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TK from Ling tosite sigure - unravel (TV edit)

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smallboat
Okay,still looks fine,reb it.

Btw thanks pishfat to adjust the timing.
smallboat
As mapper request fix issue in insane diff,reb this
Gero
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Konei
Ah well, seems as if Gero's gonna do this.
Gero
Yo o/

General

  1. Clean


Easy

  1. 00:46:222 (1) - Maybe it's me but the gap between this slider and the previous note is quite remarkable, therefore, I'd like recommend placing the distance that corresponds.
  2. 00:53:333 (1) - I'm pretty sure that you forgot to add one finish at the head of the slider since if you listen it carefully you can notice that there are a sound like a finish at the background.
  3. 00:56:888 (2,3,4) - If you wanna make a symmetrical pattern, I'd like to suggest you to make them at the middle of the grid,so what about to move them to X: 328 Y: 232 since it looks quite better imo, you should try it.
  4. 01:07:555 (1) - Soft-finish maybe?


Normal

  1. 00:11:111 (3,1) - Same thing that I've mentioned on the easiest difficulty about the spacing.
  2. 01:09:333 (2,3) - It's quite weird that in this part the density of the whole difficulty is significantly lower compared to the other parts so I would like you to try to add some notes here to avoid this huge space.
  3. 01:22:222 (1) - Missing whistle?


Gex's Hard

  1. 00:21:333 (6,7) - I've tested several times this and I've come to the conclusion that the flow and rhythm is a little bit confusing to understand so I would like to suggest to use this rhythm instead to avoid complicated patterns at this part.


Kenterz's Insane

  1. Awesome


Fatfan Sexy Kolek's Extra

  1. 01:03:111 (6) - I think you forgot to add a new combo here since the change of rhythm is quite different at this part.
  2. 01:21:777 (1) - Whistle?

    Call me back when you're done to apply the changes.
Fatfan Kolek

Gero wrote:

Yo o/

Fatfan Sexy Kolek's Extra

  1. 01:03:111 (6) - I think you forgot to add a new combo here since the change of rhythm is quite different at this part. No change since I made a NC every second big white tick. It'd be a bit inaccurate then. :O
  2. 01:21:777 (1) - Whistle? Alright, added! :D


Thanks Gemoe! <3
osu file format v13

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Title:unravel (TV edit)
TitleUnicode:unravel (TV edit)
Artist:TK from Ling tosite sigure
ArtistUnicode:TK from 凛として時雨
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256,192,66888,2,0,B|256:272|256:272|288:328,1,142.99999345398,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,352,67333,6,0,B|464:304|464:304|440:264|440:264|440:212,2,142.99999345398,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,120,68000,2,0,P|256:96|192:120,1,142.99999345398
144,192,68333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,68444,2,0,L|72:192,2,71.4999967269899,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,336,68888,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,336,69000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,69111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,300,69222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,264,69333,2,2,B|472:152|472:152|440:168,1,142.99999345398
328,224,69666,2,2,B|232:224|232:224|188:200,1,142.99999345398
108,132,70000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,52,70222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,288,70444,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,52,70666,5,0,0:0:0:0:
243,98,70777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,133,70888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,148,71000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,139,71111,2,2,B|467:140|467:140|486:178,1,142.99999345398,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,291,71444,2,2,P|360:314|294:290,1,142.99999345398
212,192,71777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,192,71888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,192,72000,2,2,L|60:208,1,142.99999345398
100,104,72333,2,0,L|176:96,2,71.4999967269899,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,206,72666,5,2,0:0:0:0:
68,244,72777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,280,72888,2,2,P|88:312|196:328,1,142.99999345398
276,264,73222,2,2,B|328:264|328:264|368:280|368:280|416:280,1,142.99999345398,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,356,73555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,148,73777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,356,74000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,192,74222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
453,143,74333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,96,74444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,65,74555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,58,74666,2,2,L|203:58,1,142.99999345398,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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349,58,75333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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32,244,76222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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450,189,77444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,239,77555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,285,77666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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346,335,77888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,333,78000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,310,78111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,273,78222,6,2,B|149:273|149:273|88:236,1,142.99999345398,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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297,76,79333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,199,79555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,334,79777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
kristi71111

Gero wrote:

Yo o/

Easy

  1. 00:46:222 (1) - Maybe it's me but the gap between this slider and the previous note is quite remarkable, therefore, I'd like recommend placing the distance that corresponds.Its fine for me... No change
  2. 00:53:333 (1) - I'm pretty sure that you forgot to add one finish at the head of the slider since if you listen it carefully you can notice that there are a sound like a finish at the background. Added
  3. 00:56:888 (2,3,4) - If you wanna make a symmetrical pattern, I'd like to suggest you to make them at the middle of the grid,so what about to move them to X: 328 Y: 232 since it looks quite better imo, you should try it. Yep its better thanks!
  4. 01:07:555 (1) - Soft-finish maybe? Added


Normal

  1. 00:11:111 (3,1) - Same thing that I've mentioned on the easiest difficulty about the spacing.
    Asked two qat's about it they said it was acceptable no change...(want to keep it as it is)
  2. 01:09:333 (2,3) - It's quite weird that in this part the density of the whole difficulty is significantly lower compared to the other parts so I would like you to try to add some notes here to avoid this huge space. Changed
  3. 01:22:222 (1) - Missing whistle? Yep Added


Will update everything when baka gex update's his diff
Gexigamma

Gero wrote:

Yo o/

Gex's Hard

  1. 00:21:333 (6,7) - I've tested several times this and I've come to the conclusion that the flow and rhythm is a little bit confusing to understand so I would like to suggest to use this rhythm instead to avoid complicated patterns at this part. Which rhythm? WHICH ONE? oh there's a link... ¬¬ fixed!
Thx Gero~!

fixed gif: http://puu.sh/e5fuz/b0edc033ab.rar
Gero
Everything seems fine for me.

