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Hakurei Yoru

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-08-13T00:58:51+00:00

Harold Miner wrote:
00:47:723 - 到01:09:477 - kiai ？全曲只有最后一段vocal高潮加了kiai.

[Lunatic]
前奏的音量可以考虑一点点变大
00:12:284 (7,1) - 重叠问题？ fixed
00:28:776 (2) - 和 - 00:30:004 (1) - 这两个也是叠在一起比较好 fixed
00:40:003 (1,2,3,4) - 整体往下移一点 3能和前后的note重叠应该是将前面的combo的1覆盖到3上
01:27:021 (1,2) - 这两个的间距似乎有点问题建议2用NC或者其他方法滑条修改.
01:33:337 (1,2) - 重叠问题？ fixed
01:46:319 (3,1) - 没包好 fixed
01:52:810 (2,2) - 重叠问题？一开始根本没想这里不过好像重叠要好得多……
02:23:863 (1) - 和02:24:916 (1) - 也是重叠问题？ fixed
02:27:021 (8) - 和02:28:074 (1,2,3) - 同上 fixed
02:36:670 (6,1) - 同上顺带02:37:898 (1) - 也是 fixed
02:39:477 (4,1) - 同上 fixed
03:03:863 (5) - 可以考虑与Y轴刚加平行一点这样flow会更好看一点 fixed
03:06:495 (3,3) - 重叠问题？ fixed 不太好对
03:07:021 (2,4,1) - 同上 fixed
03:12:460 (5,2) - 同上 fixed
03:23:332 (1) - 建议取消NC 这应该唱的是同一个词吧 anata什么的 fixed

睡觉去

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-08-13T00:59:20+00:00

Harold Miner wrote:
嗯我是tm1209 这是我的新号以后应该也不会变了先认识一下

您暴露了所以走好

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2014-08-18T05:53:25+00:00

from qq

[General]

滑条拉到位

[Easy]
细节尤其是ds需注意

[hhkkyy&Hikari's Hard]
00:02:109 (1) - 　flow 卡手移开好点（其实这块梗不好，00:01:758 (3) - 开场就往死角
走，很难弄，3 尾部到00:02:460 (2) -之间ds不一致，对hard来说很不好

