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ZUN - Toono Gensou Monogatari

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Tonoko
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Tonoko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月10日 at 20:46:53

Artist: ZUN
Title: Toono Gensou Monogatari
Source: Perfect Cherry Blossom
Tags: EVA-X chen
BPM: 141
Filesize: 5937kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.72 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (4.24 stars, 201 notes)
  3. Insane (4.83 stars, 463 notes)
Download: ZUN - Toono Gensou Monogatari
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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diff [Insane] is made from EVA-X's old map (Have his consent)--->http://osu.ppy.sh/s/4262

It's my first time to make a half star easy diff 0.0

^_^ thx to all ~
Last edited by Gens , edited 54 times in total.
dkey
1,276 posts
Joined June 2009
dkey
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
thanks ^.^
Randy96
1,113 posts
Joined August 2009
Randy96
hey there
Can't wait to see it finished!
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
^.^ will add hitsound soon
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
moded on irc
Star~

Edit:Recheck~
Great!10vote~和我中期谱的图一样，用绿线射杀players听觉 lol
01:49:358 (1,1,1) - 建议remove new combo
我知道你想要用四个new combo分别来强调这里的四个重音，不过看起来不是很适合，主要是不太美观。
既然你其他地方也同样这样使用new combo我就不多说什么了.好坏与否，我也不清楚lol

[Insane]
02:03:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 对于这个串加whistle的方法，每相隔一条白线加一个whistle.其他串whistle加法同理
以下举个例子
02:04:145 (4,1) - remove whistle
02:03:613 (3) - add whistle
02:04:039 (3) - ^
02:04:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 用volume渐消来慢慢降低声音

[Hard]
00:22:124 --->>00:28:081 no clap,plz.use whistle only or other hitsounds~
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
要迟些才能再check and fix了... 忙啊忙

thx gd~

Edit:fixed...
v2b
504 posts
Joined October 2008
v2b
☆
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
我很喜欢那个小圈slider的 :(

fixed all.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
hi~
做的不错嘛，easy的BG太可爱了XD
虽然我没有天然风那么大手笔，但是一个star还是可以的~
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these .

  1. Offset: 1,705 (slightly ater than yours)
  2. BG3 and BG2 are too big for backgrounds. I've fixed them for you, so just copy BG2 and BG3 from the attachment below into your folder.
Download: Backgrounds.zip

[EASY]

Looks good

[HARD]

No problems :)

[INSANE] (call this "EVA-X's Insane"?)

Pretty fun diff actually.

00:44:252 (5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps seem to come out of nowhere, and feel out of place. Remove them? or maybe just make the jumps smaller.
01:23:401 (1) - This spinner also feels a bit weird. It comes out of nowhere, and is very short too. You should map something else here methinks.
01:33:613 (1) - ^

Nice map. Quite fun, I must say

Starred
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
人才啊 中国制图界的巨星 >_> 垫子嫁给我吧
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
hmm ~ ~0

fixed the jump,but I want to keep those spinner,because I can't get another mapping style to instead of ~ ~

network is bad,submit later
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
面对这些庞大的绿线，我该说什么好 :oops:
star+kds star
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
:) thx to all star ~ ~

still working for this
TKiller
4,390 posts
Joined May 2009
TKiller
hard is more like normal for me, think about renaming difficulty.

Insane:

0:28:933 - don't like how those beats under sliders sound. I'd remove them and make sliders longer by 1/4 timing division.

1:21:699 don't like second slider. Like it better when remove second slider and make first longer by 1/2 of timing division

2:11:911 and 2:13:613 - how about placing a beat at those places under the end of sliders?

last 2 sliders: after finishing all work mind about changing beat snap to 1/8 and move them exactly one timing division backwards in timeline, makes them sound better in my opinion.

Well, those are only my thoughts, nice work anyway. Though I think it need "harder" hard :D

Also, this is one of my most favourite ZUN's songs.
Tonoko
507 posts
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Tonoko
thx for your modding

some of those beats follow the old map's style ... so I want to keep this style...

fixed some spacing and timing section ^.^
tsuka
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tsuka
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Randy96
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Joined August 2009
Randy96
I didn't star this yet? :?
Tonoko
507 posts
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Topic Starter
Tonoko
remove some finish ... fixed

normal那个slider已经有了
MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
[Easy]
00:13:613 (2,3,1) - make a straight layout

[Hard]
00:37:869 (1,1,1,1) - unnecessary new combos
00:40:422 (3,4) - align with 2,1?
01:24:252 (1) - remove new combo
01:27:656 (1) - remove new combo and new combo at 01:28:507 (3)
01:32:550 (1) - remove new combo and new combo at 01:33:613 (4)
01:40:422 (1) - remove new combo and new combo at 01:42:124 (3)
01:47:230 (8) - new combo and remove new combo at 01:48:081 (1)

[Insane]
No big issue


Good. Star :3
happy30
Featured Artist
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happy30
oh i like this song :3

[Easy]

01:19:996 (1) - move the waypoint about 3 grids to the right?
when the distance between startpoint - waypoint - endpoint are equal, the slider looks the best most of the time.
But only when the endpoint is on the middle of the note. Ignore this if you don't understand :o
sorry for pointing this out >_>

[Hard]

oooh i like this diff! finally a hard that isn't insane =_=
00:11:060 (2) - Is this suposed to have sliderwhistle on it?
00:19:571 (3) - turn on 1/3 distance snap and resnap this slider, it sounds perfect :D

[Lunatic]

00:03:401 (1) - adjust the waypoint here too to make the slider prettier? ><
00:19:571 (5,6,7) - same as [hard] use 1/3 distance snap on these notes? :?
02:15:316 (5,6,7) - ^

call me back for protobub!
Tonoko
507 posts
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Tonoko
^.^ I will check & fix it tomorrow ~ ~thx for all your help

thank you very muck for telling me how to make a pretty slider :)

edit:checked all the sliders' waypoint and 1/3 beats. also remove some finish hitsound.
happy30
Featured Artist
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happy30
protobubbled
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

Remove file .osb and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

00:20:428 (1,1,1) - New combo spam looks weird. Remove them?
01:48:939 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all of this new combos.

[Hard]

00:51:493 (1,1,1,1) - Same here about the new combos...
01:21:706 (1,1,1,1) - ^

[Insane]

02:17:052 (1) - Unsnapped.
Tonoko
507 posts
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Tonoko
removed that new combo and full submitted

Edit : reset the insane diff's timing section to 141
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Some IRC modding.

Bubbled~
Zekira
9,233 posts
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Zekira
Ack, guess I was too late :(
yaya
osu! Alumni
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yaya
good job
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Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
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Joined July 2008
Cyclone
The song title should be 'The Fantastic Legend of Tohno'

EDIT: The source should also PROBABLY be simply Touhou, but that's not as big of a deal for me considering it was only used in 1 game.
Tonoko
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Tonoko
:o OH ~ I am sorry for that ...

I will make it better next time ~ :oops:
Cyclone
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Cyclone
I'll just make a quick change to the map to add in the english title to the tags. I will change nothing else.

A quick update in game will be needed.
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