~ Qualified ~
riffy
Congratulations!
Arugakente
Congratz for your first ranked map <3
KittyAdventure
Gratzz for your first ranked map~ :3


IS AWESOME!!!~~~
Anxient
Yea! Congrats! All this map needs to do now is sit in qualified for a week!
Rakuen
Waoooo

Grats
Myxo
Uh oh eh
Now I have to wait atleast a week hue
Anyway congratz :D
CSLM
gratz~ for your first map ranked :D
-Mo-
Congratulations!
Winnie
Sick stuff congrats :)
Topic Starter
kristi71111
ib4 disqalification :/
Mao

Reason for Disqualification


  1. In Fatfan Kolek's Extra 00:32:888 (5) - should be snapped to 1/6 to follow the sounds you want to properly like in Kenterz's Insane.
  2. The lower difficulties (E/N/H) really need improvements to be ready. I'll explain certain points in the mod below, especially Hard needs much more work if you ask me.


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[Gex's Hard]
  1. Please use Soft Sampleset for the calm parts. Like this it just feels way too loud and overdone. Also the normal-sliderslide is really weird in these quiet parts.
  2. 00:11:555 (6) - What is on the white tick here? Nothing for me at least. Please consider to use this rhythm to follow the piano properly. (Same applies to 00:14:666 (5,6) - )
  3. 00:16:888 (3) - Why is here a clap? That doesn't really make sense compared to the sounds in the music imo. (Same applies for the following ones)
  4. 00:24:444 (3) - Shorten this by 1/2. Ignoring this strong downbeat by mapping something much more quiet doesn't really fit if you ask me.
  5. 00:25:333 (4,5) - Similiar as above. I'd go for this or the same with an 1/2 slider starting on the same as the old slider.
  6. 00:44:444 (3,4) - Hm, why aren't you following vocals here? o: They are the most dominant and I honestly don't really see why 3 is ending on a a white tick even though there's barely anything. Something like this would work (use soft sampleset for the most objects please). Also 1/1 gaps shouldn't be a bad idea because there's no real connection between the notes.
  7. 00:47:777 (4) - The tick this ends on is very strong, I'd rather substitude this with two circles to keep clickability to both and remove 00:47:555 (3) - .
  8. 00:56:000 (1) - Is that clap intentional? o.o
  9. 01:04:888 (2) - Nothing important on the blue tick. Please either shorten it to 1/2 to follow vocals or extend t to 1/1 to follow drums. (Same suggestion applies to 01:06:666 (6) - )
  10. 01:05:777 (4) - Same here. 1/1 please for vocals and drums.
  11. This definitely needs more improvements.


[Kenterz's Insane]
  1. The claps at the beginning are too intense for that quiet calm piano section. I'd personally substitude them with the drum-hitnormal to get this kind of "sizzle" sound in the background.
  2. 00:28:444 (1,2) - I think the spacing is intentional here but I feel like it could have been located much better because like this it almost follows the previous kind of line. I'd rather do something like zugzag. Depends on your preference though.
  3. 00:32:666 (3,1) - I'd rather use a circle and then put the 1/6 Slider seperately to avoid making the player click on 1/6.
  4. 00:56:444 (1) - Why 100% Volume? That's really loud q.q
  5. 01:13:777 (1) - Maybe that's just me but it would be really nice to see 1/4 here for the vocals as you followed vocals most of the time.


[Fatfan Kolek's Extra]
  1. Bitte nenn die Diff Insane, das ist nicht ansatzweise eine Extra.
  2. Das mag vielleicht nur meine Meinung sein, aber ich finde in der Kiai vor allem sind manche Slidershapes wie 01:00:000 (7) - ein wenig "zusammenhanglos" und sehen aus, als wären sie einfach nur da um etwas "speziellere" Slidershapes zu haben :/
  3. 00:14:555 (3) - Wieso ignorierst du auf dem weißen Tick das Piano? Ich würde eher von rot zu weiß ein Triplet machen anstatt den weißen Tick ganz auszulassen.
  4. 00:28:333 (15,1) - Muss ich den Stack hier verstehen? Damit wird ja eine neue Section eingeleitet und deshalb würd ichs eher mit größerem Spacing betonen. Kann aber sein, dass das nur ich bin.
  5. 00:30:222 (1,2,3) - Was folgst du hier? Das ist soeine ruhige Section. Auch die Betonung find ich liegt auf den blauen Ticks und wär deshalb schöner clickable. Example
  6. 00:31:111 (1,2) - Das kommt ein wenig plötzlich und die Symmetry wirkt ein wenig aus dem Stil raus. Spacing verkleinern würde meiner Meinung nach helfen.
  7. 00:32:888 (5) - Siehe Disqualification Reason.
  8. 00:43:000 (3,4,5,6) - Das wirkt total aus der Section raus. Die anderen folgen den blauen Ticks, wo die Vocals sind und hier ist einfach nur 1/4? Was folgst du damit überhaupt? Bitte map es so wie die folgenden auch oder mit einem 3/4 Slider anstatt 2.
  9. 00:47:888 - Note für Piano wäre schön, wenn du mich fragst o:


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So well, the overall set needs much more improvements especially in the lower difficulties. Best you could do is getting more mods from experienced modders to focus on E/N/H more. It's very late here already so I'll continue modding the Normal and Easy tomorrow.
Edit: Physics Exam preperation took too long, will be done tomorrow as I talked to the mapper.
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