00:03:863 (2,1,2,3) - flow 很卡，

00:09:828 (2,3) - 换一下顺FLOW

00:16:670 (2,1) - DS 太大

00:26:232 (8) - 虽然是跟歌词，不压红线还是不好，况且还有重音加个note二连好点

00:30:705 (1) - 换滑条，大白线漏了对音效很不利

00:33:688 (3) - 这滑条真·随手

00:35:793 (2) - 最好不要这样，节奏很乱，音效难下，有两个建议
①

~~

②

~~~

00:40:530 (5) - 移出来，于00:40:004 (4,1) - 保持一致DS

00:41:933 (3,1,2) - DS美丽，一致please

00:44:214 这有音啊，最好别漏，滑条补上

00:47:723 (1,2,3) - ds小，跟前面00:47:021 (1,2,3,4) - 保持一致

00:48:425 (3,1,1) - 白线漏了，排版坑节奏，美丽。

00:51:232 (3,4,5,6,1,1,1) - 推荐整合ds，ex即视感

01:03:162 (1,1,1) - 遮，这不适合hard

01:13:512 (5,1) - ds大

01:22:284 (2) - 节奏美丽

01:37:196 (2) - 移到 120 156

02:04:740 (6) - 为了遮不要DS可不好02:04:565 (5,1) -

02:07:197 (5,6,7) - ds大

02:40:530 (2,1) - 滑条真·随手第二季

03:04:565 (4,1) - 考虑换，FLOW很卡手

03:21:984 (1,2,1,2) - 滑条真·随手第三季

[Lunatic]

00:11:933 (5,6,7) - ds应该没对齐

00:22:460 (2,1,2,3) - 这里后面3于00:22:986 (2) - 太近了，音乐是重复是，排列ds也应当一致，能更好衬托音乐，打的也顺手

00:28:074 (3,4,5,6,7) - 弧度每排好，3 →（380,304)4 →（347,323)5 →（310,330)6→ (272,325)7 →（238,307)

00:31:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - 很多这样弧度不到位，建议这样检查检查

~

00:33:337 (5) - 没拉好

00:33:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 弧度

00:34:740 (2,1) - ds大了

00:39:126 (1,2,1) - 这里ds应该也不对

00:57:723 (5,1,2,1,2) - 干扰大，不是有意的话建议改

00:59:302 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 好folw,like it

01:12:284 (1,2,3,4,5) - 弧度

01:17:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^

01:45:969 (1,2,3,4,1) - ds

02:06:495 (2,3) - 换一下

02:31:056 (3,4,5,6,7) - 前面是跳，这里不用那么近，要不会很怪

02:54:039 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 弧度

03:02:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

03:03:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

03:05:267 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^

[Alex Li's Insane]

00:14:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - M？

00:22:986 (1,2) - 再远点，建议和00:22:460 (1,2) - 一致

01:03:688 (4) - 错开，顿一下的感觉不好

02:01:056 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 这么多跳怀疑报复社会

02:19:828 (1) - 到02:31:582 (1) - insane(extra)

mod hard时间多于其他两个难度我也是跪了。。

z1085684963

327 posts

Joined August 2012

z1085684963 2014-10-25T05:06:32+00:00

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310,312,150706,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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62,102,151057,2,0,L|90:136,1,40
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327,167,151407,2,0,L|303:199,1,40
452,240,151583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,160004,12,0,162811,0:0:0:0:
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357,310,165618,6,0,P|411:237|379:152,1,160
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469,91,166407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,91,166495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,212,166671,2,0,P|276:222|315:223,1,80
112,65,167022,5,0,0:0:0:0:
287,127,167197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,122,167372,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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106,240,171232,6,0,P|53:182|63:106,1,160
294,308,171758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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225,158,172021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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318,101,172284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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317,194,172636,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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347,40,173337,2,0,L|355:130,1,80
