  because you get the key points of the music mapped better.
3. 00:25:516 (1,2,3) - Since each one of these notes have the same bell sound, I think they represented the same in the music. You can do so by equalizing the spacing of each of these notes. Currently, note 3 is slightly more spacing than any of the other notes reduce note 3 spacing to DS 1.8 would fix it.
4. 00:49:855 (2) - I'm not too sure, but I think this jump is a little major for the map, more of something you would do in a platter diff, maybe you could Ctrl+G it?
5. 00:55:624 (2) - Same as above.
6. 00:56:525 (4) - It won't affect the game-play at all (aesthetics) but I'd prefer you make this slider face down to add some variety instead of repeating the same slider 3 times.

Good Job guys!

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2014-08-30T07:19:15+00:00

Tari wrote:
From Sey's Queue :3

Kami's Platter

00:17:583 (1,2,3,4) - This could of formed a better square, at its current state I don't think it looks quite nice, plays fine but you would get same effect by just moving 4 down , movement for ryuuta won't change at all. Actually it will change since you moved it to left by 1 too. :3 I don't want to make too hard patterns at this point.
click
00:38:136 (3,4) - For these notes I think you should use regular DS? I don't see why they should be higher spacing them usual, it kinda breaks your consistency to a point. It creates a bit better flow since I used higher distance at the next slider.
00:31:285 (4,5) - Since you seem to be emphasizing the bell sound, I'd rather you ctrl+g both of these notes, it would put more emphasis on them if you did it that way. I want to keep my HDash at the next note.
00:02:800 (8) - Same for this note, I think higher spacing should be here, since this is part of your style of mapping, I'd best think you want to increase these. Thats true, I changed a bit but its hard to changed now. I need to re-map the whole section. orz
rhythms in this diff are fine.
Good Job guys!

Thanks for your mod. Fixed a few things a bit.

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Sey

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Sey 2014-08-31T08:24:04+00:00

Tari

Tari wrote:
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00:03:160 (1,2) - I think to match with 00:04:602 (3,4) - , the spacing of 1 and 2 here should be increased a little bit more here, currently the spacing is too low in the combo, putting note 2 farther to the right would fix this issue definitely, I increased distance here from note to note on purpose. I like this pattern as it is, also suits well with the music.
00:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is good, but its not as effective as you did at 00:11:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , for 00:11:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it fits really well with the music, the way you did back and forth movements, but not so much at 00:15:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - , cause music is slightly different here. Personally, I'd feel if you could do

because you get the key points of the music mapped better. i don't really think a bit of variety hurts this difficulty.
00:25:516 (1,2,3) - Since each one of these notes have the same bell sound, I think they represented the same in the music. You can do so by equalizing the spacing of each of these notes. Currently, note 3 is slightly more spacing than any of the other notes reduce note 3 spacing to DS 1.8 would fix it. But I did that on purpose because the bell voice gets louder from time to time. It fits the rhythm.
00:49:855 (2) - I'm not too sure, but I think this jump is a little major for the map, more of something you would do in a platter diff, maybe you could Ctrl+G it? I decreased the distance before this pattern a bit but I won't touch the pattern itself
00:55:624 (2) - Same as above. No fix here
00:56:525 (4) - It won't affect the game-play at all (aesthetics) but I'd prefer you make this slider face down to add some variety instead of repeating the same slider 3 times. I CTRL + G'd (5), should be better now
Good Job guys!

Thanks for your mod!

http://puu.sh/bfbO2/c2d1f0832f.osu

Ylinestra44

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Ylinestra44 2014-08-31T22:27:27+00:00

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