219,164,173688,2,0,L|211:74,1,80
58,113,174039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,265,174215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,233,174390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,84,174565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,134,174741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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452,277,175443,6,0,B|427:244|385:236|385:236|369:275|318:303,1,160
179,243,175969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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89,175,176232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,175,176320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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27,197,182811,2,0,L|132:190,1,80
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345,209,183249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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434,178,183512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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244,195,185091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,171,185179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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227,227,187899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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373,99,188863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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398,204,189126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,233,189214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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101,182,190968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,165,191056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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254,284,194214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,283,194302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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305,178,194741,2,0,L|284:135,1,40
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288,207,212365,5,0,0:0:0:0:

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2014-11-29T07:03:22+00:00

随便写点

Extra
音效还有Kiai time加上
00:09:126 (4,6,7,1) - 这个滑条上的东西太多，读不清，要么你弄成AR9.5
00:22:635 (2,3) - 这个跳有点不明所以
00:22:460 (1,2,1,2) - 这两个跳间距应该是一样的，因为是一样的音
01:20:003 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:39:770 (2,3,4,5) - 这么摆不是作死吗，overmap+不合曲，为什么想到1/3，而且还是原地的，太坑
02:17:547 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这也跟后面那个一样手动stack一下多好._.
03:08:775 (9) - NC好一点
03:14:389 (9) - NC

Lunatic
01:21:407 (1) - 虽然这diff也没怎么加音效，不过这个还是finish比较合适
02:14:740 (2) - NC
03:11:582 (9) - NC
没什么大问题

最好加个滑条静音音效，有些地方滑条有声音十分不舒服

加油，GL~

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2014-11-29T07:46:00+00:00

好听

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-11-29T11:28:28+00:00

sjoy wrote:
好听

噫这么好听的曲必须给个摸

nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2014-12-05T13:45:51+00:00

星星接好~~
好，开摸。

Lunatic

00:13:161 (2) - 滑条尾遮挡我不清楚还在不在rule里面了
00:18:249 (5) - NC
00:21:056 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏感觉应该是两个长滑条在加单点
00:22:284 (4) - 听起来没音
00:28:600 (4,5,6) - 个人推荐把这里的节奏下成xx xx，如果这里有梗的话请当我没说……
另外这边太平了……我觉得你可以把123逆时针转一点，把456再顺时针转一点
00:35:442 - 为什么空出来？
00:36:319 (1) - 滑条尾在重音上听起来怪怪的
00:36:758 - 这里应该是一个附点节奏……你可以开25%听听看，我觉得不用有点可惜，最好做成x xxx NC的样子
00:37:284 - 也是有点怪的漏音……如果是要跟贝斯的话这里也要加上00:37:811 -
00:39:828 (6) - 在红线上用1/3我先跪，有个xxxxx的节奏完全可以放两个短滑条加单点……
00:45:968 (4,5) - 这里不用1.5sv感觉浪费，顺便你可以放开一点然后改改方向否则移动轨迹太平有点别手
00:47:021 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 高低高低的音为啥要摆成低高低高……
00:52:635 (3) - 滑条尾有重音，推荐和4,5一起做成4circle的梗（其实两次折返跳就很好啊）
00:55:091 (2,3,4,5) - 没看懂
00:55:442 (6) - 也是滑条尾重音……可以和后面的两个1/2拍做成三个短滑条
00:56:144 (1,2) - 1顺时针转20°左右，2顺时针转50°
00:58:483 - 00:58:834 - 你想用1/6滑条表现的那两声呼呼声应该分别在这里
01:09:740 - 加，这个做成2连会很爽
01:23:337 (5) - 虽然是梗……滑条尾重音我个人打起来不舒服，后面同理。可以做成两个滑条但是第三个做成两个单点
01:51:933 (4,5,6,7) - 也是推荐做成短滑条（带加速）
01:53:688 (1,2) - 推荐你给做成两个滑条
02:05:267 (2,3,4,5,6) - 为啥不想之前做成三个滑条？
02:07:196 (5) - 连打推荐从这里起
02:08:425 (9) - 9的开始，11,12的开始这三个地方的音是独立的，推荐单独开NC下节奏
02:14:389 (1) - 这里为什么减慢sv……加快多好
02:17:372 - 和6一起做成滑条，虽然结尾是个kick但是很爽
02:19:828 (7,10) - 用那个烂大街的三连结尾短滑条啊
02:20:354 (1) - 这里的音一直在持续，应该一直折返到下一个音。我推荐四次一否则1要拉的时间太长
或者你干脆做成后面的combo一样的摆法（其实我知道你大概是想用第一个短滑条去表示一开始的下行音节不过在这边不明显）
02:55:267 (4) - 为什么不像前面一样用1/6？
03:00:354 (3,4) - 和我前面说的一样做成4个单点吧
03:02:811 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 四下vocal里第一声你用了滑条拉，后面的怎么就变连打了
03:04:565 (1,2,3,4) - 连打从这里开始但我觉得你做成短滑条比单点要爽
03:28:436 (2) - bpm慢了sv反而更快……服

好图好歌，期待rank

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-12-06T03:33:27+00:00

nold&kiiwa are the best artists

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-12-06T10:50:39+00:00

01:34:740 - 这里歌词的wa和ni放反了
03:27:748 - 为什么要逐渐变亮然后一下黑下去啊...

lunatic
00:13:512 (3) - 为什么要放里面啊好坑
00:35:442 - 在这里加个note比较好或者拉开一点不然会显得后面是接上这个滑条的串一样
00:36:758 - 这里我觉得跟那个3/4的节奏比较好, 那个很明显 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314800
00:39:419 (5,6) - 这不科学完全是1/4啊我觉得你一定是想多了
00:49:653 (5,6,7) - 我跟你说在tsuzuku这句的桥段一定要放一个无良的梗, 这样才能称之为玩梗的高手
00:55:091 (2,3,4,5) - 这个串不好完全感觉不出那个节奏
00:58:425 - 我觉得这里的节奏是这样的 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314813
01:02:460 (3,4) - 这里还用滑条放跳呀
01:06:670 (4,5,6,1) - 我觉得没有重复的必要歌词都不是一句了...
01:07:723 (2) - new combo放在这里啊
01:09:828 (4,5) - 串
01:18:074 (10) - 别叠着啊
01:21:232 (7) - 这个离后面的太近了吧
02:08:425 - 我觉得这样比较好那个四分滑条不科学 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2314817
02:14:389 (1,1,1) - 不要这样啊太难啦
02:55:267 (4) - 放得远一点比较好美观一些
03:00:705 (4) - 这里可以放两个短滑条加一点速
03:05:969 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 把那个节奏表现出来啊
03:22:995 (2) - 提了提了这个怎么打
后面再慢一点也可以的

al's extra
00:07:898 (8) - 为什么要放滑条啊！
00:23:863 (1) - 我还以为这个是1/2的呢居然不加速
03:05:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个就不要串了吧
好像整个难度都没有试着把那个dub的节奏表现出来就是02:14:389 - 这样的虽然没什么问题吧但是这样作为ex难度有点可惜本来可以弄个短滑条加速的
串好多打着挺爽的w

hard
normal呢！
00:07:021 (1,2,3,4) - 最好不要这么摆其实很难的对普通的hard难度玩家而言
00:14:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:09:126 (1) - 这里的折返滑条太乱每个都不一样我觉得不好因为又没有必要这么做歌曲来说反而是一直在重复
00:11:933 (1,1) - 不要这样
00:26:670 (1) - 我觉得没必要变速到这种程度啊...
嘛.. 看了段后面的有点懒得一个个写了
我觉得你们的节奏放的都不对, 作为一个hard难度, 跟着歌词放好1/2就行了
不要觉得这里哪个节奏没填上什么的, 就是个hard嘛, 歌词落到1/1的滑条尾上是非常正常的
放什么3/4滑条梗我觉得我140的hard都比你们这171hard的梗善良真是

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-12-06T14:19:00+00:00

堆的mod细节/音效/unrankable allfixed 因为回复量巨大所以我要偷懒1111

liangv587

472 posts

Joined April 2013

liangv587 2014-12-06T18:41:00+00:00

[Normal]

00:32:284 (1) - ctrl+g，flow更好
00:43:512 (1) - 位置上来点包，这都快擦边了
00:56:144 (1) - 出界了，轨迹球的一半为基准
01:10:881 (3) - 这种擦边尽量避免下
01:13:688 (3) - 从1的中间出来，01:11:582 (1) - 这个还可以稍微扩一点，然后01:13:688 (3) - nc，01:14:389 (1) - 这个不nc。不知道这样行不，不行就别改了
01:19:302 (1) - 移到01:19:126 -
03:13:688 (3,1) - 这种也避免

[hhkkyy&Hikari's Hard]

02:01:582 (4,5) - 交换位置flow更好
02:40:003 (1) - 减速太多了，1.0就够了
02:59:126 (4,5) - 交换位置flow更好

[Lunatic]

00:13:161 (6,7) - 叠起来会不会好点呢，位置就在6、7中间
00:17:547 (1) - 显得多余了
00:35:091 (1) - s型滑条拉好看点，比如那四个白点跟红点中心对称
00:36:319 (1) - 复制00:35:793 (5) - 然后ctrl+hj
01:07:547 - 加个圈吧
01:28:951 (6) - 重音放尾部好别扭，也这能这样
02:25:267 (3) - 拆成两个1/4，节奏是哒~哒~哒哒哒哒
02:25:968 (1,2) - 3/4滑条加圈的组合
02:43:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这组shen me gui，没看懂
03:08:074 (1,2,3) - 这里很不好打，建议换成两个1/2折返
03:10:881 (1,2) - 这两个怎么不加呢，显得有点不合群

[Chloe,Nold&Kiiwa's iNsAnE]

有点吊

[AL's Extra]

要删就不摸了吧

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-12-07T07:33:40+00:00

liangv587 wrote:
[Normal]
AF
[Lunatic]
00:13:161 (6,7) - 叠起来会不会好点呢，位置就在6、7中间不懂
00:17:547 (1) - 显得多余了也不懂
00:35:091 (1) - s型滑条拉好看点，比如那四个白点跟红点中心对称必要不大
00:36:319 (1) - 复制00:35:793 (5) - 然后ctrl+hj Fixed
01:07:547 - 加个圈吧不好……
01:28:951 (6) - 重音放尾部好别扭，也这能这样 ……
02:25:267 (3) - 拆成两个1/4，节奏是哒~哒~哒哒哒哒好111
02:25:968 (1,2) - 3/4滑条加圈的组合大好
02:43:512 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这组shen me gui，没看懂咦这个多好
03:08:074 (1,2,3) - 这里很不好打，建议换成两个1/2折返不觉得
03:10:881 (1,2) - 这两个怎么不加呢，显得有点不合群自己感觉可以突出重音

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-12-07T07:57:54+00:00

Hakurei Yoru wrote:
Al'Ex要被删辣！！

我感觉rank有望
先别删等我加音效

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-12-07T08:31:23+00:00

Alex Li wrote:
Hakurei Yoru wrote:
Al'Ex要被删辣！！
我感觉rank有望
先别删等我加音效

第一次被这样说超级高兴QAQ！！！！！！
谢谢哥！！！

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-12-07T12:49:58+00:00

我的mod怎么没了！！！！

妈个鸡这破网我还没备份

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2014-12-07T13:39:13+00:00

Spring Roll wrote:
我的mod怎么没了！！！！

妈个鸡这破网我还没备份

>w<惨卷

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-12-07T14:26:16+00:00

靠印象重打一次

mod from m4m

Normal

音效问题，感觉很多地方该加的都没加，滑条真的不消音吗听着好吵
你的clap音可以全程都能用，该加就加，不然有的地方就单独一个finish音听着十分空洞
01:10:179 - 第一段kiai难道不是这里结束的吗
03:06:670 - 第二段
00:47:723 - finish
00:23:863 - 用soft的finish
00:35:091 (1) - ^
00:58:951 - ^
01:10:179 - ^
01:21:407 - ^
02:03:512 - ^
02:31:582 - ^
02:54:039 - ^
03:06:670 - ^

Hard

00:36:495 (3,1,2,3) - 三连有点莫名，试试这样的节奏
00:44:916 (2) - ……
03:04:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - 十分不推荐在hard里放这个梗，太难了

insane

超出理解范围不评论

Lunatic

音效的问题和normal第一点一样，你最好加一点，不然会显得很懒
03:04:214 (3) - 这个whistle是你故意放的？
03:21:984 - 从这里开始的timing感觉有点不准，特别是最后三个单点偏的比较厉害，如果开了HR就肯定会点歪，建议找人测一下最后这边的timing

好像就这么多吧，我也不记得了，gl

Noine-

33 posts

Joined January 2014

Noine- 2014-12-08T05:40:50+00:00

欠了一万年的我来摸了/w/
[General]
两个合作dif难度改为collab hard和collab insane
[AL's Extra]
00:02:021 (4) 00:02:723 (10) - 00:03:425 (4) - 00:04:828 (5)-等等这些地方我都认为不应该有Note，overmap不应该出现在这一段
00:14:653-加note，在前一个连打后面补，既然是extra，这个连打梗是允许的
00:21:758 (5) - ctrl+g
00:22:811 (3) - 不应该有note，这里有特别强烈的重音，可以考虑把
00:25:267这个是个人建议，我觉得这个地方用这样的节奏会好一点

我是图

01:20:354 (3) - 不建议有note
我觉得这图需要改的地方绝对不止我说的这些，overmap的地方至少不合我的口味，嘛，看看别的modder怎么说
[Lunatic]
[00:13:307]我觉得还是得有note
把00:16:319 (3) -放到00:16:144
01:07:372 - 这里放一个比较慢的二分滑条如何？
02:14:740 (2) - 如果前面都NC这个最好也NC
02:25:793 (6) - ctrl + g
02:33:688 (2,1,1,1,1) - 3/4的滑条后跟了四个1/3太难读了，你要么把滑条拉成2/3，要么就干脆别吓1/3，反正1/3那个低音也很不明显
03:04:214 (3) - ctrl+g会舒服一点？因为这个地方的跳flow是这样的，这个个人建议可以不改
03:08:249 (2,3,4) - 有点迷，不知道这几个滑条的意义，拉的太长了，放开摆连打多好
我还是很喜欢这张图的www
[Chloe,Nold&Kiiwa's iNsAnE]
wip先不摸，等做完了PM我，我edit
[hhkkyy&Hikari's Hard]
00:44:916 (2) - unrank

红白的图越来越好了，再不努力一下rank都浪费了，GL~

Lavender

886 posts

Joined January 2014

Lavender 2014-12-12T14:08:48+00:00

图比我好多啦，送一颗

zxhzxhz

70 posts

Joined November 2012

zxhzxhz 2014-12-13T23:07:33+00:00

[nm]
00:19:653 (3) - blanket better
03:32:270 (1) - cancel nc
[hard]
00:22:460 (1,2,1,2) - y轴保持一致
00:26:670 (1) - blanket
01:03:162 (1,1,1) - 分得开一点。。
02:51:933 (3) - 包好
[ins]
我觉得ar9实际上够用。。。
~~kiai呢~~原来是wip
00:16:319 (4) - 弯一点
00:23:248 (3) - 加个clap
00:42:635 (2) - 短滑条
00:58:249 (1) - ^
[lu]
00:41:232 (2) - blanket
02:48:074 (4) - 弯的有点不自然
这个排列点个赞，shoot star
[ex]
kiai?
00:23:337 (3) - 微调下，不要弯那么狠
02:05:442 (2,3,4) - 把4的note放在23前面
也点个赞，有点单调和乱的感觉，但是排列和节奏没有啥大问题。可能是因为我水平不够，指不出来具体的问题在哪里orz
[Gen]
闪光警告on
sb最后写歌曲名和mapper和sb-er

hhkkyy

43 posts

Joined October 2013

hhkkyy 2014-12-14T15:05:50+00:00

all fixxxxeeeeddddd!!!（应该没漏
改了一下自己部分的ds和一些自己看不惯的梗。。
hikari既然坑了那么我就把锅甩给红白辣（逃
最后good luck!

AnOzi Changle

119 posts

Joined July 2014

AnOzi Changle 2014-12-14T19:01:39+00:00

~~神图摸不了~~
怎么还没rabk啊？

Harubi Lira

147 posts

Joined May 2012

Harubi Lira 2014-12-19T12:24:35+00:00

嘛第一次知道IRC也能骗kd

19:17 Hakurei Yoru: hi lsahi请问你摸图吗
19:17 lsahi: 我。。。十分钟
19:17 lsahi: 后
19:17 lsahi: 先给我把
19:17 *Hakurei Yoru is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/473918 GhostFinal feat. YooSanHyakurei - Last Train]
19:17 Hakurei Yoru: 就这个
19:30 lsahi: irc行么
19:31 Hakurei Yoru: 啊
19:31 Hakurei Yoru: 好啊
19:31 *lsahi is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/473918 GhostFinal feat. YooSanHyakurei - Last Train [Lunatic]]
19:31 lsahi: 先围观这
19:32 lsahi: 我该更新了么
19:32 Hakurei Yoru: 不等下
19:32 lsahi: 0.0
19:32 Hakurei Yoru: 我加了点音效
19:33 lsahi: 哦哦哦
19:34 Hakurei Yoru: 你先看看吧;w;
19:36 Hakurei Yoru: 加好拉
19:36 Hakurei Yoru: XD
19:39 lsahi: 来来来
19:39 lsahi: 00:20:881 (5) - blanket
19:44 lsahi: blablabla
19:47 lsahi: 00:23:161 (8,9,10) - 可以拉的更远
19:48 lsahi: 00:29:477 (1) - 尾段可以不弯曲那么多
19:48 Hakurei Yoru: 好
19:49 lsahi: 00:30:881 (1,2) - 考虑把他俩弯曲段做成平行
19:49 Hakurei Yoru: ok
19:50 Hakurei Yoru: ……
19:50 Hakurei Yoru: 必要不大而且改了挺奇怪的
19:50 lsahi: 美观，美观
19:50 lsahi: 那也无所谓（
19:50 Hakurei Yoru: 我不觉得美观了;w;
19:50 lsahi: ;w;
19:51 lsahi: 00:35:091 (1) - 这里你仔细听听看是这样好还是在拉长四分拍好
19:51 Hakurei Yoru: 我还要考虑一下
19:52 lsahi: 0.0
19:52 lsahi: 不急我先看看后面
19:58 lsahi: 好了吗
19:59 Hakurei Yoru: a
20:00 lsahi: 00:36:495 (1,2,3) - 把他们三个的位置关系搞成一样的。。。
20:01 Hakurei Yoru: dui
20:01 Hakurei Yoru: haole
20:01 lsahi: 然后我仔细研究了一下这里
20:01 lsahi: 00:39:302 (1,1,1,1,1) - 
20:02 lsahi: 我发现你要跟的是那段低音（类似蜂鸣器？）
20:02 lsahi: 然后跟的不对
20:02 lsahi: 然后我自己没听出来那段应该怎么跟，，，
20:02 Hakurei Yoru: 我看了下是1/6
20:02 lsahi: 不是，
20:03 lsahi: 只有他们两个位置对的。。。00:39:536 (1,1) - 
20:03 lsahi: 然后他俩之间有两个音，
20:04 lsahi: 00:39:887 (1) - 然后这个应该在他后面那个四分音的位置
20:04 lsahi: 至于中间那两个我没听出来
20:04 Hakurei Yoru: 这样呀
20:04 lsahi: 这段是一段变速
20:05 Hakurei Yoru: ……听了下觉得1/3或1/6没什么问题
20:05 lsahi: 总之你先把它标记一下。。
20:05 Hakurei Yoru: 好像1/6好点
20:05 lsahi: 可能是我太敏感了吧。。。
20:05 Hakurei Yoru: 好
20:05 lsahi: 你找找节奏下的好的mapper帮你听一下
20:06 lsahi: 啊节奏还有结尾
20:06 lsahi: 03:32:270 (1) - 最后一个note
20:06 lsahi: 03:31:770应该在这，六分的拍子这
20:07 Hakurei Yoru: !
20:07 Hakurei Yoru: 队
20:08 lsahi: 01:57:196 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一段stream后几个note不知道是故意的还是怎么，不过不太舒服
20:09 Hakurei Yoru: 我觉得这里还好……
20:09 Hakurei Yoru: 而且很赞;w;
20:09 lsahi: 0.0
20:09 lsahi: 02:11:407 (2,3) - 把他俩放在一条直线上？
20:10 lsahi: 02:14:389 (1,1,1) - 这段虽然也是那个问题不过这么处理的就看不出来了
20:11 lsahi: 02:33:688 (2,1,1,1,1) -还有这个也做个标记
20:11 Hakurei Yoru: 明显的直线有点难看
20:11 Hakurei Yoru: 好
20:11 lsahi: 。。。其实你那么摆会让我觉得你是想把它摆在一条直线上的。。。
20:13 lsahi: 03:10:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 刚才我说那个连打如果变成这种感觉会好多。。。
20:14 lsahi: 然后就美丽~
20:15 Hakurei Yoru: 嗯……

Iolite

219 posts

Joined February 2014

Iolite 2014-12-19T18:30:45+00:00

第一次摸图~
好歌好歌酷爱rank

[Normal]
00:43:512 (1) - blanket
03:09:477 (1) - 把红锚点移一下踩好节拍(03:10:179)

[hhkkyy&Hikari's Hard]
00:06:670 (2) - 滑条尾放个finish好违和
00:14:039 (6) - blanket
01:08:601 (5) - 没在中心上，强迫症伤不起

[Lunatic]
00:01:407 - 到 00:12:284 - 开头段音量调小一点吧
00:29:477 (1) - 滑条形状不是很好看，最好改一下(个人觉得这一小段三个1.5x滑条都不要用,因为音乐没有变化)
00:39:536 (1,1,1,1) - 听了几次都不是很合音乐
02:33:922 (1,1,1,1) - 同上

[AL's Extra]
个人觉得好多地方是不应该摆摆动跳的.....
00:14:653 - 这里最好放个note
00:49:828 (3,4,5) - 3,4间跳摆小点, 4,5间摆大点
02:07:109 - 这里加个note和前后摆成连打如何？
02:47:196 (2) - 太远了

...finished
收工~

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-12-20T08:57:40+00:00

Hi! from forum pm
I will use Chinese for convenient reading

[Info]

Red: Unrankable Issues
Bold: Highly recommended
Black: Personal Suggestions

[General]

确定artist中 “feat.瑶山百霊” feat.之后没有空格吗?
Storyboard中 01:32:635的Tonari这个字有5/1长也就是说ni应该在01:34:740出现 (02:31:582的也一样)
Storyboard最后一句话怎么没加进去哇
没加音效?

[AL's Extra]

感觉可以改名成Insane, 没有extra那么难有些音没抓到 (例如从00:23:863到00:35:091里的1/4)
00:15:793 (2) - 这里的节奏是这样的,考虑改一下
SPOILER
00:20:705 (1,2,3,4,1) - 建议这里用和00:19:653 (1,2,3) - 一样的间距 (0.25x) 好像更爽
01:05:091 (2,3) - ctrl+g 因为你前面是这么放的 (00:59:653 (3,4,5) - )
01:38:249 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 绕圈圈感觉好水;w; 要么增大间距要么最起码圈圈弄圈一点喂!(
02:03:512 (1) - 这里背景有个锣声建议放在56|288之类的地方如果放在原先的地方突出不了声音
02:07:811 (1) - 短spin好像没啥用吧建议02:07:723 (1) - 改成一个速度慢的滑条一直到spinner结束的时间
03:11:582 (9) - NC吧别太长串

[Lunatic]

有些间距放的比较confusing,我在下面提到了部分不枚举全部的了
00:02:109 (4) - 这种slider可以换成3连哇打起来爽
00:08:951 (3,4,5,6) - 这个间距有点小按照节奏理应是00:08:951 (3,4) - 的间距稍大所以建议00:08:951 (3) - 放在480|100
00:22:460 (5,6,7,8) - 这里间距也可以大点毕竟节奏很鲜明
00:28:600 (4,5,6) - 节奏比较难读可以尝试一下这样
SPOILER
00:30:179 (3,4) - 这里我会以为是1/4的建议把4放在472|132
00:39:302 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这个1/3首先比较难读,又加上nc 基本是看不出节奏的建议换成1/3折返滑条毕竟取消NC
*02:33:922 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
00:44:916 (1) - 这个滑条碰到血条了,是unrankable的
01:07:372 (1) - 好像没有stack好
01:13:249 (2,3,4) - 这样放就可以的原先的1/4太跳而1/2的间距又比1/4的小了
SPOILER
01:14:740 (5,6) - 如果是要放这种滑条形式的连打可以把这俩object分开点
01:17:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 好歹修一下形状;w;
01:21:407 (1) - 196|260更好一些更符合歌的感觉还有你的sv 不要忘记调整后面的物件
02:37:898 (7) - NC?
02:38:600 (1) - 这个滑条应该是3/4长的 现在这个样子压不着音
02:40:354 (5,6,7) - 建议antijump换个方向第一是因为太靠近屏幕边缘会比较挤;第二是有点碰到血条会有争议

[Hard]

00:07:723 (1,2) - 这样会让人以为那里还有一个折返耶 (btw,从开头到00:09:653有点nc spam的感觉)
00:14:565 (7) - 去掉nc
00:27:723 (1,2,3) - 现在的不仅有点空还有点卡手建议用这个节奏
SPOILER
00:44:740 (1,2) - blanket?
00:50:179 - 不要空拍保持连贯比较好
01:00:354 (1,2,3) - 每个都加nc吧你(们)这种节奏的每个梗都加了nc 除了这个
01:22:109 (1,2,3,4) - 建议换成2个3/4折返
01:26:144 (2) - 换成前一个滑条的折返
01:56:495 (7,1) - 没stack好
02:07:372 (6,7) - 直接折返结束呗加个note太突然的感觉
02:20:354 (1,2,3) - 这个实在是比较违和 两个折返的个数不一样而且这种折返滑条速度太慢我个人也认为不太好看建议都改成1/2

[Normal]

00:23:512 (3,2) - 不要overlap 比较不好看
00:42:109 (3,1) - 这种blanket看起来很怪异 首先没有包好而且后面其实往里面拐了有点违背了blanket的意思
00:50:530 (1,2) - blanket
01:16:495 (2,3) - blanket
01:56:495 (1) - stack在2上就可以了比较organized
03:09:477 (1) - 不弄个对称吗;w;

摸完了:D
good luck

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-12-27T09:16:59+00:00

Would you please finish the whole set so that I can mod all of the diffs?

-Hatano Kokoro-

70 posts

Joined March 2014

-Hatano Kokoro- 2015-01-01T08:52:52+00:00

楼主你好，下面是我的摸

[normal]

01:17:196 (3) - 结尾偏离白线
01:18:951 - 节奏不好，建议多放单点
01:19:126 - 节奏不好，建议改成滑条。01:19:126 滑条开头，到 01:19:653 滑条结尾
02:03:863 - 有歌词，也有鼓点，为什么要在这里断开呢？
02:46:319 - 建议改成单点，normal按歌词做，尽量不在没歌词的地方放东西
00:36:933 (5) - 鼓点在这00:36:846
只加finish也太懒了吧

[hhkkyy&Hikari's Hard]

00:36:933 (5) - 鼓点在这00:36:846
00:37:723 (2) - 这一段连得太紧，对hard来说不合适，建议去掉
00:42:109 (1,2) - 节奏外
00:44:214 (5) - 建议改成滑条。00:44:214滑条开头，00:44:565滑条结尾
00:50:179 - 空的太宽，建议在这一时间添加单点
00:57:197 (4,5,1) - 间距不一样了
01:15:618 (1) - 如果放单点就是多余，建议改成滑条
02:04:740 (6) - 连得太紧，建议去掉
02:51:056 (5) - 连得太紧，建议去掉
03:02:284 (5) - 连得太紧，建议去掉
摸完了好像都没听见音效

[Lunatic]

00:25:267 (1) - 节奏违和感太重，建议加上单点
00:44:039 - 节奏违和感太重，建议加上单点
01:27:547 - 节奏违和感太重，建议加上单点
03:22:995 (2) - 建议扔掉这单点
楼主自创的节奏我非常喜欢，高难度也是可以按自己节奏。合适的地方可以自创，词还是少漏点

[AL's Extra]
不叫我摸那我就概括下好啦
1、把很多不必要连起来的节奏连起来了
2、除了连打和大跳无其他看点
3、从头到尾除了Finish音效，没听见过其他音效
4、有些地方落段感很好，个人非常喜欢

[其他]
摸结束，此致，敬礼，祝rank♪(^∇^*)

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2015-01-05T09:25:52+00:00

删diff吧，没时间做

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2015-01-09T10:50:56+00:00

Alex Li wrote:
删diff吧，没时间做

Sure.

lkx_Shore

1,453 posts

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2015-01-30T10:55:40+00:00

General

加583ms前置时间，凑2000ms。
SB能用jpg？...
Hard的 epilepsy warning设置和其他难度不一致。

Lunatic

00:13:337 (3) - 为啥摆这么近...然后后面又突然飞出去这么远。
如果你想突出00:22:460 (1,2) - 的话，就把00:22:635 (2) - 换成1/2滑条，00:22:811 (3) - 属于多余节奏。
00:23:863 (1) - 我不明白为什么这里要换成这种clap的下法，00:24:214 - 每一小节的这里也有强音啊，至少用别的音效来代替吧。
00:33:863 (2,1) - 这两完全被你的强音音效覆盖了打击感，感觉像打空气。
00:57:547 (1,2,3,4) - 不同的音效分开不同的地方摆吧，两种不同音效都叠起来那不就糊成一块了。
00:58:512 (3) - 其实是00:58:512 - 和00:58:512 - 有1/8的3连，现在下的没有对到的。
00:58:951 (1) - 到01:07:372 (1) - ......这节奏跟的是什么呢..
01:10:179 (1) - 这段开始为什么又不下clap了？
01:12:284 (3) - 没对到时间轴的绿线。
01:12:986 (1) - 拉远，前面同样的拍子可用了这两倍以上的间距...突然缩短无比莫名。
02:30:705 (3) - 没有对到时间轴的绿线。
02:40:003 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ...这种摆法其实是有讲究的，每一小段都是一个轨的新开头，新开头就要把note分出去，而同一段则放一起。现在看起来摆得意义不明..
多数音效听起来很好听实际上和下的节奏没什么关系，但还不会很好的把音轨分开，节奏跟的音轨（或者根本没有跟任何音轨）感觉像大杂烩。

hhkkyy and hikari's Hard

00:14:565 (2) - 滑条头和之前跟的整体音轨没有关系吧？多出一个打击点了。
00:20:179 (2) - ^.
00:30:004 (2) - x328 y104.
00:37:898 (9) - 硬是要去跟这个电音的话...还不如直接下一个滑条从00:37:898 - 到00:38:425 - .后面同理。
01:12:284 (3) - 没对到时间轴的绿线。
01:13:688 (4) - .......这个年代用来回两次的滑条他们只会说卡手..
02:37:196 (1,2) - 这个3/4有必要么？
02:40:003 (1,2) - 是什么让你突然脱离人声轨??
03:21:984 (1) - 这里不把slidertick静音吗...
为什么这么多地方不下音效。

Normal

Fine.
下次尽量不要让物件互相折叠了，现在看起来很乱。

Easy

00:12:284 (1) - 换成1/2吧。
00:22:986 (2) - 这种密集的节奏在easy里用一个滑条带过就行。
01:20:530 (2) - ^.
相比nm，空的地方也太多了吧。

Others

NM到HD的跨度稍微大了点，把NM做难点吧。

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2015-01-31T00:12:44+00:00

卧槽sb不能用jpg……
感觉要完

z1085684963

327 posts

Joined August 2012

z1085684963 2015-02-11T12:20:29+00:00

EX

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Fia

Fia 2015-02-13T17:26:38+00:00

只是看看L难度 kd就不用了我也只是说说主观意见

感觉整篇用了挺多梗梗多是不错但用不好还不如跟感觉按flow下 @sjoy

开头的1/4reverse滑条除了第一个下的都有点蠢顺便把flow也弄得怪怪的建议重新安排一下

00:51:407 (7,8,9) - 00:52:811 (4,5,6) - 前面用这个梗能接受后面在不一样的地方又用一遍是做什么……你觉得这两个地方歌是一样的？

……感觉还是不要说太多有逼着人家按自己想法走之嫌

我觉得做个图应该是这里想要什么效果然后再想哪个梗能做出这个效果来而不是"啊这个梗挺厉害下这吧" 梗说不定不错但梗和前后连不上再加上基本功问题整个图比collab还乱梗本身的效果也显不出来

顺便00:28:600 (1) - 我还是觉得应该是在1/3的线上

Hakurei Yoru

688 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Hakurei Yoru 2015-02-14T00:04:10+00:00

PinkHeart wrote:
只是看看L难度 kd就不用了我也只是说说主观意见

感觉整篇用了挺多梗梗多是不错但用不好还不如跟感觉按flow下 @sjoy

开头的1/4reverse滑条除了第一个下的都有点蠢顺便把flow也弄得怪怪的建议重新安排一下

00:51:407 (7,8,9) - 00:52:811 (4,5,6) - 前面用这个梗能接受后面在不一样的地方又用一遍是做什么……你觉得这两个地方歌是一样的？

……感觉还是不要说太多有逼着人家按自己想法走之嫌

我觉得做个图应该是这里想要什么效果然后再想哪个梗能做出这个效果来而不是"啊这个梗挺厉害下这吧" 梗说不定不错但梗和前后连不上再加上基本功问题整个图比collab还乱梗本身的效果也显不出来

顺便00:28:600 (1) - 我还是觉得应该是在1/3的线上

知道了至少几个kiai我都觉得还算是统一的梗吧...
谢谢粉心啦

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2015-02-22T04:30:54+00:00